2024届江苏部分市下学期高三二模英语试题汇编：读后续写（含解析）
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2024届江苏部分市下学期高三二模英语试题汇编
读后续写
2024届江苏省连云港市高三下学期二模英语试题
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My Best Examination
One day, while at work in a coal-mine in Malden, I happened to overhear two miners talking about a great school for poor people in Virginia. It was Hampton Institute. The school was established to provide opportunities for poor but worthy students who could work out all or a part of the cost of board, and at the same time be taught some trade or industry.
I was on fire constantly with one ambition, and that was to go to school. I decided at once to go to that school. Finally the great day came and I started for Hampton. I had only a small, cheap bag that contained what few articles of clothing I could get. The distance from Malden to Hampton is about five hundred miles. I had not been away from home many hours before it began to grow painfully evident that I did not have enough money to pay my fare (路费) to Hampton.
By walking and begging rides in some way, I finally reached the grounds of the Hampton Institute after a number of days, tired and dirty. As soon as possible after reaching, I presented myself before the head teacher for assignment to a class. Having been so long without proper food, a bath, and change of clothing, I was like a worthless loafer (游荡者).
I did not, of course, make a very favourable impression upon her, and I could see at once that there were doubts in her mind about the wisdom of admitting me as a student. I tried to impress her in all the ways I could with my worthiness. How I wished that I could get a chance to show what was in me.
After some time, the head teacher said to me, “The adjoining (隔壁的) classroom needs sweeping. Take the broom and sweep it.”
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
It occurred to me at once that here was my chance.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
The head teacher went into the room and inspected the floor and closets.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2024届江苏省苏锡常镇四市高三下学期二模英语试题
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
She was the prettiest puppy we had ever seen, and the whole family immediately fell in love with her. We named her Onyx because of her thick, shiny black coat. She spent her first vacation with us when she was only ten weeks old and had her first bath and swim in the St. Lawrence River. We had no clue that this amazing little ball of fur would end up being our hero.
As she grew older, Onyx became more and more involved in our family activities. On hot summer days, Onyx enjoyed floating on the river with us in her own rubber tube (橡皮圈). Amazingly standing on the top of the tube, she smiled while showing off her perfect balance. Resting her front legs and paws over the edge of the rubber tube, she kept her eyes shut as she floated until she'd had enough of the warm sun on her black coat.
One day, our eighteen-year-old daughter, Margie, announced she was going to swim across the bay. No one in the family was free to go swimming with her. The unwritten rule, regardless of swimming ability, was to have a companion in the water with you, especially when swimming the width of the bay. I was not a good swimmer, so I said to Margie, “Take Onyx with you.” Having heard her name, Onyx woke up from a nap and was ready for action. Margie signed the dog to follow her. Onyx ran to the water next to her. They entered the freezing river together and swam side by side across the bay.
I watched from the bank as they reached the sandbar (沙洲) on the far shore. They rested a few minutes before diving into the water for the return trip. I felt uneasy for some reason and continued to watch the pair swim side by side.
Suddenly I heard Margie calling out, “I have a cram (痉挛) in the leg!” _______________ _____________________________________▲_________________________________ _____________________________________▲_________________________________ _____________________________________▲_________________________________ _____________________________________▲_________________________________ _____________________________________▲_________________________________ Seeing the pair approaching the riverbank, I breathed a sigh of relief. _____________________________________▲_________________________________ _____________________________________▲_________________________________ _____________________________________▲_________________________________ _____________________________________▲_________________________________ _____________________________________▲_________________________________
2024届江苏省南京市、盐城市高三第二次模拟考试英语试卷
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When we are little kids, birthday parties are momentous occasions. They are our time to shine, and we love everything about them: the balloons, the games, the cake, the gifts, and so on.
After reading cool stories about police officers solving mysteries, Allen Miller thought the police were awesome, hoping to become one of them! So, when he had to choose a theme for his seventh birthday party—he went with his favorite: the police! And all he wanted for his birthday party was a model police car. He excitedly invited some of his friends and anxiously awaited the day. Unfortunately, none of them could make it to the party due to various reasons,
Allen’s mom Rachel wrestled with the challenging decision: should she cancel the party and save Allen the embarrassment of an empty party room He had been looking forward to the party and talking about it daily, so it would break his heart to cancel it.
