2024年浙江中考英语复习书面表达（含解析）

书面表达20篇
(2024年浙江省名校模拟真题)
1．（2024·浙江杭州·一模）初中三年即将过去，回顾这段时光，你是否想起很多人很多事，有许多难忘的回忆，也有很多感慨？假定你是李华，你校英语俱乐部向九年级学生征集稿件，题为“给*的一封信”，请你参考以下内容写一封稿件投稿。
内容要点
Person Memories Feelings
myself/parent/teacher/classmate/... 1. have great time/make progress... 2. have trouble/make mistakes… 3. ... sweet/sad/happy thankful/regretful/proud ...
要求：
1.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名；
2.词数80—100，开头已给出（不计词数）。
A letter to ________
Dear ________,
How time flies! It’s time to say goodbye to my junior high school life. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
A letter to myself
Dear myself,
How time flies! It’s time to say goodbye to my junior high school life.
Memories are still fresh that you were so shy and quiet when in Grade Seven. Sometimes you don’t even have the courage to ask your teacher about your study. But now, with the help of teachers and warm-hearted classmates, you have become more confident and outgoing. Do you remember fighting with your best friend Sometimes silence can lead to misunderstandings. Try to open yourself up, and you will understand what
friendship means to everybody.
May you always keep these ups and downs in mind. It is all of these unforgettable moments that help you grow into a better person.
Wish you all the best, my dear self.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：主要是一般现在时；
③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意不要漏写你的感受，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，补全标题和收信人；
第二步，具体阐述你对初中生活的回忆；
第三步，说明你的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①warm-hearted热心的
②confident自信的
③misunderstanding误解
④unforgettable难忘的
[高分句型]
①Try to open yourself up, and you will understand what friendship means to everybody.（what引导的宾语从句）
②It is all of these unforgettable moments that help you grow into a better person.（强调句）
2．（2024·浙江杭州·一模）英语杂志社Sunday Mail正在开展以“One Thing I’m Proud of”为题的英语征文活动。请根据广告中的信息用英语写一篇100 词左右的征文，分享一件你自己认为自豪的事情。开头已给出 (不计词数)。
Articles Wanted
One Thing I’m Proud of
What is the thing you are proud of
When did it happen and what did you do
Why does this thing make you feel proud Or what important lesson did you learn from this thing
Tell us what you think!
Write an article answering these questions and we will publish the best ones in our magazine.
One Thing I’m Proud of
The thing I am proud of is that ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】例文
One Thing I’m Proud of
The thing I am proud of is that I visited some old people to make them happy.
It was on a fine autumn afternoon when I was still a teenager. I noticed an old grandma sitting silently under a tall tree in front of her house, looking rather sad and lonely. I went to have a chat with her. After our short conversation, I got to know that all the old women’s sons and daughters were far away from her, making their lives in big cities and she felt lonely. I felt sympathetic for her, and I realized that there were actually many old people like her in the village. So a good idea occurred to me suddenly.
I gathered my friends, and organized them to visit these old people one by one. We sang songs, danced and told jokes to them, which made them happy. One of them was so moved that tears fell down. Caring for those around us and passing our happiness to others are what have learnt that day. I made it, and I feel really proud of myself that gave comfort to those who needed most.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：根据所给广告中的信息完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，介绍事情发生的经过；
第三步，介绍这件事为什么使你感到骄傲或者从中学到什么重要的事情以及自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①silently静静地
②have a chat with sb.和某人聊天
③far away from…离……很远
④sympathetic同情的
⑤occur to被想起
[高分句型]
We sang songs, danced and told jokes to them, which made them happy.(which引导非限制性定语从句)
3．（2024·浙江宁波·一模）假如你叫李华，近日你收到了你的英国笔友Alice发来的电子邮件。请根据邮件内容用英语回复，与她交流自己看法，提出合理的建议，为她排忧解难。
注意：
（1）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
（2）词数80-100。
Dear Li Hua, How’s everything going I’ve been at my new school for a week, but I feel lonely and unhappy. I miss my old friends so much. What’s worse, I even have a headache these days. I can’t sleep well at night. What shall I do Yours, Alice
Dear Alice,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Alice,
Everything goes well. I’m sorry to hear that you’ve got some trouble these days. It’s normal to feel lonely in a new environment. In fact, it’s a good idea to make some new friends by joining some clubs. There’s no need for you to make many friends as long as they’re good. If you have problems in sleeping well, you should see a doctor in time. Taking the right medicine will also help relieve your headache.
