Unit7书面表达12篇
1.如何写世界知识话题的相关文章话题分析本单元以“世界知(Facts about the world)”为核心话题,谈论大自然及保护野生动物。该话题取材广泛,包括濒危动物保护、环境保护等内容。写作实践你听说过某些濒临灭绝的动物吗?请以“Protect Wild Animals”为题,用英语写一篇短文,说明保护野生动物的重要性。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Protect Wild Animals
Now more and more wild animals like tigers and pandas are in danger. For one reason, people cut down forests, so wild animals have no place to live in or food to eat. For another, people kill them for their fur or other parts of the body to make money. As a result, wild animals face serious problems in the wild. If we do nothing, there may be less and less of them left.
We human beings could not live without wild animals. It is very important to protect them. So we should help them have more babies, build more reserves for them, and make laws to stop people killing them.
Let’s take action right away to protect wild animals! Protecting them is just protecting ourselves.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据题目介绍为什么野生动物处于危险之中,为什么要保护它们和如何保护它们;注意行文连贯,逻辑清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开头已给出,介绍野生动物所面临的困境;
第二步,介绍动物面临困境的原因,以及保护它们的重要性;
第三步,呼吁人们立刻行动起来。
[亮点词汇]
①be in danger 处于危险之中
②cut down 砍倒
③as a result 结果
[高分句型]
①If we do nothing, there may be less and less of them left.(if引导条件状语从句)
②It is very important to protect them.(动词不定式作主语)
2.你听说过某些濒临灭绝的动物吗?请以“Why Should We Protect Wild Animals ” 为题,写一篇短文,说明为什么要保护野生动物。
写作内容:
(1)为什么有些野生动物处于危险之中?
(2)为什么保护野生动物很重要?
(3)我们应该采取什么措施来保护野生动物?
写作要求:
(1)不得照抄原文;不得出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
(2)条理清晰,意思连贯,词数70个左右。
Why Should We Protect Wild Animals
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【答案】例文
Why Should We Protect Wild Animals
I think there are many endangered animals in the world, such as tigers and pandas. When farmers cut down trees, tigers can no longer hide and hunt. Many tigers are killed by people who want to sell their fur for money. And there are few places where pandas can live.
We are not alone in the world. We human beings could not live without all the plants and animals around us. So protecting wildlife animals is very important. We must take measures to keep plants from being destroyed and stop animals from being killed. If each of us can plant a tree and build a birdhouse, the world will be more beautiful. It is very easy but useful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,举例说明现在有很多动物濒临灭绝;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容;
第三步,书写结语表达“希望大家都能行动起来”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②no longer不再
③take measures采取措施
[高分句型]
①Many tigers are killed by people who want to sell their fur for money.(who引导的定语从句)
②If each of us can plant a tree and build a birdhouse, the world will be more beautiful.(if引导条件状语从句)
3.假如你是中国野生动物保护协会(CWCA)的成员,请你根据以下内容提示,以“Whales in Danger”为题,用英语写一篇文章,呼吁人们热爱动物、保护动物。
内容包括:
1. 简单介绍鲸鱼习性(food, place, interesting things…)
2. 分析鲸鱼现状及濒临灭绝的原因(至少2点)(in danger, kill, eat, pollution…)
3. 提出挽救、保护鲸鱼的方法(至少3点)(make rules, know, stop…)
Whales in Danger
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【答案】参考范文:
Whales in Danger
Whales are huge animals. They live in the sea and eat small fish and other sea life. One interesting fact is that whales can jump high out of the water. Another interesting fact is that they can sing beautiful songs.
On one hand, some kinds of whales are in danger because humans kill them for meat, fat and oil. On the other hand, whales are also in danger because of water pollution.
We should protect whales by not putting rubbish into the sea and making rules on whale protection. What’s more, we are supposed to stop killing them. As students, we should learn more about them.
