2024届高考英语专题08 求助信学案（含答案）
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求助信（Plans and Intentions）
一、 向朋友求助
范文1 【2016年全国新课标卷II】请朋友提供摄影参赛作品
范文2 【2013年全国卷Ⅰ】请外国朋友在飞机场接我叔叔
Practice I【2015年全国卷I】约稿信
Practice II【 2013年全国新课标卷I】请美国朋友代卖中国结
二、向陌生人（组织机构）或老师求助
范文1 【2011年全国新课标卷】 暑期课程遇困难求助辅导中心
范文2【2013年高考重庆卷】拯救江豚
Practice 【2016年全国新课标卷I】请外教修改申请书和个人简历
向朋友求助
范文1 【2016年全国新课标卷II】请朋友提供摄影参赛作品（Plans and Intentions）
假定你是李华，你校摄影俱乐部(photography club) 将举办国际中学生摄影展。请给你的英国朋友Peter 写封信，请他提供作品。信的内容包括：
1. 主题：环境保护；
展览时间；
投稿邮箱:intlphotoshow@。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
I审题
体 裁：书信体（求助信）
主要时态：一般现在时，一般将来时
主要人称：我，你
写作要点：_______________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________
II写作提纲
Para.1问候+写信背景+写信目的；
Para.2参赛作品的主题，展览时间及投递方式 ；
Para.3提出希望。
III Useful expressions
International High School Student Photograghy Show国际中学生摄影展 photography club摄影俱乐部 take photos, take pictures照相 details详细信息 hand in上交 take part in参加 requirement要求 masterpiece代表作 date日期
1. The theme of the show is environmental protection.
摄影展的主题是环境保护。
2. The show will start from July 12th and last for two weeks.
摄影展将于7月12日开始，一直要持续两周。
3. If you would like to share your masterpieces for this show, please send your photos to intlphotoshow @gm .
如果你愿意参加这次展出并分享你的代表作，请将照片发送至邮箱intlphotoshow @gm 。
参考范文
Dear Peter,
How is everything going An International High School Student Photograghy Show will be held by the photography club in my school. I know that you are good at taking photos. Therefore, I'm writing to invite you to share some of your masterpieces for this show.
Here are some details and requirements. To begin with, the theme of the show is environmental protection. You can send any type of photos related to it, including what people do and how they often do it to protect environment. Next, the show will start from July 12th and last for two weeks; therefore, you'd better send them before July10th. Our email address is intlphotoshow@. If you share your works, I believe everyone will appreciate them.
I'm looking forward to your early reply as well as your works. Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
A useful word
work (U/C)（作家、画家、音乐家等的）作品；著作
a study of the life and works of Baudelaire 波德莱尔的生平和作品研究
Our final-year students invite you to an exhibition of their work.
我们的毕业班学生邀请你去参观他们的作品展览。
范文2 【2013年全国卷Ⅰ】请外国朋友在飞机场接我叔叔（Plans and Intentions）
假定你是李华。请你给笔友Peter写封信，告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在的城市开会，带去他想要的那幅中国画，同时询问他是否可以接机。信中还需说明：
李明：高个子，戴眼镜 航班号：CA985 到达：8月6日上午11:30
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;
3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。
Dear Peter,
How are you doing _______________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
参考范文1
Dear Peter,
How are you doing Do you remember the Chinese painting you like very much I have some good news for you.
My uncle Li Ming is going to the city you live in to attend an international conference and I have asked him to bring you the painting. He will arrive on August 6th. Are you available that day If it is convenient for you, can you pick him up at the airport at 11:30 am His flight number is CA985. It is easy for you to recognize him as he is tall and will be wearing a pair of dark glasses. Besides, I will tell him what you look like so that you can find each other easily.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
参考范文2
Dear Peter,
How are you doing I am glad to receive your letter saying that you want me to buy the Chinese paintings we talked about the other day. Fortunately, my uncle Li Ming is going to attend a meeting in your city soon, so I can ask him to bring you the Chinese painting. Since he hasn't gone abroad before, would you please be so kind to pick him up at the airport If so, you can take him to the hotel directly.
