2024年中考英语热点作文--榜样人物课件(共32张PPT)

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中考英语作文热点
榜样人物
知识分析
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当中考英语作文需要讨论榜样人物时，你可以使用一些特定的句型来组织你的文章。以下是一些建议的句型，这些句型可以帮助你更好地展开文章的结构和思路：
开头句型 ：
引言 ：可以简要介绍榜样人物，以及他们为何成为你的榜样。
Example: “Inspired by countless individuals, I have found my role model in [人物姓名], a person who has demonstrated exceptional qualities and achievements.”
背景介绍 ：为榜样人物提供一个简要的背景介绍。
Example: “Born into humble beginnings, [人物姓名] has risen to become a household name, thanks to his/her determination and hard work.”
中间句型 ：
描述特质 ：详细介绍榜样人物的一些重要特质或品质。
Example: “One of the most striking qualities of [人物姓名] is [特质], which is evident in [具体例子].”
引用名言或故事 ：使用榜样人物的名言或相关的故事来进一步证明其优秀品质。
Example: “[人物姓名] once said, '[名言]', which perfectly encapsulates [人物姓名]’s approach to life and work.”
对比与联系 ：将榜样人物与其他人进行比较，突出其独特之处。
Example: “Compared to other figures in [领域], [人物姓名] stands out for [独特之处], making him/her a true role model.”
在中考英语作文中，描述榜样人物时，可以使用以下一些常用的词组：
Role model（榜样）
Serve as an example（树立榜样）
Inspire and motivate（激励和鼓舞）
Be the best version of oneself（成为最好的自己）
Historical figures（历史人物）
Contemporary public figures（当代公众人物）
Everyday people（普通人）
Make a positive impact on（对……产生积极影响）
Come from various fields（来自各个领域）
Achieve great success（取得巨大成功）
Have qualities that others admire（具有令他人钦佩的品质）
Athletes, artists, scientists, educators, leaders, or philanthropists（运动员、艺术家、科学家、教育家、领导者或慈善家）
这些词组可以帮助你构建一篇关于榜样人物的英语作文，描述他们的特质、成就以及对他人的影响。同时，记得在写作过程中，要注意时态的正确使用，避免中式英语的表达，尽量使用简单句，保持文章的连贯性和逻辑性。
此外，还可以结合其他描述人物的常用短语，如描述人物性格的词语（如outgoing, hardworking, determined等）和描述人物行为的短语（如devote oneself to, make contributions to等），来丰富文章内容。
在准备中考英语作文时，关于中国英雄人物的词组句型有很多可以使用的表达。以下是一些建议的词组和句型：
词组：
英勇无畏的英雄人物 - "brave and fearless heroes"
为国捐躯 - "sacrifice one's life for the country"
壮烈牺牲 - "make a heroic sacrifice"
英雄事迹 - "heroic deeds"
民族英雄 - "national heroes"
句型：
It is admirable that [英雄名字] showed great courage and sacrifice for the welfare of the country.
例如：It is admirable that........ showed great courage and sacrifice for the welfare of the country by fighting against the enemy alone for five days and five nights with limited resources.
[英雄名字] stands as a shining example of bravery and patriotism, demonstrating the best qualities of the Chinese people.
例如：Zhang Zhiyong stands as a shining example of bravery and patriotism, demonstrating the best qualities of the Chinese people by valiantly defending the country against enemy forces.
The heroic deeds of [英雄名字] have inspired generations of Chinese people to emulate their bravery and patriotism.
例如：The heroic deeds of Huang Jiguang have inspired generations of Chinese people to emulate their bravery and patriotism in the face of adversity.
[英雄名字] is remembered not only for their bravery on the battlefield, but also for their unwavering dedication to the cause of the people.
例如：Liu Hulan is remembered not only for her bravery on the battlefield, but also for her unwavering dedication to the cause of the people and her unyielding spirit in the face of death.