Officer Frank Smith, who had already planned with Rachel and agreed to show up at the party, heard from Rachel that it might be canceled due to low attendance. That’s when he decided to save the day—he is a police officer after all! His duty is to serve and protect, and he decided to protect Allen from having a bad day, and serve him the most amazing seventh birthday party! Officer Smith got the whole local police to join in. “We like to be involved in our community. It’s not just about enforcing (执行) the law. We like to be there in the good times as well,” he explained to Rachel.
On the day of Allen’s party, Officer Smith picked up Rachel and Allen in his police car. The boy didn’t know where they were going, but was excited. They stopped at Town Hall, and officer Smith led them into the meeting room where a group of policemen were waiting to wish Allen a happy birthday.
注意;
1.续写词数应为150个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
There, a party was waiting for him.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
After they enjoyed the cake, Officer Smith took out a gift bag.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2024届南通市高三第二次调研测试英语试题
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My Best Examination
One day, while at work in a coal-mine in Malden, I happened to overhear two miners talking about a great school for poor people in Virginia. It was Hampton Institute. The school was established to provide opportunities for poor but worthy students who could work out all or a part of the cost of board, and at the same time be taught some trade or industry.
I was on fire constantly with one ambition, and that was to go to school. I decided at once to go to that school. Finally the great day came and I started for Hampton. I had only a small, cheap bag that contained what few articles of clothing I could get. The distance from Malden to Hampton is about five hundred miles. I had not been away from home many hours before it began to grow painfully evident that I did not have enough money to pay my fare (路费) to Hampton.
By walking and begging rides in some way, I finally reached the grounds of the Hampton Institute after a number of days, tired and dirty. As soon as possible after reaching, I presented myself before the head teacher for assignment to a class. Having been so long without proper food, a bath, and change of clothing, I was like a worthless loafer (游荡者).
I did not, of course, make a very favourable impression upon her, and I could see at once that there were doubts in her mind about the wisdom of admitting me as a student. I tried to impress her in all the ways I could with my worthiness. How I wished that I could get a chance to show what was in me.
After some time, the head teacher said to me, “The adjoining (隔壁的) classroom needs sweeping. Take the broom and sweep it.”
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
It occurred to me at once that here was my chance.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
The head teacher went into the room and inspected the floor and closets.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
答案
2024届江苏省连云港市高三下学期二模英语试题
【答案】范文
It occurred to me at once that here was my chance. Never did I receive an order with more delight. I knew I could sweep, for my parents thoroughly taught me how to do that when I was young. I swept the room three times. Then I got a dusting-cloth and I dusted it four times. All the woodwork around the walls, every bench, table and desk, I went over four times with my dusting-cloth, I had the feeling that in a large measure my future depended upon the impression I made upon the teacher in the cleaning of that room. When I was through, I reported to her.
The head teacher went into the room and inspected the floor and closets. Then she took her handkerchief and rubbed it on the woodwork about the walls, and over the table and benches. When she was unable to find one bit of dirt on the floor, or a particle of dust on any of the furniture, she quietly remarked, “I guess you will do to enter this institution.” I was one of the happiest souls on earth. The sweeping of that room was my college examination! I have passed several examinations since then, but I have always felt that this was the best one I had ever passed.
2024届江苏省苏锡常镇四市高三下学期二模英语试题
Suddenly I heard Margie calling out, “I have a cramp (痉挛) in the leg!" Seized with panic, Margie rubbed her leg hard to relax the muscle but in vain. Seeing her struggling in the water, Onyx immediately swam to the side of Margie and then put her head beneath the girl's right arm. I yelled for help for fear that they might freeze in the chilly river, But much to my joy, with Margie tightly grabbing Onyx's collar, our little furry friend began digging deep, slicing through the water with her paws and swimming fast towards the bank with every ounce of strength.
Seeing the pair approaching the riverbank, I breathed a sigh of relief.When they finally got to the shore, I reached out to help Margie, pulling her up onto the riverbank and wrapping her in a large towel. Exhausted but excited, Onyx eagerly ran to Margie and gently licked her face to make sure she was Okay, Everyone in the family was grateful for their safe return and Onyx was given an extra treat later in the afternoon for her quick and brave reaction. She became our hero that day and she never ceased to amaze us in the days that followed.