His flight number is CA985 and he will arrive there at 11:30 am. on the morning of August 6th. My uncle is very tall and usually wears a pair of thick glasses. I'm sure you will recognize him easily because we look very much alike.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
Practice I【2015年全国卷I】约稿信（Plans and Intentions）
假定你是李华，你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿。
要点如下：
栏目介绍； 2.稿件内容； 3.稿件长度：约400字； 4、交稿日期：6月28日前。
I审题
体 裁：书信体（求助信）
主要时态：一般现在时，一般将来时
主要人称：第一、第二人称（我，你）
写作要点：_______________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________
II写作提纲
Para.1：问候+写信背景（我校办杂志）+写信目的；
Para.2：稿件的具体内容及相关要求；
Para.3：提出希望。
参考范文A
Dear Peter,
I'd like to ask you to write an article for our school's English newspaper. In order to make students know more about American culture, our school has decided to set up a column to publish some articles written by American students. Hearing the news, I was very happy. I couldn't wait to tell you about it. As far as I know, you are very good at writing and you always dream of becoming a writer in the future. I think it's a good opportunity that you are eager to get.
Here are some more requirements about the article. Firstly, you are expected to write about American festivals and middle school student's daily life. Most important of all, you are required to hand in your article before June 28th. In my opinion, by doing so not only can you improve your writing skills but also you can become popular in China. I hope you can finish it as soon as possible.
I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
参考范文B
Dear Peter,
How are you doing Recently, our school newspaper will started a column about western life and culture in order to cultivate our interests, broaden our horizons and enrich our afterschool life. As a result, I am writing to ask you to write an article on it.
Here are some details about it. To begin with, you may talk about your life in your middle school, so that we Chinese students can know more about you. Besides, you can introduce a western festival, such as the Christmas Day, the New Year or the Thanksgiving Day, which must be not only meaningful but also interesting. What's more, your article should be at least 400 words. Finally, I hope you would be so kind as to send it to me before June 28th, so that it can be published in time.
Hopefully, you could do me a favor. I have the confidence that everyone will like your article. Thanks for reading my letter in such a hot summer. I'm looking forward to your reply and your article.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
Practice II【 2013年全国新课标卷I】请美国朋友代卖中国结（Plans and Intentions, Shopping）
假定你是李华，自制一些中国结（Chinese knot）给开网店的美国朋友Tom写封信， 请他代卖，要点如下：1.外观（尺寸，颜色，材料）；2. 象征意义； 3. 价格。
注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头语和介绍语已为你写好。
参考范文1
Dear Tom,
How are you doing？I have learned you have started an online store recently. My hobby is making Chinese knot in my spare time. I am wondering whether you can help me sell some.
These Chinese knots are about 5 inches long and 3 inches wide. They are of different shapes, such as diamonds, butterflies, flowers and birds. They are red and orange in color, and made of silk threads, which make them look very beautiful. In China they are symbols of peace, unity and good luck. You can use Chinese knots as small gifts for friends or to decorate your room. They are 10 dollars each.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
Useful expressions
1.diamond 钻石
2.silk threads 丝线
参考范文2
Dear Tom,
How are you doing？I am glad to know you have started an online store. I made some Chinese knots a few days ago. I really hope you can help me sell them.
The size of the Chinese knots is about 6 inches long and 4 inches wide, as large as our hands. They are of different colors, but mostly are red. They are in the shape of diamonds. You know Chinese knots are very popular in China because they stand for reunion, peace and harmony. So they are used to decorate our houses. I guess some people may want to buy them. You can sell them at five dollars each.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
二、向陌生人（组织机构）或老师求助
范文1 【2011年全国新课标卷】 暑期课程遇困难求助辅导中心 （Plans and Intentions, School Life）
假定你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程，遇到一些困难，希望得到学校辅导中心(Learning Center) 的帮助。根据学校规定，你需书面预约，请按下列要点写一封信:
1.本人简介 ； 2. 求助内容 3.约定时间； 4.你的联系方式（Email:lihua@;Phone:12345678）
注意：1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;3.结语已为你写好。
I审题
体裁：应用文（求助信）
主体时态：一般现在时
主要人称：我，你（你们机构）
写作要点：__________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
II写作提纲
Para.1：自我介绍+写信背景+写信目的
Para.2：求助内容
Para.3：提出希望并再次感谢
III 参考范文
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm Li Hua, a Chinese student taking summer courses in your university. I'm writing to ask for help. I came here last month and found my courses interesting. But I have some difficulties with note-taking, and I have no idea of how to use the library.
