2024届高三英语二轮复习读后续写人与动物类：宠物羔羊 讲义
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阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
THE PET LAMB
Almost all the possessions had been sold to buy food and clothing for the family. At last, nothing was left but the pet lamb, Daisy. At the thought of parting with the little creature, Mrs. Grant felt sad because the children loved it very much. Having struggled hard, she had to make up her mind to sell the lamb. But she could not ask any child to go for the butcher. Finally, she went herself with a heavy heart, dragging her leaden feet, and bargained with the butcher for the sale of Daisy.
While the children were all playing with the lamb, the butcher and his boy came to the door.
“You see I am here for the lamb,” said the butcher in a loud voice. Hearing this, one child ran to her mother’s side, and asked what was happening in alarm. Mrs. Grant gently pushed the child aside, bent down and was about to tell the truth.
“That’s my lamb now, Charlie!” said the butcher’s boy in a playful tone, going up to Daisy with a rope in his hand.
“No, it is not your lamb. It is ours!” said Charlie, placing himself in front of it.
But the boy, pushing him aside, threw a rope round Daisy’s neck, and began to drag the little creature away. The poor lamb bleated very sadly. The cry of grief which fell upon the mother’s ears was too much for her, and her heart sank within her. In a moment, begging with tearful eyes, the children were all around their mother with voices choking with sobs for their little pet.
“Pray tell your boy to stop a moment,” she said in husky(沙哑的)tones to the butcher. The boy, at a word from the butcher, stopped dragging the lamb, and the little creature stopped its bleating.
In a trembling voice, Mrs. Grant explained to them how badly off they were after their father died. She also added that the kind butcher had given the money for Daisy. With this money, she could buy her children bread to eat.
Para l:But the more she explained, the stronger her children begged for Daisy.
Para 2The butcher, who had been watching all, was touched in his heart.
一．故事情节分析：
故事大意：
文章讲述了一位单亲妈妈Mrs.Gants独自带着几个孩子艰难度日，家里唯一的一只小羊羔Daisy成了孩子们的玩伴。一天，当孩子们正在和Daisy玩耍时，屠夫和自己的孩子一起过来要把Daisy带走，因为Mrs.Grant已经把小羊羔卖给了屠夫还拿了钱。当孩子们发现Daisy要被带走时，他们极力乞求妈妈不要卖掉 Daisy,Mrs.Grant对此感到非常难过。续写第一段开头是：the more she explained, the stronger her children begged for Daisy.妈妈解释的越多，孩子们就越乞求把 Daisy留下。结合前文，孩子们乞求时说了什么话和做了哪些事，以及妈妈听完后的情感变化。（语言描写，动作描写，情绪描写）续写第二段开头是：The butcher, who had been watching all, was touched in his heart. 目睹整个过程，屠夫被深深地感动了。预测屠夫走上前去，安抚孩子们，可能会做出令人感动的或出乎意料的事情。他不会带走Daisy,也不会拿回钱；也可能会让自己的孩子经常过来和孩子们一起玩耍，从此这羊就是两家的。
文本特点：
本文属于叙事文本，以第三人称的视角叙述了孩子们想要留下Daisy的感人场景。故事脉络清晰，语言简洁生动，易于把握故事走向。
情节构思：
Para1: But the more she explained , (he stronger her children begged for Daisy.
Q1: What did the children do and say to convince their mother not to sell the lamb
Q2: What was the children's feeling How about the pet lamb
“No!-No!-No!" they dashed/rushed/raced to Daisy, throwing their arms around her, begging, "please, mom! We would rather go hungry than lose her.
2.“Can we earn money by ourselves ”pleaded charlie , looking up with tearful eyes.
3.Joyful moments of them chasing each other across the grassland flashed into their mind. The children couldn't help sobbing even more.
4. The poor little creature curled up in the warm hands of the children,seemingly seeking for the precious comfort and safety.
Q3: How did Mrs.Grants feel What did she do or say
1. Hearing this, Mrs. Grants was in great sorrow, her heart bleeding.2. Eyes getting moist, Mrs.Grants knelt down, holding them tightly in her arms3. She clearly knew that the children had devoted so much love to Daisy and that Daisy was more than a pet lamb to them; she was, in their eyes, a family member.
4.Guilt engulfed, she bit the lower lip to stop it from trembling and then tears filled her eyes and started running down her wrinkled face.5.Had there been another choice, she wouldn't have made such a decision.6.Having struggled hard, she turned to the butcher and decided that she would not sell Daisy and would return the money.
