2024年高考英语(读后续写)模拟真题 (广东专用)
1.(2024·广东深圳·高三校考一模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之成为一篇完整的短文。
Have you ever had to overcome an extreme challenge in your life
Throughout my rushed teenage years I have been faced with many extreme challenges that have required extreme focus and hard work to overcome. If it hadn’t been for hard work, none of these challenges that I faced would have been conquered.
Two years ago, when I was a freshman in high school, I dealt with an extremely significant injury. It took place in my tennis tournament in January. In the climax of my match, I turned my back to the left and soon after felt a sharp, painful shock run through my spine (脊椎). I knew at that difficult moment I seriously injured my back. I was rushed off the court and my parents made an appointment with an orthopedist (矫形外科医生) for the next day.
I walked into the office extremely nervous and suffering from intense pain. My tennis season for school would start in three months and I absolutely needed to build up the strength.
After about twenty minutes of waiting in the office, which felt like a decade, the doctor walked in to examine my X-rays. With a sorrowful face, the doctor looked into mine and my mother’s eyes and said,“There is a 50/50 chance that Lucas will be able to participate in this year’s tennis season. Lucas broke his L5 spine in his lower back.”My heart dropped and I felt a sadness coming over me. The doctor said that I would be sitting out of physical activity for two and a half to three months.
Those three months were the longest three months of my life. I was so eager to get back to practice for the season. Every day, I would think about how it was going to be when I was fully healthy. I asked myself,“Am I going to be out of shape Should I even play this year Probably won’t have a successful season.”
From that terrible day on, I decided that I was going to work hard to be back in top form and have a successful season.
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After I got the “all clear” from my orthopedist, I was going to get to work.
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My hard work proved to be very effective.
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【答案】Paragraph 1:
After I got the “all clear” from my orthopedist, I was going to get to work. Practices were going to start in two weeks and I was determined to get back on the court. My hunger for success made me play and work out for two hours every day before the season. Through practices, I would hit the gym and try to build up the strength that I had before the injury.
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My hard work proved to be very effective. I had the most successful season of my career. I made it to the finals. Although I truly wanted to win, I knew that it was a great accomplishment for me to be in that position even not in the first place. The injury was almost a good thing because I proved to myself that I was capable of achieving goals that I strived for, through hard work of course. That season was by far the most rewarding season of my career. I felt so accomplished at the end of the season. Hard work always pays off.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了青少年时代的作者在学业和体育等方面都很困难。雪上加霜的是在一次网球比赛中他的背部受了伤,医生的诊断使他十分郁闷,但参赛的强烈欲望迫使他不断地进行康复训练而回到赛场。经过艰苦的努力最终取得回报的故事。
【详解】1. 段落续写:
①根据续文第一段首句“在我的骨科医生告诉我“一切都好”之后,我就要开始训练了”可知本段可描写作者回到球场去训练,通过训练恢复到了受伤前的体质等。
②根据第二段首句“我的努力训练证明非常有效”可知本段可描写作者的努力训练有什么样的好结果以及自己的感受。
2. 续写线索:球场训练——增强体力——艰苦努力——得到回报
3. 词汇激活
行为类
①下定决心:be determined to/make one’s mind to do
②增强体质:build up the strength/enhance physical fitness
③实现:achieve/realize
情绪类
①渴望:hunger for/aspiration
②有成就的:accomplished/achieved
【点睛】[高分句型1]
Through practices, I would hit the gym and try to build up the strength that I had before the injury.(运用了限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]
Although I truly wanted to win, I knew that it was a great accomplishment for me to be in that position even not in the first place.(运用了although引导让步状语从句和that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型3]
The injury was almost a good thing because I proved to myself that I was capable of achieving goals that I strived for, through hard work of course.(运用了because引导原因状语从句,that引导宾语从句和that引导限制性定语从句)
2.(2023春·广东揭阳·高三校联考一模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Two years ago, Caleb was confined (限制) to a wheelchair after an accident. He wanted to be a great basketball player when he grew up, but his wheelchair weakened his confidence in his ability to do so.
One morning, he told his mother Linda that he had to give up his dreams because he was disabled. Hearing it, Linda held Caleb’s hands and told him not to think of himself in that way again.
“You can realize your dreams just like other kids,” Linda said. And she promised she’d be there to support Caleb.
From that day on, after Caleb’s classes, Linda would take him to the school’s basketball court, and they would play basketball together. When Caleb didn’t score a basket, he’d become a little discouraged, but Linda always encouraged him to try his best.
One warm Sunday, Caleb and his mom played basketball in a local park. When Caleb finally scored a basket, he shouted, “I did it, Mom! I scored a basket!” Proud of Caleb, Linda asked Caleb to try it again and promised that days later she’d let him sign up for a basketball training club.
Just then, a voice cut her off, “Don’t have too much confidence in yourself!After all, you’re locked in that wheelchair!” Caleb’s smile disappeared when he noticed a group of unknown boys standing near the court s entrance. “This game isn’t for people like you!” shouted another. “Just go home and play board games!”
