图表作文详细指南
图表作文一般是对某个具体问题的调查或统计,通常以表格或图形来呈现,常常反映出一个普遍的问题。体裁多为说明文、议论文。考生需根据图片提供的数据和文字进行分析,并过渡到普遍现象。常见的命题形式有表格、柱状图、饼状图、曲线图等。
写作时需要介绍图表中数据有什么变动,反映了哪些问题和趋势,并分析问题或数据背后的原因, 结合自己的看法谈谈解决措施或给出观点。
年份 卷别 话题 命题形式
2023
2022 全国乙卷 如何在课堂外学英语 图表半开放式
2021
看图可知,图表类作文考试频率不算高,但是我们还是要了解基本写作方法,有备无患。
I.审题
1.审读图表,比较数据,得出变化规律,提炼要点
2.分析要点,确立主题;
3.灵活运用横向对比,即描述数据的变化;纵向说明,反映出问题。
II.三步成文
第一步:开门见山,点明图表所反映的现象
第二步:分析图表所示内容的原因或进行评论
第三步:归纳总结或发表评论,提供建议等
1.图表类型
graph 曲线图 figure 几何图形 pie chart 饼状图 bar chart 柱状图 diagram 平面图、示意图 table 表格
2.数据表达
50% of...../fifty percent of .... ...的百分之五十
Half of the ... 一半
A quater of 四分之一
3 quaters of 四分之三
Nine out of ten / nine in ten 十个中有九个
The majority of ... 大多数 the minority of 少数
Account for 70 percent 占百分之70
3.常用句型
开头:
1.As can be indicated in the table... 正如表格所表明
2.As is revealed in the table... 如图所示
3.According to the figures given in the table... 根据表中的数据
4.This chart shows that... 图表表明
5.As is clearly shown by the graph... 正如图像所示
6.It can be seen/concluded from the statistics that... 从数据可知
7. from the chart , we can see that...
主体:(数据描述)
1.A is by far the largest... A是目前最大的.....
2.The figure has nearly doubled/tripled, as against that of last year. 与去年相比,数据几乎翻了两倍/三倍
3.There is a slight/slow/steady/rapid rise in population. 在人口方面有轻微的/缓慢的/稳定的/迅速的增长.
4.As is shown/demonstrated in the graph , great changes have taken place in... 如图所示,....发生了巨大变化
5.Sth.be on the increase//rise/decline/ decrease ....正在增长/减少
6.It has decreased /increased by 30% compared with last year. 与去年相比,已经增长了30%。
7.A is ....times as much as B A是B的....几倍
8. The number remain steady from ....to .... 从...年到....年, 数据保持稳定。
结尾
1.the trend described in the graph will continue for quite a long time if necessary measures are not taken.
如果不采取必要措施,图表中所描述的趋势将会持续很长一段时间。
2.from the chart, we have every reason to predict what will happen in the near future.
通过图表可知,我们有充分的理由预测在不久的将来将会发生什么。
3.The data/statistics/ figures lead us to the conclusion that....
根据这些数据,我们能得出....结论。
1.(2022年全国高考乙卷真题)
学校英文报正在开展以Learning English Beyond the Classroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1. 学习活动状况描述;
2. 简单评论;
3. 你的建议。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
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【范文赏析】
Learning English Beyond the Classroom
Nowadays, with the growing popularity of smartphones and computers, an increasing number of students are choosing to learn English beyond the classroom in various ways.
It can easily be seen that the percentage of students who choose listening to English songs and watching English movies is respectively 65% and 50%. However, those choosing reading English books and visiting English learning websites only account for 18% and 12%.
As far as I’m concerned, it is a disturbing trend. For students, what benefits most to their study is reading English books. Because of their lack of self-discipline, they’re more easily addicted to chatting online or playing games. It’s urgent for students themselves to improve their self-discipline, and it’s also urgent for parents and teachers to strengthen the guidance.
本篇书面表达属于议论文,要求考生使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿,对学生的英语学习活动状况进行描述并作简单的评论,提出建议。
1.词汇积累
缺乏:lack→shortage
加强:strengthen→enhance
各种各样的:various→all kinds of
就我而言:as far as I’m concerned→from my perspective
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:However, those choosing reading English books and visiting English learning websites only account for 18% and 12%.
