写一篇关于外星人的故事
本单元要求写一篇关于外星人的故事，属于故事类的写作范畴。
[基本框架]
开头(the beginning)——引出故事
主体(the body)——具体过程
结尾(the ending)——自我感受
[常用词块]
1．a series of attacks 一连串的袭击行为
2．muddy footprints on the kitchen floor 厨房地板上的泥脚印
3．a frightening experience一次可怕的经历
4．a reported sighting of the UFO据报道有人看见飞碟
5．bring sth．to light 披露某事
6．due to human error 由于人为错误
[常用语句]
★精彩开头
1．The monster of．．．is back in the news．．．
……怪物……又上新闻了。
2．It is known to all that．．．
众所周知……
3．It lies in．．．
它在于……
4．It looks like．．．
它看起来像……
★丰满主体
1．Some scientists think that．．．
一些科学家认为……
2．Some people believe in its existence，because．．．
有些人相信它的存在，因为……
3．By recent research，we can learn that．．．
通过最近的研究，我们可以了解到……
4．Other scientists consider．．．
其他科学家认为……
★余味结尾
1．Personally，I(don't)believe．．．
就我个人而言，我(不)相信……
2．As far as I am concerned，I think．．．
就我而言，我认为……
3．In my point of view，I believe．．．
在我看来，我相信……
假如你是李华，请根据下面的提示写一篇英语短文，介绍你遇到外星人的一次经历。
1．发现UFO，两个外星人走出来，他们有着绿色皮肤和绿色的眼睛，不到一米高。
2．他们挖土装进袋子，回到飞碟然后飞走了。
3．你的感受。
注意：1．词数80左右；
2．可以适当增添细节，以使行文连贯。
[学生习作]
One day, I was walking in the field when I saw a UFO flying in the sky．It landed in the field and two aliens walked out of it, who had green skin and green eyes．They were no more than one meter tall．The two aliens began to dig some soil and put it into a bag．Then they went back to the UFO and went away．How unforgettable an experience it was． 点评：1.该篇习作符合故事类短文的写作要求，对整个过程描述完整，而且最后给出自己的感受。2.文章能够使用be doing...when..., 定语从句等高级句式，使得文章表达更加连贯。3.高级词汇使用较少，可以适当增添一些高级词汇和短语，增添文章的语言色彩。
[升格作文]
One day, I was walking in the field when I heard a strange noise from the sky．It was a UFO!
It began to land in the field and two aliens just came out．They had green skin and green eyes．They were not more than one meter tall．I was so frightened that I could do nothing but try to hide behind a tree．
The two aliens dug some soil and put it into a bag．After that they came back to the UFO and flew away．
What an unforgettable experience I had!
请你根据下列提示写一篇关于遇到外星人的经历。
1．在学校后面的山上玩，发现了一个飞碟。
2．外星人非常矮，没有头发，但有两只长耳朵。
3．外星人看见我们非常吃惊。我们对他们微笑，并做出拥抱的动作。
【参考范文】
I，together with my classmates，went to the hill behind our school after class yesterday.To our surprise, we found a UFO.Two aliens stood beside. Different from our imagination, aliens were really short. They didn't have hair but two long ears. Their puppy eyes made them look cute and kind. They seemed shocked, but we were not scared. We smiled at them and tried to hug them. They smiled back.
Though we don't understand their language，I think we still could communicate with them．写一封介绍家乡的电子邮件
本单元的写作项目是写一封介绍家乡的电子邮件，属于书信的写作范畴。
[基本框架]
开头(the beginning)——引出写邮件的目的
主体(the body)——详细介绍你的家乡
结尾(the ending)——发出邀请
[常用词块]
1．be located/situated in/on．．．坐落在……
2．cover an area of．．．占地……
3．has a large population人口众多
4．date back to the Tang Dynasty追溯到唐朝
5．has many places of interest有很多名胜
6．is famous for its beautiful West Lake因美丽的西湖而闻名
[常用语句]
★精彩开头
1．I am so glad to know that you will come to Tibet for a visit．Now let me introduce something about Tibet for you．
我很高兴知道你会来西藏参观。现在让我为你介绍一下西藏。
2．I'm pleased that you're coming to tour in China．
我很高兴你要来中国观光。
★正文佳句
1．It is located in the southwest of China．It has a population of about 2.8 million，covering an area of more than 1.2 million square kilometers．
它位于中国的西南部。约有280万人口，占地面积达120多万平方公里。
2．Yibin is an important transportation center of Sichuan Province，with high speed rail，expressways，waterways and airlines conveniently available to the city．
宜宾是四川省重要的交通枢纽，高铁、高速公路、水路和航空交通都十分便利。
★余味结尾
1．Looking forward to seeing you．I believe we'll have a good day．
很期待见到你。我相信我们会有美好的一天。
2．Provided you can visit my school some day，I will show you around it．
假如有一天你能参观我的学校，我将会带你参观一下。
假定你是李华，你的美国朋友 Sarah 打算暑期来北京旅游，发邮件向你询问改建后的前门大街的情况。请你回复邮件，内容包括：
1．简况：长845米、 600 多年历史、 300 余家商铺；
2．位置：天安门广场南面；
3．交通：公共汽车 17 、 69 、 59 等路，地铁2号线；
4．特色：步行街、铛铛车、茶馆、剧院等。
注意：1．词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：步行街 pedestrian street；铛铛车trolley car；地铁 subway
Dear Sarah，
