【江苏省】专题十六 书面表达- 2024年小升初英语满分突破真题演练（含答案）

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专题十六 书面表达
1．书面表达。
你即将步入中学校园，请用英语向你的新老师和新同学做一下自我介绍吧！不少于50词，已给出的内容不计入总词数。
提示：围绕个人信息、爱好、习惯、梦想等方面组织语言。
Hello! I’m ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
This is me! Would you like to be my friend
2．书面表达。
假如Mary是你的网友，“Talk Show”节目邀请你用英语向大家介绍一下她的情况。请根据下面提示，写一篇英语短文不少于50词。
写作提示：① Mary是一名来自澳大利亚的中学生，14岁；
② 她的学校里有很多规章制度。不准带手机到学校是非常重要的。但是她喜欢她的学校；
③ 她最喜欢的动物是熊猫。她现在正在图书馆看一本关于熊猫的书。来中国看熊猫是她的梦想。
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3．书面表达。
Su Fang下个月要去澳大利亚旅游，但她对澳大利亚不是很了解，你能向她介绍一下澳大利亚的相关信息吗？
要求：① 完整描述所给信息条理清晰，意思明确；
② 可适当发挥，使内容更具体；
③ 不少于50个单词，不得出现真实的校名和人名。
Australia: Sydney Australia football, kangaroos...
You can find many interesting things in Australia. _______________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________
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4．书面表达。
六年级正在举行“优秀毕业生”评选活动，你认为Alice同学可以当选。请根据提示，写一段推荐词。
提示：可围绕Alice同学的good habits, hobbies, dreams等方面展开合理想象，撰写推荐词。
要求：意思连贯，语句通顺，表达明确，书写规范。不少于8句话。
Hello, everyone. I would like to recommend (推荐) Alice for the outstanding graduate(优秀毕业生). ___________Alice is a good student. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5．随着中国教育对外交流的国际化, 越来越多的外国小伙伴来中国游学交流。请根据下面思维导图的提示, 以“Welcome to China”为题, 写一篇英文短文, 向游客介绍中国。
注意:
① 短文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称。
② 所写内容需覆盖思维导图中的全部信息, 可作适当补充。
③ 正确使用大小写字母和标点符号, 书写规范。
④ 短文不少于5句话。
Today. I’ll tell you about China. _____________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________
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6．写作。
暑假即将到来，请从学习(study)、运动(sports)、旅游(travel)等方面任选一个，思考你的计划，并根据思维导图提示，写一篇英文短文。
注意：
① 短文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称。
② 所写内容需覆盖思维导图中的全部信息，可作适当补充。
③ 正确使用大小写字母和标点符号，书写规范。
④ 短文不少于5句话。
My ______ plan
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7．书面表达。儿童节是孩子们喜欢的节日，在这一天，你会和朋友们做什么呢？请以Children’s Day为题写一段话，要求不少于6句话，语句通顺，拼写正确，书写规范。
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8．书面表达。
愉快的暑假就要来到了，你想出去旅游吗？你想去哪些地方，哪些城市？请以 “My summer holiday plans” 为题，为自己制定一个旅游计划吧。要求：语句通顺，书写规范，语法和标点正确，不少于6句话。
My summer holiday plans
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参考答案：
1．范文：
Hello! I’m Mike. I’m tall and strong. I’m twelve years old. I like playing football. And I’m good at it. I have some good learning habits. I listen to my teachers carefully in class. I finish my homework early every day. I often help my friends with English. I want to be a football player in the future. I want to play in the World Cup.
This is me! Would you like to be my friend
【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称做自我介绍。阐述个人信息、爱好、习惯和梦想等。注意文章为一般现在时并要符合单词数量要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考词汇：tall高的，strong强壮的，play football踢足球，habits习惯，player运动员，in the future在将来
参考句型：I’m…；I like…；I often…；I want to be…
2．范文：
Hello, boys and girls! I have a pen friend. Her name is Mary. She is a middle school student from Australia. She is 14 years old. There are many rules in her school. She can’t bring a mobile phone to school, and that’s very important. But she likes her school very much. Her favourite animals are pandas. Now she is reading a book about pandas in the library. It’s her dream to go to China to see pandas. It’s her dream to go to China to see pandas. I think her dream can come true!
