Unit 7 It s raining! 满分范文必背（含解析）2023-2024学年七年级英语下册（人教版）

Unit 7 It’s raining !
单元话题满分范文必背
1．今天是周末，你们一家人相聚家中，并且正在进行着不同的活动：爸爸和弟弟在院里种树、妈妈在打扫房间、姐姐在看书、你在上网课。
请根据以上提示，写一篇英语短文，对你们的活动进行描述。
要求：
1. 词数：70左右；
2. 语句通顺、内容详实，可适当发挥。
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【答案】例文
It’s 10 o’clock in the morning. We are all at home. What are my family doing
My father is planting a tree. Is my brother planting a tree, too Yes, he is helping my father. What are my mother and my sister doing Oh, my mother is cleaning the room and my sister is reading a book. What am I doing I am taking an online class!
How busy we are! We are all having a great time.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“现在进行时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生不要遗漏“信息提示”中的要点介绍，可以结合自己的生活实际适当增加，
注意保持主谓一致性，无语法和标点错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍时间、地点，并引出话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。介绍正在进行着不同的活动：爸爸和弟弟在种树、妈妈在打扫房间、姐姐在看书、我在上网课；
第三步，书写结语。我们很忙但很愉快。
[亮点词汇]
①plant a tree种树
②clean the room打扫房间
③take an online class上网课
④have a great time 玩得开心，过得愉快
[高分句型]
How busy we are! （How引导的感叹句）
2．假如你叫Mary，现在给你的笔友Nancy写信，介绍你的家庭成员及其活动，还有天气情况。提供材料如下：
要求：语法正确，语句通顺，不少于70 词。
Dear Nancy,
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Yours,
Mary
【答案】例文
Dear Nancy,
How is it going Now let me tell you something about my family and the weather in my city.
The weather in my city isn’t good. It’s very hot and it often rains in summer. In winter, we often stay at home because it’s windy and quite cold. Right now, it’s too cold to go outside, so we stay at home. My father is a reporter and he works at a TV station. Now he is watching TV. My mother is a teacher. She teaches music. She is washing clothes. My sister is a nurse and she is talking on the phone with her friend.
Please write to me soon and tell me something about your family and the weather in your city.
Yours,
Mary
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封书信；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“现在进行时”为主；
③提示：内容需包含所给提示内容，文章确保语句通顺，条理清晰，无单词语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题，表明写信的意图；
第二步，介绍所在城市的气候、家庭成员的职业和正在进行的活动。
第三步，希望收到回信。
[亮点词汇]
①stay at home待在家里
②right now现在
③watch TV看电视
[高分句型]
①Now let me tell you something about my family and the weather in my city.（let sb. do sth.句型）
②Right now, it’s too cold to go outside, so we stay at home. （too...to...句型）
③Now he is watching TV. (现在进行时态)
3．你是李伟，你刚结识了澳大利亚的一位新笔友Mark，给他发了一封电子邮件向他介绍了你的相关情况。
内容包括：性别、岁数、喜欢的学科和动物及原因、每天早晨起床时间、去学校的时间和方式、现在的天气等。
你询问他：澳大利亚的天气情况，欢迎Mark来玩。
请根据以上要点提示，写一篇60词左右的短文，鼓励适当发挥, 注意书写工整（邮件的开头和结尾已给出）。
Dear Mark,
I’m glad to make friends with you. My name is Li Wei.
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I hope to get your letter soon. Welcome to Weihai!
Yours,
Li Wei
【答案】例文：
Dear Mark,
I’m glad to make friends with you. My name is Li Wei.
I am a ten-year-old boy. I have many subjects at school, but I like English best because I think it’s interesting. I also like pandas because I think they are very cute. I get up at seven o’clock every day. I have breakfast and then go to school by bike. It’s sunny and cool here. What’s the weather like in Australia I guess it’s very nice. I hope you can come to China one day.
I hope to get your letter soon. Welcome to Weihai!