I was told the Learning Center provides help for students and I'm anxious to get help from you. I have no class on Tuesday mornings and Friday afternoons. Please let me know which day is OK with you. You may email or phone me. Here are my email address and phone number: lihua@; 12345678.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
范文2【2013年高考重庆卷】拯救江豚（Plans and Intentions, The World and the Environment）
调查显示，中国长江江豚（finless porpoise）受人类活动影响而濒临灭绝，目前总数不足1000只。假设你是李华，现请用英文给WWF（世界自然保护基金组织）写一封信，请他们关注这一状况并提供帮助。内容应包括：
1. 说明写信的目的；
2. 简述江豚现状；
3. 希望WWF帮助（比如：资助江豚保护项目等）；
4. 表示感谢并期待回复。
参考范文
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm a student from Chongqing, China. I'm writing to call your attention to the danger finless porpoises are currently in.
Seriously affected by human activities, finless porpoises in the Yangtze River are in danger of becoming extinct. To our disappointment, only about 1,000 are estimated to be still living at present.
We sincerely hope that WWF can play a role in protecting this endangered species. Firstly, a sponsorship will be of great help. But more importantly, we need information from experts in WWF to help us better understand the animal thus being able to take better care of them.
Thank you for your attention and I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
Useful expressions
Firstly, a sponsorship will be of great help. 首先，赞助是非常有用的。
sponsorship n.赞助; 发起; 倡议; 保证人
Universities are turning from academic to commercial sponsorship.
各大学正从学术赞助转而寻求商业赞助。
Practice 【2016年全国新课标卷I】请外教修改申请书和个人简历（Plans and Intentions）
假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外交Ms. Jenkins写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）。
注意：1.词数100词左右；
可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
I审 题
体 裁：应用文（求助信）
主体时态：一般现在时
主要人称：第一人称（我），第三人称（你）
写作要点：__________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
II写作提纲
Para.1：自我介绍+写信背景+写信目的
Para.2：求助内容
Para.3：提出希望并再次感谢
Useful words and expressions
apply for申请, a part-time job兼职工作, attachment附件，an application letter申请书, resume自荐信, make necessary changes做必要的修改, go over my application letter检查我的申请书
1. I'm writing to turn to you for help.
我写信向您求助。
2. I'm applying for a part-time job at a foreign company in my city during the coming summer vacation.
我暑假想去外贸公司兼职，现在正在申请一个本市的外贸公司的兼职工作。
3. I've already completed my application letter and had my resume ready for it.
我已经写完了申请书和自荐信。
4. Would you please spare some time to read through the materials attached
请问您能否花时间阅读一下附件中的材料？
5. I would appreciate it if you could help me figure out the mistakes in terms of words and format.
如果您能帮我指出用词和格式中的错误，我将不胜感激。
参考范文
Dear Ms. Jenkins,
I'm Li Hua from your English class last year. I'm writing to turn to you for help.
I'm applying for a part-time job at a foreign company in my city during the coming summer vacation. And I've already completed my application letter and had my resume ready for it. However, I'm not sure of the words and format I have used in the letters. Therefore, I'm writing to ask for your help and professional advice. Would you please spare some time to read through the materials attached I would appreciate it if you could help me figure out the mistakes in terms of words and format. In addition, could you help me polish them
I'd be very grateful if you could do me a favor. Thanks for your consideration and help. I'm looking forward to your early reply. Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
Useful expressions
1. apply for 申请
I should apply for the post if I were you. I think you stand a good chance.
如果我是你的话，我一定去申请这个职位。我认为你大有希望。
2. read through 通读，从头至尾读一遍
Read the contract through carefully before you sign. 仔细通读合同，再签字。
You'd better read through the instructions carefully. 你最好从头到尾仔细地阅读一下说明书。
You can read through the script and use a dictionary to work out what the more difficult parts mean.
你可以通读剧本，并使用字典来弄清楚较难部分的意思。
3. in terms of根据; 用…的话; 就…而言; 以…为单位
Taking a long view of the project, I began to think in terms of the rehearsal schedules required.
