2024届广东省深圳市二模基础应用文写作：庆祝班级活动，李华，你怎么看？讲义
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| 名称 | 2024届广东省深圳市二模基础应用文写作：庆祝班级活动，李华，你怎么看？讲义 |  | |
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假定你是李华，你班在校英语戏剧节中获得一等奖，外教James打算为此庆祝，并委托你调查同学们喜欢的方式。请你根据调查结果，给外教写一封邮件，内容包括:
1.表达感谢;
2.提出个人建议;
3.说明理由。
注意:
1.词数 80左右;
PART 1 Text Analysis and Appreciation【写作任务分析】该写作任务围绕庆祝班级成就和民意调查展开，创新地融合图表作文、感谢信、建议信和观点看法类写作的特点，深化基础性，增强综合性、应用性和创新性，考查学生正确表达感谢之情、分析调查结果并提出个人建议和看法的能力。该写作任务涉及民意调查，贴近学生学习生活，且体现民主和谐自由平等的社会主义核心价值观，注重培养学生人际交往的能力和组织协调能力。同时也考量学生在实际情境中解决问题的能力，具有一定的挑战性和实用性。
【分析题目信息】
PART 2 Outline and Language Support
第一段
写信背景介绍-班级获奖
celebrate our success; win the first prize at the English
Drama Festival
表达感谢
be grateful/thankful for/appreciate sth/express my appreciation for sth/extend my heatfelt gratitude
第二段：
调查结果
表示指表可得
From the data/results above, it can be concluded/estimated/inferred that
As is shown/revealed by the graph,.
It can be seen fro the picture that……
表示喜爱
be crazy/fascinated/enthusiastic about/be hooked on/
take great delight in/favor sth. /show great preference for sth
表示与比account for/ take up/occupy
表示多达 amount to/add up to/ sum up to
表示比较
Compared with A,B has a higher percentage/propotion of.(与A相比,B有至高的比例)
On the top of the list is……",which accounts for 60%……
占比重最高的是……，占60%6.
At the bottom is……",which takes up 20%.
占最低比量的是……，占20%.
提出建议
suggest doing sth/advise sb. to do sth/suggest/recomend that ..(should) do sth
it is high time that sb did sth
建议理由
be in lime with the majority
strengthen friendship'
make our success more memorable
acknowledge our collective efforts
ignite a surge of confidence
cultivate a profound appreciation for..
tailor the remaining activities to suit the diverse needs
第三段
再次感谢-期待
express my deepest gratitude once again for granting us this splendid opportunity
注意衔接：
我认为:As far as I'm concerned/From my perspective/From my point of view ...
第一点/首先:initially/ first and forermost/ first of all
to begin with
第二/三点/其次再者:in addition/additionally/moreover/what’s more/ besides/in the meantime/similarly/above all
因此结果:therefore/consequently/as a result
转折:however/ on the contrary/by contrast
总之:in conclusion /to sum up /in summmary/in a nutshell/to conclude
参考范文
Dear James,
Thank you for trusting me to survey our classmates’ preferred activities for celebrating our success at the English Drama Festival. Here are the results and my personal opinion.
From the survey, outings on weekends and English movie nights are favored by 88% and 59% of us respectively, with 32% keen on sharing food and drinks. To meet the varied interests, I would recommend we organize an outdoor gathering at the city park, where we can bring along various foods and drinks to share. I believe this plan would ideally satisfy those seeking an adventure and those who wish to relax and enjoy good company.
Thank you once again for your support and for considering my suggestion! (116词)
Yours,
Li Hua
下水文
Dear James,
Knowing that you are wiling to celebrate the glittering fruit of earning the first prize in School English Drama Festival for ou class, I’m more than delighted and grateful.I want to share the outcomes of my classmates' preferences towards the methods for celebration. 88 percent of students pick hanging out at weekend as their option. About 59 percent are in want of watching English movies, and 32 percent prefer sharing food and drinks.Above all, I choose the first approach.To begin with, this way is the most popular one among the all so that it is not controversary and it matches most of the students' needs.Moreover,going out, maybe having a picnic in a park, can tremendously enhance the friendship bond between students, which can lead to a more harmonious learning atmosphere . How nice it is .The above are my personal advice. Words fail to convey my gratitude !
