【深圳】初中英语八年级上学期期末复习【题型专练】：书面表达（1）
一、书面表达
1．假如你是Alice的好友Lucy，Alice昨晚给你发了一封电子邮件，她向你请教如何锻炼大脑才能提高记忆力。请你根据以下提示，以Alice的身份给Alice回复一封电子邮件。
要求：80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
提示：1）尝试新事物，改变日常习惯;
2）做一些猜谜游戏或数学益智游戏；
3）给大脑足够的时间休息，饮食要均衡，心情要放松。
参考词汇或短语：relax, try to do, daily habit, what's
more, guessing game, Maths puzzle, balanced diet
Dear Alice,
……
Yours,
Lucy
【答案】Dear Alice,
Thank you for your email! There are some ways for you to improve your memory.
First, you can try doing some new things and change your daily habits. What's more, you can also do some guessing games or Maths puzzles. Your brain will get a lot of exercise if you do these things. Last, you must give your brain enough time to rest and have a balanced diet. You also need to relax.
I believe that you can improve your memory soon.
Yours,
Lucy
【知识点】提纲作文；书信、电子邮件
【解析】【分析】这是一篇提纲作文。要求给你的好友Alice写封回信，告诉她如何锻炼大脑才能提高记忆力。信的开头和结尾已经给出，写作时用第一人称，适当的使用参考词汇或短语，注意提示，不要逐句翻译，恰当的使用并列词使上下文连贯流畅。
【点评】这篇短文主要介绍了通过锻炼大脑提高记忆力的三种方法，使用了一些表示顺序的单词或短语， First ， What's more, Last， 使本文更有条理性。最后一句话写出了对朋友的期望。
2．假设你们学校进行了一项有关学生周末活动的调查，以下图表显示的是你们班的调查数据，请根据该图表,，用英语写一份报告,阐述一下具体情况。
百分比 周末活动情况
25% 看电视、看电影或者与同学微信聊天
40% 玩电脑游戏
20% 在家阅读
15% 体育锻炼和旅游
要求:
1）内容连贯;
2）词数:80词左右，开头己给出，不计入总词数
参考词汇及句型: WeChat, activity, rest,
sports, make a survey, according to, had better…
I
think...
Our school has made a
survey on students' activities on weekends recently.
【答案】 Our school has made a survey on students' activities on weekends recently. According to the results, 25 percent of the students watch TV, movies or chat with friends on WeChat during the weekends. There are 20 percent of our students reading books at home. Then 40 percent of the students play computer games. Only 15 percent of the students like to do some sports, such as playing basketball or football, running or swimming.
As far as I am concerned, we should have a meaningful weekend. We'd better not spend too much time playing computer games. We should make full use of the weekends.
【知识点】提纲作文
【解析】【分析】这篇作文要求我们根据题目的要求写一篇报告，阐述具体的周末活动情况。题目中给出了一个调查数据表格，我们需要用正确的英语将这些内容表达出来。通过分析可知，这篇作文我们应该用一般现在时态，第三人称来叙述。写作时，我们应注意语句之间的连接，可以使用一些简单的连词。也可以用一些我们平时积累的好的句型和短语，使短文的表达具有连贯性。
【点评】写作时要注意一下几点：（1）应抓住文章中心，围绕主题，根据提示列出要写的信息要点；（2）注意内容是否充实、积极和健康；（3）注意文章的结构层次，要凸显文章的主题；（4）要注意语言规范，表达准确，选材造句都尽量使用学过、见过的语言材料。高分句型As far as I am concerned, we should have a meaningful weekend. We'd better not spend too much time playing computer games.。
3．以下表格是成才中学二年级一班的学生们上周六活动的调查情况。请根据表格写一份调查报告，并发表你的看法，词数80左右。开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
人数 活动内容
12 补课
10 帮助父母做家务
5 和家人或朋友去爬山
18 在家做作业和看书
3 睡懒觉和玩游戏
There are forty-eight students in Class One, Grade Two, Chengcai Middle School.
This is a survey about how they spent last Saturday.