为了对这个项目作长远打算，我开始根据要求的排练计划考虑问题。
4. polish Vt. 磨光; 润色; 擦光; 修改
In addition, could you help me polish them 另外，你能帮我修改（润色）一下吗？
They spend most of their time polishing shoes. 他们大部分时间都在擦鞋。
Please polish this piece of writing. 请你把这篇稿子修饰一下。
一、 向朋友求助
范文1 【2016年全国新课标卷II】请朋友提供摄影参赛作品
范文2 【2013年全国卷Ⅰ】请外国朋友在飞机场接我叔叔
Practice I【2015年全国卷I】约稿信
Practice II【 2013年全国新课标卷I】请美国朋友代卖中国结
二、向陌生人（组织机构）或老师求助
范文1 【2011年全国新课标卷】 暑期课程遇困难求助辅导中心
范文2【2013年高考重庆卷】拯救江豚
Practice 【2016年全国新课标卷I】请外教修改申请书和个人简历
向朋友求助
范文1 【2016年全国新课标卷II】请朋友提供摄影参赛作品（Plans and Intentions）
假定你是李华，你校摄影俱乐部(photography club) 将举办国际中学生摄影展。请给你的英国朋友Peter 写封信，请他提供作品。信的内容包括：
1. 主题：环境保护；
展览时间；
投稿邮箱:intlphotoshow@。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
I审题
体 裁：书信体（求助信）
主要时态：一般现在时，一般将来时
主要人称：我，你
写作要点：_______________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________
II写作提纲
Para.1问候+写信背景+写信目的；
Para.2参赛作品的主题，展览时间及投递方式 ；
Para.3提出希望。
III Useful expressions
International High School Student Photograghy Show国际中学生摄影展 photography club摄影俱乐部 take photos, take pictures照相 details详细信息 hand in上交 take part in参加 requirement要求 masterpiece代表作 date日期
1. The theme of the show is environmental protection.
摄影展的主题是环境保护。
2. The show will start from July 12th and last for two weeks.
摄影展将于7月12日开始，一直要持续两周。
3. If you would like to share your masterpieces for this show, please send your photos to intlphotoshow @gm .
如果你愿意参加这次展出并分享你的代表作，请将照片发送至邮箱intlphotoshow @gm 。
参考范文
Dear Peter,
How is everything going An International High School Student Photograghy Show will be held by the photography club in my school. I know that you are good at taking photos. Therefore, I'm writing to invite you to share some of your masterpieces for this show.
Here are some details and requirements. To begin with, the theme of the show is environmental protection. You can send any type of photos related to it, including what people do and how they often do it to protect environment. Next, the show will start from July 12th and last for two weeks; therefore, you'd better send them before July10th. Our email address is intlphotoshow@. If you share your works, I believe everyone will appreciate them.
I'm looking forward to your early reply as well as your works. Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
A useful word
work (U/C)（作家、画家、音乐家等的）作品；著作
a study of the life and works of Baudelaire 波德莱尔的生平和作品研究
Our final-year students invite you to an exhibition of their work.
我们的毕业班学生邀请你去参观他们的作品展览。
范文2 【2013年全国卷Ⅰ】请外国朋友在飞机场接我叔叔（Plans and Intentions）
假定你是李华。请你给笔友Peter写封信，告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在的城市开会，带去他想要的那幅中国画，同时询问他是否可以接机。信中还需说明：
李明：高个子，戴眼镜 航班号：CA985 到达：8月6日上午11:30
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;
3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。
Dear Peter,
How are you doing _______________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
参考范文1
Dear Peter,
How are you doing Do you remember the Chinese painting you like very much I have some good news for you.
My uncle Li Ming is going to the city you live in to attend an international conference and I have asked him to bring you the painting. He will arrive on August 6th. Are you available that day If it is convenient for you, can you pick him up at the airport at 11:30 am His flight number is CA985. It is easy for you to recognize him as he is tall and will be wearing a pair of dark glasses. Besides, I will tell him what you look like so that you can find each other easily.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
参考范文2
Dear Peter,
How are you doing I am glad to receive your letter saying that you want me to buy the Chinese paintings we talked about the other day. Fortunately, my uncle Li Ming is going to attend a meeting in your city soon, so I can ask him to bring you the Chinese painting. Since he hasn't gone abroad before, would you please be so kind to pick him up at the airport If so, you can take him to the hotel directly.
