2024届高考英语作文复习专项读后续写微技能-7---环境描写课件(共17张PPT)
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(共17张PPT)
读后续写微技能7
环境描写
Learning objectives：
1 master the words
2. practise more
在高中英语读后续写中，环境描写常用的词汇和句型可以帮助学生更好地描绘场景，增强故事的情感表达和生动性。
自然环境：
meadow (草地), forest (森林), mountain (山脉), river (河流), lake (湖泊), ocean (海洋), cliff (悬崖), cave (洞穴), waterfall (瀑布), desert (沙漠), jungle (丛林)
天气：
sunny (晴朗的), cloudy (多云的), rainy (下雨的), stormy (暴风雨的), windy (有风的), snowy (下雪的), foggy (有雾的)
常用词汇：
常用词汇：
时间：
dawn (黎明), sunrise (日出), daytime (白天), sunset (日落), dusk (黄昏), night (夜晚)
光线：
sunlight (阳光), moonlight (月光), shadow (阴影), ray (光线), gleam (闪光), glow (微光), shimmer (闪烁)
动词&形容词
温度：
warm (温暖的), hot (热的), cold (冷的), cool (凉爽的), freezing (冰冻的), chill (寒冷的)
气氛：
serene (宁静的), tranquil (平静的), peaceful (和平的), calm (安静的), quiet (安静的), noisy (嘈杂的), bustling (繁忙的), lively (活泼的), vibrant (充满生机的), chaotic (混乱的)
在写作时，注意以下几点：
1.使用丰富的形容词和副词：形容词和副词可以描绘环境的特点，如美丽、宁静、阴森等。
The peaceful lake was surrounded by lush green trees, creating a calm atmosphere.
这个宁静的湖被郁郁葱葱的绿色树木包围着，营造出一种平静的气氛。
2. 利用感官描写：通过描述视觉、听觉、嗅觉、触觉和味觉来让读者身临其境。
A gentle breeze rustled the leaves, creating a soothing melody that complemented the sweet fragrance of blooming flowers.
一阵微风吹拂着树叶，创造出一种舒缓的旋律，增添了盛开的花朵的芬芳。
3.使用比喻和拟人
通过将非人类事物比作人类或赋予其人类特征，增强描写的生动性和形象性。
The towering mountains stood like soldiers on duty , guarding the valley below.
高耸的山像哨兵一样矗立，守卫着下面的山谷。
4.注意氛围的营造：
通过描述光线、温度、天气等元素，营造相应的氛围。
The dim moonlight cast horrible shadows on the abandoned house, adding to the sense of mystery.
昏暗的月光在废弃的房子上投下了可怕的阴影，增加了一种神秘感。
5.结合情节发展和人物情感
环境描写应与故事情节和人物情感相结合，以增强情感表达和故事连贯性。
As the storm raged outside, Mary's heart sank with each flash of lightning, mirroring her own inner restlessness.
当暴风雨在外面肆虐时，玛丽的心随着每一道闪电而沉下去，反映了她自己内心的混乱。
Practice :根据提示填空
1. "The lush green forest stretched as far as the eye could see, filled with life."
郁郁葱葱的森林一望无际，生机勃勃。
2. "A gentle breeze blew down on the cheeks of the villagers, bringing with it the promise of a cool evening."
一阵轻柔的微风吹拂着村民的脸颊，带来了一个凉爽夜晚的承诺。
3. "The scorching sun beat down on the barren landscape, making the air feel thick and heavy."
炎热的太阳炙烤着贫瘠的景象，使空气显得浓重而闷热。
The lush green forest
The lush green forest
filled with life
filled with life
A gentle breeze
A gentle breeze
feel thick and heavy
feel thick and heavy
4. "The setting sun cast long shadows across the courtyard, creating an complicated pattern of light and dark."
落日投下了长长的阴影，穿过庭院，形成了一幅光与影的复杂图案。
5. "Moonlight filtered through the dense crown,
casting an mysterious glow on the forest floor."
