-2024年高考英语应用文写作押题范文（新高考专用）专题07 感谢信（含解析）

专题07 感谢信
Passage 1
假定你是李华，你在学校举办的“Adversity and Courage”英语演讲比赛中获奖，请给指导外教 Miss Morton 写一封邮件表示感谢。内容包括：
1. 感谢指导；
2. 个人感悟。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Miss Morton,
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Yours
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Miss Morton ,
I am writing the letter to tell you that I got a first prize in the English Speech Contest “Adversity and Courage” held in my school last Friday.
Thanks for your guide in my English .You gave me a lot of help. I was very happy when we stayed together studying. During the time when we stayed, you were kind to me. You were humorous. You taught me how to speak English fluently. I made great progress with your kind help, without which I couldn't have got the prize.
Through this activity, I deeply realized that adversity and courage can make a person better.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文。假定考生是李华，你在学校举办的“Adversity and Courage”英语
演讲比赛中获奖，请给指导外教 Miss Morton 写一封邮件表示感谢。
【详解】1.词汇积累
告诉：tell→inform
快乐的：happy→pleased
帮助：help→assistance
举行：hold→throw
2.句式拓展
合并句子
原句：Thanks for your guide in my English .You gave me a lot of help.
拓展句：Thanks for your guide in my English where you gave me a lot of help.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I was very happy when we stayed together studying.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句）
【高分句型2】I made great progress with your kind help,without which I couldn't have got the prize.（运用了介词+关系代词引导的非限制性定语从句）
Passage 2
假定你叫李华，学校举办了以“我爱中国文化”为主题的英语演讲比赛。期间，你得到了笔友Peter的帮助并在上周六的比赛中荣获一等奖。请用英语给Peter写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 告知消息；
2. 感谢他的帮助；
3. 邀请他来中国。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
How’s everything going
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Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peter,
How’s everything going I can hardly wait to share with you my highlight time. I won first prize in the English speech contest themed “I love Chinese Culture” held by our school last Saturday. For this, I got a cash bonus of 500 yuan and a new Oxford dictionary. Meanwhile, having heard the applause from my classmates and teachers, I couldn’t feel better.
I’d like to express my deepest gratitude to you. But for your help in correcting and polishing my speech, I’d not have ranked first in the competition. It was your patient instruction that made my speech so appealing. Not only did this speech impress students with the knowledge of Chinese culture but it aroused their interest in learning English.
In addition, the summer vacation is coming. I sincerely invite you to China to experience our diverse Chinese culture. It must be a golden chance for you have a better understanding of Chinese culture in person, which you can’t afford to miss. Please give me the chance to be your guide and I guarantee this journey will not let you down.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生以李华的身份，给帮助自己在英语演讲比赛中得奖的笔友Peter写一封邮件，需告知他自己得奖的消息，对他表示感谢，并向他发出来中国的邀请。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
表达：express→convey
吸引人的：appealing→engaging, attractive
唤醒：arouse→evoke, awaken
此外：in addition→additionally, moreover
机会：chance→opportunity
保证：guarantee→ensure
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：But for your help in correcting and polishing my speech, I’d not have ranked first in the competition.
拓展句：Had it not been for your help in correcting and polishing my speech, I’d not have ranked first in the competition.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] It was your patient instruction that made my speech so appealing. (运用了强调句型)
[高分句型2] Not only did this speech impress students with the knowledge of Chinese culture but it aroused their interest in learning English. (运用了not only… but (also)…的结构、not only置于句首引起句子部分倒装)
[高分句型3] It must be a golden chance for you have a better understanding of Chinese culture in person, which you can’t afford to miss. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
Passage 3
假定你是李华，暑假参加了澳大利亚游学活动，回国后给host family写一封信表示感谢，要点如下：
1.感谢他们一家的照顾；
2.分享游学体会；
3.询问你寄的礼物（汉语词典）是否收到；
4. 邀请他们一家来中国游览。
注意：
1.词数100左右。
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Helen，
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Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Helen,
I’ve arrived home safe and sound. I miss you so much, and how I want to say “thank you” to your whole family. It was your help and kindness that made my stay in your country so enjoyable.