Yours,
Li Wei
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“提示信息”中“我的个人情况，喜欢的科目和动物以及原因，每天起床的时间，去学校的时间和方式，以及所在地方的现在的天气”，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据开头提示，介绍自己的个人情况；
第二步，询问他澳大利亚的情况；
第三步，书写结语：欢迎来威海！
[亮点词汇]
①get up起床
②have breakfast吃早饭
[高分句型]
①I have many subjects at school, but I like English best because I think it’s interesting.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②I hope you can come to China one day.（省略that的宾语从句）
4．假如你是李华，你在美国的笔友Peter来信，询问你广州四季的天气情况，以及哪个季节最适合来广州旅游。请你根据下列提示给他回一封电子邮件。
要点提示：
1.冬季稍寒但时间短；
2.春季的广州潮湿多雨，可以看到各种花；
3.夏季稍稍炎热，阳光充足，偶尔会有台风；
4.秋季凉爽干燥，总是有好天气，旅游最舒服；
5.广州很漂亮，期待很快能在广州见到他。
注意：
1.参考词汇：台风(typhoon)；
2.词数：70词左右(邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；
3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Dear Peter,
I’m so glad to receive your letter. You know, Guangzhou is in the south of China.
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Best wishes to you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Peter,
I’m so glad to receive your letter. You know, Guangzhou is in the south of China.
There are four seasons in Guangzhou—spring, summer, autumn and winter. Winter is a little cold but it’s very short. Guangzhou is wet and rainy in spring. You can see all kinds of flowers when you come. Summer is a little hot and sunny, but sometimes there are typhoons. Auturmn is cool and dry, and there is always good weather. It’s the most comfortable time for you to travel. Guangzhou is beautiful. I’m looking forward to seeing you in Guangzhou soon.
Best wishes to you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给中文提示，给美国的笔友Peter回一封邮件，介绍广州的天气情况以及哪个季节最适合来广州旅游。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍广州的冬季和春季天气情况；
第二步，介绍广州的夏季和秋季天气情况；
第三步，最后表达对Peter到来的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①a little有点
②all kinds of各种各样的
③look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①There are four seasons in Guangzhou（there be句型的使用）
②It’s the most comfortable time for you to travel.（动词不定式作定语）
5．在夏季，你的家乡天气怎么样？人们在这样的天气里都在做什么？请写一篇介绍你们家乡天气的短文。
注意事项：
(1)80词左右。
(2)意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范。
(3)请勿在文中使用真实的姓名。
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【答案】One possible version:
It’s summer now. The weather in my hometown is very hot and rainy. So it is very wet. People are wearing sunglasses and cool clothes. In the park, my classmates and I are having a good time. Some girls are singing and dancing. Some boys are playing soccer. I am swimming in a river and my best friend Tom is taking photos. A little boy is eating an ice cream.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中介绍家乡的天气，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“介绍家乡天气”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“夏季家乡天气怎么样和人们在这样的天气里都在做什么”两个方面重点介绍。
[亮点词汇]
①have a good time玩得开心
②take photos拍照
[高分句型]
I am swimming in a river and my best friend Tom is taking photos.（and连接并列句）
6．假如你是王明，你的美国网友简（Jane）暑假想来北京旅游，她想要了解一下北京夏天的天气。请你根据以下提示用英文给她介绍一下。
提示：1. 北京的天气；
2. 需要穿什么衣服；
3. 可以进行的活动……
要求：1. 语句通顺、符合逻辑，可适当发挥；
2. 不少于60词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Hi Jane. I’m happy to learn that you will come to Beijing this summer vacation.
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【答案】例文：
Hi, Jane. I’m happy to learn that you will come to Beijing this summer vacation. In summer, it’s very hot in Beijing. And it often rains. Boys usually wear T-shirts and shorts. Girls like wearing skirts. I think you can take some cool clothes. Many people like swimming in their free time because they feel cool and relaxed in the water. I
can take you to visit some famous places and you will have a great time here.
