八下Unit 6 An old man tried to move the mountains. 写作话题指导(共26张PPT)

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An old man tried to move the mountains.
An old man tried to move the mountains.
Unit 6
写作指导
【话题剖析】
本单元围绕“传说和神话故事”这个话题，谈论过去发生的事情，重点训练讲述故事这个语言功能项目。通过本单元的学习，掌握如何运用过去时态讲述一个故事，描述古老的传说和有趣的故事,激发和培养学习英语的兴趣，理解并体会传说和神话故事对我们的教育意义。
Words and Expressions
How to tell
a story
(1) When and where did the story happen (时间和地点)
(2) Who is the main character (人物)
(3) How does the story begin (起因)
(4) What happened next Why did that happen (经过)
(5) What is the end of the story (结果)
故事六要素：时间、地点、人物、起因、经过和结果
1. 体裁：记叙文
2. 时态：一般过去时
3. 人称：第三人称
4. 讲述故事时，可按照时间顺序展开。如可用表示时间的词语once upon a time, one day等引入故事；用when, then, as soon as等叙述故事的发展； 用in the end, at last, finally等引出故事的结尾。可以使故事情节紧凑、脉络清晰。
Write a summary of a fairy tale
写作指导
1. 人称: 主要用第三人称；
2. 时态: 一般过去时为主；
3. 文体：记叙文
4. 常用表达：
① Once upon a time, there was a /an...
② One day, he/she ...
③ Finally/As a result, …
5. 写作思路:
首先，根据所给提示. 介绍故事的人物故事发生的时间、地点等；
其次，按照提示，详细介绍故事的起始经过，如有能力，可适当拓展；
最后，介绍故事的结果，并可表达自己对故事的看法。
Pre-writing
·I want to tell you a story called / named ...
·There was a(n) ...
·The story happened in / on ...
·It was a(n) ... day.
·He was so ugly that ...
·When the ugly duckling went to a lake, he saw ...
·How he wanted / wished to ...
·As spring came ...
·He was surprised to see that ...
·From the story, we can learn that ...
·We can learn an important lesson from the story.
写 作 模 板
Once upon a time, there lived a little girl in a small mountain village. She lived with mother. ...
One day, the girl went to the forest to look for food. She met an old woman. The old woman liked her very much, so she gave her a pot and ...
Beginning
The pot was cooking all the time so that the whole village was full of porridge.
While-writing
Ending
Process
写作任务
假如你校将要举办英语故事大赛，你有意参加。你想讲《狐狸与葡萄》的故事，请你写一篇英语短文为此做准备。
【审清题目】
内容：讲述《狐狸与葡萄》的故事。
文体：记叙文。
人称：以第三人称为主。
时态：以一般过去时和一般现在时为主。
【头脑风暴】
(一)故事常用的开头语：
1. Long long ago...
2. Once upon a time...
3. One day/year...
4.The story is so...that...
(二)故事中常用的连接词：
1. not only... but(also)...
2. as soon as...
3. so...that...
4. can't...unless...
(三)故事常用的结束语：
1.From this story,I learn that anything is possible if...
2.The story reminds us that...
3.The story is trying to show me the importance of...
◆常用词块 补全下列词块对应的英文表达
one hot summer day
look for food
eat grapes
walk / go away
【谋篇布局】 将括号内的汉语翻译成英语，补全短文。
there was a fox in the forest
The fox got / became very excited
but they were too high for him to reach/ get
Maybe / Perhaps the grapes are sour
Sometimes we do that to make ourselves feel better
同学们一定都读过童话故事《丑小鸭》，请你根据提示用英语写一篇短文讲述这个故事。70词左右。
提示：
1.一只丑小鸭被自己的“兄妹”嘲笑，“妈妈”也不喜欢他。
2.他历尽磨难：小鸭子们啄他，小鸡们打他，主人用脚踢他。他无家可归，差点死于饥饿和寒冷。
3.最后他变成了美丽的天鹅。
Let me/I’m going to tell you...
