2024年高考英语作文考前冲刺：投稿征文
Dear _____________，
I'd like to ask/invite you to write an article for某媒体某栏目， which provides a nice platform for某媒体受众to do sth. It carries articles written by XXX concerning Chinese cultures.
Would you please write something about XXX You can write anything relevant so long as it's interesting and informative.400 words would be fine.
结尾1:If you are interested, you are supposed to subscribe your article by Sep.10.
结尾2:Could we have your article before Sep.10 I'm looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.
Yours,
Li Hua
【常用词汇】
1.旨在；以......为目的 be aimed at
2.出版 publish
3.文章的要求 requirements of the article
4.如果 on condition that
5.限制在......词 be limited to about ... words
6.是很受......欢迎的 be very popular with...
7.任何有关的事情 anything relevant to
8.大约120字就可以了 About 120 words would be fine
9.在......之前提交你的文章 submit your article before
10.体育专栏 sports column
11.娱乐专栏 entertainment column
12. 栏目特点 characteristics of the column
13.语言风格 language style
14.改编自 be adapted from
15.延长截止日期 extend the deadline
【常用句型】
1. I would like to invite sb to write an article for...
2. I’d like to ask you to writr an article for our school’s English newspaper.
3.Could you/Would you please write something concerning your school life
4. Any student who is interested is welcome to participate
5.And here are some relevant detail about the articles we are eager for .
6.它携带外国学生写的关于他们家文化的文章。It carries articles written by foreign students concerning the culture of their country .
7.这篇文章应该在400字以内。The article is supposed to be within 400 words .
8.我们想知道在下周之前你是否完稿。We wonder if it is practicable to have it before next week.
9.你最好下星期日把你的文章发送给我，词数约120个词就好。You’d better send your article to me next Sunday and about 120 words would be fine .
10.期待您方便时尽快答复。Looking forward to your reply at your convenience .
11.期待您尽快确定。Looking forward to your confirmation soon .
Passage 1
你校英文报正在举办主题为“经典作品进校园”的征文活动。请你以“Classics and Me”为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 作品名称；
2. 阅读经历；
3. 对你的影响。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Classics and Me
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Passage 2
你校最近组织了一场关于垃圾分类的宣传活动。请你用英语写一篇报道，向校英文报投稿，内容包括：
1.活动目的；
2.活动反响；
3.你的收获。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Campaign for Garbage Classification
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Passage 3
假定你是李华，劳动节到来之际，你做了关于“The Benefits of Doing Housework”的校园采访。请你就此次采访写一篇报道，向校英文报投稿。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The Benefits of Doing Housework
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Passage 4
假定你是李华，为了响应传统文化进校园的号召，你校国际部正面向全校学生征集活动方案。请你给负责人George写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.你的方案；
2.说明理由。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear George,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 5
假定你是某中学学生李华，为增强学生保护野生动物的意识和提高其积极性，你校将举办一次以“保护野生动物”为主题的英语征文比赛。请你以Protecting the Wild Animals为题，写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 保护野生动物的重要性；
2. 提出合理建议(三点)；
3. 发出呼吁。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Protecting the Wild Animals
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Passage 6
同普通话一样，地方方言也是我们中华文化的重要组成部分。请你以“Protect And Pass On Our Dialects”为题写一篇短文向你校英语报文化专栏投稿，内容包括：
1. 地方方言的发展现状;
2. 地方方言的重要作用;
3. 呼吁大家保护地方方言。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇：普通话 mandarin
Protect And Pass On Our Dialects
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Passage 7
你校英文报正在举办“我的书桌情怀”主题征文活动，请你写一篇短文投稿，介绍你书桌上对你而言有重要意义的物品，内容包括：
1. 物品介绍；
2. 物品意义。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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Passage 8
假定你是李华, 今天你校组织高三学生参观了市博物馆举办的“中国航天成就展”。请就此次活动用英语写一篇题为A Visit to the Achievement Expo of China Aerospace的短文，向学校的 Campus Life Monthly投稿，分享此次活动。内容包括：
1. 参加人员；
2. 活动内容；
3. 个人感想。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
A Visit to the Achievement Expo of China Aerospace
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Passage 9
假定你是李华，你校英语报正在举办题为“The Teacher Who Inspired Me”的征文活动，请你积极投稿。内容包括：
1.简述老师激励的事例 ；
2.你的感想。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右 ；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The Teacher Who Inspired Me
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Passage 10
假设你是李华，你校英文报新增了“寻访华夏”的栏目，正在征集以“My Trip to______”为主题的文章， 请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：
1.旅行目的地简介；
2.旅行中最难忘的时刻；
3.旅行带来的收获。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2024年高考英语作文考前冲刺：投稿征文
Dear _____________，
I'd like to ask/invite you to write an article for某媒体某栏目， which provides a nice platform for某媒体受众to do sth. It carries articles written by XXX concerning Chinese cultures.
