2024届高考英语复习T8三月联考读后续写被困电梯课件(共13张PPT)
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(共13张PPT)
2024T8 联考读后续写讲评
电梯惊魂
题目回顾
人与社会
文本简析
原文大义：
1. 我放学后坐电梯回公寓，遇到邻居Mrs. Lim 也一起坐电梯；
2. 本以为是平淡无事的一天，谁知电梯坏了，飞速下降到5楼，Mrs. Lim 歇斯底里，情绪失控；
3. 忽然Mrs. Lim 呼吸困难，我帮忙松开衣服领子，等待救援。
遇困等待救援
Paragraph 1: Several minutes passed, but no help came.
情节构思
①【衔接1】我被困后的心情
② Mrs. Lim相较之前
情况好转？更差了？
③ 我的应对：尽力冷静下来，并再次安抚Mrs. Lim 。
④ 我的努力：敲电梯门/再次按按钮/喊叫求助
⑤【衔接2】有人回应，并报火警；暂无回应，心情再次跌至谷底…
情节构思
①【衔接1】我被困的心情
My initial positivity had been worn out by the long-time anxiety and fear because of trapping in this narrow and dank space, tears of hopelessness welling up my eyes.（郑邦）
因为被困在这个狭窄阴暗的空间里，长期的焦虑和恐惧已经磨灭了我最初的积极性，绝望的泪水在眼眶里打转。
emotion
emotion
emotion
action
情节构思
①【衔接1】我被困的心情
Big fat sweats streaming down my forehead, I paced repeatedly, thinking about how to get out.(孔文昕)
大汗顺着额头流下来，我反复踱步，思考着如何脱身。
Emotion(show not tell)
action
action
情节构思
② Mrs. Lim相较之前 虚弱，不断啜泣 发抖
Mrs. Lim, who had been struggling to breathe, was now sobbing, her consciousness weakening, as she murmured, “I don‘t want to die.“(郑邦)
Mrs. Lim一直努力呼吸，现在已经泣不成声，意识也越来越模糊，她喃喃地说："我不想死。"
action
action
action
Paragraph 2: Bang! My hopes were lifted when I heard the firefighters on the other side of the lift door.
情节构思
①【衔接3】我的反应：激动地大声回应
② firefighters 的回应：让我们保持镇定+等待救援
③ Mrs. Lim的反应：放松下来，打起精神，等待破门
④ 过了一会门终于开了，我们也获救了；感谢救援人员
⑤【结尾】呼应原文开头：回想刚刚遭遇的电梯惊魂，珍惜平凡普通的一天。
情节构思
①【衔接3】我的反应
I stood up first and helped Mrs. Lim get up too. We looked at each other with excitement and waited for firefighters to open the door and help us out.(吴双)
我首先站了起来，然后帮助林女士也站了起来。我们激动地看着彼此，等待着消防员开门救我们出去。
action
action
action
emotion
action
主题升华
面对困境时保持冷静和同情心；
乐于帮助他人；
人生充满了意外，要珍惜生活的每一天；
勇于克服困难，困境中的希望与勇气(可选主题)
Standing in the sunshine, I felt the fresh air. At that time, it dawned on me that safety is the most precious fortune in one’s life.(孙中昊)
遇险脱困类续写
I was shocked to find that I was trapped in some place.(the house, the lift,…) Suddenly, a dead silence ruled the place and I felt a wave of panic wash over me, but I knew I had to stay strong for both of us(如果前文出现了次要人物) /, but I knew I had to keep calm to wait for the rescue. The realization drove me to pluck up my courage and took a deep breath to yell/wave/cry with all my strength.
Luckily, some rescue workers came to my aid, bringing me the last glimmer of hope. A sense of calmness immediately replaced the mounting fear and anxiety in my mind. Having suffered so much, I could not contain my emotions and tears of gratitude streamed down my cheeks. That day was so unforgettable that it would stay in my memory forever.
遇险脱困类续写
I was shocked to find that I was trapped in some place.(the house, the lift,…) Suddenly, a dead silence ruled the place and I felt a wave of panic wash over me, but I knew I had to stay strong for both of us(如果前文出现了次要人物) /, but I knew I had to keep calm to wait for the rescue. The realization drove me to pluck up my courage and took a deep breath to yell/wave/cry with all my strength.
After what seemed like a century, the figure of somebody doing sth (E.g. firefighters holding the flashlight) appeared from … When somebody saw me, somebody immediately came over and took my hand. "Stay calm," somebody said, his/her gentle voice reassured me. “Follow me, and we’ll get out of this together.” With+O+OC, we slowly made our way through/out of some place. Thankfully, together we overcame the crisis. That day, I learned the importance of staying calm in times of danger.
