2024年中考英语二轮复习专题:书面表达(广东省广州市)
A
学校英语校报准备出一版专栏,主题是“How to Choose your most Suitable Sport”。请你用英语写一篇稿件,谈谈你的看法。开头已给出,不计入总词数。要点如下:
(1)最适合做的运动;
(2)选择它的理由;
(3)如何选择最适合自己的运动。
注意:
(1)可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
(2)文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
(3)80~100词。
How to Choose your most Suitable Sport
As teenagers, we need to do sports.
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【答案】
How to Choose your most Suitable Sport
As teenagers, we need to do sports. And I think we’ll benefit more if we know how to choose our most suitable sport.
As for me, the most suitable sport is swimming. First of all, I feel relaxed when swimming so that I can rest my body and mind at the same time. Second, swimming is more than a sport, it’s also a skill to protect my life because I love to play with my friends in the sea in summer.
For us teenagers, when we choose our sports we should make sure whether it is safe enough and easy to keep doing.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,根据开头提示,引入主题;
第二步,介绍最适合做的运动及选择它的理由;
第三步,介绍如何选择最适合自己的运动。
[亮点词汇]
①need to do sth.需要做某事
②at the same time同时
③play with sb.和某人玩
④make sure确保
[高分句型]
①I think we’ll benefit more if we know how to choose our most suitable sport.(省略that的宾语从句)
②First of all, I feel relaxed when swimming so that I can rest my body and mind at the same time.(so that引导的目的状语从句)
③Second, swimming is more than a sport, it’s also a skill to protect my life because I love to play with my friends in the sea in summer.(because引导的原因状语从句)
④For us teenagers, when we choose our sports we should make sure whether it is safe enough and easy to keep doing.(when引导的时间状语从句和whether引导的宾语从句)
B
环保,一个看似简单却意义重大的主题,已经逐渐成为全人类共同关注的焦点。现你校校刊英语专栏以 “保护环境” 为话题面向全体学生征集主题海报宣传稿,请你用英语向大家宣讲环保的意义以及作为中学生应当如何保护环境。请你认真阅读海报,以“Save the Earth: Let’s Do Our Part!” 为题,用英语给专栏写一篇稿件。
要求:
(1)80—120词;
(2)文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
Save the Earth: Let’s Do Our Part!
The earth is the only home for everyone on it. It’s crying for our help now.
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【答案】
Save the Earth: Let’s Do Our Part!
The earth is the only home for everyone on it. It’s crying for our help now. As middle school students, we have the power to make a difference and help save the earth!
To protect the earth, we can start by saving water, planting more trees and reducing pollution. We can also save animals and recycle wastes whenever it is possible. We can also choose to ride a bike instead of driving a car to help stop pollution. We should always throw trash into the proper bins.
By doing our part, we can make a positive impact on the environment and create a better future for ourselves.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为看图作文;
②时态:时态主要为 “一般现在时”;
③提示:根据图示,文章应该包括7个方面的要点,可适当补充,使文章内容充实;尽量多使用短语,写作中要适当使用连接词,使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点明主题,通过介绍地球的重要性来引出保护地球的措施;
第二步,介绍保护地球的具体措施;
第三步,书写结语,展望美好的未来。
[亮点词汇]
① make a difference 产生影响
② instead of 而不是
[高分句型]
① To protect the earth, we can start by saving water, planting more trees and reducing pollution. (动词不定式作目的状语)
② We can also save animals and recycle wastes whenever it is possible. (whenever引导让步状语从句)
C
初中生活马上就要结束了,三年的初中生活一定给你留下了很多挥之不去的回忆。请你给大家讲一个最值得你回忆的故事,包括时间、人物、事情经过和事后你的感想。
提示词(供参考):three years, memories, one of, one day, think, happy/(sorry)
注意:
(1)词数:80~100词;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
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【答案】
How time flies! I have studied in my school for three years. And I will graduate from middle school in a month. I’d like to share my happiness and sadness with you. I had so many memories in the three years’ life. One of them impressed me very much. I still remember when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do well in it and almost gave it up. As soon as my English teacher found my problem, she had a talk with me about how to learn English well. Since then, she has kept helping me. Little by little, I’ve become interested in English and I’m good at it. I think I am so lucky to become one of her students. I’ve learned a lot from her. I will try to help others when they are in trouble. I think it is a happy thing to help others.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:注意时态的变化。讲述过去的事情用一般过去时;讲述现在的事情用一般现在时;展望未来用一般将来时;
③提示:要求根据提示要点写一篇关于中学生活的文章。
[写作步骤]
第一步,直奔主题,介绍自己三年的初中生活;
第二步,介绍一个最值得你回忆的故事;
第三步,表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①graduate from从……毕业
②begin to do sth.开始做某事
③give up放弃
④little by little渐渐地
