2024届高考英语写作题型全面突破专题29 图画作文详细指南讲义
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图画作文详细指南
图画作文即看图作文。是高考英语书面表达常见的考查类型之一，类型多为看图叙事或看图说理。图画内容贴近学生生活实际，充满时代气息。主题鲜明，弘扬正能量
三步成文法：
第一步：审题定文体、人称和时态。深挖图画，明确主题。
第二步：归纳要点、扩充句子，描述细节内容。
第三步：添加关联词和过渡句，连句成文。
图画作文的基本结构如下：
第一段：开门见山，简介when, where ,why, who,what,how
第二段：按照时间或事件的发展顺序分层次展开要点
第三段：归纳总结，升华主题或给出建议。
I.开头句
1.From the picture we can see that ......
从图片可知.....
2.Last week I took part in a farmwork programme in the suburbs.
上周我在郊区参加了一个农场活动。
3.It can be seen from the pictures that polar bears are losing their homes
从图片上可以看出，北极熊正在失去它们的家园。
4.As is shown in the pictures.....
正如图片所示....
5. As illustrated in the cartoon, when asked where they will go on holiday, the students shouted their various overseas destinations.
正如漫画中那样，当被问到他们将要去哪度假时，学生们都说出了各种海外目的地。
II.主体句
1.The boy on the left is feeling terrible when seeing the bottle has fallen to the ground and there’s
hardly any water left.
当左边的男孩看到瓶子掉到地上，水几乎不剩的时候，他感到非常失望。
2.This vividly manifests a trend ....
这生动地展示了一个趋势......
3.It shows a common phenomenon nowadays that children are the focus of families, shouldering the hope of their parents.
这展现了当今一个普遍的现象，孩子是家庭的焦点，承载着父母的殷切希望。
4.Meanwhile, two boys offered timely help.
与此同时，两个男孩及时提供了帮助。
III.结尾句
1.The overall message we can take from the picture is that we should view things in a positive way as every cloud has a silver lining.
我们从图中能得出的主要信息就是，我们应该以积极的方式看待事物，因为黑暗中总有一丝光明。
2.When I came back home, I shared my experiences with my parents. And they were very proud of me.
当我回到家，我和父母分享了我的经历，他们都为我感到自豪。
3.Such a situation is of great concern. In my opinion, overprotection and too much care are extremely bad for children’s development
这样的情况值得重视。我认为，过度保护和关注对孩子的成长极为不利。
4.Never shall I forget the race.
我将永远不会忘记那次比赛。
IV.写作模板
As is vividly shown/illustrated in the picture,__________.(描述图画内容)The picture/cartoon informs us of the phenomenon that________________. There might be several factors contributing to/responsible for it.
To start with,________________. Secondly,________________.What's more,________________. Last but not least,________________.(说明原因) In my opinion, we should take measures to/necessary measures must be taken to________________.
Only in this way can the problem be really solved. / Only when everyone can do so will our world become more and more beautiful.
1.（2020年北京高考真题）
假设你是红星中学高三（1）班班长李华。居家学习期间，你们班开展了一次以“自律”为主题的调研活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文稿件，给你们学校英文网站投稿，记述你在本次活动中发现问题并解决问题的过程。
注意：词数不少于60。
提示词：自律 self-discipline
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【范文赏析】
While studying at home, I surveyed my class on “self-discipline”. The findings worried me a lot.
To solve the problem, I asked my parents for help, and they offered some practical advice. Then I held an online discussion with my classmates on how to well discipline ourselves. After that, we all knew better what to do.
Three months later, I did a second survey, which showed great improvements in self-discipline. I phoned my teacher about it, and we both felt very pleased.
本篇书面表达属于应用文。这是一篇图画作文，要求考生按以下四幅图的先后顺序，就你开展“自律”调研活动中发现问题并解决问题的过程写一篇英文稿件，向学校英文网站投稿。
第一步：审题
体裁：记叙文
时态：时态应为一般过去时
人称：第一人称
要求：
1. 表明写作主题——“自律”
2. 根据四副图片描写事件过程：
第一幅图片描写自己对“自律”调研结果很担忧；
第二幅图片描写自己向父母求助解决方法/建议；
第三幅图片描写自己和同学们在网上讨论如何自律；
第四幅图片描写三个月后，大家自律能力有了很大提高，我和老师很高兴。
第二步:列提纲 （头脑风暴先关词汇）
ask sb. for help；practical advice；an online discussion；do a second survey
第三步：连词成句，连句成篇
2.（2019年北京高考真题）
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们班上周组织了一次以“劳动最光荣”为主题的社会实践活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记述整个过程。
注意：词数不少于60。
提示词：西瓜watermelon
【范文赏析】
Last week I took part in a farmwork programme in the suburbs.
At the class meeting, our teacher told us about the programme with the theme “Working is most beautiful”. And he stressed the importance of working with our own hands. When I got home, I packed up my luggage for the trip. On the farm, we helped pick watermelons. While working, I realised how hard it was to work in the fields under a hot sun.
When I came back home, I shared my experiences with my parents. And they were very proud of me.
