2024届高三英语读后续写个人成长类--分开五年后的见面 讲义
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| 科目 | 英语 | ||
| 更新时间 | 2024-05-04 21:05:04 | ||
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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
This was it .
Today was the day.
Finally, she would be able to see her again.
It’d been five long years. Her university days now felt like a lifetime ago. When Jennifer thought back to it, she didn’t like the girl she had been then, but when she thought about Yui Fay, that discomfort disappeared and her whole life lit up.
She couldn’t be more excited. She kept imagining their meeting — how they would run towards each other, hugging and talking of the old times. As she imagined, happiness spread through her body.
It was time to get dressed. As she was struggling about what to wear, she spotted a red summer dress, which she wore that night in Barcelona. She would never forget that night five years before. After a hard week at university, Yui Fay and she spontaneously（心血来潮地）bought bustickets to Barcelona. They slept on the bus and then spent the whole day exploring the city. In the evening. they met these fun young guys and spent the whole night singing and dancing. Every day with Yui Fay was fun.
After university Yui Fay went back to China where she took over her family’s business, while Jennifer took the job in an office. They promised to keep in contact. But then life happened. The occasional calls faded with time and they had not talked for over two years. Yet, of all her friends. Yui Fay was still the one she felt the closest to. She knew all her fears, dreams, and her wildest stories. She knew that if something happened, Yui Fay would be there for her no matter what. Andvice versa. Some friendships just survive the passage of time.
Yet the idea of meeting her was also terrifying. What if … The idea was too hard to put into words. What if the person she was so fond of was no longer What if this dinner turned out to be nothing more than a meeting between two boring businesswomen
At that moment,her cellphone rang.
1. 续写词数应为150左右
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答
Jennifer took up her phone and looked at the screen. __________
Just then, someone was coming towards Jennifer. ______________
文本大意：
Jennifer异常兴奋，因为已经五年过去了，她即将了要和自己的大学好友见面。她不断想象彼此见面的场景，在考虑穿什么的时候，她穿了和Yui一起买的红色长裙。毕业后，偶尔会电话联系，但后来的两年连电话联系也断了。想到这，Jennifer又很害怕，担心见面会发生不好的情况。
续写情节发展：
第一段：
S1不出所料，电话是Yui打来的，她说她不能来接她，要求改天再去。
S2詹妮弗既震惊又失望，毕竟，她等这一刻已经很久了。
S3尽管她很伤心，但她别无选择，只好同意了。
S4挂了电话后，她漫无目的地在街上闲逛，最后走进了指定的餐厅。
S5菜单上摆满了她最喜欢的菜，但她什么都没胃口，她非常伤心。
第二段：
S1她拍了拍詹妮弗的肩膀，说：“座位有人坐吗？”
S2詹妮弗抬起头来，看到了那张刻在她脑海中的脸。
S3詹妮弗非常激动，Yui笑着解释说，她一直跟着她是为了给她一个大惊喜。
S4这一天剩下的时间非常愉快。
S5主旨升华，真正的友谊不会改变。
续写的衔接：
续写第一段：Jennifer took up her phone and looked at the screen.
这样写：Jennifer took up her phone and looked at the screen. It was Yui Fay. She said she would not be able to come and asked for a rain check....
从所给的首句推进模式来看，Jennifer 是主位，phone 和 screen 是客体，是将要叙述的核心内容。题目所给句子是“Jennifer 接通电话，看着屏幕”，接下 来应是看到的是谁，对方说些什么。然后才是 Jennifer 的 反应。这样续写根据phone和screen展 开，逻辑性强，上下文衔接紧密。
续写第二段：Just then, someone was coming towards Jennifer.
这里someone是主体，根据逻辑的承接，她走进我下一步动作是拍拍我的肩膀和我说话。因此可以这样写She delicately patted Jennifer on one side of her shoulder, slipped to the other side and said, “Is the seat taken ”。这样主体一致，动作衔接地非常流畅自然。
参考范文1
Paragraph 1:Jennifer took up her phone and looked at the screen. It was Yui Fay. She said that she would not be able to come and meet her and asked for a rain check. Jennifer was shocked and disappointed. After all, she’d been waiting for this moment for ages. Sad though she was, she had no choice but to agree. Having hung up the phone, she aimlessly wondered on the street and ended up walking into the appointed restaurant. The menu was filled with her favorite dishes yet she had little appetite for anything. She was so sad that she was not aware of what would surprise her next.
