2024届高考英语作文分类训练：推荐信（含解析）
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推荐信
1．假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Alex在春节后将举家来广东旅游。对于即将开始的旅游，Alex很激动，请你写信推荐一处广东省内的美景。内容要点包括如下：
1. 写信目的；
2. 简要介绍其基本情况并对其美景进行描述；
3. 表达祝愿。
注意：1. 词数120左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Alex,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
2．学校将开设更多课外活动，假定你是高一（6）班班长李华，请你代表班级向学校学生会主席David推荐你们班级认为合理的运动项目，并给出理由。
内容提示如下：
1.推荐项目；
2.推荐理由。
注意：字数80字左右，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3．假如你是李华,得知某英文报社要评选“The Most Qualified Student”(最美中学生),请你用英语给编辑写一封推荐信。要点如下:
1.介绍被推荐人(林扬)的基本信息;
2.说明推荐理由。
注意:1.词数90左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。
Dear Editor,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
4．假如你是李华，你的加拿大网友Mike圣诞节期间打算来中国,他对中国传统文化非常感兴趣，希望你能为他推荐一些名胜古迹。请你用英语给他发一封电子邮件，向他推荐一个或两个你所喜欢的名胜古迹。
要点包括:
1.简介你推荐的名胜古迹;
2.叙述你推荐的理由;
3.表达你的祝愿。
注意:词数90左右。
5．假定你是李华，你居住的社区有一对英国夫妇，他们想为即将在本地上小学的儿子找一位汉语家教，你对此很感兴趣。请给女主人Carol写一封邮件，推荐自己。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
Dear Carol,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
6．假定你是李华，你校的外籍交换生 Henry 给你发了一封邮件，想让你为他推荐一种词典，用来学习汉语，请你用英语给他回复。内容包括：
1. 词典名称；
2. 推荐理由；
3. 表达祝愿。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
7．假定你是李华，你班交换生Tom假期要回国，想为他的朋友带一份有中国特色的礼物。请你给他回封电子邮件，内容包括：
1. 推荐什么礼物；
2. 推荐理由；
3. 说明如何购买。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
8．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校英语戏剧俱乐部外籍指导教师Jim因疫情滞留英国。复学在即，作为俱乐部负责人，你给Jim写一封电子邮件，请他推荐一名外籍指导教师，内容包括：
1. 条件及要求；
2. 表示感谢并提醒注意防护。
注意：1. 词数不少于50；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
9．假如你是李华，收到你的美国朋友艾伦（Ellen）的来信说要来中国旅游，请你给他回信帮忙推荐最具中国文化代表性的旅游景点。你的回信内容如下：
1.旅游地点：山东曲阜；
2.参观景点：三孔景区（孔庙、孔府、孔林）、孔子文化园；
3.推荐原因：几千年来，孔子文化对中国的教育和中国人优良品质的形成，有着积极的影响意义。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可是适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾以给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：三孔景区Three-hole Scenic Spot 孔庙Confucian Temple孔府Confucian Mansion
孔林Confucian Garden孔子文化园Confucius Cultural Park
Dear Ellen,
I' m excited to receive your letter.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That's my suggestions and I' m looking forward to your coming to China quickly.
Yours,
Li Hua
10．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Tom 来信说他负责学校的校服栏目People of Great Achievement系列报道并希望你推荐一位中国现代女性名人，请你给Tom 回信推荐宋庆龄女士，内容包括:1. 宋庆龄（1893-1981）人物简介和主要事迹2. 你的个人评价
注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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1．Dear Alex,
Thrilled to hear that you are coming to Guangdong with your family for a tour after Spring Festival, I am writing to introduce a must-see tourist destination for you as you have never been to Guangdong before.
As the landmark of Guangzhou, Canton Tower is famous for its unique design, offering you a bird's-eye view of the whole city and some entertainment activities inside as well. Over 600 metres in height, Canton Tower is like a modern-looking lady greeting visitors from home and abroad.
I am fully convinced that you will have a fabulous trip here in Guangdong. Please let me know in advance when you are setting off for your tour and wish you a fruitful and happy trip.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给在春节后将举家来广东旅游的美国笔友Alex写信，向他推荐一处广东省内的美景。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时,少量现在进行时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 写信目的；
2. 简要介绍其基本情况并对其美景进行描述；
3. 表达祝愿。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
a must-see tourist destination; be famous for; offer sb. sth.; a bird's-eye view of; entertainment activities; in advance; set off
第三步：连词成句
1. I am writing to introduce a must-see tourist destination for you as you have never been to Guangdong before.
2. As the landmark of Guangzhou, Canton Tower is famous for its unique design, offering you a bird's-eye view of the whole city and some entertainment activities inside as well.
3. Please let me know in advance when you are setting off for your tour and wish you a fruitful and happy trip.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
表因果关系：as
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] Thrilled to hear that you are coming to Guangdong with your family for a tour after Spring Festival, I am writing to introduce a must-see tourist destination for you as you have never been to Guangdong before.用了that引导的宾语从句。
[高分句型2] As the landmark of Guangzhou, Canton Tower is famous for its unique design, offering you a bird's-eye view of the whole city and some entertainment activities inside as well.用了现在分词短语作状语。
2．Dear David,
l am Li Hua, monitor of Class 6 Grade 1. Knowing more sports events will be carried out in our extra-curricular activities, l'd like to recommend two events on behalf of my class.
Most of us consider jogging is suitable for both boys and girls. Not only will it benefit our health but also is helpful to shape our body. As for the group game, football is much more popular than others especially among boys. All the members learn to cooperate with each other so that they build up important qualities like responsibility and teamwork.
