写一篇善意谎言的短文
本单元要求写一篇关于善意谎言的短文,属于议论文的写作范畴。
[基本框架]
开头(the beginning)——陈述观点
主体(the body)——列举原因和证据
结尾(the ending)——简要总结
[常用词块]
1.arouse people's concerns 引起人们的关注
2.bring a lot of benefits to us 给我们带来很多益处
3.can not resist the temptation 不能抵制诱惑
4.arrive at/draw a conclusion 得出结论
5.cope with the problems处理这些问题
6.cherish the wild animals 珍惜野生动物
[常用语句]
★精彩开头
1.There is a widespread concern over the issue that...but I think...
2.We've had a discussion about whether...
★正文佳句
1.Some people think that...while others argue that...
2.If we can make good use of time,there is no doubt that...
★余味结尾
1.From what has been discussed above,we can conclude that...
2.Therefore,I firmly believe that...
假定你是李华,本月是你校的读书月。作为校报的记者,你做了一项调查,发现很多学生忙于作业,没有时间进行课外阅读。请你就此用英文写一篇文章,阐述自己的看法,内容包括:
1.阅读的好处;
2.呼吁大家多读好书。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:课外阅读extra curricular reading
[学生习作]
Last week,I carried out a survey on extra curricular reading in our school.In my opinion,reading plays an important part in your study and life.
First,reading can broaden your vision.You can gain knowledge from the books you read.You can also be inspired and encouraged by books.The more you read,the more attractive you may find reading is.
In short,reading is very useful.Read some good books every day,and you'll find reading makes a difference to your life.
点评:
1.本篇习作符合写作要求,能够提出观点,分析原因,简要总结,结构合理,内容充实。
2.能够使用动词 ing形式作主语、the more...the more...句型,以及“祈使句+and+陈述句”结构,使得文章表达流畅,语言丰富,更有层次感。
3.第一段两句话之间不衔接,缺少过渡语句。
[升格作文]
Last week,I carried out a survey on extra curricular reading in our school and found many students didn't do the reading because of their heavy homework.As far as I'm concerned,we students should pay attention to the reading.
Extra curricular reading can broaden our horizons.Not only can we gain knowledge from the books we read,but also we can get inspiration and encouragement.The more we read,the more attractive we may find reading is.
In conclusion,reading is of great use.Read some good books every day,and you'll find reading makes a difference to your life.
在许多校园内,浪费现象普遍,造成很多不良影响。请你根据下列要点用英语写一篇短文,建议同学们从自身做起,减少浪费。
1.很多同学养成浪费的习惯;
2.浪费容易形成坏的饮食习惯,对健康成长不利;
3.浪费会增加父母的经济负担;
4.浪费会使有限的资源得不到充分利用。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当添加细节;
3.开头已写好。
参考词汇:经济负担 financial burden;资源resources
Nowadays it's common to see students wasting things in school.
【参考范文】
Nowadays it's common to see students wasting things in school.Many students have formed the habit of wasting things.For example,some leave the lights on in the daytime,or let water running after washing their hands.
As we all know,these bad habits will have a bad influence on our character and behavior.They not only increase our cost at school and add financial burden to our parents,but also waste the limited resources.
In my opinion,it's high time that we should deal with this problem.And above all,we should start with ourselves and take the lead in reducing the waste.INCLUDEPICTURE "表达.TIF"
写一篇关于职业规划的短文
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本单元要求写一篇关于职业规划的短文,属于说明文的写作范畴。
[基本框架]
开头(the beginning)——引出职业
主体(the body)——列举原因
结尾(the ending)——提出展望
[常用词块]
1.share more dream careers with you 同你分享更多理想的职业
2.keep updating 持续更新
3.have great expectations for the future job对未来的工作有很大的期望
4.enriching their life experience丰富他们的生活阅历
5.live a well off life过上小康生活
6.a highly qualified tour guide一位高素质的导游
[常用语句]
★精彩开头
1.Some want to be doctors,some want to be teachers,and some want to be engineers.
有人想当医生,有人想当老师,有人想当工程师。
2.My dream career is to be a tour guide.
我梦想的职业是当一名导游。
★正文佳句
1.I can enjoy myself during the summer and winter holidays.
我可以在暑假和寒假里玩得很开心。
2.I have been admiring tour guides who travel worldwide,enjoying the spectacular scenery,appreciating different cultures and enriching their life experience at the same time.
我一直很羡慕环游世界的导游,他们能欣赏壮观的风景,欣赏不同的文化,同时丰富他们自己的生活阅历。
★余味结尾
1.In a word,I will study harder than ever to prepare for my future teaching job.
总之,我将比以往任何时候都更加努力地学习,为我未来的教学工作做准备。
2.Therefore,my dream cannot be fulfilled without industrious work to pave the way.