I do hope you’ll feel better soon and I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给邮件提炼出写作要点；考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表达关切；
第二步，针对孤独和睡眠问题提出合理的建议；
第三步，表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
①make friends交朋友
②as long as只要
③hear from 收到……来信
[高分句型]
If you have problems in sleeping well, you should see a doctor in time.（if引导的条件状语从句）
4．（2024·浙江杭州·一模）每年的“世界读书日”(4月23日) 之前，中国新闻出版研究院都会发布“青少年阅读调查报告 (Youth Reading Survey)”。请根据下表信息，并结合自身实际， 谈谈你的观点和看法。
要求：1.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名：
2. 词数80—100，开头已给出 (不计词数)。
Reading is very important in our daily life. Last week, we made a survey about reading among the teenagers. Here are the results.
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【答案】例文
Reading is very important in our daily life. Last week, we made a survey about reading among the teenagers. Here are the results. Only 6% of teenagers read books less than 1 hours a week. About 27% like to read books 1-2 hours a week. 25% of teenagers read books more than 2 hours a week. About 42% like to read books more than 3 hours a week.
In my opinion, reading can not only open our minds, but also make us clever and happy. Reading can cultivate oneself. One who is filled with knowledge always behaves with elegance. So I would like to suggest that everyone should read more books and read good books. It will be very helpful for us!
Let’s start reading now. And let it become a part of our life!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是看图作文；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。借用“读书在我们日常生活中是非常重要的”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——图表信息、你的观点及看法等均要一一阐述。
第三步：书写结语。表达“让我们现在开始读书”的期望。
[亮点词汇]
①start reading开始读书
②open our minds放开我们的思想
③cultivate oneself修养自己
[高分句型]
①One who is filled with knowledge always behaves with elegance. (定语从句）
②Let’s start reading now. (祈使句)
5．（23-24九年级下·浙江杭州·阶段练习）假定你是学生李平，你的英国交换生Adam在回国后给你写了一封邮件，请你用英语进行回复。词数80左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Hi Li Ping, I hope you’re doing well. Since returning to the UK, I become more interested in learning Chinese. However, I’m facing some difficulties. How can I write Chinese well How can I use four main tones (声调) correctly when I speak Chinese Could you offer me some advice to improve these skills Your help would mean a lot. I hope to hear from you soon! Best, Adam
Hi Adam,
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Best regards,
Li Ping
【答案】例文：
Hi Adam,
I’m glad to hear from you! It’s great that you start learning Chinese and it’s common to have some challenges.
I think it is necessary for you to practice regularly to improve writing skills. Using language apps can also help a lot. For mastering tones, you can listen to native speakers actively and repeat after them. Having conversations with them will also improve your spoken skills.
Feel free to ask me any time if needed. Your progress is impressive, and I’m here to offer support.
Best regards,
Li Ping
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：这是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：主要采用“一般现在时”；
③提示：分析来信可知，写作重点是对于“如何把中文书写得更好”和“说中文时的正确运用声调”两方面给出自己的建议。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明学中文遇到问题很正常；
第二步，从“书写”和“声调”两方面给出自己的建议；
第三步，评价并支持对方学中文。
[亮点词汇]
①hear from 收到来信
②practice regularly 经常练习
③have conversations with 与某人对话
[高分句型]
①It’s great that you start learning Chinese and it’s common to have some challenges.（it作形式主语）
②Feel free to ask me any time if needed.（if引导条件状语从句）
6．（2024·浙江宁波·一模）假如你是李华，收到加拿大笔友Mike的邮件，请阅读邮件并回复。词数80左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
To: lihua@
From: mike2010@
Subject: My Life in Junior High School
Dear Li Hua， How’s it going I hope everything is OK with you. I hear that your junior high school life is coming to an end. How have you changed since you started junior high Do you have any special memories How do you like your teachers and classmates Looking forward to your reply!Mike
To: mike2010@
From: lihua@
Subject: My Life in Junior High School
Dear Mike, I’m glad to hear from you. _________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua
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【答案】例文
Dear Mike,
I’m glad to hear from you. My life in junior high is colorful and I’ve changed a lot. First, I have become better at solving problems. Besides, I have become more confident. I was worried that I couldn’t do well in my lessons. However, with the help of my teachers and classmates. I’ve made great progress.