Who is your e-friend Can you tell me something about him / her
【详解】题干解读：该题目要求用人称用第三人称介绍你的网友的基本情况，时态用一般现在时，同时注意单词数量的要求。
参考词汇和句型：
参考词汇：pen friend笔友，middle school中学，rules规则，important重要的，favourite最喜欢的，dream梦想， pandas熊猫
参考句型：I have...；Her name is...；She is...；There are...；I think...；
3．范文：
You can find many interesting things in Australia. There are many kangaroos and koalas in Australia. They are so cute. People in Australia like playing Australian football. It is very exciting. Sydney is a very beautiful city. Many people visit there every year. I want to visit Sydney some day.
【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称向苏芳介绍一下澳大利亚的相关信息，注意文章时态为一般现在时并要符合单词数量要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：Sydney悉尼，Australia澳大利亚，football足球，，kangaroos袋鼠
参考句型：There are...；It is...；They are...；I want to...
4．范文：
Hello, everyone. I would like to recommend（推荐）Alice for the outstanding graduate（优秀毕业生）. Alice is a good student. She does well in all her subjects. She has many good habits. She gets up early in the morning and never goes to bed late. She always puts her things in order. She keeps her room clean and tidy. She also helps her parents at home. She has a healthy diet. She eats a lot of vegetables and fruit. She likes drinking water and doing sport. She is helpful. We all think she can be the outstanding graduate.
【详解】1.题干分析：该题目要求介绍自己的推荐词。可以写一写自己的学习方面，生活习惯方面和饮食等。注意文章为一般现在时态，单词数量要符合要求。
2.参考词汇与句型：
参考词汇：good好的，do well in擅长；good habits好习惯；get up起床；early早地；put in order摆放整齐；clean and tidy干净整洁；help帮助；healthy diet健康饮食
参考句型：She does well in…；She has…；She gets up…；She keeps…；She also helps…
5．范文：
Welcome to China
Today I’ll tell you about China. China is a great country. The weather is fine in most places. There are a lot of big cities in China. You will see many places of interest, such as the Great Wall, the Palace Museum and so on. You can see cute pandas, too. Most people like table tennis. And Beijing Duck is very famous and delicious. People in China are very friendly. Come and visit China!
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求 以“Welcome to China”为题, 写一篇短文，向游客介绍中国。注意时态为一般现在时，要包括思维导图中的所有信息，并符合句子数量要求。
2.参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：weather天气，places of interest名胜古迹，such as例如，the Great Wall长城，the Palace Museum 故宫，pandas熊猫，table tennis乒乓球，delicious美味的，friendly友好的
参考句型：The weather is…；There are…；You will see…；People in China…
6．例文：
My summer vacation plan
I will have a travel this summer vacation. I will go to Beijing. I want to see the Great Wall and eat Beijing duck. It’s delicious. After travel, I will visit my grandparents. They have a big farm, there are lots of animals. My grandpa is good at swim. He will teach me how to swimming. I will have good time this summer vacation.
【详解】该题目要求从学习(study)、运动(sports)、旅游(travel)等方面任选一个，思考你的计划，并根据思维导图提示，写一篇英文短文。时态是一般将来时，人称是第一人称，同时注意句子数量的要求。
参考词汇和句型：
参考词汇：summer vacation暑假，go to Beijing去北京，the Great Wall长城，Beijing duck北京烤鸭，visit my grandparents看望祖父母
参考句型：I will...；I want to...
7．范文：
Children’s Day
Children’s Day is on June 1st. This is a festival for children. I usually go to the park to play with my parents. Sometimes I put on a show with my classmates at school. I can buy my favourite things on that day. I can eat delicious food. I’m very happy. I like Children’s Day.
【详解】题干解读：该题干要求以Children’s Day为题写一段话，在这一天，你会和朋友们做什么呢？注意文章为一般现在时并要符合句子数量要求。
参考词汇与句型：
参考词汇：June 1st六月一日，festival节日，go to the park去公园，put on a show表演节目，eat delicious food吃美味的食物，happy开心的
参考句型：This is…；I usually…；Sometimes I…；I can…；I like…
8．参考范文：
My summer holiday plans
My summer holiday is coming. I will travel to Beijing first. I will go there by train. I will visit many famous places. Then I will go to Chengdu by plane. I will see many lovely pandas there. I’m looking forward to the holiday!
【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求以“我的暑假计划”为题制定一个旅游计划，计划里面要包括想去哪些地方，哪些城市，怎么去等。注意文章为一般将来时，要求语句通顺，书写规范，语法和标点正确，不少于6句话。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：coming来， travel旅游，train火车， plane飞机，plane可爱的
参考句型：My summer holiday is …；I will… ；I look forward to…
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