2024届高考写作短文故事续写的英语作文 讲义
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2024年高考写作短文故事续写的英语作文
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When I was a freshman in high school ( Bell) was my only close friend. Usually , I would just sit there quietly, totally unsure of myself, It seemed like the only time the other classmates talked to me was just to say jokingly, “You are so quiet. Do you ever talk ”]wanted to talk. I just couldn't find the words. I never felt like I knew what to say in a big group of people.One Saturday, Bella was supposed to come over and spend the night at my house. We always had a lot of fun together. But before we left the school that day, some of the other girls invited her to go to the movies with them. Since Bella had already made plans with me.they asked if I would like to go to movies with them, too.I was nervous at first and wanted to decline, because all of them were totally opposite tome. I was cautious and shy while they were totally outgoing and even a little wild. I thought I would never really fit in. But Bella insisted that I go with them. I eventually agreed. It turned out that my decision to go with them would change my life.
One of the moms drove us to the cinema, and we all sat in the back seat of her car Bella, Rhiannon, Destinee, Christine, Sabella, and me. On the way, they shared their secrets and laughed They even told each other the funniest things they had done to the cute boys in class. At first, I was kind of quiet, but eventually I laughed with them until my chest hurt.Encouraged by their boldness, I also shared with them my “secrets”, too. I even told a joke and they all laughed. Sabella, the wildest girl, turned around and yelled enthusiastically,“]can't believe we've never hung out before. You are so fun to be around!”
注意:1.续写词数应为150个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
After the movie, Bella suggested that all of us should spend the night at my house.
That night totally changed my life at school.
Then Sabella stared at me with an expectant look and said with happiness, "Is that ok Are your parents at home " I didn't know what I should do. While my Mom and Dad went to the countryside to visit grandparents, I was afraid of causing trouble at home when they spent the night at my house. I fell into a dilemma, but on second thought, I replied, "That's ok!" Then Sabella threw her arms around me with an excited shout. "Oh! Dear, So cool!" We brought some snacks and drinks home. And we ate snacks, played games, and even shared our deepest secrets with each other. After that day, it was time to go to school.
My shyness gave way to outgoingness at school. When they have lunch, play games, and do something interesting, they always ask me to join them. The other classmates were so amazed at why my personality had changed. I know it was Bella who helped me to be myself and express myself without fear. It eventually dawned on me that a random act of kindness could make a far-reaching difference.
进一步优化润色成拔高款作文，蓝色是好词好句好素材，尖子生可以选用
Sabella stared at me eagerly and exclaimed happily, "Can I come over Are your parents around " I hesitated, not sure what to say. My parents had gone to visit my grandparents in the countryside and I was worried about any commotion at home during their absence. Slightly confused, I finally replied, "Sure, that's fine!" Sabella hugged me tightly, shouting excitedly, "Yay! This is going to be so much fun!" Together, we stocked up on snacks, ready to enjoy ourselves at home. We munched on treats, played fun games, and even shared our deepest secrets. After that memorable day, it was time to get back to our studies.
At school, I found myself more outgoing than before. Whenever there was lunch, a game, or any exciting activity, my classmates eagerly invited me to join them. They were amazed at how my personality had changed. I knew it was Bella who had helped me open up and speak my mind freely. Gradually, I realized that a simple act of kindness could have a profound impact.
赛贝拉急切地盯着我，高兴地喊道：“我可以去你家吗？你父母在吗？”我犹豫了，不知道该说什么。我父母去乡下看望我祖父母了，我担心他们不在家时家里会出什么乱子。我有点困惑，最后回答说：“当然可以！”赛贝拉紧紧地抱住我，激动地大喊：“太好了！这一定会很有趣的！”我们一起买了很多零食，准备回家好好享受。我们吃着零食，玩着有趣的游戏，甚至分享了我们内心最深处的秘密。在那难忘的一天之后，是时候回到学习中了。
在学校，我发现自己比以前更外向了。每当有午餐、游戏或任何令人兴奋的活动时，我的同学都会热情地邀请我加入。他们惊讶于我的性格发生了变化。我知道是贝拉帮助我打开心扉，让我可以自由地说出自己的想法。渐渐地，我意识到一个简单的善举可能会产生深远的影响。
第五步：优化改写理由供参考1.“stared at me eagerly”比“gazed at me with an eager expression”更简洁且易于理解。
2.exclaimed happily”替换了“exclaimed joyfully”，因为“happily”更常用，更符合日常用语。
3.将“My parents had journeyed to the countryside to see my grandparents”简化为“My parents had gone to visit my grandparents in the countryside”，更口语化，易于理解。
4.“Slightly confused”替换了“I was perplexed”，因为“confused”是更常用的词汇，“munched on treats”比“indulged in the treats”更贴切描述吃零食的情景。
5.“After that memorable day”替换了“Following that fateful day”，因为“memorable”更常用于描述值得记住的日子。
6.more outgoing than before”比“a more outgoing demeanor”更简洁明了，“They were amazed at how my personality had changed”比“My classmates were genuinely astonished by the noticeable shift in my personality”更简洁。
7.“I knew it was Bella”替换了“I attribute this transformation to Bella”，因为前者更直接表达了“我”对贝拉的感激之情，“a simple act of kindness could have a profound impact”比“a spontaneous act of generosity can create profound and lasting impact”更简洁易懂，且强调了善举的深远影响。
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When I was a freshman in high school ( Bell) was my only close friend. Usually , I would just sit there quietly, totally unsure of myself, It seemed like the only time the other classmates talked to me was just to say jokingly, “You are so quiet. Do you ever talk ”]wanted to talk. I just couldn't find the words. I never felt like I knew what to say in a big group of people.One Saturday, Bella was supposed to come over and spend the night at my house. We always had a lot of fun together. But before we left the school that day, some of the other girls invited her to go to the movies with them. Since Bella had already made plans with me.they asked if I would like to go to movies with them, too.I was nervous at first and wanted to decline, because all of them were totally opposite tome. I was cautious and shy while they were totally outgoing and even a little wild. I thought I would never really fit in. But Bella insisted that I go with them. I eventually agreed. It turned out that my decision to go with them would change my life.
