2024译林版九年级中考英语历年书面表达真题集锦（2）（含解析）

2024年译林版九年级英语中考书面表达真题集锦（2）
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一、书面表达：本大题共10小题，共150分。
11.华夏大地，人杰地灵；中华文明，源远流长。假如你是李华，你国外的朋友Andy想了解中国，请根据下图提示，选择或自拟至少两个要点进行介绍。

注意：
1.词数90左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
Learning that you are interested in China, I feel honored to introduce my country to you.



12.某中学生英文报Your Voice栏目中有如下征文通知，请你写篇英语文章投稿，谈谈你的想法。
It's not very easy for teenagers to make true friends. Some of them make friends by following suit (随大流). That means they do the same as their friends, such as playing online games or saying bad words behind others, although they're not willing to. Share your ideas about the topic. 1. Is it wise to follow suit in order to make friends 2. How can teenagers make true friends Don't forget to support your ideas with your experience as an example.
注意：
1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2.词数100左右；文章的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
I want to share my ideas about the topic.
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13.梦想引领人生，奋斗成就未来。“感动中国”年度人物江梦南，幼年失聪，生活、求学之路充满艰辛，但学医救人一直是她的梦想，她通过读唇语，学会“听”和“说”，凭借刻苦学习、不懈努力，成为一名药学博士。请以“梦想”为话题，写一篇英语短文，内容须包括以下所有要点：
1. 描述江梦南的成长经历（练习读唇语，努力学习，克服困难，实现梦想）；
2. 谈谈你的梦想（教师/志愿者……）、原因及如何实现。
参考词汇：读唇语read lips
注意：
1. 词数80~100，已给出部分不计入总词数；
2. 可适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
A common girl Jiang Mengnan was presented with Touching China Award. She became deaf at an early age. However, she kept fighting against the fate (命运).



14.艺术陶冶情操, 涵养生命。你喜欢的艺术形式是什么，有过怎样的经历，又有怎样的感受呢？请在下列图示中任选一种或自选一种其他艺术形式，用英语写一篇短文。
注意：1. 词数90左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。2. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
Art plays an important role in our life.



15.某英文网站正在举办征文活动，请根据网站征文要求，用英语写一篇短文投稿。
Beautiful school day wanted This new global site is a place for students to share their ideas. We are looking for your beautiful school day to inspire(鼓舞) our readers. Did you help anyone at school Did you enjoy a beautiful song in your art lesson Did you have an amazing experience in the school lab Your school life is full of beauty. Choose a beautiful school day. Write a passage to tell us what you did that day and why you think it was beautiful. Send your writing to us right now!
注意:
1. 内容涵盖要点, 全文连贯通顺。
2. 词数80左右（已给出的文章开头, 不计入总词数）。
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息, 如校名、人名等。
My Beautiful School Day
My school life is full of beauty.



16.某英文报正在举办以“家乡美”为主题的征文活动，你打算以“Spring in my hometown”为题写一篇英语短文投稿，请根据以下问题提示完成短文。
提示：(1)What is spring like in your hometown
(2)What do people in your hometown usually do in spring (three points)
(3)How do you like your hometown in spring (two points)
要求：(1)表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
(2)必须包括提示中的所有信息，并适当发挥；
(3)词数：100左右；
(4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Spring in my hometown



17.去年暑假，一名小学生给钟南山院士写了一封信，表达了对钟爷爷的感激之情、敬重之意和美好祝福。不久，钟南山院士给他回了一封既暖心又励志的信。请你写一篇90词左右的英语短文，叙述这件事，并谈谈自己的感想。
注意：1．短文须包括所给提示内容，但不要逐字翻译；
2．短文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
参考词汇：抗击疫情anti-epidemic
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18.世界上有很多事物能够表达我们内心的感恩、敬意、关爱……例如，一个微笑、一份礼物……请你以“A ________ with special meaning”为题写一篇英语短文，参加校刊英文专栏的征文比赛。
要点如下：
1. 你向谁表达，为什么
2. 你用什么表达，为什么
3. 你对他/她/它/他们说什么
要求：
1. 请将标题补充完整，合理即可；
2. 必须含有所有要点,并适当拓展；
3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息；
4. 词数100左右。
A ________ with special meaning



19.假如你是李华，你收到了好友Tom的一封来信。他在信中向你倾诉了在新学校没有朋友的烦恼。请你用英语给Tom写封回信，给他提供一些交友建议，并表达美好祝愿。
A letter to Tom 1.分享：分享美食、书籍……分享有趣的事 2.互助：乐于帮助他人，遇上困难向他人寻求帮助 3.信任：不说别人的坏话，能保守秘密
祝愿：……
注意：1. 词数在80﹣100之间，已给出的文字不计入总词数；
2. 回信须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
Dear Tom,
I'm glad to hear from you. You told me that you haven't made a friend in the new school. I hope the following advice can help you.




