第二次月考复习书面表达12篇（江苏专用）（含解析）

第二次月考复习 书面表达12篇（江苏专用）
一、书面表达
1．（2022-2023·江苏盐城·阶段练习）每个人都有自己引以为傲的人或事物，那么让你感到骄傲的是什么呢？是 我们伟大的祖国，是努力拼搏的自己还是可亲可敬的家人呢？请以“I’m so proud of ________” 为题写一篇英语短文。
要点：
1. Who or what are you proud of
2. Why are you proud of him/her …
要求：
1. 请补全标题，用英语写一篇短文，词数100词左右；
2. 语言流畅、语意通顺、书写规范、卷面整洁；
3. 文中不得出现与考生本人相关的真实姓名、校名和地名等信息。
I’m so proud of ________
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2．（22-23八年级下·江苏泰州·阶段练习）为配合我区开展“创建文明城市(build a civilized city)”活动，学校举办以“How to Behave Well ”为主题的英语征文比赛。现在请你根据所给提示内容，用英语写一篇80词左右的参赛短文。
要求：
1. 注意人称和时态。
2. 要点齐全，可适当增加细节使句子通顺、连贯。
3. 不要逐字翻译，词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
提示：
1. 说“请、对不起、谢谢”，不说别人的坏话；
2. 注意保护环境，不乱丢垃圾，步行或骑自行车上学；
3. 遵守交通规则，如......；
4. 经常参加志愿者工作，帮助残疾人，与他人分享不同的技能，再举一例,如......
5. 经常参加慈善活动，如......
总结……（至少1句）
How to Behave Well
In order to build a civilized city, we students should try our best to behave well in the activities.
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3．（2022-2023·江苏南京·阶段练习）青少年是祖国的未来。在创建全国文明城市的过程中，你市举办了“美德少年”评选活动。请根据以下提示，以“Be a Virtue Teenager”为题，用英语写一篇倡议书，号召大家积极争做“美德少年”。
要点：
1. 在学校：努力学习知识，养成良好的学习习惯，爱运动；
2. 在家里：经常与家人交流，感恩父母，分担家务，知错就改；
3. 在社会：遵守规则，在公共场合不要大声喧哗，注意安全；
4. 发表你的观点。
要求：
1. 文中不得出现真实的人名或地名；
2. 语言通顺，条理清楚，书写规范；
3. 要点齐全，内容可适当发挥；
4. 词数：80-100（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Be a Virtue Teenager
Teenagers are the future of our motherland, and also the symbol of our city. What should we do to become a virtue teenager of our city
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4．（22-23八年级下·江苏泰州·阶段练习）阳光中学将以“How to be a good teenager”为主题举行一场英文演讲比赛，假设你是阳光中学的学生Tom，请你根据以下提示，写一篇演讲稿。
Topic How to be a good teenager
Manners behave politely,...
Study time listen carefully in class,...
Spare time read books, do some voluntary work, ... (给出一至两个理由)
Others stay away from computer games,...
要求：
1. 文章内容包含表中所有要点，省略部分适当发挥。
2. 词数100词左右，文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
3. 语义通顺，意思连贯，条理清晰，字迹工整。
4. 文中不得出现真实的姓名，校名及地名。
How to be a good teenager
Good morning, everyone! I’m Tom from Sunshine Middle School. Today I am very happy to be here to give you a speech about how to be a good teenager.
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That’s all. Thanks for listening!
