2024届江苏省如东中学、姜堰中学、沭阳如东中学高三4月联考读后续写 善意让洛克实现大学梦并获得了总统奖学金 讲义-
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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Logan was a brilliant student. He had committed to doing everything it took to win a scholarship to study at a good university. But nothing was more important to the 17-year-old boy than supporting his mother who was sick. After school hours, he would work as a bag boy at the local grocery store. Together,Logan and his mother managed to make ends meet while still fighting to achieve bigger dreams.
Now right outside the grocery store, Logan spotted a familiar face. “Mr. Peters!” Logan called out to the old man holding crutches(拐杖), whom he recognized as his new neighbor. Mr. Peters waved at Logan.Logan happily helped the old man find what he needed and helped him bill the items, too.
“That will be $23, r. Peters," Logan said.
Mr. Peters was taken aback by the bill's amount. He asked, “And how much without the fruits ”
“$19, sir”
"I see." Mr. Peters looked in his wallet. He studied the bill and said, “Actually, I' ll just take the greens,thank you."
“You know what Here, let me pay for your order, It looks like you may have ... left your card at home or something."
Mr. Peters didn't see this kind gesture coming, and even though it hurt his pride a little, he accepted the boy's help.
Logan paid for the order and handed the bags to the old man. But Mr. Peters could only move a few steps forward as he tried to hold all the groceries without the crutches slipping away. Logan rushed to Mr Peters and offered to carry the groceries to his home. It was a short walk, but the two men were engaged in conversation all the way.
“What are you doing working at a grocery store You look like you should be in college!"Mr. Peters asked.
On listening to Logan's story, Mr. Peters was moved and thought he should do something. “It was lovely to meet you, Logan. Maybe you could pop in after your shift at the store today " he asked. Logan agreed, suspecting that the man probably needed some help around the house.
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
After work, Logan knocked on his neighbor's door and discovered the most astonishing thing about the old man .
—————————————————————————————————————
“I've asked some former workmates to notice a scholarship application from a young man named Logan,"Mr Peters continued.
—————————————————————————————————————
中文意译：
洛根是一个才华横溢的学生。为了获得奖学金进入一所好大学学习，他决心竭尽全力。但对这个17岁的男孩来说，没有什么比养活生病的母亲更重要的了。放学后，他会在当地的杂货店当搬运工。洛根和他的母亲一起努力维持生计，同时仍在为实现更大的梦想而奋斗。
现在，就在杂货店外，洛根发现了一张熟悉的脸。“彼得斯先生！”洛根对拄着拐杖的老人喊道(拐杖), 他认出他是新邻居。彼得斯先生向洛根挥手。洛根很高兴地帮老人找到了他需要的东西，还帮他结账。
“那将是23美元，彼得斯先生，”洛根说。
彼得斯先生被帐单的金额吓了一跳。他问道：“没有水果要多少钱？”
“19美元，先生”
“我明白了。”彼得斯先生看了看钱包。他仔细研究了一下账单，说：“事实上，我只吃绿色蔬菜，谢谢你。”
“你知道吗？给，让我为你的订单付款，看起来你可能……把卡忘在家里了什么的。”
彼得斯先生没有看到这种善意的举动，尽管这有点伤了他的自尊心，但他还是接受了男孩的帮助。
洛根付了订单的钱，把袋子递给了老人。但彼得斯先生只能向前走几步，他试图在拐杖不滑落的情况下拿下所有的杂货。洛根冲向彼得斯先生，主动提出要把食品杂货送到他家。虽然走了很短的路，但两个人一直在交谈。
彼得斯先生说：“你在杂货店工作干什么？你看起来应该上大学！”
听到洛根的故事，彼得斯先生很感动，认为他应该做点什么。“很高兴见到你，洛根。也许你今天下班后可以去商店看看？”他问洛根是否同意。洛根同意，怀疑这个男人可能需要一些帮助。
文本分析：
故事大意——洛克，一边准备考取大学，一边勤工俭学。放了学还要照顾生病的妈妈。新邻居彼得斯先生来商店买东西，但似乎他对结账的数额大吃已经，委婉地表示去掉一些食物和蔬菜。洛克见状，帮他支付了账单。见彼得斯先生行动不便，洛根主动提出要把食品杂货送到他家。一路上，彼得斯先生得知了洛克的情况，他说也许你今天下班后可以去商店看看。洛克同意了，以为这位邻居可能需要帮助。
续写情节发展：
第一段
中央立着一个高高的架子，架子上摆满了一排排的奖品。
“这些都是……你的？”洛克问
是的，我曾经是一所大学历史系的教授。
这位先生分享他过去教书的经历。
当洛根意识到自己面对的是一个非凡的人物时，他目瞪口呆。
“但我打电话给你并不是为了炫耀，孩子，”彼得斯先生解释道。
第二段：
洛根欣喜若狂，感激之情溢于言表
彼得斯先生表示：“获得这笔奖学金并不容易，但如果你愿意投入工作，我会帮助你。”。
“当然！谢谢你！彼得斯先生。”洛根兴奋地回答。
在随后的几个月里，他以坚定不移的决心，遵循了彼得斯先生提供的每一条指导。
最终，洛根收到了他梦想中的大学的录取信，信中说他获得了总统奖学金！
正是他的善良使他得到了这个机会。
官方范文：
After work, Logan knocked on his neighbor's door and discovered the most astonishing thing about the old man. In the center of the narrow living room stood a tall shelf filled with rows of awards. “These are all ... yours ” he stammered, his eyebrows raised at the sight. “Yes. You see, I used to be a professor of the history department at a university.” The gentleman began to share his absorbing experiences about his old teaching days. Logan’s jaw dropped as he realized he was in the presence of an extraordinary figure. “But I haven't just called you to show off, son,” Mr. Peters explained.