因此,没有辛勤的工作来铺路,我的梦想就无法实现。
请你以“My Ideal Job(我理想的职业)”为题写一篇80词左右的短文,要求包括以下要点:
1.人们有不同的理想职业;
2.我理想的职业是什么;
3.我怎样为我理想的职业做准备。
[学生习作]
My Ideal Job
I want to be a teacher in the future.Firstly,I like children and enjoy playing with them.Secondly,I can enjoy myself during the summer and winter vacations.Finally,I want to teach students knowledge to ensure them to work better in the future.
In order to be a good teacher,I will study hard all the time.I have to improve my handwriting and make myself more knowledgeable.
In a word,I will study harder than ever to prepare for my future teaching job.
点评:
1.本篇习作符合写作要求,能够对自己未来理想的职业进行合理描述,原因贴合实际,内容丰富充实。
2.该篇写作能够使用firstly,secondly,finally等过渡词,使得文章更加有条理。
3.文章简单句过多,同时词汇方面还应该斟酌。
[升格作文]
My Ideal Job
My ideal job is going into teaching.Firstly,I like children very much.Secondly,a teacher has two vacations each year and I can enjoy myself during the vacations.Finally,I want to teach students all that I know so that they can work better for our country in the future.
In order to be a good teacher,I will study hard not only in class,but also in daily life.I will train my patience,improve my handwriting,and enrich my knowledge.In a word,I will study harder than ever to prepare for my future teaching job.
在成长的过程中,我们总是对未来的职业充满憧憬。请以“My Dream Career” 为题写一篇英语短文,内容包括:
1.你的理想职业;
2.选择它的理由。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可根据内容要点适当发挥,以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
My Dream Career
My dream career is to be a tour guide.Since my early age,I have been admiring tour guides who travel worldwide,enjoying the spectacular scenery,appreciating different cultures and enriching their life experience at the same time.Besides,this career is financially rewarding as well so that I can live a well off life.Additionally,I will have more opportunities to meet people from all walks of life,which is both challenging and interesting.
To be a good guide is no easy job,for it requires years of arduous practice and continual learning.So I must spare no effort to achieve my dream.给校报写一篇号召人们多读书的短文
本单元要求给校报写一篇号召人们多读书的短文,属于投稿信的写作范畴。
[基本框架]
开头(the beginning)——投稿目的
主体(the body)——分析原因
结尾(the ending)——给出建议
[常用词块]
1.broaden our vision开阔我们的视野
2.be of benefit to our life对我们的生活有益
3.get hold of a large amount of information掌握大量信息
4.have access to knowledge 获取知识
5.cultivate people's reading habits培养人们的阅读习惯
6.keep up with the pace of the world跟上世界的步伐
[常用语句]
★精彩开头
1.Book of medicine also,good reading can cure a fool.
书犹药也,善读之可以医愚。
2.We all know that reading has a lot of benefits.
我们都知道阅读有很多益处。
★正文佳句
1.What we learn from class is limited.We need to read as much as possible to fulfill our mind.
我们从课堂上学到的东西是有限的,我们需要尽可能多的阅读来充实我们的思想。
2.Reading can broaden our knowledge and horizons,which is important to job hunting in the future.
阅读可以拓宽我们的知识面和视野,这对将来找工作很重要。
★余味结尾
1.Then,you may find the great charm and benefits of reading.
然后,你就会发现阅读的巨大魅力和好处了。
2.In short,the benefits of reading are e on! Let us soar in the sky of knowledge fully!
总而言之,读书的好处数不胜数。来吧!让我们在知识的天空尽情地翱翔吧!
假如你是李华,请你根据下面要点提示给校报写一篇短文,介绍阅读的好处。
1.可以增长见识;
2.可以提高阅读和写作能力;
3.开阔眼界,为未来工作打基础;
4.可以提高自我修养。
注意:词数80左右。(开头已给出,不计入总词数)
I think reading is important in the whole life for people.There are many benefits of reading.
[学生习作]
I think reading is important in the whole life for people.There are many benefits of reading.
Firstly,reading can make us knowledgeable and we can learn the outside world well.Secondly,reading can improve our skills of reading and writing.You can learn more from others.Thirdly,reading can broaden our knowledge and horizons.It is important for you to find a job in the future.Finally,reading can help us improve self cultivation which would be of great benefit to our life.
In a word,start reading at once and then you may find the great charm and benefits of reading.
点评:
1.本篇习作符合写作要求,能够提出观点,分析原因,简要总结,结构合理,内容充实。
2.该生能够使用firstly,secondly,thirdly等过渡词,使得文章更加连贯;同时动词 ing形式作主语,it作形式主语等高级句式的使用,增添了文章的语言色彩。
[升格作文]
I think reading is important in the whole life for people.There are many benefits of reading.
