2024译林版九年级中考英语历年书面表达模拟题集锦（3）（含解析）

2024译林版九年级中考英语历年书面表达模拟题集锦（3）
题号 一 总分
得分
一、书面表达：本大题共10小题，共150分。
21.在英语阅读周，学校校园网开展了“英文名句赏析”的征文比赛。请你根据名句内容和比赛要求，用英语写一篇短文。
Study is like riding a bicycle. To keep our balance, we must keep moving. Life is like a race. We either take the lead or fall behind. Success won't come to us until we try our best to run to it. After reading the sentences above, what do you think of them which person comes to your mind first and why what can you do to make yourself better
注意：
1. 内容涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥。
2. 词数80左右(已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数)。
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
In my opinion, these sentences above tell us



22. Now we have learned a lot about the role models(榜样). It is their own core abilities(核心能力) that make them able to serve the country. What core abilities do you need in the future Why What will you do to improve these abilities You will give a speech at the graduation ceremony. Please choose ONE core ability to write an English draft for it.
注意：
1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3. 词数80左右。
Good morning, everyone!
My name is Li Hua. It's my great pleasure to talk about "core abilities" today.



That's all for my speech. Thank you for your listening!
23.英语校刊TEENS 正在进行“手机是否可以带入校园”的问卷调查。请根据下列调查表的内容做出自己的选择，并依据你的选择用英语写一篇短文，表达你的想法。
A survey on mobile phones Should we bring mobile phones to school
Choice YES NO
Reasons 1.contact with parents 2.… 1.use in a wrong way 2....
Advice Though mobile phones can be used in school, I think… Though mobile phones can't be used in school, I hope...
注意：
1. 内容涵盖所有要点，适当发挥，全文连贯通顺；
2. 词数80左右（已给出文章开头不计入总词数）；
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
Should we bring mobile phones to school
A survey on teenage mobile phone use at school is carried out by TEENS. ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________
24.初中生活即将结束，你将迎来新一阶段的学习生活。在新的阶段，是否寄宿成为很多学生面临的问题。请根据以下表格，谈谈你的选择及其优缺点。
Choice Day student（走读学生） Boarding student（寄宿学生）
Advantages have more time with family ... save more time to study …
Disadvantages be influenced by the Internet ... have less private space …
注意:
1. 内容涵盖要点，全文连贯通顺；
2. 词数 80 左右（已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数）;
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
We are going to graduate from our middle school and we will make a choice between being a day student and a boarding student. In my opinion, I prefer to be
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25.假如你是王道歉你要参加年级的英语演讲活动，请仔细阅读以下海报，以“One Thing I Keep Doing”为题，写一篇演讲稿。
Your Ideas Needed Our school is going to hold an English Speech Competition.Your speech should include the following points： ● What is the thing that you keep doing？ ● Why do you keep doing it？How do you keep doing it？ ● How does it make a difference to your life？
注意：
（1）内容涵盖所有要点，适当发挥，全文连贯通顺。
（2）词数 80 左右（已给出文章开头，不计入总词数）。
（3）文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称。
Good morning，everyone!
I am glad to make a speech today.The topic is "One Thing I Keep Doing".



That's all. Thanks for listening.
26.
Kitty, "I promise to keep secrets for you, Lucy." Tom, "I promise to do the things myself, dad and mum." Ben, "I promise to study harder in the coming term,Miss Wang."
In our growth, we may make promises to our friends, to our parents, to our teachers, and even to ourselves. Please write a passage to talk about an unforgettable promise.
注意：
1.题目自拟，词数80左右；
2.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
3.语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范。
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27.假如你要参加年级的英语演讲活动，请仔细阅读以下海报，以“One Thing I Keep Doing”为题，写一篇演讲稿。
Your Ideas Needed Our school is going to hold an English Speech Competition. Your speech should include the following points: ● What is the thing that you keep doing ● Why do you keep doing it How do you keep doing it ● How does it make a difference to your life
注意：
1.内容涵盖所有要点，适当发挥，全文连贯通顺。
2.词数80 左右(已给出文章开头，不计入总词数)。
3.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称。
Good morning, everyone!
I am glad to make a speech today. The topic is "One Thing I Keep Doing".



That's all. Thanks for listening.
28. 假如你是李华，在学校英文校刊KIDS MAG上看到学校俱乐部TEENS CLUB在招募会员的信息。请根据招募内容，用英语给校刊写一封信。
TEENS CLUB NEEDS YOU! TEENS CLUB needs you to organize activities to make our school lives more colourful. You are needed! Please let us know: ● What qualities do you have to join our club ● What activity/activities will you organize ● Why do you organize the activity/activities Contact us by sending an email at: TEENSCLUB@
注意：
（1) 内容涵盖所有要点（理由不得少于两点），可适当发挥。
（2) 词数80左右（已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数）。
（3) 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
Dear Sir or Madam,
Thanks for offering me such a good opportunity.