根据图片可知，时态应为一般过去时，人称为第一人称。该作文内容要点比较明确，第一幅图老师宣布活动内容，第二幅图我为活动准备，第三幅图农场劳动过程，最后与父母分享经历。
全文可分成三部分，开头开门见山点名活动内容，主体描述准备活动和具体劳动过程，结尾描述与父母分享经历并升华主题。
【点睛】本文内容完整，简洁明了的描述了每一幅图的内容，语言表述通顺。使用了连接词、衔接词，使文章自然、流畅。
1．观察下面四幅图片，根据图片内容，用英语写一篇日记。
注意：
1.可以适当增加细节，以使情节连贯；
2.词数100左右；
3.首句已经给出，不计入词数。
【范文赏析】
Monday 1 January
Today was a heartwarming start to the new year as my family gathered for a special hotpot dinner.
The day began with a shopping for hot pot ingredients, a cherished activity that I eagerly await each year because my parents grant me the liberty to fill our cart with whatever I like in the supermarket. After our satisfying purchases, we returned home and began preparing individually. My mother and I handled the raw ingredients for the hotpot while my father was tidying up the room. The final special hotpot dinner in which all five family members participated became a celebration of the new year and love. It has not only brought happiness to me and my parents, but also touched my grandparents deeply.
As we enjoyed our time together, the best thing we could do was to leave an unforgettable
1.词汇积累
附近的：nearby→neighbouring
挑选：select→choose
开始：start→begin
充满：filled with→full of
2.句式拓展
同义句
原句：Backing home, my dad started mopping the floor while my mom and I washed the vegetables.
拓展句：When we were back home, my dad started mopping the floor while my mom and I washed the vegetables.
【点睛】【高分句型1】After the meal, we took a family photo together, capturing this memorable moment.(运用了非谓语动词作状语)
【高分句型2】I really enjoyed the moment when all of us were together.(运用了when引导的限制性定语从句)
2. 假设你是学生李明，你们学校上周接待了英国中学生访问团，你作为志愿者参与了接待来访学生体验中国书法（calligraphy）的活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇日记。
内容需包括：
简单记述整个过程；
简要谈谈活动后你的感受。
【范文赏析】
Last Friday left me a deep impression because our school received some British students cordially to expose them to authentic Chinese culture in the flesh.
As a volunteer, it was my great honor to witness the whole process. Early in the morning, upon their arrival, we formed a line in high spirits to give them a warm welcome at the school gate. I led them directly to the calligraphy classroom, believing that calligraphy counts with no doubt in terms of Chinese culture. There one of our teachers taught them something about calligraphy. I explained in English when necessary. Attracted by the beauty of it, they couldn’t wait to give it a go. Then, they wrote the characters of Shanghai on the paper successfully.
Before their leaving, we took photos together, with the characters of Shanghai in hands, to memorize the enjoyable moment. Looking back on the experience, I felt proud to be a massager of Chinese calligraphy. Actually, I am looking forward to doing more.
本篇书面表达属于图画作文。学校上周接待了英国中学生访问团，考生作为志愿者参与了接待来访学生体验中国书法的活动，要求考生按照图片提示写一篇日记。
1.词汇积累
热情友好地：cordially→ warmly
真正的：authentic→ true
亲自：in the flesh→ personally
荣幸：honor→ privilege
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：As a volunteer, it was my great honor to witness the whole process.
拓展句：As a volunteer, witnessing the whole process was my great honor .
【点睛】【高分句型1】As a volunteer, it was my great honor to witness the whole process.（运用了it作形式主语和不定式短语作真正的主语）
【高分句型2】I led them directly to the calligraphy classroom, believing that calligraphy counts with no doubt in terms of Chinese culture. （运用了现在分词believing作状语和that引导的宾语从句 ）
3. 假设你是明启中学的学生李华.你和同学们上周末去医院参加了志愿者活动，请按照以下四幅画的先后顾序，给校刊“英语角”版面写一篇英文稿件，介绍此次经历（可合理增加一些细节），并简要说说心得体会。稿件的第一句已给出。
参考词: self-service registration machine自助挂号机 consulting rooms诊室
WeChat Moments朋友圈
Last weekend, my classmates and I worked as volunteers in a hospital…….
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【范文赏析】
Last weekend, my classmates and I worked as volunteers in a hospital.
In the morning, a doctor gave us a lecture, telling us of our roles as volunteers. It was the first time for me to know the daily work in a hospital. In the afternoon, fully prepared, we went to different posts and started our jobs. Together with my classmate, I helped some elderly people how to use the self-service registration machine. What we did helped to save elderly people a lot of trouble. Besides, I also showed people the way to different consulting room. For some elderly patients, we accompanied them all the way until it was their appointment time. They really appreciated our help.
Later after this volunteer work, I shared my pictures as a volunteer in the hospital on WeChat Moments. In no time, I received lots of likes from my friends. Some of them expressed their great interest in the voluntary work. ……
本篇书面表达属于图画类作文。要求考生根据图画内容，给校刊“英语角”版面写一篇英文稿件，介绍上周末去医院参加的志愿者活动。
1.词汇积累
此外：besides→in addition
表达：express→convey
感激：appreciate→be grateful for
和……一起：together with→along with
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：It was the first time for me to know the daily work in a hospital.
拓展句：It was the first time that I had known the daily work in a hospital.
【点睛】【高分句型1】 In the morning, a doctor gave us a lecture, telling us of our roles as volunteers.(运用了现在分词做状语)
【高分句型2】 What we did helped to save elderly people a lot of trouble.(运用了what引导的主语从句)
4.请观察下图两幅漫画，完成一篇作文。
1. 描述漫画内容；
2. 解读漫画含义；
3. 表述你的观点。
注意： 1. 词数 100 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【范文赏析】
As is depicted in the picture, a young man, reluctant to teach his father to use the cell phone, is very warm-hearted to help an old lady he meets in the park. The purpose of this cartoon is to reveal an alarming fact that people may be generous to others only for the sake of social image.