Linda was angry. She shouted back. “Who are you to tell my son what he should be doing Just get lost!” The group of boys didn’t leave. They just stepped into the court, playing basketball to enjoy themselves. They ignored Linda and Caleb, not laughing at Caleb any longer although they still thought Caleb wouldn’t make any achievement in basketball no matter how hard he tried.
And Caleb was already upset by the group of boys’ hurtful words. Tears welled up in his eyes. “Could we please go home, Mom I don’t want to be here any longer,” he whispered.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Linda looked at the basketball, thinking about how to comfort and encourage Caleb.
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Caleb finally became cheerful and decided not to give up practicing basketball.
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【答案】One possible version:
Linda looked at the basketball, thinking about how to comfort and encourage Caleb. Soon, she knelt next to him, saying, “Nobody can prevent you pursuing your dream. Let’s keep practicing!” She handed him the ball and asked him to try to throw it into the ring. But Caleb didn’t respond. “Don’t give up!” Linda added. “You’ve done it before, and you can do it again!” Noticing that the group of boys continued ignoring them and not troubling
them, Caleb gathered up his courage and tried again. He scored a basket successfully!
Caleb finally became cheerful and decided not to give up practicing basketball. “Great!” Linda cried and hugged him. Five days after that day, Caleb signed up for a basketball training club, where the coach was very friendly and patient. With time going by, Caleb showed a great talent for basketball, which made him try harder to practice. His skills gradually improved a lot and his body also became much stronger. Finally, he received a scholarship and at-tended a well-known college featuring sports. He wished someday he’d attend the Olympics.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了凯莱布在一次事故中被限制在轮椅上,他想长大后成为一名伟大的篮球运动员,但他的轮椅削弱了他对自己实现这一目标的信心。一天早上,他告诉他的母亲琳达,他不得不放弃他的梦想,因为他是残疾人。琳达听到后,握着凯莱布的手,告诉他不要再那样想自己了。虽然经历了被他人嘲笑,但是凯莱布坚持了自己的梦想。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“琳达看着篮球,想着如何安慰和鼓励凯莱布”可知,第一段可描写琳达是如何安慰凯莱布的。
②由第二段首句内容“凯莱布终于高兴起来,决定不放弃练习篮球”可知,第二段可描写凯莱布参加篮球训练俱乐部,随着时间的流逝,凯莱布在篮球方面表现出了巨大的天赋,这使他更加努力地练习。
2.续写线索:安慰——没有回应——鼓起勇气尝试——成功——报名俱乐部——进入体育学院
3.词汇激活
行为类
追求:pursue/run after
回答:respond /reply
注意到:notice/note
情绪类
耐心:patient /with patience
有天赋:show a great talent for /be talented
【点睛】[高分句型1] Noticing that the group of boys continued ignoring them and not troubling them, Caleb gathered up his courage and tried again. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2]Five days after that day, Caleb signed up for a basketball training club, where the coach was very friendly and patient. (运用了where引导非限制性定语从句)
3.(2024·广东江门·高三统考一模)阅读下面材料根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
How to Fix a Mistake
After many continuous days of steady downpour, the sun finally came out on a Sunday morning. My friend Allan and I decided to play catch in my yard. We were having fun throwing the ball back and forth.
“Run! Nice catch!” It had been days since we enjoyed ourselves. Then, I threw the ball too hard and Allan missed his catch. The ball flew like lightning, crossed the yard and hit my neighbor’s window. We heard the big sound. Crash! Smash! The window broke into many pieces.
Allan turned pale, and a look of panic crossed his face. He froze, too scared to move an inch. Without a second thought, I grabbed his hand, whispering, “Come with me!” We ran into my backyard and hid behind a stack of hay. It seemed to be a place of safety. However, my heart was still pounding hard, as if it were about to pop.
Mr. Jones, the neighbour, who was a seventy-year-old man, lived alone. Though he was poor, he was well loved in the neighborhood for he always helped those in need.
Obviously, he heard the big sound, too. He came out of his house, with a ball in his hands. It was exactly our ball! Did he recognize who the ball belonged to With butterflies in my stomach, I breathed deeply. In the meantime, Mr. Jones looked around, trying to see who threw the ball. Of course, no one was outside. He gazed the window for a while, and then the ball. Finally, he went back into his house.
A few days later, I saw that Mr. Jones had repaired the broken glass. He was sitting outside. When he saw me, he waved at me. I felt ashamed as I waved back at him. I knew what I should do, but I was afraid to do it.
Later, my mom and I were talking and she told me about the broken window.
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Mr. Jones looked at me after I explained what had happened.
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【答案】One possible version:
Later, my mom and I were talking and she told me about the broken window. “Poor Mr. Jones,” she sighed,
“He’s such a nice guy. I can’t believe anyone would break his window and not stay around to apologize.” Hearing what my mom said, I pulled the hem of my clothes tightly, the blood rushing to my face. Catching sight of the embarrassment written in my burning face, she seemed to know everything. “Yes, it’s me.” I confessed that I broke the window by accident, promising that I would go right over now and own up to my mistake. Then I plucked up the courage to knock on Mr. Jones’ door and decided to tell him what I had done.
