2023届山东省潍坊市高三下学期二模英语读后续写人与动物类--拯救受伤的红扇鸟 讲义
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2023届山东省潍坊市高三下学期二模英语读后续写题目：
阅读下面材料、根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When I arrived home from school，night was falling. A call came from the public：a bird of unknown species was being attacked by a group of noisy children in his front garden. He scared them off and grabbed their victim. I immediately called for my classmate Jack to the spot.
当我放学回家时，夜幕降临。公众发出了一个呼吁：一只未知物种的鸟在他的前花园里遭到一群吵闹的孩子的袭击。他吓跑了他们，抓住了受害者。我立即叫我的同学杰克到现场。
We were standing in front of a stranger's house in an unfamiliar street, rescue box in hand, my head full of instructions to follow. "The bird would be our first test as a volunteer wildlife rescuer!" Jack said excitedly. We had completed the two-day intensive training course the previous month and learned the basic skills of rescuing animals in various situations.
我们站在一条陌生街道上一个陌生人的家门前，手里拿着救援箱，我的脑子里充满了要遵循的指示。“这只鸟将是我们作为野生动物救援志愿者的第一次测试！”杰克兴奋地说。上个月，我们完成了为期两天的强化训练课程，学习了在各种情况下营救动物的基本技能。
But we were anxious too. After all, it was the first lime for us to rescue a bird. Would I be able to transfer the bird neatly into my rescue box Many worries flashed in my mind. Sensing my unease about the act ahead, Jack said, "These things are pretty easy to deal with!"
但我们也很焦虑。毕竟，这是我们第一次救鸟。我能把这只鸟整齐地转移到我的救援箱里吗？许多担忧在我脑海中闪过。感觉到我对未来的行为感到不安，杰克说：“这些事情很容易处理！”
I was wondering what kind of bird it was when a kind-looking man appeared and led us inside to see our very first patient. I lifted the edge of the shoe box very slightly to see an angry-looking bird standing to attention on very thin and long legs, together with a slice of banana and a small dish of water. He didn't know its true name but the folks called the creature Red Fan. "It's eaten some banana," said the man proudly. The poor soul seemed rather nervous, so I decided not to grab it by hand but just transfer the whole shoebox into my rescue box.
我想知道这是什么鸟，这时一个看起来很善良的人出现了，带我们进去看我们的第一个病人。我轻轻地提起鞋盒的边缘，看到一只看起来很生气的鸟正站在那里，腿又细又长，还有一片香蕉和一小碟水。他不知道它的真名，但人们称它为红扇。“它吃了一些香蕉，”男人骄傲地说。可怜的灵魂看起来相当紧张，所以我决定不用手抓它，而是把整个鞋盒转移到我的救援箱里。
Back home, we could only see some minor injuries in the left wing, but there was no blood on its feathers. Jack managed to treat the injuries with some iodophor(碘伏药水). We assessed its condition to find out if it was appropriate to release the bird the next day. How could we help it spend the night peacefully We hadn't seen this species of bird before, let alone its habits.
回到家里，我们只能看到左翼受了一些轻伤，但它的羽毛上没有血迹。杰克设法用碘伏治好了伤(碘伏药水). 我们评估了它的状况，以确定第二天放生这只鸟是否合适。我们怎样才能帮助它平静地度过夜晚？我们以前从未见过这种鸟，更不用说它的习性了。
注意:
1续写词数要求应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
"Why not do a search on the Internet "suggested Jack
The next day we were glad to see the bird was well enough
故事大意：
夜幕降临，我从一群淘气的孩子手里救出了一只小鸟。我叫来同学杰克。上个月，我们完成了强化训练课程，学习了营救动物的基本技能，决定试一试拯救这只受伤的小鸟。尽管很紧张，还是给鸟儿简单地处理伤口，评估它的伤势，希望它能平安度过这一夜。
续写情节发展：
第一段：
上网了解了这只鸟的相关信息。
根据给出的建议，我们在盒子底部放了一些棉花保暖，然后把它放在壁炉附近。
我们给了它一些食物和水。
这只鸟看起来舒服多了，很快就睡着了。
我们松了一口气。
第二段：
它在救援箱里特别快乐。
它已经恢复了活力！
我们把盒子拿到外面，把鸟放在我的手掌里，怀着复杂的心情轻轻地抚摸着它。
我把鸟举起来放了。
那只鸟在我们头顶盘旋，好像在表达感激之情。
主旨升华
官方范文：
"Why not do a search on the Internet "suggested Jack. We acted quickly and surfed the Internet to figure out the relevant information about the bird, such as its species and habits. Following the given advice,we put some cotton at the bottom of the box to keep it warm and placed it near the fireplace.In order to recover its energy, we gave it some food and water.The bird looked a bit more comfortable, and soon it fell asleep. Having ensured the bird was in good condition, we felt relieved.