Love, responsibility, and social image are the three primary motivations for people to help others. Helping strangers in public enables people to establish a favorable social image.( and provides them with excellent self-satisfaction and a sense of pride.) While we should not deny its importance in building positive social connections, this motivation is indeed not that selfless in nature. Taking care of one’s parents, on the other hand, is an action out of love and responsibility, which requires people to put aside their own benefits.( and be entirely devoted to others.)
In conclusion, being kind to one’s parents is a selfless deed without material or reputational reward. Therefore, it can always serve as a criterion for individuals to judge others and, more importantly, reflect on their own behaviors.
本篇书面表达属于图画作文。要求考生描述漫画内容、解读漫画含义并表述自己的观点。
1.词汇积累
遇见：meet→encounter
目的：purpose→aim
建立：establish→build
照顾：take care of→look after
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Love, responsibility, and social image are the three primary motivations for people to help others.
拓展句：There are three primary motivations for people to help others, which are love, responsibility, and social image.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The purpose of this cartoon is to reveal an alarming fact that people may be generous to others only for the sake of social image.（运用了that引导的同位语从句）
【高分句型2】While we should not deny its importance in building positive social connections, this motivation is indeed not that selfless in nature.（运用了while引导的让步状语从句）
【高分句型3】Taking care of one’s parents, on the other hand, is an action out of love and responsibility, which requires people to put aside their own benefits.( and be entirely devoted to others.)（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
5.仔细阅读下图，针对图片反应的情况，谈谈你的看法。内容须包括：
1. 简要描述图片;
2. 结合自身实际谈谈你的看法。
【范文赏析】
As is vividly depicted in the picture, a student is bearing a heavy burden on his back, feeling at a loss and depressed when faced with the choice of university. Two ways diverge in front of him─one according to his personal interest, and the other based on his parents’ expectation. What is illustrated in the picture mirrors a thought-provoking phenomenon─whether to follow one’s heart or to obey his parents’ requirements in making such a critical choice.
Personally, it is pursuit of personal interest that matters. One explanation lies in the motivation.Without interest, hardly can we find any motivation to commit ourselves to learning anything new. Taking myself as an example, passionate about photographing, I’ve been attending photography-related courses for 2 years. And now I’ve become a part-time Vlogger with scores of followers. Therefore, interest indeed plays a central role in learning.
Simply put, as the saying goes, interest is the best pared with echoing parents’ expectations, sticking to our own interest may prove to be a better alternative. Only by arousing our interest in what we are going to do can we be substantially motivated, and thus become who we want to be.
这是一篇图画作文。要求学生就图画反应的“如何选择自己的大学之路”进行陈述，并给出自己的观点。
1.词汇积累
因此：therefore→thus
建议：suggestion→tip
导致：lead to→contribute to
坚持：stick to→insist on
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：One explanation lies in the motivation, a driving force of learning.
拓展句：One explanation lies in the motivation, which is a driving force of learning.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As is vividly depicted in the picture, a student is bearing a heavy burden on his back, feeling at a loss and depressed when faced with the choice of university. （运用了as引导的非限定性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Without interest, hardly can we find any motivation to commit ourselves to learning anything new. （否定副词hardly放到句首，句子运用了部分倒装）
6.请你根据对下面这幅漫画的理解用英语写一篇短文，描述一下漫画中所表达的情况并发表你的看法。
内容要求：
1.描述漫画内容；
2.分析漫画所揭示的问题；
3.提出你的看法
词数80左右。
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【范文赏析】
As is illustrated in the picture, a child is excessively fond of online games. Hooked by online games, he will put anything else aside, not to mention his homework. His parent has great difficulty pulling him back into reality.
Being addicted to online games has posed too many drawbacks. Firstly, the students don’t concentrate their undivided attention on study, thus falling behind educationally. Secondly, addiction to online games usually leads to less communication, which separates the children from their friends and parents. What’s more, it’s harmful to their health if they sit in front of the computer all day long.
Accordingly it’s high time that we should take effective measures to get rid of the addiction. On the one hand, students are supposed to possess the ability to discipline themselves. On the other hand, it’s advisable that parents and teachers should limit the online time. Only in this way can they cultivate a healthy lifestyle and hold a positive attitude towards life.
本文是说明文。图片描绘的是现在许多孩子沉溺于电脑网络不能自拔的现象。请考生根据对下面这幅漫画的理解用英语写一篇短文，描述一下漫画中所表达的情况，分析漫画所揭示的问题，并提出看法。
1.词汇积累
喜欢：be fond of→like/be into
此外：What’s more→Besides
对……有害：be harmful to→do harm to
应该：be supposed to→should
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Firstly, the students don’t concentrate their undivided attention on study, thus falling behind educationally.
拓展句：Firstly, the students don’t concentrate their undivided attention on study, which makes them fall behind educationally.
