2024年河南中考英语写作提升策略 课件 (共27张PPT)

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河南中考英语写作提升策略
2024
目 录
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一.英语中考
写作考情分析
二.学生写作中的常见问题
三.中考写作提升策略
第一部分
中考写作考情分析
PART 01
※ 近三年中考作文
※ 评分原则
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近三年中考英语作文
年份 写作题目 命题形式 写作体裁
2023 最美大课间，强健青少年 写作要求：1.介绍学校目前30分钟大课间的活动内容，并简单谈谈你的感受 2.你对大课间活动内容有什么更好的建议，请写出理由 命题作文 投稿
2022 How reading improves my English 结合下面图示信息，以“How reading improves my English”为题，根据写作要求，用英语写一篇短文，向学校的英语专栏投稿 命题作文 投稿
2021 One thing I keep doing every day 要点：1.你每天在坚持做什么 2. 你坚持这么做的理由 3.它会给你带来怎样的影响或改变 命题作文 发言稿
命题特点：
记叙文为主，2-3个
要点；提示语简单
（半）开放式
写作话题贴近
实际生活
关注学生的成长
注意培养学生良好的
道德品质和健全的
人格
书面表达的评分原则
第二部分
写作中的常见问题
PART 02
※ 审题
※ 文章结构
※ 词汇，句式
※ 书面
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审题不认真。要点；时态
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用词不准确：包括拼写错误，搭配，语法错误（名词单复数，动词的单三，过去式，进行时，完成时等）。
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句式单一，重复
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书写不规范。不注意标点符号，词间距，字母倾斜度不一致，字母太大或太小等
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内容没有层次。缺少主题句：缺少必要的过渡词或句，文章读起来不连贯，条理不清晰
学生写作中的
常见问题
练一练：改正句中错误
1.Playing basketball not only strengthen my body but also
give me much fun.
2.When he got to the station,the train had already leaved.
3.I usually spend an hour a day reading books.It benefits me a lot.
1.Playing basketball not only strengthens my body but also
gives me much fun.
2.When he got to the station,the train had already left.
3.I usually spend an hour a day reading books;it benefits me a lot.
第三部分
中考写作提升策略
PART 03
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1.准确丰富的词汇
2.自然恰当的过度
3.灵活多变的句式
4.清晰流畅的扩展
5.规范漂亮的书面
1.准确丰富的词汇之一：词汇求准求变
尽力做 try one’s best;spare no effort
参加（活动） join in ;take part in ;participate in
想 want;intend;desire;hope;wish;mean
对...有好处 be good for;be beneficial to
应该 should,ought to ,be supposed to ;be expected to
重要 important; vital;significant;matter ;count
困难的 hard;difficult;challenging
渴望做 be eager to do;long to do ;look forward to
have a desire for
有意义的 meaningful;rewarding;valuable
向...求助 ask sb for help;turn to sb for help; seek help from sb
2.准确丰富的词汇之二：短语优选
3.准确丰富的词汇之三：巧用形容词或副词
练一练：翻译句子
1）.近几年家乡有很大变化。
2）.网上有大量信息。
3）.我有了一个好主意。
4）.长时间的使用网络对健康有危害。
5）.七夕节和这个家喻户晓的神话故事有密切联系。
1）Great changes have taken place in my hometown in the last few years.
2) A large amount of information is available on the Internet.
3) A wonderful idea occurred to / struck /hit me.
4) Exposure to the Internet for a long time does great harm to our health.
5) The Qixi Festival is closely associated with the household fairy tale.
2.自然恰当的过渡
1）表起始的过渡语：first of all, to begin with, in the first place，as we know, when it comes to
2）表时间的过渡语：firstly, then, later, in the end, finally，
afterwards, since then, for the first time, meanwhile
3）表空间的过渡语：on the left, in （the） front of,
at the foot of，in the middle of
4）表因果的过渡语：because of...， due to...，
thanks to..therefore, for this reason, for one thing... for another..., as a result (of)
5）表转折的过渡语：but, yet, however, on the contrary, instead of，unlike, on the one hand... on the other hand..., in spite of, despite
衔接
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6）表列举的过渡语：for example, such as, that is, like,
as follows，in other words, and so on
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7）表推进的过渡语：What's more, in addition, besides, furthermore，moreover, last but not least,
not only...but also...
8）表总结的过渡语：in short, in a word, in general, in brief, in all， in conclusion, generally speaking, on the whole
9）表示现点的过渡性词语：in my opinion, in my view, from my point of view, as far as I am concerned, as for me, personally speaking, from my perspective
2.自然恰当的过渡
3.灵活多变的句式
S+V （主语+谓语）
S+V+O （主语+谓语+宾语）
S+V+O+O（主语+谓语+间宾+直宾）
S+V+P （主语+系动词+表语）
S+V+O+C（主语+谓语+宾语+宾补）
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五种基本句型
优化句式一：
1) I am glad to give you a speech.
