2024译林版九年级中考英语历年书面表达模拟题集锦（4）（含解析）

2024译林版九年级中考英语历年书面表达模拟题集锦（4）
题号 一 总分
得分
一、书面表达：本大题共7小题，共105分。
30.每个人成长路上，都会得到人、事或物的点拨与启迪，即"成长的馈赠". 初三(2)班将举行一个主题为"A Gift of Growing Up"的英语沙龙，请根据下图三个问题的提示，写一篇英语短文来参与沙龙研讨。

注意：
(1)词数90左右，短文题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
(2)表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
A Gift of Growing Up
We've got a lot of help from the things and the people around us, which encourages us a lot on the way of growing up.


31.假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter将要来南京旅游，请根据Peter来信内容，进行回复。
Dear Li Hua,
I'm planning to visit Nanjing. Could you give me some advice on what places of interest to visit Why do you recommend these places What is the best time to visit Nanjing
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Peter
要求：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
Dear Peter,
Thank you for your letter.



Yours,
Li Hua
32.疫情期间，同学们不得不在家上网课。针对网课，在学生调查中发现存在两种不同观点，请以“I Prefer to Study at School/at Home(选择你赞同的一方面)”为题写一篇短文。
一些学生 认为不用去学校 理由：1. 既节省路上的时间又省了交通费用； 2. 有更多空余时间，可以在薄弱学科多下功夫
另一些学生 认为有必要去学校 理由：1.面对面交流学习效果更佳； 2.和同学相处，乐趣很多
我 …… 理由：……(自拟至少2 点)
提示词：网课online course; 新冠疫情coronavirus pandemic
注意：
1. 内容涵盖要点，可适当发挥，全文连贯通顺；
2. 词数90 词左右；
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
I Prefer to Study __________



33.九年级生活对我们而言无疑是值得回忆与展望的，欢笑与泪水，希冀与不舍，挣扎与拼搏，都将凝成人生中一个个饱含深情的感叹号！如果用一个关键词来定义你的九年级生活，会是什么？某英语网站正以“Key Word for My Grade-9 Life”为主题发起征文活动，请用英文分享你的关键词背后的故事和感悟。
要求：
1）100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2）文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
Key Word for My Grade-9 Life—
I'm glad to share with everyone the key word for my Grade-9 life—


34.随着智能手机的普及以及网络的快速发展，观看短视频成为人们的热门消遣方式。假如你是某中学九年级的一名学生，你班进行了主题为“Are short videos good for teenagers ”的英语辩论。请你根据正、反方的观点及提示写一篇总结报告。
写作提示：
1）同学们对青少年观看短视频的看法；
2）你的看法及建议。
注意事项：
1）要点齐全，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3）100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Nowadays, short videos have become more and more popular in our daily life. Are they good or bad for teenagers The students have different opinions.



35.假如你是李华，请仔细阅读征文要求，并用英语写一篇短文投稿。
Call for papers(征文启事) "Labor Education(劳动教育)" has always been an important topic and doing housework is a part of it. We want to know:
Are you a good helper at home
What kinds of housework do you usually do (At least 2 kinds and the housework you did last week)
How do you and your parents feel after you do it
Why do you want to do housework (At least 2 points: to you, to your family, or to society)
要求：
（1) 文中必须包含所有要点，可适当拓展。
（2) 语义连贯，书写工整。
（3) 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
（4) 词数：100左右，已给句子不计入词数。
Dear Editor,
I'm writing this letter to share my thoughts of doing housework.


Yours,
Li Hua
36.成长中的青少年有着丰富的情绪体验。当取得进步时，你也许会和人分享喜悦；当日记被偷看时，你可选择冷静后再面对；当伤心时，或许你会运动流汗来稀释悲伤；当心中忧惧时，可设法强大自己……学校网站英文版在征稿，期待你的分享。
请根据提示，自拟题目，描述一次经历。
写作要点：
(1)What experience would you like to share
(2)What have you got from the experience
写作要求：
(1)用英文表达，题目自拟；
(2)积极向上，言之有理，结构完整，逻辑通顺；
(3)语言流畅，符合英语表达习惯；
(4)书写清晰美观，词数120左右。



