Unit 9 What does he look like
单元话题满分范文必背
1.请根据下面的提示,以“My Father”为题,向大家介绍一下你的爸爸。不少于60词,可适当发挥。
提示:
1.年龄:40
2.职业:教师
3.外貌:英俊、有点儿瘦、中等身高、长脸、小眼睛、戴眼镜、短短的直发
4.性格:友好、和蔼
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【答案】例文
My Father
I have a good father.
He is 40 years old. He is a teacher. He teaches math in a middle school. He is handsome, and he is a little thin. He is of medium height. He has a long face and two small eyes. He often wears a pair of glasses. He has short straight hair. He is very friendly and kind to everyone.
I love my father very much.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文写作,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要注意不要遗漏提示的相关要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,总的评价自己的父亲。
第二步,介绍父亲的年龄、职业、外貌和性格。
第三步,表达对父亲的情感。
[亮点词汇]
①in a middle school在一所中学
②be of medium height中等身高
③a pair of glasses一副眼镜
[高分句型]
①He is handsome, and he is a little thin. (and连接并列句)
2.进入初中已经一年了,相信你在年级中一定有自己学习的榜样。请以“我的榜样”为题写一篇不少于70词的英文短文,内容包括以下提示并可适当发挥。
提示问题:
Who is your idol in your grade
What does he/she look like
Why do you think he/she is your idol
My Idol
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【答案】例文:
My Idol
Everyone has an idol. Lucy is my idol in our grade. She is tall and thin and always wears glasses. She is our monitor. She is smart and enjoys learning new things. She also likes reading. She learns how to search for reading materials on the Internet. What’s more, she is hardworking. So she always gets good grades. When she meets some difficulties in her study, she asks our teachers for help. She never gives up. I will learn from her.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文写作,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要注意不要遗漏提示的相关要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己的年级偶像是谁。
第二步,介绍偶像的外貌。
第三步,介绍认为他/她是自己偶像的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①enjoy doing喜欢做某事
②ask sb. for help向某人求助
③give up放弃
[高分句型]
①She learns how to search for reading materials on the Internet. (疑问词+动词不定式)
3.假如你是王宇,你们班新来了一位外国同学。请根据下面表格中的内容提示,用英语介绍一下你的新同学。60词左右,可适当发挥。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
姓名 Lisa 年龄 13 国籍 Australia
外貌 of medium height, short brown hair, small round face, big eyes
Where is her house between a post office and a supermarket, across from a bank
What are her favorite sports swimming, playing tennis
What does she usually wear a T-shirt, jeans and a baseball cap
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【答案】例文
Hello, I’m Wang Yu. I have a new classmate. Her name is Lisa. She is thirteen years old. She is from Australia. She is of medium height. She has short brown hair. She has a small round face and two big eyes. Her house is between a post office and a supermarket. It’s across from a bank. Her favorite sports are swimming and playing tennis. She usually wears a T-shirt, jeans and a baseball cap.
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。在写作时应承接短文开头。根据题干要求,写一篇英文短文。
2.写作指导:本文应该用第三人称;时态采用一般现在时。注意按照表格提示的内容进行写作。最后注意
保证语言通顺,行文连贯;语法正确,无标点和大小写错误。
4.假如你叫Jenny,请你根据表格中的内容提示,描述你的两个好朋友——Tina和Laura。你可以从身材、发型、五官、衣着和爱好等方面进行描述。不少于60词。
Tina Laura
身高 高大 中等
体型 微胖 偏瘦
发型 黑色短发 棕色卷发
眼睛 大 小
鼻子 大 小
穿着 戴眼镜,穿牛仔裤和运动鞋 不戴眼镜,穿校服
爱好 体育:打排球 音乐:会弹钢琴
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【答案】One possible version:
I’m Jenny. I have two good friends at school. They are Tina and Laura.
Tina is tall and a little heavy. She has short black hair. She has two big eyes. Her nose is big, too. She wears glasses. And she often wears jeans and sports shoes. She loves sports and she plays volleyball very well.