月光透过茂密的树冠，给森林地面投下了一种空灵的光芒。
6. "As dusk fell, the village was bathed in a soft, purple hue, adding to the magical atmosphere."
随着夜幕降临，整个村庄被一片柔和的紫色所笼罩，增添了神秘的气氛。
cast long shadows across
cast long shadows across
casting an mysterious glow on
casting an mysterious glow on
As dusk fell
As dusk fell
adding to the magical atmosphere
adding to the magical atmosphere
7. "The early morning mist hung low over the river, adding a sense of mystery to the serene landscape."
清晨的薄雾低垂在河面上，给宁静的风景增添了一种神秘感。
8. "The soothing sound of crashing waves provided a constant backdrop to the coastal town."
海浪拍打的声音为这座沿海城镇提供了一个持续的背景音乐。
9. "The sweet scent of blooming flowers filled the air, creating a fragrant symphony."
盛开的鲜花散发出的香甜气息弥漫在空气中，形成了一场香气四溢的交响乐。
hung low
hung low
a sense of mystery
a sense of mystery
provided
provided
filled the air,
filled the air ,
片段赏析：
As the sun dipped below the horizon, casting a warm, golden glow over the small village, a sense of peace enveloped the streets. The gentle rustling of leaves and the occasional chirping of crickets provided a soothing backdrop to the peaceful evening. The sweet fragrance of blooming flowers mingled with the faint aroma of freshly baked bread, creating a comforting ambiance. The villagers, dressed in traditional attire, strolled along the cobblestone paths, their laughter and conversations echoing through the air.
The setting sun painted the sky in vibrant hues of orange and purple, casting long shadows across the quaint, picturesque houses. The village square, decorated with colorful lanterns, buzzed with activity as families gathered to enjoy the cool evening breeze. The gentle warmth of the setting sun, combined with the lively atmosphere, made it a perfect evening for the villagers to relax and appreciate the beauty of their surroundings.
Homework
Recite the words and sentences.
读后续写微技能7
环境描写
Learning objectives：
1 master the words
2. practise more
在高中英语读后续写中，环境描写常用的词汇和句型可以帮助学生更好地描绘场景，增强故事的情感表达和生动性。
自然环境：
meadow (草地), forest (森林), mountain (山脉), river (河流), lake (湖泊), ocean (海洋), cliff (悬崖), cave (洞穴), waterfall (瀑布), desert (沙漠), jungle (丛林)
天气：
sunny (晴朗的), cloudy (多云的), rainy (下雨的), stormy (暴风雨的), windy (有风的), snowy (下雪的), foggy (有雾的)
常用词汇：
常用词汇：
时间：
dawn (黎明), sunrise (日出), daytime (白天), sunset (日落), dusk (黄昏), night (夜晚)
光线：
sunlight (阳光), moonlight (月光), shadow (阴影), ray (光线), gleam (闪光), glow (微光), shimmer (闪烁)
动词&形容词
温度：
warm (温暖的), hot (热的), cold (冷的), cool (凉爽的), freezing (冰冻的), chill (寒冷的)
气氛：
serene (宁静的), tranquil (平静的), peaceful (和平的), calm (安静的), quiet (安静的), noisy (嘈杂的), bustling (繁忙的), lively (活泼的), vibrant (充满生机的), chaotic (混乱的)
在写作时，注意以下几点：
1.使用丰富的形容词和副词：形容词和副词可以描绘环境的特点，如美丽、宁静、阴森等。
The peaceful lake was surrounded by lush green trees, creating a calm atmosphere.
这个宁静的湖被郁郁葱葱的绿色树木包围着，营造出一种平静的气氛。
2. 利用感官描写：通过描述视觉、听觉、嗅觉、触觉和味觉来让读者身临其境。
A gentle breeze rustled the leaves, creating a soothing melody that complemented the sweet fragrance of blooming flowers.