拓展句:However, those who choose reading English books and visiting English learning websites only account for 18% and 12%.
【高分句型1】It can easily be seen that the percentage of students who choose listening to English songs and watching English movies is respectively 65% and 50%. (运用了it作形式主语,that引导主语从句以及who引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】For students, what benefits most to their study is reading English books.(运用了what引导的主语从句)
1.你校英文报正在开展以Satisfaction with Your Looks为话题的调查,请结合图表中的数据写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1. 满意度情况描述;
2. 简单评论;
3. 你的建议。
注意:
1. 写作词数不少于80;
2. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Attitudes towards whether we are satisfied with our looks vary from person to person.
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2.最近,你班同学就“探索海洋是否值得”这一话题展开了一场讨论。请你根据下表提供的信息,用英语记录讨论的情况,并谈谈自己的看法。
30%的同学认为 70%的同学认为 你的观点
1.不值得探索 2.会对海洋造成污染 3.一些人残忍猎杀一些海洋动物,导致它们灭绝 1.值得探索 2.为了更好地了解我们的星球,必须进行海洋探索 3.海洋拥有丰富的资源,有助于解决能源短缺问题 ……
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Recently our class had a heated discussion on whether the sea is worth exploring. Students hold different ideas about it.
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3.假如你叫李华,参加学校开展的“有困难向谁求助?”(Whom do you turn to when in trouble )的调查活动,调查结果如下表。请用英语给校报编辑写一封信反映相关内容。
求助对象 比例 理由
同学、朋友 58% 年龄相仿,容易理解与交流
老师、家长 30% 有爱心、有经验,可以信任
无 12% 不愿与人交流,难以与人沟通
注意:
1. 内容要点全面,并表达出你的观点,为了使文章连贯,可适当增加内容;
2. 词数80左右。
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4.为了了解学生周末用餐的情况,你的学校进行了一次相关的调查,下图是这次调查的结果。请你根据图表数据,以“Convenience Food or Fresh Food on Weekends ”为题写一篇投稿,内容包括:
1. 学生周末用餐选择情况的描述;
2. 简单的分析;
3. 你的想法。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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5.你校英文报正在开展以 Students’ Time Spent on Physical Exercise Weekly为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿, 内容包括:
1. 描述调查结果;
2. 分析其原因并给出建议。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
Students’ Time Spent on Physical Exercise Weekly
Nowadays, many students are aware of the significance of physical exercise, although the time they spend on it varies.
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6.某英文网站开展了一项以What technology is used in high school为题的调查。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文,内容包括:
1. 技术使用状况描述;2. 简单评论;3. 你的建议。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Schools in our city have been using a variety of technologies to improve their students’ learning experience.
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7.随着电脑普及率的提高,老师、家长和学生对于写的重视程度降低了。下图是一项调查显示中学生不想练字的理由。请说明该现象并发表自己的看法。
注意:可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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8.学校英文报正在开展以“How Often Meals Are Skipped”为题的调查,结果显示绝大多数学生都存在“翘饭”现象,请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1. 调查结果和评论;
2. 你的建议。
注意:
1. 词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
How Often Meals Are Skipped
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9.学校英语俱乐部正在开展以“Ways to Relieve Stress”为题的讨论。请根据图表中的调查结果写一篇发言稿, 内容包括:
1. 简述调查结果;
2. 评价并提出建议。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Ways to Relieve Stress
Recently a survey was carried out about ways to relieve stress.
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10.学校英文报正在开展以“ How often do you exercise ”为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:1.学生锻炼状况描述;2.简单评论; 3.你的建议。
写作要求:1.词数 100 左右; 2.可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
Exercise more to build our future
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参考答案:
1.One possible version:
Attitudes towards whether we are satisfied with our looks vary from person to person. Only 7 percent of students express being completely satisfied, while 26 percent report being relatively satisfied. However, a significant 67 percent admit not being satisfied with their looks.
It is concerning to see such a large majority of students feeling unsatisfied with their appearance. These results underscore the need for promoting positive body image and self-acceptance among students.