模拟练习
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---榜样人物---
神舟十三号载人飞船返回舱在东风着陆场成功着陆后，三位航天员顺利出舱。作为两次登上太空，并在太空给大家进行授课的女航天员王亚平受到了不少学生的喜爱。你作为校园广播台的一名英语播报员，打算向全校介绍这名女航天员。请根据以下信息，写一篇广播稿。词数不少于80个。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
简介1980年1月出生于山东，毕业于北京大学（Peking University））。
主要事迹:
1. 从小就对天空感兴趣;经过一年的学习后，1998年首次驾驶飞机飞上蓝天;
2. 曾驾驶飞机去汶川救援，并于2010年成为航天员;
3.2018年与其他航天员一起被授予"时代楷模"的称号。
评价:
1.工作努力;
2.有毅力、不怕困难;
3.……（自行补充）
参考词汇∶taikonaut 航天员;Model of the Times时代楷模; perseverant有毅力的
As a female taikonaut who entered space twice,Wang Yaping was born___
As a female taikonaut who entered space twice, Wang Yaping was born in January, 1980 in Shandong. She was graduated from Peking University. The following are some important events in her life.First of all, Wang Yaping has showed great interest in space since she was lttle. After a year's learning of flying,she flew into the blue sky in a plane in 1998 for the first time, What's more, she used to fly to Wenchuan to rescue people. After that,she was chosen to be a taikonaut. So excellent was she that she was awarded the Model of the Times with other taikonauts.As far as I'm concerned, she is perseverant and not afraid of difficulties. Therefore, as students,we should learn from her and make contributions to our country.
榜样，就是那些闪耀着奋进之光的人，他们为我们指引放学。在你的成长过程中，一定有许多值得你学习的榜样，比如钱学森、钟南山、袁隆平，或者你的老师、亲人、朋友等。假如你是李华，学校英语角将举办"The Person I Admire"为题的演讲比赛，请你根据要点适当发挥，写一篇介绍自己的榜样的演讲稿。
要点提示;1.Who is he/she 2.What does he/she look like 3.Why do you admire he/she Hello, everyone!
参考范文
Hello.everyone! I'm Li Hua.The person Ladmire most is Yuan Longping. He was born in 1930 in Beijing. In 1974, he developed a new kind of rice,Hybrid Rice.In 1980,he began to help people grow more rice not only in China but also in many other areas around the world.In 2021, he died in Changsha at the age of 91.Yuan Longping made a great contribution to the agriculture of the world.He solved the problem of food for millions of people. So he is called the "father of hybrid rice". He is a hero in my heart.I hope I can be a person like him.Also, we should save food in our daily life to remember him.That's all Thanks for listening.
榜样是我们学的楷模、努力的方向。学校英语社团开展以"介绍我心中的榜样"为主题的社团活动。假如你是李华，请你写一封英文发言稿来介绍你心中的榜样—李想。
内容包括：
（1）人物描写；
（2）说明理由；
（3）表达希望。
【注意】
（1）词数80—100，开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
（2）短文须包括所给内容信息，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）作文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名。
【范文】
Dear fellow students，
I am Li Hua.Today I would like to introduce Li Xiang，a model student in my mind.
He is very kind and caring.At school，he studies so hard that he often gets good scores in exams.However，I don't do well in studying. So he not only helps me with every subject but also tells me how to study in order to catch up others.With Li Xiang's help，I made great progress and I thanked him very much.He plays basketball well.As long as he has time，he will teach me to play basketball.
I think I'm lucky to have such a good friend. From now on，I will do my best to study better and better.And I hope I will learn from Li Xiang to help others in trouble and show the act of kindness to others.
Thanks for your listening!
榜样的力量是无穷的
在危难时刻，总是会有人挺身而出，给人们带来希望和信心。钟南山院士就是这样的人。请你根据下面的要点提示，以The man I admire most为题, 用英语写一篇短文。
1. 1936年10月出生于南京，是21世纪最出名的医学家(medical scientist)之一。
2. 1960年，毕业于北京医学院。毕业后留校做了一名大学教师。这位普通却伟大的老人已经从医60多年了……
3. 2020年，COVID-19疫情爆发后，他立刻带领医护人员赶赴武汉，抗击疾病……
4. 钟南山建议：居家、少外出、外出时戴口罩、勤洗手、多锻炼……
注意：
1. 要点齐全，语言通顺。
2. 词数100左右。
The man I admire most
Dr. Zhong Nanshan was bornin October 1936 in Nanjing.__________________________________________
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He graduated from BeijingMedical College in 1960.
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In 2020,_________________________________________________________________________________
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He’s offered us some safetysuggestions. _______________________________________________________
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Dr. Zhong Nanshanwas born in October 1936 in Nanjing. He is one of the most famous medicalscientists in the 21st century.
He graduated fromBeijing Medical College in 1960. After graduation, he became a college teacherin his school. This ordinary but great old man has worked as a doctor for over60 years. He has made great achievements.
In 2020, whenCOVID-19 broke out, he led the doctors and nurses to rush to Wuhan at once.They worked day and night to fight the disease. They have saved thousands ofpeople.
He’s offered ussome safety suggestions. First, we had better stay at home and avoid going out.Second, we must wear masks when going out. Third, wash our hands and doexercise as often as possible.