For these reasons, I recommend jogging and football.
Hopefully,our recommendation will be taken into consideration.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生代表自己班级向学校学生会主席David推荐班级认为合理的运动项目，并给出理由。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.推荐项目；
2.推荐理由。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
carry out, extra-curricular activities,on behalf of,be suitable for, benefit our health,shape our body,learn to cooperate with each other,build up important qualities,take into consideration
第三步：连词成句
1. Knowing more sports events will be carried out in our extra-curricular activities, l'd like to recommend two events on behalf of my class.
2.Most of us consider jogging is suitable for both boys and girls.
3.Not only will it benefit our health but also is helpful to shape our body.
4.All the members learn to cooperate with each other so that they build up important qualities like responsibility and teamwork.
5.Our recommendation will be taken into consideration.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
表并列补充关系：not only…but (also)
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1]
Knowing more sports events will be carried out in our extra-curricular activities, l'd like to recommend two events on behalf of my class.（运用了现在分词做状语）
[高分句型2]
All the members who learn to cooperate with each other build up important qualities like responsibility and teamwork.（运用了who引导的定语从句）
3．One possible version:
Dear Editor,
I’m a senior high school student and I happened to hear that you were hosting an activity to select The Most Qualified Student. It is a great honour for me to introduce to you one of my best friends, Lin Yang.
First of all, he, who is among the most diligent students in our school, not only studies hard but also behaves well. Secondly, he stands out for his diverse hobbies, including painting and playing the violin. Last but not least, he is warm-hearted and willing to help others in need.
Therefore, I here recommend him to you with all my heart and I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest possible moment.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给编辑写封推荐信，向英语报社推荐“最美中学生”林杨。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和少量一般过去时等其他时态。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 介绍被推荐人(林扬)的基本信息；
2. 说明推荐理由。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
an activity to select The Most Qualified Student; one of my best friends; study hard; behave well; diverse hobbies; painting and playing the violin; warm-hearted; be willing to help others; recommend him to you; look forward to
第三步：连词成句
1. I’m a senior high school student and I happened to hear that you were hosting an activity to select The Most Qualified Student.
2. It is a great honour for me to introduce to you one of my best friends, Lin Yang.
3. First of all, he, who is among the most diligent students in our school, not only studies hard but also behaves well.
4. Secondly, he stands out for his diverse hobbies, including painting and playing the violin.
5. Last but not least, he is warm-hearted and willing to help others in need.
6. Therefore, I here recommend him to you with all my heart and I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest possible moment.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
表文章结构顺序：First of all, Secondly, Last but not least
2. 表并列补充关系：not only…but (also), including
3. 表因果关系：Therefore
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
【点睛】[高分句型1] It is a great honour for me to introduce to you one of my best friends, Lin Yang.（非谓语动词不定式作主语，it形式主语）
[高分句型2] First of all, he, who is among the most diligent students in our school, not only studies hard but also behaves well. （who引导的非限制性定语从句）
4．Dear Mike,
I’m glad to know that you are coming to China during Christmas. The following is a brief introduction about some places of interest that I strongly recommend to you.
The Great Wall of China is one of the greatest wonders of the world and is visible from outer space. Because of its rich history and splendid appearance, the Great Wall attracts a lot of tourists, scientists, and historians.
The famous West Lake is like a brilliant pearl embedded in the beautiful and fertile shores of the East China Sea near the mouth of the Hangzhou Bay. The view of the West Lake is simply charming. Different time and different weather make it a different scene.
Look forward to your arrival.There are many other wonderful places here. Wish you a nice journey.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给加拿大网友Mike发一封电子邮件，向他推荐一个或两个所喜欢的中国名胜古迹。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。
结构：总-分-总法
要点：
1.简介你推荐的名胜古迹;
2.叙述你推荐的理由;
3.表达你的祝愿。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
Christmas；a brief introduction；places of interest；the Great Wall；one of the greatest wonders of the world；because of；a lot of；the West Lake；charming；look forward to；there be
第三步：连词成句
1. I’m glad to know that you are coming to China during Christmas.
2. The following is a brief introduction about some places of interest that I strongly recommend to you.
3. The Great Wall of China is one of the greatest wonders of the world and is visible from outer space.
4. Because of its rich history and splendid appearance, the Great Wall attracts a lot of tourists, scientists, and historians.
5. The famous West Lake is like a brilliant pearl embedded in the beautiful and fertile shores of the East China Sea near the mouth of the Hangzhou Bay.
6. The view of the West Lake is simply charming. Different time and different weather make it a different scene.
7. Wish you a nice journey.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last（供参考）
2.表并列补充关系：and；What is more, Besides, Moreover（供参考）
3.表因果关系：Because of
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] The following is a brief introduction about some places of interest that I strongly recommend to you.（使用了由that引导的定语从句）
[高分句型2] The famous West Lake is like a brilliant pearl embedded in the beautiful and fertile shores of the East China Sea near the mouth of the Hangzhou Bay.（使用了非谓语动词作状语）
[高分句型3] The Great Wall of China is one of the greatest wonders of the world and is visible from outer space.（使用了由and连接的并列句）
5．Dear Carol,
I’m Li Hua, a student who lives in the same neighborhood with you. Hearing that you are in want of a tutor to teach your son Chinese, I can’t wait to recommend myself to you with great sincerity. I am applying for it, which seems to fit very well with my education, experience, and career interest.
Now, I am in my second year in Senior High School, acquiring good grades in all my subjects especially a thorough knowledge of the Chinese language and great proficiency at English so that I believe I am qualified enough and you don’t need to worry about the communication between us. Additionally, I have worked part-time job as a tutor with several foreign students and have acted like their elder sister. Therefore, I have developed great patience and ability in managing people younger than me as a consequence of which, the students are more willing to learn and make progress.