Take actions now! We need to hold together to protect whales.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇应用文,为材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,简单介绍鲸鱼习性;
第二步,析鲸鱼现状及濒临灭绝的原因;
第三步,最后提出挽救、保护鲸鱼的方法。
[亮点词汇]
①On one hand...On the other hand一方面……另一方面
②because of因为
③what’s more而且
[高分句型]
①One interesting fact is that whales can jump high out of the water.(that引导的表语从句)
②On one hand, some kinds of whales are in danger because humans kill them for meat, fat and oil. (because引导的原因状语从句)
4.大熊猫丫丫的“回家之旅”屡上热搜,又一次提高了人们对大熊猫保护工作的关注。假如你和你的同桌正在参加学校举办的以Giving pandas a good life为主题的英文手抄报评选。你的同桌负责手抄报的绘制,而你负责文本的撰写。请根据如下提示,完成一篇英语短文。
注意:
(1)短文必须包括所有要点,并适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
(3)词数 80—100;标题已给出,不计入总词数。
Giving pandas a good life
What animal has 6 fingers and wears a black and white coat Yes, it’s the panda!
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【答案】例文
Giving pandas a good life
What animal has 6 fingers and wears a black and white coat Yes, it’s the panda! Pandas are so popular because they are cute and shy. They are also friendly to people. They like eating bamboo. It seems that they like sleeping all day if possible.
It is known that pandas are endangered. For one thing, many people cut down lots of trees so they may have terrible living conditions. For another, they may die of illnesses easily because many of them are out of protection.
I hope the government can build more natural panda homes. Also, it is necessary that everyone should treat them as our friends and protect their homes.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。以猜谜语的形式开头介绍熊猫;
第二步,从熊猫的个性、生活习惯、危险及措施等方面具体介绍;
第三步,书写结语,表达自己的感受,提出倡议。
[亮点词汇]
①be friendly to对……友好
②It seems that似乎
③cut down砍伐,减少
④die of死于
[高分句型]
①Pandas are so popular because they are cute and shy.(because引导原因状语从句)
②I hope the government can build more natural panda homes.(宾语从句)
5.在我们国家,野生动物,尤其是濒危野生动物一直能得到很好的保护。2021年,我们国家千方百计保护云南亚洲象安全迁徙就是一个很好的例子。请根据以下内容,以“Saving Asian elephants”为题,写一篇介绍及保护亚洲象的英语短文。
Animal 亚洲象
Food 草,树叶,也吃香蕉和甘蔗(sugarcane)
Living places 较热的地方
Description 亚洲最大最壮的陆地动物之一性格友善;极度濒危,数量稀少
Ways to protect Asian elephants 保护森林;不购买象牙(ivory)制品;……(请你自己补充一点)
要求:
1.80词左右(给出部分不计入总词数);
2.要点齐全,可适当发挥;
3.条理清晰,语句通顺,意义连贯,书写规范;
4.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
Saving Asian elephants
How much do you know about Asian elephants Let’s learn more about them.
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【答案】例文:
Saving Asian elephants
How much do you know about Asian elephants Let’s learn more about them.
The Asian elephant is one of the largest and strongest land animals in Asia. They mainly eat grass and leaves. At the same time, they also eat bananas and sugarcane. They enjoy living in hotter places. They have a friendly personality, but with the hunting and killing of people, they are now extremely endangered and in rare numbers.
In order to protect wild animals, we should cut down the forest reasonably and return the home to the wild animals. What’s more, the government should pass some firm laws to forbid abusing. We mustn’t buy ivory products.