The next day, we were glad to see the bird was well enough.It was singing and bouncing around in the rescue box. Obviously, it had regained its energy! Realizing it was fully ready for freedom, we took the box outside, placed the bird in my palm and petted it softly with mixed feelings. I held the bird up and let it go.The bird was circling above us as if to express gratitude. Jack and I looked at each other with a broad smile, feeling that we were qualified volunteer wildlife rescuers now.
改写成语法填空：
“Why not do a search on the Internet ”suggested Jack. We acted quickly and surfed the Internet _______(figure) out the relevant information about the bird, such as its species and habits. Following the given ________(advise), we put some cotton at the bottom of the box ________(keep) it warm and placed it near the fireplace. In order to recover its energy, we gave it some food and water. The bird looked a bit more comfortable, and soon it fell asleep. ________ (ensure) the bird was in good condition, we felt ________(relieve).
The next day, we were glad to see the bird was well enough. It was singing and bouncing around in the rescue box. Obviously, it ________(regain) its energy! Realizing it was ________(full) ready for freedom, we took the box outside, ________(place) the bird in my palm and petted it softly with mixed feelings. I held the bird up and let it go. The bird was circling above us as ________ to express gratitude. Jack and I looked at each other with a broad smile, feeling that we were qualified volunteer wildlife ________(rescuer) now.
高分范文：
“Why not do a research on the Internet ”suggested Jack.1Excited and delighted,we acted quickly to surf the net to figure out some relevant information.2To our relief,it was not a long time before we got what we needed.3What satisfied us in particular was that an animal doctor offered some valuable advice.4Following the advice,we put some cotton at the bottom of the box to keep it warm.5We carefully placed some food and water in the box,which we hoped could be of great help to Red Fan.
The next day,we were glad to see the bird was well enough.6So happy was the bird that it even beat its wings and sang in the box.7Realizing the bird was strong enough to fly,we took the box out of our house.8It seemed to read our minds,flapped its wings and flew into the air,circling above us as if to express its great gratitude .9Jack and I looked at each other,a broad smile spreading our faces.10It was only then that we were aware being a volunteer wildlife rescuer did matter.
阅读下面材料、根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When I arrived home from school，night was falling. A call came from the public：a bird of unknown species was being attacked by a group of noisy children in his front garden. He scared them off and grabbed their victim. I immediately called for my classmate Jack to the spot.
当我放学回家时，夜幕降临。公众发出了一个呼吁：一只未知物种的鸟在他的前花园里遭到一群吵闹的孩子的袭击。他吓跑了他们，抓住了受害者。我立即叫我的同学杰克到现场。
We were standing in front of a stranger's house in an unfamiliar street, rescue box in hand, my head full of instructions to follow. "The bird would be our first test as a volunteer wildlife rescuer!" Jack said excitedly. We had completed the two-day intensive training course the previous month and learned the basic skills of rescuing animals in various situations.
我们站在一条陌生街道上一个陌生人的家门前，手里拿着救援箱，我的脑子里充满了要遵循的指示。“这只鸟将是我们作为野生动物救援志愿者的第一次测试！”杰克兴奋地说。上个月，我们完成了为期两天的强化训练课程，学习了在各种情况下营救动物的基本技能。
But we were anxious too. After all, it was the first lime for us to rescue a bird. Would I be able to transfer the bird neatly into my rescue box Many worries flashed in my mind. Sensing my unease about the act ahead, Jack said, "These things are pretty easy to deal with!"
但我们也很焦虑。毕竟，这是我们第一次救鸟。我能把这只鸟整齐地转移到我的救援箱里吗？许多担忧在我脑海中闪过。感觉到我对未来的行为感到不安，杰克说：“这些事情很容易处理！”
I was wondering what kind of bird it was when a kind-looking man appeared and led us inside to see our very first patient. I lifted the edge of the shoe box very slightly to see an angry-looking bird standing to attention on very thin and long legs, together with a slice of banana and a small dish of water. He didn't know its true name but the folks called the creature Red Fan. "It's eaten some banana," said the man proudly. The poor soul seemed rather nervous, so I decided not to grab it by hand but just transfer the whole shoebox into my rescue box.