⑤become interested in对……感兴趣
[高分句型]
①As soon as my English teacher found my problem, she had a talk with me about how to learn English well.(as soon as引导的时间状语从句)
②I think I am so lucky to become one of her students.(省略that的宾语从句)
③I will try to help others when they are in trouble.(when引导的时间状语从句)
④I think it is a happy thing to help others.(省略that的宾语从句)
D
假设你是李华,你校英语报“DIY”专栏面向全校学生征集美文,要求学生用英语介绍制作书签需要准备的材料和制作过程。请你根据以下图示,以“How to make a bookmark for my favourite book”为题,用英语给专栏写一篇短文。
Materials and tools: a card, scissors, glue
Steps:
cut the card into… draw a picture of… write (your favourite sentence from a book or a famous saying or…)
要求:
1. 包括提示中所有的写作要点;
2. 条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
3. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名等信息;
4. 词数:80左右。题目和开头已给出,不计入总词数。(不用抄写在答题卡书面表达作答区域。)
How to make a bookmark for my favourite book
I’m Li Hua. I have read some nice books and The Old Man and the Sea is my favourite. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】
How to make a bookmark for my favourite book
I’m Li Hua, I have read some nice books and The Old Man and the Sea is my favourite. Now let’s make a bookmark for it.
To make a good bookmark, we should get the necessary materials, such as a card, scissors and glue in advance. First, we should cut the card into a proper piece with the correct shape and size. Then, we can draw a picture, such as a flower, a tree or an animal on it. After that, we can write our favourite sentence from the book or a famous saying near the picture. We can write our names on it, too.
Don’t wait. Make a bookmark by yourself at once!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态用“一般现在时”;
③提示:注意连词的运用将步骤表述清楚。句型使用方面注意变化,可以使用“can/could/should/you’d better...”等句型。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题,要为最爱的书做书签;
第二步,介绍制作书签的步骤;
第三步,鼓励读者自己做书签。
[亮点词汇]
①necessary materials必要的材料;
②in advance提前;
③correct shape and size正确的形状和尺寸
[高分句型]
①To make a good bookmark, we should get the necessary materials, such as a card, scissors and glue in advance.(动词不定式表目的)
②Don’t wait. Make a bookmark by yourself at once!(祈使句)
E
阅读使人充实,阅读使人明智。某英文报为了了解中学生的课外阅读情况,开展了以“Reading Outside Class”为题的征文活动。请结合下面图示信息写一篇短文,向该英文报投稿。
要求:
(1)短文须包含图中所有信息,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名;
(3)词数80词左右,标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Reading Outside Class
As we all know, reading has a lot of advantages.
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【答案】
Reading Outside Class
As we all know, reading has a lot of advantages. For one thing, it can help us know more about the world because books are full of knowledge, and it makes us wiser and richer in life. For another, it’s of great importance to do some reading because reading helps us have a better understanding of history.
I like reading newspapers and magazines, from which I get lots of fun and learn about what’s going on around the world. I also read storybooks and novels in my spare time, which makes me relaxed and happy. I seldom read e-books because it’s bad for eyes. On weekends, I usually spend a whole afternoon reading in the library. And I also read for about half an hour before going to bed every night.
Summer vacation is coming, and I plan to do more reading. I am going to read more classics and more English books to improve my language skills. I’m sure reading can make a difference to my life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意短文须包含图中所有信息,可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。说明阅读的好处;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。介绍自己的阅读情况和阅读计划;
第三步,书写结语。表达对阅读的肯定态度。
[亮点词汇]
①know more about 知道更多关于……
②a better understanding 更好的理解
③spare time 业余时间
④on weekends 在周末
[高分句型]
①For another, it’s of great importance to do some reading because reading helps us have a better understanding of history.(because引导的原因状语从句)
②Summer vacation is coming, and I plan to do more reading.(现在进行时表将来)
F
你校英语报以“Where there is a will, there is a way (有志者事竟成)”为题向全校学生开展征文活动,请你用英语写一篇短文投稿。
要点:
1. 你对该谚语的理解;
2. 你生活中的一个事例;
3. 你的感悟。
要求:
1. 必须包含所给要点,可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,书写规范;
3. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名,词数100左右。
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【答案】
Where there is a will, there is a way
Have you heard of the saying “Where there is a will, there is a way” It means if you are really determined to do something, however difficult it might be, you will eventually find a way to do it well. The important point is that you must have the will to achieve success.