37.根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
假如你是李华，你校英语公众号将推出以"科技"为主题的系列推送。请你用英文给公众号留言，介绍一个你认为最实用的设备（device）或应用程序（app），并描述它给生活带来的便利。
提示词语：technology，communicate，learn，convenient，time-saving
提示问题：
What device or app do you want to introduce？
What benefits does it bring to people？
Technology is now becoming more and more important in our life.
答案和解析
30.【答案】A Gift of Growing Up
We've got a lot of help from the things and the people around us, which encourages us a lot on the way of growing up. From parents. We learn how to be a kind person. From teachers, we learn how to struggle with difficulties.
①When I was in Grade 7, I was crazy about playing football. I didn't have much time to do my homework. It was hard for me to balance my studies with my hobbies. Exams always brought me endless sadness. As a result, I was afraid of going to school and I became very lonely. Luckily, my teachers noticed it and gave me help, they gave me some useful advice. They told me not to give up, because for a willing heart, nothing is impossible. I was moved, every day carefully planned. Now, I have made great progress.
②Now I understand when we face problems, we should never give up easily. And asking others for advice sometimes can make a difference to us when we grow up.
【解析】【思路点拨】
这是一篇命题作文，要求文章的内容包括所有提示内容，可适当增加内容。人称以第一人称为主，时态以一般过去时、一般现在时为主。注意高级词汇和高级句式的应用。
【结构布局】
开篇：帮助我的人；
中心：如何帮助我；
结尾：自己的感受。
【亮点词汇】
①struggle挣扎
②make great progress取得大的进步
【高分句型】
①When I was in Grade 7, I was crazy about playing football.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②Now I understand when we face problems, we should never give up easily.（when引导的时间状语从句）
31.【答案】Dear Peter,
Thank you for your letter. I'm willing to tell you something about the tourist attractions in Nanjing.
① If you are interested in the history of our city, there is no better place to visit than Nanjing Museum. In it, you can have a deeper understanding of the city through enjoying different works of art. ② Climbing Purple Mountain is also a good choice. If you come, you can enjoy fresh air, blue sky as well as beautiful mountains.
In different seasons, you can enjoy different scenes in our city. So you can visit it any time you like.
I'm looking forward to meeting you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文是一篇应用文写作。要求根据Peter的来信进行回复，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。写作时要以第二人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
【结构布局】
引言：感谢来信并引出话题；
中心：推荐南京的旅游景点及推荐它们的原因；
结尾：表达期待见面。
[亮点词汇]
①be willing to do sth愿意做某事
②be interested in对......感兴趣
③as well as和.....
④look forward to doing sth期待做某事
[高分句型]
①If you are interested in the history of our city, there is no better place to visit than Nanjing Museum. (if引导的条件状语从句；no+形容词比较级+than句型)
②Climbing Purple Mountain is also a good choice. (动名词短语作主语)
32.【答案】 I Prefer to Study at School To be honest, I prefer to study at school.
①I used to think how great it would be if we could study at home. We wouldn't have to get up so early and we would have more free time to do our own things. However, the truth is not what I thought. Studying at home seems to be busier than at school.
Now, I enjoy studying at school. First, I think face-to-face communication is better for learning. Second, it's good for us to study with classmates. We have lots of things in common and we can share things with each other and help each other.
In a word, I really hate studying online again. ②I guess my classmates would prefer to study at school like me.
【解析】【思路点拨】本文是一篇材料作文。根据“I Prefer to Study at School/at Home”来选择一个自己赞同的一方并以此为题写一篇短文。本文应该用第一人称来叙述故事内容；时态采用一般过去时和一般现在时为主。第一段选择赞同的观点；第二段描述过去的想法；第三段讲述自己为什么选择这种观点的理由；第四段进行总结。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
【结构布局】
引言：开门见山，点明主题，选择赞同的观点；
中心：根据提示具体介绍过去的想法和自己为什么选择这种观点的理由；
结尾：概括总结，表达观点。
【亮点短语】
①get up起床
②face-to-face communication面对面的沟通
③share…wit…和……分享……
④prefer to宁愿
【高分句型】
①I used to think how great it would be if we could study at home.（how引导的宾语从句；if引导的条件状语从句）
②I guess my classmates would prefer to study at school like me.（guess后面是省略了that的宾语从句）
33.【答案】 Key Word for My Grade-9 Life—Bravery I'm glad to share with everyone the key word for my Grade-9 life—bravery.
I used to be very shy and was always afraid to speak English aloud. After entering Grade 9, I made up my mind to make a change. I decided to take the first step bravely, so I asked my teacher and classmates for help. They offered me a lot of valuable advice. After that, I encouraged myself to express my thoughts in English as much as possible. Last month, I even made an English speech successfully in front of the whole class. Because of my bravery, I became more and more confident in speaking English.
①Through this experience, I realize that it's common to meet with difficulties.②But if we take on new challenges bravely, we'll be sure to achieve success in the end.
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文是一篇提示作文。谈一谈自己的九年级生活，用一个关键词来定义自己的九年级生活，并围绕自己的观点进行详细阐述。文章用一般过去时，一般现在时，人称主要是第一人称。写作时应注意能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
【亮点词汇】
①used to do sth过去常常做某事
②make up one's mind to do sth下定决心做某事
③achieve success取得成功
【高分句型】
