2024年中考英语复习冲刺特训:读写综合之书面表达
A
初中生活即将结束,你一定参加过各种伴随着你成长的社团,如篮球队、合唱团等。请以“My Favorite Club at School”为题,写一篇英文短文,向校刊的School Life栏目投稿,介绍你最喜欢的社团。
注意:(1) 短文必须包括思维导图中的所有要点,并适当发挥;
(2) 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
(3) 词数:100左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My Favorite Club at School
In our school, there are many clubs which I have been in.
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【答案】
My Favorite Club at School
In our school, there are many clubs which I have been in. There are the Robot Club, the Solar Power Club, the Singing Club and so on. All of them are fun and interesting. My favorite
club is the Photography Club because I love taking photos very much.
In the club, the teacher told us how to take photos better. We often went out to practise our skills. And we showed our photos in the club. I made lots of friends in the club and I also became better at taking photos. It is interesting and exciting.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:根据所给内容介绍我最喜欢的俱乐部,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍参加的俱乐部以及最喜欢的俱乐部;
第二步,具体介绍自己经常做的活动;
第三步,介绍从俱乐部学到了什么。
[亮点词汇]
①take photos拍照
②make lots of friends交许多朋友
[高分句型]
①My favorite club is the Photography Club because I love taking photos very much. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②In the club, the teacher told us how to take photos better. (“疑问词+动词不定式”作宾语)
B
英语杂志社Sunday Mail正在开展以“One Thing I’m Proud of”为题的英语征文活动。请根据广告中的信息用英语写一篇100 词左右的征文,分享一件你自己认为自豪的事情。开头已给出 (不计词数)。
Articles Wanted
One Thing I’m Proud of
What is the thing you are proud of
When did it happen and what did you do
Why does this thing make you feel proud Or what important lesson did you learn from this thing
Tell us what you think!
Write an article answering these questions and we will publish the best ones in our magazine.
One Thing I’m Proud of
The thing I am proud of is that ________________________________________________
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【答案】
One Thing I’m Proud of
The thing I am proud of is that I visited some old people to make them happy.
It was on a fine autumn afternoon when I was still a teenager. I noticed an old grandma sitting silently under a tall tree in front of her house, looking rather sad and lonely. I went to have a chat with her. After our short conversation, I got to know that all the old women’s sons and daughters were far away from her, making their lives in big cities and she felt lonely. I felt sympathetic for her, and I realized that there were actually many old people like her in the village. So a good idea occurred to me suddenly.
I gathered my friends, and organized them to visit these old people one by one. We sang songs, danced and told jokes to them, which made them happy. One of them was so moved that tears fell down. Caring for those around us and passing our happiness to others are what have learnt that day. I made it, and I feel really proud of myself that gave comfort to those who needed most.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般过去时”为主;
③提示:根据所给广告中的信息完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图;
第二步,介绍事情发生的经过;
第三步,介绍这件事为什么使你感到骄傲或者从中学到什么重要的事情以及自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①silently静静地
②have a chat with sb.和某人聊天
③far away from…离……很远
④sympathetic同情的
⑤occur to被想起
[高分句型]
We sang songs, danced and told jokes to them, which made them happy.(which引导非限制性定语从句)
C
某班开展主题为“感受生活中的美”的主题班会活动,号召大家拥有发现美的眼睛。活动要求每位同学根据自己的经历或者见闻写一篇演讲稿,和同学们分享自己在生活中发现的美及感受。假如你是该班的同学,请你结合自己的经验,写一篇演讲稿。
内容包括:
·Tell a story about how you find the beauty in life.
·Express your feelings.
要求:
1. 词数不少于80;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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【答案】One Possible Version:
Life is full of beauty. If we put our heart to appreciate it, we will discover the simple but great beauty of life.
The heartwarming scene on the road is still fresh in my mind. An old man fell down on the road by accident. A middle school student walked forward to hold the man up. She was careful and gentle. And then, the people around them called 120. They took care of the old man until the ambulance arrived.
Thanks to those kind people, I realized that life was full of beauty. Many people will give others a hand when they are in trouble. And the experience makes it possible for me to always do right things.