If you would like to know more about my ability, I can be available for an interview at any time convenient to you.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给居住的社区有一对英国夫妇女主人Carol写封邮件，推荐自己作为汉语家教。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和现在完成时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 介绍写信的目的；
2. 介绍自己的优势；
3. 希望对方同意。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
in want of; apply for; worry about; have ability in; as a consequence of; be willing to; would like to; at any time
第三步：连词成句
1. Hearing that you are in want of a tutor to teach your son Chinese, I can’t wait to recommend myself to you with great sincerity.
2. I am applying for it, which seems to fit very well with my education, experience, and career interest.
3. Now, I am in my second year in Senior High School, acquiring good grades in all my subjects especially a thorough knowledge of the Chinese language and great proficiency at English so that I believe I am qualified enough and you don’t need to worry about the communication between us.
4. Therefore, I have developed great patience and ability in managing people younger than me as a consequence of which, the students are more willing to learn and make progress.
5. If you would like to know more about my ability, I can be available for an interview at any time convenient to you.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last（供参考）
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including（供参考）
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although +clause(从句), In spite of +n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…（供参考）
4.表因果关系： Additionally, Therefore
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1]: Hearing that you are in want of a tutor to teach your son Chinese, I can’t wait to recommend myself to you with great sincerity.这句话运用了现在分词作状语。
[高分句型2]：I am applying for it, which seems to fit very well with my education, experience, and career interest. 这句话运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句。
[高分句型3]：If you would like to know more about my ability, I can be available for an interview at any time convenient to you. 这句话运用了if引导的条件状语从句。
6．Dear Henry,
Pleased to know your passion for learning Chinese, I’m writing to recommend Xinhua Dictionary to you. As a native speaker, I believe it is a helpful tool, especially for the beginners.
Firstly, it’s one of the most widely used dictionaries in China, not only for its wide range of vocabulary but also for its precise explanation of each word. Besides, its reasonable price is undoubtedly an appealing factor.
I hope my suggestion helpful and wish you great progress in learning Chinese.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外籍交换生Henry写一封邮件，为他推荐一种词典，用来学习汉语。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 介绍词典名称；
2. 说明推荐理由；
3. 表达祝愿。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
recommend sth to sb; one of the most widely used dictionaries in China; its wide range of vocabulary; its precise explanation of each word; its reasonable price; wish you great progress in learning Chinese
第三步：连词成句
1. I’m writing to recommend Xinhua Dictionary to you.
2. Firstly, it’s one of the most widely used dictionaries in China, not only for its wide range of vocabulary but also for its precise explanation of each word.
3. Besides, its reasonable price is undoubtedly an appealing factor.
4. I hope my suggestion helpful and wish you great progress in learning Chinese.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：Firstly
2.表并列补充关系：Besides, not only…but (also)
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
【点睛】[高分句型1]Pleased to know your passion for learning Chinese, I’m writing to recommend Xinhua Dictionary to you.（用过去分词pleased作状语）
[高分句型2] Firstly, it’s one of the most widely used dictionaries in China, not only for its wide range of vocabulary but also for its precise explanation of each word.（用not only…but also…连接两个并列的原因状语）
7．Dear Tom,
Learning that you’ll go back home and want to buy gifts for your friends, I’m writing to share with you my suggestions as follows.
Of all the Chinese characteristic gifts, I think Chinese stamps will be the best choice. As you know, stamps are considered as a permanent collection with memorable value. Moreover, stamps cover natural landscapes, Chinese animal signs and major events, from which your friends can have a better understanding of China. Besides, taking up little space makes it easy to carry.
As for how to buy the stamps, you’d better go to any post office in China or its related website to choose some. I’m sure Chinese stamps will be your friends’ favorite.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，要求考生写一封电子邮件，向交换生Tom推荐一份有中国特色的礼物。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：三段式：第一段写出写信目的，引出主题；第二段写出推荐的礼物及推荐理由；第三段说明如何购买。
要求：1. 推荐什么礼物
2. 推荐理由
3. 说明如何购买
第二步:列提纲 （重点单词及词组）
buy sth. for sb. (为某人买某物); characteristic (独特的); be considered as… (被认为是……); permanent (永恒的); memorable (值得纪念的); landscape (风景，景色); take up (占用，占据); related (相关的)
第三步：连词成句
1. Of all the Chinese characteristic gifts, I think Chinese stamps will be the best choice.
2. As you know, stamps are considered as a permanent collection with memorable value.
3. Stamps cover natural landscapes, Chinese animal signs and major events
4. Besides, taking up little space makes it easy to carry.
5. As for how to buy the stamps, you’d better go to any post office in China or its related website to choose some.
6. I’m sure Chinese stamps will be your friends’ favorite.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1. 表文章结构顺序：first of all; to begin with; firstly/first; secondly/second… ; and then; finally; in the end; at last
2. 表并列补充关系：What’s more; besides(本篇文章使用过); moreover(本篇文章使用过); furthermore; in addition; additionally; not only… but also…; as well as; both…and…
3. 表转折对比关系：but; however; on the contrary; instead; although; in spite of; on the one hand…, on the other hand…; some…, while others…
4. 表因果关系：because; because of; for; so; since; thus; therefore; as a result; why
5. 表总结：in short; in a word; in conclusion; in summary; all in all; generally speaking
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
根据写作内容需要，加入高级句式，如名词性从句，定语从句，状语从句等。
“Moreover, stamps cover natural landscapes, Chinese animal signs and major events.”本句用来阐述推荐邮票作为礼物的理由。可以使用定语从句，进一步阐述邮票作为礼物的好处，朋友可以通过邮票更好地了解中国。润色修改为：Moreover, stamps cover natural landscapes, Chinese animal signs and major events, from which your friends can have a better understanding of China.