Mr. Jones looked at me after I explained what had happened. He was not angry at all. On the contrary, a gentle smile danced around the corners of his mouth. Relieved but still ashamed. I apologized to him with sincerity and asked how much it cost to repair the window. I told him that I would save my money and pay back every penny of it. Patting me on the shoulder, Mr. Jones replied, “It’s not the money that matters.” He continued, “I was really hurt that someone would do that to me without stopping to apologize. Now that you have come and explained the accident, I feel good again.” What Mr. Jones spoke out had a lasting influence on me, reminding me to be honest and fix every mistake I made.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者玩球时意外打破了邻居琼斯先生家的窗户,作者因为害怕逃走了。事后妈妈的话让作者感到后悔,于是承认是自己打破了窗户,获得了邻居琼斯先生的原谅。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“后来,我妈妈和我聊天,她告诉了我窗户被打破的事”可知,第一段可描写作者感到惭愧和尴尬,承认了是自己打破的窗户。
②由第二段首句内容“我解释了发生的事情后,琼斯先生看着我”可知,第二段可描写作者跟琼斯先生坦白,获得了原谅。
2.续写线索:聊天——尴尬——认错——道歉——获得原谅
3.词汇激活
行为类
①道歉:apologize /make an apology
②承认:confess/ acknowledge
③偿还:pay back /repay
情绪类
①尴尬:embarrassment / awkwardness
②生气的:angry /annoyed
【点睛】[高分句型1] Hearing what my mom said, I pulled the hem of my clothes tightly, the blood rushing to my face. (运用了what引导宾语从句和独立主格结构)
[高分句型2] I confessed that I broke the window by accident, promising that I would go right over now and own
up to my mistake. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
4.(2023·广东·校联考三模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Mark Gayowski, a 34-year-old carpenter, was determined to ski in the western Canadian province of British Columbia. He told his plan to his parents, Cindy Reich and Raymond, and headed to nearby Red Mountain, one of North America’s oldest ski resorts. Reich asked him to call or text her when he finished the run.
“I will,” he replied. Then he glided towards the ravine(溪谷).
Soon there was no way for him to ski around the logs and downed branches that boxed him in. He could feel the weather starting to change.
Reich wondered why her son hadn’t texted or called. She began to worry. She called him but couldn’t get through. Reich began to panic and called for help.
Mike Hudson, a 41-year-old search-and-rescue manager in the neighbouring village of Fruitvale, was just going home when his phone rang. It was a call from the Emergency Coordination Centre, asking if he could lead a mission to find a missing skier.
After 12 hours in the ravine, Gayowski’s phone battery died, and he’d abandoned his skis after struggling. He dressed lightly that day. He knew he had to keep moving or risk death.
Through the night he climbed By late afternoon, his legs were beginning to give out, his feet blistering after more than 30 hours of hard walking in ski boots.
Hudson dispatched two teams of four rescuers into the ravine a. V am on December 31. But as the hours slipped by , it became clear that none of his rescuers located Gavowski. Hudson knew that there was only a 30 per cent chance that Gayowski would survive the night.
The darkness was setting in again. Gayowski needed to keep moving.
At daybreak, Hudson returned to the command centre to prepare his teams for another push. Gayowski’s parents sat home, feeling desperate.
Sunlight came through the trees in the ravine. Gayowski was grateful to be alive. He struggled to move forward through knee-deep snow. He had to wrap his hands to lift his legs. At some point. he stopped and screamed out in anger. Then he heard some shouts coming back in his direction.
注意:1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
It took moments for Gayowski to realize that they weren’t just echoes(回声).
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Reich picked up the phone with anxiety.
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【答案】
It took moments for Gayowski to realize that they weren’t just echoes(回声).When he learned the truth, he felt very disappointed. The prolonged coldness and hunger made his progress even more difficult. But every time he recalled his parents’ expectations and waiting, he once again strengthened his determination to go on. At that moment, Hudson's two rescue teams were also approaching to the depths of the ravine from different directions. They shouted out the name of Gayowski as they walked, hoping that he would respond upon hearing it, even though they thought that his chance of survival was very slim. Just as they were about to give up, they discovered the exhausted Gayowski sitting under the tree!
Reich picked up the phone with anxiety. Gayowski’s weak voice came from the other end of the phone, “Dear mom, I’m still alive”. Excited tears slid down from Reich’s face. Then she learned from Hudson that her son had entered the hospital for treatment. When Reich and her husband Raymond arrived at the hospital, they expressed gratitude to Hudson's rescue team.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了马克·加约夫斯基把自己的滑雪计划告诉了父母后,然后前往附近的红山去滑雪。由于天气的改变他被困在峡谷里,和家人失去联系,后来被哈德逊派遣的救援队所营救生还的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“加约夫斯基过了一会儿才意识到它们不仅仅是回声。”可知,第一段可描写加约夫斯基在雪地困难地挣扎和他被救的经历。
②由第二段首句内容“赖希焦急地拿起电话。”可知,第二段可描写赖希得知消息之后的激动、去医院看望儿子和表达对救援人员的感激之情。
2.续写线索:克服困难前行——不断激励自己——得到救援——给母亲报平安——去医院治疗——表达谢
意
3.词汇激活
行为类
①想起:recall/remember
②落下:slide down/fall down
③进入医院:entered the hospital/came into the hospital
情绪类
①感谢:express gratitude to/be grateful
②失望的:disappointed/upset
【点睛】[高分句型1]. Then she learned from Hudson that her son had entered the hospital for treatment. (由that 引导的宾语从句作动词learned的宾语)
[高分句型2]. When Reich and her husband Raymond arrived at the hospital, they expressed gratitude to Hudson's rescue team.(由连词when引导的时间状语从句)
5.(2023·广东汕头·金山中学校考模拟预测)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My Father’s Son
It’s hard being an astronaut’s son. I often wonder how my father ever had a son like me. I mean he’s so special and so good at everything he does. But I’m just an average eleven-year-old kid.