Take me for example. Speaking English used to be difficult for me. In Grade 7, I couldn’t speak English clearly and my classmates always laughed at me. With my English teacher’s help, I made plans to improve it. I read English texts aloud for an hour every morning. I also made a foreign friend online. I talked to her twice a week. She helped me correct the way I spoke English. Day by day my spoken English improved a lot. Last month I won the first prize in my school’s English Speech Contest.
This experience has taught me that nothing is too difficult as long as you make the decision to do it, just as the saying goes, “Where there is a will, there is a way”.
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:根据所给的要点提示,结合自身经历,谈谈你对“有志者,事竟成”的理解和感悟,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题,并表达自己对该谚语的理解;
第二步,以自身经历为例来阐述;
第三步,书写结语。表达自己的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①take me for example就拿我来说
②used to be过去常常是
③make plans to do sth制定计划做某事
④make the decision to do sth下决定做某事
[高分句型]
①The important point is that you must have the will to achieve success.(表语从句)
②This experience has taught me that nothing is too difficult as long as you make the decision to do it, just as the saying goes, “Where there is a will, there is a way”.(as long as引导的条件状语从句)
G
在人际交往中,换位思考是非常重要的思维方式。站在别人的角度思考问题,才能进行有效沟通。请以“Put ourselves in others’ shoes”为题写一篇英语作文,讲述自己换位思考的故事和体会。
要点:
1. 你是怎样理解换位思考的?
2. 为了养成换位思考的习惯,平常在人际交往中应该注意什么?
3. 结合自己的亲身经历,谈谈换位思考的重要性。
要求:
1. 包含以上要点,可适当发挥;
2. 行文连贯,条理要清晰;
3. 书写规范、卷面整洁,100-130词左右;文中不得出现真实姓名,校名。
Put ourselves in others’ shoes
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【答案】
Put ourselves in others’ shoes
We should always put ourselves in other’s shoes.
In our daily lives, we may always feel that someone’s words or behaviour hurts us, as a result, we may feel angry or depressed. At that time, however, we should consider whether or not our words or behaviour probably hurts others in the same way.
We should always put ourselves in other’s shoes, and learn to listen to others paring our feelings with others’ and imagining their thoughts and possible actions, you may find that they don’t mean to harm us, they may come to help us. If one of your best friends criticize you when you cheat on an examination, in fact, his purpose is to help you.
In a word, it is important for us to put ourselves in other’s shoes. Only in this way, we can have a happy life and grow healthily.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,是一篇材料作文;
②时态:一般现在时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生不要遗漏细节,注意要写出换位思考的重要性。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表达自己对“换位思考”的认同,开篇点题。
第二步,具体说明我们为什么要换位思考,在日常生活中应该怎样换位思考。
第三步,书写结语。表达学会换位思考的重要性。
[亮点词汇]
①as a result结果
②comparing… with…把……和……对比
③mean to do故意做
④in this way通过这种方式
[高分句型]
①At that time, however, we should consider whether or not our words or behaviour probably hurts others in the same way.(宾语从句)
H
劳动教育是青少年全面发展的重要组成部分,因此,青少年应该主动参加各类劳动,如社区服务,学校劳动和日常家务等。假如你是李华,请根据下面内容对即将开设的劳动课给校长写一封信,提出你的想法及建议。
1.在家里经常做的家务活和感受。
2.可以学到一些劳动技能,学会照顾自己,学会独立。
3.希望学校能提供劳动课的场地,每周开课两节,由经验丰富的老师教授同学们如何做饭、种菜……
4.希望学校在学期末举行各种劳动技能比赛,邀请家长们参观并分享劳动课成果。
注意事项:
1. 80-120词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
3. 作文至少包含提示信息中的两项内容。
参考词汇:
labor classes 劳动课 labor skills 劳动技能 labor achievements 劳动课成果
Dear headmaster,
My name is Li Hua. I’m in Class 6, Grade 8. It is said that we are going to have labor classes next term. All my classmates are interested in it. I’m writing to you to share my ideas about the coming labor classes.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear headmaster,
My name is Li Hua. I’m in Class 6, Grade 8. It is said that we are going to have labor classes next term. All my classmates are interested in it. I’m writing to you to share my ideas about the coming labor classes.
