2024年中考英语二轮复习专题： 写作（上海专用）
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
一、书面表达
1．（22-23九年级上·上海宝山·期末）Please complete the topic “The ________ I will never forget” and write at least 60 words on your topic. 请补全题目并以此为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格.。
提示： 生活中总有一些令人难忘的东西，或是一个给你帮助的人；或是一个意义非凡的日子或是一部令人深思的电影……请你搜索记忆的宝库，分享一段令人难忘的片段。
注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。
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【答案】例文
The English speech contest I will never forget
During my middle school study, I have taken part in many matches, but I never forget an English speech contest.
When the teacher told us there was an English speech contest, I didn’t think much of it.
Many excellent students were in our class. Besides me, several students put up their hands to show their interest in the contest. Luckily, the English teacher asked me to take it. I was worried about it very much. I was eager to get it, but I was afraid to fail. With the help of my English teacher and more than a week’s hard work, I won the first in our school.
After that I worked harder. I think I can succeed if I try my best to do it. Where there is a will, there is a way. Do you think so
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题；
第二步，介绍一段令人难忘的片段；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①match比赛
②an English speech contest英语演讲比赛
③think much of重视
④show one’s interest in…表现出对……的兴趣
⑤be worried about担心
⑥be eager to渴望
⑦with the help of…在……的帮助下
[高分句型]
①When the teacher told us there was an English speech contest, I didn’t think much of it.（when引导时间状语从句、省略that的宾语从句）
2．（23-24九年级上·上海杨浦·期末）Write a paragraph in at least 60 words according to the given situation（根据所给情境，写一段不少于60个单词的文字）
学校的漫画社（Cartoon Club）、信息技术社（IT Club）、茶艺社（Tea-making Club）和阅读社（Reading Club）正在招募社长（club secretary）。假设你是吴磊，结合你的特长与爱好，给负责社团工作的王老师（Mr Wang）写一份自我介绍，参与其中一个社团社长的竞选。
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【答案】例文：
Hello, my name is Wu Lei.
My hobby is reading. Since I was a child, I’ve been reading. And that’s the reason why I choose to be the leader of Reading Club. In addition, because I have many years of reading experience and love reading, I believe that under my leadership, Reading Club will become even better.
I really hope that I can get the chance to be the leader. Thanks for your listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为竞选文稿；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏材料内容，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。结合特长与爱好，写出竞选理由；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
① choose to do选择做
② in addition另外
③ get the chance to do得到做某事的机会
[高分句型]
① Since I was a child, I’ve been reading.（since引导的时间状语从句）
② And that’s the reason why I choose to be the leader of Reading Club.（why引导的定语从句）
③ In addition, because I have many years of reading experience and love reading, I believe that under my leadership, Reading Club will become even better.（because引导的原因状语从句；that引导的宾语从句）
3．（23-24九年级上·上海静安·期中）Write at least 60 words about the topic “A person who ________ me before”
（以“曾经________过我的人”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）
很多人曾经出现在你的成长旅程中，他们或帮助你，或鼓励你，或爱护你，……
请你描述他（她）是怎样的人，以及发生在你和他（她）之间的故事，并谈谈他（她）对你的影响。
（注意：短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息、否则不予评分）
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【答案】例文
A person who helped me before
A person who helped me before is Mr. Johnson. He is my math teacher. He is a kind and thoughtful person. Once, when I failed my math test, he offered to help me after class. With his help, I passed the exam. He taught me that it’s important to persevere in the face of difficulties. His kindness and encouragement have inspired me to work harder.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息，可适当补充细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，补全题目，指明需要感谢的人；
第二步，描述这个人是怎样的人；
第三步，讲述发生在你们之间的故事；
第四步，谈谈这个人对你的影响。
[亮点词汇]
①offer to do sth.提出要做某事
②with his help在他的帮助下
③inspire sb. to do sth.鼓励某人做某事
[高分句型]
①Once, when I failed my math test, he offered to help me after class.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②He taught me that it’s important to persevere in the face of difficulties.（that引导的宾语从句；it作形式主语）
4．（22-23九年级上·上海徐汇·期末）Write at least 60 words on the given topic “__________ I Like”.
