浙江省湖州中学人教版高三英语一轮复习限时高考作文专练教案：写景作文
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本资料来自于资源最齐全的２１世纪教育网www.21cnjy.com
限时高考作文专练：写景作文
教学目标：1.写一篇书面表达：“说明（介绍地点）+议论（原因）”21世纪教育网
2.加强审题的正确性，文体的把握
3.特定内容下的思维拓展和语言输出（高级词汇+句子变式）
教学难点：1. 引导学生如何介绍一个地方，并阐释印象深刻的原因。21世纪教育网
教学重点：1. 利用小组讨论，丰富句式和词汇。
2. 学会信息的取舍与整合
3. 在一定铺垫的基础上当堂完成写作（大约20分钟）
教学步骤：（见ppt）
了解写作要求
指导作文审题：
审体裁：说明（介绍地点）+议论（原因）。
审人称：通常用第一人称、第三人称
审时态：body用一般现在时态
3. 指导作文结构
Part 1 introduce the topic
开门见山引出要描述的地点
Part 2 description of the place
介绍该地方的具体信息
Part 3 reason
进一步阐释印象深刻的原因
4. Part 1 引出话题，给出常见句型，学生讨论如何丰富该句子。21世纪教育网
5. Part 2 介绍该地方的具体信息，学生逐个讨论有哪些常见句型。
6. Part 3 阐释印象深刻的原因，给出三种句型，学生讨论还有哪些常见句型。
学生当堂写（大约20分钟）
7. 学生间两两互评互批。
8. 下课后作文上交到自己班级的任课老师处，当堂下发第二份油印资料（含范文）
[来源:21世纪教育网]
Part1 introduce the topic
I have been to many places, among which the West Lake in Hanghou leaves me the deepest impression.21教育网
2. Among all the places of interest I have been to, the attraction that arouses my greatest appreciation is the West Lake in Hangzhou.21cnjy.com
3. Among all the pla ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ces of interest I have been to, there is no better place than the West Lake in Hangzhou/there is no denying that the West Lake in Hangzhou appeals to me most.
Part2 description of the place
常涉及的内容:location;histo ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ry;transportation;climate;population;scenery;places of interest; specialties; customs/cultures; people ……www.21-cn-jy.com
相关句型：
（1）location:
* lies near/behind/in front of/by the side of…; 2·1·c·n·j·y
*stands at the foot of/on the top of…;
*is located/situated; lie in; at an altitude of
The West Lake is located near the downtown of Hangzhou.【来源：21·世纪·教育·网】
There stands the West Lake near the downtown of Hangzhou.21·世纪*教育网
The West Lake lies ne ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ar the downtown of Hangzhou, surrounded by the mountains on three sides.
（2）history:
*have a long history of …;
*date back to/date from;
*be founded/established/set up/formed in/by;
Formed from a ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )n ancient bay, the West Lake has witnessed many changes in history.
Originally known as ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) Qiantang Lake, the West Lake has a long history, dating back to the Han Dynasty.2-1-c-n-j-y
（3）transportation:
*It is convenient to get to … by …
Despite the heavy ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) traffic in Hangzhou, it is still convenient to get to the West Lake by bus.
Too many tourists ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) to the West lake make it a better choice to take public transportation.
Low-carbon transportat ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ion is popular with the people concerning the protection of our environment. 21*cnjy*com
（4）climate:
*pleasant to live in; mild; neither … nor
The West Lake has 4 distinct seasons. However, it is neither too hot in summer neither too cold in winter, making it a year round destination.【来源：21cnj*y.co*m】
（5）population:
*have a large/small population of …
（6）scenery:
*inviting/appealing/charming/breathtaking scenery
*be covered w ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ith; be decorated with; be surrounded with; be made up of/consist of;
*be rewarded with…
Walking alon ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )g the lake, tourists are rewarded not only with the sight of green trees and clear water but also by the view of many historical and cultural sites. 21世纪教育网版权所有
So clean is the water that I can see fish swimming at the bottom.21·cn·jy·com
（7）places of interest:
*a symbol of; stand for; representative of
The Lei Feng Tower, which tells us a touching love story, is probably one of the most frequently visited attractions. 【出处：21教育名师】
（8）specialties:
*be famous for/as; be well-known for/as; vary from … to; be home to;www-2-1-cnjy-com
Some visitors come to enjoy its West lake vinegared fish, or to taste Longjin tea and others come to buy some silk.【版权所有：21教育】
（9）customs/cultures:
festivals; legends…
Due to its prominen ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )t historical and cultural status among Chinese scenic resorts, West Lake has been elected as one of the world cultural heritage sites.21教育名师原创作品
（10）people:
optimistic; energet ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ic; hospitable; considerate; It is typical of sb to do sth21*cnjy*com
Part3 reason
1. The beauty of ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )the West Lake not only lies in its natural scenery but is also reflected in historical sites. I strongly recommend everyone go and appreciate it.
