2024届上海市部分区高三下学期二模英语试题汇编：书面表达（含范文与解析）
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上海市部分区2023-2024学年高三下学期二模英语试题汇编
书面表达
2024届上海市宝山区高三下学期第二次教学质量监测试英语试题
假如你是李华，是希望中学的一名学生。现在你们班级英语课上的互动形式和内容都越来越丰富了，但有一个现象需要注意，就是当老师提出的问题学生不能及时回答时，有时候老师会代替学生回答，有时候也会出现较长时间的冷场。针对这种情况，请你给老师写一封邮件，提出你的意见和建议。你的文章必须包括：
简单描述你觉得能改变这种现象的方法；
阐述你所提建议的理由。
（文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称）
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2024届上海市嘉定区高三二模考试英语试题
你所在的小区附近将新建一个大型游乐场，很多居民表示不满。社区管理处决定征集居民意见并召开专题讨论会，作为居民代表，写一份讨论会发言稿，内容需包括：
1. 你认为新建大型游乐场可能会存在的问题(至少2个)；
2. 你对以上问题的建议和理由。
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2024届上海市松江区高三下学期模拟考质量监控英语试卷
你是新华中学的高三学生张敏。临近毕业，同学间正在互留赠言。假设李华是你的同班好友，请给他/她写一封邮件，你需要在邮件中：
1)写明你给他/她的临别赠言；
2)结合李华的高中生活经历，谈谈你送他/她该赠言的理由。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2024届上海市崇明区高三下学期二模英语试卷
假设你是明启中学的高三学生徐晶，你远在英国的朋友Anna前几天给你发来电子邮件，向你叙述了她未能成功入选校学生会的事情，为此一直闷闷不乐。恰巧你在图书馆看到下面图中英国前首相丘吉尔讲过的这句名言。你给Anna回一封邮件，用这句名言来劝慰和鼓励她。在邮件中你必须：
1.对Anna的失败表示同情；
2.用你对这句名言的理解和1-2个实例来劝慰和鼓励Anna。
注：不要在邮件中提及你的真实姓名和学校等相关信息。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2024届上海市金山区高三下学期二模英语试题
假设你是明启中学的学生吴磊，你在英语一考中取得了118分的成绩，现在你正面临着是否参加6月份二考的选择，请谈谈你的想法。内容需包括：
1）说明你的选择；
2）阐述你的理由。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
答案
2024届上海市宝山区高三下学期第二次教学质量监测试英语试题
【答案】Dear Teacher,
I am Li Hua, a student from our esteemed school. Recently, I have noticed that our English classes have become increasingly interactive and engaging. However, there is a small aspect that I believe could be further improved upon.
Occasionally, when a question is posed and students hesitate to respond promptly, there are instances where you might answer on our behalf or a momentary lull ensues. To address this, I suggest implementing a few strategies. Firstly, we could be encouraged to discuss in small groups before sharing our thoughts with the class. Secondly, you could provide prompts or guiding questions to help us bridge the gap in our thinking.
The reason for these suggestions is twofold. Firstly, it would foster a more student-centered learning environment, encouraging active participation and critical thinking. Secondly, it would help build our confidence in speaking English, knowing that we have the support and space to explore our ideas.
Thank you for your dedication to our learning.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生假如是李华，是希望中学的一名学生。现在你们班级英语课上的互动形式和内容都越来越丰富了，但有一个现象需要注意，就是当老师提出的问题学生不能及时回答时，有时候老师会代替学生回答，有时候也会出现较长时间的冷场。针对这种情况，请你给老师写一封邮件，提出你的意见和建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
培养：foster→develop
建议：suggestion→advice
提出：pose→put forward
提供：provide→offer
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：To address this, I suggest implementing a few strategies.
拓展句：If we want to address this, I suggest implementing a few strategies.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Recently, I have noticed that our English classes have become increasingly interactive and engaging. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Occasionally, when a question is posed and students hesitate to respond promptly, there are instances where you might answer on our behalf or a momentary lull ensues. (运用了when引导时间状语从句和where引导的限制性定语从句)
2024届上海市嘉定区高三二模考试英语试题
【答案】Dear neighbors,
I am here as a resident representative to voice our concerns about the upcoming large amusement park near our community. While the idea sounds exciting, there are potential issues we must consider.