Firstly,reading increases our knowledge and we can learn the world affairs without going out.Secondly,reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills.Before you learn to write,you must know how others write.Thirdly,reading can broaden our knowledge and horizons,which is important to job hunting in the future.Finally,reading helps us become self cultivated that would be beneficial to our whole life.
Therefore,start reading,no matter how old you are and what you are doing.Then you may find the great charm and benefits of reading.
假如你是李华,某中学生英文报就“保护中国传统文化”为主题举行英语征文活动。你准备给该报投稿,稿件内容包括:
1.保护中国传统文化的重要性;
2.谈谈你对文化保护的建议。
注意:词数80左右。
【参考范文】
Dear editor,
I know that the readers are expected to have a discussion on the topic of Protecting Traditional Chinese Culture.I have a strong desire to share my personal view on it.
In my opinion,some measures should be taken to protect traditional culture effectively.We should make a law to regulate the society's performance.What's more,we should draw more people's attention to it,for the more they know about the importance of culture protection,the stronger support we can get from the public.
In a word,it is high time we should treasure and develop our own valuable culture.
Yours,
Li Hua写一篇介绍汉语学习流行的短文
本单元要求写一篇介绍汉语学习流行的短文,属于现象类短文的写作范畴。
[基本框架]
开头(the beginning)——引出现象
主体(the body)——分析原因
结尾(the ending)——简要总结
[常用词块]
1.reflect our economic development反映我们的经济发展
2.Confucius Institute 孔子学院
3.the charm of Chinese language 汉语的魅力
4.ignore the importance of their mother language 忽略了他们母语的重要性
5.take the responsibility to popularize it承担起推广它的责任
6.contribute to the Chinese learning为汉语学习做贡献
[常用语句]
★精彩开头
1.More and more foreigners are learning Chinese in recent years.
2.There are three main reasons contributing to the Chinese learning fever.
★正文佳句
1.With the deepening of China's reform and opening up,more foreigners would like to invest in China,do business with Chinese people and travel around China.
2.Traditional Chinese culture is generally accepted by the world in the post industrial age.
★余味结尾
1.In my opinion,it is a natural phenomenon for people to learn another language with the aim of deepening international understanding.
2.It can be predicted that with the continuous development of China,the Chinese learning fever will keep booming.
近几年,“汉语热”(Chinese Rush)在世界各地不断升温。请结合提供的要点,以“Chinese Rush”为题写一篇短文,介绍一下各种学汉语的活动以及“汉语热”的原因。
要点:①各种汉语电视节目、汉语比赛越来越流行;
②来中国学习汉语的人越来越多;
③中国有悠久的历史、丰富的文化(rich culture);
④中国越来越富有、强大……
要求:1.词数80左右;
2.文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Chinese Rush
As a Chinese,I'm very proud of the popularity of Chinese in the world.
[学生习作]
Chinese Rush
As a Chinese,I'm very proud of the popularity of Chinese in the world.More and more programmes of Chinese learning and competitions are on TV.More than 200 Confucius Institutes have been set up in over 60 countries.More and more foreign students come to China to learn Chinese every year.
There are three main reasons why Chinese is so popular in the world.First,China has a long history and rich culture,which many foreigners are interested in.Second,China is getting richer and stronger.Last but not least,many large scale events let the world learn China better.
点评:
1.本篇习作符合写作要求,全面翔实地分析了“汉语热”这一现象,并具体分析了其原因。
2.该篇写作能够使用定语从句等高级句式,同时使用first,second,last but not least等连接词,使得文章更加连贯通畅,是一篇上乘的学生习作。
[升格作文]
Chinese Rush
As a Chinese,I'm very proud of the popularity of Chinese in the world.There are more and more programmes of Chinese learning and Chinese competitions on TV.More than 200 Confucius Institutes have been set up in over 60 countries.The number of foreign students who come to China to learn Chinese increases every year.
Why is Chinese becoming so popular in the world There are three main reasons,I think.First,China has a long history and rich culture.Many foreigners are interested in them.Second,China is getting richer and stronger.Last but not least,many large scale events let the world learn China better.
随着手机功能日益增多,越来越多的年轻人沉迷于手机娱乐活动,成为“手机控”。假定你是某校学生,请根据以下提示写一篇短文,向某英文报投稿,谈谈你对该现象的看法和建议。
要求:
1.内容须包括所提示信息,可适当发挥;
2.词数80左右;
3.文章开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
提示词:“手机控”(phone freaks)
Today,many people,especially young people,are phone freaks.
【参考范文】
Today,many people,especially young people,are phone freaks.They are addicted to their mobile phones,so they have less time to communicate with their friends and family members.They often feel anxious without mobile phones.
Depending on mobile phones too much is a kind of illness,which is bad for our health.Looking at the mobile phones too often is bad for our eyes and it is also a waste of time and gets in the way of study.
Phones can help us a lot.If we can use them at proper time and proper situations,they can help us have a better and happier life.