2. The reason why th ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )e West Lake attracts me most is that not only is its scenery inviting, but people there show selfless love and consideration towards each other.
3. The appealing s ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )cenery and various specialties make the West Lake one of my favorite places. It is a place well worth a second visit.
范文：
Among all the places of interest I have been to, the attraction that arouses my greatest appreciation is the West Lake.
As the most renowne ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )d feature of Hangzhou, the West Lake is noted for its scenic beauty. Walking along the lake, tourists are rewarded not only with the sight of green trees and clear water but also by the view of many historical and cultural sites. The Lei Feng Tower, which tells us a touching love story, is probably one of the most frequently visited attractions. The “Ten West Lake Prospects” have been specially selected to give visitors outstanding views of the lake, mountains and monuments. If tired, tourists can hire a boat, enjoying the cool breeze that comes from the lake.
The beauty of the West Lake not only lies in its natural scenery but is also reflected in historical sites. I strongly recommend everyone go and appreciate it.
从小到大，你一定去过不少地方吧 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )，其中某个一定给你留下了深刻的印象，请向别的同学介绍一下它，并说说为什么它对你而言最为记忆犹新。（100-120个词）
[21世纪教育网]
21世纪教育网 -- 中国最大型、最专业的中小学教育资源门户网站。 版权所有@21世纪教育网
限时高考作文专练：写景作文
教学目标：1.写一篇书面表达：“说明（介绍地点）+议论（原因）”21世纪教育网
2.加强审题的正确性，文体的把握
3.特定内容下的思维拓展和语言输出（高级词汇+句子变式）
教学难点：1. 引导学生如何介绍一个地方，并阐释印象深刻的原因。21世纪教育网
教学重点：1. 利用小组讨论，丰富句式和词汇。
2. 学会信息的取舍与整合
3. 在一定铺垫的基础上当堂完成写作（大约20分钟）
教学步骤：（见ppt）
了解写作要求
指导作文审题：
审体裁：说明（介绍地点）+议论（原因）。
审人称：通常用第一人称、第三人称
审时态：body用一般现在时态
3. 指导作文结构
Part 1 introduce the topic
开门见山引出要描述的地点
Part 2 description of the place
介绍该地方的具体信息
Part 3 reason
进一步阐释印象深刻的原因
4. Part 1 引出话题，给出常见句型，学生讨论如何丰富该句子。21世纪教育网
5. Part 2 介绍该地方的具体信息，学生逐个讨论有哪些常见句型。
6. Part 3 阐释印象深刻的原因，给出三种句型，学生讨论还有哪些常见句型。
学生当堂写（大约20分钟）
7. 学生间两两互评互批。
8. 下课后作文上交到自己班级的任课老师处，当堂下发第二份油印资料（含范文）
[来源:21世纪教育网]
Part1 introduce the topic
I have been to many places, among which the West Lake in Hanghou leaves me the deepest impression.21教育网
2. Among all the places of interest I have been to, the attraction that arouses my greatest appreciation is the West Lake in Hangzhou.21cnjy.com
3. Among all the pla ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ces of interest I have been to, there is no better place than the West Lake in Hangzhou/there is no denying that the West Lake in Hangzhou appeals to me most.