在你的生活、学习中你一定喜欢许多东西，请你结合自己的喜好，从以下思维导图中选择一个你喜欢的人物、动物、场所、食品、物品等以“我喜欢的 _________”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。
请先补全题目 __________ I Like，然后在文中说明喜欢的2个理由。
提示：
（注意：1.短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。）
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【答案】例文
The Chinese festival I like
My favorite Chinese festival is the Dragon Boat Festival. It falls on the fifth day of the fifth lunar month every year. It’s a day to remember Qu Yuan, a great poet. On this day, people usually eat zongzi and hold dragon boat race. They also drink realgar wine, hang Chinese mugwort around the doors and carry a spice bag around with them. For me, I enjoy eating zongzi. What makes the festival special for me is the dragon boat race. The members of the dragon boat team have such great team spirit that everyone tries their best to win the race.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文为一篇说明文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：以“__________ I Like”为题，介绍自己喜欢的东西及原因，适当增加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，补全题目，说明自己喜欢的是中国节日；
第二步，具体介绍自己喜欢的中国节日是端午节；
第三步，说明自己喜欢端午节的原因。
[亮点词汇]
① fall on落在
② try one’s best to do某人尽力做
[高分句型]
① What makes the festival special for me is the dragon boat race.（what引导的主语从句）
② The members of the dragon boat team have such great team spirit that everyone tries their best to win the race.（such...that引导的结果状语从句）
5．（22-23九年级上·上海闵行·期末）“汉语桥”中文能力大赛的成功举办说明越来越多的外国学生对中华优秀文化很感兴趣。假设你是李华，你的外国网友 Peter对中华文化很感兴趣，想了解并学习。请从以下中华文化的六种表现中，选择你最喜欢的一种推荐给他，并说明理由。
中华武术 (Chinese martial arts) 京剧 (Peking Opera) 中华书法 (Chinese calligraphy)
中文歌曲 (Chinese songs) 中华美食 (Chinese food) 中华剪纸 (Chinese paper-cutting)
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【答案】Dear Peter,
I know you are interested in Chinese culture. Now let me introduce one of the most important culture—Chinese paper-cutting.
It has a history of more than 5,000 years. It is easily made. You only need some paper and a pair of scissors. You can change the paper into some different shapes, such as animals, flowers and so on. When Spring Festival comes, you can see people stick them on the windows and walls. It is a symbol of good luck. You can learn how to make Chinese paper-cutting by watching videos.
We also have other traditional culture. If you want to learn more, please tell me. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍剪纸是中国传统文化之一；
第二步，介绍剪纸的相关情况，包括它的历史，制作以及代表的意义。
第三步，表示自己希望得到对方的回复。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②more than多于
③change into把……变成……
④and so on等等
⑤a symbol of……的象征
⑥look forward to期盼
[高分句型]
① I know you are interested in Chinese culture. (省略了that的宾语从句)
②Now let me introduce one of the most important culture—Chinese paper-cutting. (let引导的祈使句)
③When Spring Festival comes, you can see people stick them on the windows and walls. (when引导的时间状语从句)
④ If you want to learn more, please tell me. (if引导的条件状语从句)
6．（22-23九年级下·上海闵行·期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “Say goodbye to ______”（根据提示，以“对______的告别”为题，写一篇不少于60字的短文，标点符号不占格。）
提示：生命中有许多遇见，许多期待，也终究有许多告别。我们会告别一段美好的时光，一份亲密的关系，一个难缠的坏习惯……告别意味着终将离去的珍惜，也可能是饱含期待的成长。（注意：不得出现考生姓名、校名以及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。抄袭阅读理解语篇不得分。）
Say goodbye to ______
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【答案】例文
Say Goodbye to a Bad Habit
Today, I say goodbye to a troublesome bad habit that has been a constant companion in my life—my uncontrollable love for sweets. I used to snack on candies, chocolate, and other sugary treats all day long, without realizing the harm it was doing to my health. But now, I’ve decided to make a change. Goodbye, sugary snacks! Hello, healthy fruits and vegetables. I’m excited to embark on this new journey of healthier eating habits and feel better about myself.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，围绕“对……的告别”进行展开，可适当补充细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，指明要告别的人或事物；
第二步，简单描写要告别的人或事物；
第三步，展望未来。
[亮点词汇]
①used to do sth.过去常常做某事
②embark on着手，开始做某事
③eating habits饮食习惯
[高分句型]
I say goodbye to a troublesome bad habit that has been a constant companion in my life…（that引导的定语从句）
7．（23-24九年级上·上海黄浦·期末）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation.（根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
新学期即将来临，学校社团计划招募新人。假如你是负责人之一，请根据以下内容和要求，写一篇短文，向同学们介绍其中一个社团，如：Reading club, public speaking club, movie club, sports club等，并号召大家加入，内容包括社团名称、活动形式、时间、地点及目的等信息。
注意：
1. 短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
The club is calling!
The new school year is around the corner. Are you ready to enjoy the beautiful after-school life What about a club ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
The club is calling!
