专题06 申请信
Passage 1
假定你是李华,你校英语协会正在筹备中外学生篮球联谊赛,现需要一名精通双语且具有一定篮球知识的裁判。请你给负责人写一封邮件申请做裁判,内容包括:
1. 写信目的;2. 个人优势;3. 能做的事。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:篮球联谊赛 basketball friendship match; 双语裁判员 bilingual referee
Dear Sir or Madam,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Sir or Madam,
Hearing that you are looking for a bilingual referee of this basketball friendship match, I am writing to apply for the position. I think I am qualified for this position for the following reasons.
Firstly, I have been a volunteer in our school sports meetings and am very familiar with volunteer work. Besides, I am proficient in English and Chinese and have mastered a lot of English expressions about basketball. Lastly, I can solve the conflicts between the two sides well. I will ensure that the match is fair.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给校英语协会的负责人写一封申请信,申请成为学校阻止的中外学生篮球联谊赛的裁判。
【详解】1.词汇积累
比赛:match →competition
适合:be qualified for →be fit for
此外:besides → what’s more
精通:be proficient in →have a good command of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Lastly, I can solve the conflicts between the two sides well.
拓展句:Lastly, I can solve the conflicts between the two sides well, which I think is the most important.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Hearing that you are looking for a bilingual referee of this basketball friendship match, I am writing to apply for the position.(运用了现在分词短语作状语)
【高分句型2】I will ensure that the match is fair.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
Passage 2
假定你是李华,你打算在暑假期间为来华的外国游客当导游。请给某旅游公司写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.你为外国游客当导游的申请;
2.你为外国游客当导游的优势;
3.你为外国游客当导游的理由。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a high school student.
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Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a high school student. I’m writing to apply for the position as a tour guide for foreign visitors during the summer holiday.
Firstly, I have a good command of English, which means I am able to communicate freely and fluently in English. In addition, in the past three years I have taken part in many social activities in which I performed well and gained rich experience. Furthermore, my interest and skill in communication and teamwork contribute to my application for the job.
I would appreciate it if you could consider my application and provide me with a chance to spread Chinese culture among foreigners.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给旅游公司写一封申请邮件,申请成为暑假来华旅游的外国游客的导游,说明申请目的,自身优势和申请理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
游客:visitor→tourist
参加:take part in→participate in
导致:contribute to→make for
提供:provide→supply
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Firstly, I have a good command of English, which means I am able to communicate freely and fluently in English.
拓展句:Firstly, I have a good command of English, meaning I am able to communicate freely and fluently in English.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Firstly, I have a good command of English, which means I am able to
communicate freely and fluently in English.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句和省略连接词that的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】In addition, in the past three years I have taken part in many social activities in which I performed well and gained rich experience.(运用了介词+which引导的限制性定语从句)
Passage 3
假设你是李华,在英国的一所学校做交换生。最近你在学校公告栏上获悉当地社区拟招聘一名中文志愿者。请你给负责人Tom写一封电子邮件,申请此职位,内容包括:
(1)提出申请;(2)个人优势;(3)表达希望。
注意:(1)写作词数应为80左右;(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Tom,
I hope this email finds you well. I am writing to express my interest in the Chinese volunteer position advertised in the school notice board.
As an exchange student from China studying at your school, I believe I am well-suited for this role due to my proficiency in Mandarin Chinese and my deep understanding of Chinese culture. Growing up in China has given me a unique perspective and insight into the language, customs, and traditions that I would love to share with the local community.
I look forward to the possibility of contributing to the local community as a Chinese volunteer. Thank you for considering my application.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【导语】本书面表达是一篇应用文写作,你在英国的一所学校做交换生,最近你在学校公告栏上获悉当地社区拟招聘一名中文志愿者,请你给负责人Tom写一封电子邮件,申请此职
位。
【详解】1.词汇积累
表达:express→convey
宣布:advertise→announce
因为:due to→thanks to/owing to/because of
独特的:unique→distinct
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Thank you for considering my application.
拓展句:I sincerely appreciate your consideration of my application.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am writing to express my interest in the Chinese volunteer position advertised in the school notice board. (运用了过去分词作后置定语)
【高分句型2】Growing up in China has given me a unique perspective and insight into the language, customs, and traditions that I would love to share with the local community.(运用了that引导的定语从句)
Passage 4
假定你是李华,从互联网上得知某动物保护协会正在招募(recruit)志愿者,你想成为其中的一员。请写一封信申请这个职位。内容包括:
1. 写信目的;
2. 个人优势和能做的事情;
3. 你的希望。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir or Madam,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Li Hua, a high school graduate. I am more than delighted to learn that a competent volunteer is recruited, which prompts me to offer you my application.