2024届江苏省南京市、盐城市高三第二次模拟考试英语试卷
【答案】There, a party was waiting for him. The moment Allen stepped inside, a chorus of “Happy Birthday” filled the meeting room, and he found himself surrounded by lots of police officers holding balloons. Officer Smith introduced him to all the officers, who gave him high fives. Allen was thrilled, and his eyes sparkled with excitement as he looked at the grand police-themed cake. As Allen cut into the cake with the help of his mom, the room erupted into cheers and laughter, adding to the joyful atmosphere.
After they enjoyed the cake, officer Smith took out a gift bag. “It’s for you.” He presented the delicately wrapped parcel to Allen, who was stunned by the surprise. “Wow, a model police car! It looks exactly like the one we came here in! Thank you!” Officer Smith smiled, “Anytime, Allen.” Allen hugged Officer Smith and thanked him again for making the otherwise crushing disappointment his time to shine. It was the local heroes who helped by being part of the community and inspiring the young soul in small but effective ways.
【解析】
【导语】本文是一篇记叙文，以人物为线索。Allen很喜欢警察，所以他为自己的七岁生日派对选择了警察主题，并且想要一个警车模型作为生日礼物。但是他的朋友由于各种原因而不能在那天为他庆生。为了不让他失望，警官Frank Smith和Allen的妈妈计划为Allen准备一个独特的生日派对。在生日那天Frank Smith带着Allen和妈妈进入市政厅，一群警察为Allen庆生，他还收到了警车模型。这些当地英雄用小小的善举激励了这个男孩。
【详解】1. 段落续写：
①由续写第一段首句“在那里，一个派对正在等着他。”可知，第一段可以描写生日派对上情形。
②由续写第二段首句“他们享用蛋糕后，Smith警官拿出一个礼品袋。”可知，第二段可以描写Allen收到了警官送的警车模型，这些警官用小小的善举激励了这个男孩。
2. 续写线索：Allen进入会议室——一群警察为Allen庆祝生日——Allen收到了警车模型的礼物——Allen非常感动
3. 词汇激活：
行为类
①拿着：hold/take/carry
②介绍：introduce/recommend
③爆发出：erupt into/burst into
情绪类
①兴奋的：thrilled/excited
②欢乐的：joyful/pleasant
③惊讶：surprise/amazement
【点睛】【高分句型1】As Allen cut into the cake with the help of his mom, the room erupted into cheers and laughter, adding to the joyful atmosphere.(使用了As引导时间状语从句、现在分词作状语)
【高分句型2】It was the local heroes who helped by being part of the community and inspiring the young soul in small but effective ways. (使用了强调句型、动名词作宾语)
2024届南通市高三第二次调研测试英语试题
【答案】范文
It occurred to me at once that here was my chance. Never did I receive an order with more delight. I knew I could sweep, for my parents thoroughly taught me how to do that when I was young. I swept the room three times. Then I got a dusting-cloth and I dusted it four times. All the woodwork around the walls, every bench, table and desk, I went over four times with my dusting-cloth, I had the feeling that in a large measure my future depended upon the impression I made upon the teacher in the cleaning of that room. When I was through, I reported to her.
The head teacher went into the room and inspected the floor and closets. Then she took her handkerchief and rubbed it on the woodwork about the walls, and over the table and benches. When she was unable to find one bit of dirt on the floor, or a particle of dust on any of the furniture, she quietly remarked, “I guess you will do to enter this institution.” I was one of the happiest souls on earth. The sweeping of that room was my college examination! I have passed several examinations since then, but I have always felt that this was the best one I had ever passed.
【解析】
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者想要去一个为穷人开设的学校去上学，但是没能给班主任留下好印象。最终作者因为打扫教室一尘不染通过了班主任的测验，被成功认可。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我立刻想到，我的机会来了。”可知，第一段可描写作者认真打扫教室的经过以及完成后向班主任报告。
②由第二段首句内容“校长走进房间，检查了地板和壁橱。”可知，第二段可描写班主任检查的结果以及作者被认可。
2.续写线索：意识到机会来了——认真打扫教室——完成——班主任检查——作者被认可——作者感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①打扫：sweep/clean/tidy up
②取决于：depend upon/lie on
③通过：pass/ get through
情绪类
①快乐：happy/merry
②平静：quietly/calmly
【点睛】[高分句型1] When I was through, I reported to her. (运用了when引导时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] Never did I receive an order with more delight. I knew I could sweep, for my parents thoroughly taught me how to do that when I was young. (运用了部分倒装句)
读后续写
2024届江苏省连云港市高三下学期二模英语试题
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My Best Examination
One day, while at work in a coal-mine in Malden, I happened to overhear two miners talking about a great school for poor people in Virginia. It was Hampton Institute. The school was established to provide opportunities for poor but worthy students who could work out all or a part of the cost of board, and at the same time be taught some trade or industry.