His flight number is CA985 and he will arrive there at 11:30 am. on the morning of August 6th. My uncle is very tall and usually wears a pair of thick glasses. I'm sure you will recognize him easily because we look very much alike.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
Practice I【2015年全国卷I】约稿信（Plans and Intentions）
假定你是李华，你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿。
要点如下：
栏目介绍； 2.稿件内容； 3.稿件长度：约400字； 4、交稿日期：6月28日前。
I审题
体 裁：书信体（求助信）
主要时态：一般现在时，一般将来时
主要人称：第一、第二人称（我，你）
写作要点：_______________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________
II写作提纲
Para.1：问候+写信背景（我校办杂志）+写信目的；
Para.2：稿件的具体内容及相关要求；
Para.3：提出希望。
参考范文A
Dear Peter,
I'd like to ask you to write an article for our school's English newspaper. In order to make students know more about American culture, our school has decided to set up a column to publish some articles written by American students. Hearing the news, I was very happy. I couldn't wait to tell you about it. As far as I know, you are very good at writing and you always dream of becoming a writer in the future. I think it's a good opportunity that you are eager to get.
Here are some more requirements about the article. Firstly, you are expected to write about American festivals and middle school student's daily life. Most important of all, you are required to hand in your article before June 28th. In my opinion, by doing so not only can you improve your writing skills but also you can become popular in China. I hope you can finish it as soon as possible.
I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
参考范文B
Dear Peter,
How are you doing Recently, our school newspaper will started a column about western life and culture in order to cultivate our interests, broaden our horizons and enrich our afterschool life. As a result, I am writing to ask you to write an article on it.
Here are some details about it. To begin with, you may talk about your life in your middle school, so that we Chinese students can know more about you. Besides, you can introduce a western festival, such as the Christmas Day, the New Year or the Thanksgiving Day, which must be not only meaningful but also interesting. What's more, your article should be at least 400 words. Finally, I hope you would be so kind as to send it to me before June 28th, so that it can be published in time.
Hopefully, you could do me a favor. I have the confidence that everyone will like your article. Thanks for reading my letter in such a hot summer. I'm looking forward to your reply and your article.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
Practice II【 2013年全国新课标卷I】请美国朋友代卖中国结（Plans and Intentions, Shopping）
假定你是李华，自制一些中国结（Chinese knot）给开网店的美国朋友Tom写封信， 请他代卖，要点如下：1.外观（尺寸，颜色，材料）；2. 象征意义； 3. 价格。
注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头语和介绍语已为你写好。
参考范文1
Dear Tom,
How are you doing？I have learned you have started an online store recently. My hobby is making Chinese knot in my spare time. I am wondering whether you can help me sell some.
These Chinese knots are about 5 inches long and 3 inches wide. They are of different shapes, such as diamonds, butterflies, flowers and birds. They are red and orange in color, and made of silk threads, which make them look very beautiful. In China they are symbols of peace, unity and good luck. You can use Chinese knots as small gifts for friends or to decorate your room. They are 10 dollars each.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
Useful expressions
1.diamond 钻石
2.silk threads 丝线
参考范文2
Dear Tom,
How are you doing？I am glad to know you have started an online store. I made some Chinese knots a few days ago. I really hope you can help me sell them.
The size of the Chinese knots is about 6 inches long and 4 inches wide, as large as our hands. They are of different colors, but mostly are red. They are in the shape of diamonds. You know Chinese knots are very popular in China because they stand for reunion, peace and harmony. So they are used to decorate our houses. I guess some people may want to buy them. You can sell them at five dollars each.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
二、向陌生人（组织机构）或老师求助
范文1 【2011年全国新课标卷】 暑期课程遇困难求助辅导中心 （Plans and Intentions, School Life）
假定你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程，遇到一些困难，希望得到学校辅导中心(Learning Center) 的帮助。根据学校规定，你需书面预约，请按下列要点写一封信:
1.本人简介 ； 2. 求助内容 3.约定时间； 4.你的联系方式（Email:lihua@;Phone:12345678）
注意：1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;3.结语已为你写好。
I审题
体裁：应用文（求助信）
主体时态：一般现在时
主要人称：我，你（你们机构）
写作要点：__________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
II写作提纲
Para.1：自我介绍+写信背景+写信目的
Para.2：求助内容
Para.3：提出希望并再次感谢
III 参考范文
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm Li Hua, a Chinese student taking summer courses in your university. I'm writing to ask for help. I came here last month and found my courses interesting. But I have some difficulties with note-taking, and I have no idea of how to use the library.