【答案】 There are forty-eight students in Class One, Grade Two, Chengcai Middle School. This is a survey about how they spent last Saturday.
Twelve students had classes outside the school. Eighteen students did their homework and read books at home. Ten students helped their parents do the housework. Five students said they climbed mountains with their family or their friends. They had a nice Saturday. Only three students were quite lazy. They slept late and played computer games.
From the survey we can see that most of the students are hard-working. But I think students also need to relax themselves sometimes.
【知识点】材料作文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇材料作文。本文要求按照所给的材料，完成这篇关于“成才中学同学们在二年级一班上周六的活动情况的报告”的文章，写作中要包含表格提到的所有内容。根据材料内容，可知本文主要用一般过去式，在描述学生的调查结果的时候，用第三人称，在表达自己的看法时，用第一人称，注意动词过去式的变化。写作中注意上下文的过渡要符合逻辑关系。
【点评】这篇短文简单准确的表述了调查结果，时态运用得当，文章段落清晰明了，句子通顺，行文连贯。并用到了宾语从句，如Five students said they climbed mountains with their family or their friends。一些好词好句为文章填色不少，如 did their homework，read books，helped their parents do ，played computer games，relax themselves等。
4．根据下面的汉语提示,以“ Reading"为题,写篇关于书籍为我们带来益处的短文。80词左右。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
提示:1）没有朋友在一起,你也可以享受到乐趣；2）当你孤身一人在家时也能周游世界；3）你可以与生活在几千年前的古人交流；4）我们可以成为聪明人的朋友,这能给我们快乐。不读书的人是无法从中获得快乐的。
Reading
Reading
has a lot of pleasure.
Those
who enjoy reading books can get a great deal of happiness.
【答案】Reading
Reading has a lot of pleasure. Most of us
cannot enjoy ourselves without friends, but when reading, we can have fun on
our own. While staying alone in our houses, we can travel around the world and
we can know lots of things through reading. Today, we can communicate with
those who lived thousands of years ago. We can become friends of clever men's. Only
books give us this kind of happiness. Those who cannot enjoy books are poor
people. Those who enjoy reading books can get a great deal of happiness.
【知识点】提纲作文
【解析】【分析】本文是一篇命题作文， 要求以Reading为题,写篇关于书籍为我们带来益处的短文。全文要求描述读书可以使得你在没有朋友在一起时,你也可以享受到乐趣，能周游世界，你可以与生活在几千年前的古人交流，读书可以使我们成为聪明人的朋友,这能给我们快乐。写作时，要注意谓语动词形式的变化，写作要点已给出，不可以逐词翻译。
【点评】全文要用一般现在时进行描述，文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点，行文间要注意简化描述，用简短的语句代替冗长的语句，在作文完成的时候，应该检查、修改，以免遗漏一些需要表达清楚的要点和细节，文章拼写正确，语法运用得当，本文最大亮点是 we can communicate with those who lived thousands of years ago，Those who cannot enjoy books are poor people. Those who enjoy reading books can get a great deal of happiness 等定语从句的使用，使语言灵活，语法规则正确，使整篇短文意思连贯，表达流畅。
5．在日常生活中,互联网起着越来越重要的作用。请根据以下提示,以“ On the Internet”为题写一段80词的短文。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
互联网的主要用途：
信息→看国内新闻,获取其他信息
通讯→发电子邮件,打电话
学习→上网上学校,阅览各种书籍,自学外语
娱乐→欣赏音乐,观看体育比赛,玩棋牌游戏
生活→购物
On
the Internet
The
Internet is very important in our daily life.
We
can do shopping, have a chat with others and make friends with them.
【答案】On
the Internet
The Internet is very important in our daily
life.
On the Internet, we can learn news both at
home and abroad. And we can also learn all kinds of information. We can send
emails to our friends on the Internet. We can even make phone calls, go to
online school, read many books and learn foreign languages by ourselves. If we
are free, we can enjoy music, watch sports and play chess and cards on the
Internet. We can do shopping, have a chat with others and make friends with
them.