【总体分析】①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态以“一般过去时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示中的要点,适当添加细节,突出写作重点。
【写作步骤】第一步,表明写作主题。点明主题“生活中充满美以及用心感受美”;
第二步,具体阐述故事内容。描述自己生活中发现美的经历;
第三步,书写感受。分享自己发现美的感受。
【亮点词汇】①be full of充满
②fall down摔倒
③take care of照顾,照料
④thanks to多亏了,由于
【高分句型】①If we put our heart to appreciate it, we will discover the simple but great beauty of life(if引导条件状语从句)
②They took care of the old man until the ambulance arrived.(until引导时间状语从句)
D
初三这一年,你一直为自己的目标而努力。而实现目标需要精细的计划、不懈的努力和他人的帮助。山西省某中学九年级四班对全年级300名同学就“What helps achieve your goal most ”做了一个调查,下图是调查的统计结果。
What helps achieve your goal most
假如你是该校九年级的学生,请结合以上图表信息,以“I Have Achieved My Goal”为题,用两段话写一篇英语短文。
内容包括:1. 简要说明图表内容;2. 从图表中任选一项,结合自己的经历,谈谈你是如何实现自己的目标的。
要求:1. 词数不少于80(首句已给出,不计入总词数);2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
I Have Achieved My Goal
Our school did a survey among 300 students on the topic of “What helps achieve your goal most ” Here are the results. ________________________________________________________
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【答案】
I Have Achieved My Goal
Our school did a survey among 300 students on the topic of “What helps achieve your goal most ” Here are the results. According to the survey, 22% of the students think a good plan is important. 30% of the students think others’ help may be necessary. 48% of the students think hard work can help achieve the goal most.
As for me, hard work is the most important way to achieve my goal. Never can I forget the experience in Grade 8. My English teacher asked me to play a part in an English speech competition. Nervousness and fear swept over me. But I realized if I work hard to do it, I could succeed. From then on, I spent all my free time practicing my pronunciation. I trained myself hard
and tried my best to memorize more words and expressions. When the important day finally came, I kept calm and spoke loudly and clearly. The time I finished my speech, I heard a thunder of applause. As you can imagine, how excited I was! Hard work surely brought me great success. Our hard work can always bring out the best in us!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是篇材料作文;
②时态:本文的时态为一般过去时和一般现在时;
③提示:注意要结合自己的经历阐述不懈的努力使得目标实现。
[写作步骤]
第一步,分析图表;
第二步,结合自己的经历谈谈如何实现目标。
[亮点词汇]
① As for me 对我来说
②play a part in在……里起作用
③all my free time我所有的空闲时间
[高分句型]
①When the important day finally came, I kept calm and spoke loudly and clearly.(时间状语从句)
②As you can imagine, how excited I was! (感叹句)
D
朋友之间的友谊本应是纯真的,但是近日少数校园里出现了一些不和谐的现象,偶有校园暴力 (campus violence) 的发生,对同学造成了伤害。请你根据下面的写作要求,以How to Protect Ourselves in Campus Violence为题写一篇演讲稿谈谈你的看法。内容包括:
1)校园暴力的危害:不利于身心健康;学习能力下降……
2)如何解决:学校教育学生友好相处;家校联合共建和平校园;学生学会尊重他人,自信应对……
3)人人有责保持校园安全,并呼吁同学们抵制校园暴力。
要求:
1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2)必须包括提示中的所有信息,并按要求适当发挥;
3)词数100左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
参考词汇:violent (adj.暴力的), confident (adj.自信的),respect (n./v.尊敬),harmonious (adj.和谐的)
How to Protect Ourselves in Campus Violence
Good afternoon, everyone. Today I am going to talk something about bullying (霸凌) in school. ________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】
How to Protect Ourselves in Campus Violence
Good afternoon, everyone. Today I am going to talk something about bullying in school.
Campus violence is bad for students’ physical and mental health. The students’ ability to learn is declining. They are also likely to suffer from mental illness. So how to solve campus violence
First, the school teaches students to get along well with each other. Second, the school and the family should work together to build a peaceful campus. Third, students should learn to respect others and deal with them confidently. Finally, when we encounter violence on campus, we should seek help from teachers and parents in time.