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中合理使用了复合句，如：Moreover, stamps cover natural landscapes, Chinese animal signs and major events, from which your friends can have a better understanding of China.这句话为“介词+关系代词”引导的定语从句；其次，使用了一些固定短语，如：buy sth. for sb.; be considered as…; take up等，使语言更加丰富；同时使用了一些高级词汇，如characteristic; permanent; memorable; landscape等，让语言更加地道。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
8．Dear Jim,
How are you doing I hope everything's OK with you.
Our school's drama club plans to start practising. Since you're away in Britain, we need a drama teacher to be in your place. Would you please recommend one for us
He or she should be a native English speaker, currently in Beijing, and experienced in both directing and teaching.
Thank you for your help. Please take care of yourself. Remember to wear a mask when necessary.
Best wishes,
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校英语戏剧俱乐部外籍指导教师Jim因疫情滞留英国。复学在即，作为俱乐部负责人，你给Jim写一封电子邮件，请他推荐一名外籍指导教师，内容包括：1. 条件及要求；2. 表示感谢并提醒注意防护。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：drama club (戏剧俱乐部)；plan to do sth.(计划做某事)；in one's place(代替某人)；recommend(推荐)；a native English speaker(以英语为母语的人)；currently (目前)；experienced(熟练的)；both…and…(两者都……)；take care of(照顾)；wear a mask(戴口罩)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如Since you're away in Britain, we need a drama teacher to be in your place.运用原因状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
9．Dear Ellen,
I' m excited to receive your letter. Hearing that you are going to visit China, I will recommend the most representative tourist sites of Chinese culture to you.
Shandong Qufu , is the hometown of Confucius. The most famous cultural sites here are Three-hole Scenic Spot and Confucius Cultural Park, which attract numerous tourists from both home and abroad annually. Three-hole Scenic Spot are Confucian Temple, Confucian Mansion, and Confucian Garden. These three sites have been listed as a UNESCO World Heritage Site since 1994.
Confucius is the first philosopher who established a philosophical system in the history of China. He is also a great thinker, statesman, and educator in ancient China. For thousands of years, Confucius culture has had a positive impact on Chinese education and the formation of Chinese people's good qualities.
That's my suggestions and I' m looking forward to your coming to China quickly.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。
【详解】第一步：根据提示可知，假如你是李华，收到你的美国朋友艾伦（Ellen）的来信说要来中国旅游，请你给他回信帮忙推荐最具中国文化代表性的旅游景点。你的回信内容如下：
1.旅游地点：山东曲阜； 2.参观景点：三孔景区（孔庙、孔府、孔林）、孔子文化园；
3.推荐原因：几千年来，孔子文化对中国的教育和中国人优良品质的形成，有着积极的影响意义。
第二步：根据写作要求确定关键词（组），如：recommend, representative tourist sites, Three-hole Scenic Spot, Confucius Cultural Park, UNESCO World Heritage Site, philosopher, thinker, statesman, educator, positive impact.
第三步：根据提示和关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。本文以一般现在时为主。
第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如Hearing that you are going to visit China运用了非谓语动词和宾语从句；The most famous cultural sites here are Three-hole Scenic Spot and Confucius Cultural Park, which attract numerous tourists from both home and abroad annually. 和Confucius was the first philosopher who established a philosophical system in the history of China.运用了定语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰，层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
10．Dear tom,
I am glad to receive your last letter. I would like to recommend Song qing-ling.
Song qing-ling, the mother of our country, born in Shanghai on January 27, 1893. When she was a child, her family moved abroad, so she got more scientific knowledge and more open-minded. When they moved back to China, she followed the great revolutionary forerunner Dr. Sun Yat-sen. Under his influence, she was committed to the cause of democratic revolution, socialism, and world peace and human progress. She used her spirit to make everyone esteem her. And she just did what she wanted and what she could to help her people.
Song qing-ling is such a lady, she didn't care for herself but always thought for others, not only a little, but all in the country.
I hope the information above will do you a favor. Looking forward to your reply.
yours,
Lihua
【分析】这是一篇说明文。本篇要求考生给朋友Tom写信介绍宋庆龄。
【详解】体裁：说明文
时态：根据提示，时态应以一般过去时为主
结构：总分总
要求：
1. 宋庆龄（1893-1981）人物简介和主要事迹
2. 你的个人评价
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
be glad to do sth./ recommend/ be committed to/ do what sb. can to do sth./ look forward to/ be born/ move to/ esteem
第三步：连词成句
1. I am glad to receive your last letter.
2. I would like to recommend Song qing-ling.
3. Song qing-ling, the mother of our country, born in Shanghai on January 27, 1893.
4. When she was a child, her family moved abroad, so she got more scientific knowledge and more open-minded.
5. When they moved back to China, she followed the great revolutionary forerunner Dr. Sun Yat-sen.
6.Under his influence, she was committed to the cause of democratic revolution, socialism, and world peace and human progress.
7. She used her spirit to make everyone esteem her.
8. And she just did what she wanted and what she could to help her people.
9. Song qing-ling is such a lady, she didn't care for herself but always thought for others, not only a little, but all in the country.