I am very happy that you are interested in...
Do you know the story about...
句型荟萃：
Once upon a time, there was...
At that time, ...
It seems impossible to...
One day, while he..., he saw...
From that day on, ...
开头句
中间句
The story is trying to show us...
The story reminds us that...
What do you think of...
Only through... can we...
No pain, no gain.
Nothing is impossible to a willing heart.
结尾句
经典名句
Long long ago , there was an ugly duck. Because he was different from his sisters and brothers , he was laughed at by them . And what's worse , his mother didn't like him . He was so sad . Other ducks often pecked him. Chickens hit him a lot . Even the host didn't like him . He kicked him with his foot . One day , he was lost and became homeless . He nearly died of hunger and coldness . But he didn't give up . After getting over all the difficulties , he became a beautiful swan and flew to the sky .
没有共产党，就没有新中国。七十多年前，为建立新中国，在党的领导下，中国人民浴血奋战，涌现出许许多多的英雄人物。今天我们来用英语讲述小英雄王二小的故事吧！
要求：1. 故事必须包含图表所提供的四个要点，可适当发挥，使行文连贯；2. 80词左右。故事开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：儿童团 the Children's League
A long time ago, there was a young hero,who was Wang Erxiao.Please follow me to recall his story.He was born in Hebei Province in 1929.His parents died when he was 11. Later, he joined the Children's League and he was clever and brave.But on the morning of October 25,1942,in order to protect the villagers, he was killed by the enemy. He was only 13 then.He sacrificed himself for others and I respect him very much.He is always a great hero in my heart.
请根据下列提示，用英语写一则小故事。
提示：
1. 从前，有一个小女孩儿跟她的妈妈一块儿住；
2. 一天，小女孩儿去森林中寻找吃的，一个老婆婆给了小女孩
儿一口锅，并告诉她如何煮出美味的粥；
3. 小女孩儿的妈妈很高兴，她想要吃好多好多粥，但是她却不
知道怎样让这口锅停下来，结果，整个村子变成了粥的海洋。
要求：
1. 条理清晰，语意连贯；
2. 不少于80词。
粥 porridge
Once upon a time, there lived a little girl in a small mountain village. She lived with mother. Her family is very poor. One day, the girl went to the forest to look for food. She met an old woman.The old woman liked her very much, so she gave her a pot and showed her how to cook sweet porridge with it. The little girl took the pot home and told her mother about it. Her mother was so happy that she hoped to eat as much porridge as possible.Unluckily, she didn't know how to stop it. So the pot was cooking all the time and soon the whole village was full of porridge.
小试牛刀
请你以“My Favorite Story”为题，根据下面的提示，写一篇短文讲述你最喜欢的故事，并在课上和大家分享。
提示: 1. What is your favorite story
2. What is it about
3. What can you learn from it
要求: 1.词数80词左右
2.字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。
1.人称:
2.时态:
3.体裁:
4.中心旨意:
第三人称
一般过去时
记叙文
My Favorite Story
认真审题，找出文章要表达的中心。
Beginning
Body
Ending
My
Favorite Story
My favorite story is...
Once upon a time...
One day...
As a result...
I think the story is...
It reminds us that...
开篇点题
故事大概
评价与启发
My favorite story is The Fox and the Crow. Let me tell you the story.
Once upon a time, there lived a fox and a crow. The fox was very cunning. One day, the fox found the crow carrying a piece of meat in his mouth. The fox wanted to get the meat in the crow’s mouth. Whatever the fox said, the crow kept standing in the tree in silence until the fox told the crow he had the most beautiful voice. The crow was so happy to hear this that he opened his mouth to sing a song. As a result, as soon as he opened his mouth, the meat fell onto the ground and the fox got it.
I think the story is interesting and meaningful. It reminds us that we should never believe the person who wants to cheat us.
My favorite story