一阵微风吹拂着树叶，创造出一种舒缓的旋律，增添了盛开的花朵的芬芳。
3.使用比喻和拟人
通过将非人类事物比作人类或赋予其人类特征，增强描写的生动性和形象性。
The towering mountains stood like soldiers on duty , guarding the valley below.
高耸的山像哨兵一样矗立，守卫着下面的山谷。
4.注意氛围的营造：
通过描述光线、温度、天气等元素，营造相应的氛围。
The dim moonlight cast horrible shadows on the abandoned house, adding to the sense of mystery.
昏暗的月光在废弃的房子上投下了可怕的阴影，增加了一种神秘感。
5.结合情节发展和人物情感
环境描写应与故事情节和人物情感相结合，以增强情感表达和故事连贯性。
As the storm raged outside, Mary's heart sank with each flash of lightning, mirroring her own inner restlessness.
当暴风雨在外面肆虐时，玛丽的心随着每一道闪电而沉下去，反映了她自己内心的混乱。
Practice :根据提示填空
1. "The lush green forest stretched as far as the eye could see, filled with life."
郁郁葱葱的森林一望无际，生机勃勃。
2. "A gentle breeze blew down on the cheeks of the villagers, bringing with it the promise of a cool evening."
一阵轻柔的微风吹拂着村民的脸颊，带来了一个凉爽夜晚的承诺。
3. "The scorching sun beat down on the barren landscape, making the air feel thick and heavy."
炎热的太阳炙烤着贫瘠的景象，使空气显得浓重而闷热。
The lush green forest
The lush green forest
filled with life
filled with life
A gentle breeze
A gentle breeze
feel thick and heavy
feel thick and heavy
4. "The setting sun cast long shadows across the courtyard, creating an complicated pattern of light and dark."
落日投下了长长的阴影，穿过庭院，形成了一幅光与影的复杂图案。
5. "Moonlight filtered through the dense crown,
casting an mysterious glow on the forest floor."
月光透过茂密的树冠，给森林地面投下了一种空灵的光芒。
6. "As dusk fell, the village was bathed in a soft, purple hue, adding to the magical atmosphere."
随着夜幕降临，整个村庄被一片柔和的紫色所笼罩，增添了神秘的气氛。
cast long shadows across
cast long shadows across
casting an mysterious glow on
casting an mysterious glow on
As dusk fell
As dusk fell
adding to the magical atmosphere
adding to the magical atmosphere
7. "The early morning mist hung low over the river, adding a sense of mystery to the serene landscape."
清晨的薄雾低垂在河面上，给宁静的风景增添了一种神秘感。
8. "The soothing sound of crashing waves provided a constant backdrop to the coastal town."
海浪拍打的声音为这座沿海城镇提供了一个持续的背景音乐。
9. "The sweet scent of blooming flowers filled the air, creating a fragrant symphony."
盛开的鲜花散发出的香甜气息弥漫在空气中，形成了一场香气四溢的交响乐。
hung low
hung low
a sense of mystery
a sense of mystery
provided
provided
filled the air,
filled the air ,
片段赏析：
As the sun dipped below the horizon, casting a warm, golden glow over the small village, a sense of peace enveloped the streets. The gentle rustling of leaves and the occasional chirping of crickets provided a soothing backdrop to the peaceful evening. The sweet fragrance of blooming flowers mingled with the faint aroma of freshly baked bread, creating a comforting ambiance. The villagers, dressed in traditional attire, strolled along the cobblestone paths, their laughter and conversations echoing through the air.
The setting sun painted the sky in vibrant hues of orange and purple, casting long shadows across the quaint, picturesque houses. The village square, decorated with colorful lanterns, buzzed with activity as families gathered to enjoy the cool evening breeze. The gentle warmth of the setting sun, combined with the lively atmosphere, made it a perfect evening for the villagers to relax and appreciate the beauty of their surroundings.
Homework
Recite the words and sentences.