提纲式英语作文指导 第6节
活动介绍 写好流程
学习目标任务
掌握与活动相关的知识内容;
固定活动类体裁作文写作思路。
Step 1 词块准备
the annual festival _____________________
the 5th anniversary of sports meeting _____
fall/ start on May 1 ____________________
be scheduled on May 1 _________________
be planned on May 1 ___________________
last 4 days ____________________________
on May 5 of Chinese lunar calendar ______
wait for ______________________________
the great time _________________________
the great event ________________________
the greatest feast for... __________________
in order to do _________________________
intend to do __________________________
so that ______________________________
on the purpose of _____________________
enrich the school life ___________________
develop the friendship with others ________
arouse our interest in ___________________
strengthen our body ____________________
be to do sth ___________________________
a special festival _______________________
begin with ____________________________
end up with ___________________________
take part in ___________________________
at the opening ceremony ________________
at the end of __________________________
come to the highlight ___________________
have a close discussion _________________
Step 2 总体综述特色
All the students wait so long for the great time.
The great time will be the greatest feast for our ears.
对运动会总体感受
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Step 3 时间地点
The annual festival falls (starts/ is scheduled/ is planed) in the first week of May in our school, lasting 3 days.
Next Sunday, May 2, is the 5th anniversary of our school sports meeting, which will last 3 days.
The festival falls on January 1 of Chinese Lunar Calendar in our school, which will last 15 days.
Scheduled on May 5 in our school, the great concert will last 3 hours from 9:00 to 11:00 in the morning.
今年运动会时间和地点
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Step 4 主题目的
In order to enrich the school life and strengthen our body, our school themes the sports health and exercise.
On the purpose of enriching our school life, our school themes that we should have a healthy body and live a long life.
Our school intends to enrich our life and strengthen our body so that the sports this year is themed health and exercise.
今年运动会目的
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Step 5 活动流程或安排
The concert will begin with (start with) some performances with traditional musical instruments.
→ At the opening ceremony, our head teacher will give a speech to arouse our interest in traditional music.
→ We will set off at the school gate at 8:00 in the morning.
介绍今年运动会开始
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Followed with some English songs by our teachers, the concert will come to the highlight.
→ The concert will come to the highlight when some teachers sing some English songs.
→ The concert will come to the highlight with some teachers singing some English songs.
叙述运动会的亮点
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What really counts is that some famous musicians from all over the country will come here for the concert.
→With some famous musicians coming here, you will maybe have a close communication with your favourite stars.
→ When communicating with them, you will have a better understanding of the Chinese traditional music.
With a discussion at the end of the concert, we need your comments.
→ At the end of the concert, we will have a face to face talk with your favourite film stars.
介绍运动会结尾时安排
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Step 6 感悟收获
Tired but excited, we live an unforgettable day.
During the great time, we have learnt what we can’t learn in the books.
I think it of great value for us to take part in such activities in the coming future.
运动会后的收获感悟
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Step 6 实战练习 ( 2019全国3卷)
假定你是李华,你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加,内容包括:
1.时间;
2.活动安排;
3.欢迎他表演节目。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Allen,
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Yours,
Li Hua
答案:
一年一度的节日
运动会五周年
5月1日秋季/开始
定于5月1日
计划在5月1日
持续4天
在中国农历的五月五日
等待
伟大的时代
重大事件
最大的盛宴...
为了做
打算做
以便
出于…的目的
丰富学校生活
发展与他人的友谊
引起我们对...的兴趣
强化我们的身体
打算做某事
特殊的节日
以…开始
结束
参加
在开幕式上
在…的结尾
来到高潮
进行密切的讨论
Deep in my heart, the annual sports meeting is the greatest feast for our life.
Our school intends to enrich our life and strengthen our body so that the sports this year is themed health and exercise.
At the opening ceremony, the sports meeting will begin with some Chinese Kong Fu.
What really counts for us is that we can have a face to face communication with the great basketball player, Yaoming.
With our class at the first place, the basketball match ended up.
During the sports meeting, we have learnt what we can’t learn in the books. I think it of great value for us to take part in such activities in the coming future.
Hope this letter finds you well. I’m more than delighted to tell you that this Sunday we will have an activity to find out mistakes in the English signs of the Cultural Street. In this letter, I’m writing to invite you to join us.
It is planned from 8:00 to 11:00, lasting 3 hours. At first, we will gather at the school gate to take the No 2 bus there. At the same time, we wander in the street in 4 groups, to find out the mistakes in the signs and write them down. At last, we will gather together to share what we have found. I think it of great value for us to improve our English.
You’re an expert at English. I do believe with you help we will complete the task easily. I’m looking forward to your coming.