Would you please write something about XXX You can write anything relevant so long as it's interesting and informative.400 words would be fine.
结尾1:If you are interested, you are supposed to subscribe your article by Sep.10.
结尾2:Could we have your article before Sep.10 I'm looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.
Yours,
Li Hua
【常用词汇】
1.旨在；以......为目的 be aimed at
2.出版 publish
3.文章的要求 requirements of the article
4.如果 on condition that
5.限制在......词 be limited to about ... words
6.是很受......欢迎的 be very popular with...
7.任何有关的事情 anything relevant to
8.大约120字就可以了 About 120 words would be fine
9.在......之前提交你的文章 submit your article before
10.体育专栏 sports column
11.娱乐专栏 entertainment column
12. 栏目特点 characteristics of the column
13.语言风格 language style
14.改编自 be adapted from
15.延长截止日期 extend the deadline
【常用句型】
1. I would like to invite sb to write an article for...
2. I’d like to ask you to writr an article for our school’s English newspaper.
3.Could you/Would you please write something concerning your school life
4. Any student who is interested is welcome to participate
5.And here are some relevant detail about the articles we are eager for .
6.它携带外国学生写的关于他们家文化的文章。It carries articles written by foreign students concerning the culture of their country .
7.这篇文章应该在400字以内。The article is supposed to be within 400 words .
8.我们想知道在下周之前你是否完稿。We wonder if it is practicable to have it before next week.
9.你最好下星期日把你的文章发送给我，词数约120个词就好。You’d better send your article to me next Sunday and about 120 words would be fine .
10.期待您方便时尽快答复。Looking forward to your reply at your convenience .
11.期待您尽快确定。Looking forward to your confirmation soon .
Passage 1
你校英文报正在举办主题为“经典作品进校园”的征文活动。请你以“Classics and Me”为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 作品名称；
2. 阅读经历；
3. 对你的影响。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Classics and Me
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【答案】 Classics and Me
Among the wealth of classics, “The Analects” holds a special place in my heart. Its timeless philosophy has an impact across generations.
My experience with it started one afternoon in the library. The book’s simple beauty captured my attention. Settling into a cozy spot, I leafed through the pages, feeling like I had unearthed a treasure meant only for me. What secured this experience was how Confucius’ teachings echoed in the quiet of the library, sparking deep thought. Meanwhile, amused by the wisdom, I found myself laughing occasionally.
This encounter with “The Analects” was more than just reading a classic; it was an introduction to deep philosophical inquiry and understanding of human virtues.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校英文报正在举办主题为“经典作品进校园”的征文活动，要求考生以“Classics and Me”为题写一篇短文投稿，介绍所阅读作品的名称、阅读经历以及对自己的影响。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
影响：impact→influence
引起……的注意：capture one’s attention→draw one’s attention
温暖舒适的：cozy→comfortable and warm
偶尔：occasionally→from time to time
2. 句式拓展
独立的简单句改为复合句
原句：Among the wealth of classics, “The Analects” holds a special place in my heart. Its timeless philosophy has an impact across generations.
拓展句：Among the wealth of classics, “The Analects” holds a special place in my heart, whose timeless philosophy has an impact across generations.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Settling into a cozy spot, I leafed through the pages, feeling like I had unearthed a treasure meant only for me.(使用了现在分词作状语、过去分词作后置定语)
【高分句型2】What secured this experience was how Confucius’ teachings echoed in the quiet of the library, sparking deep thought. (使用了What引导主语从句、how引导表语从句、现在分词作状语)
Passage 2
你校最近组织了一场关于垃圾分类的宣传活动。请你用英语写一篇报道，向校英文报投稿，内容包括：
1.活动目的；
2.活动反响；
3.你的收获。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Campaign for Garbage Classification
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【答案】 A Campaign for Garbage Classification
Our school recently conducted a publicity campaign for garbage classification, aiming to raise the awareness of environmental protection among students and emphasize the importance of sorting waste to reduce pollution and promote a greener environment.
The response to the campaign was positive, with a large number of students actively participating in various related events. Many students expressed their commitment to continue practicing the habit of waste sorting both at school and in their daily lives.
Through the campaign, I have realized the significant impact that small individual actions, such as proper garbage classification, can have on the environment. It has taught me the importance of personal responsibility in preserving our planet.