In a word, if we can share the Earth with the animals, we will have a better world and a brighter future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏已给出的关键信息,写短文介绍亚洲象及如何保护亚洲象。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出文章主题,介绍亚洲象;
第二步,介绍亚洲象的食物、居住环境、现状等;
第三步,介绍保护亚洲象的方法;
第四步,收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①at the same time 与此同时
②in order to do sth. 为了做某事
③cut down 砍倒
④wild animals 野生动物
⑤in a word 总而言之
[高分句型]
①The Asian elephant is one of the largest and strongest land animals in Asia.(“one of the+形容词最高级+可数名词复数”结构的运用)
②They have a friendly personality, but with the hunting and killing of people, they are now extremely endangered and in rare numbers.(but连接表转折关系的并列句)
③In a word, if we can share the Earth with the animals, we will have a better world and a brighter future.(if引导条件状语从句)
6.北京时间4月27日16时26分,23岁的旅美归国大熊猫“丫丫”抵达上海浦东国际机场。据了解,中美开展大熊猫合作研究二十年来,为促进濒危物种保护研究发挥了积极作用。保护野生动物这一话题再次走进人们的视野。那么我们应该如何保护野生动物,尤其是濒危动物(endangered animals) 呢?
假设你是李华,请根据下面的内容提示,写一篇倡议书,呼吁大家保护濒临灭绝的动物,内容可适当发挥。
动物现状及被捕杀原因 被捕杀,失去家园,濒临灭绝…… (1) 被肉食 (2) 为了得到皮毛……
保护措施 (1) 不杀害濒危动物 (2) 不砍伐森林 (3) 不污染环境……
呼吁 ……
注意:
(1) 词数80—100,开头已为你写好,不计入总词数;
(2) 短文须包括所给内容信息,可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3) 在文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名。
Dear fellow students,
Animals are good friends to human beings, but______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you!
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear fellow students,
Animals are good friends to human beings, but people kill too many of them for their meat or fur. People also cut down many trees and take away their homes. Animals have no place to live. So they are becoming fewer and fewer. It is not right to kill animals. So people should stop killing animals and cutting down trees. In order to protect animals, more trees should be planted and some animals can be put in the zoo. Besides, people should stop polluting the environment. Recycle useful rubbish. Plenty of rubbish can be recycled like cans, paper, bottles, and so on.
Small actions can make a great difference to the earth. Let’s take action immediately.
Thank you!
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,内容可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步,整体说明动物现状及被捕杀原因;
第二步,具体给出保护措施;
第三步,最后呼吁大家保护濒临灭绝的动物。
[亮点词汇]
①cut down砍倒
②stop doing sth停止做某事
③in order to为了
④make a great difference产生巨大的影响
[高分句型]
In order to protect animals, more trees should be planted and some animals can be put in the zoo.(动词不定式作目的状语,含有情态动词的被动语态)
7.随着生活水平的提高,人们开始重视自己的生活质量。越来越多的人开始热衷于养宠物。可爱的小动物给人们带来了无穷的快乐,然而,对于那些不喜欢动物的人来说,宠物的存在会给他们的生活增添很多烦恼。请结合此话题,写一篇英语作文,谈谈你的看法:人们该不该养宠物,为什么?
观点1 养宠物 理由1:宠物可以让我们放松心情 理由2:对于老人来说,养宠物可以减轻寂寞感 理由3:……(自己增加一到两个理由)
观点2 不养宠物 理由1:养宠物需要我们花很多时间去照顾它们 理由2:宠物容易滋生细菌,带来疾病 理由3:……(自己增加一到两个理由)
总结你的观点(支持?/反对?)并写出至少一个原因。 1. …… 2. ……
注意:
1. 请选择其中一个观点来写作,文章的开头已为你写好;
2. 词数80左右。
参考词汇:
滋生细菌:breed bacteria 热衷于:be fond of
减轻寂寞感:feel less lonely 保卫房屋:keep house safe
在我看来:in my opinion
Nowadays, more and more people are fond of keeping pets because they can bring pleasure. But others don’t think so. They think it’s terrible to do it. In my opinion, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Nowadays, more and more people are fond of keeping pets because they can bring pleasure. But others don’t think so. They think it’s terrible to do it. In my opinion, keeping pets will do good to our family and ourselves. First, it’s relaxing to have a pet accompanied us because it is cute and smart. For example, a dog may understand you well when you are upset or tired. We can talk about our problems with the pets and never worry about letting out. Second, for the old, keeping a pet means living a family with them, so they will feel less lonely. What’s more, when there is a fire or something bad happened, the pet may warn the keeper about the danger. In this way, many people are saved by their pets.