All the best,
Li
20.One evening，an old lady went shopping in the supermarket．She （71）______lots of toys for her grandson，including a knife．When she came back to her car，she found a man with red hair staring the car and （72）______two sitting at the back．She was surprised．She realized that they would drive her car away．Then she took out the toy knife （73）______ thinking and pointed at the men in the car．"Get out of the car!"she shouted （74）______．The men in the car got so scared that they ran away quickly．The lady made sure （75）______ all the men had gone．Then she took out the key to start the car．To her （76）______，she couldn't．she tried again and again and finally she knew 7---it wasn't her car!She looked around and saw her
8car not far away．When she came back to her car，she saw the men 9up to her with a policeman．She thought it was time for her to tell 10and make it clear．After hearing her story，the policeman began to laugh．Her face turned red．
答案和解析
1.【答案】Better Exercise, Better LifeDear classmates,
I'm glad to be here to give a speech. My topic is "Better Exercise, Better Life'”.
My favorite exercise is playing basketball. I often play basketball for about ten hours a week, because I think it is interesting and relaxing and it also enables me to make friends with others.
I think we should do morning exercises every day to start our day. ①What's more, when we have PE lessons, we can take part in different kinds of activities. We can also run for half an hour every day to build up our body. ②If we have time, we can ride bikes on weekends with our friends.
③I hope everyone can exercise more and have a better life.
That's all for my speech. Thank you for listening.
【解析】【思路点拨】本篇书面表达是一篇演讲稿。首先认真审题，确定文章体裁、题材和中心。本文主要使用第一人称和一般现在时。写作内容包括提示中的要点，适当发挥，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词和句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。确保内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，书写清晰，卷面整洁。
【结构布局】
引言：开头已给出，开门见山，点明主题；
中心：根据提示具体介绍自己的日常锻炼和给同学的建议以及发出号召；
结尾：结尾已给出，概括总结，表达感谢。
【亮点短语】
①make friends with sb.和某人交朋友
②take part in参与
③on weekends在周末
【高分句型】
①What's more, when we have PE lessons, we can take part in different kinds of activities.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②If we have time, we can ride bikes on weekends with our friends.（if引导的条件状语从句）
③I hope everyone can exercise more and have a better life. (省略that的宾语从句)
2.【答案】 We grow up in change. Growth makes our life full of meaning. Looking back on the three years of junior high school, I have experienced many changes in my study, thoughts, personality, life and so on. ①The biggest personal change I've ever made is that I have fallen in love with reading.
② When I was a child, I didn't enjoy books at all. Later, my mother always read stories for me and bought me books. Gradually, I began to love reading. While reading, I feel like talking with a wise man. Reading is also a fantastic way to enjoy my free time.
Books are my friends. And they will benefit me a lot.
【解析】【思路点拨】
本篇是一篇材料写作。分享自己初中生活以来的一个变化。要求作文必须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。人称为第一人称，时态用一般现在时，一般过去时和现在完成时。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误并注意高级词汇和高级句式的应用。
【结构布局】
引言：引出话题并介绍自己最大的成长变化是深深爱上了阅读；
中心：具体介绍阅读；
结尾: 阅读对自己很有好处。
【亮点词汇】
①Look back回顾
②fall in love with doing爱上做某事
③feel like doing想要做
④not......at all一点也不
【高分句型】
①The biggest personal change I've ever made is that I have fallen in love with reading.（省略that引导的定语从句；that引导的表语从句）
②When I was a child, I didn't enjoy books at all.（when引导的时间状语从句）
3.【答案】Thank you for your question. Here are my advice/suggestions for you.