①Through this experience, I realize that it's common to meet with difficulties.（that引导宾语从句）
②But if we take on new challenges bravely, we'll be sure to achieve success in the end.（if引导条件状语从句）
【结构布局】
引言：补充关键词；
中心：具体描述自己的经历；
结尾：总结自己的经历。
【拓展词汇】
略
【拓展句型】
略
34.【答案】【小题1】 Nowadays, short videos have become more and more popular in our daily life. Are they good or bad for teenagers The students have different opinions.
①Some students think watching short videos is helpful to teenagers, as it's a good way to get knowledge as well as relax. However, others disagree. In their eyes, watching short videos is a waste of time. What's worse, spending too much time on screen may cause poor eyesight.
In my opinion, we can watch short videos, but we had better make a good choice first. We should choose videos that can help improve ourselves. Besides, we need to control the time that we spend on them. Half an hour each day is enough. ②As long as we use short videos properly, we can not only have fun but also learn something useful from them.
【小题2】略
【小题3】略
【解析】【思路点拨】
略
【亮点词汇】
略
【高分句型】
略
【结构布局】
略
【拓展词汇】
略
【拓展句型】
略
35.【答案】Dear Editor，
I'm writing this letter to share my thoughts of doing housework. ①I think it is really important. It helps us learn basic life skills and develop the right view of life.
I always help my parents do housework at home. Last Sunday, after breakfast, I began to help my parents wash clothes. Though washing clothes is not so difficult, it took me a long time. After that, I tried to tidy my bedroom. I first made the bed and then put away my clothes and school things. ②Looking at the tidy room, I felt tired but satisfied because I not only share the housework with my parents, but also learn life skills. And my parents felt proud of me.
I think doing housework can make my parents feel happier after work. Most importantly, I can develop good work habits through my experience and value the importance of hard work.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文是一篇提示作文，根据话题“Labor Education(劳动教育)”写一篇征文投稿，时态主要是一般现在时和一般过去时，人称为第一人称，根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
【亮点词汇】
①develop the right view of life培养正确的人生观
②feel proud of sb.为某人感到骄傲
③make sb. do sth让某人做某事
【高分句型】
①I think it is really important.（省略that的宾语从句）
②Looking at the tidy room, I felt tired but satisfied because I not only share the housework with my parents, but also learn life skills.（not only...but also...句型）
【结构布局】
引言：总体表达自己的观点，家务劳动很重要；
中心：描述自己具体行动；
结尾：总结自己为什么要做家务
【拓展词汇】
略
【拓展句型】
略
36.【答案】 Be the Master of Your Emotions Life is full of ups and downs, and sometimes things don't go as planned. ①When something unpleasant happens, we often feel disappointed or even angry. One of our choices is to accept our emotions and don't let them control us.
One day, it was our group's turn to clean up our classroom. When school was over, I went to the teacher's office to ask some questions. ②When I hurried back to the classroom, I found that there was no one left. I felt very angry and wanted to go home immediately. After leaving the classroom, the suggestion to control anger suddenly came to my mind. I started to calm down from 1 to 10, and I succeeded. Finally, I decided to put down my backpack and pick up the broom. ③I spent almost an hour cleaning up our messy classroom, confident that everything in our classroom had returned to normal, and I am proud of what I have done.
I successfully controlled anger to be the master of my emotions. This experience has inspired me to have the courage to face negative emotions in the future.
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文是一篇材料作文，自拟题目讲一次经历，分享自己的情绪体验。文章用一般过去时和第一人称。写作时应注意词汇的选择和句式的准确使用，可适当添加一定的衔接词，以使行文连贯。
【亮点词汇】
①ups and downs起起落落
②calm down冷静
③be proud of为…感到骄傲
【高分句型】
①When something unpleasant happens, we often feel disappointed or even angry.（when引导时间状语从句）
②When I hurried back to the classroom, I found that there was no one left. (when引导时间状语从句；that引导宾语从句)
③I spent almost an hour cleaning up our messy classroom, confident that everything in our classroom had returned to normal, and I am proud of what I have done. (that引导宾语从句；what引导宾语从句)
【结构布局】
引言：点题，不要让情绪控制我们
中心：描述一次经历
结尾：总结这次经历的意义
【拓展词汇】
略
【拓展句型】
略
37.【答案】Technology is now becoming more and more important in our life.In my opinion，the mobile phone is the most important invention．（是什么）The mobile phone makes it possible for us to communicate conveniently with others．（高分句型一） We can get comfort whenever we are upset or we run into trouble．（高分句型二） What's more，with the rapid development of electronic equipment，the mobile phone is getting smaller but more powerful．Nowadays，we can also use a mobile phone to search for information or even shop online．How cool it is!（带来的好处）
In a word，I do think that the mobile phone is the most important invention．（表达愿望）
【解析】高分句型一：
The mobile phone makes it possible for us to communicate conveniently with others．移动电话使我们能够方便地与他人沟通。本句中it是形式宾语，动词不定式是真正的宾语。
高分句型二：
We can get comfort whenever we are upset or we run into trouble．每当我们心烦意乱或遇到麻烦时，我们都能得到安慰。whenever在此处引导的是让步状语从句。
能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
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