10. I hope the information above will do you a favor.
11. Looking forward to your reply.
第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）
表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although…
定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些主从复合句，例如：And she just did what she wanted and what she could to help her people.中what引导宾语从句。
1．假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Alex在春节后将举家来广东旅游。对于即将开始的旅游，Alex很激动，请你写信推荐一处广东省内的美景。内容要点包括如下：
1. 写信目的；
2. 简要介绍其基本情况并对其美景进行描述；
3. 表达祝愿。
注意：1. 词数120左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Alex,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
2．学校将开设更多课外活动，假定你是高一（6）班班长李华，请你代表班级向学校学生会主席David推荐你们班级认为合理的运动项目，并给出理由。
内容提示如下：
1.推荐项目；
2.推荐理由。
注意：字数80字左右，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3．假如你是李华,得知某英文报社要评选“The Most Qualified Student”(最美中学生),请你用英语给编辑写一封推荐信。要点如下:
1.介绍被推荐人(林扬)的基本信息;
2.说明推荐理由。
注意:1.词数90左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。
Dear Editor,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
4．假如你是李华，你的加拿大网友Mike圣诞节期间打算来中国,他对中国传统文化非常感兴趣，希望你能为他推荐一些名胜古迹。请你用英语给他发一封电子邮件，向他推荐一个或两个你所喜欢的名胜古迹。
要点包括:
1.简介你推荐的名胜古迹;
2.叙述你推荐的理由;
3.表达你的祝愿。
注意:词数90左右。
5．假定你是李华，你居住的社区有一对英国夫妇，他们想为即将在本地上小学的儿子找一位汉语家教，你对此很感兴趣。请给女主人Carol写一封邮件，推荐自己。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
Dear Carol,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
6．假定你是李华，你校的外籍交换生 Henry 给你发了一封邮件，想让你为他推荐一种词典，用来学习汉语，请你用英语给他回复。内容包括：
1. 词典名称；
2. 推荐理由；
3. 表达祝愿。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
7．假定你是李华，你班交换生Tom假期要回国，想为他的朋友带一份有中国特色的礼物。请你给他回封电子邮件，内容包括：
1. 推荐什么礼物；
2. 推荐理由；
3. 说明如何购买。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
8．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校英语戏剧俱乐部外籍指导教师Jim因疫情滞留英国。复学在即，作为俱乐部负责人，你给Jim写一封电子邮件，请他推荐一名外籍指导教师，内容包括：
1. 条件及要求；
2. 表示感谢并提醒注意防护。
注意：1. 词数不少于50；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
9．假如你是李华，收到你的美国朋友艾伦（Ellen）的来信说要来中国旅游，请你给他回信帮忙推荐最具中国文化代表性的旅游景点。你的回信内容如下：
1.旅游地点：山东曲阜；
2.参观景点：三孔景区（孔庙、孔府、孔林）、孔子文化园；
3.推荐原因：几千年来，孔子文化对中国的教育和中国人优良品质的形成，有着积极的影响意义。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可是适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾以给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：三孔景区Three-hole Scenic Spot 孔庙Confucian Temple孔府Confucian Mansion
孔林Confucian Garden孔子文化园Confucius Cultural Park
Dear Ellen,
I' m excited to receive your letter.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That's my suggestions and I' m looking forward to your coming to China quickly.
Yours,
Li Hua
10．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Tom 来信说他负责学校的校服栏目People of Great Achievement系列报道并希望你推荐一位中国现代女性名人，请你给Tom 回信推荐宋庆龄女士，内容包括:1. 宋庆龄（1893-1981）人物简介和主要事迹2. 你的个人评价
注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
1．Dear Alex,
Thrilled to hear that you are coming to Guangdong with your family for a tour after Spring Festival, I am writing to introduce a must-see tourist destination for you as you have never been to Guangdong before.
As the landmark of Guangzhou, Canton Tower is famous for its unique design, offering you a bird's-eye view of the whole city and some entertainment activities inside as well. Over 600 metres in height, Canton Tower is like a modern-looking lady greeting visitors from home and abroad.
I am fully convinced that you will have a fabulous trip here in Guangdong. Please let me know in advance when you are setting off for your tour and wish you a fruitful and happy trip.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给在春节后将举家来广东旅游的美国笔友Alex写信，向他推荐一处广东省内的美景。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时,少量现在进行时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 写信目的；
2. 简要介绍其基本情况并对其美景进行描述；
3. 表达祝愿。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
a must-see tourist destination; be famous for; offer sb. sth.; a bird's-eye view of; entertainment activities; in advance; set off
第三步：连词成句
1. I am writing to introduce a must-see tourist destination for you as you have never been to Guangdong before.
2. As the landmark of Guangzhou, Canton Tower is famous for its unique design, offering you a bird's-eye view of the whole city and some entertainment activities inside as well.
3. Please let me know in advance when you are setting off for your tour and wish you a fruitful and happy trip.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
表因果关系：as
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] Thrilled to hear that you are coming to Guangdong with your family for a tour after Spring Festival, I am writing to introduce a must-see tourist destination for you as you have never been to Guangdong before.用了that引导的宾语从句。
[高分句型2] As the landmark of Guangzhou, Canton Tower is famous for its unique design, offering you a bird's-eye view of the whole city and some entertainment activities inside as well.用了现在分词短语作状语。
2．Dear David,
l am Li Hua, monitor of Class 6 Grade 1. Knowing more sports events will be carried out in our extra-curricular activities, l'd like to recommend two events on behalf of my class.
Most of us consider jogging is suitable for both boys and girls. Not only will it benefit our health but also is helpful to shape our body. As for the group game, football is much more popular than others especially among boys. All the members learn to cooperate with each other so that they build up important qualities like responsibility and teamwork.
For these reasons, I recommend jogging and football.