As a good friend, first, you should be patient. You must talk to him peacefully and patiently. Second, you should invite him to do something interesting. For example, you can paly basketball or play football together with other friends. Third, you should tell the truth. ①You must point out the bad effect of playing computer games. And you should help him become interested in schoolwork. Finally, you can also get advice from your teachers or his parents.
②I think my advice is worth taking.
Amy
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文要求根据所给的两个关于青少年生活和学习中遇到的问题，任选一个进行回复。首先对问题进行分析，其次，针对不同的问题逐条给出合理的建议。人称以第二人称为主，时态应用一般现在时。注意逻辑清晰，表达流畅， 以及高级词汇和高级句式的应用。
【结构布局】
引言：开篇点题
中心：分析 问题和逐条给出合理的建议
结尾：表达期望
【亮点词汇】
①peacefully and patiently平和地以及有耐心地；
②tell the truth说实话
【高分句型】
①You must point out the bad effect of playing computer games.（动名词短语作介词的宾语）
②I think my advice is worth taking.（省略that的宾语从句）
4.【答案】A DIY bookmark for my favourite book Last week I took part in our school's Reading & Bookmark-making activity. Its purpose was to help us enjoy reading our favourite book. My favorite book is the classic novel Journey to the West, one of the Four Great Classical Novels. ①I like Monkey King best because he helps the weak and never gives up.
In order to make a bookmark, I prepared a card, scissors, glue and so on. First, I cut the card into long strips. And then I drew a picture of a monkey on the left and wrote a famous saying "Nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it." on the right to encourage me not to give up when facing difficulties. At last, I glued it to a thin piece of wood.
②Although I met some difficulties in this process, I never gave up and I am proud of myself.
【解析】【思路点拨】本文以“A DIY bookmark for my favourite book”为题，并结合表格中的内容，描述制作书签的目的和过程，可适当增加细节。本文以一般现在时和一般过去时为主；人称以第一人称为主。
【结构布局】
引言：开头已给出，介绍制作书签的目的，以及最喜欢的书的类型和最喜欢这本书的什么地方；
中心：根据提示具体介绍制作书签需要的材料和工具以及制作书签的过程；
结尾：概括总结，描述自己的感想。
【亮点短语】
①in order to为了
②on the left在左侧
③give up放弃
【高分句型】
①I like Monkey King best because he helps the weak and never gives up.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②Although I met some difficulties in this process, I never gave up and I am proud of myself.（although引导的让步状语从句；and连接的并列句）
5.【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
Thanks for offering such meaningful camps. ①I prefer living skills training because all the living skills I will get during the process will be of great value to my later life.
The living skills training will be on a farm. There, I can live with local people who will help me learn more about their customs and lifestyles. ②Moreover, what makes me interested is that I can cook by myself. In the summer camp, I can take part in activities on the farm such as feeding animals and picking fruit.
I also have some advice for you. I hope there will be more activities like growing plants and vegetables. I hope I will enjoy myself on the farm.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
本篇书面表达是一篇应用文，写一封书信。首先认真审题，确定文章体裁、题材和中心。本文主要使用第一人称和一般现在时。写作内容包括提示中的要点，适当发挥，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词和句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。确保内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，书写清晰，卷面整洁。
【结构布局】
引言：开头已给出，开门见山，点明主题；
中心：根据提示具体介绍；
结尾：结尾已给出，概括总结，表达愿望，署名。
【亮点短语】
①of great value具有重大价值
②take part in参加
③such as例如
【高分句型】
①I prefer living skills training because all the living skills I will get during the process will be of great value to my later life.（because引导的原因状语从句；省略that的定语从句）
②Moreover, what makes me interested is that I can cook by myself.（what引导的主语从句；that引导的表语从句）
6.【答案】Being with You
You've always been my sunshine. I like being with you, my English teacher, Miss Li. You are very kind and hard-working. ①You are so helpful that you are ready to help almost every student in our class.