To address this issue, I think it is necessary to encourage students to embrace their unique qualities and appreciate themselves for who they are. What also matters is to establish counseling or support groups where students can share their concerns and receive guidance on building self-esteem.
本篇书面表达属于图表作文。题目要求学生根据图表中的数据,为校英文报写一篇以Satisfaction with Your Looks为话题的调查报告,需对图表中的情况作简要描述,发表简单评论,并分享个人的建议。
1. 词汇积累
表达:express→convey
令人忧心的:concerning→worrisome
强调:underscore→underline/emphasize
推进:promote→advance
处理:address→tackle/cope with
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:It is concerning to see such a large majority of students feeling unsatisfied with their appearance.
拓展句:It is concerning to see such a large majority of students who feel unsatisfied with their appearance.
【点睛】[高分句型1] To address this issue, I think it is necessary to encourage students to embrace their unique qualities and appreciate themselves for who they are. (运用了that引导名词性从句作think的宾语并被省略、who引导名词性从句作for的宾语)
[高分句型2] What also matters is to establish counseling or support groups where students can share their concerns and receive guidance on building self-esteem. (运用了What引导名词性从句作主语、where引导限制性定语从句)
2.One possible version
Recently our class had a heated discussion on whether the sea is worth exploring. Students hold different ideas about it.
30% of us think sea exploration is not worthwhile, holding the opinion that it will pollute the sea. Some people hunt marine animals without mercy, causing them to die out. However, 70% of us think the sea is worth exploring, which is beneficial to human beings. To better understand our planet, we must explore the sea. Moreover, the sea is abundant in a variety of resources, which enables us to solve the problem of energy shortages.
As far as I am concerned,it’s worthwhile to explore the sea for the benefit of future generations. Meanwhile, we should exploit the sea properly.
本篇书面表达属于英语短文,要求考生根据提纲写一篇关于“探索海洋是否值得”的短文。
1. 词汇积累
观点:opinion→view
残忍地:without mercy→mercilessly/cruelly
灭绝:die out→get extinct
有益的:beneficial→helpful
富含:be abundant in→be rich in
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Some people hunt marine animals without mercy, causing them to die out.
拓展句:Some people hunt marine animals without mercy, which causes them to die out.
【点睛】【高分句型1】30% of us think sea exploration is not worthwhile, holding the opinion that it will pollute the sea. (使用了省略that的宾语从句、现在分词短语作状语、that引导同位语从句)
【高分句型2】Moreover, the sea is abundant in a variety of resources, which enables us to solve the problem of energy shortages. (使用了which引导非限制性定语从句、不定式作宾补)
3.One possible version:
Dear editor,
I’m a student in Senior Three. We have made a survey — “Whom do you turn to when in trouble ”. Here are the results.
Most of the students will turn to their classmates or friends for help when in trouble, who are almost of the same age so they can talk with and understand each other easily. Some students will tell their teachers or parents about their troubles and ask for their help as the teachers and parents have rich experience and love them very much. They can be trusted by these students. Only a few students who hate to talk with others and can’t get on well with others solve their problems all by themselves. They have few friends.
In my opinion, when in trouble we’d better ask our teachers, parents, friends or classmates for help.
Yours,
Li Hua
本篇书面表达属于图表作文。要求考生根据表中的调查结果,给校报编辑写一封信反映相关内容,需涵盖表格中的内容要点,并发表自己的观点。
1. 词汇积累
丰富的:rich→abundant
与……融洽相处:get on with→get along with
解决:solve→work out
独自:by oneself→on one’s own
2. 句式拓展
句型转换
原句:Some students will tell their teachers or parents about their troubles and ask for their help as the teachers and parents have rich experience and love them very much. They can be trusted by these students.
拓展句:Some students will tell their teachers or parents about their troubles and ask for their help as the teachers and parents who can be trusted by these students have rich experience and love them very much.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Most of the students will turn to their classmates or friends for help when in trouble, who are almost of the same age so they can talk with and understand each other easily. (运用了when引导时间状语从句的省略,who引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Some students will tell their teachers or parents about their troubles and ask for their help as the teachers and parents have rich experience and love them very much. (运用了as引导原因状语从句)
4.