【点睛】【高分句型1】 Secondly, addiction to online games usually leads to less communication, which separates the children from their friends and parents. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】What’s more, it’s harmful to their health if they sit in front of the computer all day long.(运用了if引导的状语从句)
【高分句型3】 Only in this way can they cultivate a healthy lifestyle and hold a positive attitude towards life.(运用了“only+状语”置于句首，句子使用部分倒装结构)
7．假如你是某中学高一学生赵明，不久前经历了一次地震，你和邻居一起救出了一个受困的人。请你根据下面四幅图片的顺序，写出事情的全过程。
注意：1.开头已给出，不计入总词数;
2．词数不少于80。
提示词：锹，铲spade;担架stretcher
Last Saturday morning，a severe earthquake suddenly happened.
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【范文赏析】
Last Saturday morning, a severe earthquake suddenly happened. I was reading in the room when the light, clock, and many things inside were shaking. Meanwhile, someone shouted “Earthquake!” I rushed outside without hesitation.
Outdoors I heard a crash behind me and someone shouting “Help”, I looked back and found a house had collapsed. I, together with my neighbors, tried to find the one trapped in the ruins, using spades and even our hands. After a few minutes, we found an old man, his leg broken. We carried him to a safe place on a stretcher and waited for an ambulance.
Though tired, we were glad we had saved the old man. It was quite an experience which I would never forget.
本篇书面表达属于图画作文。你是某中学高一学生赵明，不久前经历了一次地震，你和邻居一起救出了一个受困的人，要求考生结合给出的四幅图片的顺序，写出事情的全过程
1.词汇积累
同时：meanwhile→at the same time
大喊：shout → yell
冲出外面：rush out→ run out
疲惫的：tired → exhausted
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句： I rushed outside without hesitation.
拓展句： Without hesitation, I rushed outside, anxiously realizing that an earthquake was happening.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I was reading in the room when the light, clock, and many things inside were shaking. （运用了when引导时间状语从句）
【高分句型2】 I, together with my neighbors, tried to find the one trapped in the ruins, using spades and even our hands. （运用了现在分词作状语）
8．根据下列六幅图所反映的内容，结合写作提示，以“Changes In Our Life”为题写一篇短文。
【范文赏析】
Great changes have taken place in our life. Take my family for example, in the past my parents got in touch with others by sending letters and they used to listen to the radio for news and other information. When they got married, my parents had to live in a small room crowded with furniture.
But now not only can we get in touch with others over the telephone at home but also we can get much more news and information by watching TV. What’s more, we have moved into a two storied building with quite a few rooms inside it.
In short, these changes have brought us a lot of happiness and convenience.
本篇书面表达属于图画类作文。要求考生根据下列六幅图所反映的内容，结合写作提示，以“Changes In Our Life”为题写一篇短文。
【详解】1.词汇积累
与……取得联系：get in touch with→ get into contact with
获得：get→ obtain
此外：What’s more → Besides
简而言之：In short→ In brief
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：What’s more, we have moved into a two storied building with quite a few rooms inside it.
拓展句：What’s more, we have moved into a two storied building, which contains quite a few rooms.
【点睛】【高分句型1】When they got married, my parents had to live in a small room crowded with furniture.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句）
【高分句型2】But now not only can we get in touch with others over the telephone at home but also we can get much more news and information by watching TV.（运用了not only…but also…的固定句型以及not only位于句首时，句子需用部分倒装）
9．假设你是李华，请按照下列几幅图画提示写一篇英文日记，叙述自己某一天的尴尬遭遇。
注意：(1)词数：80词左右;
(2)内容连贯，语句通顺。
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【范文赏析】
May 18th cloudy
In the morning, my alarm clock didn’t ring so I woke up an hour late. I was in such a hurry that I burnt my hand when I was cooking breakfast. Then I rushed out of the house to catch the 8:30 bus, but of course I missed it.
I was very upset because I knew my teacher would get angry if anyone was late for class. So I had no choice but to run three miles to the school. But when I arrived there with sweat in the end, I found that it was Sunday. What an embarrassment!
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就给出的图片写一篇英文日记，描述自己一天的尴尬遭遇。
1.词汇积累
烧伤我的手：burn my hand→have my hand burned
不开心的：unhappy → displeased,
到达：arrive→reach/get
最后：in the end→ eventually/finally
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：So I ran three miles to the school.
拓展句：So I ran three miles to the school, which made me greatly exhausted.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I was in such a hurry that I burnt my hand when I was cooking breakfast. （运用了such...that引导的结果状语从句）
【高分句型2】 I was very unhappy because I knew my teacher got angry if anyone was late for class. （运用了if引导的条件状语从句）
10．如今随着智能手机和电子设备的普及,“低头族”现象兴起。请根据图画写一篇英文短文。
注意:1.词数80左右；
2.可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。
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【范文赏析】
As can be seen from the picture, a big family gets together to have a big dinner. But the young just bury themselves in playing with their cell phones, totally ignoring their parents.
There is no doubt that cell phones have a negative effect on our lives. Heavy use of cell phones widens the distance between teenagers and their elders. Worse still, addiction to cell phones will lead to teenagers’ poor performance at school.
It’s time to limit the use of cell phones and communicate with our family members face to face, which helps build a harmonious family atmosphere.
1.词汇积累
忽视：ignore→overlook
怀疑：doubt→suspect
消极的：negative→passive
限制：limit→restrict
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句： Seen from the picture, a big family gets together to have a big dinner.
拓展句：As can be seen from the picture, a big family gets together to have a big dinner.