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
1.表达感谢;
2.提出个人建议;
3.说明理由。
注意:
1.词数 80左右;
PART 1 Text Analysis and Appreciation【写作任务分析】该写作任务围绕庆祝班级成就和民意调查展开，创新地融合图表作文、感谢信、建议信和观点看法类写作的特点，深化基础性，增强综合性、应用性和创新性，考查学生正确表达感谢之情、分析调查结果并提出个人建议和看法的能力。该写作任务涉及民意调查，贴近学生学习生活，且体现民主和谐自由平等的社会主义核心价值观，注重培养学生人际交往的能力和组织协调能力。同时也考量学生在实际情境中解决问题的能力，具有一定的挑战性和实用性。
【分析题目信息】
PART 2 Outline and Language Support
第一段
写信背景介绍-班级获奖
celebrate our success; win the first prize at the English
Drama Festival
表达感谢
be grateful/thankful for/appreciate sth/express my appreciation for sth/extend my heatfelt gratitude
第二段：
调查结果
表示指表可得
From the data/results above, it can be concluded/estimated/inferred that
As is shown/revealed by the graph,.
It can be seen fro the picture that……
表示喜爱
be crazy/fascinated/enthusiastic about/be hooked on/
take great delight in/favor sth. /show great preference for sth
表示与比account for/ take up/occupy
表示多达 amount to/add up to/ sum up to
表示比较
Compared with A,B has a higher percentage/propotion of.(与A相比,B有至高的比例)
On the top of the list is……",which accounts for 60%……
占比重最高的是……，占60%6.
At the bottom is……",which takes up 20%.
占最低比量的是……，占20%.
提出建议
suggest doing sth/advise sb. to do sth/suggest/recomend that ..(should) do sth
it is high time that sb did sth
建议理由
be in lime with the majority
strengthen friendship'
make our success more memorable
acknowledge our collective efforts
ignite a surge of confidence
cultivate a profound appreciation for..
tailor the remaining activities to suit the diverse needs
第三段
再次感谢-期待
express my deepest gratitude once again for granting us this splendid opportunity
注意衔接：
我认为:As far as I'm concerned/From my perspective/From my point of view ...
第一点/首先:initially/ first and forermost/ first of all
to begin with
第二/三点/其次再者:in addition/additionally/moreover/what’s more/ besides/in the meantime/similarly/above all
因此结果:therefore/consequently/as a result
转折:however/ on the contrary/by contrast
总之:in conclusion /to sum up /in summmary/in a nutshell/to conclude
参考范文
Dear James,
Thank you for trusting me to survey our classmates’ preferred activities for celebrating our success at the English Drama Festival. Here are the results and my personal opinion.
From the survey, outings on weekends and English movie nights are favored by 88% and 59% of us respectively, with 32% keen on sharing food and drinks. To meet the varied interests, I would recommend we organize an outdoor gathering at the city park, where we can bring along various foods and drinks to share. I believe this plan would ideally satisfy those seeking an adventure and those who wish to relax and enjoy good company.
Thank you once again for your support and for considering my suggestion! (116词)
Yours,
Li Hua
下水文
Dear James,
Knowing that you are wiling to celebrate the glittering fruit of earning the first prize in School English Drama Festival for ou class, I’m more than delighted and grateful.I want to share the outcomes of my classmates' preferences towards the methods for celebration. 88 percent of students pick hanging out at weekend as their option. About 59 percent are in want of watching English movies, and 32 percent prefer sharing food and drinks.Above all, I choose the first approach.To begin with, this way is the most popular one among the all so that it is not controversary and it matches most of the students' needs.Moreover,going out, maybe having a picnic in a park, can tremendously enhance the friendship bond between students, which can lead to a more harmonious learning atmosphere . How nice it is .The above are my personal advice. Words fail to convey my gratitude !
Yours sincerely
Li Hua