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生就学校最近组织的一场垃圾分类的宣传活动，用英语写一篇报道，向校英文报投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
执行，实施：conduct→carry out
重要性：importance→significance
许多的：a large number of→a variety of
意识到：realize→be aware of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Our school recently conducted a publicity campaign for garbage classification, aiming to raise the awareness of environmental protection among students and emphasize the importance of sorting waste to reduce pollution and promote a greener environment.
拓展句：Our school recently conducted a publicity campaign for garbage classification, which aimed to raise the awareness of environmental protection among students and emphasize the importance of sorting waste to reduce pollution and promote a greener environment.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
The response to the campaign was positive, with a large number of students actively participating in various related events.（运用了with的复合结构）
[高分句型2]
Through the campaign, I have realized the significant impact that small individual actions, such as proper garbage classification, can have on the environment.（运用了that引导定语从句）
Passage 3
假定你是李华，劳动节到来之际，你做了关于“The Benefits of Doing Housework”的校园采访。请你就此次采访写一篇报道，向校英文报投稿。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The Benefits of Doing Housework
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【答案】 The Benefits of Doing Housework
With the Labor Day holiday approaching, I interviewed my fellow students about their opinions on the benefits of doing housework.
According to my interviews, I found that the benefits of doing housework include improving self-discipline, emotional stability, and increase cooperation skills. Most students also pointed out that doing housework can help them learn about responsibility and understanding the value of hard work.
In conclusion, the benefits of doing housework are not only apparent in the physical labor, but also in the mental and emotional aspects of our lives. I highly recommend everyone to take some time to do housework.
【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生就自己做的关于“The Benefits of Doing Housework”的校园采访写一篇报道，向校英文报投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
临近：approach→draw near/around the corner
看法，观点：opinion→perspective
明显的：apparent→evident
建议：recommend→advise/suggest
2.句型拓展
同义句
原句： I highly recommend everyone to take some time to do housework.
拓展句： I highly recommend that everyone should take some time to do housework.
【点睛】【高分句型1】With the Labor Day holiday approaching, I interviewed my fellow students about their opinions on the benefits of doing housework.（运用了with复合结构）
【高分句型2】According to my interviews, I found that the benefits of doing housework include improving
self-discipline, emotional stability, and increase cooperation skills. （运用了that引导的宾语从句）
Passage 4
假定你是李华，为了响应传统文化进校园的号召，你校国际部正面向全校学生征集活动方案。请你给负责人George写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.你的方案；
2.说明理由。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear George,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear George,
In response to the initiative of bringing traditional culture into our campus, I propose organizing a cultural festival dedicated to showcasing various aspects of Chinese heritage. This festival would include workshops on traditional crafts, performances of folk dances, and exhibitions of ancient artworks.
The reason for this proposal is two-fold. Firstly, it provides an excellent platform for students to learn about and appreciate the rich cultural traditions of China. Secondly, it fosters a deeper understanding of diverse cultures among our international students.
I believe that this festival will not only enrich our campus life but also promote cultural exchange and understanding. Thank you for considering my proposal, and I look forward to hearing your thoughts.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给负责人George写一封邮件，内容主要是学校国际部面向全校学生征集的响应传统文化进校园的号召的活动方案。
【详解】1.词汇积累
各种各样的：various→all kinds of
首先：firstly→to begin with
优秀的：excellent→outstanding
感谢：thank→appreciate
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：In response to the initiative of bringing traditional culture into our campus, I propose organizing a cultural festival dedicated to showcasing various aspects of Chinese heritage.
拓展句：In response to the initiative of bringing traditional culture into our campus, I propose organizing a cultural festival which is dedicated to showcasing various aspects of Chinese heritage.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
In response to the initiative of bringing traditional culture into our campus, I propose organizing a cultural festival dedicated to showcasing various aspects of Chinese heritage.（运用了动名词作宾语，过去分词作后置定语）
[高分句型2]
I believe that this festival will not only enrich our campus life but also promote cultural exchange and understanding.（运用了that引导宾语从句）
Passage 5
假定你是某中学学生李华，为增强学生保护野生动物的意识和提高其积极性，你校将举办一次以“保护野生动物”为主题的英语征文比赛。请你以Protecting the Wild Animals为题，写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 保护野生动物的重要性；
2. 提出合理建议(三点)；
3. 发出呼吁。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Protecting the Wild Animals
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【答案】 Protecting the Wild Animals
As we know, wild animals are important for us. They are more than beautiful or a source of food. Every animal has its place in the balance of nature. But nowadays, many wild animals are facing the danger of extinction. Therefore, it is high time for us to take effective measures to protect them.
