书面表达10篇
1.假如你现在正在中国乒乓球博物馆 (China Table Tennis Museum) 参观,这时你收到好友Tom的一条微信消息,他询问你此刻正在干什么。请根据以下提示信息用英文写一段话回复他,并和他分享在此参观的情况。
要求:
1.回复的微信内容须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥;
2.语言表达要准确,语句通顺,意思连贯;
3.词数不少于60。
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【答案】例文
Hi, Tom! I am visiting the China Table Tennis Museum now. I’m watching a movie about table tennis. It’s interesting. I cam learn about the history of table tennis and the excellent table tennis players in the film. I learned that table tennis is a popular sport. And the table tennis players work very hard. We should learn from them. After visiting the China Table Tennis Museum, I think I will play table tennis in the future.
【详解】【总体分析】
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“现在进行时”和“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容,适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
【写作步骤】
第一步,介绍自己正在参观中国乒乓球博物馆;
第二步,介绍此刻的具体活动,观看电影并从中了解到的关于乒乓球的内容;
第三步,表达参观后的感受。
【亮点词汇】
①excellent卓越的
②popular受欢迎的
③in the future在未来
【高分句型】
①I learned that table tennis is a popular sport.(宾语从句)
2.假如你是魏华,你正在加拿大的姑妈家度假。请根据下表信息,给你上海的同学李涛写一封信,不少于60词。
Where Weather Activities Feelings
Canada cold; snowing visit my aunt; ski; make a snowman relaxed; have a good time
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【答案】
Dear Li Tao,
How is it going with you I’m visiting my aunt in Canada. It’s winter here now. It’s cold and it’s snowing really hard. What a beautiful white world it is! The weather here is just right for playing with snow. So I am skiing and making a snowman with my cousins. We are having a good time in the snow. We are really relaxed. What’s the weather like in Shanghai Are you studying hard or having fun
Please write back to me soon.
Yours,
Wei Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,属于书信作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“现在进行时” ;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏表格中所给出的词汇或短语,适当添加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,向同学问好,说明自己所在的地方及活动;
第二步,阐明天气情况,正在进行的活动及内心的感受;
第三步,询问同学所在地的天气及同学的活动情况,并请他尽快回信。
[亮点词汇]
① snow hard 下雪下得大
② be just right for 正适合……
③ really 确实
[高分句型]
What a beautiful white world it is! (感叹句)
3.假设今天是周日,现在是下午五点,外面正在下雨。你和你的家人正在做什么呢?请你根据下面的提示,写一篇不少于60词的英语短文来描述你们的活动。
提示:
1.What are your family doing
2.What do you think of rainy days
要求:
1.语句通顺,符合逻辑;
2.包含提示中的所有内容,可适当发挥。
Today is Sunday. It’s five o’clock in the afternoon now. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文
Today is Sunday. It’s five o’clock in the afternoon now. It’s raining outside, and all of my family are at home. My father is using the computer to do his work in his study. My grandparents are playing chess in the living room. My brother Dale is making a model plane in his room. He likes making things very much. My mother is cooking in the kitchen for us. And I’m watching TV with my sister Susan in the bedroom.
I like rainy days because we can have a good time staying at home together.
【总体分析】① 题材:本文为材料作文,描述自己的家人正在做的事情;
② 时态:现在进行时;
③ 提示:写作要点已经给出,考生不要遗漏要点;可适当添加语句,使文章连贯。
【写作步骤】第一步,描述家庭成员们各自正在做的事情;
第二步,描述自己对下雨天的看法。
【亮点词汇】① rain下雨
② all所有的
③ play chess下棋
④ very much非常
⑤ watch TV看电视
⑥ because因为
【高分句型】① My father is using the computer to do his work in his study. (use sth. to do使用某物做某事)
② I like rainy days because we can have a good time staying at home together. (because引导的原因状语从句)
4.假如你是王明,你的美国网友简(Jane)暑假想来北京旅游,她想要了解一下北京夏天的天气。请你根据以下提示用英文给她介绍一下。
提示:1. 北京的天气;
2. 需要穿什么衣服;
3. 可以进行的活动……
要求:1. 语句通顺、符合逻辑,可适当发挥;
2. 不少于60词,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Hi Jane. I’m happy to learn that you will come to Beijing this summer vacation.