Yours,
Li Hua
29.初中三年的学习生活很快要结束了，在这三年期间你一定有很多值得铭记的人和事，以及许多关于学习的宝贵经验和关于成长的切身感悟。请你结合自身实际用英语给七、八年级的学弟学妹写寄语，简要谈谈你对初中生活的看法，并给他们提一些建议，帮助他们拥有更加有意义更加充实的初中成长体验。
提示问题：
1）What do you think of your life in junior middle school？
2 What do you want to share with them？
3）What tips do you have for them？
要求：
（1）文中不得出现真实姓名与校名。
（2）语意连贯，层次清晰，书写规范。
（3）不少于100字。



30.每个人成长路上，都会得到人、事或物的点拨与启迪，即"成长的馈赠". 初三(2)班将举行一个主题为"A Gift of Growing Up"的英语沙龙，请根据下图三个问题的提示，写一篇英语短文来参与沙龙研讨。

注意：
(1)词数90左右，短文题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
(2)表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
A Gift of Growing Up
We've got a lot of help from the things and the people around us, which encourages us a lot on the way of growing up.


答案和解析
21.【答案】 In my opinion, these sentences above tell us the importance of moving forward. Only by sticking to your dreams and working hard, can you succeed. After reading these words, the first person appearing in my mind is the Winter Olympic skiing champion Gu ailing. ①Although she has made great achievements, she still continues to work hard and make breakthrough. This is worth learning for each of us. Her spirit greatly inspired me. If I meet difficulties, I will try to overcome them instead of avoiding them. ② I believe I will be a better person in the future!
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文要求根据所给英文名句和提示内容写一篇短文参加征文比赛。包括对名句的赏析、想到的与之相关的人物和自我提升的方法。本文时态主要采用一般现在时，第一人称和第三人称相结合，写作时先赏析名句，再描述与之相关的人物，最后表达自我提升的想法和感悟。注意主谓一致等语法规则，保证无单词拼写错误。
【结构布局】
引言：表明前进的重要性
中心：举名人的例子
结尾：表达对自己的希望
【亮点短语】
①In my opinion在我看来
②sticking to坚持
【高分句型】
①Although she has made great achievements, she still continues to work hard and make breakthrough.（although引导的让步状语从句）
②I believe I will be a better person in the future!（省略that的宾语从句）
22.【答案】 Good morning, everyone!
My name is Li Hua. It's my great pleasure to talk about "core abilities" today. ①I think sports are the core abilities that we should have.
COVID-19 has taught us to pay more attention to our health. We should spend more time doing sports to keep healthy and improve our immunity.
We students should relax ourselves often. We need to make a plan of exercising and do sports for at least twenty minutes every day. ②On the weekend, it is better for us to go out and do some outdoor activities with our friends. It is good for our body and mind.
I think it is very important to do sports. I hope that everyone can keep doing sports and try his best to keep healthy.
That's all for my speech. Thank you for your listening!
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文是一篇应用文，以第一人称书写，时态是一般现在时。图示给出了四种核心能力，包括：终身学习能力、时间管理能力、运动能力和沟通能力，还可以自由发挥，选择一种能力展开文章。需要指明哪种能力，如何做去提高这种能力。
【结构布局】
引言：问候；
中心：具体介绍某种核心能力以及如何提高这种能力；
结尾：感谢聆听
[亮点词汇]
①pay more attention to更加关注
②make a plan制定一个计划
③try one's best to do sth尽力做某事
[高分句型]
①I think sports are the core abilities that we should have.（that引导的定语从句）
②On the weekend, it is better for us to go out and do some outdoor activities with our friends. （it作形式主语，动词不定式作真正的主语）
23.【答案】Should we bring mobile phones to school
A survey on teenage mobile phone use at school is carried out by TEENS. Are middle school students allowed to bring them to school
①Some students think we can bring mobile phones to school because it's convenient for parents to contact us. ②When we have difficulty in study, mobile phones can be our teacher and help us with our problems.
Every coin has two sides. Some students use mobile phones in a wrong way. They spend a lot of time chatting online, as a result, they can't focus on study. And too much time on screens does harm to our eyes. More and more students have poor eyesight.
In my opinion, I agree to bring smart phones to school. Though mobile phones can be used in school, I think I won't turn it on until class is over. Since there are lots of useful websites for English learning, I will go there to practice my English.
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文是一篇议论文。根据表格介绍支持和反对人的原因和建议。客观介绍人们对学生带手机这一现象的看法，并表达自己的观点。本文以第三人称和第一人称书写，时态是一般现在时为主。不要出现标点和拼写错误，尽量保持卷面整洁、字体美观、注意行文的连贯性。
【结构布局】
引言：引出话题
中心：具体介绍支持者和反对者的看法
结尾：介绍自己的观点
【亮点词汇】
①as a result 结果
②focus on 关注
③too much 太多
④do harm to 对……有害
【高分句型】
①Some students think we can bring mobile phones to school because it's convenient for parents to contact us.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②When we have difficulty in study, mobile phones can be our teacher and help us with our problems.（when引导的时间状语从句）