Two years ago, I was afraid to speak English and was poor at English. But you tried your best to help me solve my problem. Thanks to your help, I made great progress in my English study. Now I can speak English in public and don't feel nervous any more.
You teach me not only to learn but also to be a kind and warm-hearted person. ②I hope I'll be with you forever.
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文是一篇材料作文；时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；文章开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
【结构布局】
引言：承接短文开头，引出喜欢同行的是谁或某个物品；
中心：按照提示说明你喜欢与之相伴的原因，至少给出两、三个原因，可列举具体的事例；
结尾：表达愿与其一直同行的意愿并书写结语。
【高分词汇】
①be ready to help sb.乐于帮助某人
②thanks to多亏，由于
③not…any more不再
④not only…but also…不仅……而且……
【高分句型】
①You are so helpful that you are ready to help almost every student in our class.（so…that引导的结果状语从句）
②I hope I'll be with you forever.（省略引导词that引导的宾语从句）
7.【答案】 One Thing I will Do for My Parents
I have made great progress in the past three years. Now I want to do one thing for my parents.
I want to make a breakfast for my parents. ①I'm going to the supermarket on Saturday afternoon to buy what I need for breakfast. Then, the next morning I will get up early so as not to wake my parents. I will make my mother's favorite sandwiches and coffee. My father likes to eat tomato beef noodles for breakfast, I will learn how to cook on my phone. Make sure they can have a delicious breakfast after getting up.
I have had this idea in my heart for many years, but I never get the chance to do it. In the past few years, my parents always got up early to prepare breakfast for me. ② It is their love and support that make me better, so I want to return them with the same love. I love them.
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；根据情景综合运用各种时态，注意主谓保持一致性；文章写作要点已给出，注意将作文标题补充完整。
【亮点词汇】
①want to do sth.想要做某事
②get up起床
③make sure确保
④prepare sth. for sb.为某人准备某物
【高分句型】
①I'm going to the supermarket on Saturday afternoon to buy what I need for breakfast. （what引导的宾语从句）
②It is their love and support that make me better, so I want to return them with the same love.（It is+被强调部分+that+其他）
【结构布局】
引言：首先介绍自己想为谁做一件事；
中心：具体阐述自己想做什么事，以及怎样做这件事；
结尾：阐述自己为什么想做这件事。
8.【答案】The Person I Want to Thank In my junior school life, many people have helped me. I thank them very much. ① But the person I want to thank most is my English teacher Miss Lee.
Miss Lee is beautiful with long hair. And she is kind. She helps me a lot. She often helps me with my English. ②When I am in trouble, she always encourages me to face my difficulties and gives me good advice. I still remember that once I failed in an important English exam and was upset. She cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English. With her help, I made great progress in English and became interested in it. I'm very thankful for all that she has done for me. She has a great influence on me, and her help is very useful for my future development.
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文是一篇演讲稿，应该以第一人称和第三人称为主来叙述内容；叙述想感谢的人的外表和性格时应用一般现在时，叙述具体的故事时应用一般过去时。同时写作时注意语句的连贯性，保证词汇和语法的正确使用。
【结构布局】
引言：最想感谢的人是谁；
中心：他/她的外表、性格；举例说明为何感谢他/她；
结尾：对你的影响
【亮点词汇】
①encourage sb. to do sth.鼓励某人做某事；
②cheered sb. up使某人振作起来；
③make great progress in sth.在……方面取得很大进步；
④have a great influence on sb.对某人有很大影响；
【高分句型】
①But the person I want to thank most is my English teacher Miss Lee. (省略关系代词的定语从句)
②When I am in trouble, she always encourages me to face my difficulties and gives me good advice. （when引导的时间状语从句）
9.【答案】Me and my after-class course In my school, there are many kinds of after-class courses. I choose the course of DIY. DIY literally means making things by hand.