Paragraph 2:Just then, someone was coming towards Jennifer. She delicately patted Jennifer on one side of her shoulder, slipped to the other side and said, “Is the seat taken ” Jennifer looked up and saw that naughty, wild and adventurous face that had been carved into her brain. “Yui Fay!” Jennifer shouted out excitedly. “Why are you here ” Yui Fay smilingly explained that she had followed her the whole time to give her a big surprise. The rest of the day was great joy. It turned out that they didn’t change a bit, neither did their friendship.
参考范文2
Jennifer took up her phone and looked at the screen. Surprised and a bit nervous, she found it was Yui Fay. After taking a deep breath firmly, Jennifer answered the phone. There came Yui Fay’s familiar and tender voice, which made Jennifer feel like falling into a cloud, softly and comfortably. Yui Fay excitedly expressed how thrilled she was and carefully confirmed their destination, making sure not to ruin this fabulous（极大的） night. After the call, Jennifer felt a bolt of warm currents welled up in her mind. She spontaneously(无意识的) wore that red summer dress. Too nervous and thrilled to stay at home, she arrived at the restaurant in advance, waiting for Yui Fay and thinking of the sweet memories.
Just then, someone was coming towards Jennifer. Elegantly and charmingly, the woman approached Jennifer and patted her on the shoulder. Before Jennifer could realize what had happened, she was greeted with a warm hug. It was Yui Fay! The person who she has crazily missed was tightly hugging her! Jennifer, who was overcome by the intangible(触摸不到的) happiness, suddenly realized that nothing has been changed. They burst into laughter, walking into the restaurant. That night, the dim but mild light witnessed their happy moments. Many things would change in life, but clearly, the deepest friendship not.
独立分析：
1. 时间状语从句的省略形式：
Surprised and a bit nervous, she found it was Yui Fay.
原句：As she felt surprised and a bit nervous, she found it was Yui Fay.
2. 时间状语从句的省略形式：
After taking a deep breath firmly, Jennifer answered the phone.
原句：After she took a deep breath firmly, Jennifer answered the phone.
3. 倒装句型+定语从句+状语(副词)
There came Yui Fay’s familiar and tender voice, which made Jennifer feel like falling into a cloud, softly and comfortably.
原句: Jennifer heard Yui Fay’s familiar and tender voice, which made her feel like falling into a cloud, softly and comfortably.
4. 宾语从句+分词结构(结果状语)
Yui Fay excitedly expressed how thrilled she was and carefully confirmed their destination, making sure not to ruin this fabulous night.
原句：Yui Fay excitedly expressed that she was very thrilled and carefully confirmed their destination, making sure not to ruin this fabulous night.
5. 宾语从句+无灵句子
After the call, Jennifer felt a bolt (一道)of warm currents welled up in her mind.
6. 副词修饰动词
She spontaneously wore that red summer dress.
7. 原因状语+分词结构(伴随状语)
Too nervous and thrilled to stay at home, she arrived at the restaurant in advance, waiting for Yui Fay and thinking of the sweet memories.
原句：As she was too nervous and thrilled to stay at home, she arrived at the restaurant in advance, waiting for ....
8. 副词作状语
Elegantly and charmingly, the woman approached Jennifer and patted her on the shoulder.
9. 时间状语从句
Before Jennifer could realize what had happened, she was greeted with a warm hug.
10. 定语从句
The person who she has crazily missed was tightly hugging her!
Jennifer, who was overcome by the intangible(触摸不到的) happiness, suddenly realized that nothing has been changed.
11. 使用分词结构(伴随状语)
They burst into laughter, walking into the restaurant.
12. 使用无灵句式
That night, the dim but mild light witnessed their happy moments.