Para2: The butcher , who had been watching all,was touched in his heart
Q1: What did the butcher do and say when seeing all this
1. Hardly had he noticed Mrs.Grants withdrawing the money for him than hestopped her “just keep it!"(动作+句型--人物性格)2.When Mrs.Grant took out the money and gave it back, he just waved his and announced ,“l will not rob the children of their pet!”(动作+句型--人物性格)
3.He approached the children, patted them on the shoulders gently andpromised that he would buy Daisy from their mother, but gave it back to them as a gift.(巧用动词副词--人物性格)4.Approaching the children, he patted them on the shoulders gently and smiled maybe l can offer you good guys a short-time job"(巧用分词--人物性格)
Q2: What was the reaction of the children
Q3: How could the story be ended reasonably
1.The word left the children standing stunned/dumbfounded.(反向表达+分词--人物情绪)
2.Frozen with the sudden surprise, they stood rooted to the spot, unable to believe their ears/ unable to utter a single word.(过去分词--人物情绪)
3. Looking up at the butcher, one asked seriously, " sir, do you really mean
that ”(分词+副词--人物情绪)
4.Hearing this, all the children gathered round and stroked the pet, their little hearts filled with joy.(分词+动作链+独立主格--人物情绪 场景氛围)
二．答案范文
But the more she explained, the stronger her children begged for Daisy. After these years’ company, a strong bond had already grown between Daisy and them. The idea of getting the pet lamb slaughtered and served as food was simply revolting. The children protested and pleaded, and Charlie even declared that he would eat grass instead of bread as long as his mother changed her mind. Mrs. Grant was lost for words. After all, before a group of children in defence of their companion, any reason would lose its power of persuasion.
The butcher,who had been watching all, was touched in his heart. Speaking as gently as possible, he promised that they could keep Daisy and the money. “However,” he added, “you shall pay me back by helping around at my store.” The dramatic turn of the event set the children leaping for joy. They smiled through tearful eyes and expressed heartfelt gratitude to the butcher. Charlie, in his excitement, kissed the butcher’s boy on the cheeks, who dropped his lofty pretence and blushed. In the midst of this, Daisy started her happy bleats, as if rejoicing in her narrow escape.
下水文
But the more she explained, the stronger her children begged for Daisy. They know exactly what fate Daisy would face when she was sold to the butcher and they certainly didn't want to buy bread at the expense of Daisy's life! The children knelt down and kept pleading, clinging to Daisy with their voiced choked with sobs. Looking at their tearful eyes, Mrs. Grant couldn't help but shed tears herself, How she wished there was another way out, Fighting for control, she held back tears and patted her children gently,“it was time to say goodbye", her tone calm but final.
The butcher, who had been watching all, was touched in his heart. “You can keep it,the butcher announced, a decision he had never thought before. As a butcher, he was used to killing animals mercilessly, Never once did it occur to him that one day he would be touched by the love between the family and the pet lamb. All the children and Mrs. Grant were left stunned, not believing what they had just heard. They looked at the butcher with an inquiring look, waiting for confirmation.“And you can keep the money too. Promise me, you'll take good care of Daisy. " The butcher took his boy's hand and left, The family huddled together, their hearts full of gratitude and happiness.
THE PET LAMB
Almost all the possessions had been sold to buy food and clothing for the family. At last, nothing was left but the pet lamb, Daisy. At the thought of parting with the little creature, Mrs. Grant felt sad because the children loved it very much. Having struggled hard, she had to make up her mind to sell the lamb. But she could not ask any child to go for the butcher. Finally, she went herself with a heavy heart, dragging her leaden feet, and bargained with the butcher for the sale of Daisy.
While the children were all playing with the lamb, the butcher and his boy came to the door.
“You see I am here for the lamb,” said the butcher in a loud voice. Hearing this, one child ran to her mother’s side, and asked what was happening in alarm. Mrs. Grant gently pushed the child aside, bent down and was about to tell the truth.
“That’s my lamb now, Charlie!” said the butcher’s boy in a playful tone, going up to Daisy with a rope in his hand.
“No, it is not your lamb. It is ours!” said Charlie, placing himself in front of it.
But the boy, pushing him aside, threw a rope round Daisy’s neck, and began to drag the little creature away. The poor lamb bleated very sadly. The cry of grief which fell upon the mother’s ears was too much for her, and her heart sank within her. In a moment, begging with tearful eyes, the children were all around their mother with voices choking with sobs for their little pet.
“Pray tell your boy to stop a moment,” she said in husky(沙哑的)tones to the butcher. The boy, at a word from the butcher, stopped dragging the lamb, and the little creature stopped its bleating.
In a trembling voice, Mrs. Grant explained to them how badly off they were after their father died. She also added that the kind butcher had given the money for Daisy. With this money, she could buy her children bread to eat.
Para l:But the more she explained, the stronger her children begged for Daisy.
Para 2The butcher, who had been watching all, was touched in his heart.
一．故事情节分析：
故事大意：
文章讲述了一位单亲妈妈Mrs.Gants独自带着几个孩子艰难度日，家里唯一的一只小羊羔Daisy成了孩子们的玩伴。一天，当孩子们正在和Daisy玩耍时，屠夫和自己的孩子一起过来要把Daisy带走，因为Mrs.Grant已经把小羊羔卖给了屠夫还拿了钱。当孩子们发现Daisy要被带走时，他们极力乞求妈妈不要卖掉 Daisy,Mrs.Grant对此感到非常难过。续写第一段开头是：the more she explained, the stronger her children begged for Daisy.妈妈解释的越多，孩子们就越乞求把 Daisy留下。结合前文，孩子们乞求时说了什么话和做了哪些事，以及妈妈听完后的情感变化。（语言描写，动作描写，情绪描写）续写第二段开头是：The butcher, who had been watching all, was touched in his heart. 目睹整个过程，屠夫被深深地感动了。预测屠夫走上前去，安抚孩子们，可能会做出令人感动的或出乎意料的事情。他不会带走Daisy,也不会拿回钱；也可能会让自己的孩子经常过来和孩子们一起玩耍，从此这羊就是两家的。
文本特点：
本文属于叙事文本，以第三人称的视角叙述了孩子们想要留下Daisy的感人场景。故事脉络清晰，语言简洁生动，易于把握故事走向。
情节构思：
Para1: But the more she explained , (he stronger her children begged for Daisy.