“I've asked some former workmates to notice a scholarship application from a young man named Logan.”Mr. Peters continued. Overjoyed and grateful beyond words, Logan felt tears brimming in his eyes. “It won't be easy to secure this scholarship, but if you're willing to put in the work, I'm positioned to help you.” Mr. Peters offered wholeheartedly. “Absolutely! Thank you! Mr. Peters.” Logan responded excitedly. In the subsequent months, with unwavering determination, he followed every piece of guidance extended by Mr. Peters. Ultimately, Logan got a letter from his dream university saying he had been awarded the Presidential Scholarship! It was his kindness that made him get the opportunity.
参考范文
After work, Logan knocked on his neighbor's door and discovered the most astonishing thing about the old man. Dominating the narrow living room was a tall shelf, laden with rows of awards. "These are all... yours " Logan stuttered, eyes widening in amazement. "Yes, I was once a history professor at a university," the gentleman replied, beginning to recount his captivating experiences from his teaching days. Logan's jaw dropped as he realized the extraordinary nature of his neighbor.
"I've asked some former workmates to notice a scholarship application from a young man named Logan.”Mr. Peters continued. Overwhelmed with joy and unable to find words, Logan felt tears welling up. “Securing this scholarship won’t be simple, but I'm here to support you if you're prepared to commit,” Mr. Peters said earnestly. “Absolutely! Thank you, Mr. Peters!” Logan exclaimed, his voice filled with excitement. In the months that followed, Logan pursued Mr. Peters' advice with steadfast determination. Ultimately, he received a letter from his dream university announcing that he had been awarded the Presidential Scholarship, a testament to the transformative power of kindness and support.
Logan was a brilliant student. He had committed to doing everything it took to win a scholarship to study at a good university. But nothing was more important to the 17-year-old boy than supporting his mother who was sick. After school hours, he would work as a bag boy at the local grocery store. Together,Logan and his mother managed to make ends meet while still fighting to achieve bigger dreams.
Now right outside the grocery store, Logan spotted a familiar face. “Mr. Peters!” Logan called out to the old man holding crutches(拐杖), whom he recognized as his new neighbor. Mr. Peters waved at Logan.Logan happily helped the old man find what he needed and helped him bill the items, too.
“That will be $23, r. Peters," Logan said.
Mr. Peters was taken aback by the bill's amount. He asked, “And how much without the fruits ”
“$19, sir”
"I see." Mr. Peters looked in his wallet. He studied the bill and said, “Actually, I' ll just take the greens,thank you."
“You know what Here, let me pay for your order, It looks like you may have ... left your card at home or something."
Mr. Peters didn't see this kind gesture coming, and even though it hurt his pride a little, he accepted the boy's help.
Logan paid for the order and handed the bags to the old man. But Mr. Peters could only move a few steps forward as he tried to hold all the groceries without the crutches slipping away. Logan rushed to Mr Peters and offered to carry the groceries to his home. It was a short walk, but the two men were engaged in conversation all the way.
“What are you doing working at a grocery store You look like you should be in college!"Mr. Peters asked.
On listening to Logan's story, Mr. Peters was moved and thought he should do something. “It was lovely to meet you, Logan. Maybe you could pop in after your shift at the store today " he asked. Logan agreed, suspecting that the man probably needed some help around the house.
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
After work, Logan knocked on his neighbor's door and discovered the most astonishing thing about the old man .
—————————————————————————————————————
“I've asked some former workmates to notice a scholarship application from a young man named Logan,"Mr Peters continued.
