高中英语应用文写信提升学案---求助信
Campus Life---A Letter of Seeking Help
校园生活---求助信
I.话题语块
1.帮我一个忙_______________________
2.向……求助_______________________
3.咨询某人某事_______________________
4.面临_______________________
5.做某事有困难_______________________
6.由于_______________________
7.不知道_______________________
8.不知所措_______________________
9.精通_______________________
10.提出_______________________
11.提供……的指导_______________________
12.急切需要_______________________
13.脱颗而出_______________________
14.因为缺乏_______________________
15.使某人无所适从_______________________
16.感觉不适应
17.一定_______________________
18.非常感谢某人_______________________
II.话题句式
开头:寒暄/自我介绍+写信目的
1.Hope this letter finds you well.I am Li Hua,______________________________________________(一名正在贵校学习暑期课程的中国学生/非谓语动词作定语).
2.______________________________________________(面临一些学习上的问题/非谓语动词作状语),I am writing to seek help from you.
3.______________________________________________(想要参加我校即将举办的演讲比赛/形容词作状语),I am writing in the hope that you can offer me a helpful hand.
4.With an English dubbing competition around the corner drawing near approaching, I am writing with the intention of asking for help
主体:陈述问题,希望得到帮助
经验方面
5.Due to lack of relevant experience, I have no idea how to prepare for the coming speech contest.
6.Nevertheless, ______________________________________________(缺乏足够的经验/非谓语动词作状语),I find it extremely challenging to deliver a speech in public.
7.To be frank, ______________________________________________这是我第一次出国/独立主格),it will be highly appreciated if you can be so kind as to tell me what calls for special attention.
语言方面
8.______________________________________________(知道您乐于助人并且是这方面的专家/非谓语动词作状语),I sincerely hope that you can help me with the expressions used in the speech.
9.With the intention of standing out from a number of competitors, I genuinely hope you can offer me some guidance, especially on my pronunciation.
10.Eager to be chosen,I wonder if it is possible for you to polish the expressions I used.
11.______________________________________________(尽管我努力了/as引导让步状语从句),I still have difficulty with grammar.
12.Furthermore, so nervous do I feel in front of my classmates that I can't say a word in English. Therefore, I sincerely hope you can offer me some advice on how to overcome my fear of speaking in English.
13.To be honest, I have difficulty with English listening, thus hoping you can recommend some listening materials for me to practice after class.
其他问题
14.______________________________________________(最困扰我的是如何使自己的演讲有吸引力和说服力/主语从句).
结尾:表达感谢+期盼回复
15.I'd be obliged if you can reply to me when it is convenient.
III.话题写作
(一)
(高考英语山东卷)假设你是李华,你的美国朋友Tom上个月来到北京学习。七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛(speech contest),你在资料搜集、语言运用等方面遇到了困难。请根据以下要点给Tom写一封电子邮件:
1.询问Tom的生活和学习情况:2.谈谈你的困难并请Tom帮忙;3.告诉Tom你打算赛后去看他。
注意:1词数:80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
I haven't seen you for a long time since we parted last time and___________________________(1.你来北京已经一个月了). How are you getting on with everything Have you adapted to your school life
I have good news to tell you that I am going to Beijing for a speech contest this July, for which I have prepared so long. However,______________________________________________(2.遇到一些困难/非谓语动词作状语),have no alternative but to turn to you for help. To begin with, I have trouble collecting information and putting what I have learned into practice. Furthermore, for a non-native speaker, ______________________________________________(3.语言障碍是我的一大难题). I am not sure of the proper expressions of some English words, __________________________________________________________________(4.这使得我的演讲文稿不太自然). Consequently, I hope you can give me a hand with these problems.
By the way, I will call on you after the contest and I really can't wait to see you.
Yours,
Li Hua
(二)
(2020年全国卷Ⅲ)你是李华,你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件,请她帮忙指导。
邮件内容包括:1.剧情简介:2.指导内容:3.商定时间地点。
注意:1.词数80左右;2.结束语已为你写好。
Dear Miss Evans,
How is everything going I'm writing to ask for your assistance with our short play adapted from our English textbook.
Based on our English textbook,my classmates and I have adapted a text into a short play, which is about how money can change the attitude of people towards others. However, ______________________________________________(5.我们发现要演好它很费力/find复合结构). The challenges are that it seems that the plot isn't amusing enough to attract the audience and that the lines fail to describe the characters' inner feelings. In addition, ______________________________________________(6.让我们困惑的是/主语从句)is that there are no emotional changes in our tone and pronunciation,most of which sound dull.
We will have a rehearsal next weekend in the school Hall. ______________________________________________(7.面对如此多的问题/非谓语作状语),I would appreciate it if it is possible for you to come and give us some guidance. I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
参考答案:
Campus Life---A Letter of Seeking Help
I.话题语块
1.do me a favor/lend me a helpful hand
2.turn to sb.for help /ask sb.for a favor
3.consult sb.about sth.
4.be confronted with/be faced with
5.have difficulty in doing sth./be struggling with
6.on account of/due to owing to
7.have no idea
8.be at a loss/feel overwhelmed/feel at sea
9.excel in be expert in
e up with put forward
11.provide guidance on
12.be in urgent need
13.stand out from
14.for lack of
15.leave sb.at sea
16.feel foreign
17.be bound to
18.be deeply grateful to sb.be much indebted to sb.
II.话题句式
1.a Chinese student taking summer courses at your university
2.Facing some learning problems
3.Eager to participate in the speech contest to be held in our school
6.lacking sufficient experience
7.this being the first time that I have been abroad
8.Knowing that you are always willing to help others and an expert in this aspect
11.Try as I may
14.What disturbs me most is how to make my speech appealing and convincing
III.话题写作
1.it is a month since you came to Beijing
2.encountering some difficulties
3.the language barrier still proves to be a big trouble
4.which makes the essay inauthentic
5.we find it demanding to perform it well
6.what puzzles us
7.Faced with so many problems