My family and I wish to see you soon.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：要求根据提示内容，给简介绍北京的天气等情况，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍北京的天气、需要穿的衣服以及可以进行的活动；
第二步，书写结语，表达对对方到来的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①come to来
②in their free time在他们的空闲时间
③have a great time玩得高兴
[高分句型]
①Many people like swimming in their free time because they feel cool and relaxing in the water.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②I can take you to visit some famous places and you will have a great time here.（and连接并列句）
7．假如你是梅梅，请写一张明信片给Miss Brown。她的地址：153 Park Street, London, England。大致内容：伦敦的天气如何，经常下雨吗？昆明的天气不错，全年都很温暖。欢迎来中国昆明。50词左右，可适当发挥。
Dear Miss Brown, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Meimei Miss Brown ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Dear Miss Brown, How is the weather in London Does it often rain The weather in Kunming is fine. The sky is blue and the air is clean. It’s warm all year round. You can see many kinds of nice flowers everywhere. Many people come to visit Kunming every year. Welcome to Kunming, China. Yours, Meimei Miss Brown 153 Park Street, London, England
【详解】1. 题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以梅梅的名义给Miss Brown写一封明信片。
2. 写作指导：本文主要采用第三人称写作；时态以一般现在时为主；文章内容要包含所给提示信息：询问对方伦敦天气如何，介绍昆明天气，发出邀请。写作时要注意明信片的格式，做到无标点符号和语法错误。
8．假如你是李明，是学校的播音员，你每天为学校播报天气信息，下面表格列出了三天的天气，请为大家播报。
星期 Friday Saturday Sunday
天气
建议 多云，天气凉爽， 适合课后进行室外活动（如打篮球） 雨天， 可以在家做家庭作业，帮父母做家务，和爷爷下象棋 天气晴朗， 适合和家人去公园游玩
参考词汇：cloudy, cool, play basketball, rainy, stay, do housework, play chess, sunny, park
要求：1.词数: 60词左右（文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2.必须包括表格内容，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.语句通顺，意思连贯，表达正确；
4.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
Good morning, boys and girls! I’m Li Ming. Now I’d like to tell you the weather on Friday, Saturday and Sunday. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you for your listening!
【答案】例文
Good morning, boys and girls! I’m Li Ming. Now I’d like to tell you the weather on Friday, Saturday and Sunday.
It’s cloudy on Friday. So it’s cool. It’s a good time to play basketball after class. But on Saturday, it’s a rainy day. You can stay at home to do your homework. And you can help your parents to do housework. Then you can play chess with your grandfather. On Sunday, it’s a sunny day. You can go to the park with your family.
That’s all. Thank you for your listening!
【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据表格内容为大家播报天气情况；要求包含所有提示内容。
2. 写作指导：此作文时态用一般现在时，采用第二人称口吻；可采用3段落格式，第一段：引起同学注意，播报天气；第二段：具体阐述星期五到星期日的天气状况以及相关的建议；第三段：总结全文，感谢收听。
9．假如你是李敏，你的美国笔友Danny告诉你，他很喜欢中国，想了解中国的四季情况以及人们在不同季节喜欢从事的活动。请根据以下提示，给Danny写一封信，介绍有关情况。
提示：
1.季节和月份；
2.不同季节的天气状况；
3.人们在不同季节喜欢从事的活动。
要求：
1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.词数：不少于60词。
Dear Danny,
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Yours,
Li Min
【答案】例文
Dear Danny,
There are four seasons in a year in China. They are spring, summer, autumn and winter. March, April and May are spring months. It’s warm and windy. We can fly kites in spring. June, July and August are summer months. The weather is very hot. We like to swim in the river. September, October and November are autumn months. The weather is cool and cloudy. We like to pick apples on the farm. December, January and February are winter months. It’s cold and snowy. We like to play in the snow.
How is the weather in America What do you like to do Can you write to me soon
Yours,
Li Min
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。要求向笔友Danny介绍中国的四季情况以及人们在不同季节喜欢从事的活动。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文要分别介绍中国的四季和相应的月份，介绍不同季节的天气状况以及人们在不同季节喜欢从事的活动。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
10．写一篇以“The Weather in My Hometown”为题的短文，介绍你家乡的天气。
注意：1.书写工整，语句通顺，连贯。2.字数80字左右。
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【答案】例文
The Weather in My Hometown
Hello, everyone! I’m from Nanchang. Do you know what the weather is like here Let me tell you!
In spring, the weather changes a lot. Sometimes it’s warm, and sometimes it’s cold. In summer, it’s hot. But I like hot weather because I like swimming. Autumn is very nice. It is not too hot or too cold. I usually go climbing in such weather. In winter, it’s cold and sometimes it is snowy. I often make snowmen with my friends when it snows.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。要求以“The Weather in My Hometown”为题，介绍自己家乡的天气。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来介绍，时态用一般现在时。作文可以从四季不同的天气来描述，介绍四季的不同以及自己的偏爱并说明原因。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。