Firstly, noise pollution could become an important problem. The constant hustle and bustle of the amusement park might disturb our peace and quiet. Secondly, traffic congestion is another concern. The influx of visitors is likely to cause major traffic jams, affecting our daily commutes.
To address these issues, I propose conducting a thorough noise impact assessment and implementing noise reduction measures. Additionally, we should explore traffic management strategies to minimize congestion.
It's crucial for our voices to be heard and considered in this process. Let's work together to find solutions that benefit our community.
【解析】
【导语】这是一篇发言稿。要求考生作为居民代表就你所在的小区附近将新建一个大型游乐场，很多居民表示不满一事，写一份讨论会发言稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
变得：become→ turn into
重要的：important → significant
问题：problem→ issue
合作：work together→ team up
2.句式拓展
同义句改写
原句：Firstly, noise pollution could become an important problem.
拓展句：Initially, the matter of noise pollution emerges as a significant concern.
【点睛】【高分句型1】While the idea sounds exciting, there are potential issues we must consider.（使用了关系代词that引导的定语从句，先行词为issues）
【高分句型2】To address these issues, I propose conducting a thorough noise impact assessment and implementing noise reduction measures.（使用了非谓语动词作状语）
2024届上海市松江区高三下学期模拟考质量监控英语试卷
【答案】Dear Li Hua,
As we near the end of our high school journey, I find myself reflecting on the countless memories we've shared. As your close friend, I want to offer you these parting words: “Remain true to yourself, and let your light shine bright.”
Your high school experience has been a testament to your unwavering self-belief and unique radiance. You have always stood for what you believe in never afraid to voice your opinions or pursue your passions. Whether it was leading our class in academic projects or inspiring us through your artistic endeavors, you have illuminated our days with your positivity and enthusiasm.
These words are my wish for you in the future. May you continue to be your authentic self, never compromising your principles or passions. And may your light continue to shine brightly, inspiring and motivating those around you. Farewell, my dear friend. May your journey ahead be filled with joy and success.
Yours,
Zhang Min
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你是新华中学的高三学生张敏。临近毕业，同学间正在互留赠言。假设李华是你的同班好友，请给他/她写一封邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
回想起：reflect on→recall
害怕的：afraid→scared
相信：believe in→have faith in
表达：voice→express
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Your high school experience has been a testament to your unwavering self-belief and unique radiance.
拓展句：What you have experienced in high school has been a testament to your unwavering self-belief and unique radiance.
【点睛】[高分句型1] As we near the end of our high school journey, I find myself reflecting on the countless memories we've shared. (运用了as引导时间状语从句以及现在分词reflecting作宾语补足语)
[高分句型2] You have always stood for what you believe in, never afraid to voice your opinions or pursue your passions. (运用了what引导宾语从句)
2024届上海市崇明区高三下学期二模英语试卷
【答案】Dear Anna,
I’m sorry to hear about your unsuccessful bid for the student council. Failure can be tough but remember, as Winston Churchill said, “Success is not final, failure is not fatal; it is the courage to continue that counts.” So, don't let one small failure stand in your way.
Think of Edison, who failed thousands of times before inventing the light bulb. His courage to persevere led to a world-changing discovery. You, too, have the potential to overcome this setback. Don’t let this failure define you; let it be a stepping stone to greater success.
Keep going, Anna. It is your courage and determination that will lead you to new heights. I believe you will be selected successfully in the next election.
Best wishes,
Xu Jing
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于远在英国的朋友Anna前几天给你发来电子邮件，向你叙述了她未能成功入选校学生会的事情，为此一直闷闷不乐，恰巧你在图书馆看到下面图中英国前首相丘吉尔讲过的这句名言这一情况，给Anna回一封邮件，用这句名言来劝慰和鼓励她。
【详解】1.词汇积累
痛苦的：tough→ painful
挫折：setback→ frustration
克服：overcome→ conquer
决心：determination→ resolution
2.句式拓展
简单句变非谓语作状语
原句：I’m sorry to hear about your unsuccessful bid for the student council.