Everyone has the responsibility to keep the campus safe. We should work together to resist campus violence.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点,适当添加细节,
并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,点明演讲主题;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容,从“校园霸凌的危害、如何抵制校园霸凌等”几个方面重点介绍;
第三步,书写结语,号召大家共同抵制校园霸凌。
[亮点词汇]
①is bad for对……有害
②suffer from忍受
③get along well with与……友好相处
[高分句型]
①Finally, when we encounter violence on campus, we should seek help from teachers and parents in time. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②We should work together to resist campus violence. (动词不定式作目的状语)
E
若成长是一本著作,那么烦恼便是藏在段落深处的错字;如果成长是一张白纸,那么烦恼便是附在背面的一个瑕疵。请以“How I work out problems”为题,根据写作要点和要求,用英语写一篇短文,谈谈你是如何解决生活中遇到的烦恼的。
1. 写作要点:
1)你是如何看待生活中遇到的烦恼的?
2)你又是用什么方法解决的?
3)你的感想是什么?
2. 写作要求:
1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
2)词数100左右。
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_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】One possible version:
How I work out problems
Problems and worries are normal in our life. But don’t worry. I would like to share you how I work out problems.
First, I often tell my friends about my worries. Because I know they’re always there for me and their advice always helps me a lot. Then, I amused to doing some exercise like running. You know doing exercise can make me feel so tired that I can get a good sleep. And when the next day comes, I’ll feel better. I’m fond of listening to music in a quiet place by myself. What’s more, reading books and watching news are sometimes useful for me, too. When I read, I forget my problems and worries.
I think we should learn to control our feelings. And if you have some problems and worries, you can try what I share with you.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”、“一般将来时”和“一般过来时”。
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,学生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中自己如何看待生活中遇到的烦恼、解决烦恼的方法和自己的感想的介绍。适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己如何看待生活中遇到的烦恼;
第二步,介绍自己如何解决生活中遇到的烦恼;
第三步,介绍自己的感想。
[亮点词汇]
① work out problems解决问题
② the next day第二天
③ What’s more而且,更重要的是
④ learn to control our feelings学会控制我们的感情
[高分句型]
① You know doing exercise can make me feel so tired that I can get a good sleep. (so…that引导结果状语从句)
② When I read, I forget my problems and worries. (When引导时间状语从句)
③ And if you have some problems and worries, you can try what I share with you. (if引导条件状语从句)
F
享受阅读,享受生活。为了迎接世界读书日,学校英语俱乐部上个星期组织了“Enjoy reading, enjoy life”为主题的校园读书节系列活动。请你根据以下提示,为校英文报写一篇活动报道。
注意:
(1)词数90左右,短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数;(2)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
Enjoy reading, enjoy life!
To welcome the World Book Day, our school English club___________________________
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【答案】
Enjoy reading, enjoy life!
To welcome the World Book Day, our school English club organized a reading festival last week.
During the festival, we enjoyed colourful activities. Sharing a good book was one of them. We shared our favourite books with other students. We also held a writing competition called“My favourite book”. Moreover, we acted out what we read. We put on the plays in the school hall. We all welcomed these exciting activities.
The reading festival creates a good reading environment. It also provides us with chances to learn more about the world and ourselves. The festival is over, but our reading never ends.
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【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已经给出,考生注意不要遗漏,写作过程中可以适当增加细节描述,并且要突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍活动时间和地点;
第二步,具体阐述活动内容;
第三步,说明活动的意义。
[亮点词汇]
①share…with和……分享
②moreover此外
③put on上演
[高分句型]
①Sharing a good book was one of them. (动名词作主语)
②Moreover, we acted out what we read. (what引导的宾语从句)
G
初中的学习即将结束,你有想过自己要读一所什么样的高中吗?为了让同学们更明确自己的学习目标,学校英语广播站将征集以“My dream high school”为主题的征文稿件,请你写一篇英语短文投稿。
写作要点:1.你梦想中的学校外观;
2.你向往的学校生活及原因(如课程设置、校园活动、人际关系);
3.你的期待。
写作要求:1.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2.文章中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称:
3.词数80左右(短文首句已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:beautiful(美丽的);fresh(新鲜的),activity(活动),come true(实现)
My dream high school
I’m a student in Grade 9. Now I’m working hard in order to enter my dream high school.