The new school year is around the corner. Are you ready to enjoy the beautiful after-school life What about a club
For all our new students, I would like to introduce our club—sports Club. It is from 4 pm to 5 pm every Wednesday on the school playground. We have all kinds of sports, such as playing basketball. Here you can do sports one hour a day to build up your body. You can also watch sports matches here. If you are interested in sports, go and join us. Doing sports is good for our health. Here you can make many friends. You can live a healthy life. You are sure to learn a lot here and why not join us at once？
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏题干中的内容，并适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
①第一步，表明写作意图。借用“社团招募”来引出下文中对社团的介绍；
②第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“社团名称、活动形式、时间、地点及目的”等方面入手，重点介绍社团；
③第三步，书写结语。欢迎各位同学的加入。
[亮点词汇]
①would like to do 想要做某事
②all kinds of 各种各样的
③such as 例如
④build up 增强
⑤live a...life 过……样的生活
⑥at once 立刻
[高分句型]
①If you are interested in sports, go and join us.（if引导的条件状语从句）
8．（22-23九年级上·上海徐汇·期末）Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic according to the given situation. Nowadays, a lot of students don’t know how to make good use of their spare time and always complain about the time they have is far less than they need.（当前，有些同学不知如何利用好空闲时间，而时常抱怨时间不够用。针对这种现象，你校广播室“校园英语之声”栏目就“如何更好地利用课余时间”进行征文。请你以此为题给该栏目写一篇不少于60个词的广播稿。开头已给出，不计入总词数，标点符号不占格。）
How to make better use of our spare time
Hello, everybody! It’s time again for our Campus English Voice. Today’s topic is How to make better use of our spare time. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】范文
How to make better use of our spare time
Hello, everybody! It’s time again for our Campus English Voice. Today’s topic is How to make better use of our spare time. Nowadays, we students have much more free time than before. But quite a number of students don’t know how to use the time properly. So how can we make better use of our spare time There are many things we can do.
We need to plan our time carefully and try our best to achieve a balance between our study and hobbies. And we can join in different kinds of hobby groups and take part in some good social activities. We can do some sports to build up our strength as well. Besides, we should help parents do some housework.
Let’s make better use of our free time and make our life colourful!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应围绕话题，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍如今学生面临的情况；
第二步，具体给出建议；
第三步，最后作小结。
[亮点词汇]
①quite a number of 相当多的
②make better use of更好地利用
③help sb do帮助某人做
[高分句型]
①We need to plan our time carefully and try our best to achieve a balance between our study and hobbies. （and连接的并列结构）
②We can do some sports to build up our strength as well.（动词不定式作目的状语）
9．（23-24九年级上·上海浦东新·期中）Write at least 60 words on the topic “At that moment, I felt______”. ( 以“那一刻，我感到......”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
在你的生活中，曾经有过哪一刻让你记忆深刻？那一刻发生了什么？带你给怎样的感受？请结合自己的真实经历，谈谈你的真实感想。
（ 注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
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【答案】例文
At that moment, I felt moved
In my life, there are many important moments, but I was moved by an incident which happened in my daily life.
One day, when I was on my way home, it was raining heavily. An old lady with no umbrella was walking across the street slowly. Suddenly, a little girl came up to her and shared her umbrella with the old lady. The lady put a bigger part of the umbrella over the girl which made her leave shoulder and arm wet. Later, the little girl realized it and pushed the umbrella towards the lady. However, the lady pushed back. They kept doing this again and again. Finally, the umbrella was put in the middle of them.
As a passer-by walking behind them, I felt pretty moved by their kindness for each other.
【详解】[总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；
③提示：文章应该包括所有要点，不要遗漏。
［写作步骤］
第一步，介绍生活中存在很多重要的时刻，引入主题；
第二步，介绍我在回家路上看到的感人一幕；
第三步，介绍我对这一幕的感受。
［亮点词汇］
① share sth with sb 和某人分享某物
② in the middle of 在……中间
③ passer-by 路人
［高分句型］
① The lady put a bigger part of the umbrella over the girl which made her left shoulder and arm wet.（定语从句）
② One day, when I was on my way home, it was raining heavily.（when引导的时间状语从句）
10．（23-24九年级上·上海黄浦·期中）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据以下情景写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)
假设你是中华中学初三学生李华。校学生会将代表全体初三学生在毕业典礼上送一份小礼物给本年级的每位老师，现正在征集礼物创意。请你给学生会主席王明同学写一封邮件，谈谈你的想法。
要点：
1.推荐一份你认为合适的礼物；
2.说明你推荐该礼物的原因。
请注意短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。
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【答案】例文
Dear Wang Ming,
Knowing that you intend to give some presents to all teachers of Junior 3 on behalf of us at the graduation ceremony, I’m writing with utmost pleasure to offer my recommendation to you.
What I strongly recommend is the vacuum cup that can keep the water heated. As we all know, teachers need to talk a lot in class, so there is no doubt that drinking hot water is good for their throat. What’s more, if a name or a sentence can be inscribed on the cup to show our sincerity, it will be better.