Laura is thin and of medium height. She has curly brown hair. She has two small eyes and a small nose. She doesn’t wear glasses. She always wears the school uniform. She likes music very much. She can play the piano
very well.
【详解】1. 题干解读:题目要求写一篇英文来描述好朋友Tina和Laura;要求包含所有内容提示。
2. 写作指导:此作文时态用一般现在时;采用第三人称口吻;可采用3段落格式,第一段:引出自己有两位朋友;第二段:从身材、发型、五官、衣着和爱好等方面描述朋友Tina;第三段:从身材、发型、五官、衣着和爱好等方面描述朋友Laura。
5.请你根据表格内容提示,描写你的两个好朋友,Tina和Laura。注意要从身材、发型、五官、衣着和爱好等多方面进行描述。
姓名 Tina Laura
身材 高大 中等身材
体格 有点胖 偏痩
头发 短,黑色 卷发,棕色
眼睛 大,黑 小
鼻子 大 小巧
穿戴 戴眼镜,运动鞋 不戴服镜,校服
爱好 体育,擅长排球 音乐,会弹钢琴
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【答案】例文
I’m Jenny. I have two good friends at school. They’re Tina and Laura. Though they’re my friends, they have many differences.
Tina is very tall and a little bit heavy. She has short black hair. She also has big and black eyes. Her nose is big, too. She is good at sports, so she always wears sports shoes. She wears glasses and she plays volleyball very well.
Laura is thin and of medium build. She has curly brown hair. She has a small nose and two small eyes. She doesn’t wear glasses. She always wears school uniforms. She doesn’t like sports, but she does very well in music. She can play the piano well.
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。介绍自己的两位好朋友的情况。
2.写作指导:本文主要采用第三人称,时态采用一般现在时。从姓名,身材,体格,头发,眼睛,鼻子,穿戴和爱好等方面介绍两位好朋友。写作时要保持主谓一致性,逻辑性要强,无语法和标点错误。
6.假如你在网上结识了一名叫Ben的朋友,请根据他发给你的有关信息,向你的同学做简要介绍。
姓名 Ben
年龄 14
国籍 加拿大(Canada)
外貌 中等个子,有点瘦,留着棕色的卷发
爱好 听音乐,踢足球
梦想 成为足球明星
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【答案】例文
I have a new friend. His name is Ben. He’s 14 years old. He’s from Canada. Let me tell you what he looks
like. He’s of medium height and a little thin. He has curly brown hair. He likes listening to music and playing football. He plays it very well and he wants to be a football star. Do you want to know him
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,以第三人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍Ben的个人具体信息,包括年龄、国籍、外貌。
第二步,介绍Ben的爱好和梦想。
[亮点词汇]
①be from来自
②be of medium height中等身高
③a little一点
④listen to music听音乐
[高分句型]
①Let me tell you what he looks like.(含特殊疑问词的宾语从句)
②He likes listening to music and playing football. (like doing sth.句型)
③He plays it very well and he wants to be a football star.(want to do sth.句型)
7.请用英语写一篇短文,从职业、上班方式、外貌和兴趣爱好等方面介绍自己的父母。
要求:1.参考下面表格中的要点进行表达,也可以进行适当的发挥,但不要出现真实的个人信息(人名、地名、学校名等);
2.词数60左右。
Father Mother
job doctor teacher
go to work drive a car by bus
look like fat, tall, short hair thin, medium height, curly hair
hobby swimming, basketball reading, singing
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【答案】This is my father. He is fat and tall. He has short hair. He’s a doctor. He usually drives a car to work. He likes swimming and playing basketball. On weekends, I like playing basketball with him.
And this is my mother. She is a teacher. She teaches English in our school. She is thin and she has curly hair. She is of medium height. Her students like her very much. She goes to school by bus with me. She likes reading and singing.
I love my parents. I love my family.