The beautiful scenery and rich traditional Australian culture impressed me a lot. And by communicating with you as well as other locals, I practiced my oral English so often that I can speak as fluently as a native speaker now. What a meaningful and unforgettable experience I’ve got!
Have you received the Chinese dictionary It’s a gift for you. I hope it will be of help to you in Chinese learning. I’m keenly expecting you to come to China soon.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给host family写一封感谢信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
帮助：help→assistance
令人愉快的：enjoyable→delightful
有意义的：meaningful→significative
难忘的：unforgettable→memorable
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The beautiful scenery and rich traditional Australian culture impressed me a lot.
拓展句：What impressed me a lot were the beautiful scenery and rich traditional Australian culture.
【点睛】[高分句型1] It was your help and kindness that made my stay in your country so enjoyable. (运用了强调句)
[高分句型2] I hope it will be of help to you in Chinese learning. (运用了that引导的宾语从句，省略了that)
Passage 4
假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Leslie给你寄了一件精美的礼物， 请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.收到礼物的喜悦；
2.表达谢意；
3.回赠礼物。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Leslie,
How are you doing I am writing in acknowledgement of receiving the favored gift you have selected for me, which makes me, so happy that I can’t help but show it off.
No words can express my pleasure and my gratitude to you for the beautiful gift. To genuinely convey my thankfulness to you, I have chosen a gift in return for your kindness. As far as I know, you take a great interest in Chinese traditional culture. Therefore, I will send you a set of Chinese zodiac cutting paper made by famous Chinese artists. I am sure you will fall in love with it.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本文是应用文。假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Leslie给你寄了一件精美的礼物， 请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：收到礼物的喜悦；表达谢意；回赠礼物。
【详解】1.词汇积累
挑选：select→pick
真诚地：genuinely→sincerely
对……很感兴趣：take a great interest in→be greatly interested in
确定的：sure→certain
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：No words can express my pleasure and my gratitude to you for the beautiful gift.
拓展句：There are no words that can express my pleasure and my gratitude to you for the beautiful gift.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I am writing in acknowledgement of receiving the favored gift you have selected for me, which makes me, so happy that I can’t help but show it off.(运用了省略关系代词的限制性定语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句，以及so...that引导的状语从句)
[高分句型2] I am sure you will fall in love with it.(运用了省略that引导的宾语从句)
Passage 5
假定你是李华，你校正在举办英语演讲比赛。请以“The person I thank most”为题写一篇发言稿，内容包括∶
1.感谢的人
2.感谢的原因。
注意1.写作词数应为80左右
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Good morning, everyone,
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【答案】Good morning, everyone,
It’s a great honor to stand here and address my speech titled “The person I thank most”. The person I thank most is my English teacher, Miss Hou.
She is a middle-aged woman who taught me English in junior high school. I felt it very difficult when learning English. She often tutored me after class. Gradually, I made progress and felt confident. Thanks to her help, not only did I have a good command of English, but I also gained confidence. Without her help, I couldn’t have made myself what I am today.
That’s all. Thank you!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“我最感谢的人”为题写一篇发言稿，要求写感谢的人和感谢的原因。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
发表：address → deliver
命名：title → name
困难的：difficult → hard
精通：have a good command of→have a good knowledge of
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：It’s a great honor to stand here and address my speech titled “The person I thank most”.
拓展句：It’s a great honor to stand here and address my speech whose title is “The person I thank most”.
【点睛】【高分句型1】She is a middle-aged woman who taught me English in junior high school. （运用了who引导的定语从句）
【高分句型2】Thanks to her help, not only did I have a good command of English, but I also gained confidence.（运用了not only...but also引导的部分倒装句）
Passage 6
假定你是学生会主席李华，近期你学校开展“党在我心中”英文演讲比赛活动，你代表学生会
邀请你的一位外籍老师Mary参加此次活动，并担任评委工作。内容包括：
1.活动时间和地点；
2.活动主题为“党在我心中”；
3.比赛主要议程。
4.期待参与。
注意：
1.词数100左右;
2.符合英文邀请函格式要求。
3.参考词汇：
中国共产党the Communist Party of China (or the CPC)
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【答案】Dear Mary:
On behalf of our student union, I sincerely invite you to participate in an English speech contest and serve as a judge.