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【答案】
My dream high school
I’m a student in Grade 9. Now I’m working hard in order to enter my dream high school. My dream school is very big and beautiful. There will be fresh air and many green trees. I can do different things in different buildings.
I hope the lessons there will be interesting. I can do more experiments in my lessons. After class, I can take part in different kinds of activities in different clubs to develop my hobbies. Moreover, I hope I can make more friends in the new school and study together.
I hope I can go to this dream high school, live healthily and study happily. I hope my dream will come true some day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为一般将来时;
③提示:根据提示内容介绍自己梦想中的学校,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍你梦想中的学校外观;
第二步,介绍你向往的学校生活及原因;
第三步,表达自己的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②different kinds of各种各样的
③come true实现
[高分句型]
①I hope the lessons there will be interesting. (宾语从句)
②After class, I can take part in different kinds of activities in different clubs to develop my hobbies. (动词不定式作目的状语)
H
假如你是李华,暑假将有一批英国交换生到你校开展文化交流活动,学校计划通过英语演讲比赛,选出学生代表参与组织活动,你有意竞选。请按照以下要求,结合你的特长设计对应的活动计划,用英语写一份演讲稿。
你的优点 具体表现 活动计划
英语水平好 阅读过大量的英语书籍; 能用英语进行日常交流 ……(请补充一项)
熟悉中国文化 掌握剪纸技巧; ……(请补充一点) ……(请补充一项)
注意:
1.请围绕所给的提示合理发挥;
2.词数80词左右(短文的开头和结尾已给出,不计入词数);
3.不得透露学校、真实姓名及任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
Dear fellow students,
My name is Li Hua. I’m honoured to introduce myself and my ideas on cultural exchange
activities to you._________________________________________________________________
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I hope you will vote for me. Thank you!
【答案】
Dear fellow students,
My name is Li Hua. I’m honoured to introduce myself and my ideas on cultural exchange activities to you.
Firstly, I have an advantage in English. I’ve read plenty of English books so far and I have no problem communicating with English speakers. As a result, we can have a discussion on “beauty of your own country” with the exchange students.
What’s more, I konw a lot about Chinese culture. I can not only make paper-cuttings, but also play Erhu. We can hold an art show to show the traditional culture of the two countries. I think it’s everyone’s duty to popularize our traditional culture.
I hope you will vote for me. Thank you.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:这是一篇材料作文,为演讲稿;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接开头,介绍自己的优点及其具体表现;
第二步,介绍活动计划。
[亮点词汇]
①have an advantage in...在……方面有优势
②as a result因此
③what’s more更重要的是
[高分句型]
①I think it’s everyone’s duty to popularize our traditional culture.(省略that的宾语从句)
I
经过初中三年的学习和生活,你一定在各方面都有所成长,你的成长离不开身边人的帮助,他/她可能是你的父母、老师、同学或者你的好朋友,请以“The person who has helped me a lot”为题写一篇短文,在英语课堂上分享。
要点:1. Who has helped you a lot
2. How did he/she help you
3. What do you want to say to him/her
注意:1. 要点齐全,适当拓展;
2. 行文连贯,语法正确,书写规范;
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名;
4. 100词左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
The person who has helped me a lot
After three years’ study and life in middle school, I think I have become a better teenager. And the person who has helped me a lot is ____________________________________________
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【答案】
The person who has helped me a lot
After three years’ study and life in middle school, I think I have become a better teenager. And the person who has helped me a lot is my English teacher.
She’s very kind and hardworking. She’s so helpful that she’s ready to help almost every student in her class. Two years ago, I used to be afraid to speak English. But she tried her best to solve my problem. Thanks to her help, I made great progress in my English study. Now I can
speak in public and don’t feel nervous.