Thank you for your letter asking about the rebuilt of Qianmen Street．Here is something about it．
I'm sure you'll like it．
Yours，
Li Hua
[学生习作]
Dear Sarah，Thank you for your letter asking about the rebuilt of Qianmen Street．Here is something about it．Qianmen Street is a famous street of over 600 years old．On this 845 metre street，there are more than 300 shops．As the street is in the center of Beijing，just on the south of Tian'anmen Square，it's very convenient to get there by bus．You may take buses No．17，69 or 59！Subway Line 2 has a stop there too．Qianmen Street is a pedestrian street，but it has trolley cars to take you not only to the shops，but also to the theaters and tea houses where you can experience a true Chinese way of life．I'm sure you'll like it．Yours，Li Hua 点评：1．本文能够概括介绍前门大街的情况。2．有两次关于介词on的错误使用。3．个别句式有错误。如：．．．it has trolley cars to take you．．．
[升格作文]
Dear Sarah，
Thank you for your letter asking about the rebuilt of Qianmen Street．Here is something about it．
Qianmen Street is a famous street，dating back to over 600 years ago．There are more than 300 shops along this 845 metre street．Just to the south of Tian'anmen Square，it's very convenient to get there by bus．You may take buses No．17，69 or 59！Subway Line 2 has a stop there too．Qianmen Street is a pedestrian street，but you can take trolley cars to the shops，the theaters and tea houses where you can experience a truly Chinese way of life．
I'm sure you'll like it．
Yours，
Li Hua
假定你是李华，你的朋友Jack要来你的家乡宜宾参观。请给他写封邮件表示欢迎并简要介绍你的家乡，内容包括：
1．自然环境；
2．人文环境(交通、生活等)；
3．表示欢迎。
注意：1．词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
Dear Jack，
I'm very glad to hear that you are going to pay a visit to my hometown．
Yibin is located in the south of Sichuan Province，in the intersection of Jinsha River，Min River and Yangtze River．It is a beautiful city with green water and green hills all around it．
Yibin is an important transportation center of Sichuan Province，with high speed rail，expressways，waterways and airlines conveniently available to the city．The new airport，about 10 km from the city's downtown area，operates flights to major cities．People who are happily living here are kind and hard working．They enjoy the convenience brought by modernization．
Can't wait to show you around in Yibin soon．
Yours，
Li Hua写一篇介绍书的短文
本单元要求写一篇介绍书的短文，属于书评类写作。
[基本框架]
开头(the beginning)——引出书目
主体(the body)——详细介绍
结尾(the ending)——我的评价
[常用词块]
1．get along well with our friends
和我们的朋友相处得很好
2．open a history gate to me给我打开了历史的大门
3．make efforts to do sth．努力做某事
4．in the form of a diary 以日记的形式
5．freeze to death 冻死
6．resist difficulties from the outside world
抵制来自外界的困难
[常用语句]
★精彩开头
1．I would like to introduce a good book called．．．
我想要介绍一本叫作……的好书。
2．My favourite book is The Lion Goes Wandering written by Shen Shixi．
我最喜欢的书是沈石溪写的《狮子去流浪》。
★正文佳句
1．The Old Man and the Sea is on the background of the story of Cuba in the 20th century．
《老人与海》以20世纪的古巴故事为背景。
2．Harry was such a brave and clever boy that he dared to fight against powerful enemies．
哈利是一个非常勇敢聪明的男孩，他敢于同强大的敌人战斗。
★余味结尾
1．The fiction is so meaningful that I can learn a lot from it．
这本小说很有意义，我可以从中学到很多东西。
2．I want to tell you through the book that maternal love is great．We should cherish maternal love and care about mothers．
我想通过这本书告诉大家，母爱是伟大的，我们应该珍惜母爱，关心母亲。
请你根据下面的提示，写一篇短文，介绍《哈利·波特》(Harry Potter)这本书：
1．作者J．K．罗琳(J．K．Rowling)，出生于1965年，写这本书之前是一个家庭主妇；
2．这本书被翻译成70多种语言，成为最畅销的书之一；
3．世界各地的人都成为哈利·波特迷。
注意：词数80左右。
[学生习作]
Harry Potter，written by J．K．Rowling is my favourite book．J．K．Rowling was born 1965，England．She was only a housewife before she wrote the book．The book made her life changed．The book has been translated into 65 languages．It became one of the best books in the world．The books were made into 7 films．People all over the world became a fan of Harry Potter，especially students．Many children also believed in Harry Potter's magic． 1．该篇习作涵盖了写作要点但不准确。2．文章用了较多的简单句，缺少高级句式，有语法错误。3．文章没有分段，层次不清晰。
[升格作文]
My favourite book is Harry Potter，written by J．K．Rowling．