Nowadays I dream about being a famous writer, but I used to dream about doing something spectacular to impress my father and make him proud of me — something like rescuing a child from a burning building or chasing a robber away from an old lady.
I was daydreaming in school one morning. I was daydreaming about being some kind of hero when my friend Ellen reminded me of my English teacher’s announcement about a Father’s Day essay contest.
“I hope we have a winner right here in my English class,” she said. “There are three prizes for each of you.”
When I got home, I kissed my mom quickly. Then I went upstairs to my room and sat down with a pen and a pad of paper. I started to think about what I would write.
How did I see my father Hmm.
I saw him teaching me how to use a bat and how to throw a baseball.
I remembered how he hugged me for hours when my dog Spotty was hit and killed by a car. And I remembered how he sat and tried to explain death to me when Grandpa Bob died.
These were the things I was going to write about my dad. To me, he wasn’t just a world-famous astronaut.
He was my dad.
I wrote about all these memories and put them in my essay. I handed it in the next day and was surprised to find out that the winning essays would be read in the auditorium on Thursday night. All the parents and students were incited.
My parents and I went to school Thursday night. One of our neighbors said, “I bet you’ll win the contest, David. I bet you wrote what it’s like to be the son of an astronaut, and you’re the only one in town who could write about that.”
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I shrugged and then the first prize winner - Ellen was announced.
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Surprised and thrilled, I went up to the stage.
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【答案】One possible version:
I shrugged and then the first prize winner — Ellen was announced. Though deep down, I didn’t want to win just because my father was an astronaut, I was relieved and disappointed at the same time at the news. When Ellen read to the end, I heard a chorus of praise and saw tears running down my parents’ face. Somehow, a mixed feeling welled up in me. Will Dad feel disappointed Maybe I should have written about being the son of an astronaut. Then the second prize winner was announced. To my amazement, it was me!
Surprised and thrilled, I went up to the stage. Taking a deep breath, I started to read my essay “My Father’s Son.” He is a great astraunaut. But more importatly, he is a great father to me.“ Upon my finishing reading, the auditorium thundered with applause. When I went back to my seat, Dad put his hand on my shoulder. ”Son, this is the proudest moment of my life," he almost sobbed. It was the proudest moment of my life, too. Maybe I’ll never be a great hero, but just then, it was enough just to be my father’s son.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开。主要讲述了作者的爸爸是一名宇航员,而作者却是个普通的孩子,并没有那么优秀。所以作者常常梦想做一些引人注目的事情来给他的父亲留下深刻的印象,让他骄傲。一天,
英语老师宣布了关于父亲节作文比赛的公告,放学后,作者回到家开始写作,作者回想起了父亲与自己的点点滴滴,于是将这些写进了作文里。第二天作者交上了作文,惊讶地发现获奖作文将于周四晚上在礼堂里朗读,所有家长和学生都会被邀请。在当天,一个邻居认为作者会写作为宇航员的儿子是什么感觉。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“我耸耸肩,然后宣布艾伦获得一等奖。”和第二段首句“我又惊又喜地走上舞台。”可知,第一段可描写艾伦获得一等奖,在艾伦读自己的作文时,父母被感动,以及作者获得了二等奖。
②由第二段首句内容“我又惊又喜地走上舞台。”可知,第二段可描写作者走上舞台读自己的作文,爸爸很感动,作者感悟到作父亲的儿子就已经足够了。
2.续写线索:宣布艾伦获一等奖——艾伦读作文——爸妈感动——作者感觉自己没获奖让父母失望了——宣布作者获得二等奖——作者上台读作文——爸爸感动——作者感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①结束:finish/complete
②返回:go back to/return
③啜泣:sob/whimper
情绪类
①失望的:disappointed/frustrated
【点睛】[高分句型1] Though deep down, I didn’t want to win just because my father was an astronaut, I was relieved and disappointed at the same time at the news.(由because引导的状语从句)
[高分句型2]When Ellen read to the end, I heard a chorus of praise and saw tears running down my parents’ face. Somehow, a mixed feeling welled up in me. (由when引导的状语从句)
[高分句型3] When I went back to my seat, Dad put his hand on my shoulder.(由when引导的状语从句)
6.(2024·广东·高三校联考开学考试)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Mohan was excited. His father had finally declared him old enough to help take the sheep to herd. It was no ordinary herding, though. Mohan and his father and other shepherds (牧羊人) moved high up into the mountains and stayed on the pastures (牧场) with their flocks for six long months.
