2024届高考英语二轮复习读后续写：Action description ——“say”“see”and “wal公开课(共29张PPT)

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动作描写之“说”“看”“走”
Action description
——“say”“see”and “walk”
Part 01
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Part 02
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Mrs Liu's story - Part I
When I was in college, I wanted to find a part-time job to pay my tuition fee. So I asked my roommate, “ where could I find a job ” She told me immediately that I could try the local restaurant. I inquired one on the phone. The owner replied that I could start on Saturday. “I got the job,” I rejoiced after hanging up. “I’ve been officially employed” I giggled, springing to my feet.
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cry/yell/shout/
scream/call out喊叫
exclaim惊叫
roar咆哮
murmur 嘟囔
whisper 耳语
sob 啜泣
sigh 叹息
tease / laugh at /
make fun of 取笑
blame/ scold 责备
complain 抱怨
curse/swear 咒骂
beg 恳求
cheer 欢呼
promise 承诺
admit 承认
confess 坦白
comfort 安慰
大声说
小声说
带情绪的说
stammer 结结巴巴地说
answer/reply 回答说
deny 否认说
remark 评论说
explain 解释说
ask/question 疑问说
advise/suggest
建议说
order 下命令
Quick quiz
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roar
sigh
swear/curse
beg
Replace the underlined words
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1.“Help! Help!” She said .
2. “I’m sorry,” He said, afraid to be heard by others.
3. “W-w-what ”She said.
4. “Never mind. Just try your best, ”she said.
5. “Welcome back,”he said.
murmured/whispered
shouted/yelled/cried
stammered
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comforted
cheered
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Rewrite “said”
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Mrs Liu's story - Part II
I came to the restaurant on Saturday morning. As I was staring at the strange environment curiously, a woman cast an eye over me. “I’m the new waitress!” I explained immediately. To my surprise, the woman rolled her eyes on me.
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see/watch/look/
spot / notice/find
glance at
glimpse
cast an eye over
take a quick look at
peep / peek 窥视
steal a glance at偷看
spy on
roll one’s eyes 翻白眼
stare at
gaze at
peer at
fix one’s eyes on
盯着
wink眨眼
be all eyes全神贯注
look sb. in the eye
glare at
examine
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Fixing his eyes on / Staring at
roll his eyes
Noticing
stole a glance at
Exercise
_____________________ the final result of examination, suddenly,he shouted that he should have ranked first without his carelessness, which made his deskmate __________________. ________________ his expression, he _______________________ deskmate’s paper only to find he was the last one.
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Mrs Liu's story - Part III
It turned out she was the other waitress. At this time, the owner came out from the kitchen and told me patiently what I needed to do. While I walked to take the customers’ order, the other waitress approached me, asking me to finish the washing up that she didn’t do last night.
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approach
tiptoe踮起脚尖走
hobble 跛行
stagger 摇摇晃晃地走
dash / rush
inch 缓慢移动
pick oneself up
walk away with heavy steps
quicken one’s pace
pace back and forth
slip
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Perform and guess
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Describe the scene
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She rushed onto the platform, looked around and screamed at the classmates.
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1.She told me immediately that I could try the local restaurant.
2. I was staring at the strange environment curiously.
3. The owner came out from the kitchen and told me patiently what I needed to do.
Tip1. Add adverbs
Watch and compete
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anxiously
tightly
happily
Carefully
properly
normally
politely
proudly
softly
warmly
slowly
cheerfully
fast
well
calmly
hard
bravely
aimlessly
immediately
fortunately
seriously
loudly
quietly
exactly
deeply
silently
easily
especially
excitedly
naturally
suddenly
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Continue the sentence by adding “with/in + emotional noun”
When the students heard that they got the first prize in the fun sports competition, they cheered _____________.
with joy / excitement/ happiness
Tip2. Add prepositional phrases
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joy/ excitement/ satisfaction
terror
He looks up with
anger
awkwardness/embarrassment
with/in+emotional noun（情感名词）：
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in
surprise/sorrow/horror
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Describe the scene again
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She rushed onto the platform eagerly, looked around with excitement and screamed at the classmates happily.
describe more
Part 03
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1. different expressions of
2. add adverbs
3. add prepositional phrases
say: shout / whisper / cheer ...
see: glance at / stare at ...
walk: dash / tiptoe / inch ...
with terror / anger / joy ...
in surprise / sorrow / horror ...
Part 04
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Mrs Liu's story - Part IV
Hearing her words, I felt that I was treated unjustly. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Part 05
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Polish your writing!
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Small steps can make a huge difference.
授课教师 ：刘 静
授课单位 ：临湘市第二中学
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