I sincerely hope that you take my recommendation into account. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，根据所给提示完成写作，人称为第一人称。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简要表达自己想要推荐礼物的意图；
第二步，介绍自己想要推荐的礼物并说明推荐原因；
第三步，期望对方采纳自己的建议，表达自己的期待。
[亮点词汇]
① intend to do sth. 打算做某事
② As we all know 众所周知
③ there is no doubt 毋庸置疑
[高分句型]
① What I strongly recommend is the vacuum cup that can keep the water heated.（what引导的主语从句）
② What’s more, if a name or a sentence can be inscribed on the cup to show our sincerity, it will be better.（if引导的条件状语从句）
11．（23-24九年级上·上海杨浦·期中）Write a paragraph in at least 80 words to give your opinion according to the given information. (根据以下内容，写一段不少于80个单词的文字发表你的观点)
第2单元的主阅读Fishing with birds介绍了一种中国的传统技艺——鸬鹚捕鱼。文章结尾写道：In 50 years, perhaps there will be no more cormorant fishermen in the world. 你觉得鸬鹚捕鱼这项传统技艺会消失吗？给出你的观点，提供至少两个理由，并进行适当的论证。
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【答案】例文
Cormorant fishing is a traditional skill in China. I don’t think the traditional skill of cormorant fishing will disappear. Cormorant fishing, a unique historical heritage, requires courage, skills, and close cooperation between man and eagle, which is a symbol of wildness, strength and tradition. The technique of cormorant fishing is common in some rivers and scenic lakes. It is not only a way for fishermen to make money, but also promotes the development of tourism. It also protects, inherits and develops the achievements of intangible cultural heritage, making the characteristics of water towns a beautiful landscape that has been followed for thousands of years.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，点出鸬鹚捕鱼这项传统技艺不应消失的观点；
第二步，具体阐述论点，并加以论证；
第三步，书写结语，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①traditional传统的
②a symbol of……的象征
③thousands of成千上万的
[高分句型]
①I don’t think the traditional skill of cormorant fishing will disappear.（省略that的宾语从句）
②Cormorant fishing, a unique historical heritage, requires courage, skills, and close cooperation between man and eagle, which is a symbol of wildness, strength and tradition.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
12．（23-24九年级上·上海普陀·期中）Write at least 60 words about the topic “Should school breaks be longer ” according to the given situation.（根据所给情境，以“课间休息是否应该被延长？”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。
目前大多数学校的课间休息时间为10分钟，可以让学生进行适当放松，为下节课做必要准备，有些学生认为十分钟课间休息过短，建议延长，还有些学生认为10分钟课间休息对他们来说是足够的。你认为课间休息时间是否应该延长？为什么？
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【答案】例文：
Should school breaks be longer
Some students think 10 minutes seems to be so limited for us middle school students. In my opinion, taking a ten-minute break between classes is enough.
During the ten-minute break, we should do something to get rid of tiredness. What we need is to have a real rest, instead of getting more tired. So doing nothing tiring in that period is really good for us. My ten-minute break is always pleasing. Sometimes I do some simple exercises. Sometimes I have a free chat with my classmates or just take a walk outside. When the next class begins, I feel fresh again.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇议论文；
②时态：时态是“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作角度已给出，考生应注意适当添加细节，表达自己的观点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作目的。给出自己的观点；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“自己观点、课间活动”等角度具体论证。
[亮点词汇]
①be limited for对于某人很少
②instead of而不是
[高分句型]
①During the ten-minute break, we should do something to get rid of tiredness. （动词不定式表示目的）
②When the next class begins, I feel fresh again.（时间状语从句）
13．（23-24九年级上·上海徐汇·期中）Write at least 60 words about the topic “The best ________ I know”. （以“我所知的 / 我所认识的最好的________”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文。标点符号不占格。）
The following are for reference only.
1. Who / What / Which place is the best you know
2. Why is he / she / it the best
注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。
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【答案】例文：
The best film I know
Alice in Wonderland is a film that influences me a lot. The film contains a lot of cartoon characters which always do some interesting movements. I think it is the best film because I have learned much from it. For example, I should be brave like the main character Alice who has to fight with a big monster. Although she is afraid of it, she doesn’t give up. With her great efforts, she wins the war at last. So if you meet difficulties, you must face them bravely, some day you will succeed. That’s why I think it the best.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材: 本文是一篇记叙文；
② 时态: 时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示: 写作话题已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏所给要点，可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，介绍你所知道的最好的事物或人物；
第二步，具体阐述他或她或它是最好的原因。
[亮点词汇]
① influence 影响
② be afraid of 害怕……
[高分句型]
① Alice in Wonderland is a film that influences me a lot.（定语从句）
② The film contains a lot of cartoon characters which always do some interesting movements.（定语从句）
③ For example, I should be brave like the main character Alice who has to fight with a big monster.（定语从句）
④ So if you meet difficulties, you must face them bravely, some day you will succeed.（if引导的条件状语从句）
14．（23-24九年级上·上海奉贤·期中）Write at least 60 words on the topic “A/An ________ moment in my life”.