I often help my mother with housework at home, such as washing the dishes, watering the flowers, taking out the rubbish and so on. I’m proud of myself. I think we can learn some labor skills and learn to look after ourselves. Doing housework also makes us learn to be independent. I hope the school can provide a place for each class to work. The school can have two classes a week. The teachers with rich experience teach students how to cook, grow vegetables, wash clothes, clean the house and other simple housework. I also hope that the school can hold all kinds of labor skills competition at the end of the term and invite parents to visit and share labor achievements.
That’s my opinion. Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要求根据提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己在家里经常做的家务活、感受和收获;
第二步,就即将开设的劳动课提出你的想法及建议;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②be proud of为……感到自豪
③all kinds of各种各样的
[高分句型]
①Doing housework also makes us learn to be independent.(动名词作主语)
②I also hope that the school can hold all kinds of labor skills competition at the end of the term and invite parents to visit and share labor achievements.(that引导的宾语从句)
I
百善孝为先,孝敬父母是中华民族的传统美德,但是,在当今社会,还存在一些不孝敬父母的现象。作为中学生,我们应该怎样孝敬父母?请根据下列提示词,并结合自身实际适当发挥,以“Show Filial Piety for Our Parents”为题,写一篇关于孝敬父母的英语倡议书。
注意:
(1)词数80-100左右;
(2)短文开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(3)文中不得出现自己的真实姓名、学校和地名;
(4) 提示词:filial piety(孝敬), duty, happy, understand, be thankful for, stay with, communicate, housework, look after, save money, study…
Show Filial Piety for Our Parents
Dear fellow students,
As we know, parents are the most important people in our lives.
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【答案】
Show Filial Piety for Our Parents
Dear fellow students,
As we know, parents are the most important people in our lives. It’s our duty to show filial piety for our parents. While in our society, some people often behave rudely to their parents, especially teenagers. How can we show filial piety for our parents There are some advice for you.
First of all, we are supposed to communicate with them as much as possible because communication is the best way to understand each other. Besides, staying with them is a good choice. When they are young, we can company with them to do something they are interested in. When they are old, we should look after them with patient. Last but not least, it’s necessary for us to study hard. Good grades can make them happy and proud.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇倡议书;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出本文主题;
第二步,就如何孝顺父母提出了一些建议。
[亮点词汇]
①be supposed to应该
②communicate with sb与……沟通
③be interested in对……感兴趣
[高分句型]
①There are some advice for you.(there be句型)
②First of all, we are supposed to communicate with them as much as possible because communication is the best way to understand each other.(because引导原因状语从句)
J
我们在成长的过程中,虽然会遭遇悲伤、失败、挫折及困惑,但是也会收获爱、快乐、成功和感动。生活是美好的!请你以“Life is full of…”为题,写一篇英语短文。
要求:
1)内容积极向上,完整连贯;
2)逻辑清晰,表达准确,书写规范;
3)文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名;
4)词数:80—100。
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【答案】
Life is full of love
Is there a thing full of love buried deeply in your heart I want to share one with all of you and push myself.
One afternoon, I dragged myself onto the bus to go home. It was the rush hour and the bus was extremely crowded. I was even secretly happy that I had a seat. Just at that moment, a woman got on the bus with a baby in her arms. She was standing right next to me. Just as I was hesitating, our eyes met. I had mixed feelings, embarrassed, worried and nervous. Before I could get up, she said to me with a warm voice. “Boy, you must be very tired after the whole day’s work. But fighting for your dream is a happy thing. I will get off at the next stop. Sit here and have a good rest.”