First of all, I am an animal lover and as a native born teenager, I am familiar with local people and surroundings, enabling me to offer better advice on the protection of animals. Furthermore, with fluency both in Chinese and English, I have no trouble in propagandizing to the world on animal protection. Better still, my rich relevant experience along with my easy-going personality, guarantees that I will devote myself to the job.
I would appreciate the privilege of an interview at your convenience. Looking forward to your favorable response.
Yours Li Hua
【分析】本文属于应用文。假定你是李华,从互联网上得知某动物保护协会正在招募(recruit)志愿者,你想成为其中的一员。请按要求写一封信申请这个职位。
【详解】1.词汇拓展
高兴的:delighted→pleased
环境:surroundings→environment
此外:furthermore→besides
做某事有困难:have trouble in doing →have difficulty in doing
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I am familiar with local people and surroundings, enabling me to offer better advice on the protection of animals .
拓展句:I am familiar with local people and surroundings, which enables me to offer better advice on the protection of animals .
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am more than delighted to learn that a competent volunteer is recruited, which prompts me to offer you my application.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Furthermore, with fluency both in Chinese and English, I have no trouble in propagandizing to the world on animal protection.(运用了with的复合宾语结构作状语和固定句型have trouble in doing sth)
Passage 5
假定你是李华,你所在社区计划举行中国传统文化节并准备在英文网站上邀请外国游客参加。请你给社区写一封邮件申请做文化节志愿者。内容包括:
(1)写信目的;(2)个人优势;(3)希望获准。词数100左右。
Dear Sir or Madam,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,
Learning that volunteers are needed for the coming Chinese Traditional Culture Festival in our community, I’m delightedly writing to apply for the job.
Firstly, as a native Chinese equipped with a good knowledge of traditional Chinese cultures, I’m confident that I’m qualified to introduce our treasures to visitors. Moreover, I have a good command of English, enabling me to communicate with foreign guests smoothly. Better yet, with many a relevant experience as a volunteer, not only am I enthusiastic and optimistic, but I’m also patient and responsible.
If given the precious opportunity, I will spare no effort to present the charm of Chinese culture.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给社区写一封邮件,申请当社区即将举行的中国传统文化节的志愿者。
【详解】1.词汇积累
机会:opportunity →chance
有关的:relevant →related
此外:moreover →besides
高兴地:delightedly →joyfully
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Moreover, I have a good command of English, enabling me to communicate with foreign guests smoothly.
拓展句:Moreover, I have a good command of English, which enables me to communicate with foreign guests smoothly.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Learning that volunteers are needed for the coming Chinese Traditional Culture Festival in our community, I’m delightedly writing to apply for the job. (运用了现在分词作状语和that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] If given the precious opportunity, I will spare no effort to present the charm of Chinese culture. (运用了条件状语从句的省略)
Passage 6
假定你是李华,为了帮助你校交换生们更好地了解中国文化,你校将邀请他们一起参与校园话剧节。请你写一封信申请做志愿者,以协助活动有序进行。内容包括:
1. 写信的目的;
2. 个人的优势。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir/Madam,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing to apply to be a volunteer for the upcoming campus drama festival, with the aim of helping our exchange students understand Chinese culture better.
I believe I have the necessary skills and qualities to contribute to the success of this event. Firstly, I am a fluent English speaker and have excellent communication skills, which will assist our exchange students in overcoming any language barriers they may encounter. Additionally, having a deep understanding of Chinese culture, I can explain the background and significance of the performances to the exchange students, helping them to connect with the local culture. Better still, I have extensive experience in voluntary work.
Should I be given the chance, I would strive to ensure the smooth running of the festival. Thank you for considering my application.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封信申请做校园话剧节的志愿者。
【详解】1.词汇积累
即将到来的:upcoming→forthcoming
首先:firstly→first of all
另外:additionally→moreover
机会:chance→opportunity
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Additionally, having a deep understanding of Chinese culture, I can explain the background and significance of the performances to the exchange students, helping them to connect with the
local culture.
拓展句:Additionally, because I have a deep understanding of Chinese culture, I can explain the background and significance of the performances to the exchange students, helping them to connect with the local culture.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Firstly, I am a fluent English speaker and have excellent communication skills, which will assist our exchange students in overcoming any language barriers they may encounter. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Should I be given the chance, I would strive to ensure the smooth running of the festival. (运用了虚拟条件句,省略和部分倒装句)
Passage 7
假如你是李华,在英国某学校做交换生,学校下个月将举行“中国文化展”这一情况,请你给负责人Mr. Smith写一封信,申请当一名志愿者。内容包括:
1. 写信目的;
2. 你的优势;
3. 期待答复。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80词左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数;
3. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Smith,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m Li Hua, an exchange student from China. I’m writing to apply to be a volunteer in the Exhibition of Chinese Culture to be held next month.
