辽宁省铁岭市开原市2022-2024年中考英语一模试题书面表达分类汇编（含答案）

辽宁省铁岭市开原市2022-2024年中考英语一模试题书面表达分类汇编
书面表达
2024年辽宁省铁岭市开原市中考一模英语试卷
五、书面表达(满分 20分)
曾子曰：“吾日三省吾身：为人谋而不忠乎 与朋友交而不信乎 传不习乎 ”习近平总书记在演讲中多次引用这句话, 旨在告诫青少年要勇于面对自己的缺点, 在学习中求真务实。那么, 青少年怎样成为更好的自己呢
请你根据以下内容提示, 以“How to Be a Better Teenager ”为题, 用英语写一篇演讲稿, 在学校演讲比赛中发言。要点如下：
(1)演讲目的;
(2)针对演讲题目给出至少两点建议；
(3)发出号召。
注意：(1)词数 80~100词, 短文的开头和结尾已为你写好, 不计入总词数；
(2)可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯；
(3)演讲稿中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
How to Be a Better Teenager
Hello, everyone,
It's my honour to stand here to give you a speech. _____________________________________
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Yours,
Li Hui
2023年辽宁省铁岭市开原市中考一模英语试卷
IX. 书面表达(共20分)
86. 根据要求完成小作文, 词数：30词左右。(共5分)
即将毕业的你, 有哪些建议想送给即将开启初中生活的学弟学妹们呢 请结合自身经历, 提 出3条宝贵建议。
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87. 根据要求完成大作文, 词数；80-100词。(共15分)
水滴石穿, 绳锯木断。坚持做好一件事, 会成就更好的自己。请以“One Thing I Keep Doing Every Day”为题, 根据以下要点和要求, 用英文写一篇发言稿, 参加学校的英语主题演讲活动。
要点：
1. What do you keep on doing every day
2. Why do you do this
3. How has it changed and influenced you
要求：1. 语意连贯, 层次清楚, 书写规范。
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名与校名。
3. 短文题目与开头已给出, 不计入总词数。
One Thing I Keep Doing Every Day
Good morning, everyone!
I am very happy to be here to share with all of you about one thing I keep doing every day. _
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2022年辽宁省铁岭市开原市中考一模英语试卷
IX. 书面表达
（A）（共5分）
86. 小作文：根据要求完成小作文，词数：约30词。
假如你是李华，请你给你校的美籍教师Bob写一封邀请函，请他参加你校举办的英语文化节（English Culture Festival）。活动时间：本周五下午14:30-17:30活动地点：学校图书馆。（开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）
Dear Bob,
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Yours
Li Hua
（B）大作文：（共15分）
87. 作为即将毕业的九年级学生，你还经常沉迷于玩手机或电脑之类的电子设备吗？针对这个问题，你们学校计划于6月1日到6月7日举行“一周无屏幕时间”(A week without Screen Time) 的活动，请你写一份策划书。
内容包括：
1、谈谈你一周使用屏幕的时间以及过长的屏幕时间会带来什么危害；
2、列举我们中学生减少屏幕时间的方法；(至少两点)
3、说明活动举行的时间，呼吁同学们一同加入。
作文要求：
1、不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称、老师和同学的真实姓名；
2、语句连贯，词数80个左右。
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参考答案：
2024年辽宁省铁岭市开原市中考一模英语试卷
【答案】例文
How to Be a Better Teenager
Hello, everyone.
It's my honour to stand here to give you a speech. Today I'd like to share my ideas about how to be a better teenager. In order to be a better teenager, I plan to do the following things.
First of all, we should develop healthy living habits. For example, we can run for half an hour every day to keep healthy. In this way, we can live and study well. What's more, we should make a study plan and take action to achieve it. The more knowledge we learn, the brighter future we will have. Next, we'd better be friendly to others. When others need help, we should try to help them. Finally, it is good to take up good hobbies and take part in volunteer activities, such as cleaning the city park.
Teenagers are the hope of our country. So let's try our best to be better teenagers and serve our country in the future.