13. 画龙点睛结尾，点名主题
Many things would change in life, but clearly, the deepest friendship not.
This was it .
Today was the day.
Finally, she would be able to see her again.
It’d been five long years. Her university days now felt like a lifetime ago. When Jennifer thought back to it, she didn’t like the girl she had been then, but when she thought about Yui Fay, that discomfort disappeared and her whole life lit up.
She couldn’t be more excited. She kept imagining their meeting — how they would run towards each other, hugging and talking of the old times. As she imagined, happiness spread through her body.
It was time to get dressed. As she was struggling about what to wear, she spotted a red summer dress, which she wore that night in Barcelona. She would never forget that night five years before. After a hard week at university, Yui Fay and she spontaneously（心血来潮地）bought bustickets to Barcelona. They slept on the bus and then spent the whole day exploring the city. In the evening. they met these fun young guys and spent the whole night singing and dancing. Every day with Yui Fay was fun.
After university Yui Fay went back to China where she took over her family’s business, while Jennifer took the job in an office. They promised to keep in contact. But then life happened. The occasional calls faded with time and they had not talked for over two years. Yet, of all her friends. Yui Fay was still the one she felt the closest to. She knew all her fears, dreams, and her wildest stories. She knew that if something happened, Yui Fay would be there for her no matter what. Andvice versa. Some friendships just survive the passage of time.
Yet the idea of meeting her was also terrifying. What if … The idea was too hard to put into words. What if the person she was so fond of was no longer What if this dinner turned out to be nothing more than a meeting between two boring businesswomen
At that moment,her cellphone rang.
1. 续写词数应为150左右
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答
Jennifer took up her phone and looked at the screen. __________
Just then, someone was coming towards Jennifer. ______________
文本大意：
Jennifer异常兴奋，因为已经五年过去了，她即将了要和自己的大学好友见面。她不断想象彼此见面的场景，在考虑穿什么的时候，她穿了和Yui一起买的红色长裙。毕业后，偶尔会电话联系，但后来的两年连电话联系也断了。想到这，Jennifer又很害怕，担心见面会发生不好的情况。
续写情节发展：
第一段：
S1不出所料，电话是Yui打来的，她说她不能来接她，要求改天再去。
S2詹妮弗既震惊又失望，毕竟，她等这一刻已经很久了。
S3尽管她很伤心，但她别无选择，只好同意了。
S4挂了电话后，她漫无目的地在街上闲逛，最后走进了指定的餐厅。
S5菜单上摆满了她最喜欢的菜，但她什么都没胃口，她非常伤心。
第二段：
S1她拍了拍詹妮弗的肩膀，说：“座位有人坐吗？”
S2詹妮弗抬起头来，看到了那张刻在她脑海中的脸。
S3詹妮弗非常激动，Yui笑着解释说，她一直跟着她是为了给她一个大惊喜。
S4这一天剩下的时间非常愉快。
S5主旨升华，真正的友谊不会改变。
续写的衔接：
续写第一段：Jennifer took up her phone and looked at the screen.
这样写：Jennifer took up her phone and looked at the screen. It was Yui Fay. She said she would not be able to come and asked for a rain check....
从所给的首句推进模式来看，Jennifer 是主位，phone 和 screen 是客体，是将要叙述的核心内容。题目所给句子是“Jennifer 接通电话，看着屏幕”，接下 来应是看到的是谁，对方说些什么。然后才是 Jennifer 的 反应。这样续写根据phone和screen展 开，逻辑性强，上下文衔接紧密。
续写第二段：Just then, someone was coming towards Jennifer.
这里someone是主体，根据逻辑的承接，她走进我下一步动作是拍拍我的肩膀和我说话。因此可以这样写She delicately patted Jennifer on one side of her shoulder, slipped to the other side and said, “Is the seat taken ”。这样主体一致，动作衔接地非常流畅自然。
参考范文1
Paragraph 1:Jennifer took up her phone and looked at the screen. It was Yui Fay. She said that she would not be able to come and meet her and asked for a rain check. Jennifer was shocked and disappointed. After all, she’d been waiting for this moment for ages. Sad though she was, she had no choice but to agree. Having hung up the phone, she aimlessly wondered on the street and ended up walking into the appointed restaurant. The menu was filled with her favorite dishes yet she had little appetite for anything. She was so sad that she was not aware of what would surprise her next.