It was not an easy life. Far away from home, the men were surrounded by forests that were filled with dangerous animals, such as bears, tigers, and leopards (豹) .
As Mohan bid his mother and sister goodbye, he tried to look as grown-up as possible. Mohan, his father, and their sheepdog, Sona, set off along the dusty track with their sheep. Soon they were joined by other shepherds
and their flocks. The group climbed for three days until they reached the half-dry bed of a river. “Let’s part up here,” said the oldest shepherd.
Mohan and his father, along with Kishan, a neighbor, took their sheep northward. As night fell, everything seemed peaceful. Mohan sat closer to Sona for warmth. His father and Kishan had taken their flocks to different ends of the pasture.
Suddenly, Sona started to bark. Mohan looked up to see his father’s sheep rushing down the slope. Something was wrong. He waited for the sheep to reach him. Then he turned to Sona and said, “Stay and guard the sheep. I must look for Father.”
Mohan picked up a lantern and his shepherd’s stick and hurried in the direction from which the sheep had come. “Father, where are you ” he called out. Then came another sound that froze Mohan’s blood. Mohan shouted,” Father!” A steady voice answered, “I’m here.”
Mohan rushed up a slope and almost fell into a ditch (沟) on the other side. He stopped just in time and found himself looking straight into the eyes of a snow leopard. Mohan was frozen with terror.
“Mohan, use your lantern.” His father’s voice shook Mohan’s fear out of him. Mohan looked down and saw his father lying in the ditch, holding a lamb.
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Mohan knew he had to act fast.
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Mohan put out the fire and then climbed into the ditch.
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【答案】One possible version:
Mohan knew he had to act fast. Waving the lantern, he rushed towards the animal, but his foot slipped and he fell. His lantern crashed into a rock. A line of flaming oil snaked up the ground towards the leopard, and the animal moved back with a snarl. Mohan thought quickly. He took off his shirt and hooked it onto his shepherd’s staff. Then he set the shirt on fire and ran shouting at the big cat. The leopard leaped backward in surprise and, with a flash of its tail, disappeared from sight.
Mohan put out the fire and then climbed into the ditch. He saw that his father had hurt his ankle. “Come, Father, hold on to my shoulder,” said Mohan. “I’ll help you climb out.” Mohan’s father put one arm around his son. He held the lamb with the other. Just then Kishan arrived with his dogs. “What happened ” he cried. Mohan’s father held tightly to Mohan. “Nothing,” he whispered. “Nothing that my son could not handle.”
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,主要讲述了Mohan和父亲以及邻居到高山上去牧羊,到了高山上时,他们分开牧羊,随后父亲的羊从斜坡上冲下来,出事了。于是Mohan让邻居照看自己的羊,接着便去找父亲。当他发现父亲时,父亲躺在沟里,手里抱着一只小羊羔,附近有一只雪豹正盯着他们。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“Mohan 知道他必须尽快行动。”和第二段首句“Mohan扑灭了火,然后爬进了沟里。”可知,第一段可描写Mohan用手里的灯笼点着火,将雪豹吓走。
②由第二段首句内容“Mohan扑灭了火,然后爬进了沟里。”可知,第二段可描写Mohan帮助爸爸爬出沟里,爸爸对儿子的英勇行为感到自豪。
2.续写线索:尽快行动——挥动灯笼——摔倒,灯笼撞到石头——灯笼着火,点燃衬衫——雪豹吓走——扑灭火——救出父亲——父亲自豪
3.词汇激活
行为类
①跑向:rush towards/run to
②跳跃:leap/jump
③消失:disappear/vanish
情绪类
惊讶地:in surprise/surprisedly
【点睛】【高分句型1】Waving the lantern, he rushed towards the animal, but his foot slipped and he fell. (运用了现在分词作状语)
【高分句型2】He saw that his father had hurt his ankle.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
7.(2024·广东·高三惠州一中校联考一模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Police Outpost Lake is as far south as you can go in Canada. In fact, next to the lake are the protected wetlands, where songbirds, ducks, and Canada geese glided by on the breeze, touching down briefly on the water’s surface before flapping (振翅) their way back up into the sky.
Standing at the lake’s edge, my cousin, Allan, and I cast our fishing lines separately onto the smooth-as-glass water. Down the shoreline was Allan’s father, my uncle Rick. He liked to fish alone, away from distractions, noise, and other people.
Allan shouted, “Dad, where should I stand ”
Uncle Rick pressed his finger to his lips, pointed to a shady spot by a large rock where he had cast his line and shook his head gently.
“He wants us to be quiet or else we won’t catch any fish.” I whispered.
“Why do I have to be so quiet ” asked Allan. “All those birds are making more noise than I ever could!”
I ignored him, pulling back on my rod gently and squinting into the glare of the sun. Out of the corner of my eye, I caught a glimpse of a few great northern loons (潜鸟) gathering together not far from the shoreline. What were they doing there Loons usually travel alone, but here were five of them in a cluster. Maybe it was a family Just then one loon, making a loud painful cry, swam away from the group, toward me.
“Allan! Come here. Now!”
Allan laid his fishing rod down on the dirty sand, darting toward me.