My first assignment was to use the colored bubble mud commonly used by primary school students now, paste a colored blessing on the small board, and then make a frame with colored wool. ①Because I think everyone has a different understanding of happiness, I made a word Fu into color. It's quite a test of a person's patience to do some simple handicrafts, such as cross stitch, folding thousand paper crane...
②Through this study, I learned that we can make handmade in many ways. Waste beverage bottles, wool, ice cream sticks and so on can become raw materials for handmade. We can create our own satisfactory works through our own imagination.
【解析】【思路点拨】本文是一篇材料作文。以“Me and my after-class course”为主题，结合所给要点提示写一篇作文。本文时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时行文；人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。文章要确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。
【结构布局】
引言：开头已给出，开门见山，点明主题；
中心：根据提示具体介绍学习该课程的经历；
结尾：概括总结，表达收获及感受。
【亮点短语】
①by hand手工
②a test of a person's patience对一个人耐心的考验
③such as例如
④and so on等等
【高分句型】
①Because I think everyone has a different understanding of happiness, I made a word Fu into color.（because引导的原因状语从句；think后接省略that的宾语从句）
②Through this study, I learned that we can make handmade in many ways.（that引导的宾语从句）
10.【答案】Happy Summer Vacation The summer vacation is coming. With more free time, how can we have a happy and meaningful vacation Here is my advice.
First, we can do some sports. We can go running every morning. It can help us keep healthy. Besides, we can do some housework at home. ①It's necessary for us to learn some life skills and look after ourselves. What's more, we need to read some books. Reading helps improve our knowledge and opens up a whole new world to us. We can also join some clubs, such as the Singing Club or the Dancing Club. It can help us develop our hobbies.
②I hope you can have a colourful vacation.
【解析】【思路点拨】本篇书面表达是以“Happy Summer Vacation”为题给校报英语专栏写一篇短文。首先认真审题，确定文章体裁、题材和中心。本文主要使用第一人称和一般现在时。写作内容包括提示中的要点，适当发挥，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词和句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。确保内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，书写清晰，卷面整洁。
【结构布局】
引言：开头已给出，开门见山，点明主题；
中心：从运动，做家务，阅读和参加俱乐部四方面给出建议；
结尾：概括总结，表达愿望。
【亮点短语】
①go running跑步
②keep healthy保持健康
③open up打开
④such as例如
【高分句型】
①It's necessary for us to learn some life skills and look after ourselves.（it是形式主语，真正的主语是动词不定式短语）
②I hope you can have a colourful vacation.（hope后接省略that的宾语从句）
11.【答案】 Learning that you are interested in China, I feel honored to introduce my country to you.
First, there are many great men in our country, such as Yuan Longping. Yuan Longping is known as the "father of hybrid rice". He made a great contribution to the world food supply. ①Second, there are many famous places of interest in China, such as the Great Wall. It is known as one of the seven Wonders of the World. Third, China also has many traditional festivals, such as Spring Festival, Dragon Boat Festival, Mid-Autumn Festival and so on. Chinese people attach the most importance to the Spring Festival.
【解析】【思路点拨】本文是一篇材料作文。根据所给图示提示，选择至少两个要点，向Andy介绍中国的人物、名胜、节日等。采用一般现在时；人称以第三人称为主。本文介绍时可以根据所给的人物、景点、节日描述，也可以自拟要点介绍。行文确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。
【结构布局】
引言：开篇道明写信目的，点明主题；
中心：根据要点提示，介绍所给的人物、景点、节日；
结尾：强调在所有的节日里，中国人最看重春节。
[亮点词汇]
①be known as 作为……而著名
②make a great contribution to对……做出巨大的贡献
【高分句型】
①Second, there are many famous places of interest in China, such as the Great Wall.（there be句型）
12.【答案】 I want to share my ideas about the topic.
In my opinion, making friends by following suit is not wise. ①Because everyone is an individual, with his own interests and personality, don't follow the crowd and just do what other people like to do.
