2024译林版九年级中考英语历年书面表达模拟题集锦（2）（含解析）

2024译林版九年级中考英语历年书面表达模拟题集锦（2）
题号 一 总分
得分
一、书面表达：本大题共10小题，共150分。
11.
Have you ever listened to the song You Raise Me Up？Who has raised you up during your school life？How does he/she raise you up and what have you learnt from him or her？You will give a speech at the graduation ceremony. Please write an English draft for it.
注意：
1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2.语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3.词数80左右。
__________________________________________________________________
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12.假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Eric给你发来电子邮件请求帮助。请根据邮件内容，用英语回复。
Dear Li Hua, How are you going Our school will hold a drama festival next month. I tried out for the performance last week. But I'm very unhappy to be chosen to play a role without any dialogue. Should I give up the chance Could you please give me some advice Thank you! Yours, Eric
注意：
1) 文中不能出现你的真实姓名和学校名称。
2) 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清晰，书写规范。
3) 词数80左右，邮件的开头和结尾部分已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Eric,
I'm glad to receive your email. Now, I'm writing to tell you about my thoughts.


Yours,
Li Hua
13. 黑发不知勤学早，白首方悔读书迟。请根据以下征稿内容，为校英语广播站写一篇短文。
Welcome to our radio program. This week we invite you to say something about Tangping (躺平): What Tangping means for teenagers Whether you choose Tangping and why Your advice to teenagers who choose Tangping. We hope to hear from you.
注意：
1.内容涵盖所有要点，全文连贯通顺；
2.词数80左右（已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数）；
3.文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
In my opinion, _____________________________________________
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14.红星中学王校长是一位英语老师，在学校网站的英语栏目“HEAR YOUR VOICE”发帖，了解学生学习和学校食堂两方面的情况。假如你是学生李明，请根据校长的帖子，选择其中一个方面反映问题，并提出建议。
HEAR YOUR VOICE Mr. Wang Dear students, How is everything going Do you have any problems with your study For example, do you often stay up late to finish your homework What about our Students' Canteen(食堂) Are you satisfied with your lunch Looking forward to your problems and advice. 5: 20 PM Apr. 16, 2023
注意：
1. 内容涵盖所有要点，适当发挥，全文连贯通顺。
2. 词数80左右(回帖开头和结尾不计入总词数)。
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
Dear Mr. Wang,
I am Li Ming, from Grade Nine.



Yours faithfully,
Li Ming
15.
There must be a hobby that gives you certain things, such as happiness, confidence, creativity, courage, strength, and the list can go on. Pick one to complete the title and write an article about 80 words.
注意:
1. 内容涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥;
2. 词数80词左右(已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数);
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
________ Give(s) Me________



16.假如你是Li Lei，曾在你校交流学习的Chris给你写了一封邮件。请你根据Chris的邮件内容，用英语回一封电子邮件。
Dear Li Lei,
How's everything going Recently I've just read a really good book The Old Man and the Sea. It is a novel by Hemingway and is one of his greatest books. The story tells how an old fisherman fights against a big fish. Although the fisherman fails again and again, he never gives up. What kind of books do you enjoy reading Have you read anything interesting recently Tell me something about a famous writer from your country and one of his/her works.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Chris
注意 ;
1. 内容涵盖要点，全文连贯通顺；
2. 词数80左右(已给出的邮件开头和结尾不计入总词数)；
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任信息，如校名、人名等。
Dear Chris,
I'm glad to hear from you and learn about such a great novel.



Yours sincerely,
Li Lei
17.“Kids' Fun”杂志正在举办征文活动，请根据征文要求，用英语写一篇短文投稿。
Just as our magazine's name, "Kids' Fun", we pay special attention to the fun kids have. Over your school days in junior high, you have experienced many school trips. Which one is the most unforgettable one Write a passage to tell us why you always remember that trip. Is it because of the place you went Or the things you saw Or the activities you enjoyed yourself Or the feelings you would never forget We are looking forward to your sharing.
注意：
1. 要点齐全，文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3. 词数80左右，邮件的开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
What an unforgettable school trip!
I have experienced many school trips, but the one I will never forget is



18.今秋开学起，劳动课 (labor course) 将正式成为中小学的一门独立课程。你校英语校刊English Garden中Have Your Say栏目开展了一项关于家务活和学校劳动课的调查。请你根据调查表内容，用英语写一篇短文，表达你的想法。
Welcome to Have Your Say We're conducting a survey on housework and labor course in our school. We would like you to share your ideas about housework and labor course. We need your ideas. ● What housework do you often do at home ●What is the advantages of doing housework ● What advice can you offer on labor course in our school Looking forward to hearing from you.
注意：
1. 对所有要点逐一陈述，适当发挥。
2. 词数80左右，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
I am glad to share my ideas about housework and labor course.