Convenience Food or Fresh Food on Weekends
Recently, our school conducted a survey, which aims to figure out how the students enjoy their weekend dinner.
It comes as no surprise that over half of the students surveyed prefer fresh food prepared at home, which is healthier and more delicious. 30% of the students choose to dine out in restaurants, while only 11% order takeouts. Obviously, fresh food is more favorable than convenience food on weekends.
Personally, I have a preference for having fresh food cooked at home. Not only can I have a good taste of the dishes my mother cooks for me, I can also enjoy the time with my parents and communicate with them about my experiences in school. It’s a precious occasion that tightens our bond and gives me courage to face the challenges back in the real world. (125 words)
1. 词汇积累
进行调查:conduct a survey→carry out a survey
美味的:delicious→tasty
就本人而言:personally→as far as I’m concerned
明显地:obviously→apparently
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Personally, I have a preference for having fresh food cooked at home.
拓展句:Personally, I have a preference for having fresh food which is cooked at home.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Recently, our school conducted a survey, which aims to figure out how the students enjoy their weekend dinner. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句和how引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Not only can I have a good taste of the dishes my mother cooks for me, I can also enjoy the time with my parents and communicate with them about my experiences in school (运用了not only置于句首引起的部分倒装句)
5.
Students’ Time Spent on Physical Exercise Weekly
Nowadays, many students are aware of the significance of physical exercise, although the time they spend on it varies.
It can be seen from the survey that the percentage of students who spend 2-3 hours a week, 3-4 hours a week and 4-5 hours a week is respectively 30%, 40% and 18%. However, there are still12% of students who only spend 1-2 hours a week.The survey shows that a significant number of students are committed to physical exercise. This trend may be due to increased awareness of the importance of physical fitness and promotion of sports activities by the school.
As far as I’m concerned, by continuing to promote and support physical activities within the school environment, we can ensure the overall well-being and health of our students.
本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生所在学校校英文报正在开展以 Students’ Time Spent on Physical Exercise Weekly为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿。
1.词汇积累
展示:show→showcase
重要的:significant→essential
提高:improve→promote
确保:ensure→make sure
2.句式拓展
同义句转化
原句:However, there are still12% of students who only spend 1-2 hours a week.
拓展句:However, there are still12% of students only spending 1-2 hours a week.
【点睛】【高分句型1】However, there are still12% of students who only spend 1-2 hours a week.(运用了who引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】The survey shows that a significant number of students are committed to physical exercise.(that引导的宾语从句)
6.
Schools in our city have been using a variety of technologies to improve their students’ learning experience. According to the survey results on the topic “What technology is used in high school”, computer labs are utilized by 85% of the schools surveyed. Additionally, 60% utilize interactive whiteboards, while only 15% incorporate 3D printing technology. Lastly, a mere 5% of the schools implement virtual reality (VR) headsets.
This data highlights the varying degrees of technology integration in high puter labs are widely adopted, which indicates the importance of computer skills. The use of interactive whiteboards also suggests an emphasis on interactive learning experiences. However, the low rates of 3D printing and VR headsets usage reveal a potential area for improvement.
It is advisable to encourage more schools to incorporate 3D printing and virtual reality technologies. These technologies can provide students with hands-on experiences and immersive learning opportunities.
1. 词汇积累
此外:additionally→what’s more, in addition
突出:highlight→spotlight, underline
不同的:varying→varied, different
表明:indicate→demonstrate, reflect, reveal
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:It is advisable to encourage more schools to incorporate 3D printing and virtual reality technologies.
拓展句:It is advised that more schools should be encouraged to incorporate 3D printing and virtual reality technologies.
【点睛】[高分句型1] According to the survey results on the topic “What technology is used in high school”, computer labs are utilized by 85% of the schools surveyed. (运用了过去分词surveyed作后置定语)
[高分句型2] Computer labs are widely adopted, which indicates the importance of computer skills. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
7.
Nowadays, with the growing popularity of computers, teachers, students and their parents are paying less and less attention to handwriting.