—————————————————————————————————————
中文意译：
洛根是一个才华横溢的学生。为了获得奖学金进入一所好大学学习，他决心竭尽全力。但对这个17岁的男孩来说，没有什么比养活生病的母亲更重要的了。放学后，他会在当地的杂货店当搬运工。洛根和他的母亲一起努力维持生计，同时仍在为实现更大的梦想而奋斗。
现在，就在杂货店外，洛根发现了一张熟悉的脸。“彼得斯先生！”洛根对拄着拐杖的老人喊道(拐杖), 他认出他是新邻居。彼得斯先生向洛根挥手。洛根很高兴地帮老人找到了他需要的东西，还帮他结账。
“那将是23美元，彼得斯先生，”洛根说。
彼得斯先生被帐单的金额吓了一跳。他问道：“没有水果要多少钱？”
“19美元，先生”
“我明白了。”彼得斯先生看了看钱包。他仔细研究了一下账单，说：“事实上，我只吃绿色蔬菜，谢谢你。”
“你知道吗？给，让我为你的订单付款，看起来你可能……把卡忘在家里了什么的。”
彼得斯先生没有看到这种善意的举动，尽管这有点伤了他的自尊心，但他还是接受了男孩的帮助。
洛根付了订单的钱，把袋子递给了老人。但彼得斯先生只能向前走几步，他试图在拐杖不滑落的情况下拿下所有的杂货。洛根冲向彼得斯先生，主动提出要把食品杂货送到他家。虽然走了很短的路，但两个人一直在交谈。
彼得斯先生说：“你在杂货店工作干什么？你看起来应该上大学！”
听到洛根的故事，彼得斯先生很感动，认为他应该做点什么。“很高兴见到你，洛根。也许你今天下班后可以去商店看看？”他问洛根是否同意。洛根同意，怀疑这个男人可能需要一些帮助。
文本分析：
故事大意——洛克，一边准备考取大学，一边勤工俭学。放了学还要照顾生病的妈妈。新邻居彼得斯先生来商店买东西，但似乎他对结账的数额大吃已经，委婉地表示去掉一些食物和蔬菜。洛克见状，帮他支付了账单。见彼得斯先生行动不便，洛根主动提出要把食品杂货送到他家。一路上，彼得斯先生得知了洛克的情况，他说也许你今天下班后可以去商店看看。洛克同意了，以为这位邻居可能需要帮助。
续写情节发展：
第一段
中央立着一个高高的架子，架子上摆满了一排排的奖品。
“这些都是……你的？”洛克问
是的，我曾经是一所大学历史系的教授。
这位先生分享他过去教书的经历。
当洛根意识到自己面对的是一个非凡的人物时，他目瞪口呆。
“但我打电话给你并不是为了炫耀，孩子，”彼得斯先生解释道。
第二段：
洛根欣喜若狂，感激之情溢于言表
彼得斯先生表示：“获得这笔奖学金并不容易，但如果你愿意投入工作，我会帮助你。”。
“当然！谢谢你！彼得斯先生。”洛根兴奋地回答。
在随后的几个月里，他以坚定不移的决心，遵循了彼得斯先生提供的每一条指导。
最终，洛根收到了他梦想中的大学的录取信，信中说他获得了总统奖学金！
正是他的善良使他得到了这个机会。
官方范文：
After work, Logan knocked on his neighbor's door and discovered the most astonishing thing about the old man. In the center of the narrow living room stood a tall shelf filled with rows of awards. “These are all ... yours ” he stammered, his eyebrows raised at the sight. “Yes. You see, I used to be a professor of the history department at a university.” The gentleman began to share his absorbing experiences about his old teaching days. Logan’s jaw dropped as he realized he was in the presence of an extraordinary figure. “But I haven't just called you to show off, son,” Mr. Peters explained.
“I've asked some former workmates to notice a scholarship application from a young man named Logan.”Mr. Peters continued. Overjoyed and grateful beyond words, Logan felt tears brimming in his eyes. “It won't be easy to secure this scholarship, but if you're willing to put in the work, I'm positioned to help you.” Mr. Peters offered wholeheartedly. “Absolutely! Thank you! Mr. Peters.” Logan responded excitedly. In the subsequent months, with unwavering determination, he followed every piece of guidance extended by Mr. Peters. Ultimately, Logan got a letter from his dream university saying he had been awarded the Presidential Scholarship! It was his kindness that made him get the opportunity.
参考范文
After work, Logan knocked on his neighbor's door and discovered the most astonishing thing about the old man. Dominating the narrow living room was a tall shelf, laden with rows of awards. "These are all... yours " Logan stuttered, eyes widening in amazement. "Yes, I was once a history professor at a university," the gentleman replied, beginning to recount his captivating experiences from his teaching days. Logan's jaw dropped as he realized the extraordinary nature of his neighbor.
"I've asked some former workmates to notice a scholarship application from a young man named Logan.”Mr. Peters continued. Overwhelmed with joy and unable to find words, Logan felt tears welling up. “Securing this scholarship won’t be simple, but I'm here to support you if you're prepared to commit,” Mr. Peters said earnestly. “Absolutely! Thank you, Mr. Peters!” Logan exclaimed, his voice filled with excitement. In the months that followed, Logan pursued Mr. Peters' advice with steadfast determination. Ultimately, he received a letter from his dream university announcing that he had been awarded the Presidential Scholarship, a testament to the transformative power of kindness and support.