人教版（2019）必修第一、二册写作讲 ：座制造写作亮点之-高级词汇的运用课件课件-(共60张PPT)

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写作讲座一
制造写作亮点之-高级词汇的运用
主讲人：王中锋
高考英语书面表达全国卷评分标准
第五档(21-25分)：完全完成了试题规定的任务，完全达到了预期的写作目的
　　——语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力。
老师在讲评作文时，经常对同学们说，写作
要得高分，就得有高级句型和高级词汇。究
竟什么样的词汇才是高级词汇呢？
高级词不是长难词或生僻词
晚词优先
短语优先
本讲座结合近几年高考写作范文，以Book1 Book2词汇为例，用高级词汇对句子进行升级。
1. This way, you will be able to communicate with other students easily.
【高级替换】
表示“能够做某事”→用be capable of doing代替
be able to do.
This way, you will be capable of communicating with other students easily.
2. Although we were tired, we all felt very happy and satisfied.
【高级替换】：
表示“ 感到feel (happy, satisfied...)”→用 feel
happy, satisfied…代替have a sense of happiness,
satisfaction ….
Although we were tired, we all had a sense of
happiness and satisfaction.
3. Actually/In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in using shared bicycles.
实际上，共享单车的使用有利有弊。
As a matter of fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in using shared bicycles.
【高级替换】
表示“实际上”→用as a matter of fact代替actually/in fact.
4. 我不会再满心焦虑，也不会再让烦恼折磨我。
I will no longer feel anxious, nor will I let trouble trouble me.
【高级替换】
表示“担心”→用be full of anxiety代替be anxious
I will no longer be full of anxiety, nor will I let trouble trouble me.
5. Jiu Zhaigou is the most beautiful place I have ever been to.
【高级替换】
Jiu Zhaigou is the most fascinating /amazing place I have ever been to.
表示“美丽的；迷人的”→用fascinating/amazing代替beautiful.
6. Now that the winter vacation is coming, I want to find a part time job during this period of time. 寒假快要来了，我想找份兼职工作。
。
Now that the winter vacation is around the corner/approaching/at hand/drawing near, I would like to/intend to/ am eager to find a part time job during this period of time.
【高级替换】
表示“即将到来”→用around the corner/
approaching/at hand/drawing near代替coming
表示“想做某事”→用would like to do sth/ intend to do sth /be eager to sth代替want to do sth.
7. (1) 我认为多与同学交流有益处 。
I think it will be good/useful for you if you exchange ideas with your classmates.
.
I think it will be of great benefit to you/ be beneficial to you if you exchange ideas with your classmates.
【高级替换】
表示“有益处的”→用be of great benefit to../be beneficial to sb代替be good/useful for
7.(2) As we all know, books are the source of knowledge. Reading benefit us greatly.
众所周知，书籍是知识的源泉。阅读对我们大有好处。
【高级替换】
sth benefit sb greatly 可以用benefit a lot from sth替代.
As we al know, books are the source of
knowledge. We benefit a lot from reading.
8.此外，我积极参加社区活动和志愿者服务。
Besides, I also actively take part in community
activities and volunteer service activities.
In addition,/Apart from this, I also actively take part in community activities and volunteer service activities.
【高级替换】
表示“此外”→用in addition/apart from sth代替
besides.
9. In the coming three years, our school life will be full of difficulty/difficult.
In the coming three years, our school life will be challenging.
【高级替换】
表示“困难的”→用challenging代替full of difficulty
或difficult.
10. I’m good at/do well in English, so I am elected as assistant to my English teacher.
【高级替换】
表示“学得好/擅长→用have a good command
/knowledge of 代替be good at/do well in.
11. I would appreciate it if you could consider my application.
I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration/account.
【高级替换】
表示“考虑”→用take sth into consideration
/account代替consider sth.
12. After school, my classmates and I held a heated discussion, in which different kinds of ideas were put forward.
After school, my classmates and I held a heated discussion, in which a wide variety of ideas were put forward.
【高级替换】
表示“不同种类的”→用a great/wide variety of代替different kinds of
13. In a word, good listening can really make us get
closer to each other.
【高级替换】
表示“使某人做某事”→用enable sb. to do sth.代替make sb. do sth.
14. It is very important to find out why you didn’t achieve your goal.
【高级替换】
表示“未能”→用fail to do代替 not to do 或
be not able to.
15. Would you like to help me correct the mistakes in my composition 你能帮忙为我纠正作文中的错误吗？
【高级替换】
Would you like to do me a favor to correct the mistakes in my composition
表示“帮助某人”→用do sb. a favor to do sth代替help sb. do sth
16. Whenever or however you take notes, remember that note-taking is a selective process.
【高级替换】
表示“记住”→用keep/bear in mind that代替remember that.
17.我写信对我在贵国停留期间您对我的细心照料表示感谢。
I'm writing to thank you for your kind help and tender care during my stay in your country.