【知识点】命题作文；书信、电子邮件
【解析】【分析】这是一篇命题作文，题目是“ On the Internet”，主要介绍互联网的主要用途，注意时态是一般现在时，首先介绍互联网在通讯和信息方面的作用；然后介绍互联网在学习上的作用；最后介绍互联网在娱乐生活上的作用。为文章增色，注意运用好词好句，同时注意恰当使用连词，使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
【点评】写作时注意作文内容全面，运用好词好句，如：both...and；all kinds of；send...to...；by oneself；do+动词ing；make friends with等。状语从句和宾语从句的运用为文章增色不少，如：If we are free, we can enjoy music, watch sports and play chess and cards on the Internet. 等。连词both...and；and；if的运用使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
6．为了准备考试, Jim很忙。每天晚上都学习到很晚才睡觉, 甚至一日三餐都不能按时吃。
但是, 他发现自己的学习效果并不是很好。经常会忘记刚刚才记住的知识。他很苦恼, 在网上发帖向大家求助。请以Peter的名义给Jim写封信提一些建议。
要求: 语法正确, 语言通顺, 80词左右。
生词提示: regularly规律地
【答案】Dear Jim, I have known your problem. In my opinion, you can't remember things well because you have a bad memory now. You have a bad memory mostly because you don't sleep or eat well. I know exams are important, but you should sleep and eat well first. When you have a good sleep and eat healthily and regularly, you can have a good memory and study better. What's more, you should be relaxed. If you are always nervous, you can' t remember things well. I hope your memory can become better soon.Yours,Peter
【知识点】应用文写作
【解析】【分析】本题是写一篇给定材料的书面表达，写作的话题为建议信，在写作时应注意符合题意，根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。
写作步骤：
一、阅读提示，弄清所有信息，明确写作要点。
1.知道了对方的问题。ave known your problem.
2.记忆不好是因为睡眠不够。can't remember things well；have a bad memory
3.按时吃饭按时睡觉是保证良好记忆的关键。have a good sleep；eat healthily
4.学会放松。be relaxed.
5.希望你很快会好起来。become better soon
二、根据要点，写出关键词、短语或句子。
三、组词成句。连句成篇。注意使用一般现在时。
【点评】本题考查对所学知识的综合运用，熟练使用相关短语、单词和句型，注意词性的搭配，时态的把握，人称的使用等细节问题。
7．许多伟大的发明家用他们的发明改变了世界, 让我们生活得更好。你想成为一个小小发明家吗 请以My invention为题, 根据以下提示内容写一篇作文。
要求: 语法正确, 语言通顺, 80词左右, 可根据提示内容适当发挥。
提示:
1). 水陆两用汽车: 既可以在陆地上跑, 也可以在水下跑;
2). 这种汽车两侧有两个翅膀, 下面有四个轮子, 在地面上时, 跟普通汽车一样, 但在水下时, 四个轮子会隐藏在车底, 两侧的翅膀会变为两个船桨促使汽车前行;
3). 比一般的汽车更方便、更省油; 节约资源, 减少污染。
生词提示: hide (隐藏), resource (资源), paddle (桨)
【答案】(One possible version)My invention My invention is a car. People can use it on the land or in the water. This kind of car has two wings on its two sides and four wheels under the car. On the ground, it can run as well as the ordinary car. However, when it is in the water, the four wheels will hide under the car and the two wings will become two paddles to make the car go pared with the ordinary car, this kind of car is more convenient and uses less petrol. More importantly, it can save resources and make less pollution. I think my invention will help people live a better life in the future.