Paragraph 2:Just then, someone was coming towards Jennifer. She delicately patted Jennifer on one side of her shoulder, slipped to the other side and said, “Is the seat taken ” Jennifer looked up and saw that naughty, wild and adventurous face that had been carved into her brain. “Yui Fay!” Jennifer shouted out excitedly. “Why are you here ” Yui Fay smilingly explained that she had followed her the whole time to give her a big surprise. The rest of the day was great joy. It turned out that they didn’t change a bit, neither did their friendship.
参考范文2
Jennifer took up her phone and looked at the screen. Surprised and a bit nervous, she found it was Yui Fay. After taking a deep breath firmly, Jennifer answered the phone. There came Yui Fay’s familiar and tender voice, which made Jennifer feel like falling into a cloud, softly and comfortably. Yui Fay excitedly expressed how thrilled she was and carefully confirmed their destination, making sure not to ruin this fabulous（极大的） night. After the call, Jennifer felt a bolt of warm currents welled up in her mind. She spontaneously(无意识的) wore that red summer dress. Too nervous and thrilled to stay at home, she arrived at the restaurant in advance, waiting for Yui Fay and thinking of the sweet memories.
Just then, someone was coming towards Jennifer. Elegantly and charmingly, the woman approached Jennifer and patted her on the shoulder. Before Jennifer could realize what had happened, she was greeted with a warm hug. It was Yui Fay! The person who she has crazily missed was tightly hugging her! Jennifer, who was overcome by the intangible(触摸不到的) happiness, suddenly realized that nothing has been changed. They burst into laughter, walking into the restaurant. That night, the dim but mild light witnessed their happy moments. Many things would change in life, but clearly, the deepest friendship not.
独立分析：
1. 时间状语从句的省略形式：
Surprised and a bit nervous, she found it was Yui Fay.
原句：As she felt surprised and a bit nervous, she found it was Yui Fay.
2. 时间状语从句的省略形式：
After taking a deep breath firmly, Jennifer answered the phone.
原句：After she took a deep breath firmly, Jennifer answered the phone.
3. 倒装句型+定语从句+状语(副词)
There came Yui Fay’s familiar and tender voice, which made Jennifer feel like falling into a cloud, softly and comfortably.
原句: Jennifer heard Yui Fay’s familiar and tender voice, which made her feel like falling into a cloud, softly and comfortably.
4. 宾语从句+分词结构(结果状语)
Yui Fay excitedly expressed how thrilled she was and carefully confirmed their destination, making sure not to ruin this fabulous night.
原句：Yui Fay excitedly expressed that she was very thrilled and carefully confirmed their destination, making sure not to ruin this fabulous night.
5. 宾语从句+无灵句子
After the call, Jennifer felt a bolt (一道)of warm currents welled up in her mind.
6. 副词修饰动词
She spontaneously wore that red summer dress.
7. 原因状语+分词结构(伴随状语)
Too nervous and thrilled to stay at home, she arrived at the restaurant in advance, waiting for Yui Fay and thinking of the sweet memories.
原句：As she was too nervous and thrilled to stay at home, she arrived at the restaurant in advance, waiting for ....
8. 副词作状语
Elegantly and charmingly, the woman approached Jennifer and patted her on the shoulder.
9. 时间状语从句
Before Jennifer could realize what had happened, she was greeted with a warm hug.
10. 定语从句
The person who she has crazily missed was tightly hugging her!
Jennifer, who was overcome by the intangible(触摸不到的) happiness, suddenly realized that nothing has been changed.
11. 使用分词结构(伴随状语)
They burst into laughter, walking into the restaurant.
12. 使用无灵句式
That night, the dim but mild light witnessed their happy moments.
13. 画龙点睛结尾，点名主题
Many things would change in life, but clearly, the deepest friendship not.