How kind and understanding she was! What she said made me not only ashamed but moved. It was her love that is pushing me to be a better person!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为半命题作文;
②时态:一般过去时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生不要遗漏细节,注意不要漏写标题,文章内容要与标题相呼应。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表达自己写作的目的,开篇点题。
第二步,具体说明给自己带来难忘回忆和深刻感受的事件。
第三步,书写结语。表达自己对这次事件的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①share… with…和……分享……
②extremely crowded极度拥挤
③mixed feelings复杂的感受
④not only…but…不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①Just as I was hesitating, our eyes met.(状语从句)
②How kind and understanding she was!(感叹句)
K
国家提出将“劳动教育(labor education)”纳入中小学国家课程方案,请结合自身的劳动经历,谈谈你对劳动教育的看法。
写作要点:
1. 你对劳动教育的看法;
2. 你自身的劳动经历及感受;(家庭劳动与学校劳动)
3. 你对劳动教育课程的建议。(不少于两点)
写作要求:
1. 文中须包含以上要点,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不能提及本人的真实姓名、地名和校名;
3. 词数80左右,文章开头语已给出,不计入总词数。
It’s reported that labor education will be included in the education of middle schools and primary schools in China. I think ____________________________________________________
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【答案】
It’s reported that labor education will be included in the education of middle schools and primary schools in China. I think it’s necessary, because it is good for our health. We can relax from the hard study by doing labor.
I usually do labor at home, such as doing the dishes, sweeping the floor and taking out the rubbish. At school, I often clean the classroom and water flowers. Therefore, I can not only keep healthy, but also develop good habits.
In a word, labor education is very important, so schools should pay attention to it. Schools can offer different kinds of labor classes to teach students how to do the cleaning and grow plants. What’s more, schools can also hold competitions about the labor skills. I believe such activities will make our school life more colorful and meaningful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇议论文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏“要点”中对劳动教育课程的建议,注意不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己对劳动教育的看法;
第二步,从家庭劳动和学校劳动两方面,介绍自身的劳动经历和感受;
第三步,介绍自己对劳动课程的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①be good for对……有益
②such as例如
③not only...but also...不仅……而且……
④in a word总的来说
⑤pay attention to留心,注意
[高分句型]
①Schools can offer different kinds of labor classes to teach students how to do the cleaning and grow plants.(“特殊疑问词how+动词不定式”结构)
②I believe such activities will make our school life more colorful and meaningful.(省略that的宾语从句)
L
研究表明从小爱做家务的孩子长大更容易成功。假如你是李欣,你校英语报发起了“A Helper of My Family”主题征文活动。请你根据以下内容提示写一篇英文短文,介绍你常做的家务劳动并谈一谈你的感受和建议。
内容提示:
1. What housework do you often do
2. When and how do you help your family
3. Do you think it’s necessary Why or why not
4. Some suggestions for the schoolmates.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数 60—80;开头已给出,不计入总词数。
A Helper of My Family
I am a good helper of my family.
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【答案】
A Helper of My Family
I am a good helper of my family. One of the chores is cleaning. I vacuum the floors, dust the furniture, and tidy up my room. I help my family whenever there is a need. Doing housework is not only necessary but also essential. It develops a strong sense of responsibility and independence. So, I strongly suggest our schoolmates start small tasks. As you become more comfortable, take on additional responsibilities. By doing so, we will become more responsible.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点给出了四个,注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步,写明自己喜欢做的具体家务并交代自己什么时间以及如何帮助家人做家务的;
第二步,阐述做家务是否有必要,并说明理由;
第三步,写出给校友们的一些建议。
[亮点词汇]
①tidy up整理,收拾
②a strong sense of responsibility and independence强烈的责任感和独立性
[高分句型]
①I help my family whenever there is a need.(whenever引导的时间状语从句)
②So, I strongly suggest our schoolmates start small tasks.(宾语从句)
M
去年7月,国家颁布了《关于进一步减轻义务教育阶段学生作业负担和校外培训负担的意见》,要求切实减轻中小学生学业负担。对于学业负担,请你用一篇文章来表达自己的观点。
要点:
1.花费太多时间在大量作业上不利于身体健康;
2.如果有足够的时间休息,我们可以学得更好;
3.我们的生活已经发生了改变,市区见不到那么多的补习班了;
4.有足够的时间参加体育活动,可以交更多的朋友,感觉压力更小了;
5.你的建议……
要求:
1.语言通顺,条理清楚,书写规范;
2.要点齐全,内容可适当发挥;
3.词数:100左右开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:双减政策Double Reduction Policy 补习班after-school program
I think Double Reduction Policy is very good for us students.