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【答案】例文:
Hi, Jane. I’m happy to learn that you will come to Beijing this summer vacation. In summer, it’s very hot in Beijing. And it often rains. Boys usually wear T-shirts and shorts. Girls like wearing skirts. I think you can take some cool clothes. Many people like swimming in their free time because they feel cool and relaxed in the water. I can take you to visit some famous places and you will have a great time here.
My family and I wish to see you soon.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:要求根据提示内容,给简介绍北京的天气等情况,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,介绍北京的天气、需要穿的衣服以及可以进行的活动;
第二步,书写结语,表达对对方到来的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①come to来
②in their free time在他们的空闲时间
③have a great time玩得高兴
[高分句型]
①Many people like swimming in their free time because they feel cool and relaxing in the water.(because引导的原因状语从句)
②I can take you to visit some famous places and you will have a great time here.(and连接并列句)
5.假如你是李华,你在美国的笔友Peter来信,询问你广州四季的天气情况,以及哪个季节最适合来广州旅游。请你根据下列提示给他回一封电子邮件。要点提示:
1.冬季稍寒但时间短;
2.春季的广州潮湿多雨,可以看到各种花;
3.夏季稍稍炎热,阳光充足,偶尔会有台风;
4.秋季凉爽干燥,总是有好天气,旅游最舒服;
5.广州很漂亮,期待很快能在广州见到他。
注意:
1.参考词汇:台风(typhoon);
2.词数:70词左右(邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
Dear Peter,
I’m so glad to receive your letter. You know, Guangzhou is in the south of China.
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Best wishes to you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Peter,
I’m so glad to receive your letter. You know, Guangzhou is in the south of China.
There are four seasons in Guangzhou—spring, summer, autumn and winter. Winter is a little cold but it’s very short. Guangzhou is wet and rainy in spring. You can see all kinds of flowers when you come. Summer is a little hot and sunny, but sometimes there are typhoons. Autumn is cool and dry, and there is always good weather. It’s the most comfortable time for you to travel. Guangzhou is beautiful. I’m looking forward to seeing you in Guangzhou soon.
Best wishes to you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:根据所给中文提示,给美国的笔友Peter回一封邮件,介绍广州的天气情况以及哪个季节最适合来广州旅游。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍广州的冬季和春季天气情况;
第二步,介绍广州的夏季和秋季天气情况;
第三步,最后表达对Peter到来的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①a little有点
②all kinds of各种各样的
③look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①There are four seasons in Guangzhou(there be句型的使用)
②It’s the most comfortable time for you to travel.(动词不定式作定语)
6.在夏季,你的家乡天气怎么样?人们在这样的天气里都在做什么?请写一篇介绍你们家乡天气的短文。
注意事项:
(1)80词左右。
(2)意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范。
(3)请勿在文中使用真实的姓名。
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【答案】One possible version:
It’s summer now. The weather in my hometown is very hot and rainy. So it is very wet. People are wearing sunglasses and cool clothes. In the park, my classmates and I are having a good time. Some girls are singing and dancing. Some boys are playing soccer. I am swimming in a river and my best friend Tom is taking photos. A little boy is eating an ice cream.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中介绍家乡的天气,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。借用“介绍家乡天气”来引出重点介绍的内容;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“夏季家乡天气怎么样和人们在这样的天气里都在做什么”两个方面重点介绍。
[亮点词汇]
①have a good time玩得开心
②take photos拍照
[高分句型]
I am swimming in a river and my best friend Tom is taking photos.(and连接并列句)
7.假如你是梅梅,请写一张明信片给Miss Brown。她的地址:153 Park Street, London, England。大致内容:伦敦的天气如何,经常下雨吗?昆明的天气不错,全年都很温暖。欢迎来中国昆明。50词左右,可适当发挥。
Dear Miss Brown, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Meimei Miss Brown ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Dear Miss Brown, How is the weather in London Does it often rain The weather in Kunming is fine. The sky is blue and the air is clean. It’s warm all year round. You can see many kinds of nice flowers everywhere. Many people come to visit Kunming every year. Welcome to Kunming, China. Yours, Meimei Miss Brown 153 Park Street, London, England
【详解】1. 题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。要求以梅梅的名义给Miss Brown写一封明信片。
2. 写作指导:本文主要采用第三人称写作;时态以一般现在时为主;文章内容要包含所给提示信息:询问对方伦敦天气如何,介绍昆明天气,发出邀请。写作时要注意明信片的格式,做到无标点符号和语法错误。
8.假设你是齐齐哈尔人,齐齐哈尔一年四季的天气怎么样呢?你一年四季的主要活动有哪些呢?请根据下表。以The Weather in Qiqihar为题写一篇短文。
要求:1.字迹工整,表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2.要点必须包括所有相关信息,并作出适当发挥;
3.词数:60词左右,首句和尾句已给出,不计入总词数。
Seasons Weather Activities (活动)
Spring windy, a little cold fly kites
Summer short, hot go swimming
Autumn dry, cool help the farmers with their work
Winter long, cold, snow make a snowman.
