Unit 7 It's raining!介绍度假情况写作讲解和练习（含答案） 2023-2024学年人教版英语七年级下册

七年级英语下册Unit 7
写作讲解和练习
[写作目标]
用英语介绍自己的度假情况。
[写作任务]
假如你目前在南京度假，你创作了一个旅行短视频，并打算上传到某英文视频平台。请你写一篇短文为短视频配解说词。
[指点迷津]
为旅行短视频配的英文解说词属于应用文，其写作要点如下：
(1) 内容：解说词首先可以介绍度假地(可以从其天气、景点、美食、风土人情等方面入手)及这段时间“我”在此地的活动；其次可以介绍“我”在拍视频时的地点、活动及感受；最后可以对“我”的旅行及短视频进行总结。
(2) 人称：以第一人称和第三人称为主。
(3) 时态：一般现在时和现在进行时。
[谋篇布局]
[巧衔接]
(1)、(5)、(6)、(10)描述现阶段正在进行的动作，(8)描述现在(说话瞬间)正在发生的动作，运用现在进行时可以让观众感受到动作的实时性和现场感。
[连句成文]
同学们，根据[谋篇布局]的练习，赶快动笔完成这篇英文解说词吧！
[素材积累]
假日游园活动欢乐多
A boy is building a sandcastle on the beach. 一个男孩在沙滩上堆沙堡。
Some families are having a picnic on the grass. 一些家庭在草地上野餐。
Those girls are playing Frisbee in the square. 那些女孩们在广场上玩飞盘。
Little kids are feeding ducks and fish in the pond.
小孩们正在喂池塘里的鸭子和鱼。
Some children are flying kites with their parents.
一些孩子正和他们的父母放风筝。
My father enjoys taking pictures of beautiful flowers.
我爸爸喜欢给漂亮的花拍照。
[练习]
假如你和家人现在正在公园游玩，此时此刻你坐在草坪上想写一篇英文日记，记录今天的好天气和家人正在进行的活动。赶快动笔完成这篇日记吧！
May 25, Saturday
【答案】
[谋篇布局]
(1) I'm on (a) vacation / taking / having a vacation
(2) a long history
(3) many / lots of / a lot of interesting places
(4) is sunny and warm
(5) I'm having fun / a great time visiting
(6) lots of / a lot of delicious food
(7) are very friendly
(8) I'm taking a boat trip
(9) It's really relaxing
(10) I'm having fun / a great time
[连句成文]
Hello, friends! These days, I'm taking a vacation in Nanjing.Nanjing is a very beautiful city with a long history. There are many interesting places here. These days, the weather is sunny and warm here. I'm having fun visiting Purple Mountain, Dr. Sun Yat-sen's Mausoleum and Confucius Temple. I'm also enjoying lots of delicious food, like salted duck, duck blood and vermicelli soup and Jinling roast duck. What's more, I find the people here are very friendly.It's 8:00 p.m. right now. I'm taking a boat trip on the Qinhuai River and enjoying the night view. It's really relaxing, isn't it I'm having a great time in Nanjing! After watching my short video, would you like to come to Nanjing for a vacation
[练习]
One possible version:
May 25, Saturday
It's a sunny and windy day. I'm having a relaxing time at the park with my family.Right now, I'm sitting on the grass and Mom is sitting next to me. She is reading a history book and drinking tea. Dad and my brother are flying a kite. The weather is just right for it. Where are my grandparents Oh! My grandma is dancing in the square and my grandpa is taking photos of her. They are so happy.All my family are having fun at the park.