Hopefully,our recommendation will be taken into consideration.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生代表自己班级向学校学生会主席David推荐班级认为合理的运动项目，并给出理由。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.推荐项目；
2.推荐理由。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
carry out, extra-curricular activities,on behalf of,be suitable for, benefit our health,shape our body,learn to cooperate with each other,build up important qualities,take into consideration
第三步：连词成句
1. Knowing more sports events will be carried out in our extra-curricular activities, l'd like to recommend two events on behalf of my class.
2.Most of us consider jogging is suitable for both boys and girls.
3.Not only will it benefit our health but also is helpful to shape our body.
4.All the members learn to cooperate with each other so that they build up important qualities like responsibility and teamwork.
5.Our recommendation will be taken into consideration.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
表并列补充关系：not only…but (also)
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1]
Knowing more sports events will be carried out in our extra-curricular activities, l'd like to recommend two events on behalf of my class.（运用了现在分词做状语）
[高分句型2]
All the members who learn to cooperate with each other build up important qualities like responsibility and teamwork.（运用了who引导的定语从句）
3．One possible version:
Dear Editor,
I’m a senior high school student and I happened to hear that you were hosting an activity to select The Most Qualified Student. It is a great honour for me to introduce to you one of my best friends, Lin Yang.
First of all, he, who is among the most diligent students in our school, not only studies hard but also behaves well. Secondly, he stands out for his diverse hobbies, including painting and playing the violin. Last but not least, he is warm-hearted and willing to help others in need.
Therefore, I here recommend him to you with all my heart and I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest possible moment.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给编辑写封推荐信，向英语报社推荐“最美中学生”林杨。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和少量一般过去时等其他时态。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 介绍被推荐人(林扬)的基本信息；
2. 说明推荐理由。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
an activity to select The Most Qualified Student; one of my best friends; study hard; behave well; diverse hobbies; painting and playing the violin; warm-hearted; be willing to help others; recommend him to you; look forward to
第三步：连词成句
1. I’m a senior high school student and I happened to hear that you were hosting an activity to select The Most Qualified Student.
2. It is a great honour for me to introduce to you one of my best friends, Lin Yang.
3. First of all, he, who is among the most diligent students in our school, not only studies hard but also behaves well.
4. Secondly, he stands out for his diverse hobbies, including painting and playing the violin.
5. Last but not least, he is warm-hearted and willing to help others in need.
6. Therefore, I here recommend him to you with all my heart and I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest possible moment.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
表文章结构顺序：First of all, Secondly, Last but not least
2. 表并列补充关系：not only…but (also), including
3. 表因果关系：Therefore
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
【点睛】[高分句型1] It is a great honour for me to introduce to you one of my best friends, Lin Yang.（非谓语动词不定式作主语，it形式主语）
[高分句型2] First of all, he, who is among the most diligent students in our school, not only studies hard but also behaves well. （who引导的非限制性定语从句）
4．Dear Mike,
I’m glad to know that you are coming to China during Christmas. The following is a brief introduction about some places of interest that I strongly recommend to you.
The Great Wall of China is one of the greatest wonders of the world and is visible from outer space. Because of its rich history and splendid appearance, the Great Wall attracts a lot of tourists, scientists, and historians.
The famous West Lake is like a brilliant pearl embedded in the beautiful and fertile shores of the East China Sea near the mouth of the Hangzhou Bay. The view of the West Lake is simply charming. Different time and different weather make it a different scene.
Look forward to your arrival.There are many other wonderful places here. Wish you a nice journey.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给加拿大网友Mike发一封电子邮件，向他推荐一个或两个所喜欢的中国名胜古迹。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。
结构：总-分-总法
要点：
1.简介你推荐的名胜古迹;
2.叙述你推荐的理由;
3.表达你的祝愿。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
Christmas；a brief introduction；places of interest；the Great Wall；one of the greatest wonders of the world；because of；a lot of；the West Lake；charming；look forward to；there be
第三步：连词成句
1. I’m glad to know that you are coming to China during Christmas.
2. The following is a brief introduction about some places of interest that I strongly recommend to you.
3. The Great Wall of China is one of the greatest wonders of the world and is visible from outer space.
4. Because of its rich history and splendid appearance, the Great Wall attracts a lot of tourists, scientists, and historians.
5. The famous West Lake is like a brilliant pearl embedded in the beautiful and fertile shores of the East China Sea near the mouth of the Hangzhou Bay.
6. The view of the West Lake is simply charming. Different time and different weather make it a different scene.
7. Wish you a nice journey.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last（供参考）
2.表并列补充关系：and；What is more, Besides, Moreover（供参考）
3.表因果关系：Because of
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] The following is a brief introduction about some places of interest that I strongly recommend to you.（使用了由that引导的定语从句）
[高分句型2] The famous West Lake is like a brilliant pearl embedded in the beautiful and fertile shores of the East China Sea near the mouth of the Hangzhou Bay.（使用了非谓语动词作状语）
[高分句型3] The Great Wall of China is one of the greatest wonders of the world and is visible from outer space.（使用了由and连接的并列句）
5．Dear Carol,
I’m Li Hua, a student who lives in the same neighborhood with you. Hearing that you are in want of a tutor to teach your son Chinese, I can’t wait to recommend myself to you with great sincerity. I am applying for it, which seems to fit very well with my education, experience, and career interest.
Now, I am in my second year in Senior High School, acquiring good grades in all my subjects especially a thorough knowledge of the Chinese language and great proficiency at English so that I believe I am qualified enough and you don’t need to worry about the communication between us. Additionally, I have worked part-time job as a tutor with several foreign students and have acted like their elder sister. Therefore, I have developed great patience and ability in managing people younger than me as a consequence of which, the students are more willing to learn and make progress.