I was on fire constantly with one ambition, and that was to go to school. I decided at once to go to that school. Finally the great day came and I started for Hampton. I had only a small, cheap bag that contained what few articles of clothing I could get. The distance from Malden to Hampton is about five hundred miles. I had not been away from home many hours before it began to grow painfully evident that I did not have enough money to pay my fare (路费) to Hampton.
By walking and begging rides in some way, I finally reached the grounds of the Hampton Institute after a number of days, tired and dirty. As soon as possible after reaching, I presented myself before the head teacher for assignment to a class. Having been so long without proper food, a bath, and change of clothing, I was like a worthless loafer (游荡者).
I did not, of course, make a very favourable impression upon her, and I could see at once that there were doubts in her mind about the wisdom of admitting me as a student. I tried to impress her in all the ways I could with my worthiness. How I wished that I could get a chance to show what was in me.
After some time, the head teacher said to me, “The adjoining (隔壁的) classroom needs sweeping. Take the broom and sweep it.”
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
It occurred to me at once that here was my chance.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
The head teacher went into the room and inspected the floor and closets.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2024届江苏省苏锡常镇四市高三下学期二模英语试题
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
She was the prettiest puppy we had ever seen, and the whole family immediately fell in love with her. We named her Onyx because of her thick, shiny black coat. She spent her first vacation with us when she was only ten weeks old and had her first bath and swim in the St. Lawrence River. We had no clue that this amazing little ball of fur would end up being our hero.
As she grew older, Onyx became more and more involved in our family activities. On hot summer days, Onyx enjoyed floating on the river with us in her own rubber tube (橡皮圈). Amazingly standing on the top of the tube, she smiled while showing off her perfect balance. Resting her front legs and paws over the edge of the rubber tube, she kept her eyes shut as she floated until she'd had enough of the warm sun on her black coat.
One day, our eighteen-year-old daughter, Margie, announced she was going to swim across the bay. No one in the family was free to go swimming with her. The unwritten rule, regardless of swimming ability, was to have a companion in the water with you, especially when swimming the width of the bay. I was not a good swimmer, so I said to Margie, “Take Onyx with you.” Having heard her name, Onyx woke up from a nap and was ready for action. Margie signed the dog to follow her. Onyx ran to the water next to her. They entered the freezing river together and swam side by side across the bay.
I watched from the bank as they reached the sandbar (沙洲) on the far shore. They rested a few minutes before diving into the water for the return trip. I felt uneasy for some reason and continued to watch the pair swim side by side.
Suddenly I heard Margie calling out, “I have a cram (痉挛) in the leg!” _______________ _____________________________________▲_________________________________ _____________________________________▲_________________________________ _____________________________________▲_________________________________ _____________________________________▲_________________________________ _____________________________________▲_________________________________ Seeing the pair approaching the riverbank, I breathed a sigh of relief. _____________________________________▲_________________________________ _____________________________________▲_________________________________ _____________________________________▲_________________________________ _____________________________________▲_________________________________ _____________________________________▲_________________________________
2024届江苏省南京市、盐城市高三第二次模拟考试英语试卷
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When we are little kids, birthday parties are momentous occasions. They are our time to shine, and we love everything about them: the balloons, the games, the cake, the gifts, and so on.
After reading cool stories about police officers solving mysteries, Allen Miller thought the police were awesome, hoping to become one of them! So, when he had to choose a theme for his seventh birthday party—he went with his favorite: the police! And all he wanted for his birthday party was a model police car. He excitedly invited some of his friends and anxiously awaited the day. Unfortunately, none of them could make it to the party due to various reasons,
Allen’s mom Rachel wrestled with the challenging decision: should she cancel the party and save Allen the embarrassment of an empty party room He had been looking forward to the party and talking about it daily, so it would break his heart to cancel it.