【知识点】命题作文；提纲作文
【解析】【分析】本身是根据所给材料写一篇说明文，在写作时应注意符合题意，根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。
写作步骤：
一、阅读提示，弄清所有信息，明确写作要点。
1.我的发明是一辆汽车，既可以在陆地上跑, 也可以在水下跑
2.这种汽车两侧有两个翅膀, 下面有四个轮子
3.在地面上时, 跟普通汽车一样
4.但在水下时, 四个轮子会隐藏在车底, 两侧的翅膀会变为两个船桨促使汽车前行;
5.比一般的汽车更方便、更省油; 节约资源, 减少污染
6.我认为我的发明能帮助人们过更好的生活。
二、根据要点，写出关键词、短语或句子。
三、组词成句。连句成篇。注意使用一般现在时。
【点评】本题考查对本单元所学知识的综合运用，熟练使用相关短语、单词和句型，注意词性的搭配，时态的把握，人称的使用等细节问题。
8．下面的表格是某中学八年级(1)班学生上学方式的调查表，请用英语写 一篇短文简要介绍一下这个表格。
上学方式 by bus on foot by bike take subway by taxi
学生人数 15 8 12 1 0
要求：1.题目自拟，词数不少于70; 2.短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
【答案】 Ways to School
There are thirty-six students in Class 1, Grade 8. Every day they go to school in different ways. Fifteen students take buses because they live far from the school. Eight students go to school on foot. They live near the school. They think it is good for their health to walk. Twelve students ride their bikes to school because they like riding and their homes are not very far from the school. Only one student takes the subway. No one goes to school by taxi. Taking a taxi is a little expensive.
【知识点】其他类作文
【解析】【分析】从表格中可以看到八年级（1）班的学生总数是36人，有四种不同的上学方式。在写好每种上学方式的学生人数时，可以补充下选择此种交通工具的原因，如 Fifteen students take buses because they live far from the school.以此为例写剩余的几种上学方式。
【点评】注意句与句之间的连贯性，句子的表达要符合英文习惯。
9．写作
以 I like collecting ________ 为题，写一篇短文，内容包括:
1.What do you collect
2.When did you start
3.How do you get them
4.Why do you like collecting them
5.What do you get from your collection
要求：
1补全题目；
2要点齐全，字迹工整，词数不少于80。
I like collecting ……
【答案】I like collecting stamps
Different people have different hobbies. Some people like raising flowers, and others like building model ships. I like collecting stamps.
My father works in a big company. He always goes abroad. Two years ago, when he was working abroad, he sent home a letter with a beautiful stamp on the envelope. I liked the stamp very much. Since then I always ask my father to send me different stamps from different countries.
Now I have more than one thousand stamps. From these stamps I can learn a lot. When I look through these beautiful stamps, I feel relaxed and happy.
【解析】【分析】这是一篇半命题作文，并围绕命题给出了五个问题，作为文章的提纲，这种形式本身的要点已经很明确，重点也很突出，只要把各个提纲加以发挥，注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性，就 不会造成审题不清而偏离主题，但要注意，文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点。
10．写作
新学期开始, 学校组织了不同的课外兴趣班。下面表格中是八年级六班的学生参加课外活动的情况。这个班级共有48名同学。请根据表格及提示内容写一份报告, 阐述一下具体情况。Clubs TheEnglish Club The Computer Club Thetable tennis Club Others
The Number: 8 21 14 5
提示:
1 参加电脑社团的学生最多(the most), 可见大部分(most of)学生喜欢玩电脑;
2 很多学生也参加乒乓球社团, 可见很多同学也喜欢运动
【答案】例文：
At the beginning of the new term, there are differentafter-class activities in our school. There are forty-eight students in ClassSix, Grade Eight. Twenty-one students joined the Computer Club. And the numberof students in the Computer Club is the most. We can see that most of thestudents like to play computers. There are fourteen students joining the TableTennis Club. We can see that many students also love to do some sports. Eightstudents joined the English Club. There are only five students in other clubs.