If you would like to know more about my ability, I can be available for an interview at any time convenient to you.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给居住的社区有一对英国夫妇女主人Carol写封邮件，推荐自己作为汉语家教。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和现在完成时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 介绍写信的目的；
2. 介绍自己的优势；
3. 希望对方同意。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
in want of; apply for; worry about; have ability in; as a consequence of; be willing to; would like to; at any time
第三步：连词成句
1. Hearing that you are in want of a tutor to teach your son Chinese, I can’t wait to recommend myself to you with great sincerity.
2. I am applying for it, which seems to fit very well with my education, experience, and career interest.
3. Now, I am in my second year in Senior High School, acquiring good grades in all my subjects especially a thorough knowledge of the Chinese language and great proficiency at English so that I believe I am qualified enough and you don’t need to worry about the communication between us.
4. Therefore, I have developed great patience and ability in managing people younger than me as a consequence of which, the students are more willing to learn and make progress.
5. If you would like to know more about my ability, I can be available for an interview at any time convenient to you.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last（供参考）
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including（供参考）
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although +clause(从句), In spite of +n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…（供参考）
4.表因果关系： Additionally, Therefore
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1]: Hearing that you are in want of a tutor to teach your son Chinese, I can’t wait to recommend myself to you with great sincerity.这句话运用了现在分词作状语。
[高分句型2]：I am applying for it, which seems to fit very well with my education, experience, and career interest. 这句话运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句。
[高分句型3]：If you would like to know more about my ability, I can be available for an interview at any time convenient to you. 这句话运用了if引导的条件状语从句。
6．Dear Henry,
Pleased to know your passion for learning Chinese, I’m writing to recommend Xinhua Dictionary to you. As a native speaker, I believe it is a helpful tool, especially for the beginners.
Firstly, it’s one of the most widely used dictionaries in China, not only for its wide range of vocabulary but also for its precise explanation of each word. Besides, its reasonable price is undoubtedly an appealing factor.
I hope my suggestion helpful and wish you great progress in learning Chinese.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外籍交换生Henry写一封邮件，为他推荐一种词典，用来学习汉语。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 介绍词典名称；
2. 说明推荐理由；
3. 表达祝愿。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
recommend sth to sb; one of the most widely used dictionaries in China; its wide range of vocabulary; its precise explanation of each word; its reasonable price; wish you great progress in learning Chinese
第三步：连词成句
1. I’m writing to recommend Xinhua Dictionary to you.
2. Firstly, it’s one of the most widely used dictionaries in China, not only for its wide range of vocabulary but also for its precise explanation of each word.
3. Besides, its reasonable price is undoubtedly an appealing factor.
4. I hope my suggestion helpful and wish you great progress in learning Chinese.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：Firstly
2.表并列补充关系：Besides, not only…but (also)
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
【点睛】[高分句型1]Pleased to know your passion for learning Chinese, I’m writing to recommend Xinhua Dictionary to you.（用过去分词pleased作状语）
[高分句型2] Firstly, it’s one of the most widely used dictionaries in China, not only for its wide range of vocabulary but also for its precise explanation of each word.（用not only…but also…连接两个并列的原因状语）
7．Dear Tom,
Learning that you’ll go back home and want to buy gifts for your friends, I’m writing to share with you my suggestions as follows.
Of all the Chinese characteristic gifts, I think Chinese stamps will be the best choice. As you know, stamps are considered as a permanent collection with memorable value. Moreover, stamps cover natural landscapes, Chinese animal signs and major events, from which your friends can have a better understanding of China. Besides, taking up little space makes it easy to carry.
As for how to buy the stamps, you’d better go to any post office in China or its related website to choose some. I’m sure Chinese stamps will be your friends’ favorite.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，要求考生写一封电子邮件，向交换生Tom推荐一份有中国特色的礼物。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：三段式：第一段写出写信目的，引出主题；第二段写出推荐的礼物及推荐理由；第三段说明如何购买。
要求：1. 推荐什么礼物
2. 推荐理由
3. 说明如何购买
第二步:列提纲 （重点单词及词组）
buy sth. for sb. (为某人买某物); characteristic (独特的); be considered as… (被认为是……); permanent (永恒的); memorable (值得纪念的); landscape (风景，景色); take up (占用，占据); related (相关的)
第三步：连词成句
1. Of all the Chinese characteristic gifts, I think Chinese stamps will be the best choice.
2. As you know, stamps are considered as a permanent collection with memorable value.
3. Stamps cover natural landscapes, Chinese animal signs and major events
4. Besides, taking up little space makes it easy to carry.
5. As for how to buy the stamps, you’d better go to any post office in China or its related website to choose some.
6. I’m sure Chinese stamps will be your friends’ favorite.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1. 表文章结构顺序：first of all; to begin with; firstly/first; secondly/second… ; and then; finally; in the end; at last
2. 表并列补充关系：What’s more; besides(本篇文章使用过); moreover(本篇文章使用过); furthermore; in addition; additionally; not only… but also…; as well as; both…and…
3. 表转折对比关系：but; however; on the contrary; instead; although; in spite of; on the one hand…, on the other hand…; some…, while others…
4. 表因果关系：because; because of; for; so; since; thus; therefore; as a result; why
5. 表总结：in short; in a word; in conclusion; in summary; all in all; generally speaking
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
根据写作内容需要，加入高级句式，如名词性从句，定语从句，状语从句等。
“Moreover, stamps cover natural landscapes, Chinese animal signs and major events.”本句用来阐述推荐邮票作为礼物的理由。可以使用定语从句，进一步阐述邮票作为礼物的好处，朋友可以通过邮票更好地了解中国。润色修改为：Moreover, stamps cover natural landscapes, Chinese animal signs and major events, from which your friends can have a better understanding of China.