Part2 description of the place
常涉及的内容:location;histo ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ry;transportation;climate;population;scenery;places of interest; specialties; customs/cultures; people ……www.21-cn-jy.com
相关句型：
（1）location:
* lies near/behind/in front of/by the side of…; 2·1·c·n·j·y
*stands at the foot of/on the top of…;
*is located/situated; lie in; at an altitude of
The West Lake is located near the downtown of Hangzhou.【来源：21·世纪·教育·网】
There stands the West Lake near the downtown of Hangzhou.21·世纪*教育网
The West Lake lies ne ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ar the downtown of Hangzhou, surrounded by the mountains on three sides.
（2）history:
*have a long history of …;
*date back to/date from;
*be founded/established/set up/formed in/by;
Formed from a ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )n ancient bay, the West Lake has witnessed many changes in history.
Originally known as ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) Qiantang Lake, the West Lake has a long history, dating back to the Han Dynasty.2-1-c-n-j-y
（3）transportation:
*It is convenient to get to … by …
Despite the heavy ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) traffic in Hangzhou, it is still convenient to get to the West Lake by bus.
Too many tourists ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) to the West lake make it a better choice to take public transportation.
Low-carbon transportat ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ion is popular with the people concerning the protection of our environment. 21*cnjy*com
（4）climate:
*pleasant to live in; mild; neither … nor
The West Lake has 4 distinct seasons. However, it is neither too hot in summer neither too cold in winter, making it a year round destination.【来源：21cnj*y.co*m】
（5）population:
*have a large/small population of …
（6）scenery:
*inviting/appealing/charming/breathtaking scenery
*be covered w ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ith; be decorated with; be surrounded with; be made up of/consist of;
*be rewarded with…
Walking alon ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )g the lake, tourists are rewarded not only with the sight of green trees and clear water but also by the view of many historical and cultural sites. 21世纪教育网版权所有
So clean is the water that I can see fish swimming at the bottom.21·cn·jy·com
（7）places of interest:
*a symbol of; stand for; representative of
The Lei Feng Tower, which tells us a touching love story, is probably one of the most frequently visited attractions. 【出处：21教育名师】
（8）specialties:
*be famous for/as; be well-known for/as; vary from … to; be home to;www-2-1-cnjy-com
Some visitors come to enjoy its West lake vinegared fish, or to taste Longjin tea and others come to buy some silk.【版权所有：21教育】
（9）customs/cultures:
festivals; legends…
Due to its prominen ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )t historical and cultural status among Chinese scenic resorts, West Lake has been elected as one of the world cultural heritage sites.21教育名师原创作品
（10）people:
optimistic; energet ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ic; hospitable; considerate; It is typical of sb to do sth21*cnjy*com
Part3 reason
1. The beauty of ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )the West Lake not only lies in its natural scenery but is also reflected in historical sites. I strongly recommend everyone go and appreciate it.
2. The reason why th ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )e West Lake attracts me most is that not only is its scenery inviting, but people there show selfless love and consideration towards each other.
3. The appealing s ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )cenery and various specialties make the West Lake one of my favorite places. It is a place well worth a second visit.
范文：
Among all the places of interest I have been to, the attraction that arouses my greatest appreciation is the West Lake.
As the most renowne ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )d feature of Hangzhou, the West Lake is noted for its scenic beauty. Walking along the lake, tourists are rewarded not only with the sight of green trees and clear water but also by the view of many historical and cultural sites. The Lei Feng Tower, which tells us a touching love story, is probably one of the most frequently visited attractions. The “Ten West Lake Prospects” have been specially selected to give visitors outstanding views of the lake, mountains and monuments. If tired, tourists can hire a boat, enjoying the cool breeze that comes from the lake.
The beauty of the West Lake not only lies in its natural scenery but is also reflected in historical sites. I strongly recommend everyone go and appreciate it.
从小到大，你一定去过不少地方吧 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )，其中某个一定给你留下了深刻的印象，请向别的同学介绍一下它，并说说为什么它对你而言最为记忆犹新。（100-120个词）
[21世纪教育网]
21世纪教育网 -- 中国最大型、最专业的中小学教育资源门户网站。 版权所有@21世纪教育网