“Come here. Take a look at that loon. It’s swimming toward us, not far away from us. It’s trying to get our attention.”
The loon finally stopped in the shallow water near shore, not ten feet away from us. It was so close that we could see its round red eyes. Strangely, the bird’s wings were held tight against its body.
Wading into the water and getting closer to the loon, we both saw a fishing line wrapped tightly around its neck and a shiny red hook (鱼钩) in its body. Left like this, the loon couldn’t fly or fish or survive. It was asking us to help!
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“Go fetch the scissors from the fishing box,” I urged Allan.
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As I set down the loon on the water, it joyfully flapped its wings.
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【答案】Possible version
“Go fetch the scissors from the fishing box,” I urged Allan. He immediately sprang into action, dashing to the shore and returning with a small pair of scissors. Taking a deep breath, I closed my eyes for a moment to steady myself. With caution, I bent down and picked up the loon. It was astonishing that the bird remained silent and still, as if it thoroughly believed we had come to its rescue. Inspired by my courage, Allan stepped forward to cut the line around the loon’s neck with the scissors, and then carefully removed the hook from its flesh. With the task completed, we breathed a sigh of relief.
As I placed the loon back in the water, it joyfully flapped its wings. Fixing its gaze on us, it rose up and forcefully struck its wings against the lake’s surface. It was reluctant to fly away immediately as if expressing its gratitude to us. Both Allan and I were deeply touched by its display. On the shore, Uncle Rick, who had been watching the entire time, said, “Boys, I’m incredibly proud of you both for your love and concern for the birds.” Collaborating to help and keep that loon alive was undoubtedly the most remarkable thing we had ever done. Bathed in golden sunlight, the lake shimmered charmingly, with birds flying freely above the water’s surface – a sight that would be forever engraved in our minds.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者和表弟Allan,叔叔Rick一起钓鱼,发现有一只潜鸟发出痛苦的叫声并朝他们走来,在最后离作者他们不到十英尺远的地方停了下来,但我们走近后发现一根鱼线紧紧地缠在它的脖子上,它身上有一个闪亮的红钩。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容““去把剪刀从钓鱼箱里拿来。”我催促Allan。”可知,第一段可描写作者和表弟帮助潜鸟剪断鱼线的过程。
②由第二段首句内容“当我把潜鸟放回水中时,它高兴地拍打着翅膀。”可知,第二段可描写潜鸟拍打水面对作者和表弟表示感谢,作者和表弟得到叔叔Rick的赞扬。
2.续写线索:去取剪刀——弯腰捡鸟——Allan剪断鱼线——任务完成——潜鸟拍打水面表示感谢——感动
——叔叔表扬——铭记
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.返回:return/backing out
②.深呼吸:take a deep breath/breathe deeply
③.完成:complete/finish/accomplish
情绪类
①.谨慎地:carefully / with caution / discreetly
②.令人惊讶的:astonishing /surprising/to one’s astonishment
【点睛】[高分句型1]. It was astonishing that the bird remained silent and still, as if it thoroughly believed we had come to its rescue.(由连接词that连接的主语从句,it为形式主语和as if引导的方式状语从句)
[高分句型2]. On the shore, Uncle Rick, who had been watching the entire time, said, “Boys, I’m incredibly proud of you both for your love and concern for the birds.”(由关系代词who引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型3]. Bathed in golden sunlight, the lake shimmered charmingly, with birds flying freely above the water’s surface – a sight that would be forever engraved in our minds.(that引导的限制性定语从句)
8.(2024·广东·高三校联考一模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Caught in a flood
Mary and her parents were downstairs in the living room. Mary was looking through the windows at the endless rain outside. It had been raining non-stop for three days. She had never seen a storm this bad. It was making her nervous. The wind roared and the rain beat on the roof and windows. Dad was listening to a weather report on the radio, while Mum was putting their important documents and disaster supplies into a bag.
“Mum, Dad,” said Mary suddenly, “I think we should leave here right away!”
“No,” said Dad. “It’s too late: The radio says the city has already been flooded.”
“We can drive our car through the floodwater. Let’s us leave! I’m really scared!” cried Mary. “We can’t do that, honey,” explained Mum, “otherwise the moving water could wash the car away!”
Mary walked to the door. She was curious to see how much water there was outside.
“Don’t open the door!” shouted Mum and Dad at the same time. “The water may flood in!”
Dad moved the dinner table against the door, in case the floodwater forced the door open. Mum waved to Mary to sit on the sofa. “Mary, don’t worry. Everything’s going to be OK,” she said softly, trying her best to comfort Mary. Her voice was calm, but Mary could tell she was worried too.
Without saying a single word, Dad walked to the sofa, sat down and hugged his wife and daughter. The sudden silence in the house seemed to make the wind and rain more frightening outside. What could they do
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1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.续写部分分为两段,每段开头语已为你写好。
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All of a sudden, the floodwater forced the door open.
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Being upstairs, they breathed a sigh of relief.