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中合理使用了复合句，如：Moreover, stamps cover natural landscapes, Chinese animal signs and major events, from which your friends can have a better understanding of China.这句话为“介词+关系代词”引导的定语从句；其次，使用了一些固定短语，如：buy sth. for sb.; be considered as…; take up等，使语言更加丰富；同时使用了一些高级词汇，如characteristic; permanent; memorable; landscape等，让语言更加地道。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
8．Dear Jim,
How are you doing I hope everything's OK with you.
Our school's drama club plans to start practising. Since you're away in Britain, we need a drama teacher to be in your place. Would you please recommend one for us
He or she should be a native English speaker, currently in Beijing, and experienced in both directing and teaching.
Thank you for your help. Please take care of yourself. Remember to wear a mask when necessary.
Best wishes,
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校英语戏剧俱乐部外籍指导教师Jim因疫情滞留英国。复学在即，作为俱乐部负责人，你给Jim写一封电子邮件，请他推荐一名外籍指导教师，内容包括：1. 条件及要求；2. 表示感谢并提醒注意防护。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：drama club (戏剧俱乐部)；plan to do sth.(计划做某事)；in one's place(代替某人)；recommend(推荐)；a native English speaker(以英语为母语的人)；currently (目前)；experienced(熟练的)；both…and…(两者都……)；take care of(照顾)；wear a mask(戴口罩)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如Since you're away in Britain, we need a drama teacher to be in your place.运用原因状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
9．Dear Ellen,
I' m excited to receive your letter. Hearing that you are going to visit China, I will recommend the most representative tourist sites of Chinese culture to you.
Shandong Qufu , is the hometown of Confucius. The most famous cultural sites here are Three-hole Scenic Spot and Confucius Cultural Park, which attract numerous tourists from both home and abroad annually. Three-hole Scenic Spot are Confucian Temple, Confucian Mansion, and Confucian Garden. These three sites have been listed as a UNESCO World Heritage Site since 1994.
Confucius is the first philosopher who established a philosophical system in the history of China. He is also a great thinker, statesman, and educator in ancient China. For thousands of years, Confucius culture has had a positive impact on Chinese education and the formation of Chinese people's good qualities.
That's my suggestions and I' m looking forward to your coming to China quickly.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。
【详解】第一步：根据提示可知，假如你是李华，收到你的美国朋友艾伦（Ellen）的来信说要来中国旅游，请你给他回信帮忙推荐最具中国文化代表性的旅游景点。你的回信内容如下：
1.旅游地点：山东曲阜； 2.参观景点：三孔景区（孔庙、孔府、孔林）、孔子文化园；
3.推荐原因：几千年来，孔子文化对中国的教育和中国人优良品质的形成，有着积极的影响意义。
第二步：根据写作要求确定关键词（组），如：recommend, representative tourist sites, Three-hole Scenic Spot, Confucius Cultural Park, UNESCO World Heritage Site, philosopher, thinker, statesman, educator, positive impact.
第三步：根据提示和关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。本文以一般现在时为主。
第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如Hearing that you are going to visit China运用了非谓语动词和宾语从句；The most famous cultural sites here are Three-hole Scenic Spot and Confucius Cultural Park, which attract numerous tourists from both home and abroad annually. 和Confucius was the first philosopher who established a philosophical system in the history of China.运用了定语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰，层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
10．Dear tom,
I am glad to receive your last letter. I would like to recommend Song qing-ling.
Song qing-ling, the mother of our country, born in Shanghai on January 27, 1893. When she was a child, her family moved abroad, so she got more scientific knowledge and more open-minded. When they moved back to China, she followed the great revolutionary forerunner Dr. Sun Yat-sen. Under his influence, she was committed to the cause of democratic revolution, socialism, and world peace and human progress. She used her spirit to make everyone esteem her. And she just did what she wanted and what she could to help her people.
Song qing-ling is such a lady, she didn't care for herself but always thought for others, not only a little, but all in the country.
I hope the information above will do you a favor. Looking forward to your reply.
yours,
Lihua
【分析】这是一篇说明文。本篇要求考生给朋友Tom写信介绍宋庆龄。
【详解】体裁：说明文
时态：根据提示，时态应以一般过去时为主
结构：总分总
要求：
1. 宋庆龄（1893-1981）人物简介和主要事迹
2. 你的个人评价
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
be glad to do sth./ recommend/ be committed to/ do what sb. can to do sth./ look forward to/ be born/ move to/ esteem
第三步：连词成句
1. I am glad to receive your last letter.
2. I would like to recommend Song qing-ling.
3. Song qing-ling, the mother of our country, born in Shanghai on January 27, 1893.
4. When she was a child, her family moved abroad, so she got more scientific knowledge and more open-minded.
5. When they moved back to China, she followed the great revolutionary forerunner Dr. Sun Yat-sen.
6.Under his influence, she was committed to the cause of democratic revolution, socialism, and world peace and human progress.
7. She used her spirit to make everyone esteem her.
8. And she just did what she wanted and what she could to help her people.
9. Song qing-ling is such a lady, she didn't care for herself but always thought for others, not only a little, but all in the country.
10. I hope the information above will do you a favor.
11. Looking forward to your reply.
第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）
表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although…
定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些主从复合句，例如：And she just did what she wanted and what she could to help her people.中what引导宾语从句。