(以“我生命中的________一刻”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
(注意：1、在答题纸上将题目补充完整。
2、短文中不得出现任何人名，校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）
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【答案】
例文
An important moment in my life
An important moment in my life was when I won first place in the school science fair. I had spent weeks working on my project, and when the judges announced my name, I felt a rush of pride and accomplishment. It showed me that hard work and dedication really do pay off. This moment changed the way I saw myself and gave me the confidence to pursue my interests in science.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，主要介绍了我生命中最重要的一刻；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”。
③ 提示：本篇作文为话题作文，写作时需围绕话题进行展开描写，准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语等，要求语句通顺，意思连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总结我生命中最重要的一刻是什么时刻。
第二步，描述这一刻的发生的事和感想。
第三步，总结生命中最重要的一刻对自己产生的影响。
[亮点词汇]
①spend time doing sth花费时间做某事
②work on致力于
③a rush of一阵
④pay off回报
[高分句型]
①An important moment in my life was when I won first place in the school science fair.（表语从句）
②It showed me that hard work and dedication really do pay off. （宾语从句）
15．（23-24九年级上·上海长宁·期末）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation(请根据以下情景写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
学校拟为初三学生组织一次活动，现在校长征询同学们的意见，请你写一封电子邮件给他，就下列活动中选择其中的一项推荐给校长，并说明理由。
An outing School Subject Festival Talent Show A school sports meeting
(注意: 不得出现任何姓名、校名以及其它相关信息，否则不予评分)
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【答案】
Dear Principal,
Thank the school leaders for holding activities for us. I think the talent show is good. A talent show is a way to show one’s talent. It can be singing, dancing, drawing and so on. Although these talents may only be entertainment activities in our daily lives, they can bring a lot of meaning to us when displayed on the right occasion. First of all, personal talent show can enhance self-confidence. Secondly, talent shows can also be a way to entertain. After busy study, showing our talents can make us relax and reduce the pressure. So the talent show was great.
yous,
Wang Hong
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，借感谢校领导来引出你想推荐的活动。
第二步，具体介绍才艺展示的好处，从增强自信，娱乐和放松，减少压力等方面来介绍才艺展示的好处。
第三步：书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
① is a way to 一种……的方法
②First of all首先
③Secondly第二，其次
[高分句型]
①Thank the school leaders for holding activities for us.(Thank ...for 因什么感谢某人)
②Although these talents may only be entertainment activities in our daily lives, they can bring a lot of meaning to us when displayed on the right occasion. (Although不与but连用)
16．（22-23九年级上·上海·期末）Read the given quote from Steve Jobs and write at least 60 words to explain how you understand it. （读所给引自乔布斯的一句话，用至少 60 词谈谈你对这句话的理解和观点。）
Your time is limited, so don’t waste it living someone else’s life. —Steve Jobs
（注意：短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）
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【答案】
Because of the limited time, people get truly happy and successful only by trying to be themselves. We shouldn’t let the noise of other opinions drown out our own inner voice. We should find out what we really have a passion for. And then we should break out of our comfort zone to pursue what we want. I think it is what Steve Jobs said.
【详解】[整体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇议论文，属于话题作文；
②时态：采用“一般现在时”
③提示：要求包含所有要点提示，内容完整，句子衔接自然，注意标点符号的使用。
[写作步骤]
第一步，阐述自己对这句话的理解和观点；
第二步，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①drown out淹没
②have a passion for热爱
③find out弄清楚
[高分句型]
①We should find out what we really have a passion for.（宾语从句）
②And then we should break out of our comfort zone to pursue what we want.（宾语从句）
17．（23-24九年级上·上海浦东新·期末）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据以下情境写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格)
学校报社做了一次有关学生如何使用零花钱的调查。现假设你是报社编辑李华，请根据以下图表写一份报告，报告必须包含以下内容：
1. 简要描述图表显示的结果；
2. 针对结果，提出改进消费习惯的建议，并阐述理由。
注意：
1. 短文中不得出现姓名校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
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【答案】例文
Nowadays, as we are given more and more pocket money by our parents, it’s really necessary for us to make good use of it and develop our ability to manage our money. We did a survey on how the students spend their monthly pocket money. Here is the result.
According to the survey, 20% of the students spend their monthly pocket money on study, and they often buy useful books and magazines to help their study. 30% spend their money on games and cartoons. They usually play computer games or watch cartoon movies. 50% of the students spend their monthly pocket money on snacks and drinks.
In my opinion, it is important for students to use our pocket money wisely. We shouldn’t spend much money on games and cartoons. Games and cartoons are bad for our eyes. As for snacks and drinks, they are not healthy. We should keep away from them. We can spend some money buying some fruits. It’s a good idea to spend money on books and magazines. Reading can improve ourselves.