【点睛】【高分句型1】There is no doubt that cell phones have a negative effect on our lives.(运用了that引导的同位语从句)
【高分句型2】It’s time to limit the use of cell phones and communicate with our family members face to face,which helps build a harmonious family atmosphere.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
图画作文即看图作文。是高考英语书面表达常见的考查类型之一，类型多为看图叙事或看图说理。图画内容贴近学生生活实际，充满时代气息。主题鲜明，弘扬正能量
三步成文法：
第一步：审题定文体、人称和时态。深挖图画，明确主题。
第二步：归纳要点、扩充句子，描述细节内容。
第三步：添加关联词和过渡句，连句成文。
图画作文的基本结构如下：
第一段：开门见山，简介when, where ,why, who,what,how
第二段：按照时间或事件的发展顺序分层次展开要点
第三段：归纳总结，升华主题或给出建议。
I.开头句
1.From the picture we can see that ......
从图片可知.....
2.Last week I took part in a farmwork programme in the suburbs.
上周我在郊区参加了一个农场活动。
3.It can be seen from the pictures that polar bears are losing their homes
从图片上可以看出，北极熊正在失去它们的家园。
4.As is shown in the pictures.....
正如图片所示....
5. As illustrated in the cartoon, when asked where they will go on holiday, the students shouted their various overseas destinations.
正如漫画中那样，当被问到他们将要去哪度假时，学生们都说出了各种海外目的地。
II.主体句
1.The boy on the left is feeling terrible when seeing the bottle has fallen to the ground and there’s
hardly any water left.
当左边的男孩看到瓶子掉到地上，水几乎不剩的时候，他感到非常失望。
2.This vividly manifests a trend ....
这生动地展示了一个趋势......
3.It shows a common phenomenon nowadays that children are the focus of families, shouldering the hope of their parents.
这展现了当今一个普遍的现象，孩子是家庭的焦点，承载着父母的殷切希望。
4.Meanwhile, two boys offered timely help.
与此同时，两个男孩及时提供了帮助。
III.结尾句
1.The overall message we can take from the picture is that we should view things in a positive way as every cloud has a silver lining.
我们从图中能得出的主要信息就是，我们应该以积极的方式看待事物，因为黑暗中总有一丝光明。
2.When I came back home, I shared my experiences with my parents. And they were very proud of me.
当我回到家，我和父母分享了我的经历，他们都为我感到自豪。
3.Such a situation is of great concern. In my opinion, overprotection and too much care are extremely bad for children’s development
这样的情况值得重视。我认为，过度保护和关注对孩子的成长极为不利。
4.Never shall I forget the race.
我将永远不会忘记那次比赛。
IV.写作模板
As is vividly shown/illustrated in the picture,__________.(描述图画内容)The picture/cartoon informs us of the phenomenon that________________. There might be several factors contributing to/responsible for it.
To start with,________________. Secondly,________________.What's more,________________. Last but not least,________________.(说明原因) In my opinion, we should take measures to/necessary measures must be taken to________________.
Only in this way can the problem be really solved. / Only when everyone can do so will our world become more and more beautiful.
1.（2020年北京高考真题）
假设你是红星中学高三（1）班班长李华。居家学习期间，你们班开展了一次以“自律”为主题的调研活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文稿件，给你们学校英文网站投稿，记述你在本次活动中发现问题并解决问题的过程。
注意：词数不少于60。
提示词：自律 self-discipline
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【范文赏析】
While studying at home, I surveyed my class on “self-discipline”. The findings worried me a lot.
To solve the problem, I asked my parents for help, and they offered some practical advice. Then I held an online discussion with my classmates on how to well discipline ourselves. After that, we all knew better what to do.
Three months later, I did a second survey, which showed great improvements in self-discipline. I phoned my teacher about it, and we both felt very pleased.
本篇书面表达属于应用文。这是一篇图画作文，要求考生按以下四幅图的先后顺序，就你开展“自律”调研活动中发现问题并解决问题的过程写一篇英文稿件，向学校英文网站投稿。
第一步：审题
体裁：记叙文
时态：时态应为一般过去时
人称：第一人称
要求：
1. 表明写作主题——“自律”
2. 根据四副图片描写事件过程：
第一幅图片描写自己对“自律”调研结果很担忧；
第二幅图片描写自己向父母求助解决方法/建议；
第三幅图片描写自己和同学们在网上讨论如何自律；
第四幅图片描写三个月后，大家自律能力有了很大提高，我和老师很高兴。
第二步:列提纲 （头脑风暴先关词汇）
ask sb. for help；practical advice；an online discussion；do a second survey
第三步：连词成句，连句成篇
2.（2019年北京高考真题）
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们班上周组织了一次以“劳动最光荣”为主题的社会实践活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记述整个过程。
注意：词数不少于60。
提示词：西瓜watermelon
【范文赏析】
Last week I took part in a farmwork programme in the suburbs.
At the class meeting, our teacher told us about the programme with the theme “Working is most beautiful”. And he stressed the importance of working with our own hands. When I got home, I packed up my luggage for the trip. On the farm, we helped pick watermelons. While working, I realised how hard it was to work in the fields under a hot sun.
When I came back home, I shared my experiences with my parents. And they were very proud of me.