She teaches me not only to learn but also to be a good person. I want to say to her, “Thank you, teacher. I hope you will always be healthy and happy.”
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:一般现在时,一般过去时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要求根据提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,介绍谁帮了你很多;
第二步,具体介绍他/她是如何帮助你的;
第三步,表达想对他/她说的话。
[亮点词汇]
①be ready to do sth 乐意做某事
②be afraid to do sth 害怕做某事
③try her best to do sth 尽她最大的努力做某事
④made great progress 取得巨大的进步
[高分句型]
①She teaches me not only to learn but also to be a good person.(not only...but also...)
②I hope you will always be healthy and happy.(省略that的宾语从句)
J
不积跬步无以至千里,充实的初中生活已接近尾声。这三年里你一定取得了很多进步,比如学习方法的掌握、良好习惯的养成、学科成绩的提升等。请以My Progress in Middle School为题,结合自身经历选取一个方面,根据以下问题用英文写一篇短文向校广播台投稿。
What progress have you made
How did you make it
How do you feel about your progress
Something more about it.
注意:1.文中不得透露个人真实信息;2.词数 100 词左右;开头已给出,不计入总字数。
My Progress in Middle School
No doubt, everyone is sure to change and so am I.
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【答案】
My Progress in Middle School
No doubt, everyone is sure to change and so am I. My three-year middle school life will be over. Looking back, I want to share my progress in middle school with you.
I have made great progress in learning English. When I entered middle school, I had great difficulty in learning English. I couldn’t remember English words and I got bad results in English tests. However, I didn’t give up. In class, I listened to my teachers carefully and spoke English as much as possible. After class, I often asked teachers and classmates for help. I also kept writing English diaries and tried to use the new grammar rules that I learned from the books. All of these have helped me a lot.
Now, I have much confidence when facing challenges. I become patient and careful. What’s more, I am not afraid to make mistakes any more.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态是“一般现在时”,“一般过去时”以及“现在完成时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,写作开头已给出,写作时可直接写作目的。
第二步,具体阐述写作内容,主要围绕“取得的进步”、“怎么取得进步的”以及“取得进步的感受”展开,适当补充,丰富细节。
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be sure to do sth.确定做某事
②be over结束
③want to do sth.想要做某事
④make great progress取得极大的进步
⑤give up放弃
⑥listen to听
⑦as much as possible尽可能多地
⑧ask sb. for help向某人寻求帮助
⑨keep doing sth.保持做某事
⑩try to do sth.尝试做某事
[高分句型]
①When I entered middle school, I had great difficulty in learning English. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②I also kept writing English diaries and tried to use the new grammar rules that I learned from the books. (that引导的定语从句)
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假如你在网上读到一则网名为Flying guy的学生所发布博文,内容如下。请根据博文内容,给博主留言回复。
Help! Always tired on Monday!
To tell the truth, I am always tired on Monday and don’t feel like taking classes or doing homework. I guess there must be something wrong. Is it because I don’t make good use of my weekends Can anyone share your experience with me and give me some advice to solve the problem
注意:
1)请回复博文中所提及的问题,可适当发挥;
2)回复中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息;
3)词数:80—100词。
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You are not the only one who feels tired on Monday. I used to have the same problem as you.
I used to play all weekends and had to stay up late to finish my homework. Every Monday I felt tired and it had bad effects on my study. I knew it was time to make a change. So I planned my time carefully and made good use of my weekend. Anyway, don’t play too much on weekends and try to go to bed earlier on Sunday. I hope you will manage time well and keep happy on Monday.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,提出自己与博主有相同的问题;
第二步,叙述出现问题的原因,并提出建议;
第三步,书写结语,表达祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①used to do sth.过去常常做某事
②stay up熬夜
③make good use of好好利用
[高分句型]
①You are not the only one who feels tired on Monday.(who引导的限制性定语从句)
②I hope you will manage time well and keep happy on Monday.(省略that的宾语从句)
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《二十一世纪英文报》举行“未来之城”征文活动,请你用英文写一篇短文投稿,介绍你心目中的未来城市。短文需包括下图所有提示内容。
注意:
1.100词以上(文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
2.不得透露个人信息,否则不予评分。
Our city of the future
What will our city be like in 2050
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】
Our city of the future
What will our city be like in 2050 I think it will be quite different from now. The living
environment will be greatly improved in the following ways.