5．（22-23八年级下·江苏苏州·阶段练习）子曰：“学而时习之，不亦说乎？有朋自远方来，不亦乐乎？人不知而不愠，不亦君子乎？”这是孔子的“三乐”—学习之乐、交友之乐、修身之乐。
作为青少年，你在学习和生活中，不断成长着，也体验着各种各样的快乐。请在学习之乐、交友之乐、劳动之乐、运动之乐、爱好之乐、旅游之乐、助人之乐、环保之乐等中选其一，以“I am happy to ________”为题跟大家分享你快乐成长的一段经历。
写作要点：
1. The experience you are going to share。
2. Why does the experience make you feel happy
3. What have you learned from the experience
写作要求：
1.将标题补充完整，主题意义积极向上；
2.根据标题，自拟表达内容和框架；
3.思路表达清晰，文章结构完整；
4.词数100左右。
I am happy to
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6．（22-23八年级下·江苏镇江·阶段练习）八年级的学习生活即将结束，学校正在进行共青团员（Communist Youth League member）选拔，假如你是Li Hua，请你代表你们班推荐Xiao Ming作为共青团员候选人。根据以下信息，写一封推荐信给学校团支部。
姓名 Xiao Ming
良好品质 善良 乐于助人，参加志愿者活动，…… 慷慨大方 ……
行为习惯 在公共场合举止文明，……
生活方式 垃圾分类，将旧衣服送给回收机构 呼吁我们采取行动保护环境，……
要求：
1.所写内容必须包括表格中所有要点，可适当发挥；
2.文章不少于85个词，注意推荐信格式；
3.语意通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
4.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
Dear chairperson,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
7．（22-23八年级下·江苏南京·阶段练习）书面表达
帮助他人，快乐自己。李华一家常在周末去社区参加志愿者活动。假如你是李华的同学，请根据提供的信息介绍李华一家，描述他们上周六所做的事，你对他们的做法有何感想？你是否愿意参与类似的活动？说明理由。
人物 职业与爱好 具体活动
爸爸 电脑工程师 修理 为邻居检修电脑
妈妈 公司经理 DIY 为社区的老人包粽子
李华 中学生 下棋 教小学生下棋
你 ……
要求：
1.所写内容必须包括提供的所有信息，可适当发挥。
2.评价李华一家的做法：表达你的意愿，并说明理由。
3.文章不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
4.语气通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，条理清楚，字迹工整。
5.文中不得出现真实的姓名，校名及地点。
I am Li Hua’s classmate and I’ve known that he and his parents often go to the community centre to do some voluntary work.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8．（22-23八年级下·江苏镇江·阶段练习）假如你的笔友John将作为交换生在中国家庭生活一周，他写了一封e-mail向你求助。请根据邮件内容写封回信。
Dear Li Hua, I will come to Nanjing in July and stay with a Chinese family for a week as an exchange student. To get along well with my host family, should I prepare any gifts How can I help with the housework What else should I do Yours, John
Dear John,
I’m glad you will come to China. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope you will enjoy your stay in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
9．（22-23八年级下·江苏南通·阶段练习）英语课上，老师安排了小组活动，让同学们谈一谈一年来自己的收获与变化。请根据下面表格提供的信息，写一篇发言稿。
过去 现在
学习 不努力，玩电脑游戏 学习刻苦，多阅读
礼仪 没礼貌，乱扔垃圾 行为得体，保护环境 ......
爱心 不与人分享 善待他人，乐于帮助 ......
展望未来 ......(请自拟至少一点内容)
要求：1、必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，省略号部分适当发挥；
2、词数：80词左右；文章开头结尾已给出不计入总字数。
3、不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Hello, everyone. Back to the life in the last year, I think I have changed a lot and made great progress(进步) in some ways.
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Thanks for your listening!
10．（22-23八年级下·江苏扬州·阶段练习）要想获取知识，那么我们就离不开阅读。我们应该从小就培养良好的阅读习惯，把阅读作为终身的爱好。请以Reading is a good hobby为题目，根据所给提示，写一篇100字左右的英语短文。
提示：1、我喜爱阅读，每周大约花六小时读不同类型的书。
2、阅读对我们的帮助很大，我们从书中可以学到许多知识。比如，它们会教我们许多好的礼仪……（至少举一个好的礼仪的例子）
3、我对小说感兴趣，但是我最喜欢的是关于旅游方面的书。从这些书中，我可以欣赏到许多名胜古迹，如：中国的长城，英国的大本钟( Big Ben )等等。希望有朝一日，我能去参观这些地方。
4、阅读是一个好习惯。它既能帮助我放松，又能为我开启一个全新的世界。
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11．（22-23八年级下·江苏无锡·阶段练习）每年的10月18日是世界慈善日（Charity Day），2014 年你校“慈善一日捐”的主题是关爱我国的青少年儿童患者。请你以学生会的名义用英语写一份80词左右的倡议书。
内容要点如下：
1、越来越多的孩子因患病而上不起学；
2、他们没有足够的钱去看病；
3、每个孩子都应该保持健康，并且有接受教育的权利；
4、常言道，众人拾柴火焰高；
5、我们应该尽我们所能来帮助他们。例如：我们可以……，可以……；
6、我希望他们不久就能重返校园。
注意：
倡议书必须包括所有内容要点。要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
第5要点的内容请用2-3句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥；
倡议书开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear students,
In some parts of our country,
12．（22-23八年级下·江苏南通·阶段练习）假定你是Doris，作为学校的八年级学生会实践部一员，为了号召更多的同学参加劳动，增强劳动意识，你向七年级的同学介绍了你们在家务劳动和社会劳动方面做出的努力以及从中获得的感受。请你根据以下内容提示完成 “Tiny Action Great Happiness” 的倡议书。
注意：
1. 词数90左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数；
2. 倡议书须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使全文连贯、通顺；
3. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Tiny Action Great Happiness
Dear friends,
I am proud to be here to share what we’ve done with you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Hope you can join us!