根据图片可知，时态应为一般过去时，人称为第一人称。该作文内容要点比较明确，第一幅图老师宣布活动内容，第二幅图我为活动准备，第三幅图农场劳动过程，最后与父母分享经历。
全文可分成三部分，开头开门见山点名活动内容，主体描述准备活动和具体劳动过程，结尾描述与父母分享经历并升华主题。
【点睛】本文内容完整，简洁明了的描述了每一幅图的内容，语言表述通顺。使用了连接词、衔接词，使文章自然、流畅。
1．观察下面四幅图片，根据图片内容，用英语写一篇日记。
注意：
1.可以适当增加细节，以使情节连贯；
2.词数100左右；
3.首句已经给出，不计入词数。
【范文赏析】
Monday 1 January
Today was a heartwarming start to the new year as my family gathered for a special hotpot dinner.
The day began with a shopping for hot pot ingredients, a cherished activity that I eagerly await each year because my parents grant me the liberty to fill our cart with whatever I like in the supermarket. After our satisfying purchases, we returned home and began preparing individually. My mother and I handled the raw ingredients for the hotpot while my father was tidying up the room. The final special hotpot dinner in which all five family members participated became a celebration of the new year and love. It has not only brought happiness to me and my parents, but also touched my grandparents deeply.
As we enjoyed our time together, the best thing we could do was to leave an unforgettable
1.词汇积累
附近的：nearby→neighbouring
挑选：select→choose
开始：start→begin
充满：filled with→full of
2.句式拓展
同义句
原句：Backing home, my dad started mopping the floor while my mom and I washed the vegetables.
拓展句：When we were back home, my dad started mopping the floor while my mom and I washed the vegetables.
【点睛】【高分句型1】After the meal, we took a family photo together, capturing this memorable moment.(运用了非谓语动词作状语)
【高分句型2】I really enjoyed the moment when all of us were together.(运用了when引导的限制性定语从句)
2. 假设你是学生李明，你们学校上周接待了英国中学生访问团，你作为志愿者参与了接待来访学生体验中国书法（calligraphy）的活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇日记。
内容需包括：
简单记述整个过程；
简要谈谈活动后你的感受。
【范文赏析】
Last Friday left me a deep impression because our school received some British students cordially to expose them to authentic Chinese culture in the flesh.
As a volunteer, it was my great honor to witness the whole process. Early in the morning, upon their arrival, we formed a line in high spirits to give them a warm welcome at the school gate. I led them directly to the calligraphy classroom, believing that calligraphy counts with no doubt in terms of Chinese culture. There one of our teachers taught them something about calligraphy. I explained in English when necessary. Attracted by the beauty of it, they couldn’t wait to give it a go. Then, they wrote the characters of Shanghai on the paper successfully.
Before their leaving, we took photos together, with the characters of Shanghai in hands, to memorize the enjoyable moment. Looking back on the experience, I felt proud to be a massager of Chinese calligraphy. Actually, I am looking forward to doing more.
本篇书面表达属于图画作文。学校上周接待了英国中学生访问团，考生作为志愿者参与了接待来访学生体验中国书法的活动，要求考生按照图片提示写一篇日记。
1.词汇积累
热情友好地：cordially→ warmly
真正的：authentic→ true
亲自：in the flesh→ personally
荣幸：honor→ privilege
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：As a volunteer, it was my great honor to witness the whole process.
拓展句：As a volunteer, witnessing the whole process was my great honor .
【点睛】【高分句型1】As a volunteer, it was my great honor to witness the whole process.（运用了it作形式主语和不定式短语作真正的主语）
【高分句型2】I led them directly to the calligraphy classroom, believing that calligraphy counts with no doubt in terms of Chinese culture. （运用了现在分词believing作状语和that引导的宾语从句 ）
3. 假设你是明启中学的学生李华.你和同学们上周末去医院参加了志愿者活动，请按照以下四幅画的先后顾序，给校刊“英语角”版面写一篇英文稿件，介绍此次经历（可合理增加一些细节），并简要说说心得体会。稿件的第一句已给出。
参考词: self-service registration machine自助挂号机 consulting rooms诊室
WeChat Moments朋友圈
Last weekend, my classmates and I worked as volunteers in a hospital…….
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【范文赏析】
Last weekend, my classmates and I worked as volunteers in a hospital.
In the morning, a doctor gave us a lecture, telling us of our roles as volunteers. It was the first time for me to know the daily work in a hospital. In the afternoon, fully prepared, we went to different posts and started our jobs. Together with my classmate, I helped some elderly people how to use the self-service registration machine. What we did helped to save elderly people a lot of trouble. Besides, I also showed people the way to different consulting room. For some elderly patients, we accompanied them all the way until it was their appointment time. They really appreciated our help.
Later after this volunteer work, I shared my pictures as a volunteer in the hospital on WeChat Moments. In no time, I received lots of likes from my friends. Some of them expressed their great interest in the voluntary work. ……
本篇书面表达属于图画类作文。要求考生根据图画内容，给校刊“英语角”版面写一篇英文稿件，介绍上周末去医院参加的志愿者活动。
1.词汇积累
此外：besides→in addition
表达：express→convey
感激：appreciate→be grateful for
和……一起：together with→along with
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：It was the first time for me to know the daily work in a hospital.
拓展句：It was the first time that I had known the daily work in a hospital.
【点睛】【高分句型1】 In the morning, a doctor gave us a lecture, telling us of our roles as volunteers.(运用了现在分词做状语)
【高分句型2】 What we did helped to save elderly people a lot of trouble.(运用了what引导的主语从句)
4.请观察下图两幅漫画，完成一篇作文。
1. 描述漫画内容；
2. 解读漫画含义；
3. 表述你的观点。
注意： 1. 词数 100 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【范文赏析】
As is depicted in the picture, a young man, reluctant to teach his father to use the cell phone, is very warm-hearted to help an old lady he meets in the park. The purpose of this cartoon is to reveal an alarming fact that people may be generous to others only for the sake of social image.