The houses will be both green and smart. Everything will be made by environmental-friendly materials. What’s more, the house will be connected to the shops and hospitals so that you can order all kinds of services without going out. Most of the time, people will work at home and they will have fewer working hours because of new technologies. If you want to go travelling, there will be no traffic jam at all. You can take different kinds of transportations, such as the flying buses and the driverless cars. The most exciting thing for students will be the widely use of E-books and VR technology at school. As a result, there will be paperless exams and more fun in learning.
Our city in 2050 will be full of hope and we should work hard to realize it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般将来时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图借用“2050年我们的城市将会怎么样”来引出重点介绍的内容;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be made by由……制成
②so that以至于
③different kinds of不同种类的
[高分句型]
①If you want to go travelling, there will be no traffic jam at all. (if引导的条件状语从句)
②As a result, there will be paperless exams and more fun in learning. (there be句型)
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你班英语课就“和同学友好相处”这一话题进行讨论。请根据以下图示,以“Get on Well with Classmates”为题,准备一篇英文发言稿。
注意:
1.须全面反映图文信息;
2.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
3.词数80左右。
Get on Well with Classmates
Hello, everyone! I am honored to be here to share my thoughts on the important topic of getting on well with classmates._____________________________________________________
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Get on Well with Classmates
Hello, everyone! I am honored to be here to share my thoughts on the important topic of getting on well with classmates. It can give us a better learning environment. Besides, it can also improve our social skills.
However, how can we get on well with others First, we are a team, so we must be friendly to our classmates and try to help them when they are in trouble. Second, if we have different opinions, we should respect their ideas and try to find out solutions instead of quarreling. Third, we can take part in after-school activities together, which can help us understand each other better
and improve our relationships.
In a word, getting on well with others makes us study and live better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:一般现在时;
③提示:根据提示信息介绍如何和同学友好相处,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,阐述同学之间要友好相处的原因;
第二步,介绍如何与同学们友好相处的建议;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be friendly to对某人友好
②in trouble处于困境
③take part in参加
④in a word总而言之
[高分句型]
①so we must be friendly to our classmates and try to help them when they are in trouble.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②Second, if we have different opinions, we should respect their ideas and try to find out solutions instead of quarreling.(if引导的条件状语从句)
③Third, we can take part in after-school activities together, which can help us understand each other better and improve our relationships.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
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为了丰富学校大课间活动内容,你校校刊英语专栏以”最美大课间,强健青少年”为主题向全校学生征稿。请根据以下图示,写一篇短文向专栏投稿。
注意:
1.请先在答题卡上填写图示中空格 (一空一词);
2.须全面反映图文信息;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4. 词数 80 左右。
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【答案】
The colourful activities during the 30-minute break help make teenagers healthier.
In our school, we usually do running during the 30-minute break. When the bell rings, students walk out of the classrooms to the playground. Then we are lined up and run together. Sometimes we also do long jumps. I think it is quite boring. In my opinion, we need different kinds of activities at break, such as shuttlecock exercises, rope skipping and so on. Through these activities, we can really relax ourselves and experience the joy of sports. Also, we will be more energetic in class.
Having a variety of activities during our rest time will certainly benefit us a lot. I really hope that our school can organize more such activities to ensure the overall development of our students.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:本文的时态为一般现在时;
③提示:注意图片的信息要涵盖,注意要点齐全。
[写作步骤]
第一步,总述锻炼能让青少年更健康;
第二步,具体介绍活动内容;
第三步,表达自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
① In my opinion以我的观点看
②such as例如
[高分句型]
① Having a variety of activities during our rest time will certainly benefit us a lot. (动名词作主语)
② I really hope that our school can organize more such activities to ensure the overall development of our students. (宾语从句)2024年中考英语复习冲刺特训:读写综合之书面表达
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初中生活即将结束,你一定参加过各种伴随着你成长的社团,如篮球队、合唱团等。请以“My Favorite Club at School”为题,写一篇英文短文,向校刊的School Life栏目投稿,介绍你最喜欢的社团。
注意:(1) 短文必须包括思维导图中的所有要点,并适当发挥;
(2) 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
(3) 词数:100左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My Favorite Club at School
In our school, there are many clubs which I have been in.
