Unit 7 It’s raining 单元话题写作练习（含解析）人教版七年级英语下册

Unit 7 It’s raining!单元话题写作练习 2023-2024学年人教新目标七年级英语下册
写作主题：描绘天气
一、话题分析
本单元的话题为"描述天气及正在进行的,主要要求学生们能用英语描述人们在
不同天气情况下正在做的事情,并且能熟练使用不同的表示天气状况的词汇。
二、写作步骤：
1.文章通常分为三个部分：
第一步，交代背景并引出话题；
第二步，逐一具体介绍正在进行着不同的活动
第三步，书写结语。总结感受
2.人称：第一/三人称。
3.时态：一般现在时、现在进行时
三、句型积累：
1、How's it going
2、I'm on a vacation in...
3、It's...
4、My brother is...
5、My sister is...
6、My father is
7、My mother is...
8、I'm...
9、I am swimming in a river and my best friend Tom is taking photos.（and连接并列句）
10、What a beautiful white world it is! (感叹句)
11、I like rainy days because we can have a good time staying at home together. (because引导的原因状语从句)
一、写作训练
1．假设今天是周日，现在是下午五点，外面正在下雨。你和你的家人正在做什么呢？请你根据下面的提示，写一篇不少于60词的英语短文来描述你们的活动。
提示：
1.What are your family doing
2.What do you think of rainy days
要求：
1.语句通顺，符合逻辑；
2.包含提示中的所有内容，可适当发挥。
Today is Sunday. It’s five o’clock in the afternoon now. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2．假如你是魏华，你正在加拿大的姑妈家度假。请根据下表信息，给你上海的同学李涛写一封信，不少于60词。
Where Weather Activities Feelings
Canada cold; snowing visit my aunt; ski; make a snowman relaxed; have a good time
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3．在夏季，你的家乡天气怎么样？人们在这样的天气里都在做什么？请写一篇介绍你们家乡天气的短文。
注意事项：
(1)80词左右。
(2)意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范。
(3)请勿在文中使用真实的姓名。
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4．现在是晚上八点钟，外面正在下雨。假如你是李梅，你正给你的朋友写一张明信片，介绍下今天的天气，你和你的家人正在做什么以及你的感受。
要求：语法规范，语句连贯，60个词左右。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Mei
5．假如你是李敏，你的美国笔友Danny告诉你，他很喜欢中国，想了解中国的四季情况以及人们在不同季节喜欢从事的活动。请根据以下提示，给Danny写一封信，介绍有关情况。
提示：
1.季节和月份；
2.不同季节的天气状况；
3.人们在不同季节喜欢从事的活动。
要求：
1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.词数：不少于60词。
Dear Danny,
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Yours,
Li Min
6．请根据下面的提示信息写一篇短文。
提示：
1.现在是周六上午10点；
2.天气晴朗；
3.你和家人正在公园里；
4.描述你和家人正在干什么。
要求：
1.60词左右；
2.可适当发挥想象。
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7．假设你和你的三个朋友John、Kate、Paul在四个不同城市，请你根据表格所提供的信息完成短文。词数：60左右。
要求：必须包括表格内的所有信息。
Name Place Weather Clothes Activities
John London foggy a shirt and pants eat in the restaurant
Kate Sydney sunny，hot a T shirt and shorts play beach volleyball
Paul Moscow snowy a coat and a scarf make a snowman
I Shanghai windy，cold … …
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参考答案：
1．例文
Today is Sunday. It’s five o’clock in the afternoon now. It’s raining outside, and all of my family are at home. My father is using the computer to do his work in his study. My grandparents are playing chess in the living room. My brother Dale is making a model plane in his room. He likes making things very much. My mother is cooking in the kitchen for us. And I’m watching TV with my sister Susan in the bedroom.
I like rainy days because we can have a good time staying at home together.
【总体分析】① 题材：本文为材料作文，描述自己的家人正在做的事情；
② 时态：现在进行时；
③ 提示：写作要点已经给出，考生不要遗漏要点；可适当添加语句，使文章连贯。
【写作步骤】第一步，描述家庭成员们各自正在做的事情；
第二步，描述自己对下雨天的看法。
【亮点词汇】① rain下雨
② all所有的
③ play chess下棋
④ very much非常
⑤ watch TV看电视
⑥ because因为
【高分句型】① My father is using the computer to do his work in his study. (use sth. to do使用某物做某事)
② I like rainy days because we can have a good time staying at home together. (because引导的原因状语从句)
2．
Dear Li Tao,
How is it going with you I’m visiting my aunt in Canada. It’s winter here now. It’s cold and it’s snowing really hard. What a beautiful white world it is! The weather here is just right for playing with snow. So I am skiing and making a snowman with my cousins. We are having a good time in the snow. We are really relaxed. What’s the weather like in Shanghai Are you studying hard or having fun
Please write back to me soon.