The past three years has also left me warm memories. I remember falling down in a running race in Grade 8.
My friend helped me stand up and encouraged me to finish the race.
I value my life in junior high!
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
② 时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③ 提示：根据邮件问题所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的近况；
第二步，介绍上初中以来的变化和特别的记忆；
第三步，书写小结。
[亮点词汇]
① be worried that担心
② with the help of在……帮助下
③ encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事
[高分句型]
I was worried that I couldn’t do well in my lessons.（宾语从句）
7．（2024·浙江宁波·一模）随着科技的发展，智能化应用软件如“作业帮”、”小猿搜题”、“文心一言”等正不断深入教学领域，在赋能教学的同时也不断挑战着我们的认知。上周五的主题班会同学们就此展开了激烈的讨论, 请根据表格提示描述正反两方观点，并表明你站在哪一方，且陈述理由。
Some think Others think My opinion
1. save much time 2. act like patient teachers 1. more screen time 2. be poorer in problem solving ...
注意: (1) 必须包含所有要点，可适当拓展。
(2) 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
(3) 词数80-100；首句已给，不计入总词数。
Last Friday, we had a heated discussion on whether the Apps like “Zuoyebang”, ”Wenxinyiyan”, and the like can truly help us in study.
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【答案】One possible version:
Last Friday, we had a heated discussion on whether the Apps like “Zuoyebang”, “Wenxinyiyan”, and the like can truly help us in study.
Some think we can save much time by using them. Once we have problems, we needn’t take time to look for someone for help. Instead, we can use Apps anytime and anywhere. What’s more, such Apps act like patient teachers and never get fed up with anyone. Others think we will have more screen time if we use them often. Moreover, we might be poorer in problem solving if we rely more on Apps.
After entering junior school, my parents can’t help me with my study any longer. Unlike humans, Apps never get angry with us. So I agree that we can use them for help.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，介绍正反两方的观点；
第三步，介绍自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①save节省
②take time to do sth.花时间做某事
③get fed up with…对……感到厌烦
④screen time屏幕时间
⑤rely on依靠
⑥not…any longer不再……
[高分句型]
Others think we will have more screen time if we use them often.(省略that的宾语从句；if引导条件状语从句)
8．（2024·浙江杭州·一模）你校的结对学校——英国Sunshine School师生团将来你校，学生会提供了活动计划（Plan A和Plan B）表，请你选择其中之一，在英语课上介绍该方案和目的。
Plan A Plan B
Time 2:00 p.m.~5:00 p.m. Friday, May 10th 2:00 p.m.~5:00 p.m. Friday, May 100th
Places the art room & the square the school playground
Activities 1. make kites; 2. fly the kites; 3. … 1. play some games; 2. have a soccer match; 3. …
Purposes communicate with each other; enjoy the beautiful sights of the school; … a good way to relax; build friendship; …
要求：1. 两个计划中任选其一；
2. 必须包括一个计划中的所有要点内容，并适当发挥；
3. 词数：100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名等有关信息。
Some teachers and students from our partner school — Sunshine School will visit us on May 10th. I think Plan ________ is more suitable for them.
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【答案】例文1：
Some teachers and students from our partner school — Sunshine School will visit us on May 10th. I think Plan A is more suitable for them.
The activities will begin at 2 o’clock and finish at 5 o’clock in the afternoon. All the activities are about kites, a traditional Chinese folk art form. First, the teachers and students will learn how to make kites with the help of our volunteers in the art room. After that, they will go to the square to fly the kites. At the same time, we can communicate with each other and enjoy the beautiful sights of our school. What a great idea! Finally, in order to know more about the art form, they will also watch a video about the kite festival.
I hope the teachers and students will like the plan!
例文2：
Some teachers and students from our partner school — Sunshine School will visit us on May 10th. I think Plan B is more suitable for them.