Aimed to raise the awareness of loving our Party, a speech contest themed “the CPC in my heart” will be held in Academic Reporting Hall at 3:00 p.m. on November 20. After all the competitors finish their speeches, each judge will make a comment on the speakers, and give a mark comprehensively. According to the scores, the competitors will be awarded different prizes. At the end of the competition, the winners will have photos taken with all the judges.
I am looking forward to your participation.
Yours
LiHua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教写一封学校活动的邀请信。
【详解】词汇积累
代表：On behalf of→ representing
真诚地：sincerely→ faithfully
参加：participate in→ join in → take part in
比赛：contest→ competition
旨在：aimed to→ intended to
评论：make a comment on→ comment on
综合地：comprehensively→ overall
期待：looking forward to→ anticipate
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句1：At the end of the competition, the winners will have photos taken with all the judges.
拓展句1：When the competition come to an end, the winners will have photos taken with all the judges.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Aimed to raise the awareness of loving our Party, a speech contest themed “the CPC in my heart” will be held in Academic Reporting Hall at 3:00 p.m. on November 20.（运用了分词作状语。）
【高分句型2】After all the competitors finish their speeches, each judge will make a comment on the speakers, and give a mark comprehensively.（运用了时间状语从句。）
Passage 7
假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Caroline来信说她的书法(calligraphy)作品在所在学校举办的文化节活动中获奖。请你给她回信，内容包括：
1. 你的祝贺。
2. 你的书法学习计划。
注意：
(1)写作词数应为80左右;
(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Caroline,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Caroline,
Congratulations on your outstanding achievement! I am so impressed with your calligraphy skills and jealous of your talent.
I have always been fascinated by the art of calligraphy ever since I was young. Recently, I have decided to take action. I plan to purchase some calligraphy tools and start learning the basics of calligraphy. I will practice daily to improve my skills, and also search the internet for some resources and videos on calligraphy.
I believe that your enthusiasm and efforts will enable you to achieve more achievements in the future calligraphy road.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Caroline来信说她的书法(calligraphy)作品在所在学校举办的文化节活动中获奖。请你给她回信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
打算：plan to do sth→intend to do sth
购买：purchase→buy
羡慕的：jealous→envious
成就：achievement→accomplishment
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：I will practice daily to improve my skills, and also search the internet for some resources and videos on calligraphy.
拓展句：I will practice daily to improve my skills, and also search the internet for some resources
and videos on calligraphy, which will help me further enhance my abilities.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I believe that your enthusiasm and efforts will enable you to achieve more achievements in the future calligraphy road. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] I plan to purchase some calligraphy tools and start learning the basics of calligraphy. (运用了不定式和动名词作宾语)
Passage 8
假设你是李华，某国际学校校书画社主席，昨天下午外教Mr. Black应邀给书画社作题为“A Short History of Western Painting”的讲座。请你给外教写一封感谢信，内容包括：
1. 感谢对方作讲座；
2. 同学们的收获；
3. 希望有机会再次邀请。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Black,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr. Black,
First of all, I would like to thank you for your lecture entitled “A Short History of Western Painting”.
The lecture was very informative, through which the students have a deeper understanding of the history of Western painting. The students’ interest and enthusiasm for western painting have been greatly improved, and some students even make up their minds to go abroad to learn Western
painting.
All the students hope that we can invite you to give us more lectures.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教Mr. Black写封感谢信，感谢对方作讲座，描述同学们的收获，表示希望有机会再次邀请。
【详解】1.词汇积累
热情：enthusiasm→passion
提高：improve→enhance
首先：first of all→in the first place
决定做某事：make up one’s mind to do→be determined to do
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：First of all, I would like to thank you for your lecture entitled “A Short History of Western Painting”.