【详解】1.题干解读:该题目属于人物介绍,需要用英语写一篇短文,从职业、上班方式、外貌和兴趣爱好等方面介绍自己的父母,这些方面的具体细节表格中已经给了出来,完整叙述即可。
2.例文点评:例文采用三段式;用第三人称来叙述;时态采用一般现在为主,首段描述了自己的父亲,介绍了父亲的外貌、职业、爱好等,第二段介绍了自己的母亲的职业、外貌以及日常活动,最后一段是简单的收尾,表示自己爱自己的父母,爱自己的家庭。总体来说叙述完整,要点没有遗漏,分段清晰,语言流畅。
3.高分亮点:
短语:drive a car to work;play basketball;On weekends;of medium height;go to school by bus。
句型:this is句型,like doing结构,and连接的并列句。
8.父亲是我们生命中最重要的人之一,也是我们最坚强的依靠。他不仅陪伴我们成长,也教会了我们很多东西。假如你是Tommy,你想向你的同学们介绍你的父亲。请根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文介绍他。
要求:60词左右。开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
提示:
1. What he looks like
2. What he does
3. Why you love him
4. …
My father
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【答案】例文
My father
I love my father. He is a great hero in my heart. Let me tell you something about him.
My father is tall and strong with black hair and big eyes. He is a doctor. He is patient and friendly. He always tries his best to help others. He is busy with his work, but when he is free, he always spends time with me. He takes me to the zoo and plays table tennis with me in the park. He is also strict about my studies. He teaches me many things. What’s more, he often encourages me and gives me support.
I like my father because he is a hard-working and helpful man. He is a good doctor. In the future, I want to be a good doctor like him.
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“My father”为题,结合提示问题进行写作。注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第三人称来介绍,时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段,第一段引出话题;第二段从外貌,工作,日常生活等方面介绍父亲;第三段介绍为什么爱父亲以及对父亲的评价。要保证语言连
贯,无语法和拼写错误。
9.假如你是 Peter,请根据表格内的信息写一篇自我介绍。
姓名 Peter 年龄 14
来自 中国 外貌 瘦高,短直发,戴眼镜
特长 写作,下棋 上学的方式 骑自行车(good exercise)
喜欢 看电影,游泳 家规 6:30起床,每天必须阅读
喜欢的动物及原因 熊猫、cute and a symbol of China 其他(可根据需要自由发挥……)
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【答案】例文:
My name is Peter. I’m 14 years old. I come from China. I’m a middle school student. I am tall and thin. I have short straight hair. I have poor eyesight, so I wear glasses. I am good at writing and playing chess. I also like watching movies and swimming. The school is not far from my home, so I go to school by bike every day. This is a good way to exercise. There are many rules in my family, such as getting up at 6:30 in the morning and reading every day. Panda is my favorite animal, because it is not only cute, but also a symbol of China.
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文,要求根据表格内容介绍Peter的个人信息,包括:姓名、年龄、籍贯、外貌、特长、上学方式、爱好、家规、喜爱的动物及原因,以上要点缺一不可。
2.写作指导:本文是一篇自我介绍,行文时以第一人称、一般现在时为主,注意主谓一致性;写作时需要囊括所有要点,保证句式简洁,条理清晰。
10.根据以下信息用英语写一则寻人启事。(词数:60-80)
Tom,今年五岁,今天在商店和妈妈走散。中等个头,短头发,小圆脸,大眼睛,上身穿白色的T恤,下身穿白裤子,脚穿一双黑色的运动鞋,还背着一个蓝色的小背包,请看到他的顾客把他领到广播室(Broadcasting Room).
Ladies and Gentlemen.
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【答案】例文:
Ladies and Gentlemen, we are looking for Tom. Tom, a five-year-old boy, was missing in the shop. He is of medium height, and he has short hair. His face is round, and his eyes are big. He wears a white T-shirt and white trousers, and a pair of black sports shoes. And he has a blue bag. If someone finds him, please bring him into the Broadcasting Room. His mother is there.
Thank you.
【详解】1.题干解读:该题目属于应用文写作,写一篇寻人启事。在写作时应承接短文开头;描述外貌及穿着,以及发出寻人的请求。
2.例文点评:例文用第三人称来写作;时态采用一般现在时为主;外貌及穿着描述细致且条理清晰。
3.高分亮点:
短语:looking for;was missing;of medium height; a pair of。
句型: if引导的条件状语从句;and表示并列的句子。