According to a recent survey, about 85.8 percent of middle school students think that their handwriting is poor. Yet for various reasons, many students don’t want to improve their handwriting. 51.5 percent of the students think that they can just use a computer, so there is no need to waste time improving their handwriting, and 32.2 percent believe that they are so busy with the study that they do not have time to practice. 10.9 percent think that practicing handwriting is useless.
As the saying goes, writing style shows the man. Beautiful and neat handwriting is beneficial, especially for middle school students. Therefore, in my opinion, more emphasis should be placed on this aspect in the future.
1.词汇积累
调查:survey→research
各种各样的:various→ all kinds of
提高:improve →enhance
认为:think→ consider
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Yet for various reasons, many students don’t want to improve their handwriting.
拓展句:The reason why many students don’t want to improve their handwriting is varied.
【点睛】【高分句型1】10.9 percent think that practicing handwriting is useless.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】As the saying goes, writing style shows the man. (运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句)
8
Our school English newspaper conducted a survey entitled “How often meals are skipped”. The results of the survey show that the percentage of students who skip meals once a day and several times a week is respectively 50% and 8%. However, those who never skip meals only account for 37%.
With the development of economy, students have a lot of choices to eat. More and more students are keen on snacks, skipping regular meals, which does great harm to their health, and even their study.
As far as I am concerned, it’s urgent for students themselves to improve their self-discipline and it’s also essential for parents and teachers to strengthen their guidance.
1.词汇积累
调查:survey→ investigation
表明:show→ indicate
然而:However→ Nevertheless
热衷于:are keen on→are fond of
2.句式拓展
同义句替换
原句:With the development of economy, students have a lot of choices to eat.
同义句:Due to the economic progress, students now have a plethora of food choices available to them.
【点睛】【高分句型1】More and more students are keen on snacks, skipping regular meals, which does great harm to their health, and even their study. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】The results of the survey show that the percentage of students who skip meals once a day and several times a week is respectively 50% and 8%. (运用了who引导的定语从句)
9.
Ways to Relieve Stress
Recently a survey was carried out about ways to relieve stress. 80% of the respondents said they like to watch videos to relax, followed closely by listening to music. Comparatively, only a small number of students chose exercise or talking to others.
While videos and music are fun, spending too much time on them can make us rely too much on our phones and ignore more important things. There are actually better options available. For example, doing exercise or talking with friends not only relieves stress but also brings us closer to each other.
So, if we are feeling a lot of stress, it’s a good idea to try different ways to relax. But most importantly, we should focus on things that help both our body and mind.
That’s all from me. Thank you!
1.词汇积累
放松:relax→loosen
选择:choose→select
压力:stress→pressure
专心于:focus on→concentrate on
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:80% of the respondents said they like to watch videos to relax, followed closely by listening to music.
拓展句:80% of the respondents said they like to watch videos to relax, which was followed closely by listening to music.
【点睛】【高分句型1】While videos and music are fun, spending too much time on them can make us rely too much on our phones and ignore more important things. (运用了while引导的状语从句以及动名词作主语)
【高分句型2】So, if we are feeling a lot of stress, it’s a good idea to try different ways to relax. (运用了it作形式主语,动词不定式作真正主语)
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A recent survey shows that 4% of students exercise five times or more per week, while 24% exercise three to four times per week. Thirty-two percent exercise one to two times per week, and another 32% exercise less than once per week. Surprisingly, 8% of students never exercise.
This lack of exercise is concerning because it can lead to health issues. Regular exercise is essential for maintaining good health and reducing stress levels.
To improve this situation, I suggest that schools provide more sports classes. Students should also be encouraged to find an exercise which is helpful for them to keep fit and make time for it in their daily routine.
1.词汇积累
显示:show→ display
锻炼:exercise → work out
建议:suggest→ recommend
有益的:be helpful→ be beneficial
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:I suggest that schools provide more sports classes.
同义句:It is advisable that schools provide more sports classes.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Regular exercise is essential for maintaining good health and reducing stress levels.(使用了动名词短语作宾语)
【高分句型2】Students should also be encouraged to find an exercise which is helpful for them to keep fit and make time for it in their daily routine.(使用了以exercise为先行词、关系代词which为引导词的定语从句)