拓展句：First of all, I would like to thank you for your lecture which was entitled “A Short History of Western Painting”.
【点睛】[高分句型1] The lecture was very informative, through which the students have a deeper understanding of the history of Western painting. (运用了“介词+which”引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] All the students hope that we can invite you to give us more lectures. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
Passage 9
假定你是李华，上周末你和你的交换生同学William参观了当地的民俗馆 (folk museum)，他用相机给你拍了很多照片。请你给他发一封电子邮件，请他把拍的照片发给你，内容包括：
1. 写信目的；
2. 表示感谢；
3. 期待回复。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear William,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear William,
How are you doing I want to reach out to you regarding our visit to the local folk museum last weekend. I remember you took a lot of amazing photos with your camera.
I was wondering if it would be possible for you to share those photos with me. I would really appreciate it if you could send them to me. I’m excited to see how the pictures turned out and to relive the memories of our fun day at the museum. I really enjoyed exploring the museum with you and it would mean a lot to me to have those photos as a reminder of our time together.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给交换生同学William写一封邮件，请他把参观民俗馆的照片发来，并表示感谢。
【详解】1.词汇积累
令人惊讶的：amazing→astonishing
兴奋的：excited→thrilled
参观：visit→tour
想要作某事：want to do sth.→would like to do sth.
2.句式拓展
原句：I really enjoyed exploring the museum with you and it would mean a lot to me to have those photos as a reminder of our time together.
拓展句：I really enjoyed exploring the museum with you, which would mean a lot to me to have those photos as a reminder of our time together.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I was wondering if it would be possible for you to share those photos with me.（运用了if引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】I’m excited to see how the pictures turned out and to relive the memories of our fun day at the museum. （运用了how引导的宾语从句）
Passage 10
假定你是李华，上周应留学生朋友Leslie的邀请去听了一场钢琴音乐会，你打算教他中国汉字以表感谢。请你就此用英语给他写一封信件，内容包括：
1．对受邀表示感谢；
2．简要回忆音乐会及你的感受；
3．提出教他汉字作为回报。
注意：
1．词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Leslie,
How is everything getting along with you recently
I’m more than glad to have been invited to attend the piano cogcert with you.
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Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Leslie,
How is everything getting along with you recently I’m more than glad to have been invited to attend the piano concert with you.
To be honest, I was not only impressed with the performances given by the skilled artists, but also with the wonderful comments made by you. Thank you again for your kindness.
Are you interested in learning Chinese characters As a matter of fact, traditional Chinese culture is more and more popular all over the world, especially the Chinese characters, which are one of the oldest written words. If you are interested, keep me informed as soon as possible and I’ll spare no effort to help you learn Chinese characters in return.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本文是应用文。假定你是李华，上周应留学生朋友Leslie的邀请去听了一场钢琴音乐会，你打算教他中国汉字以表感谢。请你就此用英语给他写一封信件，内容包括：对受邀表示感谢；简要回忆音乐会及你的感受；提出教他汉字作为回报。
【详解】1.词汇积累
说实话：To be honest→To tell you the truth
事实上：As a matter of fact→In fact
感兴趣：be interested→have an interest
告诉某人：keep sb. informed→tell sb.
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：To be honest, I was not only impressed with the performances given by the skilled artists, but also with the wonderful comments made by you.
拓展句：To be honest, I was not only impressed with the performances which were given by the skilled artists, but also with the wonderful comments which were made by you.
【点睛】[高分句型1]To be honest, I was not only impressed with the performances given by the skilled artists, but also with the wonderful comments made by you.(运用了not only...but also固定搭配)
[高分句型12]As a matter of fact, traditional Chinese culture is more and more popular all over
the world, especially the Chinese characters, which are one of the oldest written words.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
Passage 11
假定你是学生李华，你在学校组织的第三届用英语讲中国故事挑战赛(“Stories of China Retold in English”Challenge)中获得冠军。请撰写一封英语邮件给外教David，分享这一喜讯并感谢他在赛前给予你的帮助。内容包括：
1. 告知喜讯;
2. 回忆外教提供的帮助并表达感谢。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear David,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear David,
Full of joy, I can’t wait to share with you this exciting news! I have been crowned with the championship in the third “Stories of China Retold in English” Challenge in my school.