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英语杂志社Sunday Mail正在开展以“One Thing I’m Proud of”为题的英语征文活动。请根据广告中的信息用英语写一篇100 词左右的征文,分享一件你自己认为自豪的事情。开
头已给出 (不计词数)。
Articles Wanted
One Thing I’m Proud of
What is the thing you are proud of
When did it happen and what did you do
Why does this thing make you feel proud Or what important lesson did you learn from this thing
Tell us what you think!
Write an article answering these questions and we will publish the best ones in our magazine.
One Thing I’m Proud of
The thing I am proud of is that ________________________________________________
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某班开展主题为“感受生活中的美”的主题班会活动,号召大家拥有发现美的眼睛。活动要求每位同学根据自己的经历或者见闻写一篇演讲稿,和同学们分享自己在生活中发现的美及感受。假如你是该班的同学,请你结合自己的经验,写一篇演讲稿。
内容包括:
·Tell a story about how you find the beauty in life.
·Express your feelings.
要求:
1. 词数不少于80;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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初三这一年,你一直为自己的目标而努力。而实现目标需要精细的计划、不懈的努力和他人的帮助。山西省某中学九年级四班对全年级300名同学就“What helps achieve your goal most ”做了一个调查,下图是调查的统计结果。
What helps achieve your goal most
假如你是该校九年级的学生,请结合以上图表信息,以“I Have Achieved My Goal”为题,用两段话写一篇英语短文。
内容包括:1. 简要说明图表内容;2. 从图表中任选一项,结合自己的经历,谈谈你是如何实现自己的目标的。
要求:1. 词数不少于80(首句已给出,不计入总词数);2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
I Have Achieved My Goal
Our school did a survey among 300 students on the topic of “What helps achieve your goal most ” Here are the results. ________________________________________________________
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_______________________________________________________________________________
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朋友之间的友谊本应是纯真的,但是近日少数校园里出现了一些不和谐的现象,偶有校园暴力 (campus violence) 的发生,对同学造成了伤害。请你根据下面的写作要求,以How to Protect Ourselves in Campus Violence为题写一篇演讲稿谈谈你的看法。内容包括:
1)校园暴力的危害:不利于身心健康;学习能力下降……
2)如何解决:学校教育学生友好相处;家校联合共建和平校园;学生学会尊重他人,自信应对……
3)人人有责保持校园安全,并呼吁同学们抵制校园暴力。
要求:
1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2)必须包括提示中的所有信息,并按要求适当发挥;
3)词数100左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
参考词汇:violent (adj.暴力的), confident (adj.自信的),respect (n./v.尊敬),harmonious (adj.和谐的)
How to Protect Ourselves in Campus Violence
Good afternoon, everyone. Today I am going to talk something about bullying (霸凌) in school. ________________________________________________________________________
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若成长是一本著作,那么烦恼便是藏在段落深处的错字;如果成长是一张白纸,那么烦恼便是附在背面的一个瑕疵。请以“How I work out problems”为题,根据写作要点和要求,
用英语写一篇短文,谈谈你是如何解决生活中遇到的烦恼的。
1. 写作要点:
1)你是如何看待生活中遇到的烦恼的?
2)你又是用什么方法解决的?
3)你的感想是什么?
2. 写作要求:
1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
2)词数100左右。
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享受阅读,享受生活。为了迎接世界读书日,学校英语俱乐部上个星期组织了“Enjoy reading, enjoy life”为主题的校园读书节系列活动。请你根据以下提示,为校英文报写一篇活动报道。
注意:
(1)词数90左右,短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数;(2)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
Enjoy reading, enjoy life!