Yours,
Li Hui
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的“怎样成为更好的青少年”并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点题，介绍演讲的目的；
第二步，根据题干要求给出具体的建议；
第三步，号召大家成为更好的青少年，并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①in order to为了
②for example例如
[高分句型
①When others need help, we should try to help them. (when引导时间状语从句)
②Finally, it is good to take up good hobbies and take part in volunteer activities, such as cleaning the city park. (it is adj to do句型)
2023年辽宁省铁岭市开原市中考一模英语试卷
86.
【答案】例文
In my opinion, you'd better study hard and put your time to good use. You should keep exercising and make more friends. How about taking up a new hobby
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，是一篇命题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示：按照要求书写规定数量的建议，不要遗漏，注意题目要求，给出的建议需要切合题意。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山提出写作目的是为了给与自己的建议；
第二步，具体阐述三条建议；
[亮点词汇]
①take up开始从事
[高分句型]
①In my opinion, you'd better study hard and put your time to good use.(并列句)
87.
【答案】例文：
One thing I keep doing every day
Good morning, everyone! I am very happy to be here to make a speech today. The topic of my speech is one thing I keep doing every day.
I love running and I have kept running for three years. When I was in Grade 7, I was not good at sports and running was always my weakness. I often failed in my running test. In order to catch up with my classmates, I began to practice running every day after school. Sometimes, I was so tired that I really wanted to give up. But I kept telling myself that I could make it. No matter what kind of difficulty I faced, I tried my best to keep running. Now I do much better in running. I'm very proud of myself and I'm ready for any challenge in the future.
That's all. Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍演讲的主题；
第二步，具体介绍坚持跑步的理由及给自己带来的影响；
第三步，最后结束演讲。
[亮点词汇]
①be good at搪长
②in order to为了
③catch up with赶上
[高分句型]
①No matter what kind of difficulty I faced, I tried my best to keep running. (no matter what引导的让步状语从句)
②When I was in Grade 7, I was not good at sports and running was always my weakness. (when引导的时间状语从句)
2022年辽宁省铁岭市开原市中考一模英语试卷
【答案】例文
Dear Bob.
I have a piece of good news for you. Our school will hold an English Culture Festival in the school library. It's from 2:30 to 5:30
p. m. this Friday. I hope you can come to our English Culture Festival.
Yours
Li Hua
【详解】1. 题干解析：这是一篇书信写作，要求写一篇30字左右的英文邀请函，邀请老师Bob参加学校的英语文化节，题干中给出的时间地点不要遗漏。开头结尾已给出，注意上下文衔接。
2. 写作指导：文章使用一般现在时和一般将来时，人称使用第一人称和第三人称。注意书信的写作格式。除了交代时间地点，适当加入短语和句型使文章更加完整。注意不要出现单词和语法错误。
【答案】例文：
More and more students are used to using mobile phones or computers. They are addicted to games and boring videos on computers or mobile phones. They spend more and more time on the screen, so they spend less and less time on learning. I spend over twenty hours on mobile phones every week, but it is bad for my eyes.
As students, we shouldn't play computer games for a long time. We should do more exercise, chat with our family and friends instead of chatting on the Internet. If we must use the Internet, we must limit the time. If we have difficult problems, we should ask our teachers or classmates for help.
Our school plans to hold “A week without Screen Time "from June 1to June 7th. I think it is good for us. Let's join in it together.
【详解】1. 题干解读：文章是一篇材料作文。文章主要以“学生使用电子屏幕”为主线展开描写。文章描写的时候要写出题目中所给的所有要求，包括自己使用屏幕的时间，长时间使用屏幕的危害，以及具体减少屏幕的使用的方法，以及学校的活动等，要注意语句之间的
衔接。
2. 例文点评：文章分三段描写。第一段主要是介绍现在的学生习惯于长时间使用屏幕以及自己使用屏幕的介绍；第二段主要具体的介绍减少屏幕时间的方法；第三段主要介绍学校的活动，号召大家参加。整个文章结构完整思路清晰，语言表达准确，意思明确易懂。
3. 高分亮点；
短语：be used to doing sth; be addicted to;be bad for;instead of;be good for;join in。
句型：if引导的条件状语从句；I think+宾语从句；Let's引导的祈使句。