The activities will begin at 2 o’clock and finish at 5 o’clock in the afternoon. We have three activities in total. The first activity is Chinese Games. Students and teachers will have a chance to experience some traditional Chinese games together, like playing cuju, an old Chinese soccer game. Playing games is a good way to relax. Also, we will have a soccer match, which can help us build friendship and learn from each other. After that, there will be a music show. All the students and teachers can show themselves while having fun together.
I hope the teachers and students will like the plan!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中给出的关键信息，选择一个计划介绍该方案及目的。
[写作步骤]
第一步，选择计划A或计划B；
第二步，介绍具体的时间、地点、活动及目的；
第三步，收尾，希望老师和学生们喜欢这个计划。
[亮点词汇]
①with the help of ... 在……的帮助下
②at the same time 与此同时
③in total 总共
④have fun 玩得愉快
[高分句型]
①First, the teachers and students will learn how to make kites with the help of our volunteers in the art room.（疑问词+动词不定式）
②Also, we will have a soccer match, which can help us build friendship and learn from each other.（which引导非限定性定语从句）
9．（2024·浙江杭州·一模）假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Michael即将结束在中国的交换生课程。他打算为家人和好友准备一些中国礼物。请你写一封电子邮件，向他推荐三件有特色的礼物并说明推荐的理由(礼物可以从下表中选择或自行确定)。
Presents Reasons
a silk scarf soft and comfortable; some Chinese paintings on it
Chinese tea paper cuts pieces of Chinese clay art Chinese fans toy pandas … …
注意：
(1)文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。
(2)词数：90-140。
Dear Michael,
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Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Michael,
There are many choices for you to choose wonderful Chinese presents.
For your mother, I think a silk scarf from Hangzhou is a nice present. It’s soft and comfortable. There are usually beautiful Chinese paintings on it. And you can give your father some Chinese tea. It’s a kind of healthy drink with a long history. Paper cutting is a traditional Chinese art. Chinese artists cut the paper into different shapes, such as flowers or buildings. I believe your friends will like paper cuts.
I hope these can help you.
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，可参考表格中给出的礼物来推荐三件有特色的礼物。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，推荐礼物；
第二步，具体推荐三种有特色的礼物；
第三步，收尾，希望能帮到对方。
[亮点词汇]
①give sb. sth. 给某人某物
②traditional Chinese art 传统中国艺术
③such as 例如
[高分句型]
①There are many choices for you to choose wonderful Chinese presents.（There be句型）
②I believe your friends will like paper cuts.（省略that的宾语从句）
10．（2024·浙江杭州·一模）假如你是李明，你们学校的校园广播《英语之声》栏目以“An unforgettable ”为主题，开展征文活动，请你写一篇英语短文投稿，谈谈你最难忘的一次经历及感受。
要求：
1.请先将题目补全后再作答；
2.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息；
3.词数 80—100 词左右。
An Unforgettable
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【答案】例文
An Unforgettable Trip
Last month, I went to Xi’an with my classmates. The trip was so wonderful that I would never forget it.
We went there by train and it took us three hours to get there. On the first day, we visited some museums and saw a lot of Chinese traditional paintings. They were wonderful. In the evening, we had some special food, such as biangbiang noodles, liangpi, roujiamo and so on. I like Yangrou paomo best, which is a famous local snack in Xi’an. The next day, we went to some famous places in Xi’an, such as the Terra-cotta Warriors, the Bell Tower and the Drum Tower. Of course, we took a lot of photos.
We had a great time and we also learned a lot about Chinese history. It was an interesting trip and I hope to pay a visit to Xi’an again!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：介绍自己的一次令自己难忘的旅行经历，可适当发挥，注意逻辑清晰，表达准确。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，介绍去了哪里旅行；
第二步，具体介绍旅行的过程；
第三步，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②and so on等等
③have a great time玩得开心
④pay a visit to参观
[高分句型]
①The trip was so wonderful that I would never forget it. (so ... that引导结果状语从句)
②I like Yangrou paomo best, which is a famous local snack in Xi’an. (which引导定语从句)
11．（2024·浙江宁波·一模）假如你是李华，为了提高学生对科学的兴趣，你校上周五在学校体育馆举行了校园科学节活动。你的英国笔友Tom 得知后，发邮件向你咨询科学节相关情况。请你根据邮件内容给他回复 一封邮件，并谈谈你的感受!