Officer Frank Smith, who had already planned with Rachel and agreed to show up at the party, heard from Rachel that it might be canceled due to low attendance. That’s when he decided to save the day—he is a police officer after all! His duty is to serve and protect, and he decided to protect Allen from having a bad day, and serve him the most amazing seventh birthday party! Officer Smith got the whole local police to join in. “We like to be involved in our community. It’s not just about enforcing (执行) the law. We like to be there in the good times as well,” he explained to Rachel.
On the day of Allen’s party, Officer Smith picked up Rachel and Allen in his police car. The boy didn’t know where they were going, but was excited. They stopped at Town Hall, and officer Smith led them into the meeting room where a group of policemen were waiting to wish Allen a happy birthday.
注意;
1.续写词数应为150个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
There, a party was waiting for him.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
After they enjoyed the cake, Officer Smith took out a gift bag.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2024届南通市高三第二次调研测试英语试题
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My Best Examination
One day, while at work in a coal-mine in Malden, I happened to overhear two miners talking about a great school for poor people in Virginia. It was Hampton Institute. The school was established to provide opportunities for poor but worthy students who could work out all or a part of the cost of board, and at the same time be taught some trade or industry.
I was on fire constantly with one ambition, and that was to go to school. I decided at once to go to that school. Finally the great day came and I started for Hampton. I had only a small, cheap bag that contained what few articles of clothing I could get. The distance from Malden to Hampton is about five hundred miles. I had not been away from home many hours before it began to grow painfully evident that I did not have enough money to pay my fare (路费) to Hampton.
By walking and begging rides in some way, I finally reached the grounds of the Hampton Institute after a number of days, tired and dirty. As soon as possible after reaching, I presented myself before the head teacher for assignment to a class. Having been so long without proper food, a bath, and change of clothing, I was like a worthless loafer (游荡者).
I did not, of course, make a very favourable impression upon her, and I could see at once that there were doubts in her mind about the wisdom of admitting me as a student. I tried to impress her in all the ways I could with my worthiness. How I wished that I could get a chance to show what was in me.
After some time, the head teacher said to me, “The adjoining (隔壁的) classroom needs sweeping. Take the broom and sweep it.”
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
It occurred to me at once that here was my chance.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
The head teacher went into the room and inspected the floor and closets.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
答案
2024届江苏省连云港市高三下学期二模英语试题
【答案】范文
It occurred to me at once that here was my chance. Never did I receive an order with more delight. I knew I could sweep, for my parents thoroughly taught me how to do that when I was young. I swept the room three times. Then I got a dusting-cloth and I dusted it four times. All the woodwork around the walls, every bench, table and desk, I went over four times with my dusting-cloth, I had the feeling that in a large measure my future depended upon the impression I made upon the teacher in the cleaning of that room. When I was through, I reported to her.
The head teacher went into the room and inspected the floor and closets. Then she took her handkerchief and rubbed it on the woodwork about the walls, and over the table and benches. When she was unable to find one bit of dirt on the floor, or a particle of dust on any of the furniture, she quietly remarked, “I guess you will do to enter this institution.” I was one of the happiest souls on earth. The sweeping of that room was my college examination! I have passed several examinations since then, but I have always felt that this was the best one I had ever passed.
2024届江苏省苏锡常镇四市高三下学期二模英语试题
Suddenly I heard Margie calling out, “I have a cramp (痉挛) in the leg!" Seized with panic, Margie rubbed her leg hard to relax the muscle but in vain. Seeing her struggling in the water, Onyx immediately swam to the side of Margie and then put her head beneath the girl's right arm. I yelled for help for fear that they might freeze in the chilly river, But much to my joy, with Margie tightly grabbing Onyx's collar, our little furry friend began digging deep, slicing through the water with her paws and swimming fast towards the bank with every ounce of strength.
Seeing the pair approaching the riverbank, I breathed a sigh of relief.When they finally got to the shore, I reached out to help Margie, pulling her up onto the riverbank and wrapping her in a large towel. Exhausted but excited, Onyx eagerly ran to Margie and gently licked her face to make sure she was Okay, Everyone in the family was grateful for their safe return and Onyx was given an extra treat later in the afternoon for her quick and brave reaction. She became our hero that day and she never ceased to amaze us in the days that followed.