Not only do I have a good command of English, but I’m also expert at communicating with people. More importantly, I am more than confident that my comprehensive understanding of Chinese culture is bound to leave a deep impression on the visitors. Additionally, my abundant experience of being a guide and a volunteer in the museum ensures my competence for the position.
I would appreciate it if you could take my application into account. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是李华,在英国某学校做交换生,学校下个月将举行“中国文化展”这一情况,请你给负责人Mr. Smith写一封信,申请当一名志愿者。
【详解】1.词汇积累
擅长做某事:be expert at doing→ be good at doing
此外:Additionally→ What’s more
确保:ensure→ guarantee
感谢:appreciate→ show gratitude
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’m Li Hua, an exchange student from China.
拓展句:I’m Li Hua, who is an exchange student from China.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Not only do I have a good command of English, but I’m also expert at communicating with people.(运用了部分倒装)
【高分句型2】I would appreciate it if you could take my application into account.(运用了连词if引导的条件状语从句)
Passage 8
假设你是红星中学高三年级学生李华。你得知首都博物馆正在招募寒假英文讲解的志愿者,向外国游客介绍中国历史文化。请你用英文给相关负责人写一封申请信,内容包括:
1、说明申请理由;
2、介绍自身优势;
3、希望能被录用。
注意:1、词数100左右;
2、开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Sir or Madam,
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Yours sincerely
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,
I have learned that English volunteer guides are wanted for the winter vacation. I am writing to apply for the position.
I am a Senior Three student of Hongxing Middle School. I will be available this winter and I believe I am qualified for the position. First, I can speak English fluently. I won the first prize in English Speaking Contest when I was in Senior Grade One. What’s more, I was a volunteer at a language summer camp last year, so I have confidence in my communication skills in English. Besides, having a passion for Chinese history, I believe in myself. And my knowledge will be helpful when I am introducing the culture to foreign guests.
I would be very grateful if you could offer me the opportunity. Thank you for your consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给博物馆相关负责人写一封申请信,申请成为首都博物馆寒假英文讲解的志愿者,向外国游客介绍中国历史文化。
【详解】1.词汇积累
有空的:available→ free
胜任:am qualified for→ am equal to
此外:What’s more → Additionally
感激的:grateful→ thankful
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Besides, having a passion for Chinese history, I believe in myself.
拓展句:Besides, because I have a passion for Chinese history, I believe in myself.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Besides, having a passion for Chinese history, I believe in myself.(运用了现在分词having充当原因状语)
【高分句型2】And my knowledge will be helpful when I am introducing the culture to foreign guests.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句)
Passage 9
假定你是李华,在国外留学期间得知老师 Mr. Smith 经常参与社区服务(community service),你想加入,为此给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 参与的愿望和理由;
2. 你的相关经历。
注意:1. 写作词数应为 80 个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Smith,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,
Knowing that you usually take part in the community service, I feel excited and hasten to join you.
My reasons are as follows. By participating in community work, I can help and support others. Secondly, community work can provide me with valuable opportunities to learn and grow. In my community work, I will face different people and situations, from which I will learn how to communicate effectively with people. And I was selected as a volunteer for the community service last year, so I believe I can do it well.
Would you mind giving me the honour Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给老师 Mr. Smith 写一封邮件,希望加入老师经常参与的社区服务。
【详解】1.词汇积累
激动的:excited→ thrilled
参加:participate in→ take part in
支持:support→ sustain
提供:provide→ offer
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Knowing that you usually take part in the community service, I feel excited and hasten to join you.
拓展句:After I know that you usually take part in the community service, I feel excited and hasten to join you.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Knowing that you usually take part in the community service, I feel excited and hasten to join you. (运用了现在分词Knowing作状语以及that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】 In my community work, I will face different people and situations, from which I will learn how to communicate effectively with people. (运用了from which引导的非限制性定语从句)
Passage 10
假定你是李华,正在新西兰某中学学习。你校将举办跨文化演出活动,请你给活动负责人Mr. Brown写封信,申请当主持人。内容包括:
1. 写信目的;2. 你的优势;3. 期待答复。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Brown,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr. Brown,
I’m an exchange student from China. I’m writing to apply to be the host of the cross-cultural performance to be held in our school.
Not only have I acquired a good command of English, but I have also hosted many performances concerning culture. Therefore, when the performance features Chinese culture, I can help better introduce it to the audience, which will help them better understand China. I’m certain my experience and knowledge will ensure my being equal to the position.