②We should make friends with those who can give us help and share our happiness and sadness. To make true friends, you must be friendly to others. Smile at others and you will get a smile in return. You can make friends with those who share the same interest with you or those who are totally different from you. ③Try to help your friends when they are in trouble because a friend in need is a friend indeed.
【解析】【思路点拨】
本篇书面表达是一篇征文。首先认真审题，确定文章体裁、题材和中心。本文主要使用第一、二人称和一般现在时。写作内容包括提示中的要点，适当发挥，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词和句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。确保内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，书写清晰，卷面整洁。
【结构布局】
引言：开头已给出，开门见山，点明主题
中心：根据提示介绍自己认为为了交朋友而跟风不是明智的，介绍青少年怎样才能交到真正的朋友
结尾：概括总结，表达观点
【亮点短语】
①make friends交朋友
②in return作为回报
③in trouble处于困境
【高分句型】
①Because everyone is an individual, with his own interests and personality, don t follow the crowd and just do what other people like to do.（because引导的原因状语从句；what引导的宾语从句）
②We should make friends with those who can give us help and share our happiness and sadness.（who引导的定语从句）
③Try to help your friends when they are in trouble because a friend in need is a friend indeed.（when引导的时间状语从句；because引导的原因状语从句）
【拓展词汇/句型】略
13.【答案】 A common girl Jiang Mengnan was presented with Touching China Award. She became deaf at an early age. However, she kept fighting against the fate(命运).
①Jiang Mengnan has been deaf since she was a child. The road to life and study is full of hardships, but it has always been her dream to study medicine to save people. So she read lips and studied hard to realize her dream of becoming a Doctor of pharmacy.
I also have a dream. ②I want to be a teacher when I grow up. It's been my dream since I was a kid. Because I like playing with children, and I also like to teach my knowledge to others. In order to realize my dream, I must study hard and stick to my dream.
【解析】【思路点拨】本篇书面表达是以“梦想”为话题，写一篇短文。首先认真审题，确定文章体裁、题材和中心。本文主要使用第三人称和第一人称，以及一般过去时和一般现在时。写作内容包括提示中的要点，适当发挥，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词和句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【结构布局】
引言：开头已给出，江梦南的成长经历；
中心：根据提示具体介绍自己的梦想；
结尾：介绍为什么有这个梦想以及如何实现它。
【亮点短语】
①be full of充满
②grow up长大
③in order to为了
④stick to坚持
【高分句型】
①Jiang Mengnan has been deaf since she was a child.（since引导的时间状语从句）
②I want to be a teacher when I grow up.（when引导的时间状语从句）
14.【答案】 Art is an important part of our life. My favourite art is making kites.
① According to my grandparents, when I was young, I looked forward to flying.② One year, when spring came, my grandfather made a kite for me. That made me quite excited. ③When I held a line to let my kite fly into the sky, I knew my dream of flying came true.
④ As I'm growing older, like a kite, I will leave my parents. But I know the line is still in my parents' hand. With them behind me, I can fly farther and farther.
Art teaches us a lot. It makes our life rich and colourful.
【解析】【思路点拨】
本篇是一篇看图写作，主要介绍自己喜欢的艺术形式，并结合自己的经历谈谈自己的感受。要求作文必须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。人称为第一人称，时态用一般现在时和一般过去时为主，要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误并注意高级词汇和高级句式的应用。
【结构布局】
引言：引出话题，表明自己喜欢的艺术是制作风筝；
中心：具体介绍为什么喜欢制作风筝；
结尾: 艺术给我生活带来的影响。
【亮点词汇】
①according to据......所说
②look forward to doing期待做某事
③farther and farther越来越远
【高分句型】
①According to my grandparents, when I was young, I looked forward to flying.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②One year, when spring came, my grandfather made a kite for me.（when引导的时间状语从句）
③When I held a line to let my kite fly into the sky, I knew my dream of flying came true.（when引导的时间状语从句；省略that引导的宾语从句）
④As I'm growing older, like a kite, I will leave my parents.（as引导的时间状语从句）
15.【答案】My Beautiful School Day
My school life is full of beauty.① I will never forget the day which makes me feel meaningful.