One of the moms drove us to the cinema, and we all sat in the back seat of her car Bella, Rhiannon, Destinee, Christine, Sabella, and me. On the way, they shared their secrets and laughed They even told each other the funniest things they had done to the cute boys in class. At first, I was kind of quiet, but eventually I laughed with them until my chest hurt.Encouraged by their boldness, I also shared with them my “secrets”, too. I even told a joke and they all laughed. Sabella, the wildest girl, turned around and yelled enthusiastically,“]can't believe we've never hung out before. You are so fun to be around!”
注意:1.续写词数应为150个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
After the movie, Bella suggested that all of us should spend the night at my house.
That night totally changed my life at school.
Then Sabella stared at me with an expectant look and said with happiness, "Is that ok Are your parents at home " I didn't know what I should do. While my Mom and Dad went to the countryside to visit grandparents, I was afraid of causing trouble at home when they spent the night at my house. I fell into a dilemma, but on second thought, I replied, "That's ok!" Then Sabella threw her arms around me with an excited shout. "Oh! Dear, So cool!" We brought some snacks and drinks home. And we ate snacks, played games, and even shared our deepest secrets with each other. After that day, it was time to go to school.
My shyness gave way to outgoingness at school. When they have lunch, play games, and do something interesting, they always ask me to join them. The other classmates were so amazed at why my personality had changed. I know it was Bella who helped me to be myself and express myself without fear. It eventually dawned on me that a random act of kindness could make a far-reaching difference.
进一步优化润色成拔高款作文，蓝色是好词好句好素材，尖子生可以选用
Sabella stared at me eagerly and exclaimed happily, "Can I come over Are your parents around " I hesitated, not sure what to say. My parents had gone to visit my grandparents in the countryside and I was worried about any commotion at home during their absence. Slightly confused, I finally replied, "Sure, that's fine!" Sabella hugged me tightly, shouting excitedly, "Yay! This is going to be so much fun!" Together, we stocked up on snacks, ready to enjoy ourselves at home. We munched on treats, played fun games, and even shared our deepest secrets. After that memorable day, it was time to get back to our studies.
At school, I found myself more outgoing than before. Whenever there was lunch, a game, or any exciting activity, my classmates eagerly invited me to join them. They were amazed at how my personality had changed. I knew it was Bella who had helped me open up and speak my mind freely. Gradually, I realized that a simple act of kindness could have a profound impact.
赛贝拉急切地盯着我，高兴地喊道：“我可以去你家吗？你父母在吗？”我犹豫了，不知道该说什么。我父母去乡下看望我祖父母了，我担心他们不在家时家里会出什么乱子。我有点困惑，最后回答说：“当然可以！”赛贝拉紧紧地抱住我，激动地大喊：“太好了！这一定会很有趣的！”我们一起买了很多零食，准备回家好好享受。我们吃着零食，玩着有趣的游戏，甚至分享了我们内心最深处的秘密。在那难忘的一天之后，是时候回到学习中了。
在学校，我发现自己比以前更外向了。每当有午餐、游戏或任何令人兴奋的活动时，我的同学都会热情地邀请我加入。他们惊讶于我的性格发生了变化。我知道是贝拉帮助我打开心扉，让我可以自由地说出自己的想法。渐渐地，我意识到一个简单的善举可能会产生深远的影响。
第五步：优化改写理由供参考1.“stared at me eagerly”比“gazed at me with an eager expression”更简洁且易于理解。
2.exclaimed happily”替换了“exclaimed joyfully”，因为“happily”更常用，更符合日常用语。
3.将“My parents had journeyed to the countryside to see my grandparents”简化为“My parents had gone to visit my grandparents in the countryside”，更口语化，易于理解。
4.“Slightly confused”替换了“I was perplexed”，因为“confused”是更常用的词汇，“munched on treats”比“indulged in the treats”更贴切描述吃零食的情景。
5.“After that memorable day”替换了“Following that fateful day”，因为“memorable”更常用于描述值得记住的日子。
6.more outgoing than before”比“a more outgoing demeanor”更简洁明了，“They were amazed at how my personality had changed”比“My classmates were genuinely astonished by the noticeable shift in my personality”更简洁。
7.“I knew it was Bella”替换了“I attribute this transformation to Bella”，因为前者更直接表达了“我”对贝拉的感激之情，“a simple act of kindness could have a profound impact”比“a spontaneous act of generosity can create profound and lasting impact”更简洁易懂，且强调了善举的深远影响。