I would greatly appreciate it if you could consider my application.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给学校即将举办的跨文化演出活动负责人Mr. Brown写封信,申请当主持人。
【详解】1.词汇积累
关于:concerning→in relation to
因此:therefore→as a result
理解:understand→comprehend
能胜任:be equal to→be competent for
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’m writing to apply to be the host of the cross-cultural performance to be held in our school.
拓展句:I’m writing to apply to be the host of the cross-cultural performance which is to be held in our school.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Therefore, when the performance features Chinese culture, I can help better introduce it to the audience, which will help them better understand China. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Not only have I acquired a good command of English, but I have also hosted many performances concerning culture. (运用了部分倒装)
Passage 11
假如你是李华。现在在英国伦敦做交换生。你所在城市的多元文化博物馆将开展“Cultural China”主题交流活动。请你给负责人Mr. Smith写一封信,申请做志愿者。内容包括:
1.写信目的;
2.个人优势;
3.期待回复。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m Li Hua, an exchange student from China. Hearing you’re recruiting volunteers for the
activity about Chinese culture, I’m writing to apply for the position.
Firstly, I have a good command of English so that I can communicate well with those attending the activity. Better yet, I have been keen on Chinese culture and gained in-depth knowledge about it, which enables me to give people new insights into it. Furthermore, my previous volunteer experience helps qualify me for the position.
Thank you for considering my application, and I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是李华。现在在英国伦敦做交换生。你所在城市的多元文化博物馆将开展“Cultural China”主题交流活动。请你给负责人Mr. Smith写一封信,申请做志愿者。
【详解】1.词汇积累
精通:have a good command of→have a good knowledge of
参加:attend→participate in
喜欢:be keen on→be crazy about
此外:furthermore→moreover
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’m Li Hua, an exchange student from China.
拓展句:I’m Li Hua, who is an exchange student from China.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Hearing you’re recruiting volunteers for the activity about Chinese culture, I’m writing to apply for the position.(运用了现在分词作状语)
【高分句型2】Better yet, I have been keen on Chinese culture and gained in-depth knowledge about it, which enables me to give people new insights into it.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
Passage 12
假定你是李华,暑假在伦敦学习,得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展。请写一封信申请做志愿者,内容包括:
1.写信目的;
2.个人优势;
3.能做的事情。
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【答案】
Dear Sir or Madam,
Being a student from China, I’m writing this letter to apply for the voluntary position in your gallery where voluntary workers are in great demand. And I’m really willing to expect you can consider me into this position.
Given that I can speak both English and fluent Chinese and I’m outgoing, sociable and responsible, I do believe I’m suitable for this position. In addition, through this, not only can I improve my oral English but I can introduce Chinese painting and calligraphy culture to visitors from all over the world. I consider this as a great opportunity to deepen visitors’ understanding of China and its painting and calligraphy culture. I hope it’s possible to be accepted as a volunteer of your gallery.
Your prompt reply will be highly appreciated.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生写信申请做伦敦当地美术馆举办的中国画展的志愿者,需说明写信目的,介绍个人优势,并讲述自己能做的事情。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
有需要的:be in demand→be in need/be wanted
期待:expect→anticipate, look forward to
鉴于:given→considering/in view of
适合:be suitable for→be appropriate for/be fit for
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I consider this as a great opportunity to deepen visitors’ understanding of China and its painting and calligraphy culture.
拓展句:I consider this is a great opportunity to deepen visitors’ understanding of China and its painting and calligraphy culture.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Being a student from China, I’m writing this letter to apply for the voluntary position in your gallery where voluntary workers are in great demand.(运用了现在分词短语Being…作状语、where引导限制性定语从句修饰先行词gallery)
【高分句型2】Given that I can speak both English and fluent Chinese and I’m outgoing, sociable and responsible, I do believe I’m suitable for this position.(运用了that引导名词性从句作Given的宾语、助动词do强调谓语believe)
【高分句型3】In addition, through this, not only can I improve my oral English but I can introduce Chinese painting and calligraphy culture to visitors from all over the world.(运用了not only置于句首引起的部分倒装句)
Passage 13
假定你是李华,你校的英语报正在校内招募“中国传统文化”专栏的编辑。请你写封电子邮件申请,内容包括。
1.表明意图;
2.自身优势;
3.表达期望。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:专栏column
Dear Sir or Madam,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Sir or Madam,
Knowing that the school English newspaper is looking for an editor responsible for the column “Traditional Chinese Culture”, I’m writing to apply for the position.