The Weather in Qiqihar
I’m from Qiqihar. Let me tell you the weather here! In Qiqihar, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I think Qiqihar is a good place to have fun.
【答案】例文:
The Weather in Qiqihar
I’m from Qiqihar. Let me tell you about the weather here.
In Qiqihar, spring is usually windy and a little cold. We often fly kites. Summer is very short but it’s pretty hot, and sometimes it rains. We often go shopping in the river. In autumn, the weather is very dry and cool. We often help the farmers with their work. Winter is very long and it’s cold. It often snows. When it snows, we often make a snowman.
I think Qiqihar is a good place to have fun.
【详解】1.题干解析:本文是一片材料作文,要求写一篇60字左右的英语短文,以齐齐哈尔人的口吻描述齐齐哈尔的四季。开头结尾已给出,注意承接上下文。
2.写作指导:本文时态使用一般现在时,主要采用第一人称,注意题目中所给出的要点不要遗漏,按照四季顺序介绍,适当添加短语和句型,增加文章亮点,注意不要有单词和语法错误,可适当补充内容,使文章更丰富。
9.假如你是李明,是学校的播音员,你每天为学校播报天气信息,下面表格列出了三天的天气,请为大家播报。
星期 Friday Saturday Sunday
天气
建议 多云,天气凉爽, 适合课后进行室外活动(如打篮球) 雨天, 可以在家做家庭作业,帮父母做家务,和爷爷下象棋 天气晴朗, 适合和家人去公园游玩
参考词汇:cloudy, cool, play basketball, rainy, stay, do housework, play chess, sunny, park
要求:1.词数: 60词左右(文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2.必须包括表格内容,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.语句通顺,意思连贯,表达正确;
4.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
Good morning, boys and girls! I’m Li Ming. Now I’d like to tell you the weather on Friday, Saturday and Sunday. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’s all. Thank you for your listening!
【答案】例文
Good morning, boys and girls! I’m Li Ming. Now I’d like to tell you the weather on Friday, Saturday and Sunday.
It’s cloudy on Friday. So it’s cool. It’s a good time to play basketball after class. But on Saturday, it’s a rainy day. You can stay at home to do your homework. And you can help your parents to do housework. Then you can play chess with your grandfather. On Sunday, it’s a sunny day. You can go to the park with your family.
That’s all. Thank you for your listening!
【详解】1. 题干解读:题目要求根据表格内容为大家播报天气情况;要求包含所有提示内容。
2. 写作指导:此作文时态用一般现在时,采用第二人称口吻;可采用3段落格式,第一段:引起同学注意,播报天气;第二段:具体阐述星期五到星期日的天气状况以及相关的建议;第三段:总结全文,感谢收听。
10.现在是晚上八点钟,外面正在下雨。假如你是李梅,你正给你的朋友写一张明信片,介绍下今天的天气,你和你的家人正在做什么以及你的感受。
要求:语法规范,语句连贯,60个词左右。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Mei
【答案】例文
Dear Jim,
It’s 8:00 pm. And it is raining heavily outside. We all stay at home. My grandparents are watching TV. They are laughing happily. My father is reading newspaper in the living room. My mother is doing the dishes in the kitchen. What am I doing Of course, I am writing to you. We all happy and relaxed at this moment. What will you do on a rainy day
Yours,
Li Mei
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇书信作文。写信给Jim告知家人的活动。
2.写作指导:本文主要采用现在进行时。先介绍此时的天气,紧接着描述家人的活动信息,最后表达自己的感受。写作时保持主谓一致性,做到无语法和标点错误。