Best wishes!
Doris
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参考答案：
1．例文
I’m so proud of myself
I’m proud of myself because I’m hard-working, courageous and confident. I always make myself better and I always tell myself I’m the best. I’m very important to my parents, my grandparents, my teachers, my classmates and my friends. Although I have no money, I can make them happy.
I’m sure they all love me and need me. I can do many things for them. In fact, everyone is very important. So we should be proud of ourselves.
One day, I was asked to give a speech at my school. I felt so nervous that I couldn’t sleep well at night. But I decided to try my best. I overcame my shyness, stood in front of the whole students and succeeded. I was so proud of myself.
Believe in yourself. You can do it. I believe I can be a better person.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据提示问题介绍让自己感到骄傲的人或物，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出对自己感到骄傲；
第二步，介绍对自己感到骄傲的原因，并举例说明；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①in fact事实上
②be proud of为……感到骄傲
③give a speech做演讲
[高分句型]
①I’m proud of myself because I’m hard-working, courageous and confident.(because引导的原因状语从句)
②Although I have no money, I can make them happy.(although引导的让步状语从句)
2．How to Behave Well
In order to build a civilized city, we students should try our best to behave well in the activities.
It’s good manners to say “Please” and “Thank you” and so on. We should never say dirty words. Our city should be kept clean every day. Don’t throw litter or spit. What’s more, we can go to school on foot or by bike. We should also obey traffic rules. When the traffic lights are red, we should stop. And we’d better not talk or laugh loudly in public. Be friendly to others and always ready to help the people in need. For example, when we are on the bus, we should give our seats to the old and the women with babies.
If everyone behaves well, our city will be more beautiful and more attractive.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇提纲作文，根据所给提示写一篇参赛短文，讲我们应该如何做到举止文明。因此要用第一人称we来写，时态用一般现在时，也可用到should等情态动词或祈使句。文章内容要包含所给提示。
2.例文点评：例文采用三段式，第一段提出总要求，第二段细化要求以及具体方式，第三段进行展望；用第一人称进行叙述，文章时态运用一般现在时；包含提示要点并举例，更加具体化。
3.高分亮点：
短语：in order to；try one’s best to do sth.；what’s more；obey traffic rules；be friendly to。
句型：if引导的条件状语从句； 动词原形开头引导的祈使句。
3．例文：
Be a Virtue Teenager
Teenagers are the future of our motherland, and also the symbol of our city. What should we do to become a virtue teenager of our city
At school, we should study hard and form good learning habits. In our spare time, we can do regular exercise to build up a good body. It's our duty to help parents do some housework at home and we should always be thankful for what our parents have done for us. Parents will be happier if we can communicate more with them. Sometimes, if we make mistakes, we'd better face and correct them timely. What's more, I suggest we obey the rules in public and don't speak loudly. Last but not least, keep in mind that safety is first.
In my opinion, we are supposed to do all of the above. I sincerely hope everyone can join us and try to be a virtue teenager.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文，以“Be a Virtue Teenager”为题，用英语写一篇倡议书，号召大家积极争做“美德少年”，并从学校、家庭、社会三方面谈谈自己的观点和做法。结合所给材料，可知主要考查一般现在时态，人称主要为第一人称，注意主谓一致问题。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用，写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
2.例文点评：本文结构紧凑，逻辑顺畅。首段开门见山，直接点明文章“争做美德少年”的主旨，第二段从学校、家庭以及社会三方面浅谈自己作“美德少年”的方法，最后一段总结全文，升华文章立意。另外文章语言简练，运用简单的句式结构将题目主要内容完整表述。
3.高分亮点：
短语：in our spare time；build up；be thankful fo；make mistake；last but not least；be supposed to。
句型：It+be+名词+不定式（it作形式主语）；if引导的条件状语从句。
4．例文：
How to be a good teenager
Good morning, everyone! I’m Tom from Sunshine Middle School. Today I am very happy to be here to give you a speech about how to be a good teenager.
Above all, to be a good teenager, behaving politely is very important. For example, when you are in a queue, you must be polite enough to wait for your turn. It is necessary for you to be helpful, too. Helping others is a good habit.
Next, you must listen carefully in class. As a good teenager, you must be good at studying. It is nice of you to work hard and listen carefully to teachers.