拓展句：Hearing about you failed in your bid for the student council, I feel so sorry.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Think of Edison, who failed thousands of times before inventing the light bulb.（运用了关系代词who引导的非限制性定语从句。）
【高分句型2】It is your courage and determination that will lead you to new heights.（运用了It is…that…的强调句式。）
2024届上海市金山区高三下学期二模英语试题
【答案】范文
My Decision on the Second English Test
I'm Wu Lei, a student from Mingqi High School. I am writing to share my thoughts on whether to participate in the second English test scheduled for June. After careful consideration, I have decided to forego the second test.
My primary reason for this decision stems from the encouraging score of 118 I achieved in the first exam. This result indicates that I possess a solid foundation in the language, and I believe that with continued effort and dedication, I can further enhance my proficiency. Additionally, I recognize that my time is valuable, and I wish to utilize it effectively. Participating in the second test might not significantly impact my overall score, but it could potentially detract from my focus on other subjects and extracurricular activities.
In conclusion, I am confident in my current English proficiency and believe that my efforts should be directed towards maintaining and improving my performance in other areas. Therefore, I have chosen not to participate in the second English test.
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是明启中学的学生吴磊，你在英语一考中取得了118分的成绩，现在你正面临着是否参加6月份二考的选择，请谈谈你的想法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加：participate in→join in
此外：additionally→besides
提高：enhance→strengthen
总之：in conclusion→in short
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Additionally, I recognize that my time is valuable, and I wish to utilize it effectively.
拓展句：Additionally, after I recognize that my time is valuable, I wish to utilize it effectively.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I am writing to share my thoughts on whether to participate in the second English test scheduled for June.(运用了特殊疑问词+不定式作宾语)
[高分句型2] In conclusion I am confident in my current English proficiency and believe that my efforts should be directed towards maintaining and improving my performance in other areas. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
书面表达
2024届上海市宝山区高三下学期第二次教学质量监测试英语试题
假如你是李华，是希望中学的一名学生。现在你们班级英语课上的互动形式和内容都越来越丰富了，但有一个现象需要注意，就是当老师提出的问题学生不能及时回答时，有时候老师会代替学生回答，有时候也会出现较长时间的冷场。针对这种情况，请你给老师写一封邮件，提出你的意见和建议。你的文章必须包括：
简单描述你觉得能改变这种现象的方法；
阐述你所提建议的理由。
（文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称）
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2024届上海市嘉定区高三二模考试英语试题
你所在的小区附近将新建一个大型游乐场，很多居民表示不满。社区管理处决定征集居民意见并召开专题讨论会，作为居民代表，写一份讨论会发言稿，内容需包括：
1. 你认为新建大型游乐场可能会存在的问题(至少2个)；
2. 你对以上问题的建议和理由。
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2024届上海市松江区高三下学期模拟考质量监控英语试卷
你是新华中学的高三学生张敏。临近毕业，同学间正在互留赠言。假设李华是你的同班好友，请给他/她写一封邮件，你需要在邮件中：
1)写明你给他/她的临别赠言；
2)结合李华的高中生活经历，谈谈你送他/她该赠言的理由。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2024届上海市崇明区高三下学期二模英语试卷
假设你是明启中学的高三学生徐晶，你远在英国的朋友Anna前几天给你发来电子邮件，向你叙述了她未能成功入选校学生会的事情，为此一直闷闷不乐。恰巧你在图书馆看到下面图中英国前首相丘吉尔讲过的这句名言。你给Anna回一封邮件，用这句名言来劝慰和鼓励她。在邮件中你必须：
1.对Anna的失败表示同情；
2.用你对这句名言的理解和1-2个实例来劝慰和鼓励Anna。
注：不要在邮件中提及你的真实姓名和学校等相关信息。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2024届上海市金山区高三下学期二模英语试题
假设你是明启中学的学生吴磊，你在英语一考中取得了118分的成绩，现在你正面临着是否参加6月份二考的选择，请谈谈你的想法。内容需包括：
1）说明你的选择；
2）阐述你的理由。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
答案
2024届上海市宝山区高三下学期第二次教学质量监测试英语试题
【答案】Dear Teacher,
I am Li Hua, a student from our esteemed school. Recently, I have noticed that our English classes have become increasingly interactive and engaging. However, there is a small aspect that I believe could be further improved upon.