I think I’m qualified for it. To begin with, I have a good command of English, especially written English. Besides, I have taken the part-time job as an English editor, from which I have gained relevant experience. More importantly, I have a rich knowledge of traditional Chinese culture.
I would really appreciate it if I could be given the precious chance. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华,你校的英语报正在校内招募“中国传统文化”专栏的编辑。请你写封电子邮件申请,内容包括:表明意图;自身优势;表达期望。
【详解】1.词汇积累
寻找:look for→search for
职位:position→post
此外:besides→in addition
有关的:relevant→related
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:More importantly, I have a rich knowledge of traditional Chinese culture.
拓展句:I have a rich knowledge of traditional Chinese culture, which is more important.
[点睛]
[高分句型1] Knowing that the school English newspaper is looking for an editor responsible for the column “Traditional Chinese Culture”, I’m writing to apply for the position. (运用了现在分词作状语及that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Besides, I have taken the part-time job as an English editor, from which I have gained relevant experience. (运用了“介词+关系代词”引导非限制性定语从句)
Passage 14
假定你是李华,看到英国留学生David 在网上发帖,希望有人能一对一帮助他提高汉语普通话水平,请给他回一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1. 希望来应聘这份工作;
2.有关个人信息;
3. 提高普通话的具体建议。
注意:1. 字数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头和结尾已给出,且该部分不计入总词数。
一对一:one-on-one
Hi David,
This is Li Hua
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】参考范文
Hi David,
This is Li Hua. I learned from your post that you want to improve your Putonghua(Mandarin Chinese)one-on-one. If possible, I feel honored to have the chance to help you.
Please allow me to introduce myself. As a Chinese student, my biggest advantage is that I’ve been a broadcaster in school for years, which equips me with outstanding language proficiency. When it comes to how to learn Putonghua well, I suggest you get yourself involved in Chinese learning activities, such as exploring Chinese culture and learning Chinese history. Another suggestion is to practice listening and speaking every day. What about half an hour’s online video chat with me every evening I’m right here and ready to help.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国留学生David写一封电子邮件,告知他应聘这份工作的意向,个人信息以及如何提高普通话的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
机会:chance →opportunity
允许:allow →permit
建议:suggest →advise
准备好:ready →well-prepared
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Another suggestion is to practice listening and speaking every day.
拓展句:Another suggestion is that you should practice listening and speaking every day.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As a Chinese student, my biggest advantage is that I’ve been a broadcaster in school for years, which equips me with outstanding language proficiency.(运用了that引导的表语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】When it comes to how to learn Putonghua well, I suggest you get yourself involved in Chinese learning activities, such as exploring Chinese culture and learning Chinese history.(运用了“疑问词+不定式”结构作宾语和省略that的宾语从句以及过去分词作宾补)
Passage 15
假设你是中学生李华,在英国学习,担任学校中国语言与文化社社长。近期,校学生会发布了举办“国际文化节”的通知,参加活动会有一个摊位进行宣传,请写一封邮件申请一个摊位。
内容包括:
1.你的摊位名称:中国茶艺展;
2.具体活动安排。
参考词汇:摊位 booth
注意:
1.词数80左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Student Union,
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Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Student Union,
I am Li Hua, president of China language and Culture Society. I am glad to know that the annual International Cultural Festival is to be held soon. I am writing to apply for a booth.
The name of the booth is Chinese Tea Art Show, where we will introduce different kinds of Chinese Tea and its benefits. Chinese tea is considered as the most beneficial drink with a long history of planting. It has become a green, healthy and popular drink in our daily life, through which we can enjoy a healthy and pleasant life. Besides students visiting our booth will enjoy drinking various Chinese tea.
I would appreciate it if you can take my application into account. Looking forward to your reply.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【导语】这是一篇应用文。学校将举办“国际文化节”,要求考生给学生会写信申请一个摊位对中国传统文化进行宣传。
【详解】1.词汇积累
开心的:glad→delighted
种类:kind→sort
被认为是:be considered as→be regarded as
考虑:take...into account→take...into consideration
2.句型拓展
合并句子
原句:Chinese tea is considered as the most beneficial drink with a long history of planting. It has become a green, healthy and popular drink in our daily life, through which we can enjoy a healthy and pleasant life.
拓展句: Considered as the most beneficial drink with a long history of planting, Chinese has become a green, healthy and popular drink in our daily life, through which we can enjoy a healthy and pleasant life.
【点睛】[高分句型1]I am glad to know that the annual International Cultural Festival is to be held soon. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]The name of the booth is Chinese Tea Art Show, where we will introduce different kinds of Chinese Tea and its benefits.(运用了where引导的非限定性定语从句)