Third, you can enjoy yourselves by reading books and doing some voluntary work when you are free. Reading books can improve your knowledge. Doing some voluntary work can make you feel happy. It’s really nice to help others.
Last but not least, please stay away from computer games. Playing too many computer games does harm to your health. Moreover, it’s also bad for your eyes!
That’s all. Thanks for listening!
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“如何成为一个优秀的青少年”为题写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称以第二人称为主。本文分为六段式：第一段和最后一段都已给出；第二段到第五段分别从行为举止，学习时间，闲暇时间等方面进行描述。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
5．例文
I am happy to share my experience of helping others
As a student, I keep growing in my study and life, and also experience all kinds of happiness. This time I want to share my experience of helping others. It was a Friday morning. On my way to school, I met a blind man. I saw him crossing the road, so I went to help him at once. Finally, he thanked me a lot. Although I was late in the end, I was still very happy. Because helping others makes me feel good.
Last but not least, I think we should help others more. Helping others is helping yourself.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。首先补充题目，从学习之乐、交友之乐、劳动之乐、运动之乐、爱好之乐、旅游之乐、助人之乐、环保之乐等中选其一，然后和大家分享你快乐成长的一段经历。
2.写作指导：本文在叙述经历时，用一般过去时，介绍从这段经历里学到的东西用一般现在时。人称以第一人称为主。写作时确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误，正确运用好两种时态。
6．例文
Dear chairperson,
I would like to recommend Xiao Ming as Communist Youth League candidate. He is the monitor in our class. He is very kind and always ready to help others. He always takes part in some volunteer activities, such as being a volunteer in protecting the environment, helping old people and so on. He is also generous to others. In public, he follows the rules, especially the traffic rules.
He loves our environment. Now the environmental problem is getting worse. So he usually sorts the garbage before throwing it away and gives old clothes to the recycling agency. He hopes that everyone takes action together to protect the environment.
I think Xiao Ming is a good candidate for Communist Youth League. I hope you agree with me.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封书信作文，为推荐信；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，可适当发挥，注意语句通顺，条理清楚。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，介绍想推荐谁为候选人；
第二步，从品质，行为习惯及生活方式等方面介绍想推荐的人；
第三步，书写结语，希望对方能够同意。
[亮点词汇]
①be ready to do sth准备好做某事
②take part in参加
③take action采取行动
④and so on等等
[高分句型]
①He hopes that everyone takes action together to protect the environment.（that引导宾语从句）
②So he usually sorts the garbage before throwing it away and gives old clothes to the recycling agency.（and连接的并列结构）
7．I am Li Hua's classmate and I've known that he and his parents often go to the community centre to do some voluntary work. His father is a computer engineer. He's good at repairing things. His mother is a manager of a company. She likes DIY. Li Hua is a middle school student. He plays chess well.
Last Saturday, his family went there again and did something for others. His father checked and fixed computers for neighbours. His mother made rice dumplings for the elderly people there. Li Hua taught some primary school students to play chess.
I think what his family do is meaningful. I also want to be a volunteer, like Li Hua. I will clean the house for the old people.
As we know, helping others is helping ourselves, it can also bring happiness to us all.
【详解】1.题干解读：本题要求以李华同学的身份，介绍一下李华一家周末经常去社区参加志愿者活动的情况以及上周六他们一家去社区的具体活动情况，并表达自己对李华一家的做法的看法。
2.写作指导：根据所给要点提示，短文应用第三人称形式，经常去社区的活动情况用一般现在时态，上周六的活动用一般过去时态。表述自己的看法用第一人称，用一般现在时态。文章可分四段来写，第一段介绍李华一家的职业及爱好；第二段描述上周六他们全家在社区所做的志愿服务活动；第三段表明自己对李华一家行为的看法。最后可以通过发表感想来点明主旨，升华主题。注意条理清楚，层次分明。
8．例文
Dear John,
I’m glad you will come to China. We Chinese people are kind and friendly. You don’t need to worry about it.
If possible, you can prepare a small gift, like a key ring or a hat with symbols of your country. It’s not necessary to buy anything expensive. Also, you can help with some housework, such as washing the dishes, making the bed. The family members will be very grateful for that. In addition, I suggest you learn a little Chinese that means “Nice to meet you”, “Thank you” and so on, which may paly a useful role during your stay. What’s more, read some books about Chinese customs before coming here. Try not to make any misunderstandings.
I hope you will enjoy your stay in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一封电子邮件。针对John的问题，提出对应的建议。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时。分为三段式：第一段先安慰对方；第二段就如何与住宿家庭友好相处提出建议；最后一段表达自己的祝愿。注意保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
9．One possible version:
Hello, everyone. Back to the life in the last year, I think I have changed a lot and made great progress in many ways.