【高级替换】
I'm writing to convey my appreciation to you for your kind help and tender care during my stay in your country.
表示“感谢某人”→用 thank sb for sth代替express one’s appreciation to sb. for sth.
18. I am a student from Xinhua Middle School and I am glad to learn that you need a few more part-time English reporters. I am writing to apply for it because I think I am fit for it.
I am a student from Xinhua Middle School and I am glad to learn that you need a few more part-time English reporters. I am writing to apply for it because I think I am equal to / qualified for it.
【高级替换】
表示“胜任(工作、职位)”→用be equal to 或be qualified for代替be fit for.
19. Let’s start right now and try our best to do a little bit every minute!
让我们现在开始，每一分钟都不遗余力地做好
点滴。
表示“努力做某事”→用make great efforts to do/spare no effort to do/do sth in one’s power
to do 代替try (one’s best) to do
【高级替换】
Let’s start right now and spare no effort to/make
efforts to do a little bit every minute!
20. The aim of the activity is to promote fine Chinese cultures and traditions.
【高级替换】
表示“…的目的是”→用sth be designed to do sth或be aimed at doing …代替 the aim of sth is to do sth. design 常用被动语态 (为某种特定目的)计划、设计 be designed to do sth …的目的是; …为了…
The activity is designed to promote/is aimed at
promoting fine Chinese cultures and
traditions to foreign visitors.
21．We should do something to fight against pollution.
【高级替换】
We should take effective measures to fight against pollution.
“采取措施做某事” 用take effective measures
to do sth替代 do something to do sth.
22. From now on, we ought to give up/quit the bad habit.
【高级替换】
From now on, we ought to break away from the bad habit.
表示 “摆脱；放弃”用break away from替代 give up/
quit.
23. As we all know, spending too much time on TV may have a bad effect on our work and health, especially on our eyes.
【高级替换】
As we all know, spending too much time on TV may have an unfavorable influence on our work and health, especially on our eyes.
表示 “对……有影响…”用have an unfavorable/
a great influence on/have a great impact on
替代 have a bad/good effect on.
24. The poor behavior has greatly damaged /harmed the image of China, which is really shameful.
这种恶劣的行为已经对中国的形象造成了很大
的损害，这是非常可耻的。
【高级替换】
The poor behavior has done geat damage/harm to
the image of China, which is really shameful.
表示 “对…造成损害”用 do great damage/harm替代greatly damage/harm sb/sth.
an
25. Finally, some good English learning websites help with / help me with my improvement in English .
【高级替换】
Finally, some good English learning websites
contribute to my improvement in English grammar.
表示 “促成；导致” 用 contribute to sth/doing sth
替代 help sb with sth或help sb. do sth
26. If you find suitable learning methods, your learning effeciency will probably improve.
【高级替换】
If you find suitable learning methods, your
learning effeciency is likely to improve.
表示 “很可能… ”用 be likely to do sth
替代 prbably do sth.
27. Few students have the opportunity to use excellent sports facilities in the countryside.
【高级替换】
Few students have access to excellent sports facilities in the countryside.
表示 “有机会/权利做某事” 用 have access to sth.
替代 have the opportunity to use sth.
28. So long as you focus on/ concentrate on/put your heart into your schoolwork, you will make it sooner or later.
【高级替换】
So long as you are absorbed in /apply yourself to
your schoolwork, you will make it sooner or later.
表示 “ 致力于；专心于；集中精力于；全神贯注
于用 apply oneself to sth/doing sth / be absorbed in
/替代 focus on/ concentrate on sth./doing sth.
29. By helping those kids, I feel I can affect their future and make a small contribution to society.
By helping those kids, I feel I can make a difference to their future and make a small contribution to society.
【高级替换】
表示 “对…有影响、作用、关系” 用 make a
difference to sb/sth.替代 affect sb/sth.或have an
effect on sb./sth.
30. We should adopt a proper way to deal with the problem.
【高级替换】
We should adopt a proper approach to dealing
with the problem.
表示 “做某事的方法” 用 an approach to sth./to doing sth.替代 a way to do sth.
31. It is greatly important to try to keep a good relationship with other classmates.
【高级替换】
It is of great importance to try to keep a good
relationship with other classmates.
表示 “重要的” 用 be of great importance替代 be greatly important.
32. More and more foreigners are learning Chinese to appreciate Chinese fine cultures.
【高级替换】
An increasingly number of foreigners are learning
Chinese to appreciate Chinese fine cultures.
表示 “越来越多的…” 用 An increasingly number of+名词(复) 替代 more and more+名词(复) .
33. The teacher suggests that we should learn to relax before every exam.
【高级替换】
The teacher recommends that we (should) learn to
relax before every exam.
表示 “建议” 用recommend that +主语+(should) +动词原形 或recommend sb to do sth替代 suggest that +主语+(should) +动词原形.
34. So charming are the sights of Jiuzhaigou that they deeply impress visitors from home and abroad.
【高级替换】
表示 “给某人留下深刻印象” ,用leave /make a deep impression on sb 替代 impress sb deeply.