In all, we should develop a habit to save money. We can write down a daily-cost. What’s more, we can put the rest of our pocket money in the bank and watch it grow.
【详解】[总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括调查结果和改进消费的意见，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤］
第一步，介绍所做的调查，引出调查结果；
第二步，具体介绍调查的结果以及数据情况；
第三步，结合消费习惯给出自己的建议；
第四步，书写总结，呼吁大家养成省钱的好习惯。
[亮点词汇］
① make good use of 充分利用
② according to 根据
③ in one’s opinion 在某人看来
[高分句型］
① In my opinion, it is important for students to use our pocket money wisely. (it作形式主语)
② According to the survey, 20% of the students spend their monthly pocket money on study, and they often buy useful books and magazines to help their study. (and连接的并列句)
18．（23-24九年级上·上海浦东新·期中）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation（根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）
某英文报纸发起主题为“How to get on well with classmates”的讨论，呼吁大家关注同学之间的和谐关系，友好相处，建设和谐校园。假如你是李华，请你就这一主题发表自己的看法，包括你觉得为什么要与同学友好相处以及如何与同学建立和谐关系的方法，写一篇不少于60词的短文。标点符号不占格。
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【答案】例文
In my opinion, it’s very important for us to get on well with our classmates. It can give us a better studying environment and it can also help us to improve our social skills.
First we must be friendly to our classmates, try to help them when they are in trouble. Second, if we have different opinions, we should discuss and try to find out ways instead of quarreling. Third, we can take part in after-school activities together, it can help us understand each other better and improve the relationship. In a word, getting on well with others make us study and live better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你认为同学之间的关系怎么样；
第二步，介绍你怎样才能和别人相处得好；
第三步，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①try to do sth.尽力做某事
②be in trouble陷入困境
③find out找出
④take part in参加
⑤get on well with相处得很好
[高分句型]
①In my opinion, it’s very important for us to get on well with our classmates.（这是it is+形容词+for sb.to do sth.句型，对于……来说……是……的。）
②First we must be friendly to our classmates, try to help them when they are in trouble.（when引导的时间状语从句）
③Second, if we have different opinions, we should discuss and try to find out ways instead of quarreling.（if引导的条件状语从句）
④In a word, getting on well with others make us study and live better.（getting on well with others 是动名词作主语，注意后面的谓语动词应该用单数）
19．（23-24九年级上·上海浦东新·期中）Please write a letter of at least 60 words to the school principal according to the given situation. (根据所给情景写一封不少于60词的信，标点符号不占格）
美丽的环境，丰富的活动，让我们在学校的生活充满了欢笑与收获。然而，学校里还是不可避免地存在一些不文明现象。作为一名初三年级学生，你深感忧虑，并打算给校长写一封信。
在这封信中，请你列举在学校里见到的一些不文明现象并选择一个谈谈你对此的看法并提出一个（些）可行的建议。
（注意：文中不得出现考生姓名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
The following expressions are for reference only. (以下表达仅供参考）
·inappropriate behaviors
·What worries me the most is that. . .
·It might be a good idea for. . . to. . .
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【答案】例文
Dear president,
I am writing this letter to you very carefully. We all know that the beautiful environment and rich activities make our school life full of laughter and harvest. However, there are still some inappropriate behaviors in schools.
For example, some students throw away rubbish everywhere. And some people destroy public property. I think we should take some measures to stop them from doing these. We can put some signs to tell the students to take care of flowers and trees. At the same time, we can also hold some speeches to let the students know the importance of protecting the environment.
I think the school environment will become more and more beautiful under everyone’s effort.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，陈述校园中的一些不文明现象；
第二步，针对这些问题提出合理的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①full of充满
②for example例如
③stop sb from doing sth阻止某人做某事
[高分句型]
①We all know that the beautiful environment and rich activities make our school life full of laughter and harvest.（that引导宾语从句）
②However, there are still some inappropriate behaviors in schools.（there be句型）
20．（23-24九年级上·上海浦东新·期中）以“我最喜欢的中国传统技能”为题，写一篇不少于60字的短文，标点符号不占格。
注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评价。
The following is for reference only.（以下内容仅供参考）
1. What is your favourite Chinese traditional skills (Paper Cutting; Clay Sculpture泥塑; Shadow Play皮影戏; Lion Dance舞狮)
2. Why do you like it (introduce it)
3. What will you do to carry on and develop it
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【答案】例文
My favourite Chinese traditional skill is lion dance. Lion dance is a traditional performance. It is a form of performance that combines Kung Fu, dance and music. Lion Dance is to celebrate a festive day or moment. I like it because I think the lion dance can bring me happiness and drive away bad luck.