My best friend Lucy and I always ride bikes together after school. One day, I waited a long time but didn't see her. Then I searched for her in the corner of our school. She was crying at that time. ② She told me that she was nervous because she would have an English test. I decided to help her with English. That evening, I helped her review the key points and notes. Two days later, she told me that she passed it. ③ I felt that helping others who are in need was very meaningful.
【解析】【思路点拨】
本篇是一篇命题作文，以“My Beautiful School Day”为题写一篇学校生活的作文。要求作文必须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。人称为第一人称，时态用一般现在时，要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误并注意高级词汇和高级句式的应用。
【结构布局】
引言：引出话题;
中心：具体叙述在学校生活的美好一天的经历；
结尾: 总结帮助同学的感悟。
【亮点词汇】
①search for寻找
②the key points关键点
③in need在困难中
【高分句型】
①I will never forget the day which makes me feel meaningful.（which引导的定语从句）
②She told me that she was nervous because she would have an English test.（because引导的原因状语从句）
③I felt that helping others who are in need was very meaningful.（that引导的宾语从句；who引导的定语从句。）
16.【答案】Spring in my hometown
①When spring comes, everything comes back to life and the climate becomes warm. People feel more comfortable than in winter. ② The mountains which are very high in my hometown become greener and greener. Most flowers blossom as the weather becomes warm. All of these scenes draw a beautiful picture.
People begin to climb mountains or have a picnic near rivers. They also fly kites in the parks. They try their best to be close to nature and enjoy the beauty of it. Farmers start to sow and wait for a good harvest.
③As far as I am concerned, spring in my hometown is full of life and power. It gives us energy and hope. I love the spring in my hometown.
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“Spring in my hometown”为题，结合提示内容进行写作，介绍家乡的春天，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。写作时要以第一和第三人称来介绍，时态用一般现在时。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
【亮点词汇】
①become greener and greener变得越来越绿
② try one's best to do sth.尽力做某事
③be close to亲近
【高分句型】
①When spring comes, everything comes back to life and the climate becomes warm.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②The mountains which are very high in my hometown become greener and greener.（which引导的定语从句从句）
③As far as I am concerned, spring in my hometown is full of life and power.（as far as I am concerned句型）
【结构布局】
引言：介绍家乡的春天是什么样子的；
中心：介绍家乡的人在春天通常做什么；
结尾：介绍自己对家乡的春天的感受。
【拓展词汇】
略
【拓展句型】
略
17.【答案】 Last summer vacation, a primary school student wrote a letter to Zhong Nanshan. He showed great thanks to Grandpa Zhong for his contribution in anti-epidemic. ①He said Grandpa Zhong was a real hero of all his classmates. Their dream was to become a person like him. He also sent best wishes to Grandpa Zhong.
To the child's surprise, he heard from Grandpa Zhong soon. In the letter, Zhong Nanshan told him to stay healthy and work hard at his lessons. ②He was sure their dreams would come true one day.
We're glad that many students' dream stars are not actors or singers but doctors and scientists like Zhong Nanshan and Yuan Longping.
【解析】【思路点拨】本篇书面表达是一篇记叙文。主要使用第三人称和一般过去时。写作内容包括提示中的要点，适当发挥，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词和句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【结构布局】
引言：描述一名小学生给钟南山院士写了一封信这件事；
中心：钟南山院士回信的内容；
结尾：表达愿望。
【亮点短语】
①hear from收到……的信
②work hard at致力于
③come true（愿望、梦想等）实现
【高分句型】
①He said Grandpa Zhong was a real hero of all his classmates.（said后接宾语从句）
②He was sure their dreams would come true one day.（sure后接宾语从句）
18.【答案】 A gift with special meaning ①The day before Mother's Day, everyone around me was talking about what gifts they were going to buy for their beloved mother. Buying flowers is what most students will do, others buy chocolates. While for me, I want to do something different, as I live in school and can't go back home on Mother's Day. I decide to make a call to her, sending her my warmest wishes. I am so nervous now and have no idea what to say. I search the Internet for some suggestions, it is very useful for me, many wonderful words are presented in front of my eyes. I read them one by one. ②As I decide to copy these words, suddenly I feel there is no meaning for saying someone else's words. So I give up, I will tell my mother that I love her and thank you for the things she has done for me.