So charming are the sights of Jiuzhaigou that
they leave a deep impression on visitors from home and abroad.
35. Clearly, they cannot treat all the problems.
.
Obviously, they cannot treat all the problem
【高级替换】
It is obvious that they cannot treat all the problem.
表示 “很显然” 用 obviously/It is obvious that…替代 Clearly.
36. The lecture is going to be held at 8:00 pm in the hall.
【高级替换】
The lecture is scheduled to be held in the hall.
表示 “计划…” 用 be scheduled to do sth替代 be going to do sth.
schedule n. 计划（表）；时间表；课程表；v. 安排，预定
37. I am interested in the job though it needs a lot of efforts.
【高级替换】
I am attracted to the job though it needs a lot
of efforts.
表示 “对…感兴趣；喜欢” 用 be attracted to sb/sth替代 be interested in/like.
38. It is unbelievable that Mr. Smith leads a simple life though/although he is very wealthy.
【高级替换】
It is unbelievable that Mr. Smith leads a simple
life despite/in spite of his great wealth/being wealthy.
表示 “尽管” , 用 despite/ in spite of +名词/doing或用 despite/ in spite of the fact that+句子
替代 though/although +句子.
It is unbelievable that Mr. Smith leads a simple
life despite/in spite of the fact that he is verywe althy.
39. Punishment is not/never a wise choice to help students grow up mentally and phsically.
【高级替换】
Punishment is by no means/in no case a wise choice
to help students grow up mentally and phsically.
表示 “决不；绝对不是” ,用by no means/in no case 替代 not/never.
By no means/In no case is punishment a wise choice
to help students grow up mentally and phsically.
40. It is very difficult/hard for some boys to quit smoking.
【高级替换】
It is a struggle for some boys to quit smoking.
表示 “困难的；一件难事” ,用 a struggle替代 very
difficult/hard.
41. In my opinion, learning English is a step-by-step process.
【高级替换】
From my point of view,/As far as I’m concerned, learning English is a step-by-step process.
表示 “以我之见；在我看来” ,用 from my point of view替代 In my opinion.
42. His failure is directly connected with his laziness.
【高级替换】
His failure is directly related to /linked to his laziness.
表示 “与…有联系” ,用 be related/linked to替代be connected with.
43. You’d better ask your teacher for help when you are in trouble.
【高级替换】
You’d better turn to your teacher for help/seek help from your teacher when you are in trouble.
表示 “向某人求助” ,用 turn to sb for help/seek help from sb替代ask sb. for help.
44. The town was cut off the rest of the world because of heavy snow.
【高级替换】
The town was cut off the rest of the world due to/
on account of heavy snow.
表示 “因为”；由于(sth)” ,用 due to/
on account of替代because of.
45. You must collect enough materials before your
writing.
【高级替换】
You must collect enough materials previous to
your writing.
表示 “在…之前” ,用 previous to sth替代before sth.
46. As for me, we should do some other things to help our parents. Besides, I think the school should encourage the students to do more physical exercise after class.
In my opinion, we should do some other things
to help our parents. Plus/Additionally, I think the school should encourage the students to do more physical exercise after class.
表示 “而且；此外” ,用 plus/additionally替代besides.
【高级替换】
47. Instead, work hard and pay much attention to the next lucky opportunity.
【高级替换】
Instead, work hard and keep your eyes open for the
next lucky opportunity.
表示 “留心；留意” ,用keep one’s eyes open for替代pay much attention to.
48 . Now people separate their waste to make it easier for it to be reused.
【高级替换】
Nowadays/At present, people separate their waste to
make it easier for it to be reused.
表示 “如今；现在” ,用nowadays/at present 替代 now.
49. A lot of time was spent on playing computer games, which accounted for his failure.
【高级替换】
A great amount of/A great deal of time was spent on
playing computer games, which accounted for
his failure.
表示 “大量的(+不可数名词)” ,用a great amount of/a great deal of替代 a lot of.
50. Finally he finished his task in advance.
【高级替换】
Finally he got through his task in advance.
表示 “完成；通过” ,用get through替代 finish.
51. Wear more clothes, otherwise you'll catch/have a cold.
【高级替换】
Wear more clothes, otherwise you'll suffer from
a cold.
表示 “患病( a cold/ a fever…)” ,用suffer from(a cold/a fever…)替代 have/catch a cold/a fever….
52. Many people tried to win her heart back but they failed.
【高级替换】
Many people attempted/made an attempt to
win her heart back but they failed.
表示 “试图；尝试做某事” ,用attempt/make an attempt to替代 try to do sth.
温馨提示：
以上提供了一些常用词的近义表达，对阅读与写作都非常有益，望同学们熟读并掌握好其用法。但是,在写作中不必刻意追求使用所谓高级词汇，要根据自己对词语的实际掌握程度去使用，用自己最熟悉最有把握的词汇恰当地表达自己的思想，才是上策。