I was told the Learning Center provides help for students and I'm anxious to get help from you. I have no class on Tuesday mornings and Friday afternoons. Please let me know which day is OK with you. You may email or phone me. Here are my email address and phone number: lihua@; 12345678.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
范文2【2013年高考重庆卷】拯救江豚（Plans and Intentions, The World and the Environment）
调查显示，中国长江江豚（finless porpoise）受人类活动影响而濒临灭绝，目前总数不足1000只。假设你是李华，现请用英文给WWF（世界自然保护基金组织）写一封信，请他们关注这一状况并提供帮助。内容应包括：
1. 说明写信的目的；
2. 简述江豚现状；
3. 希望WWF帮助（比如：资助江豚保护项目等）；
4. 表示感谢并期待回复。
参考范文
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm a student from Chongqing, China. I'm writing to call your attention to the danger finless porpoises are currently in.
Seriously affected by human activities, finless porpoises in the Yangtze River are in danger of becoming extinct. To our disappointment, only about 1,000 are estimated to be still living at present.
We sincerely hope that WWF can play a role in protecting this endangered species. Firstly, a sponsorship will be of great help. But more importantly, we need information from experts in WWF to help us better understand the animal thus being able to take better care of them.
Thank you for your attention and I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
Useful expressions
Firstly, a sponsorship will be of great help. 首先，赞助是非常有用的。
sponsorship n.赞助; 发起; 倡议; 保证人
Universities are turning from academic to commercial sponsorship.
各大学正从学术赞助转而寻求商业赞助。
Practice 【2016年全国新课标卷I】请外教修改申请书和个人简历（Plans and Intentions）
假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外交Ms. Jenkins写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）。
注意：1.词数100词左右；
可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
I审 题
体 裁：应用文（求助信）
主体时态：一般现在时
主要人称：第一人称（我），第三人称（你）
写作要点：__________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
II写作提纲
Para.1：自我介绍+写信背景+写信目的
Para.2：求助内容
Para.3：提出希望并再次感谢
Useful words and expressions
apply for申请, a part-time job兼职工作, attachment附件，an application letter申请书, resume自荐信, make necessary changes做必要的修改, go over my application letter检查我的申请书
1. I'm writing to turn to you for help.
我写信向您求助。
2. I'm applying for a part-time job at a foreign company in my city during the coming summer vacation.
我暑假想去外贸公司兼职，现在正在申请一个本市的外贸公司的兼职工作。
3. I've already completed my application letter and had my resume ready for it.
我已经写完了申请书和自荐信。
4. Would you please spare some time to read through the materials attached
请问您能否花时间阅读一下附件中的材料？
5. I would appreciate it if you could help me figure out the mistakes in terms of words and format.
如果您能帮我指出用词和格式中的错误，我将不胜感激。
参考范文
Dear Ms. Jenkins,
I'm Li Hua from your English class last year. I'm writing to turn to you for help.
I'm applying for a part-time job at a foreign company in my city during the coming summer vacation. And I've already completed my application letter and had my resume ready for it. However, I'm not sure of the words and format I have used in the letters. Therefore, I'm writing to ask for your help and professional advice. Would you please spare some time to read through the materials attached I would appreciate it if you could help me figure out the mistakes in terms of words and format. In addition, could you help me polish them
I'd be very grateful if you could do me a favor. Thanks for your consideration and help. I'm looking forward to your early reply. Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
Useful expressions
1. apply for 申请
I should apply for the post if I were you. I think you stand a good chance.
如果我是你的话，我一定去申请这个职位。我认为你大有希望。
2. read through 通读，从头至尾读一遍
Read the contract through carefully before you sign. 仔细通读合同，再签字。
You'd better read through the instructions carefully. 你最好从头到尾仔细地阅读一下说明书。
You can read through the script and use a dictionary to work out what the more difficult parts mean.
你可以通读剧本，并使用字典来弄清楚较难部分的意思。
3. in terms of根据; 用…的话; 就…而言; 以…为单位
Taking a long view of the project, I began to think in terms of the rehearsal schedules required.
为了对这个项目作长远打算，我开始根据要求的排练计划考虑问题。
4. polish Vt. 磨光; 润色; 擦光; 修改
In addition, could you help me polish them 另外，你能帮我修改（润色）一下吗？
They spend most of their time polishing shoes. 他们大部分时间都在擦鞋。
Please polish this piece of writing. 请你把这篇稿子修饰一下。