It is such a special gift. I think my mother will like it, because this special gift contains my love for my mother.
【解析】【思路点拨】本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据要点提示内容，以“A ________ with special meaning”为题，写一篇英语短文，来表达自己内心的感恩、敬意、关爱……并参加校刊英文专栏的征文比赛；注意要点要齐全，可适当发挥。本文主要采用第一、第三人称来展开写作，时态主要用一般现在时，辅以一般将来时。
【结构布局】
引言：点明主题，向谁表达；
中心：用什么表达以及表达的内容；
结尾：表达期望。
【亮点短语】
①make a call打电话
②in front of在……前面
③one by one逐个地
④give up放弃
【高分句型】
①The day before Mother's Day, everyone around me was talking about what gifts they were going to buy for their beloved mother.（what引导的宾语从句）
②As I decide to copy these words, suddenly I feel there is no meaning for saying someone else's words.（as引导的时间状语从句；feel后接省略that的宾语从句）
19.【答案】Dear Tom,
I'm glad to hear from you. ①You told me that you haven't made a friend in the new school. I hope the following advice can help you.
First of all, we should know how to share. We can share delicious food, books and interesting things with others. Sharing can give us pleasure. Second, we should be helpful. ②When we are in trouble, we should help each other. We should be willing to help others and seek help from others in case of difficulties. Finally, ③ we can't say bad words about others so that we can get well on each other. We should keep secrets.
I hope these suggestions can help you.
All the best,
Li
【解析】【思路点拨】
本篇是一篇应用文写作，要求作文必须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。人称为第一人称，时态用一般现在时，要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误并注意高级词汇和高级句式的应用。
【结构布局】
引言：引出话题;
中心：给出具体的建议；
结尾: 希望自己的建议能有所帮助。
【亮点词汇】
①be in trouble处于困境中
②be willing to do sth乐意去做某事
③in case of以防万一
【高分句型】
①You told me that you haven't made a friend in the new school.（that引导的宾语从句）
②When we are in trouble, we should help each other.（when引导的时间状语从句）
③we can't say bad words about others so that we can get well on each other.（so that引导的目的状语从句）
20.【答案】
【小题1】bought 【小题2】another 【小题3】without 【小题4】loudly 【小题5】that
【小题6】surprise，
【解析】71．bought考查动词的辨析．根据上一句an old lady went shopping in the supermarket一位老太太在超级市场购物，此处应该是：她买了许多玩具给孙子，上半句的时态是一般过去时，此处也应该用一般过去时，故填bought，buy的过去式是bought．
72．another 考查代词的辨析．根据题干可知此处是固定词组，another two其他两个，结合句意：她发现一个红头发的男人盯着车，另外两个坐在后面，故填another．
73．without考查介词的辨析．根据题干可知此处是固定词组without thinking，没有考虑，结合句意：然后她不假思索地拿出玩具刀指着车上的人．故填without，介词，没有．
75．that考查固定句型的辨析．根据题干可知此处是固定句型 made sure that…．确保…，结合句意：那位女士确信所有的男人都走了，故填that．
74．loudly考查副词的辨析．空格出是在动词的后面，此处应该是副词，结合句意：她大声喊，故填loudly．
76．surprise，考查固定词组，根据题干可知此处是固定词组，To her surprise让她惊讶的是，结合句意：让她惊讶的是，她不能打开车门，故填surprise．
一天晚上，一个老太太在超市购物去了．她给她的孙子买了许多玩具，包括一把刀．当她回到她的车，她发现了自己的车里有别人．她很吃惊，她意识到他们会偷自己的车．然后她拿出玩具刀不假思索地指着车内的人．"下车！"她大声喊，车上的人逃走了，但她的钥匙却打不开车，最后她发现这不是自己的车．
根据短文大意和语境选择合适的单词，并用其正确的形式填入空白处，使补全后的短文意思通顺，语法正确，结构完整．注意单词的适当形式．
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