Occasionally, when a question is posed and students hesitate to respond promptly, there are instances where you might answer on our behalf or a momentary lull ensues. To address this, I suggest implementing a few strategies. Firstly, we could be encouraged to discuss in small groups before sharing our thoughts with the class. Secondly, you could provide prompts or guiding questions to help us bridge the gap in our thinking.
The reason for these suggestions is twofold. Firstly, it would foster a more student-centered learning environment, encouraging active participation and critical thinking. Secondly, it would help build our confidence in speaking English, knowing that we have the support and space to explore our ideas.
Thank you for your dedication to our learning.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生假如是李华，是希望中学的一名学生。现在你们班级英语课上的互动形式和内容都越来越丰富了，但有一个现象需要注意，就是当老师提出的问题学生不能及时回答时，有时候老师会代替学生回答，有时候也会出现较长时间的冷场。针对这种情况，请你给老师写一封邮件，提出你的意见和建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
培养：foster→develop
建议：suggestion→advice
提出：pose→put forward
提供：provide→offer
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：To address this, I suggest implementing a few strategies.
拓展句：If we want to address this, I suggest implementing a few strategies.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Recently, I have noticed that our English classes have become increasingly interactive and engaging. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Occasionally, when a question is posed and students hesitate to respond promptly, there are instances where you might answer on our behalf or a momentary lull ensues. (运用了when引导时间状语从句和where引导的限制性定语从句)
2024届上海市嘉定区高三二模考试英语试题
【答案】Dear neighbors,
I am here as a resident representative to voice our concerns about the upcoming large amusement park near our community. While the idea sounds exciting, there are potential issues we must consider.
Firstly, noise pollution could become an important problem. The constant hustle and bustle of the amusement park might disturb our peace and quiet. Secondly, traffic congestion is another concern. The influx of visitors is likely to cause major traffic jams, affecting our daily commutes.
To address these issues, I propose conducting a thorough noise impact assessment and implementing noise reduction measures. Additionally, we should explore traffic management strategies to minimize congestion.
It's crucial for our voices to be heard and considered in this process. Let's work together to find solutions that benefit our community.
【解析】
【导语】这是一篇发言稿。要求考生作为居民代表就你所在的小区附近将新建一个大型游乐场，很多居民表示不满一事，写一份讨论会发言稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
变得：become→ turn into
重要的：important → significant
问题：problem→ issue
合作：work together→ team up
2.句式拓展
同义句改写
原句：Firstly, noise pollution could become an important problem.
拓展句：Initially, the matter of noise pollution emerges as a significant concern.
【点睛】【高分句型1】While the idea sounds exciting, there are potential issues we must consider.（使用了关系代词that引导的定语从句，先行词为issues）
【高分句型2】To address these issues, I propose conducting a thorough noise impact assessment and implementing noise reduction measures.（使用了非谓语动词作状语）
2024届上海市松江区高三下学期模拟考质量监控英语试卷
【答案】Dear Li Hua,
As we near the end of our high school journey, I find myself reflecting on the countless memories we've shared. As your close friend, I want to offer you these parting words: “Remain true to yourself, and let your light shine bright.”
Your high school experience has been a testament to your unwavering self-belief and unique radiance. You have always stood for what you believe in never afraid to voice your opinions or pursue your passions. Whether it was leading our class in academic projects or inspiring us through your artistic endeavors, you have illuminated our days with your positivity and enthusiasm.