Love, responsibility, and social image are the three primary motivations for people to help others. Helping strangers in public enables people to establish a favorable social image.( and provides them with excellent self-satisfaction and a sense of pride.) While we should not deny its importance in building positive social connections, this motivation is indeed not that selfless in nature. Taking care of one’s parents, on the other hand, is an action out of love and responsibility, which requires people to put aside their own benefits.( and be entirely devoted to others.)
In conclusion, being kind to one’s parents is a selfless deed without material or reputational reward. Therefore, it can always serve as a criterion for individuals to judge others and, more importantly, reflect on their own behaviors.
本篇书面表达属于图画作文。要求考生描述漫画内容、解读漫画含义并表述自己的观点。
1.词汇积累
遇见：meet→encounter
目的：purpose→aim
建立：establish→build
照顾：take care of→look after
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Love, responsibility, and social image are the three primary motivations for people to help others.
拓展句：There are three primary motivations for people to help others, which are love, responsibility, and social image.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The purpose of this cartoon is to reveal an alarming fact that people may be generous to others only for the sake of social image.（运用了that引导的同位语从句）
【高分句型2】While we should not deny its importance in building positive social connections, this motivation is indeed not that selfless in nature.（运用了while引导的让步状语从句）
【高分句型3】Taking care of one’s parents, on the other hand, is an action out of love and responsibility, which requires people to put aside their own benefits.( and be entirely devoted to others.)（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
5.仔细阅读下图，针对图片反应的情况，谈谈你的看法。内容须包括：
1. 简要描述图片;
2. 结合自身实际谈谈你的看法。
【范文赏析】
As is vividly depicted in the picture, a student is bearing a heavy burden on his back, feeling at a loss and depressed when faced with the choice of university. Two ways diverge in front of him─one according to his personal interest, and the other based on his parents’ expectation. What is illustrated in the picture mirrors a thought-provoking phenomenon─whether to follow one’s heart or to obey his parents’ requirements in making such a critical choice.
Personally, it is pursuit of personal interest that matters. One explanation lies in the motivation.Without interest, hardly can we find any motivation to commit ourselves to learning anything new. Taking myself as an example, passionate about photographing, I’ve been attending photography-related courses for 2 years. And now I’ve become a part-time Vlogger with scores of followers. Therefore, interest indeed plays a central role in learning.
Simply put, as the saying goes, interest is the best pared with echoing parents’ expectations, sticking to our own interest may prove to be a better alternative. Only by arousing our interest in what we are going to do can we be substantially motivated, and thus become who we want to be.
这是一篇图画作文。要求学生就图画反应的“如何选择自己的大学之路”进行陈述，并给出自己的观点。
1.词汇积累
因此：therefore→thus
建议：suggestion→tip
导致：lead to→contribute to
坚持：stick to→insist on
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：One explanation lies in the motivation, a driving force of learning.
拓展句：One explanation lies in the motivation, which is a driving force of learning.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As is vividly depicted in the picture, a student is bearing a heavy burden on his back, feeling at a loss and depressed when faced with the choice of university. （运用了as引导的非限定性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Without interest, hardly can we find any motivation to commit ourselves to learning anything new. （否定副词hardly放到句首，句子运用了部分倒装）
6.请你根据对下面这幅漫画的理解用英语写一篇短文，描述一下漫画中所表达的情况并发表你的看法。
内容要求：
1.描述漫画内容；
2.分析漫画所揭示的问题；
3.提出你的看法
词数80左右。
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【范文赏析】
As is illustrated in the picture, a child is excessively fond of online games. Hooked by online games, he will put anything else aside, not to mention his homework. His parent has great difficulty pulling him back into reality.
Being addicted to online games has posed too many drawbacks. Firstly, the students don’t concentrate their undivided attention on study, thus falling behind educationally. Secondly, addiction to online games usually leads to less communication, which separates the children from their friends and parents. What’s more, it’s harmful to their health if they sit in front of the computer all day long.
Accordingly it’s high time that we should take effective measures to get rid of the addiction. On the one hand, students are supposed to possess the ability to discipline themselves. On the other hand, it’s advisable that parents and teachers should limit the online time. Only in this way can they cultivate a healthy lifestyle and hold a positive attitude towards life.
本文是说明文。图片描绘的是现在许多孩子沉溺于电脑网络不能自拔的现象。请考生根据对下面这幅漫画的理解用英语写一篇短文，描述一下漫画中所表达的情况，分析漫画所揭示的问题，并提出看法。
1.词汇积累
喜欢：be fond of→like/be into
此外：What’s more→Besides
对……有害：be harmful to→do harm to
应该：be supposed to→should
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Firstly, the students don’t concentrate their undivided attention on study, thus falling behind educationally.
拓展句：Firstly, the students don’t concentrate their undivided attention on study, which makes them fall behind educationally.
【点睛】【高分句型1】 Secondly, addiction to online games usually leads to less communication, which separates the children from their friends and parents. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】What’s more, it’s harmful to their health if they sit in front of the computer all day long.(运用了if引导的状语从句)
【高分句型3】 Only in this way can they cultivate a healthy lifestyle and hold a positive attitude towards life.(运用了“only+状语”置于句首，句子使用部分倒装结构)
7．假如你是某中学高一学生赵明，不久前经历了一次地震，你和邻居一起救出了一个受困的人。请你根据下面四幅图片的顺序，写出事情的全过程。
注意：1.开头已给出，不计入总词数;
2．词数不少于80。
提示词：锹，铲spade;担架stretcher
Last Saturday morning，a severe earthquake suddenly happened.