2024届江苏省南京市、盐城市高三第二次模拟考试英语试卷
【答案】There, a party was waiting for him. The moment Allen stepped inside, a chorus of “Happy Birthday” filled the meeting room, and he found himself surrounded by lots of police officers holding balloons. Officer Smith introduced him to all the officers, who gave him high fives. Allen was thrilled, and his eyes sparkled with excitement as he looked at the grand police-themed cake. As Allen cut into the cake with the help of his mom, the room erupted into cheers and laughter, adding to the joyful atmosphere.
After they enjoyed the cake, officer Smith took out a gift bag. “It’s for you.” He presented the delicately wrapped parcel to Allen, who was stunned by the surprise. “Wow, a model police car! It looks exactly like the one we came here in! Thank you!” Officer Smith smiled, “Anytime, Allen.” Allen hugged Officer Smith and thanked him again for making the otherwise crushing disappointment his time to shine. It was the local heroes who helped by being part of the community and inspiring the young soul in small but effective ways.
【解析】
【导语】本文是一篇记叙文，以人物为线索。Allen很喜欢警察，所以他为自己的七岁生日派对选择了警察主题，并且想要一个警车模型作为生日礼物。但是他的朋友由于各种原因而不能在那天为他庆生。为了不让他失望，警官Frank Smith和Allen的妈妈计划为Allen准备一个独特的生日派对。在生日那天Frank Smith带着Allen和妈妈进入市政厅，一群警察为Allen庆生，他还收到了警车模型。这些当地英雄用小小的善举激励了这个男孩。
【详解】1. 段落续写：
①由续写第一段首句“在那里，一个派对正在等着他。”可知，第一段可以描写生日派对上情形。
②由续写第二段首句“他们享用蛋糕后，Smith警官拿出一个礼品袋。”可知，第二段可以描写Allen收到了警官送的警车模型，这些警官用小小的善举激励了这个男孩。
2. 续写线索：Allen进入会议室——一群警察为Allen庆祝生日——Allen收到了警车模型的礼物——Allen非常感动
3. 词汇激活：
行为类
①拿着：hold/take/carry
②介绍：introduce/recommend
③爆发出：erupt into/burst into
情绪类
①兴奋的：thrilled/excited
②欢乐的：joyful/pleasant
③惊讶：surprise/amazement
【点睛】【高分句型1】As Allen cut into the cake with the help of his mom, the room erupted into cheers and laughter, adding to the joyful atmosphere.(使用了As引导时间状语从句、现在分词作状语)
【高分句型2】It was the local heroes who helped by being part of the community and inspiring the young soul in small but effective ways. (使用了强调句型、动名词作宾语)
2024届南通市高三第二次调研测试英语试题
【答案】范文
It occurred to me at once that here was my chance. Never did I receive an order with more delight. I knew I could sweep, for my parents thoroughly taught me how to do that when I was young. I swept the room three times. Then I got a dusting-cloth and I dusted it four times. All the woodwork around the walls, every bench, table and desk, I went over four times with my dusting-cloth, I had the feeling that in a large measure my future depended upon the impression I made upon the teacher in the cleaning of that room. When I was through, I reported to her.
The head teacher went into the room and inspected the floor and closets. Then she took her handkerchief and rubbed it on the woodwork about the walls, and over the table and benches. When she was unable to find one bit of dirt on the floor, or a particle of dust on any of the furniture, she quietly remarked, “I guess you will do to enter this institution.” I was one of the happiest souls on earth. The sweeping of that room was my college examination! I have passed several examinations since then, but I have always felt that this was the best one I had ever passed.
【解析】
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者想要去一个为穷人开设的学校去上学，但是没能给班主任留下好印象。最终作者因为打扫教室一尘不染通过了班主任的测验，被成功认可。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我立刻想到，我的机会来了。”可知，第一段可描写作者认真打扫教室的经过以及完成后向班主任报告。
②由第二段首句内容“校长走进房间，检查了地板和壁橱。”可知，第二段可描写班主任检查的结果以及作者被认可。
2.续写线索：意识到机会来了——认真打扫教室——完成——班主任检查——作者被认可——作者感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①打扫：sweep/clean/tidy up
②取决于：depend upon/lie on
③通过：pass/ get through
情绪类
①快乐：happy/merry
②平静：quietly/calmly
【点睛】[高分句型1] When I was through, I reported to her. (运用了when引导时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] Never did I receive an order with more delight. I knew I could sweep, for my parents thoroughly taught me how to do that when I was young. (运用了部分倒装句)