【解析】【分析】本篇作文要求根据表格中的提示内容写报告。从表格中可以看出有很多数字，这就要求同学们在写作时正确地表达数字。写作之后，要检查一下语法、标点符号、阐述数字的方式是否正确，表格中的内容是否有遗漏等等。写作本篇作文可用到的短语，句型结构: at thebeginning of ..., there are ..., the number of ..., join clubs, most of thestudents等等。
1 / 1【深圳】初中英语八年级上学期期末复习【题型专练】：书面表达（1）
一、书面表达
1．假如你是Alice的好友Lucy，Alice昨晚给你发了一封电子邮件，她向你请教如何锻炼大脑才能提高记忆力。请你根据以下提示，以Alice的身份给Alice回复一封电子邮件。
要求：80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
提示：1）尝试新事物，改变日常习惯;
2）做一些猜谜游戏或数学益智游戏；
3）给大脑足够的时间休息，饮食要均衡，心情要放松。
参考词汇或短语：relax, try to do, daily habit, what's
more, guessing game, Maths puzzle, balanced diet
Dear Alice,
……
Yours,
Lucy
2．假设你们学校进行了一项有关学生周末活动的调查，以下图表显示的是你们班的调查数据，请根据该图表,，用英语写一份报告,阐述一下具体情况。
百分比 周末活动情况
25% 看电视、看电影或者与同学微信聊天
40% 玩电脑游戏
20% 在家阅读
15% 体育锻炼和旅游
要求:
1）内容连贯;
2）词数:80词左右，开头己给出，不计入总词数
参考词汇及句型: WeChat, activity, rest,
sports, make a survey, according to, had better…
I
think...
Our school has made a
survey on students' activities on weekends recently.
3．以下表格是成才中学二年级一班的学生们上周六活动的调查情况。请根据表格写一份调查报告，并发表你的看法，词数80左右。开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
人数 活动内容
12 补课
10 帮助父母做家务
5 和家人或朋友去爬山
18 在家做作业和看书
3 睡懒觉和玩游戏
There are forty-eight students in Class One, Grade Two, Chengcai Middle School.
This is a survey about how they spent last Saturday.
4．根据下面的汉语提示,以“ Reading"为题,写篇关于书籍为我们带来益处的短文。80词左右。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
提示:1）没有朋友在一起,你也可以享受到乐趣；2）当你孤身一人在家时也能周游世界；3）你可以与生活在几千年前的古人交流；4）我们可以成为聪明人的朋友,这能给我们快乐。不读书的人是无法从中获得快乐的。
Reading
Reading
has a lot of pleasure.
Those
who enjoy reading books can get a great deal of happiness.
5．在日常生活中,互联网起着越来越重要的作用。请根据以下提示,以“ On the Internet”为题写一段80词的短文。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
互联网的主要用途：
信息→看国内新闻,获取其他信息
通讯→发电子邮件,打电话
学习→上网上学校,阅览各种书籍,自学外语
娱乐→欣赏音乐,观看体育比赛,玩棋牌游戏
生活→购物
On
the Internet
The
Internet is very important in our daily life.
We
can do shopping, have a chat with others and make friends with them.
6．为了准备考试, Jim很忙。每天晚上都学习到很晚才睡觉, 甚至一日三餐都不能按时吃。
但是, 他发现自己的学习效果并不是很好。经常会忘记刚刚才记住的知识。他很苦恼, 在网上发帖向大家求助。请以Peter的名义给Jim写封信提一些建议。
要求: 语法正确, 语言通顺, 80词左右。
生词提示: regularly规律地
7．许多伟大的发明家用他们的发明改变了世界, 让我们生活得更好。你想成为一个小小发明家吗 请以My invention为题, 根据以下提示内容写一篇作文。
要求: 语法正确, 语言通顺, 80词左右, 可根据提示内容适当发挥。
提示:
1). 水陆两用汽车: 既可以在陆地上跑, 也可以在水下跑;
2). 这种汽车两侧有两个翅膀, 下面有四个轮子, 在地面上时, 跟普通汽车一样, 但在水下时, 四个轮子会隐藏在车底, 两侧的翅膀会变为两个船桨促使汽车前行;
3). 比一般的汽车更方便、更省油; 节约资源, 减少污染。
生词提示: hide (隐藏), resource (资源), paddle (桨)
8．下面的表格是某中学八年级(1)班学生上学方式的调查表，请用英语写 一篇短文简要介绍一下这个表格。
上学方式 by bus on foot by bike take subway by taxi
学生人数 15 8 12 1 0
要求：1.题目自拟，词数不少于70; 2.短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
9．写作
以 I like collecting ________ 为题，写一篇短文，内容包括:
1.What do you collect
2.When did you start
3.How do you get them
4.Why do you like collecting them
5.What do you get from your collection
要求：
1补全题目；
2要点齐全，字迹工整，词数不少于80。
I like collecting ……
10．写作
新学期开始, 学校组织了不同的课外兴趣班。下面表格中是八年级六班的学生参加课外活动的情况。这个班级共有48名同学。请根据表格及提示内容写一份报告, 阐述一下具体情况。Clubs TheEnglish Club The Computer Club Thetable tennis Club Others
The Number: 8 21 14 5
提示:
1 参加电脑社团的学生最多(the most), 可见大部分(most of)学生喜欢玩电脑;
2 很多学生也参加乒乓球社团, 可见很多同学也喜欢运动
答案解析部分
1．【答案】Dear Alice,
Thank you for your email! There are some ways for you to improve your memory.