But this traditional performance is less and less now. I think I should protect the traditional skill. I will learn more about it through books and TV. And I will spread it all over the world to let people know about Chinese culture.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你最喜欢的中国传统技能；
第二步，介绍你喜欢的原因；
第三步，最后介绍你将如何继承和发展它。
[亮点词汇]
①combine...and...把……联合起来
②drive away驱走
③all over the world全世界
[高分句型]
①It is a form of performance that combines Kung Fu, dance and music.（that引导的定语从句）
②I like it because I think the lion dance can bring me happiness and drive away bad luck.（because引导的原因状语从句）2024年中考英语二轮复习专题： 写作（上海专用）
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
一、书面表达
1．（22-23九年级上·上海宝山·期末）Please complete the topic “The ________ I will never forget” and write at least 60 words on your topic. 请补全题目并以此为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格.。
提示： 生活中总有一些令人难忘的东西，或是一个给你帮助的人；或是一个意义非凡的日子或是一部令人深思的电影……请你搜索记忆的宝库，分享一段令人难忘的片段。
注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。
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2．（23-24九年级上·上海杨浦·期末）Write a paragraph in at least 60 words according to the given situation（根据所给情境，写一段不少于60个单词的文字）
学校的漫画社（Cartoon Club）、信息技术社（IT Club）、茶艺社（Tea-making Club）和阅读社（Reading Club）正在招募社长（club secretary）。假设你是吴磊，结合你的特长与爱好，给负责社团工作的王老师（Mr Wang）写一份自我介绍，参与其中一个社团社长的竞选。
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3．（23-24九年级上·上海静安·期中）Write at least 60 words about the topic “A person who ________ me before”
（以“曾经________过我的人”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）
很多人曾经出现在你的成长旅程中，他们或帮助你，或鼓励你，或爱护你，……
请你描述他（她）是怎样的人，以及发生在你和他（她）之间的故事，并谈谈他（她）对你的影响。
（注意：短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息、否则不予评分）
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4．（22-23九年级上·上海徐汇·期末）Write at least 60 words on the given topic “__________ I Like”.
在你的生活、学习中你一定喜欢许多东西，请你结合自己的喜好，从以下思维导图中选择一个你喜欢的人物、动物、场所、食品、物品等以“我喜欢的 _________”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。
请先补全题目 __________ I Like，然后在文中说明喜欢的2个理由。
提示：
（注意：1.短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。）
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5．（22-23九年级上·上海闵行·期末）“汉语桥”中文能力大赛的成功举办说明越来越多的外国学生对中华优秀文化很感兴趣。假设你是李华，你的外国网友 Peter对中华文化很感兴趣，想了解并学习。请从以下中华文化的六种表现中，选择你最喜欢的一种推荐给他，并说明理由。
中华武术 (Chinese martial arts) 京剧 (Peking Opera) 中华书法 (Chinese calligraphy)
中文歌曲 (Chinese songs) 中华美食 (Chinese food) 中华剪纸 (Chinese paper-cutting)
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6．（22-23九年级下·上海闵行·期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “Say goodbye to ______”（根据提示，以“对______的告别”为题，写一篇不少于60字的短文，标点符号不占格。）
提示：生命中有许多遇见，许多期待，也终究有许多告别。我们会告别一段美好的时光，一份亲密的关系，一个难缠的坏习惯……告别意味着终将离去的珍惜，也可能是饱含期待的成长。（注意：不得出现考生姓名、校名以及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。抄袭阅读理解语篇不得分。）
Say goodbye to ______
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7．（23-24九年级上·上海黄浦·期末）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation.（根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
新学期即将来临，学校社团计划招募新人。假如你是负责人之一，请根据以下内容和要求，写一篇短文，向同学们介绍其中一个社团，如：Reading club, public speaking club, movie club, sports club等，并号召大家加入，内容包括社团名称、活动形式、时间、地点及目的等信息。
注意：
1. 短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
The club is calling!