注意：
(1)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
(2)需包含邮件中划线的所有要点提示；
(3)词数80左右，邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
(4)参考词汇： attend a science lecture、make science works、give a science speech
To : LiHua@ Subject: Science Festival Dear Li Hua. How is it going You know I am quite interested in science and I think it is important for the development of a country. Yesterday, I was told that there was a fantastic science festival in your school. Could you please tell me something about it When and where was the festival held Why did your school hold the festival What activities did you take part in Which one was the most interesting to you And how do you like the festival Looking forward to your reply. Yours,
Tom
Dear Tom,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Tom,
Happy to learn that you want to know about our science festival, I’m writing to share my experience and feelings with you .
To arouse the students’ interest in science, our school held the science festival at the school gym last Friday. Besides attending a science lecture, I also gave a science speech and made some science works. Though I am not good at making works, I still find it the most interesting activity that I have ever joined in during the festival. It was really an unforgettable experience in my school life. And all of us thought highly of this meaningful festival.
How about your school science festival Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：主要为“一般过去时”；
③提示：需包含邮件中划线的所有要点，注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，阐述写作意图，想介绍科学节分享自己的经验和感受；
第二步，介绍科学节的目的，活动和自己的经验，感受；
第三步，对科学节的评价。
[亮点词汇]
①share…with…和……分享……
②be good at 擅长于
③look forward to盼望
④arouse激起
[高分句型]
①I still find it the most interesting activity that I have ever joined in during the festival. (It作形式宾语)
②Though I am not good at making works, I still find it the most interesting activity that I have ever joined in during the festival. (让步状语从句)
12．（2024·浙江衢州·一模）假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Michael刚度过“考试周 (the exam week)”。他想了解你在考试后通常做些什么来调整自己。请你给他写一封邮件，分享你考试后的感受和做法。
内容要点 参考词汇
Feelings relaxed/worried/…
Things to do play basketball with friends/go for a walk with parents/…
注意：
(1)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息；
(2)词数：90-110；
(3)表格中参考词汇仅供选择使用，可适当发挥，使内容充实、行文连贯。
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【答案】例文
Dear Michael,
How are you doing these days I know that you have just taken some important exams. There is something that I want to share with you about how to adjust ourselves after exams.
Although I reviewed all the subjects carefully before exams, I was still not confident about the results of exams. I felt worried. I realized that I had to deal with it. I decided to play basketball with friends in order to make me relaxed and be active in going for a walk with parents. Besides, I also shared my feelings with my parents so that they could give me some useful advice.
I’m looking forward to your letter.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封邮件；
②时态：一般现在时与一般过去时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题；
第二步，分享自己考试后的感受和做法。
[亮点词汇]
①deal with应对
②decide to do决定做
③in order to为了
[高分句型]
①There is something that I want to share with you about how to adjust ourselves after exams.（定语从句）
13．（23-24九年级下·浙江·期中）中国文化博大精深，为了传承中国传统文化，你校近日将举办“传统艺术展会”(The Traditional Art Fair)。假如你是李华，请根据下面表格给外教Mr. Green 写一封电子邮件，介绍该展会并邀请他参加活动。
When 1:00—4:00 this Friday afternoon
Where school hall
Who …
What ·live shows ·handicrafts (手工艺品) ·…
Why · understand...better ·…
注意：1.内容需包括表格中所有要点，并适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
3.词数 100词左右，邮件首尾句已给出，仅供参考。
To: Mr. Green
From: Li Hua
Dear Mr. Green, I’m writing to invite you to the Traditional Art Fair.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your reply. Li Hua
【答案】Possible version:
Dear Mr. Green,
I’m writing to invite you to the Traditional Art Fair. It will be held in the school hall from 1:00 p.m. to 4:00 p.m. this Friday.
In order to help more people understand the traditional Chinese culture much better as well as build up cultural confidence, all the students and teachers will join in the fair. At the fair, you’ll enjoy live shows like
traditional dance and folk music. Also, there will be a display of handicrafts, including paper cuttings and sky lanterns. What’s more, if you are interested, you can take part in any of these activities on your own.
It would be a great honor to have you with us. Please let me know if you can make it.
Looking forward to your reply!