First of all, raise public awareness of animal protection. Only by realizing its importance can people develop a sense of responsibility. In addition, national parks should be set up as wild life reserves, where animals can live freely and safely. Last but not least, the government should pass some laws to forbid any hunting of wild animals.
Let’s join our hands to protect the wild animals!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇短文投稿，参加以“保护野生动物”为主题的英语征文比赛。
【详解】1.词汇积累
重要的：important→significant
保护：protect→preserve
此外：in addition→furthermore
禁止：forbid→prohibit
2.句式转换
简单句变复合句
原句：Therefore, it is high time for us to take effective measures to protect them.
拓展句：Therefore, it is high time that we should take effective measures to protect them.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As we know, wild animals are important for us.（运用了as引导非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Only by realizing its importance can people develop a sense of responsibility.（运用了部分倒装句）
Passage 6
同普通话一样，地方方言也是我们中华文化的重要组成部分。请你以“Protect And Pass On Our Dialects”为题写一篇短文向你校英语报文化专栏投稿，内容包括：
1. 地方方言的发展现状;
2. 地方方言的重要作用;
3. 呼吁大家保护地方方言。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇：普通话 mandarin
Protect And Pass On Our Dialects
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【答案】
Protect And Pass On Our Dialects
Recent years have witnessed that fewer and fewer young people are capable of speaking their dialects. Dialects are facing challenges and losing ground gradually.
While mandarin is crucial for most Chinese people, the significance of local dialects is undeniable. Actually, not only are dialects communication tools, but they also play a very important role in cultural heritage, representing our roots and history. Furthermore, it is dialects that contribute to the diversity of cultures in different regions.
Therefore, it is high time that dialects should be preserved so that they can be heard by the next generations. Let’s embrace and celebrate the diversity of our dialects, ensuring their survival for generations to come.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“Protect And Pass On Our Dialects”为题写一篇短文向你校英语报文化专栏投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
重要的：crucial→vital
无可争辩的：undeniable→incontestable
庆祝：celebrate→observe
确保：ensure→make sure
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Recent years have witnessed that fewer and fewer young people are capable of speaking their dialects. Dialects are facing challenges and losing ground gradually.
拓展句：Dialects are facing challenges and losing ground gradually because recent years have witnessed that fewer and fewer young people are capable of speaking their dialects.
【点睛】[高分句型1] While mandarin is crucial for most Chinese people, the significance of local dialects is undeniable. (运用了while引导让步状语从句)
[高分句型2] Let’s embrace and celebrate the diversity of our dialects, ensuring their survival for generations to come. (运用了现在分词作状语)
Passage 7
你校英文报正在举办“我的书桌情怀”主题征文活动，请你写一篇短文投稿，介绍你书桌上对你而言有重要意义的物品，内容包括：
1. 物品介绍；
2. 物品意义。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案】
My desk has accompanied me for many years, and some of the items on it do have special meanings for me.
Of all the things on my desk, the clock on the left side is the most meaningful for me. It is an obvious reminder of the saying: Time and tide wait for no man. Whenever I want to be lazy, the sound of the clock tells me to value time. Besides, the bookshelf in the middle indicates the power of knowledge. The books, whether textbooks or extracurricular ones, satisfy my curiosity, offer me excellent stories and enrich my life. I can’t imagine how boring my life would be without them.
I hope my desk will always be a part of my life, witness my progress and lead me to a successful life.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇短文投稿，介绍你书桌上对你而言有重要意义的物品。
【详解】1.词汇积累
想象：imagine→picture
满足：satisfy→meet
明显：obvious→clear
此外：besides→in addition
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Of all the things on my desk, the clock on the left side is the most meaningful for me. It is an obvious reminder of the saying: Time and tide wait for no man.
拓展句：Of all the things on my desk, the clock on the left side is the most meaningful for me because it is an obvious reminder of the saying: Time and tide wait for no man.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Whenever I want to be lazy, the sound of the clock tells me to value time. (运用了whenever引导时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] I hope my desk will always be a part of my life, witness my progress and lead me to a successful life. (运用了省略that的宾语从句)
Passage 8
假定你是李华, 今天你校组织高三学生参观了市博物馆举办的“中国航天成就展”。请就此次活动用英语写一篇题为A Visit to the Achievement Expo of China Aerospace的短文，向学校的 Campus Life Monthly投稿，分享此次活动。内容包括：
1. 参加人员；
2. 活动内容；
3. 个人感想。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
A Visit to the Achievement Expo of China Aerospace
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【答案】 A Visit to the Achievement Expo of China Aerospace
Today’s trip to the City Museum is really a memorable experience and this will been graved in my mind forever.