These words are my wish for you in the future. May you continue to be your authentic self, never compromising your principles or passions. And may your light continue to shine brightly, inspiring and motivating those around you. Farewell, my dear friend. May your journey ahead be filled with joy and success.
Yours,
Zhang Min
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你是新华中学的高三学生张敏。临近毕业，同学间正在互留赠言。假设李华是你的同班好友，请给他/她写一封邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
回想起：reflect on→recall
害怕的：afraid→scared
相信：believe in→have faith in
表达：voice→express
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Your high school experience has been a testament to your unwavering self-belief and unique radiance.
拓展句：What you have experienced in high school has been a testament to your unwavering self-belief and unique radiance.
【点睛】[高分句型1] As we near the end of our high school journey, I find myself reflecting on the countless memories we've shared. (运用了as引导时间状语从句以及现在分词reflecting作宾语补足语)
[高分句型2] You have always stood for what you believe in, never afraid to voice your opinions or pursue your passions. (运用了what引导宾语从句)
2024届上海市崇明区高三下学期二模英语试卷
【答案】Dear Anna,
I’m sorry to hear about your unsuccessful bid for the student council. Failure can be tough but remember, as Winston Churchill said, “Success is not final, failure is not fatal; it is the courage to continue that counts.” So, don't let one small failure stand in your way.
Think of Edison, who failed thousands of times before inventing the light bulb. His courage to persevere led to a world-changing discovery. You, too, have the potential to overcome this setback. Don’t let this failure define you; let it be a stepping stone to greater success.
Keep going, Anna. It is your courage and determination that will lead you to new heights. I believe you will be selected successfully in the next election.
Best wishes,
Xu Jing
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于远在英国的朋友Anna前几天给你发来电子邮件，向你叙述了她未能成功入选校学生会的事情，为此一直闷闷不乐，恰巧你在图书馆看到下面图中英国前首相丘吉尔讲过的这句名言这一情况，给Anna回一封邮件，用这句名言来劝慰和鼓励她。
【详解】1.词汇积累
痛苦的：tough→ painful
挫折：setback→ frustration
克服：overcome→ conquer
决心：determination→ resolution
2.句式拓展
简单句变非谓语作状语
原句：I’m sorry to hear about your unsuccessful bid for the student council.
拓展句：Hearing about you failed in your bid for the student council, I feel so sorry.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Think of Edison, who failed thousands of times before inventing the light bulb.（运用了关系代词who引导的非限制性定语从句。）
【高分句型2】It is your courage and determination that will lead you to new heights.（运用了It is…that…的强调句式。）
2024届上海市金山区高三下学期二模英语试题
【答案】范文
My Decision on the Second English Test
I'm Wu Lei, a student from Mingqi High School. I am writing to share my thoughts on whether to participate in the second English test scheduled for June. After careful consideration, I have decided to forego the second test.
My primary reason for this decision stems from the encouraging score of 118 I achieved in the first exam. This result indicates that I possess a solid foundation in the language, and I believe that with continued effort and dedication, I can further enhance my proficiency. Additionally, I recognize that my time is valuable, and I wish to utilize it effectively. Participating in the second test might not significantly impact my overall score, but it could potentially detract from my focus on other subjects and extracurricular activities.
In conclusion, I am confident in my current English proficiency and believe that my efforts should be directed towards maintaining and improving my performance in other areas. Therefore, I have chosen not to participate in the second English test.
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是明启中学的学生吴磊，你在英语一考中取得了118分的成绩，现在你正面临着是否参加6月份二考的选择，请谈谈你的想法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加：participate in→join in
此外：additionally→besides
提高：enhance→strengthen
总之：in conclusion→in short
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Additionally, I recognize that my time is valuable, and I wish to utilize it effectively.
拓展句：Additionally, after I recognize that my time is valuable, I wish to utilize it effectively.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I am writing to share my thoughts on whether to participate in the second English test scheduled for June.(运用了特殊疑问词+不定式作宾语)
[高分句型2] In conclusion I am confident in my current English proficiency and believe that my efforts should be directed towards maintaining and improving my performance in other areas. (运用了that引导宾语从句)