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【答案】
I think Double Reduction Policy is very good for us students.
As everybody knows, it’s not good for our health to spend too much time on the homework. If we have enough time to rest, we can learn better.
Luckily, great changes has taken place. There are not so many after-school programs in the city these days. Instead, we have lots of time for sports, such as ping-pong, football and so on. Also, we can make more friends and feel less pressure.
I hope that there are more activities at school.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇议论文,为材料作文;
② 时态:本文为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生不要遗漏“信息提示”,可以结合自己的生活实际适当增加,注意保持主谓一致性,无语法和标点错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步,根据开头提示,介绍双减政策对我们好处;
第二步,介绍双减政策后发生的变化。
第三步,发表自己的希望和建议。
[亮点词汇]
①take place 发生
②lots of 许多
③As everybody knows 众所周知
[高分句型]
①If we have enough time to rest, we can learn better.(if引导的条件状语从句)
②I hope that there are more activities at school.(宾语从句)2024年中考英语二轮复习专题:书面表达(广东省广州市)
A
学校英语校报准备出一版专栏,主题是“How to Choose your most Suitable Sport”。请你用英语写一篇稿件,谈谈你的看法。开头已给出,不计入总词数。要点如下:
(1)最适合做的运动;
(2)选择它的理由;
(3)如何选择最适合自己的运动。
注意:
(1)可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
(2)文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
(3)80~100词。
How to Choose your most Suitable Sport
As teenagers, we need to do sports.
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B
环保,一个看似简单却意义重大的主题,已经逐渐成为全人类共同关注的焦点。现你校校刊英语专栏以 “保护环境” 为话题面向全体学生征集主题海报宣传稿,请你用英语向大家宣讲环保的意义以及作为中学生应当如何保护环境。请你认真阅读海报,以“Save the Earth: Let’s Do Our Part!” 为题,用英语给专栏写一篇稿件。
要求:
(1)80—120词;
(2)文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
Save the Earth: Let’s Do Our Part!
The earth is the only home for everyone on it. It’s crying for our help now.
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C
初中生活马上就要结束了,三年的初中生活一定给你留下了很多挥之不去的回忆。请你给大家讲一个最值得你回忆的故事,包括时间、人物、事情经过和事后你的感想。
提示词(供参考):three years, memories, one of, one day, think, happy/(sorry)
注意:
(1)词数:80~100词;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
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D
假设你是李华,你校英语报“DIY”专栏面向全校学生征集美文,要求学生用英语介绍制作书签需要准备的材料和制作过程。请你根据以下图示,以“How to make a bookmark for my favourite book”为题,用英语给专栏写一篇短文。
Materials and tools: a card, scissors, glue
Steps:
cut the card into… draw a picture of… write (your favourite sentence from a book or a famous saying or…)
要求:
1. 包括提示中所有的写作要点;
2. 条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
3. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名等信息;
4. 词数:80左右。题目和开头已给出,不计入总词数。(不用抄写在答题卡书面表达作答区域。)
How to make a bookmark for my favourite book
I’m Li Hua. I have read some nice books and The Old Man and the Sea is my favourite. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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E
阅读使人充实,阅读使人明智。某英文报为了了解中学生的课外阅读情况,开展了以“Reading Outside Class”为题的征文活动。请结合下面图示信息写一篇短文,向该英文报投稿。
要求:
(1)短文须包含图中所有信息,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名;
(3)词数80词左右,标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Reading Outside Class
As we all know, reading has a lot of advantages.
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F
你校英语报以“Where there is a will, there is a way (有志者事竟成)”为题向全校学生开展征文活动,请你用英语写一篇短文投稿。
要点:
1. 你对该谚语的理解;
2. 你生活中的一个事例;
3. 你的感悟。
要求:
1. 必须包含所给要点,可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,书写规范;
3. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名,词数100左右。
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G
在人际交往中,换位思考是非常重要的思维方式。站在别人的角度思考问题,才能进行有效沟通。请以“Put ourselves in others’ shoes”为题写一篇英语作文,讲述自己换位思考的故事和体会。
要点:
1. 你是怎样理解换位思考的?
2. 为了养成换位思考的习惯,平常在人际交往中应该注意什么?