First, in the past I seldom read books. I used to spend most of my time playing computers games. Now I work harder than before and find it interesting to do some reading because good books help me relax after a busy day.
Second, I used to be rude and drop litter everywhere. I sometimes shouted loudly or pushed in before others in public places. Now, I can behave politely in public and I often give my seat to someone in need on the bus. I also try my best to protect our environment. I often help clean the park with my friends.
Third, I didn’t know how to care about others in the past and never shared things with others. But now I am kind and helpful. I offer to help my blind neighbors and donate all my pocket money to Project Hope. I have made up my mind to be a volunteer in the future. I hope to do some charity work to help more people in need. I’m sure I will do better and better in Grade 9.
Thanks for listening!
【详解】题干解读：题目要求根据表格内容写一篇发言稿；要求包括表格中所有的相关信息，并进行适当发挥。
写作指导：此作文时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主；采用第一人称口吻。此作文可采用5段落格式，第一段：开门见山，描述自己取得的进步和变化；第二段：描述在学习方面的改变；第三段：描述在礼仪方面的改变；第四段：描述自己在爱心方面的改变以及对未来的展望；第五段：表示感谢。
10．例文
Reading is a good hobby
Reading is a good hobby. I love reading and spend about six hours a week reading different kinds of books. Reading is of great help to us. We can learn a lot from books. They can teach us a lot of good manners, for example, I should respect the elder. I am interested in novels, but what I like most are books about travel. From these books, I can enjoy many places of interest, such as the Great Wall of China, Big Ben in England and so on. I hope I can visit these places one day. Reading is a good habit. It not only helps me relax, but also opens up a whole new world for me. So I will take reading as a lifelong hobby.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于材料作文写作，要求按照所给的要点提示写一篇短文，介绍阅读的好处。注意写作时要点要齐全，同时也可进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一、三人称来叙述；时态采用一般现在时；文章开头已给出，写作时，注意承接上文，根据要点提示具体介绍阅读对我们的帮助以及我通过阅读获得的知识；文中一定要包含题干中列出的所有要点；可以运用一些短语和常用句型为文章增添色彩；注意单词书写的准确度，语法运用的准确度，上下文注意连接的流畅度，以及逻辑合理。
11．Dear students,
In some parts of our country, more and more students can’t go to school because of the illness. They don’t have enough money to go to hospital. Every child should keep healthy and they should have the right to receive education. Just as the saying goes, “many hands make light work”. We should try our best to help them. For example, we can donate our pocket money to them. We can also send them some clothes or books. We hope they can return to school soon.
【详解】试题分析：这是一篇提纲性作文，关于“慈善一日捐”的倡议，要围绕提示语来展开写作，即1、越来越多的孩子因患病而上不起学；2、他们没有足够的钱去看病；3、每个孩子都应该保持健康，并且有接受教育的权利；4、常言道，众人拾柴火焰高；5、我们应该尽我们所能来帮助他们。例如：我们可以……，可以……；6、我希望他们不久就能重返校园。不可丢掉要点。提纲虽然已经列好，但第五条需要我们自己去充实，让它变得完整、合理，内容丰富，这就需要我们做适当的发挥。另外，写作时，还需注意语句间的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。
【亮点说明】作文中谚语的使用，“Just as the saying goes, “many hands make light work”.为作文增添了色彩，作文要留有适当发挥的余地，避免作文千篇一律。
考点：提纲类作文。
12．Dear friends,
I’m proud to be here to share what we’ve done with you.
Above all, helping parents at home makes us feel happy. We often tidy up our rooms, do some washing, and prepare breakfast for family members. Also, it’s meaningful to offer our support to the society. We volunteer to separate waste into different groups in our community. We send some books and clothes to the poor children as well. We offer to help the elderly at the weekends.
Our group members have decided to do something to make a difference. We’ll help my parents with housework as much as we can. What’s more, our members even plan to plant more trees to improve the environment. Through our tiny actions, all of us can be richer and happier in our life.
Hope you can join us!
Best wishes!
Doris
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封倡议书；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“家务劳动、社会劳动以及计划和感受”几方面提出倡议；
第三步，书写结语。表达自己的期望。
[亮点词汇]
①Above all最重要的是
②tidy up整理
③decide to do sth.决定做某事
[高分句型]
①Also, it’s meaningful to offer our support to the society. （it作形式主语）
②We often tidy up our rooms, do some washing, and prepare breakfast for family members.（and的并列句）
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