我想知道这是什么鸟，这时一个看起来很善良的人出现了，带我们进去看我们的第一个病人。我轻轻地提起鞋盒的边缘，看到一只看起来很生气的鸟正站在那里，腿又细又长，还有一片香蕉和一小碟水。他不知道它的真名，但人们称它为红扇。“它吃了一些香蕉，”男人骄傲地说。可怜的灵魂看起来相当紧张，所以我决定不用手抓它，而是把整个鞋盒转移到我的救援箱里。
Back home, we could only see some minor injuries in the left wing, but there was no blood on its feathers. Jack managed to treat the injuries with some iodophor(碘伏药水). We assessed its condition to find out if it was appropriate to release the bird the next day. How could we help it spend the night peacefully We hadn't seen this species of bird before, let alone its habits.
回到家里，我们只能看到左翼受了一些轻伤，但它的羽毛上没有血迹。杰克设法用碘伏治好了伤(碘伏药水). 我们评估了它的状况，以确定第二天放生这只鸟是否合适。我们怎样才能帮助它平静地度过夜晚？我们以前从未见过这种鸟，更不用说它的习性了。
注意:
1续写词数要求应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
"Why not do a search on the Internet "suggested Jack
The next day we were glad to see the bird was well enough
故事大意：
夜幕降临，我从一群淘气的孩子手里救出了一只小鸟。我叫来同学杰克。上个月，我们完成了强化训练课程，学习了营救动物的基本技能，决定试一试拯救这只受伤的小鸟。尽管很紧张，还是给鸟儿简单地处理伤口，评估它的伤势，希望它能平安度过这一夜。
续写情节发展：
第一段：
上网了解了这只鸟的相关信息。
根据给出的建议，我们在盒子底部放了一些棉花保暖，然后把它放在壁炉附近。
我们给了它一些食物和水。
这只鸟看起来舒服多了，很快就睡着了。
我们松了一口气。
第二段：
它在救援箱里特别快乐。
它已经恢复了活力！
我们把盒子拿到外面，把鸟放在我的手掌里，怀着复杂的心情轻轻地抚摸着它。
我把鸟举起来放了。
那只鸟在我们头顶盘旋，好像在表达感激之情。
主旨升华
官方范文：
"Why not do a search on the Internet "suggested Jack. We acted quickly and surfed the Internet to figure out the relevant information about the bird, such as its species and habits. Following the given advice,we put some cotton at the bottom of the box to keep it warm and placed it near the fireplace.In order to recover its energy, we gave it some food and water.The bird looked a bit more comfortable, and soon it fell asleep. Having ensured the bird was in good condition, we felt relieved.
The next day, we were glad to see the bird was well enough.It was singing and bouncing around in the rescue box. Obviously, it had regained its energy! Realizing it was fully ready for freedom, we took the box outside, placed the bird in my palm and petted it softly with mixed feelings. I held the bird up and let it go.The bird was circling above us as if to express gratitude. Jack and I looked at each other with a broad smile, feeling that we were qualified volunteer wildlife rescuers now.
改写成语法填空：
“Why not do a search on the Internet ”suggested Jack. We acted quickly and surfed the Internet _______(figure) out the relevant information about the bird, such as its species and habits. Following the given ________(advise), we put some cotton at the bottom of the box ________(keep) it warm and placed it near the fireplace. In order to recover its energy, we gave it some food and water. The bird looked a bit more comfortable, and soon it fell asleep. ________ (ensure) the bird was in good condition, we felt ________(relieve).
The next day, we were glad to see the bird was well enough. It was singing and bouncing around in the rescue box. Obviously, it ________(regain) its energy! Realizing it was ________(full) ready for freedom, we took the box outside, ________(place) the bird in my palm and petted it softly with mixed feelings. I held the bird up and let it go. The bird was circling above us as ________ to express gratitude. Jack and I looked at each other with a broad smile, feeling that we were qualified volunteer wildlife ________(rescuer) now.
高分范文：
“Why not do a research on the Internet ”suggested Jack.1Excited and delighted,we acted quickly to surf the net to figure out some relevant information.2To our relief,it was not a long time before we got what we needed.3What satisfied us in particular was that an animal doctor offered some valuable advice.4Following the advice,we put some cotton at the bottom of the box to keep it warm.5We carefully placed some food and water in the box,which we hoped could be of great help to Red Fan.
The next day,we were glad to see the bird was well enough.6So happy was the bird that it even beat its wings and sang in the box.7Realizing the bird was strong enough to fly,we took the box out of our house.8It seemed to read our minds,flapped its wings and flew into the air,circling above us as if to express its great gratitude .9Jack and I looked at each other,a broad smile spreading our faces.10It was only then that we were aware being a volunteer wildlife rescuer did matter.