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【答案】One possible version:
Paragraph 1:
All of a sudden, the floodwater forced the door open. Shocked, frightened and extremely scared, Mary saw the floodwaters pouring into the room, leaving the dinner table upside down. She didn’t know what to do, trembling, and turned to her mum for help. An idea occurred to Mum that they had to go upstairs, because they had no choice but to save themselves at that moment, and it would be of great danger to stay in place before rescue came to them. Dad also rushed to the second floor without hesitation, not forgetting to take the bag containing important documents and disaster supplies.
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Being upstairs, they breathed a sigh of relief. However, the floodwater had flooded into the whole living
room downstairs. They were all nervous and scared to see the floodwater rise further. Fortunately, what relieved them a little was that they prepared enough food and water supplies in advance. The rain was still raining non-stop. Mary and Mum became increasingly nervous while Dad kept giving them comfort and encouragement. Later, they learned from the radio that the government was organizing rescue groups to save people caught in their home by boat. Thinking they would be saved, they couldn’t be more excited. Until then, the easiness and warmth welled up in every corner of the room, seeming to make the floodwater outside less frightening outside. It doesn’t matter what you did when you were faced with tough situation, and what matters most is that you made a wise decision and well prepared.
【导语】本文以事件为线索展开,玛丽一家因为暴雨而被困在家,玛丽感到很紧张,而她的爸爸在听天气预报,妈妈在整理重要文件和救灾物资。玛丽想要赶紧离开,但是爸爸告诉她城市已被洪水淹没,来不及离开了。妈妈安慰了充满担心的玛丽,爸爸默默地拥抱了自己的妻子和女儿。
【详解】1. 段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“突然,洪水把门冲开了。”可知,第一段可描写他们看到的可怕景象和害怕的心理,以及采取的紧急措施。
②由第二段首句内容“在楼上,他们松了一口气。”可知,第二段可描写洪水继续发展给他们带来的威胁,他们得知将得救后的宽慰,以及面对洪水困境的感悟。
2. 续写线索:洪水把门冲开——所见所感——采取紧急措施——松一口气——洪水继续发展——得知将得救——面对困境的感悟
3. 词汇激活
行为类
①看到:see/spot/notice
②冲:rush/run/dash
③拿,带:take/grasp/get hold of
④给:give/offer/provide
情绪类
①震惊的:shocked/astonished/stunned
②害怕的:frightened/scared/terrified
③紧张的:nervous/anxious
【点睛】[高分句型1] An idea occurred to Mum that they had to go upstairs, because they had no choice but to save themselves at that moment, and it would be of great danger to stay in place before rescue came to them. (that引导同位语从句、because引导原因状语从句、before引导时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] Fortunately, what relieved them a little was that they prepared enough food and water supplies in advance. (what引导主语从句、that引导表语从句)
[高分句型3] It doesn’t matter what you did when you were faced with tough situation, and what matters most is that you made a wise decision and well prepared. (what引导主语从句、when引导时间状语从句、that引导表语从句)
9.(2024·广东珠海·高三校联考一模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I always wondered how people would react if I tried to approach a stranger for help in a busy place like a street corner or in a bustling mall. I personally have always hurried past a stranger who tried to catch my attention in a busy place or when I am rushing around.
Yesterday I had a taste of being stuck in such a desperate situation where you only hope of help would have to come from a total stranger.
I was in a busy shopping mall buying a large piece of luggage. After the purchase in one of the large, fancy, expensive shops, I picked up my phone from my pocket to call my driver waiting in the parking lot and my phone was dead.
I then requested the shop assistant who had just sold me the luggage, which was not cheap at all, if she could ring the number of my driver for me. She replied, still all smiles, “I'm sorry Sir, but it is the shop policy that we cannot use mobile phones while working in the shop.”
As I was wondering what kind of policy that was, I saw a nice-looking teenage boy coming toward me. Remember my wife’s interesting theory that beautiful people are more likely to give you a hand when you’re in trouble, I thought I might have a chance. But before I could say a word, he walked past me. It turned out he simply didn't see me.
I waited a bit longer in the mall but it seemed nobody bothered to look at me. Disappointed and tired, I got out of the shop on to the busy street in front. I stood there with people rushing by, looking at their faces to see if there was a sign of kindness on their face. I began wondering how many times I had reacted to strangers like the shop girl and the teenager.
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That was when I saw a young mother with her two kids.
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Finally a man wearing a cheap T-shirt and dirty jeans seemed to notice me.
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【答案】范文
That was when I saw a young mother with her two kids. She was talking on the phone, and her voice told me she was gentle and patient lady. The two kids were neatly dressed and waited quietly beside her. This must be a nice family, I thought to myself. Therefore, I approached to make a request. But as soon as I said, “Excuse me madam,” she grabbed both her kids and went away. Did I look like someone trying to hurt people I felt my heart sinking horribly.