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态以“一般将来时”为主；
③提示：根据所给表格完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，根据表格，介绍传统艺术展会的相关信息；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①in order to为了
②as well as以及
③build up建立
④display展览
⑤take part in参加
[高分句型]
What’s more, if you are interested, you can take part in any of these activities on your own.(if引导条件状语从句)
14．（2024·浙江湖州·一模）假如你是李华，交换生Peter即将来你校学习，他对你校的社团活动很感兴趣。请根据以下信息，用英文写一封电子邮件，向他推荐一个你参加过的社团。
提示词语: take part in , improve, benefit
提示问题: What club did you join
What did you do in the club
Why do you recommend the club
注意：
(1) 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
(2) 内容须包含以上内容，可适当发挥；
(3) 词数：80-100词。短文首句仅供参考，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
Welcome to our school!
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Possible version 1:
Dear Peter,
Welcome to our school! I’m glad to hear that you are interested in our school clubs. I, as a basketball lover, highly recommend you join the “BasketballClub”. This club provides a platform for us students to improve their basketball skills and build up our bodies. With various matches every term, we have not only received professional training there, but also developed organization abilities, which are beneficial for my personal growth.
Looking forward to seeing you at our club and I will actively take part in the activities together with you during your stay. Wish you a pleasant stay at our school!
Best wishes,
Yours,
Li Hua
Possible version 2:
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to hear the exciting news recently that you will be coming to our school as an exchange student! As an experienced student who took part in various activities, I would like to recommend the “Science Club” to you.
We can learn science knowledge through various lectures here. We also have the chance to work on several exciting projects, which can not only enrich our learning experience but also develop our team work and leadership skills.
Looking forward to your arrival and I'm sure you’ll find it both educational and fun. If you have any
questions or need more information, feel free to ask.
Best regards,
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】范文一：
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。引出作者向Peter推荐的社团；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。作者讲述参加社团的收获及推荐该社团的原因；
第三步，书写结语。作者表达了希望Peter来参加他们的俱乐部并一起参加活动的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in 对……感兴趣
②provide sth. for sb. 为某人提供某物
③not only…but also 不仅……而且
④take part in 参加(活动)
[高分句型]
①I’m glad to hear that you are interested in our school clubs. (宾语从句)；
②With various matches every term, we have not only received professional training there, but also developed organization abilities, which are beneficial for my personal growth. (介词短语；定语从句)
15．（2024·浙江宁波·一模）中国人一直为古代的四大发明感到骄傲。如今，新的四大发明——高铁、电子支付、共享单车、网上购物再次影响着人们的生活，请你写一篇英语短文，向外国友人介绍其中一项你认为最重要的新四大发明并说明理由，帮助外国友人更好地了解中国。
注意：(1)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等；
(2)词数：80—100（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Now China has once again shown its ability to change the world with its “four great new inventions”.
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【答案】例文：
Now China has once again shown its ability to change the world with its “four great new inventions”. They are high-speed railways, electronic payments, shared bicycles and online shopping. I think the most important innovation is high-speed railways. Here are my reasons:
Firstly, high-speed railways are safe. They use electronic information to monitor the on-going driving so that they can avoid some terrible things even in case of bad weather. Secondly, the services are wonderful. They use advanced technology to make passengers feel comfortable. Thirdly, they are nearly as fast as planes. The most important thing is that you don’t have to stay at the station for a long time because high-speed railways are always on time. With high-speed railway, you can go anywhere in China now.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏题干中的要求，并适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
①第一步，表明写作意图。借用“新四大发明”来引出下文中对高铁的介绍；
②第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“更安全、服务好、速度快和准时”四方面入手，重点介绍高铁；
③第三步，书写结语。高铁有利出行。
[亮点词汇]
①so that 以便
②in case of 以防
③on time 准时
[高分句型]
①I think the most important innovation is high-speed railways.（宾语从句）
②They use electronic information to monitor the on-going driving so that they can avoid some terrible things even in case of bad weather.（so that引导的目的状语从句）
③The most important thing is that you don’t have to stay at the station for a long time because high-speed railways are always on time.（that引导的表语从句+because引导的原因状语从句）
16．（2024·浙江杭州·一模）初中三年即将过去，回顾这段时光，你是否有许多难忘的回忆，也有很多感慨？假定你是李华，你校英文报向初三学生征集稿件，题为“写给自己的一封信”，请你结合下表内容写一份稿件投稿。
A Letter to Myself 内容要点 参考词汇
Memories Sweet: make progress…have a great time… Bitter: make mistakes…have trouble…
Feelings positive: take pride in…thankful… Negative: regretful…
注意：
（1）文中必须包含两项内容要点，可适当发挥（参考词汇仅供选择使用或参考）；
（2）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
（3）词数：80~100，稿件的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
A Letter to Myself
Dear myself,
How time flies! It’s time to say goodbye to your junior high school life. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Wish you all the best, my dear self.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
A Letter to Myself
Dear myself,
How time flies! It’s time to say goodbye to your junior high school life.