First, you can try doing some new things and change your daily habits. What's more, you can also do some guessing games or Maths puzzles. Your brain will get a lot of exercise if you do these things. Last, you must give your brain enough time to rest and have a balanced diet. You also need to relax.
I believe that you can improve your memory soon.
Yours,
Lucy
【知识点】提纲作文；书信、电子邮件
【解析】【分析】这是一篇提纲作文。要求给你的好友Alice写封回信，告诉她如何锻炼大脑才能提高记忆力。信的开头和结尾已经给出，写作时用第一人称，适当的使用参考词汇或短语，注意提示，不要逐句翻译，恰当的使用并列词使上下文连贯流畅。
【点评】这篇短文主要介绍了通过锻炼大脑提高记忆力的三种方法，使用了一些表示顺序的单词或短语， First ， What's more, Last， 使本文更有条理性。最后一句话写出了对朋友的期望。
2．【答案】 Our school has made a survey on students' activities on weekends recently. According to the results, 25 percent of the students watch TV, movies or chat with friends on WeChat during the weekends. There are 20 percent of our students reading books at home. Then 40 percent of the students play computer games. Only 15 percent of the students like to do some sports, such as playing basketball or football, running or swimming.
As far as I am concerned, we should have a meaningful weekend. We'd better not spend too much time playing computer games. We should make full use of the weekends.
【知识点】提纲作文
【解析】【分析】这篇作文要求我们根据题目的要求写一篇报告，阐述具体的周末活动情况。题目中给出了一个调查数据表格，我们需要用正确的英语将这些内容表达出来。通过分析可知，这篇作文我们应该用一般现在时态，第三人称来叙述。写作时，我们应注意语句之间的连接，可以使用一些简单的连词。也可以用一些我们平时积累的好的句型和短语，使短文的表达具有连贯性。
【点评】写作时要注意一下几点：（1）应抓住文章中心，围绕主题，根据提示列出要写的信息要点；（2）注意内容是否充实、积极和健康；（3）注意文章的结构层次，要凸显文章的主题；（4）要注意语言规范，表达准确，选材造句都尽量使用学过、见过的语言材料。高分句型As far as I am concerned, we should have a meaningful weekend. We'd better not spend too much time playing computer games.。
3．【答案】 There are forty-eight students in Class One, Grade Two, Chengcai Middle School. This is a survey about how they spent last Saturday.
Twelve students had classes outside the school. Eighteen students did their homework and read books at home. Ten students helped their parents do the housework. Five students said they climbed mountains with their family or their friends. They had a nice Saturday. Only three students were quite lazy. They slept late and played computer games.
From the survey we can see that most of the students are hard-working. But I think students also need to relax themselves sometimes.