Finally a man wearing a cheap T-shirt and dirty jeans seemed to notice me. I didn’t know why but I just stopped him and made my request. I was expecting him to rush past but he immediately called the number of my driver and waited till my car came to be sure I was picked up, turned around before I could thank him adequately and was gone. Surprised by his kindness, I promised I would do likewise to strangers who sought my help.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者试图在繁华的街道上向人求助,看人们会有什么反应。结果女店员、少年以及一位年轻的母亲和她的两个孩子都先后拒绝了作者的求助,但是一个穿着廉价T恤和脏牛仔裤的男人注意到了作者,帮作者拨打了电话,作者还没来得及好好感谢他,他就转身走了。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“就在那时,我看到一位年轻的母亲和她的两个孩子”和第二段首句“最后,一个穿着廉价T恤和脏牛仔裤的男人似乎注意到了我”可知,第一段可描写作者向这位母亲求助结果被拒绝。
②由第二段首句内容“最后,一个穿着廉价T恤和脏牛仔裤的男人似乎注意到了我”可知,第二段可描写穿着捡漏的男人帮助了作者,而作者还没来得及好好感谢他,他就转身走了。
2.续写线索:发现母子三人——想要求助——被拒绝——被男人注意到——男人提供帮助——司机来接作
者——作者感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
走近:approach/come near
走开:go away/walk away
提出请求:make a request /ask for a favor
情绪类
感谢:thank /express gratitude to
惊讶:surprised /astonished
【点睛】[高分句型1] But as soon as I said, “Excuse me madam,” she grabbed both her kids and went away. (运用了as soon as引导时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] Surprised by his kindness, I promised I would do likewise to strangers who sought my help. (运用了who引导定语从句)
10.(2023·广东揭阳·校考模拟预测)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
Jenny was the only child in her family. She had a quarrel with her mother that afternoon and she ran out of the house angrily. She couldn’t help weeping (哭泣) sorrowfully (悲伤地) when she thought of the scolding (责骂) from her mother.Having wandered (游荡) aimlessly in the street for hours, she felt a little hungry and wished for something to eat.She stood beside a stand (货摊) for a while, watching the middle-aged seller busy doing his business. However, with no money in hand, she gave a sigh (叹气) and had to leave. The seller behind the stand noticed the young girl and asked, “Hey, girl, you want to have the noodles ” “Oh, yes, but I don’t have money on me,” she replied.
“That’s nothing. I’ll treat you today,” said the man “Come in.” The seller brought her a bowl of noodles, the smell so attractive. As she was eating, Jenny cried silently. “What is it ” asked the man kindly. “Nothing. Actually, I was just touched by your kindness!” said Jenny as she wiped (擦拭) her tears. “Even a stranger on the street will give me a bowl of noodles, while my mother drove me out of the house.She showed no care for me. She is so merciless (无情的) compared to a stranger!” Hearing the words, the seller smiled, “Girl, do you really think so I only gave you a bowl of noodles and you thanked me a lot. But it is your mother who has raised you since you were a baby. Can you number the times she cooked for you Have you expressed your gratitude (感激) to her ” Jenny sat there, speechless and numb (麻木的) with shock; she remembered her mother’s familiar face and weathered (变形) hands. “Why didn’t I think of that A bowl of noodles from a stranger made me feel
indebted (感激的). Why haven’t I thanked my mum for what she has done for me ” On the way home, Jenny made up her mind to make an apology to her mother for her rudeness as soon as she arrived home.
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Approaching the doorway,
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A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back.
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【答案】Paragraph 1:
Approaching the doorway, Jenny took a deep breath. Tired and sad, she sat down in front of the house. “Where might my mother be ” she wondered. “Is she really so angry with me that she doesn’t want to show any care for me ” Again, the scene of the quarrel appeared in her mind. She remembered her rudeness to her mother, and she just realized that all the scolding from her mother was due to the fact that her mother really cared a lot about her. Tears rolled down her cheeks.
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A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back. She raised her head to see the familiar face and the worried eyes. “Here you come! I’ve been looking for you,” came the tired voice. Jenny couldn’t help but throw herself into her mother’s arms. “I’m sorry and thank you for all you have done for me.” She expressed the sincere apology and the great gratitude. Then she felt the hug tightened.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了珍妮与母亲吵架而离家出走,在感到饥饿而没钱吃饭的时候,一个商贩给了她一碗面条,珍妮非常感动,觉得自己母亲非常的无情不关心她,而商贩的话让珍妮觉得自己对母亲太粗鲁了,于是下定决心回家向母亲道歉的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“走近门口……”可知,第一段可描写珍妮到家后怎么想的。
②由第二段首句内容“她的头发被轻轻地碰了一下,她的思绪又回来了。”可知,第二段可描写珍妮发现母亲后又是怎么做的。
2.续写线索:走进门口——想找到母亲——回忆过去——母亲出现——进行安慰——表达感激
3.词汇激活
行为类
①出现在脑海:appeared in her mind/come to one’s mind/ arise in one’s mind
②流下:roll down/stream down
③表达:express/show/convey
情绪类
①生气:angry/annoyed/trembled with anger
②担忧:worried/concerned/anxious
【点睛】[高分句型1]Tired and sad, she sat down in front of the house. (运用了形容词作状语)
[高分句型2]Is she really so angry with me that she doesn’t want to show any care for me (运用了“so…that…”句型,其中that引导的是结果状语从句)
[高分句型3]She remembered her rudeness to her mother, and she just realized that all the scolding from her mother was due to the fact that her mother really cared a lot about her. (第一个that引导的宾语从句作realized的宾语,第二个that引导的为同位语从句解释fact)