To welcome the World Book Day, our school English club___________________________
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初中的学习即将结束,你有想过自己要读一所什么样的高中吗?为了让同学们更明确自己的学习目标,学校英语广播站将征集以“My dream high school”为主题的征文稿件,请你写一篇英语短文投稿。
写作要点:1.你梦想中的学校外观;
2.你向往的学校生活及原因(如课程设置、校园活动、人际关系);
3.你的期待。
写作要求:1.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2.文章中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称:
3.词数80左右(短文首句已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:beautiful(美丽的);fresh(新鲜的),activity(活动),come true(实现)
My dream high school
I’m a student in Grade 9. Now I’m working hard in order to enter my dream high school.
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假如你是李华,暑假将有一批英国交换生到你校开展文化交流活动,学校计划通过英语演讲比赛,选出学生代表参与组织活动,你有意竞选。请按照以下要求,结合你的特长设计对应的活动计划,用英语写一份演讲稿。
你的优点 具体表现 活动计划
英语水平好 阅读过大量的英语书籍; 能用英语进行日常交流 ……(请补充一项)
熟悉中国文化 掌握剪纸技巧; ……(请补充一点) ……(请补充一项)
注意:
1.请围绕所给的提示合理发挥;
2.词数80词左右(短文的开头和结尾已给出,不计入词数);
3.不得透露学校、真实姓名及任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
Dear fellow students,
My name is Li Hua. I’m honoured to introduce myself and my ideas on cultural exchange activities to you._________________________________________________________________
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I hope you will vote for me. Thank you!
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经过初中三年的学习和生活,你一定在各方面都有所成长,你的成长离不开身边人的帮助,他/她可能是你的父母、老师、同学或者你的好朋友,请以“The person who has helped
me a lot”为题写一篇短文,在英语课堂上分享。
要点:1. Who has helped you a lot
2. How did he/she help you
3. What do you want to say to him/her
注意:1. 要点齐全,适当拓展;
2. 行文连贯,语法正确,书写规范;
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名;
4. 100词左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
The person who has helped me a lot
After three years’ study and life in middle school, I think I have become a better teenager. And the person who has helped me a lot is ____________________________________________
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不积跬步无以至千里,充实的初中生活已接近尾声。这三年里你一定取得了很多进步,比如学习方法的掌握、良好习惯的养成、学科成绩的提升等。请以My Progress in Middle School为题,结合自身经历选取一个方面,根据以下问题用英文写一篇短文向校广播台投稿。
What progress have you made
How did you make it
How do you feel about your progress
Something more about it.
注意:1.文中不得透露个人真实信息;2.词数 100 词左右;开头已给出,不计入总字数。
My Progress in Middle School
No doubt, everyone is sure to change and so am I.
_______________________________________________________________________________
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假如你在网上读到一则网名为Flying guy的学生所发布博文,内容如下。请根据博文内容,给博主留言回复。
Help! Always tired on Monday!
To tell the truth, I am always tired on Monday and don’t feel like taking classes or doing homework. I guess there must be something wrong. Is it because I don’t make good use of my weekends Can anyone share your experience with me and give me some advice to solve the problem
注意:
1)请回复博文中所提及的问题,可适当发挥;
2)回复中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息;
3)词数:80—100词。
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《二十一世纪英文报》举行“未来之城”征文活动,请你用英文写一篇短文投稿,介绍你心目中的未来城市。短文需包括下图所有提示内容。
注意:
1.100词以上(文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
2.不得透露个人信息,否则不予评分。
Our city of the future
What will our city be like in 2050
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你班英语课就“和同学友好相处”这一话题进行讨论。请根据以下图示,以“Get on Well with Classmates”为题,准备一篇英文发言稿。
注意:
1.须全面反映图文信息;
2.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
3.词数80左右。
Get on Well with Classmates
Hello, everyone! I am honored to be here to share my thoughts on the important topic of getting on well with classmates._____________________________________________________
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为了丰富学校大课间活动内容,你校校刊英语专栏以”最美大课间,强健青少年”为主题向全校学生征稿。请根据以下图示,写一篇短文向专栏投稿。
注意:
1.请先在答题卡上填写图示中空格 (一空一词);
2.须全面反映图文信息;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4. 词数 80 左右。
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