Memories are still fresh that you were so shy and quiet when in Grade Seven. You had trouble asking your teachers about your study. But now, with the help of teachers and warm-hearted classmates, you have made progress and become more confident and outgoing. You did have a great time in school. You took pride in yourself and were grateful to the people who helped you.
Do you remember the mistake of fighting with your best friend You felt regretful. Sometimes silence can lead to misunderstandings.
May you always keep these ups and downs in mind. It is all of these unforgettable moments that help you grow into a better person.
Wish you all the best, my dear self.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封书信；
②时态：时态为一般过去时与一般现在时；
③提示：根据所给提示内容写给自己一封信。注意不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己三年来难忘的回忆；
第二步，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①had trouble doing有困难做
②with the help of在……帮助下
③took pride in以……为骄傲
[高分句型]
It is all of these unforgettable moments that help you grow into a better person. (强调句)
17．（23-24九年级下·浙江杭州·阶段练习）假设你叫李华，下面是一则学校A．N. Club的通知请仔细阅读并用英语写一篇邮件向该社团投稿。
Wonderful Ideas Wanted
To make you have an unforgettable memory of junior high school, we’ve planned to hold a meaningful activity. Which one do you prefer, a graduation party or a graduation trip Can you provide us with more details and reasons
Looking forward to your wonderful ideas.
A graduation party A graduation trip
Place School Hall Xixi Wetland
Activities invite…to give a speech play/act/sing... ... take a boat ride have a picnic ...
Reasons to have an unforgettable memory ...
注意：
(1) 包含所给的内容要点，可适当发挥；写作参考供选择使用；
(2) 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
(3) 字数：100词左右。
Dear A．N. Club,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear A. N. Club,
To make you have an unforgettable memory of junior high school, I’ve decided to choose a graduation trip to Xixi Wetland.
Xixi Wetland is such a great choice, because it offers a peaceful and natural environment for us. When we pay a visit to Xixi Wetland, we can take a boat ride along the river and enjoy wonderful views like colorful flowers and clear water at the same time. We can also have a picnic at the food stands next to the boat docks if we feel hungry and tired. What’s more, we can admire lively birds flying and take quite a few amazing photos.
I believe a graduation trip to Xixi Wetland will without doubt become treasure in our hearts.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析］
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括表格所列要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
［写作步骤］
第一步，开门见山，提出自己的观点；
第二步，介绍活动地点、活动内容以及理由；
第三步，书写总结。
［亮点词汇］
① pay a visit to 参观
② at the same time 同时
［高分句型］
① Xixi Wetland is such a great choice, because it offers a peaceful and natural environment for us. (because引导原因状语从句)
② I believe a graduation trip to Xixi Wetland will without doubt become treasure in our hearts. (宾语从句)
18．（23-24九年级下·浙江宁波·阶段练习）新学期一开学，“初中晚自习开不开”成为家长们讨论的热点话题，有反对、有焦急、有建议。宁波市教育局发出通知，明确初中学校上课日晚上可开设自习班，学生可以自愿报名。假如你是李华，你的朋友Amy很困惑该不该报名参加晚自习。根据以下提示，请你用英文给Amy写一封信，分析上晚自习的利弊并谈谈你的观点。
参考词汇：晚自习evening self-study 负担 burden 效率 efficiency 预习 preview
Advantages 1. improve learning efficiency (do homework quickly, preview the new knowledge, review...) 2. provide help; 3. ...
Disadvantages 1. copy homework; 2. lose some freedom; 3. ...