He is the person Iadmire most.
【详解】
1. 题干解读：文章是一篇话题作文。以“The man I admire most”为主题展开描写，主要写钟南山院士的过去以及从医的职业过程以及在2020疫情期间的表现，要把题目中给出的每一个要点都要写清楚写具体，要突出让人钦佩的地方，要注意语言的连贯性和逻辑性。
2. 例文点评：文章分五段描写。第一段主要描写钟南山院士的基本情况，引出他是最著名的医学科学家之一；第二段描写他之前的情况，包括他之前的学习情况以及工作情况；第三段写了2020疫情期间他的表现；第四段写了在疫情期间给人们的建议；第五段总结他是我最钦佩的人。整个文章结构完整思路清晰，语言表达准确，用词恰当意思表达明确易懂。
3. 高分亮点：
短语：one of；graduate from；rush to；at once；day and night；thousands of；avoid doing；as often as possible。
句型：when引导的时间状语从句；动词原形开头的祈使句；省略关系词whom/ that/ who的定语从句。
Introducing a hero
每个人都有自己心目中的英雄，每个人都可以成为英雄。假如某中学生英语杂志社正在开展以My hero为题的有奖征文活动。请你根据下面的要点提示，写一篇征文稿。
要点提示：(1) Who is your hero (2) What makes him/her a hero
写作要求：1. 须包含提示中的所有内容，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2. 条理清楚，语言流畅，语句通顺，标点正确；3. 100词左右。
思路点拨
第一步：审题
1. 找关键词：心目中的英雄
2. 确定以下几个内容
体裁：记叙文
时态：一般现在时、一般过去时为主
人称：第一人称、第三人称
第二步：列出写作提纲
开头部分：引出心目中的英雄
主体部分：他或她的故事
结尾部分：总结、概括
第三步：选词组句
1. 与人的优秀品质有关的词
形容词：
brave 勇敢的；calm 镇静的；confident 有信心的；determined 意志坚决的；devoted 投入的；generous 宽宏大量的；hard-working 努力工作的；heroic 英勇的；honest 诚实的；kind-hearted 热心的；optimistic 乐观的；selfless 无私的；strong-willed 意志坚强的；talented 有才干的
名词：
bravery 勇敢；confidence 信心；courage 勇气；diligence 刻苦；greatness 伟大；kindness 善良；selflessness 无私；talent 才能
2. 其他相关的词组
● be born in … (place) on/in … (date), at the age of, be born into a … family, live a … life
● attend, graduate from …, go to … for further studies
● have a talent for …, serve as …, make up one’s mind to …, work hard at …
● manage to do / succeed in doing sth., be famous for, be well-known at home and abroad, help make great progress in, win first prize / place, set a goodexample to sb., receive respect and love from…
● in the face of …, regard … as …, take risks to do
3. 提炼可能用到的句型
开头部分：
● Who is your hero Let me tell you about mine.
● Everyone has a hero, someone they look up to or admire. So do I.
● Maybe your hero is a famous singer, a movie star or a great man. But my hero seems so ordinary(平凡的).
● A hero to me is somebody who …
● I thought about this question when I started to write it: Who is my hero Well, my hero would have to be …
主体部分：
● My hero is … / … is my hero.
● I admire … greatly because ...
● I admire … for his/her …
● Although he/she …, he/she has a very strong will.
● Whatever he/she does, he/she never gives up easily.
● He/She always believes in himself/herself.
● He/She always works hard.
● He/She always thinks of others first.
结尾部分：
(1) I learn from him/her that ...
(2) He/She is a true hero in my heart.
(3) He/She is simply the best in my heart!
(4) He/She sets a good example to all of us / young people to follow.
(5) He/She will always be alive in my heart.
(6) He/She has always been my hero and will continue to remain so.
(7) He/She is the pride of China. We should learn from him/her.
第四步：连句成篇
根据写作提纲连句成篇，力求文章内容准确生动、条理清楚。在这一过程中要注意选择恰当的表示并列、递进、因果或转折意义的过渡词，把所有要点、句子连接起来，使句与句之间意思连贯，结构衔接。
A hero to me is somebody who has done great contributions (贡献) to our society. He/She cares about other people. He/She can face any difficulty without fear and even take risks to help others. Zhong Nanshan is such a person.
As we all know, Zhong Nanshan risked his life to go to Wuhan and work there to fight against COVID-19 as soon as it broke out. He was 84 years old then. Although the new virus was known to be more dangerous to the old, he didn’t think about his own safety. He entered hospitals to visit patients in person. With months of hard work, China succeeded in controlling the disease.
Thanks