All in all, try keeping a pet in your family and I am sure you will get a lot from it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇议论文,属于材料作文写作;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:文章开头以及要点已经给出,按照提示的要点逐点阐述,不要遗漏提示中的“选择其中一个观点来写作”这一要点,可以适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接短文开头,表明你对于养宠物的是持支持还是反对的看法;
第二步,根据所选择的观点,按照提示的内容进行阐述,可列举具体的事例;
第三步,再次表明自己的观点并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①do good to对……有好处
②let out泄露
③warn sb about sth提醒某人某事
[高分句型]
①First, it’s relaxing to have a pet accompanied us because it is cute and smart.(because引导原因状语从句,it作形式主语,动词不定式作真正的主语)
②For example, a dog may understand you well when you are upset or tired.(when引导时间状语从句)
③Second, for the old, keeping a pet means living a family with them, so they will feel less lonely.(so连接表示因果关系的并列分句)
8.上周日你和朋友一起去了动物园,你们见到了很多动物。大家讨论了各自喜欢的动物及他们的生存状况,并决定提出倡议,一起保护动物。请你以“Animals Are Our Friends”为题,写一篇文章。内容包含:
1. What’s your favourite animal
2. What do you know about this kind of animal (外貌,喜好,食物,习性……)
3. How can we protect this kind of animal
要求:
1.短文须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥;
2. 80词左右;
3. 不得出现真实校名,人名等。
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【答案】例文
Animals Are Our Friends
My favourite animal is the tiger. Tigers live in the forest. They are very beautiful and brave. They usually have orange fur with dark stripes. They also have big eyes and long tails. Tigers are symbols of strength and courage. They usually live alone and feed on other animals.
But tigers have been in danger of disappearing in recent years. What should we do to protect them First, we should make calls for people not to kill tigers anymore. What’s more, we had better protect their home in the forests. Only in this way can we save them.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文为一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:提示问题已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,适当增加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍喜欢的动物是老虎;
第二步,介绍老虎的外貌、喜好、食物、习性等;
第三步,给出保护老虎的建议。
[亮点词汇]
① feed on以……为食
② in danger of处于……危险之中
[高分句型]
Only in this way can we save them.(only位于句首修饰状语要倒装)
9.假如你是张淳,请你给同学们写一封倡议书,号召大家多种树、爱护树。倡议书中要指出树木有很多益处,如净化空气、美化城市、阻挡风沙、吹走泥土等。
要求:
1. 书写规范,语句通顺,行文流畅,结构完整,语法正确;
2. 不少于70词。
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【答案】例文
Dear class,
Trees are very important to us. They not only provide us with wood and other products, but also can stop the water from carrying the earth away and stop the wind from blowing the earth away. So trees can prevent flood and drought happening. Trees can also clean the air and make our city look more beautiful. All of us must try our best to plant trees every year. Let’s work together to plant more trees and protect them.
Yours,
Zhang Chun
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍树木得重要性;
第二步,号召多种树。
[亮点词汇]
①be important to对……重要
②provide sb with sth给某人提供某物
③stop…from doing sth阻止做某事
[高分句型]
①They not only provide us with wood and other products, but also can stop the water from carrying the earth away and stop the wind from blowing the earth away.(“not only…but also”结构,动名词作宾语)
②Let’s work together to plant more trees and protect them.(祈使句)
10.假设你是“绿色家园”环保组织的成员李明,现在正在向初中学生讲述植物的重要性并倡议学生们要保护它们。请根据下列要点写一篇关于植物的重要性(The Importance of Plants)的作文,可适当发挥,词数70词左右。
提示
(1)What plants can you see in our daily life
(2)What do plants need to grow well
(3)Why are plants important (至少三点)
提示词:environment环境
要求:1. 短文必须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥。
2. 不得出现真实人名地名校名。
3. 词数:不少于70词,开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。书写规范整洁。
The Importance of Plants
My name is Li Ming. I am lucky to be here. Now, I want to say something about plants. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
The Importance of Plants
My name is Li Ming. I am lucky to be here. Now, I want to say something about plants.