19. Napoleon(拿破仑) once said, "He is a bad soldier who doesn't dream of becoming a general(将军)." Would you rather be a leader or a common member in a certain group Make your choice and give at least TWO reasons to support your idea.注意：
1. 内容涵盖所有要点，适当发挥，全文连贯通顺。
2. 词数80 左右(已给出文章开头，不计入总词数)。文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称。
To be a leader or a common member
We all have different roles to play in a certain group.



20.为了促进学生健康成长，“双减”政策中明确了各年级作业总量。假如你是初三学生李华，请根据表格内容，用英文写一封信，向国外笔友Mike简要介绍作业量要求，并谈谈“双减”的好处及你的看法。
Written homework every day Grades 1-2 none
Grades 3-6 less than 60 minutes
Grades 7-9 less than 90 minutes
Advantages more relaxed,...
Your opinion(s) ...
注意：
1.内容涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥。
2.词数80左右(已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数)。
3.文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
Dear Mike,
I'd like to tell you something about the "double reduction" policy.



答案与解析
11.【答案】Dear teachers and students，
It's my honor to stand here to give my speech. ①Thinking back to my school life, there are a lot of people that help me. One of them is my deskmate Li Hua.
He is one of the best students in my class. He is fond of English and good at it. ②He often practises speaking English and reading aloud, so he has a good pronunciation. But I did badly in English and I dare not speak English in class before. He often encourages me and helps me with my English. He told me "Don't be afraid, try again." With his help, I have made great progress.
He is helpful and modest. I learnt a lot from him. Thank you, my best deskmate.
【解析】【思路点拨】
本片书面表达是一篇演讲稿。首先认真阅读所给的信息，认真审题、确定文章体裁、题材和中心。本文主要使用第三人称和一般现在时。内容主要包括：1.谁帮助我2.如何帮助我3.我从中学到了什么。上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。确保内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，书写清晰，卷面整洁。
【结构布局】
引言：开篇问候，点明主题
中心：李华是如何帮助我的
结尾：我从李华身上学到了什么
【亮点短语】
①be fond of 喜欢
②made great progress 取得巨大进步
【高分句型】
①Thinking back to my school life，there are a lot of people that help me.（there be句型）
②He often practises speaking English and reading aloud, so he has a good pronunciation.（so连接的结果状语从句）
12.【答案】Dear Eric,
I'm glad to receive your email. Now, I'm writing to tell you about my thoughts.
①First, it's brave of you to try out for the performance during your drama festival. ②Although you haven't got the role you wanted, it's still a good chance for you to improve your acting skills and confidence. In fact, characters without any dialogue may be more challenging because you must use more body language to express yourself. So don't give up this opportunity.
What's more, practice hard in order to have a good performance.Practice makes perfect.
Wish you good luck and look forward to your wonderful performance!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】本文是一封建议信，属于应用文写作；主要使用第一人称和第二人称，时态为一般现在时；文章要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
【结构布局】
引言：开篇道明写信目的，点明主题；
中心：根据要点提示，先给予肯定，再提出自己的看法，可自行增加多一个建议;
结尾：表达自己的祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①give up放弃
②Practice makes perfect熟能生巧
③look forward to sth期待某事
[高分句型]
①First, it's brave of you to try out for the performance during your drama festival. (It is+形容词+of sb. to do sth.句型)
②Although you haven't got the role you wanted, it's still a good chance for you toimprove your acting skills and confidence. (although引导的让步状语从句)
13.【答案】 In my opinion, Tangping means not studying hard for teenagers. I don't choose Tangping ①because it can only give us pleasure for a short time. My friend Tom once chose Tangping during the summer holiday. At first, he had fun playing online games. But later, he failed the exams. He was not happy any more!
②I have some advice for those who choose Tangping. First, you should have a purpose for your life, such as, going to college or being a doctor in the future. Second, stay away from mobile phones. ③If you feel bored, play sports instead of playing computer games or watching short videos on the Internet.
【解析】【思路点拨】
本篇是一篇征文稿，要求作文必须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。人称以第二人称为主，时态用一般现在时，要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误并注意高级词汇和高级句式的应用。
【结构布局】
引言：引出话题并表明自己的态度
中心：详细举例说明躺平对青少年意味着什么
结尾: 我的具体建议
【亮点词汇】
①have fun doing sth做某事很开心
②not...any more不再，再也不
③stay away from远离来自于......
【高分句型】
