新北师大选择性必修二Unit 5 Education Writing Workshop精讲精练（含答案）

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Section Ⅲ　Writing Workshop
文本理解 对接写作
Task 1　微观剖析　细节把握
Answer these questions.
1．From the writer’s point of view，what is the man’s personality
2．What lesson is the picture trying to teach
Task 2　宏观理解　构建模板
1．Complete the structure of the text by putting the different parts in the correct order.(P41)
2．Fill in the blanks to complete the structure according to the essay you read on P40.
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3．According to the essay you read on P40，we can learn when we write a picture description，we can use the following outline.
From the picture we can see that .
There are three reasons to account for this phenomenon.To begin with， .
Plus， .Last but not least， .
In consequence/In brief/To sum up/In conclusion/To summarize， .
Task 3　精美句式　素材积累
这篇图片描写用到了一些引导原因状语的连词，如：because，for，as。请在这篇文章中找出这些句子，并积累起来。
写作要领 技法指导
写作指导：
本单元的写作目标是“看图作文”。看图作文要求就一幅图画进行内容和喻义分析。可以通过以下三个部分来进行写作：
第一部分：写出标题。标题要切合图画内容。
第二部分：图画内容。简要描述并适当分析图画的内容，注意语言的简练，切记冗杂拖拉的表达。
第三部分：图画隐喻。这部分要充分发挥想象，根据图画内容，详细描述图画中隐含的寓意。提出的观点要有说服力，隐喻恰当，充满哲理。
常用表达：
1．描述图画：
(1)The picture shows that...
(2)From the picture we can see that...
(3)It is illustrated in the picture that...
(4)In the picture there is...
2．常用过渡词
nevertheless，however，consequently，undoubtedly
3．结尾：
(1)We can conclude that...
(2)The picture symbolizes that...
(3)In my opinion/view...
(4)As far as I’m concerned...
(5)Personally speaking...
写作实践 分步演练
如今随着智能手机和电子设备的普及，“低头族”现象兴起。人们沉溺于手机等电子设备，因而忽略了自己和他人的沟通交流，甚至在家庭聚会上也只顾玩手机不和长辈聊天，使老人感到失落万分。请根据图画写一篇英语短文。
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注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当发挥，以使行文连贯。
第一步　审题谋篇
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写作要求是写一篇图画描写。写作时应注意下面几点：
1．确定文体：这是一篇看图作文，写作中应注意看图作文的常用结构；
2．主体时态：应以一般现在时为主；
3．主体人称：由于是写关于“低头族”现象，所以应该以第一、三人称为主。
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第一段：介绍图画内容，全家人正在聚餐，但年轻人却在玩手机，完全不顾父母的感受；
第二段：陈述“低头族”这种社会现象；
第三段：就此现象提出自己的看法。
第二步　遣词造句
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1．忙于…… bury oneself in
2．对……有影响have an effect on
3．扩大widen
4．增加add to
5．就……而言as far as...concerned
6．面对面地face to face
7．和谐的harmonious
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1．从图中可以看出，一家人聚在一起吃一顿丰盛的晚餐。(that引导宾语从句)
From the picture we can see that a big family get together to have a big dinner.
2．当他们坐下来吃饭时，年轻人只是埋头玩手机，完全无视他们的父母，父母感到非常孤独和悲伤。(when引导的时间状语从句，so引导结果状语从句)
When they sit down to table，the young just bury themselves in playing with their cellphones，and totally ignore their parents，so their parents feel very lonely and sad.
3．对手机上瘾也可能导致青少年在学校表现不佳，这增加了长辈的担忧。
Addiction to cellphones might also lead to teenagers’ poor performance at school，and it adds to the elders’ worries.
4．我认为与我们的家庭成员面对面交流很重要，这有助于营造一个和谐的家庭氛围。(it作形式宾语)
I think it important to communicate with our family members face to face，and it helps build a harmonious family atmosphere.
第三步　句式升级
1．用as引导的非限制性定语从句升级句1
As can be seen from the picture，a big family get together to have a big dinner.
2．用现在分词作状语和who引导的非限制性定语从句升级句2
When they sit down to table，the young just bury themselves in playing with their cellphones，totally ignoring their parents，who feel very lonely and sad.
3．用which引导的非限制性定语从句升级句3
Addiction to cellphones might also lead to teenagers’ poor performance at school，which adds to the elders’ worries.
4．用which引导的非限制性定语从句升级句4
I think it important to communicate with our family members face to face，which helps build a harmonious family atmosphere.
第四步　组句成篇
用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇100词左右的英语短文。
参考答案
Task 3　精美句式　素材积累
答案　1.In the picture，a man is wearing a hat and an apron，and is carrying an umbrella because it is raining heavily.
2．We can see he is in his garden，for he is watering the flowers with a watering can.
3．The overall message we can take from this picture is that it is important to have routines and timetables，as they can help us stay organised...
第四步　组句成篇
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As can be seen from the picture，a big family get together to have a big dinner.But when they sit down to table，the young just bury themselves in playing with their cellphones，totally ignoring their parents，who feel very lonely and sad.
There is no doubt that cellphones have a negative effect on our lives.Heavy use of cellphones actually widens the distance between teenagers and their elders，leaving the elders more lonely.Worse still，addiction to cellphones might also lead to teenagers’ poor performance at school，which adds to the elders’ worries.
As far as I’m concerned，it’s necessary to limit the time we spend using cellphones.And I think it important to communicate with our family members face to face，which helps build a harmonious family atmosphere.
核心考点 讲练互动
1．The furniture is light so they can arrange it as they wish，and the cabinets are low so the children can reach them.(教材P44)
?arrange vt.筹备；安排；整理
(1)arrange (for sb./sth.) to do sth.安排(某人/某物)做某事arrange sth.for sb.为某人安排好某事(2)arrangement n．安排；筹备；约定make an arrangement/arrangements for...安排……
[佳句赏读]　感悟句意·背诵
①It’s not necessary for parents to arrange everything for their children.
②Have you arranged to meet the famous comedian this weekend
③We have already made arrangements for the significant conference.
④He arranged for someone to drive his wife home.
[单句语法填空]
①They have arranged for another man to take(take) his place.
②They made an arrangement(arrange) to share the food.
2．Some people think that English may not be as popular as it is now.(教材P43)
(1)as popular as属于“as...as...”结构。其否定式为：not as/so...as...。(2)as...as...结构的具体形式有：①as＋形容词＋a/an＋可数名词单数＋as...像……一样的……②as＋形容词/副词原级＋as...像……一样……③和……一样多
[佳句赏读]　感悟句意·背诵
①As we can see，she is as good a politician as her mother.
②His bedroom is not as/so neat as his elder sister’s.
③It makes me astonished that you’ve made as many mistakes as I have.
[完成句子]
①He is as successful an actor as the actor Chen Daoming.
他和陈道明一样是一位成功的男演员。
②I have as many books as he does.
我拥有的书和他一样多。
达标检测
Ⅰ.单句语法填空
1．However，tea is becoming as popular coffee and milk in England today.
2．They have made all the (arrange) for the conference about economics.
Ⅱ.完成句子
1．It’s generally believed that teaching is it is a science.(as...as)
人们普遍认为，教学是一种科学，也是一门艺术。
2．My father in the railway station this morning.
今天早上，我的父亲安排我到火车站去接我姑姑。
答案：达标检测
Ⅰ.单句语法填空
as 2. arrangements
Ⅱ.完成句子
as much an art as 2. arranged for me to meet my aunt
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