【知识点】材料作文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇材料作文。本文要求按照所给的材料，完成这篇关于“成才中学同学们在二年级一班上周六的活动情况的报告”的文章，写作中要包含表格提到的所有内容。根据材料内容，可知本文主要用一般过去式，在描述学生的调查结果的时候，用第三人称，在表达自己的看法时，用第一人称，注意动词过去式的变化。写作中注意上下文的过渡要符合逻辑关系。
【点评】这篇短文简单准确的表述了调查结果，时态运用得当，文章段落清晰明了，句子通顺，行文连贯。并用到了宾语从句，如Five students said they climbed mountains with their family or their friends。一些好词好句为文章填色不少，如 did their homework，read books，helped their parents do ，played computer games，relax themselves等。
4．【答案】Reading
Reading has a lot of pleasure. Most of us
cannot enjoy ourselves without friends, but when reading, we can have fun on
our own. While staying alone in our houses, we can travel around the world and
we can know lots of things through reading. Today, we can communicate with
those who lived thousands of years ago. We can become friends of clever men's. Only
books give us this kind of happiness. Those who cannot enjoy books are poor
people. Those who enjoy reading books can get a great deal of happiness.
【知识点】提纲作文
【解析】【分析】本文是一篇命题作文， 要求以Reading为题,写篇关于书籍为我们带来益处的短文。全文要求描述读书可以使得你在没有朋友在一起时,你也可以享受到乐趣，能周游世界，你可以与生活在几千年前的古人交流，读书可以使我们成为聪明人的朋友,这能给我们快乐。写作时，要注意谓语动词形式的变化，写作要点已给出，不可以逐词翻译。
【点评】全文要用一般现在时进行描述，文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点，行文间要注意简化描述，用简短的语句代替冗长的语句，在作文完成的时候，应该检查、修改，以免遗漏一些需要表达清楚的要点和细节，文章拼写正确，语法运用得当，本文最大亮点是 we can communicate with those who lived thousands of years ago，Those who cannot enjoy books are poor people. Those who enjoy reading books can get a great deal of happiness 等定语从句的使用，使语言灵活，语法规则正确，使整篇短文意思连贯，表达流畅。
5．【答案】On
the Internet
The Internet is very important in our daily
life.
On the Internet, we can learn news both at
home and abroad. And we can also learn all kinds of information. We can send
emails to our friends on the Internet. We can even make phone calls, go to
online school, read many books and learn foreign languages by ourselves. If we
are free, we can enjoy music, watch sports and play chess and cards on the
Internet. We can do shopping, have a chat with others and make friends with
them.
【知识点】命题作文；书信、电子邮件
【解析】【分析】这是一篇命题作文，题目是“ On the Internet”，主要介绍互联网的主要用途，注意时态是一般现在时，首先介绍互联网在通讯和信息方面的作用；然后介绍互联网在学习上的作用；最后介绍互联网在娱乐生活上的作用。为文章增色，注意运用好词好句，同时注意恰当使用连词，使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
【点评】写作时注意作文内容全面，运用好词好句，如：both...and；all kinds of；send...to...；by oneself；do+动词ing；make friends with等。状语从句和宾语从句的运用为文章增色不少，如：If we are free, we can enjoy music, watch sports and play chess and cards on the Internet. 等。连词both...and；and；if的运用使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
6．【答案】Dear Jim, I have known your problem. In my opinion, you can't remember things well because you have a bad memory now. You have a bad memory mostly because you don't sleep or eat well. I know exams are important, but you should sleep and eat well first. When you have a good sleep and eat healthily and regularly, you can have a good memory and study better. What's more, you should be relaxed. If you are always nervous, you can' t remember things well. I hope your memory can become better soon.Yours,Peter
【知识点】应用文写作
【解析】【分析】本题是写一篇给定材料的书面表达，写作的话题为建议信，在写作时应注意符合题意，根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。
写作步骤：
一、阅读提示，弄清所有信息，明确写作要点。
1.知道了对方的问题。ave known your problem.
2.记忆不好是因为睡眠不够。can't remember things well；have a bad memory
3.按时吃饭按时睡觉是保证良好记忆的关键。have a good sleep；eat healthily
4.学会放松。be relaxed.