I feel it an honor to give you a speech.
2) I usually spend an hour a day reading books. It benefits me a lot.
I usually spend an hour a day reading books,and it is beneficial to me.
I usually spend an hour a day reading books,which is of great benefit to me.
3) I read many books, and I have a better understanding of the world.
The more books I read, the better understanding I have of the world.
4) I take exercise every day, because it enables me to keep fit.
The reason why I take exercise every day is that it enables me to keep fit.
优化句式二：
5) The activity made us relaxed and broadened our horizons.
Not only did the activity make us relaxed, but it also broadened our horizons.
6) We can live in harmony with nature in this way .
Only in this way can we live in harmony with nature.
7) As soon as I thought of his encouraging words, my heart was full of confidence.
The moment I thought of his encouraging words, my heart was full of confidence.
8) He never gave up, which impressed me most.
What impressed me most was that he never gave up.
优化句式三：
9) With the teacher's help, I have made great progress in English.
It is with the teacher's help that I have made great progress in English.
10) I know about English, so I can communicate with foreigners fluently.
Having a good knowledge of English, I can communicate with foreigners fluently.
11) I would give up and then he came to help me.
I was about to give up when he came to my help.
12) The Internet plays an important part in our life.
There is no doubt that the Internet plays an important part in our life.
As we all know, the Internet plays an important part in our life.
优化句式四：
13) The experience is very amazing.
What an amazing experience it is!
14) We should take immediate action now.
It is time that we took/ should take immediate action now.
It is time that immediate action should be taken now.
15. I read every day.
I can't bear a single day without a book in my hands.
16. Great changes have taken place in my hometown in the last few years.
My hometown has witnessed great changes in the last few years.
4.清晰合理的拓展
方法二 添加与信息有关的原因、结果、条件、目的、时间等
方法一 列举例子来补充说明
例如: A wide range of activities were held, including sports meetings, science competitions, and speech contests.
例1: The film is so attractive that it enjoys popularity among us students.
例2: Whenever I have difficulty in learning English, I always turn to him for help.
例3：
With time going by/As time goes by, I become more and more interested in English.
例4: In order to enrich our life, our school has decided to hold various activities.
例5: In a word, cellphones shouldn't be allowed in schools so that students can focus on what’s really important and meaningful.
增加细节进行扩展，使作文流畅、生动、丰满，达到应有的表达效果。
4.清晰合理的拓展
方法四 适当使用谚语格言
方法三 添加相关人物的神态、动作、心理描写等
例1 : To her surprise and joy, she was awarded first prize.
例2 : Never having cooked before, I was totally at a loss.
例3 : It was a game that I never tried before, so I was curious about it.
Where there is a will, there is a way.
Diligence is the mother of success.
A good beginning is half done.
All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.
Time and tide wait for no man.
Don't put off till tomorrow what should be done today.
Practice makes perfect.
有志者事竟成。
成功来自勤奋。
良好的开端是成功的一半。
只工作不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻。
岁月不待人。
今日事今日毕。
熟能生巧
增加细节进行扩展，使作文流畅、生动、丰满，达到应有的表达效果。
5.规范漂亮的书面
分段：三段最佳
段1：点明主题
段2：详细内容(多分三点）层次清晰
段3：进行总结，再次点题，抒发感想.......
段首空约四个字母
字体：手写体（圆润均匀一致）
间距：字母间距i，词间距a
倾斜：10度左右
贴底线：参照线
g/j/q/p/y穿过横线，但不能过长
标点紧挨字母，标点前不空格，后空一个字母
实战演练：2023年河南中考英语作文
为了丰富学校大课间活动内容，学校校刊英语专栏以“最美大课间，强健青少年“为主题面向学生进行征文。请你根据写作要求，用英语写一篇短文，向专栏投稿。
写作要求：
1.介绍学校目前30分钟大课间的活动内容，并简单谈谈你的感受；
2.你对大课间活动内容有什么更好的建议，请写出理由；
3.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
4.词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：shuttlecock exercises 毽子操；badminton 羽毛球； rope skipping 跳绳
实战演练：2023年河南中考英语作文参考范文
The colorful activities during the 30-minute break help make teenagers healthier and
stronger.
What we often do now during the 30-minute break is running. When the bell rings, we walk out of the classroom to the playground. Then we are lined up and run together, which I think can not meet our needs. I advise that more interesting activities should be added at break, such as shuttlecock exercises, rope skipping and so on. If so, we will make a choice based on our interest. Only in this way can we really relax ourselves physically and mentally.
In a word, a wide range of activities at break will be of great benefit to us. I do hope our school can organize more of them to ensure the overall development of us students.
Thank you