3. 结合自己的亲身经历,谈谈换位思考的重要性。
要求:
1. 包含以上要点,可适当发挥;
2. 行文连贯,条理要清晰;
3. 书写规范、卷面整洁,100-130词左右;文中不得出现真实姓名,校名。
Put ourselves in others’ shoes
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H
劳动教育是青少年全面发展的重要组成部分,因此,青少年应该主动参加各类劳动,如社区服务,学校劳动和日常家务等。假如你是李华,请根据下面内容对即将开设的劳动课给校长写一封信,提出你的想法及建议。
1.在家里经常做的家务活和感受。
2.可以学到一些劳动技能,学会照顾自己,学会独立。
3.希望学校能提供劳动课的场地,每周开课两节,由经验丰富的老师教授同学们如何做饭、种菜……
4.希望学校在学期末举行各种劳动技能比赛,邀请家长们参观并分享劳动课成果。
注意事项:
1. 80-120词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
3. 作文至少包含提示信息中的两项内容。
参考词汇:
labor classes 劳动课 labor skills 劳动技能 labor achievements 劳动课成果
Dear headmaster,
My name is Li Hua. I’m in Class 6, Grade 8. It is said that we are going to have labor classes next term. All my classmates are interested in it. I’m writing to you to share my ideas about the coming labor classes.
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Yours,
Li Hua
I
百善孝为先,孝敬父母是中华民族的传统美德,但是,在当今社会,还存在一些不孝敬父母的现象。作为中学生,我们应该怎样孝敬父母?请根据下列提示词,并结合自身实际适当发挥,以“Show Filial Piety for Our Parents”为题,写一篇关于孝敬父母的英语倡议书。
注意:
(1)词数80-100左右;
(2)短文开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(3)文中不得出现自己的真实姓名、学校和地名;
(4) 提示词:filial piety(孝敬), duty, happy, understand, be thankful for, stay with, communicate, housework, look after, save money, study…
Show Filial Piety for Our Parents
Dear fellow students,
As we know, parents are the most important people in our lives.
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J
我们在成长的过程中,虽然会遭遇悲伤、失败、挫折及困惑,但是也会收获爱、快乐、成功和感动。生活是美好的!请你以“Life is full of…”为题,写一篇英语短文。
要求:
1)内容积极向上,完整连贯;
2)逻辑清晰,表达准确,书写规范;
3)文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名;
4)词数:80—100。
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K
国家提出将“劳动教育(labor education)”纳入中小学国家课程方案,请结合自身的劳动经历,谈谈你对劳动教育的看法。
写作要点:
1. 你对劳动教育的看法;
2. 你自身的劳动经历及感受;(家庭劳动与学校劳动)
3. 你对劳动教育课程的建议。(不少于两点)
写作要求:
1. 文中须包含以上要点,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不能提及本人的真实姓名、地名和校名;
3. 词数80左右,文章开头语已给出,不计入总词数。
It’s reported that labor education will be included in the education of middle schools and primary schools in China. I think ____________________________________________________
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L
研究表明从小爱做家务的孩子长大更容易成功。假如你是李欣,你校英语报发起了“A Helper of My Family”主题征文活动。请你根据以下内容提示写一篇英文短文,介绍你常做的家务劳动并谈一谈你的感受和建议。
内容提示:
1. What housework do you often do
2. When and how do you help your family
3. Do you think it’s necessary Why or why not
4. Some suggestions for the schoolmates.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数 60—80;开头已给出,不计入总词数。
A Helper of My Family
I am a good helper of my family.
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M
去年7月,国家颁布了《关于进一步减轻义务教育阶段学生作业负担和校外培训负担的意见》,要求切实减轻中小学生学业负担。对于学业负担,请你用一篇文章来表达自己的观点。
要点:
1.花费太多时间在大量作业上不利于身体健康;
2.如果有足够的时间休息,我们可以学得更好;
3.我们的生活已经发生了改变,市区见不到那么多的补习班了;
4.有足够的时间参加体育活动,可以交更多的朋友,感觉压力更小了;
5.你的建议……
要求:
1.语言通顺,条理清楚,书写规范;
2.要点齐全,内容可适当发挥;
3.词数:100左右开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:双减政策Double Reduction Policy 补习班after-school program
I think Double Reduction Policy is very good for us students.
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