①I don't choose Tangping because it can only give us pleasure for a short time.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②I have some advice for those who choose Tangping.（who引导的限定性定语从句）
③If you feel bored, play sports instead of playing computer games or watching short videos on the Internet.（if引导的条件状语从句）
14.【答案】Dear Mr. Wang,
I am a student from Grade Nine. I want to tell you something about our study.
First of all, proper exercises help us check what we have learned. Since we have seven subjects, we have to spend more than three hours finishing our homework. Would you make teachers reduce homework Besides, most of us find lessons boring. ①Although exercises and exams help us understand the key points, they take up too much time. Our cafeteria is very clean and the food is also very delicious. Dear headmaster, you can't imagine how boring our school life is. ②I think teachers should improve their teaching methods.
I hope these problems can be dealt with soon.
Yours faithfully,
Li Ming
【解析】【思路点拨】本篇书面表达是根据校长的帖子，写一份回帖。首先认真审题，确定文章体裁、题材和中心。本文主要使用第一人称和一般现在时。写作内容包括提示中的要点，适当发挥，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词和句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。确保内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，书写清晰，卷面整洁。
【结构布局】
引言：开头已给出，开篇问候，开门见山，点明主题；
中心：根据提示具体介绍家庭作业、考试、食堂和建议的相关情况；
结尾：结尾已给出，概括总结，表达愿望，署名。
【亮点短语】
①spend…doing…花费……做……
②take up占用
③deal with处理
【高分句型】
①Although exercises and exams help us understand the key points，they take up too much time.（although引导的让步状语从句）
②I think teachers should improve their teaching methods.（省略that的宾语从句）
15.【答案】 Reading gives me happiness Many students take study as task and they don't have much passion about gaining the knowledge from books. As teenagers, they like to hang out for fun instead of sitting in the classroom. But I enjoy reading so much.
①Nowadays, people always say they want to see the world as it is so big. ②Though I can't travel around the world, for the lack of money and the age, I can see around the world through these books. I get to know different cultures and see the diversity of the world. It's full of charm and inspires me to searching the amazing nature. Reading books brings me great happiness.
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文属于材料作文写作，首先根据材料补充题目，然后介绍阅读带给自己的快乐，可适当发挥。本文应以第一人称和第三人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时为主；介绍阅读带来的快乐时，应详细具体，语句通顺，逻辑性强，保证条理清晰。
【结构布局】
引言：开篇点题
中心：喜爱阅读的原因
结尾：阅读带来的好处
【亮点词汇】
①passion热情，激情；
②the lack of 缺乏；
③the diversity of the world世界的多样性
【高分句型】
①Nowadays, people always say they want to see the world as it is so big. (as引导的原因状语从句)
②Though I can't travel around the world, for the lack of money and the age, I can see around the world through these books. (though引导的让步状语从句）
16.【答案】Dear Chris.
I'm glad to hear from you and learn about such a great novel. I prefer to read works of literature. These days I'm reading a book called The Little Orange Lamp. ①I like reading it because the articles in it are full of love and the language is simple.
Speaking of famous Chinese writers, I'd like to recommend Bing Xin to you. She was born in 1900 and was given the name Xie Wanying. ②When she was a little girl, she fell in love with reading. Later, she began to publish articles with Bing Xin as her pen name.
Bing Xin is well-known as a writer of children's literature. To Young Readers is her another famous book. If you read it, you'll lose yourself in it.
I hope you'll accept my recommendation.
Yours sincerely,
Li Lei
【解析】【思路点拨】
题目要求给Chris回一封电子邮件；要求包含邮件中提到的问题。此作文时态用一般现在时和一般过去时；采用第一人称和第三人称口吻；可分为4段来写，第一段：阐述最近正在读的一本书；第二段：介绍书的作者的个人信息；第三段：介绍该作家的其他书籍；第四段：希望对方接受自己的推荐。注意主谓一致，文中无单词和语法错误。
【结构布局】
引言：最爱的书籍
中心：介绍著名的中国作家—冰心
结尾：希望与期盼
【亮点词汇】
①speaking of说到；
②be well-known as作为...而出名
【高分句型】
①I like reading it because the articles in it are full of love and the language is simple. （because引导的原因状语从句）
②When she was a little girl, she fell in love with reading. （when引导的时间状语从句）
17.【答案】What an unforgettable school trip! I have experienced many school trips, but the one I will never forget is visiting the Great Wall and the Fragrant Hills.
We met at the school gate at eight and then we set off by bus. First, we visited the Great Wall. When we got there, it was nine. We started to climb the great wonder of ancient China immediately. ① That was the first time that we had visited it, so we were very excited. We took many photos of the Great Wall. Then we had lunch there, after which we left for the Fragrant Hills. ② When we got there, we were amazed at the beautiful maple leaves, which made us not want to leave. We stayed at the top of the mountain for an hour and at five we returned by bus.