My gratitude for you is beyond description. When I was racking my brains for the draft, it was you who helped me polish it and correct grammar mistakes carefully. With the draft completed, it was you who helped me rehearse the speech and kindly pointed out how to pause and articulate in a better way. In the tryout, when I stuttered due to extreme anxiety, it was you who encouraged me to continue. Without your constant encouragement, my morale would have
been dampened.
Thanks again for your generous help and wish you all the best.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生撰写一封英语邮件给外教David，分享自己获得学校组织的中国故事挑战赛的冠军这一喜讯并感谢他在赛前给予你的帮助。
【详解】1.词汇积累
令人激动的：exciting→thrilling
感激：gratitude→appreciation
初稿： draft→sketch
完成：complete→accomplish
2.句式拓展
同义句
原句：With the draft completed, it was you who helped me rehearse the speech and kindly pointed out how to pause and articulate in a better way.
拓展句：When the draft was completed, it was you who helped me rehearse the speech and kindly pointed out how to pause and articulate in a better way.
【点睛】【高分句型1】When I was racking my brains for the draft, it was you who helped me polish it and correct grammar mistakes carefully.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句和强调句式)
【高分句型2】With the draft completed, it was you who helped me rehearse the speech and kindly pointed out how to pause and articulate in a better way.(运用了with的复合结构和强调句式)
Passage 12
邻里之间互相帮助是和谐社区的体现。假如你叫李华，在过去的几年里，邻居们为你家提供了很多的帮助。请你写一封感谢信，表达对邻居们的谢意。内容包括：
(1)表达对邻居们的感谢；
(2)以后要像他们一样帮助别人。
注意：(1)写作词数应为80左右；
(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear neighbours,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear neighbours,
I’m writing to express my sincere thanks for your help in the past few years, especially during the COVID-19 epidemic. I’m so lucky to live in a friendly community. When I had a fever, you bought medicine for me. Desperate, my family once ran out of food. Again, you lent a hand and supplied enough vegetables for us, which helped us go through the hardest time.
I repeat my thanks for you all. No words can exactly express my gratitude. I will help others like you in the future.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给邻居写一封感谢信，表达对邻居们的谢意。
【详解】1.词汇积累
表达：express→convey
真诚的：sincere→genuine
幸运的：lucky→fortunate
感激：gratitude→thankfulness
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m writing to express my sincere thanks for your help in the past few years, especially during the COVID-19 epidemic.
拓展句：I’m writing to express my sincere thanks for the help you offered to me in the past few years, especially during the COVID-19 epidemic.
【点睛】[高分句型1] When I had a fever, you bought medicine for me. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] Again, you lent a hand and supplied enough vegetables for us, which helped us go through the hardest time. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
Passage 13
假定你是学生会主席李华，学生会举办的英语演讲比赛（English Speech Contest）得到了外教Pam的大力帮助。活动已圆满结束，请你给她写一封感谢信。内容包括：
1. 表达感谢；
2. 外教的帮助；
3. 同学的收获。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Pam,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Pam,
I am writing this letter to express my heartfelt gratitude for your invaluable support and guidance during the English speech contest. Your unwavering commitment and encouragement have helped us achieve a lot in the competition.
You have invested so much time and effort in preparing us for the contest that we all have learned a lot more about English speech. Your excellent teaching skills, patience, and dedication have been instrumental in improving our English language skills. What’s more, your constructive
feedback and suggestions have helped us refine our pronunciation, style and presentation, which were crucial in delivering an impressive speech.