5.希望你很快会好起来。become better soon
二、根据要点，写出关键词、短语或句子。
三、组词成句。连句成篇。注意使用一般现在时。
【点评】本题考查对所学知识的综合运用，熟练使用相关短语、单词和句型，注意词性的搭配，时态的把握，人称的使用等细节问题。
7．【答案】(One possible version)My invention My invention is a car. People can use it on the land or in the water. This kind of car has two wings on its two sides and four wheels under the car. On the ground, it can run as well as the ordinary car. However, when it is in the water, the four wheels will hide under the car and the two wings will become two paddles to make the car go pared with the ordinary car, this kind of car is more convenient and uses less petrol. More importantly, it can save resources and make less pollution. I think my invention will help people live a better life in the future.
【知识点】命题作文；提纲作文
【解析】【分析】本身是根据所给材料写一篇说明文，在写作时应注意符合题意，根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。
写作步骤：
一、阅读提示，弄清所有信息，明确写作要点。
1.我的发明是一辆汽车，既可以在陆地上跑, 也可以在水下跑
2.这种汽车两侧有两个翅膀, 下面有四个轮子
3.在地面上时, 跟普通汽车一样
4.但在水下时, 四个轮子会隐藏在车底, 两侧的翅膀会变为两个船桨促使汽车前行;
5.比一般的汽车更方便、更省油; 节约资源, 减少污染
6.我认为我的发明能帮助人们过更好的生活。
二、根据要点，写出关键词、短语或句子。
三、组词成句。连句成篇。注意使用一般现在时。
【点评】本题考查对本单元所学知识的综合运用，熟练使用相关短语、单词和句型，注意词性的搭配，时态的把握，人称的使用等细节问题。
8．【答案】 Ways to School
There are thirty-six students in Class 1, Grade 8. Every day they go to school in different ways. Fifteen students take buses because they live far from the school. Eight students go to school on foot. They live near the school. They think it is good for their health to walk. Twelve students ride their bikes to school because they like riding and their homes are not very far from the school. Only one student takes the subway. No one goes to school by taxi. Taking a taxi is a little expensive.
【知识点】其他类作文
【解析】【分析】从表格中可以看到八年级（1）班的学生总数是36人，有四种不同的上学方式。在写好每种上学方式的学生人数时，可以补充下选择此种交通工具的原因，如 Fifteen students take buses because they live far from the school.以此为例写剩余的几种上学方式。
【点评】注意句与句之间的连贯性，句子的表达要符合英文习惯。
9．【答案】I like collecting stamps
Different people have different hobbies. Some people like raising flowers, and others like building model ships. I like collecting stamps.
My father works in a big company. He always goes abroad. Two years ago, when he was working abroad, he sent home a letter with a beautiful stamp on the envelope. I liked the stamp very much. Since then I always ask my father to send me different stamps from different countries.
Now I have more than one thousand stamps. From these stamps I can learn a lot. When I look through these beautiful stamps, I feel relaxed and happy.
【解析】【分析】这是一篇半命题作文，并围绕命题给出了五个问题，作为文章的提纲，这种形式本身的要点已经很明确，重点也很突出，只要把各个提纲加以发挥，注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性，就 不会造成审题不清而偏离主题，但要注意，文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点。
10．【答案】例文：
At the beginning of the new term, there are differentafter-class activities in our school. There are forty-eight students in ClassSix, Grade Eight. Twenty-one students joined the Computer Club. And the numberof students in the Computer Club is the most. We can see that most of thestudents like to play computers. There are fourteen students joining the TableTennis Club. We can see that many students also love to do some sports. Eightstudents joined the English Club. There are only five students in other clubs.
【解析】【分析】本篇作文要求根据表格中的提示内容写报告。从表格中可以看出有很多数字，这就要求同学们在写作时正确地表达数字。写作之后，要检查一下语法、标点符号、阐述数字的方式是否正确，表格中的内容是否有遗漏等等。写作本篇作文可用到的短语，句型结构: at thebeginning of ..., there are ..., the number of ..., join clubs, most of thestudents等等。
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