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文是一篇投稿，标题是“What an unforgettable school trip!”。本文是讲述过去的一场旅行，时态应为一般过去时；主语为第一人称；描述旅行时，内容应描写细致；并且把旅行时的所见、所闻、所感都介绍清楚。
【结构布局】
引言：最难忘的学校旅行
中心：旅行的具体细节
结尾：个人的感受
【亮点词汇】
①set off启程；
②the great wonder of ancient China中国古代伟大奇观
【高分句型】
① That was the first time that we had visited it, so we were very excited. （固定句型：It/That was the first time that...；so引导的结果状语从句）
②When we got there, we were amazed at the beautiful maple leaves, which made us not want to leave.（when引导的时间状语从句；which引导的非限制性定语从句）
18.【答案】 I am glad to share my ideas about housework and labor course. Doing housework plays an important part in middle school students' lives. So I often do housework, such as washing dishes, sweeping the floor, cooking and so on. ①I think middle school students should do housework. Here are three reasons. ②First of all, doing some housework can make us independent, because we can't depend on others all our life. What's more, it is a good way to keep us healthy and strong by doing housework. In order to make ourselves better men, it is necessary for us to do housework at home in our free time. As for how to run the course in our school, the school can offer classes to teach us how to do the cleaning and grow plants.
【解析】【思路点拨】本文属于材料作文写作，要求根据关于家务活和学校劳动课的调查内容，表达自己关于家务活和劳动课的想法。写作时承接短文开头，按照题目提示要点，依次逐一陈述。本文主要采用第一人称来写；时态以一般现在时为主。
【结构布局】
引言：开门见山，点明主题；
中心：根据提示具体介绍在家里所做的家务活和做这些家务活的原因；
结尾：对学校劳动课程提出建议并结尾。
【亮点短语】
①play an important part in…在……中起着重要作用
②first of all首先
③in order to为了
④as for至于
【高分句型】
①I think middle school students should do housework.（省略that的宾语从句）
②First of all, doing some housework can make us independent, because we can't depend on others all our life.（because引导的原因状语从句）
19.【答案】To be a leader or a common member
We all have different roles to play in a certain group. As for me, I would rather be a leader. The reasons are as follows.
Firstly, a leader can encourage the common members to work well. In this way, I can make a greater contribution to the group. Secondly, ①a leader needs to take more responsibilities, which are good for my growth and can improve my ability to solve problems. Lastly, a leader will face many challenges, which can make my life more exciting. ②If I can conquer the difficulties, I'll feel very satisfied.
Based on the above reasons, I choose to be a leader in a certain group.
【解析】【思路点拨】本文要求以“To be a leader or a common member ”为话题，阐述自己的选择并给出至少两个理由来支持你的想法。注意内容要涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥。写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态以一般现在时为主。
【结构布局】
引言：引出话题，表明自己的立场
中心：阐述自己的理由
结尾：进行总结
【亮点短语】
①would rather宁愿
②take responsibilities承担责任
③solve problems解决问题
④conquer the difficulties克服困难
【高分句型】
①A leader needs to take more responsibilities, which are good for my growth and can improve my ability to solve problems.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
②If I can conquer the difficulties, I'll feel very satisfied.（if引导的条件状语从句）
20.【答案】Dear Mike,
I'd like to tell you something about the "double reduction" policy.
①There is no written homework in Grade One and Grade Two of primary school. Grades three to six should have less than 60 minutes of homework every day. Junior high school students should have less than 90 minutes of homework every day. So now I feel more relaxed. ②I hope I can better plan my time and improve myself so that I can have a better future.
In a word, I had too much pressure in the past, but now things are completely different and my daily life is colorful and meaningful. I enjoy the changes and will study harder. I hope the school can prepare more extracurricular activities for us.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文要求以李华的名义给笔友“Mike”写一封信，介绍作业量要求、谈谈“双减”的好处以及自己的看法。本文以第一人称和第三人称为主；时态采用一般现在时。在写作时要做到无标点符号和语法错误，正确使用时态。
【结构布局】
引言：引出话题“双减”；
中心：介绍各年级作业量和“双减”的好处；
结尾：就“双减”给出自己的看法
【亮点短语】
In a word总而言之
extracurricular activities课外活动
【高分句型】
①There is no written homework in Grade One and Grade Two of primary school.（there be句型）
②I hope I can better plan my time and improve myself so that I can have a better future.（so that引导的目的状语从句）
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