Your opinion…
要求：1. 包含表格中所有提示，并适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4. 词数：80-100词。（开头和结尾已给出, 但不计入总词数。）
Dear Amy,
I’m so glad to share my suggestions with you. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】参考范文：
Dear Amy,
I’m glad to share my suggestions with you.
On the one hand, students can finish their homework when they study at night, which can also lighten their burden. At the same time, they can preview new knowledge to make themselves understand in class. On the other hand, teachers can provide help to students in need when they study on their own in the evening, which will improve efficiency and prevent students from burning midnight oil and affecting their bodies; In addition, self-study at night in school can reduce the burden on parents. Some training classes are very expensive, which will greatly increase the cost of learning, which is not conducive to education equity.
However, it also has some drawbacks. Teachers think some students may copy their classmates’ homework. Some students may give up study when they meet difficulty, since there are teachers and students beside them, they can ask them.
To sum up, although we will lose some freedom when studying at night, the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages. Self study at night is a rational choice.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，完善表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，表明写作意图；
第二步，结合表格提示，阐述晚自习的利弊；
第三步，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①on the one hand ... on the other hand 一方面……另一方面……
②prevent sb. from doing sth. 阻止某人做某事
③give up 放弃
[高分句型]
①On the one hand, students can finish their homework when they study at night, which can also lighten their burden.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
②Some students may give up study when they meet difficulty, since there are teachers and students beside them, they can ask them.（since引导的原因状语从句）
③To sum up, although we will lose some freedom when studying at night, the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages.（although引导的让步状语从句）
19．（23-24九年级上·浙江湖州·期末）假如你是李华，校英语报正在举行主题为“To Be a Better Self”的征文活动，请根据下面导图提示，用英语写一篇短文投稿。
注意：
1. 短文必须包括导图所有要点，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
3. 词数 80-100，标题已给出，不计入总词数。
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【答案】例文
To Be a Better Self
In the pursuit of personal growth, it is essential to focus on various aspects of our lives. Here are some ways.
Firstly, we should strive to improve study. We can plan to develop a more effective study routine by setting specific goals. Secondly, I believe that improving relationships with others is vital. To achieve this, we should make an effort to listen more actively, communicate effectively, and show empathy towards others. Thirdly, improving the environment or society is an important aspect. We can engage in community service, whether it’s helping the elderly or organizing charity events, to make a positive impact on society. Lastly, I believe that we should focus on maintaining a healthy lifestyle by exercising regularly and eating a balanced diet.
In conclusion, becoming a better self is a continuous journey that requires effort and dedication. Let us all strive to be better selves.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，根据导图提示，介绍如何做更好的自己；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①in the pursuit of 追求
②focus on 专注于
③strive to 努力
④show empathy towards sb.对某人表示同情
⑤engage in参与
[高分句型]
In conclusion, becoming a better self is a continuous journey that requires effort and dedication. (that引导定语从句)
20．（2024·浙江·一模）假如你是李华，你的学校成立了“青春劳动社(the Youth Labor Club)”。请你就此阐述该社团设立的意义，提供相关活动建议以及理由，写一篇英语短文向学校英语报投稿。
Activities Reasons
●offer classes. ●organize competitions. ●... learn by doingc olorful ...
注意：
(1)短文中至少包含两个活动，以上表格中的活动仅供参考。
(2)文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
(3)词数：100词左右：开头已给出，不计人总词数。
As we all know, Labor Education has been included in the education of middle and primary schools in China.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
As we all know, Labor Education has been included in the education of middle and primary schools in China. Our school has set up the Youth Labor Club, which I think is of great importance. We can learn some life skills
and how to work together. Also, we will realize it is not easy to do labor work.
As for how to organize it well, I have some ideas. The school can offer classes, such as a cooking class and a paper-cutting class. Besides, the school can also hold competitions to see who is the best in making cakes. Such activities make our school life more colorful and meaningful.
I strongly believe we’ll learn a lot from the club.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图借用“学校成立青春劳动社”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，指出劳动社的意义、提供活动建议及理由；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①set up成立
②of great importance很重要
③as for至于
[高分句型]
①Our school has set up the Youth Labor Club, which I think is of great importance. (which引导的定语从句)
②Also, we will realize it is not easy to do labor work. (省略that的宾语从句)