We all feel blessed to have had such a precious opportunity to learn from you. Your contribution has greatly enriched our English learning experience, and we will always cherish the memories of the time spent with you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生给外教写一封感谢信，对她在英语演讲比赛中的帮助表达感谢，回忆她提供的帮助，并分享同学们的收获。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
真诚的：heartfelt→genuine, sincere, unfeigned, earnest
宝贵的：invaluable→precious, priceless, inestimable
坚定的：unwavering→steady, unhesitating, tireless
投入：invest→spend, devote, contribute
有助于：be instrumental in→be helpful in, be useful in
提高：improve→sharpen, refine, better
此外：what’s more→in addition, additionally, moreover, furthermore, besides
重要的：crucial→essential, crucial, significant, vital
好运的：blessed→favored, fortunate, lucky, privileged, blissful
珍爱：cherish→treasure, value highly
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：I am writing this letter to express my heartfelt gratitude for your invaluable support and guidance during the English speech contest. Your unwavering commitment and encouragement have helped us achieve a lot in the competition.
拓展句：I am writing this letter to express my heartfelt gratitude for your invaluable support and guidance during the English speech contest because your unwavering commitment and encouragement have helped us achieve a lot in the competition.
【点睛】【高分句型1】You have invested so much time and effort in preparing us for the contest that we all have learned a lot more about English speech.（运用了so… that…引导的结果状语从
句）
【高分句型2】What’s more, your constructive feedback and suggestions have helped us refine our pronunciation, style and presentation, which were crucial in delivering an impressive speech.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
Passage 14
假设你是李华，近期你收到“Z世代国际青年说(Voice Z)”节目组邀请为其“文化”板块录制一个演讲视频，请你给节目联络人Emma写一封信商讨相关事宜，内容包括：
1. 感谢邀请;
2. 告知演讲话题并说明原因;
3. 期待回信。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Emma,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Emma,
Thank you for inviting me to do a video speech for the Culture Column of the Z Era International Youth Talk Program.
Referring to the topic, I’d like to talk about the generation gap. It is a common phenomenon exiting everywhere between parents and children, which results in misunderstandings between loved ones. I will discuss the harm of it and recommend some ways to solve it.
If you have any requirements, please contact me. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给“Z世代国际青年说(Voice Z)”节目联络人Emma写一封信商讨为其“文化”板块录制一个演讲视频，表示感谢并告知演讲话题和说明原因。
【详解】1.词汇积累
谈及：refer to→ in terms of
引起：result in→ cause
谈论：talk about→ discuss
介绍：recommend→ introduce
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I will talk about the harm of it and recommend some ways to solve it.
拓展句：I will talk about the harm of it and recommend some ways that people can use to solve it.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It is a common phenomenon exiting everywhere between parents and children, which results in misunderstandings between loved ones.（运用了现在分词短语作定语以及which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】If you have any requirements, please contact me.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句）
Passage 15
假定你是学生会主席李华。你校上周邀请Smith教授为同学们做了场有关科学研究的讲座。请你代表全校同学用英语给Smith教授写一封邮件，
内容包括：1.表示感谢：
2.感谢缘由：
3.你的期待。
注意:1.词数100左右:
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Dear Professor Smith,
Thank you for sharing your vast knowledge about scientific research at the lecture for us students last week.
Your presentation about topic selection will be extremely helpful to students who are completely new to research. Also, we appreciate your thoughtfulness in preparing and giving the presentation as well as helpful advice. What’s more, it’s very kind of you to be patient with students before and after your talk.
Thank you again for helping to create the next generation of research scholars. We hope to learn more from you.
Yours sincerely,
LiHua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对史密斯教授上周做的一场有关科学研究的讲座表示感谢。
【详解】1.词汇积累
考虑：thoughtfulness →consideration
此外：what’s more →besides
完全地：completely →totally
感激：appreciate →be grateful for
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Thank you for sharing your vast knowledge about scientific research at the lecture for us students last week.
拓展句：Thank you for sharing your vast knowledge about scientific research at the lecture for us students last week, which is very useful.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Your presentation about topic selection will be extremely helpful to students who are completely new to research. (运用了who引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】What’s more, it’s very kind of you to be patient with students before and after your
talk.(运用了it作形式主语)