2024T8 联考读后续写讲评
电梯惊魂
题目回顾
人与社会
文本简析
原文大义：
1. 我放学后坐电梯回公寓，遇到邻居Mrs. Lim 也一起坐电梯；
2. 本以为是平淡无事的一天，谁知电梯坏了，飞速下降到5楼，Mrs. Lim 歇斯底里，情绪失控；
3. 忽然Mrs. Lim 呼吸困难，我帮忙松开衣服领子，等待救援。
遇困等待救援
Paragraph 1: Several minutes passed, but no help came.
情节构思
①【衔接1】我被困后的心情
② Mrs. Lim相较之前
情况好转？更差了？
③ 我的应对：尽力冷静下来，并再次安抚Mrs. Lim 。
④ 我的努力：敲电梯门/再次按按钮/喊叫求助
⑤【衔接2】有人回应，并报火警；暂无回应，心情再次跌至谷底…
情节构思
①【衔接1】我被困的心情
My initial positivity had been worn out by the long-time anxiety and fear because of trapping in this narrow and dank space, tears of hopelessness welling up my eyes.（郑邦）
因为被困在这个狭窄阴暗的空间里，长期的焦虑和恐惧已经磨灭了我最初的积极性，绝望的泪水在眼眶里打转。
emotion
emotion
emotion
action
情节构思
①【衔接1】我被困的心情
Big fat sweats streaming down my forehead, I paced repeatedly, thinking about how to get out.(孔文昕)
大汗顺着额头流下来，我反复踱步，思考着如何脱身。
Emotion(show not tell)
action
action
情节构思
② Mrs. Lim相较之前 虚弱，不断啜泣 发抖
Mrs. Lim, who had been struggling to breathe, was now sobbing, her consciousness weakening, as she murmured, “I don‘t want to die.“(郑邦)
Mrs. Lim一直努力呼吸，现在已经泣不成声，意识也越来越模糊，她喃喃地说："我不想死。"
action
action
action
Paragraph 2: Bang! My hopes were lifted when I heard the firefighters on the other side of the lift door.
情节构思
①【衔接3】我的反应：激动地大声回应
② firefighters 的回应：让我们保持镇定+等待救援
③ Mrs. Lim的反应：放松下来，打起精神，等待破门
④ 过了一会门终于开了，我们也获救了；感谢救援人员
⑤【结尾】呼应原文开头：回想刚刚遭遇的电梯惊魂，珍惜平凡普通的一天。
情节构思
①【衔接3】我的反应
I stood up first and helped Mrs. Lim get up too. We looked at each other with excitement and waited for firefighters to open the door and help us out.(吴双)
我首先站了起来，然后帮助林女士也站了起来。我们激动地看着彼此，等待着消防员开门救我们出去。
action
action
action
emotion
action
主题升华
面对困境时保持冷静和同情心；
乐于帮助他人；
人生充满了意外，要珍惜生活的每一天；
勇于克服困难，困境中的希望与勇气(可选主题)
Standing in the sunshine, I felt the fresh air. At that time, it dawned on me that safety is the most precious fortune in one’s life.(孙中昊)
遇险脱困类续写
I was shocked to find that I was trapped in some place.(the house, the lift,…) Suddenly, a dead silence ruled the place and I felt a wave of panic wash over me, but I knew I had to stay strong for both of us(如果前文出现了次要人物) /, but I knew I had to keep calm to wait for the rescue. The realization drove me to pluck up my courage and took a deep breath to yell/wave/cry with all my strength.
Luckily, some rescue workers came to my aid, bringing me the last glimmer of hope. A sense of calmness immediately replaced the mounting fear and anxiety in my mind. Having suffered so much, I could not contain my emotions and tears of gratitude streamed down my cheeks. That day was so unforgettable that it would stay in my memory forever.
遇险脱困类续写
I was shocked to find that I was trapped in some place.(the house, the lift,…) Suddenly, a dead silence ruled the place and I felt a wave of panic wash over me, but I knew I had to stay strong for both of us(如果前文出现了次要人物) /, but I knew I had to keep calm to wait for the rescue. The realization drove me to pluck up my courage and took a deep breath to yell/wave/cry with all my strength.
After what seemed like a century, the figure of somebody doing sth (E.g. firefighters holding the flashlight) appeared from … When somebody saw me, somebody immediately came over and took my hand. "Stay calm," somebody said, his/her gentle voice reassured me. “Follow me, and we’ll get out of this together.” With+O+OC, we slowly made our way through/out of some place. Thankfully, together we overcame the crisis. That day, I learned the importance of staying calm in times of danger.