J．K．Rowling was born in 1965，England．Before she wrote these books，she was only an ordinary housewife in Britain，but Harry Potter changed her life forever．
It is said that Harry Potter has become a global success，with over 400 million books sold and translated into more than 70 different languages，which makes J．K．Rowling an international bestselling writer．People all over the world，especially students，have become fans of Harry Potter．
请你根据下列提示描述一本你最喜欢的书籍：
1．最喜欢儒勒·凡尔纳(Jules Verne 科幻小说之父)的小说《八十天环游地球》(Around the World in Eighty Days)。
2．讲的是一个英国绅士Phileas Fogg和人打赌80天环游世界的故事。描写了他旅途中遇到的困难和经历的事件。
3．通过这本书我们能了解到作者对大海的热爱。
注意：词数80左右。
【参考范文】
My favourite novel is Around the World in Eighty Days，written by Jules Verne，who is acknowledged as “Father of Science Fiction”．
This science fiction tells us an exciting story about an English gentleman，Mr．Phileas Fogg，who makes a bet with his clubmates and manages to travel around the world in eighty days．It gives us a vivid description of the many difficulties and incidents which happen on his journey．
From this story，we can see the author's deep love for the sea，travel and adventure，which played a vital role in his life．写一篇关于遗址保护的倡议书
本单元要求写一篇关于遗址保护的倡议书。
[基本框架]
开头(the beginning)——倡议目的
主体(the body)——倡议内容
结尾(the ending)——发出号召
[常用词块]
1．be of great significance 非常重要
2．in favor of 支持
3．contribute to the tourism 有助于旅游业
4．make good use of heritage sites充分利用遗址
5．the enhancement of people's protection 加强人民的保护
6．raise the awareness of．．．提高……的意识
[常用语句]
★精彩开头
1．It is very important to preserve cultural heritage sites．
2．A lot of cultural heritage sites are in great danger and it is our duty to protect them．
★正文佳句
1．Many people hold the view that cultural heritage sites should be well preserved．
2．Unfortunately，some of the cultural heritage sites have been damaged．
★余味结尾
1．In short，the cultural heritage of human development has an indelible impact；we should protect the cultural heritage，actively repair the damaged heritage of human civilization and contribute to the development．
2．We should keep our mind clear and take more effective measures to protect heritage sites．
文化遗产是古代伟大文明的象征，保护文化遗产可以增强我们的民族自豪感。请你写一篇80词左右的倡议书，提倡保护文化遗产。
[学生习作]
It is important to protect cultural heritage．It is a symbol of great ancient civilization．Some of heritage sites have something to do with great people，so we should protect them to show respect for them．We can make our students feel proud to protect heritage sites．They are of great value．We have made great progresses in protecting heritage sites．But there are still many problems to be solved．We students should learn knowledge of heritage sites by heart and take active steps to protect them． 点评：1．该篇习作符合倡议书的写作要求。2．句式单调，文中用了很多简单句。3．一些代词及名词用法有误，如第二句的it以及第二段的progresses。
[升格作文]
It is important to protect cultural heritage．Cultural heritage is a symbol of great ancient civilization．Most cultural heritage is related to great people，so protecting it shows respect for them．Cultural heritage is of great value and protecting it can make us feel proud of our nation．
Our country's cultural heritage protection has made great progress，but many problems still exist and need to be solved．Therefore，we should keep our mind clear and take more effective steps to better protect cultural heritage．
请你根据下文提示，写一篇短文，提倡保护文化遗产：
1．为了地方经济而破坏文化遗产是一种短见；
2．保护文化遗产的重要性；
3．个人看法。
注意：词数80左右。
【参考范文】
It's alarming to see that many heritage places have to give way to construction of local economy，which I personally think is short sighted．
It's common sense that cultural relics are part of our history as well as our present life．In my personal opinion, to destroy cultural heritage means ruining our culture and betraying our history．Therefore, things must be done to stop the irresponsible action．As far as I'm concerned, we should first spare no effort to make people realize the importance and necessity of protecting cultural heritage, which seems a challenging task．