Plants are very common in our daily life. There are many trees and flowers around us. Plants need sunlight and rain to grow well. They are very important to us. First, plants can provide us with fruit, medicine, wood and so on. Secondly, plants provide oxygen for human beings and beautify the environment. Finally, plants can also provide homes and enough food for animals and birds.
So we should protect the environment, and we should plant trees every year.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍日常生活中的植物;
第二步,介绍植物需要什么才能长得好;
第三步,最后介绍植物很重要的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①be important to对……重要
②provide sth for sb为某人提供某物
③beautify the environment美化环境
[高分句型]
So we should protect the environment, and we should plant trees every year.(and连接两个并列结构)
11.假设你是一只华南虎(South China tiger),请根据以下档案,写一篇不少于80词的英语自我介绍。
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【答案】例文:
Hi, I’m a South China tiger. I have orange and black fur. I usually weigh 150 kilograms and 2 metres long. I like eating meat, such as pigs, deer, sheep and so on. I’m good at swimming, but I’m not good at climbing trees. I often swim in water. I like living alone, but I don’t feel lonely. I usually live for 20 years. The forests in Southeast China are my home. I can hardly see my companions there, because human beings destory our homes. They often cut down trees, and some people even kill us for our bones and skin.
So I hope people protect us because we are also part of the earth. First, I hope the country can estabilsh more nature reserves to provide us with more places to live. Second, I hope the goverment can make some laws to protect us and let people stop killing us.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步,根据内容提示介绍华南虎的特征、体重、身长等基本信息;
第二步,介绍目前华南虎的现状、困难以及求援。
[亮点词汇]
①be good at擅长
②cut down砍倒
③provide sb with sth提供某人某物
[高分句型]
①So I hope people protect us because we are also part of the earth.(because引导原因状语从句)
②I hope the country can estabilsh more nature reserves to provide us with more places to live.(that引导宾语从句)
12.假设你叫李华,刚刚收到外国交换生John的一封电子邮件。他已经来北京两个月了,但是还未参观过北京的景点。请给他回复一封电子邮件,简要介绍一下你参观过的某一个北京著名景点,你做了什么,并给他一些在京游玩的建议。
提示词语:wonderful, photos, traditional food, shoes, masks(口罩)
Dear Li Hua, I have been in Beijing for two months. In fact, I don’t know much about this city. Can you tell me one place that you have been to What did you do during the trip Can you give me some advice if I go there Yours, John
Dear John,
I’m glad that you have been in Beijing for two months. Beijing is a big city and there are many interesting places_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ If you have any questions, you can send an email to me.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear John,
I’m glad that you have been in Beijing for two months. Beijing is a big city and there are many interesting places, such as the Great Wall, the Summer Palace, the Palace Museum and the Forbidden City. The Great Wall is one of the seven wonders of the world. You can only appreciate the Great Wall when you climb it yourself. I’ve been to the Great Wall before. Also, I took a lot of pictures. If you want to go to the Great Wall, I can give you some advice.
First, you should get a pair of comfortable shoes. Because you’ll be walking for a long time. Having a comfortable pair of shoes will make your journey more enjoyable. Secondly, you should wear a mask. Finally, you should check the weather forecast in advance and choose a sunny day.
If you have any questions, you can send an email to me.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:根据所给邮件内容完成写作,不能遗漏信息,可自由发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍你去过的一个地方;
第二步,介绍你在旅行中做了什么;
第三步,最后给出对方游玩的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①one of...……之一
②make sb/sth adj.使某人/某事……
③in advance提前
[高分句型]
①You can only appreciate the Great Wall when you climb it yourself.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②If you want to go to the Great Wall, I can give you some advice.(if引导的条件状语从句)