24.【答案】We are going to graduate from our middle school and we will make a choice between being a day student and a boarding student. In my opinion. ①I prefer to be a boarding student because its advantages overweight its disadvantages.
Although I may not have enough private space or enough time to stay with my parents. I can get more from living at school.
②Firstly, if I choose to live at school, there is no need to spend time between my home and school so that I can save much time to study. Secondly, it can help me develop a good habit of study and living. Last but not the least, it is a good chance for me to learn how to behave properly and get along well with others.
In conclusion, whether to be a boarding student or a day student is a personal decision. However, considering the convenience, time saving and more chances of developing friendship, I insist on living at school.
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文是一篇材料作文，要求根据表格提供信息阐述自己是愿意成为一个走读学生，还是寄宿学生，并阐述优缺点。时态用一般现在时，人称以第一人称为主。注意语意连贯，无拼写和语法错误。
【结构布局】
开篇：点出自己的选择
中心：这样选择的优点
结尾：进行总结
【亮点词汇】
①private space 私人空间
②develop a good habit 培养好习惯
③behave properly 举止得体
【高分句型】
①I prefer to be a boarding student because its advantages overweight its disadvantages. （because引导原因状语从句）
②Firstly, if I choose to live at school, there is no need to spend time between my home and school so that I can save much time to study.（so that引导目的状语从句）
25.【答案】Good morning, everyone!
I am glad to make a speech today. The topic is "One Thing I Keep Doing".
①As we all know, what we keep doing every day is very important for us to achieve our goals. Knowledge may be acquired through many ways, the best of which is reading. ②That's why I keep reading every day no matter how busy I am. I usually spend about one hour a day reading my favorite books and I often share what I read with my friends.
All in all, reading not only brings me knowledge but also teaches me how to get on well with others and how to be a better person. Keeping reading helps me open up my eyes to the outside world. The more I read, the wiser I will be.
That's all. Thanks for listening.
【解析】【思路点拨】本篇书面表达是以“One Thing I Keep Doing”为题，写一篇演讲稿。首先认真审题，确定文章体裁、题材和中心。本文主要使用第一人称和一般现在时。写作内容包括提示中的要点，适当发挥，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词和句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。确保内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，书写清晰，卷面整洁。
【结构布局】
引言：开门见山，点明主题；
中心：根据提示具体介绍我一直坚持阅读的相关情况；
结尾：概括总结，表达感谢。
【亮点短语】
①share...with...与......分享......
②all in all总之
③not only...but also...不仅……而且……
④the+比较级...，the+比较级...越是……，就越……
【高分句型】
①As we all know, what we keep doing every day is very important for us to achieve our goals.（as引导的定语从句；what引导的主语从句）
②That's why I keep reading every day no matter how busy I am.（why引导的表语从句；no matter how引导的让步状语从句）
26.【答案】In our growth, we may make promises to our friends, to our parents, to our teachers, and even to ourselves. ①I used to be very fat, and when I was in physical education class, I was very tired after running for a while. I promised my physical education teacher that I would strengthen physical exercise and make myself healthier. Since then, I have been running for half an hour on my own every day before going to school. I also enjoy playing basketball very much. ②If I have time on weekends, I often go to the park with friends to play basketball. I am very healthy now, and my sports are very good. I just did it.
【解析】【思路点拨】
本篇书面表达是一篇记叙文。首先认真审题，确定文章体裁、题材和中心。本文主要使用第一人称和一般过去时以及一般现在时。写作内容包括提示中的要点，适当发挥，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词和句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。确保内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，书写清晰，卷面整洁。
【结构布局】
引言：开门见山，点明主题
中心：根据提示具体介绍作者因肥胖，答应老师进行锻炼
结尾：概括总结，继续坚持体育运动
【亮点短语】
①strengthen physical exercise加强体育锻炼
②half an hour半小时
③play basketball打篮球
④on weekends在周末
【高分句型】
①I used to be very fat, and when I was in physical education class, I was very tired after running for a while. (when引导的时间状语从句）
②If I have time on weekends, I often go to the park with friends to play basketball. (if引导的条件状语从句）
27.【答案】Good morning, everyone!
I am glad to make a speech today. The topic is "One Thing I Keep Doing". We can get knowledge in many ways. Reading is one of the best ways.
Reading makes me open up my eyes to the outside world. ①It makes me learn a lot of things that I have never known before. So I buy lots of different books. Sometimes I also borrow books from others or the library. ②I also make a reading plan so that I can have enough time to read.
Reading makes my life meaningful and colourful. When I feel sad, reading makes me happy. I will keep it all my life.