Q1: What did the children do and say to convince their mother not to sell the lamb
Q2: What was the children's feeling How about the pet lamb
“No!-No!-No!" they dashed/rushed/raced to Daisy, throwing their arms around her, begging, "please, mom! We would rather go hungry than lose her.
2.“Can we earn money by ourselves ”pleaded charlie , looking up with tearful eyes.
3.Joyful moments of them chasing each other across the grassland flashed into their mind. The children couldn't help sobbing even more.
4. The poor little creature curled up in the warm hands of the children,seemingly seeking for the precious comfort and safety.
Q3: How did Mrs.Grants feel What did she do or say
1. Hearing this, Mrs. Grants was in great sorrow, her heart bleeding.2. Eyes getting moist, Mrs.Grants knelt down, holding them tightly in her arms3. She clearly knew that the children had devoted so much love to Daisy and that Daisy was more than a pet lamb to them; she was, in their eyes, a family member.
4.Guilt engulfed, she bit the lower lip to stop it from trembling and then tears filled her eyes and started running down her wrinkled face.5.Had there been another choice, she wouldn't have made such a decision.6.Having struggled hard, she turned to the butcher and decided that she would not sell Daisy and would return the money.
Para2: The butcher , who had been watching all,was touched in his heart
Q1: What did the butcher do and say when seeing all this
1. Hardly had he noticed Mrs.Grants withdrawing the money for him than hestopped her “just keep it!"(动作+句型--人物性格)2.When Mrs.Grant took out the money and gave it back, he just waved his and announced ,“l will not rob the children of their pet!”(动作+句型--人物性格)
3.He approached the children, patted them on the shoulders gently andpromised that he would buy Daisy from their mother, but gave it back to them as a gift.(巧用动词副词--人物性格)4.Approaching the children, he patted them on the shoulders gently and smiled maybe l can offer you good guys a short-time job"(巧用分词--人物性格)
Q2: What was the reaction of the children
Q3: How could the story be ended reasonably
1.The word left the children standing stunned/dumbfounded.(反向表达+分词--人物情绪)
2.Frozen with the sudden surprise, they stood rooted to the spot, unable to believe their ears/ unable to utter a single word.(过去分词--人物情绪)
3. Looking up at the butcher, one asked seriously, " sir, do you really mean
that ”(分词+副词--人物情绪)
4.Hearing this, all the children gathered round and stroked the pet, their little hearts filled with joy.(分词+动作链+独立主格--人物情绪 场景氛围)
二．答案范文
But the more she explained, the stronger her children begged for Daisy. After these years’ company, a strong bond had already grown between Daisy and them. The idea of getting the pet lamb slaughtered and served as food was simply revolting. The children protested and pleaded, and Charlie even declared that he would eat grass instead of bread as long as his mother changed her mind. Mrs. Grant was lost for words. After all, before a group of children in defence of their companion, any reason would lose its power of persuasion.
The butcher,who had been watching all, was touched in his heart. Speaking as gently as possible, he promised that they could keep Daisy and the money. “However,” he added, “you shall pay me back by helping around at my store.” The dramatic turn of the event set the children leaping for joy. They smiled through tearful eyes and expressed heartfelt gratitude to the butcher. Charlie, in his excitement, kissed the butcher’s boy on the cheeks, who dropped his lofty pretence and blushed. In the midst of this, Daisy started her happy bleats, as if rejoicing in her narrow escape.
下水文
But the more she explained, the stronger her children begged for Daisy. They know exactly what fate Daisy would face when she was sold to the butcher and they certainly didn't want to buy bread at the expense of Daisy's life! The children knelt down and kept pleading, clinging to Daisy with their voiced choked with sobs. Looking at their tearful eyes, Mrs. Grant couldn't help but shed tears herself, How she wished there was another way out, Fighting for control, she held back tears and patted her children gently,“it was time to say goodbye", her tone calm but final.
The butcher, who had been watching all, was touched in his heart. “You can keep it,the butcher announced, a decision he had never thought before. As a butcher, he was used to killing animals mercilessly, Never once did it occur to him that one day he would be touched by the love between the family and the pet lamb. All the children and Mrs. Grant were left stunned, not believing what they had just heard. They looked at the butcher with an inquiring look, waiting for confirmation.“And you can keep the money too. Promise me, you'll take good care of Daisy. " The butcher took his boy's hand and left, The family huddled together, their hearts full of gratitude and happiness.