Yours,
Wei Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，属于书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“现在进行时” ；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中所给出的词汇或短语，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，向同学问好，说明自己所在的地方及活动；
第二步，阐明天气情况，正在进行的活动及内心的感受；
第三步，询问同学所在地的天气及同学的活动情况，并请他尽快回信。
[亮点词汇]
① snow hard 下雪下得大
② be just right for 正适合……
③ really 确实
[高分句型]
What a beautiful white world it is! (感叹句)
3．One possible version:
It’s summer now. The weather in my hometown is very hot and rainy. So it is very wet. People are wearing sunglasses and cool clothes. In the park, my classmates and I are having a good time. Some girls are singing and dancing. Some boys are playing soccer. I am swimming in a river and my best friend Tom is taking photos. A little boy is eating an ice cream.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中介绍家乡的天气，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“介绍家乡天气”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“夏季家乡天气怎么样和人们在这样的天气里都在做什么”两个方面重点介绍。
[亮点词汇]
①have a good time玩得开心
②take photos拍照
[高分句型]
I am swimming in a river and my best friend Tom is taking photos.（and连接并列句）
4．例文
Dear Jim,
It’s 8:00 pm. And it is raining heavily outside. We all stay at home. My grandparents are watching TV. They are laughing happily. My father is reading newspaper in the living room. My mother is doing the dishes in the kitchen. What am I doing Of course, I am writing to you. We all happy and relaxed at this moment. What will you do on a rainy day
Yours,
Li Mei
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。写信给Jim告知家人的活动。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用现在进行时。先介绍此时的天气，紧接着描述家人的活动信息，最后表达自己的感受。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
5．例文
Dear Danny,
There are four seasons in a year in China. They are spring, summer, autumn and winter. March, April and May are spring months. It’s warm and windy. We can fly kites in spring. June, July and August are summer months. The weather is very hot. We like to swim in the river. September, October and November are autumn months. The weather is cool and cloudy. We like to pick apples on the farm. December, January and February are winter months. It’s cold and snowy. We like to play in the snow.
How is the weather in America What do you like to do Can you write to me soon
Yours,
Li Min
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。要求向笔友Danny介绍中国的四季情况以及人们在不同季节喜欢从事的活动。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文要分别介绍中国的四季和相应的月份，介绍不同季节的天气状况以及人们在不同季节喜欢从事的活动。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
6．参考范文
It’s Saturday today. Now it’s 10:00 a.m. The weather is sunny today. I am in the park with my family. My father is taking photos of trees and flowers. My mother is talking with my aunt under a tree. My sister is playing with my cousin. I’m reading an interesting book near the lake. We’re all having a great time.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示信息进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来介绍，时态用一般现在时和现在进行时。作文要分别介绍时间，天气，和家人正在公园里做什么。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
7． I have three friends—they're John, Kate and Paul. John is in London. It's foggy today. John is wearing a shirt and pants and he is eating in the restaurant now. Kate is in Sydney and it's sunny and hot there. She is wearing a T- shirt and a pair of shorts. And she is playing beach volleyball with her friends now. Paul is in Moscow and it's snowing and cold there. Paul is wearing a coat and a scarf and he is making a snowman with his brother.
I'm in Shanghai and it's winter now. So it's really cold but it's not snowy. It's windy. I am wearing a coat and a pair of gloves. And I'm playing in the park with my family.
【详解】题干解读：这是一篇材料作文。要求根据表格信息完成作文。写作时要注意语句通顺，语意连贯，紧扣要点，注意句子之间的连接与过渡，要注意涵盖所给提示。
例文点评：例文采用两段式；时态综合运用一般现在时和现在进行时；将题目要求的要点都很好地融入到文章当中。
高分亮点：
短语：play with；a pair of等。
句型：So it's really cold but it's not snowy. 使用了so引导的结果状语从句以及but连接的并列句。
John is wearing a shirt and pants and he is eating in the restaurant now. 使用了and连接的并列句。
【点睛】首先认真审题，看清文章的要求和要点；其次，理顺自己的行文思路；再次紧扣要点，注意句子之间的连接与过渡；最后要仔细检查是否有单词拼写错误和标点的误用等，还要注意是否出现语法错误，有无重复遗漏，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。