That's all. Thanks for listening.
【解析】【思路点拨】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文，写一篇演讲稿。首先认真审题，确定文章体裁、题材和中心。本文主要使用第一人称和一般现在时。写作内容包括提示中的要点，适当发挥，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词和句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。确保内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，书写清晰，卷面整洁。
【结构布局】
引言：开头已给出，开门见山，点明主题；
中心：根据提示具体介绍自己为什么喜欢这件事，怎样做这件事以及这件事对自己生活的影响；
结尾：结尾已给出，概括总结，表达感谢。
【亮点短语】
①one of……之一
②open up my eyes打开我的眼界
③make a plan做一个计划
【高分句型】
①It makes me learn a lot of things that I have never known before.（that引导的定语从句）
②I also make a reading plan so that I can have enough time to read.（so that引导的目的状语从句）
【拓展词汇/句型】略
28.【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,
Thanks for offering me such a good opportunity.
I'm very glad to introduce myself to all of you. My name is Li Hua. ①I am outgoing and I like talking with people. Moreover, I have held some activities successfully in our class. We can hold some activities such as English Speech Contest, Poetry Competition, Art Festival and other activities. ①Through these activities, we can not only learn something useful, open our eyes but also enrich our mind. In addition, we can relax ourselves and promote friendship among classmates.
②Looking forward to your early reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文，写一封信。首先认真审题，确定文章体裁、题材和中心。本文主要使用第一人称和一般现在时。写作内容包括提示中的要点，适当发挥，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词和句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。确保内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，书写清晰，卷面整洁。
【结构布局】
引言：开头已给出，开门见山，点明主题；
中心：根据提示具体介绍自己的相关情况；
结尾：结尾已给出，概括总结，表达愿望，署名。
【亮点短语】
①such as例如
②not only...but also...不仅......而且......
③in addition此外
【高分句型】
①I am outgoing and I like talking with people.（and连接的并列句）
②Looking forward to your early reply!（句前省略了I am的省略句）
29.【答案】Dear brothers and sisters,
How time flies! Now I'm graduating from our school. In junior middle school, I have learned a lot. ①Although my school life is a little busy, it is meaningful and colorful. I thank my middle school life, which helps me grow up. At the moment, I would like to share my experience of school life with you. It is not enough to just study hard. There are many good ways to improve our study. Different subjects need different ways. But one thing in common is taking notes carefully in class, and review them after class. Another thing is asking questions during or after class. Besides, don't be afraid of making mistakes, try to learn from mistakes. You should also exercise more and keep healthy because it is the most important thing for you.
Wish you all the best.
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文是一篇应用文，话题为结合自身实际用英语给七、八年级的学弟学妹写寄语，简要谈谈你对初中生活的看法，写作时应注意词汇的选择和句式的准确使用，可适当添加一定的衔接词，以使行文连贯。
【亮点词汇】
①meaningful and colorful有意义和丰富多彩
②in common共同的
【高分句型】
①Although my school life is a little busy, it is meaningful and colorful.（although引导的让步状语从句）
②You should also exercise more and keep healthy because it is the most important thing for you.（because引导的原因状语从句）
【结构布局】
引言：写寄语的目的
中心：对初中生活的看法和给七、八年级的学弟学妹的建议
结尾：表达祝福
【拓展词汇】
略
【拓展句型】
略
30.【答案】A Gift of Growing Up
We've got a lot of help from the things and the people around us, which encourages us a lot on the way of growing up. From parents. We learn how to be a kind person. From teachers, we learn how to struggle with difficulties.
①When I was in Grade 7, I was crazy about playing football. I didn't have much time to do my homework. It was hard for me to balance my studies with my hobbies. Exams always brought me endless sadness. As a result, I was afraid of going to school and I became very lonely. Luckily, my teachers noticed it and gave me help, they gave me some useful advice. They told me not to give up, because for a willing heart, nothing is impossible. I was moved, every day carefully planned. Now, I have made great progress.
②Now I understand when we face problems, we should never give up easily. And asking others for advice sometimes can make a difference to us when we grow up.
【解析】【思路点拨】
这是一篇命题作文，要求文章的内容包括所有提示内容，可适当增加内容。人称以第一人称为主，时态以一般过去时、一般现在时为主。注意高级词汇和高级句式的应用。
【结构布局】
开篇：帮助我的人；
中心：如何帮助我；
结尾：自己的感受。
【亮点词汇】
①struggle挣扎
②make great progress取得大的进步
【高分句型】
①When I was in Grade 7, I was crazy about playing football.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②Now I understand when we face problems, we should never give up easily.（when引导的时间状语从句）
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