All senior 3 students visited an exhibition themed on “Achievements of China Aerospace”. First, we attended informative lectures and watched extremely exciting videos of rocket launching, which helped us to get deeper insights into China Aerospace. Then came the highlight, experiencing thrilling and funny spacewalks in almost zero gravity.
Amazed by the outstanding achievements and touched by the spirit of China Aerospace experts, I was soon lost in deep thought. I have made up my mind to apply myself to study so that I can make contributions to our country like them one day.
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇题为A Visit to the Achievement Expo of China Aerospace的短文，向学校的 Campus Life Monthly投稿，分享此次活动。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
演讲：lecture→speech
出色的：outstanding→excellent
难忘的：memorable→unforgettable
决定：make up one’s mind→decide/be determined
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Today’s trip to the City Museum is really a memorable experience and this will been graved in my mind forever.
拓展句：Today’s trip to the City Museum is really a memorable experience, which will been graved in my mind forever.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] First, we attended informative lectures and watched extremely exciting videos of rocket launching, which helped us to get deeper insights into China Aerospace. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] I have made up my mind to apply myself to study so that I can make contributions to our country like them one day. (运用了so that引导目的状语从句)
Passage 9
假定你是李华，你校英语报正在举办题为“The Teacher Who Inspired Me”的征文活动，请你积极投稿。内容包括：
1.简述老师激励的事例 ；
2.你的感想。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右 ；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The Teacher Who Inspired Me
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【答案】
The Teacher Who Inspired Me
In the process of my growth, the teacher who inspired me most is Ms. Li, a considerate and diligent teacher.
First and foremost, her serious attitude towards teaching inspired me to study harder and harder. What’s more, Ms. Li helped a lot in my English learning. When I went to high school, I found it hard to remember so many English words and felt upset. Luckily, Ms. Li. related to my situation and taught me practical and precious learning methods. Besides, she told me although life is always full of ups and downs, we should be confident and positive.
Now, I believe there is always a way out if I face the difficult situation bravely.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校英语报正在举办题为“激励我的老师”的征文活动，要求考生按照要求积极投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
过程：process→ course
激励：inspire→ motivate
体贴的：considerate→ thoughtful
勤勉的：diligent→ industrious
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：First and foremost, her serious attitude towards teaching inspired me to study harder and harder.
拓展句：First and foremost, it was her serious attitude towards teaching that inspired me to study harder and harder.
【点睛】【高分句型1】In the process of my growth, the teacher who inspired me most is Ms. Li, a considerate and diligent teacher.（运用了who引导的限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】When I went to high school, I found it hard to remember so many English words and felt upset. （运用了When引导的时间状语从句）
Passage 10
假设你是李华，你校英文报新增了“寻访华夏”的栏目，正在征集以“My Trip to______”为主题的文章， 请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：
1.旅行目的地简介；
2.旅行中最难忘的时刻；
3.旅行带来的收获。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】 My Trip to Sanxingdui Museum
Last winter vacation, my parents and I paid a visit to Sanxingdui Museum, which was a very impressive trip.
Located in the northwest of Guanghan City, Sichuan Province, Sanxingdui is known as one of the-greatest archaeological discoveries in the world. Upon seeing the shiny gold masks, bronze ware, jade ware and ivory on display, I was amazed at the open and inclusive ancient civilization in Sanxingdui. When the tourist guide introduced the 3.95-meter-tall bronze tree, I was deeply impressed by the delicate design and mysterious function of it. The guide remarked that the relics showed a very high level of artistic and technological development of ancient Shu civilization.
This trip has deepened my understanding of the civilization of China, and will inspire me to explore more about the essence of human civilization.
【导语】
本文是应用文。要求考生给学校英文报新增的“寻访华夏”的栏目投稿，题目是“My Trip to______”。
【详解】1.词汇积累
给人印象深刻的：impressive→devastating
因……而有名：be known as→be famous as
感到吃惊的：amazed→surprised
精美的：delicate→elegant
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Located in the northwest of Guanghan City, Sichuan Province, Sanxingdui is known as one of the-greatest archaeological discoveries in the world.
拓展句：Sanxingdui, which is located in the northwest of Guanghan City, Sichuan Province, is known as one of the-greatest archaeological discoveries in the world.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Last winter vacation, my parents and I paid a visit to Sanxingdui Museum, which was a very impressive trip.（由which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】When the tourist guide introduced the 3.95-meter-tall bronze tree, I was deeply impressed by the delicate design and mysterious function of it.（由When引导的时间状语从句）