The new school year is around the corner. Are you ready to enjoy the beautiful after-school life What about a club ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8．（22-23九年级上·上海徐汇·期末）Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic according to the given situation. Nowadays, a lot of students don’t know how to make good use of their spare time and always complain about the time they have is far less than they need.（当前，有些同学不知如何利用好空闲时间，而时常抱怨时间不够用。针对这种现象，你校广播室“校园英语之声”栏目就“如何更好地利用课余时间”进行征文。请你以此为题给该栏目写一篇不少于60个词的广播稿。开头已给出，不计入总词数，标点符号不占格。）
How to make better use of our spare time
Hello, everybody! It’s time again for our Campus English Voice. Today’s topic is How to make better use of our spare time. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9．（23-24九年级上·上海浦东新·期中）Write at least 60 words on the topic “At that moment, I felt______”. ( 以“那一刻，我感到......”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
在你的生活中，曾经有过哪一刻让你记忆深刻？那一刻发生了什么？带你给怎样的感受？请结合自己的真实经历，谈谈你的真实感想。
（ 注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
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10．（23-24九年级上·上海黄浦·期中）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据以下情景写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)
假设你是中华中学初三学生李华。校学生会将代表全体初三学生在毕业典礼上送一份小礼物给本年级的每位老师，现正在征集礼物创意。请你给学生会主席王明同学写一封邮件，谈谈你的想法。
要点：
1.推荐一份你认为合适的礼物；
2.说明你推荐该礼物的原因。
请注意短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。
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11．（23-24九年级上·上海杨浦·期中）Write a paragraph in at least 80 words to give your opinion according to the given information. (根据以下内容，写一段不少于80个单词的文字发表你的观点)
第2单元的主阅读Fishing with birds介绍了一种中国的传统技艺——鸬鹚捕鱼。文章结尾写道：In 50 years, perhaps there will be no more cormorant fishermen in the world. 你觉得鸬鹚捕鱼这项传统技艺会消失吗？给出你的观点，提供至少两个理由，并进行适当的论证。
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12．（23-24九年级上·上海普陀·期中）Write at least 60 words about the topic “Should school breaks be longer ” according to the given situation.（根据所给情境，以“课间休息是否应该被延长？”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。
目前大多数学校的课间休息时间为10分钟，可以让学生进行适当放松，为下节课做必要准备，有些学生认为十分钟课间休息过短，建议延长，还有些学生认为10分钟课间休息对他们来说是足够的。你认为课间休息时间是否应该延长？为什么？
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13．（23-24九年级上·上海徐汇·期中）Write at least 60 words about the topic “The best ________ I know”. （以“我所知的 / 我所认识的最好的________”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文。标点符号不占格。）
The following are for reference only.
1. Who / What / Which place is the best you know
2. Why is he / she / it the best
注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。
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14．（23-24九年级上·上海奉贤·期中）Write at least 60 words on the topic “A/An ________ moment in my life”.
(以“我生命中的________一刻”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
(注意：1、在答题纸上将题目补充完整。
2、短文中不得出现任何人名，校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）
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15．（23-24九年级上·上海长宁·期末）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation(请根据以下情景写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
学校拟为初三学生组织一次活动，现在校长征询同学们的意见，请你写一封电子邮件给他，就下列活动中选择其中的一项推荐给校长，并说明理由。
An outing School Subject Festival Talent Show A school sports meeting
(注意: 不得出现任何姓名、校名以及其它相关信息，否则不予评分)
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16．（22-23九年级上·上海·期末）Read the given quote from Steve Jobs and write at least 60 words to explain how you understand it. （读所给引自乔布斯的一句话，用至少 60 词谈谈你对这句话的理解和观点。）
Your time is limited, so don’t waste it living someone else’s life. —Steve Jobs
（注意：短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）
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17．（23-24九年级上·上海浦东新·期末）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据以下情境写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格)
学校报社做了一次有关学生如何使用零花钱的调查。现假设你是报社编辑李华，请根据以下图表写一份报告，报告必须包含以下内容：
1. 简要描述图表显示的结果；
2. 针对结果，提出改进消费习惯的建议，并阐述理由。
注意：
1. 短文中不得出现姓名校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
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18．（23-24九年级上·上海浦东新·期中）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation（根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）
某英文报纸发起主题为“How to get on well with classmates”的讨论，呼吁大家关注同学之间的和谐关系，友好相处，建设和谐校园。假如你是李华，请你就这一主题发表自己的看法，包括你觉得为什么要与同学友好相处以及如何与同学建立和谐关系的方法，写一篇不少于60词的短文。标点符号不占格。
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19．（23-24九年级上·上海浦东新·期中）Please write a letter of at least 60 words to the school principal according to the given situation. (根据所给情景写一封不少于60词的信，标点符号不占格）
美丽的环境，丰富的活动，让我们在学校的生活充满了欢笑与收获。然而，学校里还是不可避免地存在一些不文明现象。作为一名初三年级学生，你深感忧虑，并打算给校长写一封信。
在这封信中，请你列举在学校里见到的一些不文明现象并选择一个谈谈你对此的看法并提出一个（些）可行的建议。
（注意：文中不得出现考生姓名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
The following expressions are for reference only. (以下表达仅供参考）
·inappropriate behaviors
·What worries me the most is that. . .
·It might be a good idea for. . . to. . .
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20．（23-24九年级上·上海浦东新·期中）以“我最喜欢的中国传统技能”为题，写一篇不少于60字的短文，标点符号不占格。
注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评价。
The following is for reference only.（以下内容仅供参考）
1. What is your favourite Chinese traditional skills (Paper Cutting; Clay Sculpture泥塑; Shadow Play皮影戏; Lion Dance舞狮)
2. Why do you like it (introduce it)
3. What will you do to carry on and develop it
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