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【范文赏析】
Last Saturday morning, a severe earthquake suddenly happened. I was reading in the room when the light, clock, and many things inside were shaking. Meanwhile, someone shouted “Earthquake!” I rushed outside without hesitation.
Outdoors I heard a crash behind me and someone shouting “Help”, I looked back and found a house had collapsed. I, together with my neighbors, tried to find the one trapped in the ruins, using spades and even our hands. After a few minutes, we found an old man, his leg broken. We carried him to a safe place on a stretcher and waited for an ambulance.
Though tired, we were glad we had saved the old man. It was quite an experience which I would never forget.
本篇书面表达属于图画作文。你是某中学高一学生赵明，不久前经历了一次地震，你和邻居一起救出了一个受困的人，要求考生结合给出的四幅图片的顺序，写出事情的全过程
1.词汇积累
同时：meanwhile→at the same time
大喊：shout → yell
冲出外面：rush out→ run out
疲惫的：tired → exhausted
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句： I rushed outside without hesitation.
拓展句： Without hesitation, I rushed outside, anxiously realizing that an earthquake was happening.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I was reading in the room when the light, clock, and many things inside were shaking. （运用了when引导时间状语从句）
【高分句型2】 I, together with my neighbors, tried to find the one trapped in the ruins, using spades and even our hands. （运用了现在分词作状语）
8．根据下列六幅图所反映的内容，结合写作提示，以“Changes In Our Life”为题写一篇短文。
【范文赏析】
Great changes have taken place in our life. Take my family for example, in the past my parents got in touch with others by sending letters and they used to listen to the radio for news and other information. When they got married, my parents had to live in a small room crowded with furniture.
But now not only can we get in touch with others over the telephone at home but also we can get much more news and information by watching TV. What’s more, we have moved into a two storied building with quite a few rooms inside it.
In short, these changes have brought us a lot of happiness and convenience.
本篇书面表达属于图画类作文。要求考生根据下列六幅图所反映的内容，结合写作提示，以“Changes In Our Life”为题写一篇短文。
【详解】1.词汇积累
与……取得联系：get in touch with→ get into contact with
获得：get→ obtain
此外：What’s more → Besides
简而言之：In short→ In brief
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：What’s more, we have moved into a two storied building with quite a few rooms inside it.
拓展句：What’s more, we have moved into a two storied building, which contains quite a few rooms.
【点睛】【高分句型1】When they got married, my parents had to live in a small room crowded with furniture.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句）
【高分句型2】But now not only can we get in touch with others over the telephone at home but also we can get much more news and information by watching TV.（运用了not only…but also…的固定句型以及not only位于句首时，句子需用部分倒装）
9．假设你是李华，请按照下列几幅图画提示写一篇英文日记，叙述自己某一天的尴尬遭遇。
注意：(1)词数：80词左右;
(2)内容连贯，语句通顺。
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【范文赏析】
May 18th cloudy
In the morning, my alarm clock didn’t ring so I woke up an hour late. I was in such a hurry that I burnt my hand when I was cooking breakfast. Then I rushed out of the house to catch the 8:30 bus, but of course I missed it.
I was very upset because I knew my teacher would get angry if anyone was late for class. So I had no choice but to run three miles to the school. But when I arrived there with sweat in the end, I found that it was Sunday. What an embarrassment!
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就给出的图片写一篇英文日记，描述自己一天的尴尬遭遇。
1.词汇积累
烧伤我的手：burn my hand→have my hand burned
不开心的：unhappy → displeased,
到达：arrive→reach/get
最后：in the end→ eventually/finally
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：So I ran three miles to the school.
拓展句：So I ran three miles to the school, which made me greatly exhausted.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I was in such a hurry that I burnt my hand when I was cooking breakfast. （运用了such...that引导的结果状语从句）
【高分句型2】 I was very unhappy because I knew my teacher got angry if anyone was late for class. （运用了if引导的条件状语从句）
10．如今随着智能手机和电子设备的普及,“低头族”现象兴起。请根据图画写一篇英文短文。
注意:1.词数80左右；
2.可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。
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【范文赏析】
As can be seen from the picture, a big family gets together to have a big dinner. But the young just bury themselves in playing with their cell phones, totally ignoring their parents.
There is no doubt that cell phones have a negative effect on our lives. Heavy use of cell phones widens the distance between teenagers and their elders. Worse still, addiction to cell phones will lead to teenagers’ poor performance at school.
It’s time to limit the use of cell phones and communicate with our family members face to face, which helps build a harmonious family atmosphere.
1.词汇积累
忽视：ignore→overlook
怀疑：doubt→suspect
消极的：negative→passive
限制：limit→restrict
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句： Seen from the picture, a big family gets together to have a big dinner.
拓展句：As can be seen from the picture, a big family gets together to have a big dinner.
【点睛】【高分句型1】There is no doubt that cell phones have a negative effect on our lives.(运用了that引导的同位语从句)
【高分句型2】It’s time to limit the use of cell phones and communicate with our family members face to face,which helps build a harmonious family atmosphere.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)