2023~2024学年七下英语期末书面表达训练（牛津译林版，含解析）

专题18七下期末书面表达训练
书面表达之推荐信
（一）
建设美好社区，推动城市发展，你的城市正在举行"最美社区"的评选活动。假如你是李明，你想推荐你的
社区 Garden Community参选。请根据以下信息，写一份推荐信。
The Most Beautiful Community Where is it？
How is the environment？
How are the neighbours？
What activities are there in it？
....
注意：1）文章中应包含所要求的信息，可以适当发挥。
2）词数80词左右，信得开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。
3）文中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
Dear Sir/Madam，
I am writing to recommend Garden Community for the Most Beautiful Community.
I will be happy if our community can be the Most Beautiful Community.
Yours sincerely，
Li Ming.
【答案】
Dear Sir/Madam，
I am writing to recommend Garden Community for the Most Beautiful Community.（点明主题）Our community is in the south of the city center and it is next to a beautiful lake.（描述位置）It is a nice community with many green trees around.We can always hear the birds sing and smell the flowers here.Many people like jogging in the community and enjoy fresh air.（描述环境）Our community neighbors are very friendly and helpful.They are ready to help each other.Many of them are volunteers. They often help people who need to solve all kinds of problems.【高分句型一】（描述邻居）
People in my community can take part in different activities.If you are interested in dancing，you can join the Dancing Group.【高分句型二】Group members often dance together to have fun.Our community
also has a "helping hands" meeting every weekend.You can get help from different people.Doctors there can make you feel better and artists are happy to teach you how to design the home.（描述活动）
I will be happy if our community can be the Most Beautiful Community.
Yours sincerely，
Li Ming.
【解析】
【高分句型一】
They often help people who need to solve all kinds of problems.
翻译：他们经常帮助那些需要解决各种问题的人。
分析：句子中应用了who引导的定语从句。
【高分句型二】
If you are interested in dancing，you can join the Dancing Group.
翻译：如果你对跳舞感兴趣，你可以加入舞蹈团。
分析：句子中应用了If引导的条件状语从句。
（二）
Volunteers Wanted Do you love animals and know them well Do you want to help pets or their owners when they need help If you are kind and helpful enough to give a hand, why don’t you join us and become a volunteer in our Pet Club Write the following letter to let us know more about you!
阳光社区的 Pct Club 正在招募志愿者。假如你是 Millie，你想要自荐成为一名志愿者，请根据以下要点写一封自荐信：
1. Being kind and helpful;
2. Loving animals and knowing them well;
3 …. .
Give supporting details or examples in your letter to show your abilities and qualities.
注意∶
1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范，注意信件写作特征;
3. 文章须涵盖所有要点，并进行适当发挥;
4. 词数 80左右。短文的开头已经写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I want to join the Pct Club and become a volunteer to help other people and their pets.
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Yours faithfully,
Millie
【答案】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I want to join the Pet Club and become a volunteer to help other people and their pets. I am kind and helpful. I like animals and know them well. I have a pet dog. I often takes a walk after dinner. When it is sick, I will take it to the animal hospital. I also play with it. We play happily together. Animals are our true friends. I want to help more animals. I think I can do it.
Yours faithfully,
Millie
【解析】
1、题干解读：该题目属于书信作文写作，写作时应承接短文开头，然后介绍自己可以成为自愿者的优势，可适当发挥。
2、写作指导：本文应该以第一人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时为主；写自荐信时，应详细具体，语句通顺，逻辑性强，保证条理清晰。
（三）
暑假即将来临，21世纪英文报为了让学生度过一个快乐且有意义的假期，特向全体学生招聘小记者。假如你是 Anna，请你根据下面五个方面的关键信息用英语写一封推荐信，推荐班长 Jack为21世纪报的小记者，并阐述推荐理由。
personalities hobbies
abilities wish volunteer activities
注意：（1）词数90左右。开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；
（2）文中须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥，使全文连贯、通顺；
（3）文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
参考词汇：personality 个性，性格：魅力，品格
Dear Sir/Madam，
I would like to recommend Jack to be a reporter of 21th Century.
I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely，
Anna
【答案】
Dear Sir/Madam，
I would like to recommend Jack to be a reporter of 21th Century.He is ready to help others.（品质） He is good at all the lessons.He's good at all schools.（能力） No matter who is in trouble，if he sees them，he will help them. 【高分句型一】It turned out that my English was not good，and he helped me improve my English.He likes sports.He plays basketball very well.He's on the school basketball team.If he has time，he often goes to the park with his friends to play basketball. 【高分句型二】（爱好）He wants to be a professional basketball player in the future.（愿望） He also spends his holidays volunteering in nursing
homes or on the streets.（志愿者活动）
I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely，
Anna
（四）
阳光中学正在推选“阳光少年” (Sunshine Teenager)。假如你是李华，想推荐你的同学王林，请根据所给提示，用英语写一封推荐信。
姓名 王林
学习 各门学科都很用功
爱好 (1)擅长踢足球；希望下学期能进入校队 (2)喜欢动物；养了只狗作为宠物。
品行 (1)有礼貌；…… (2)乐于助人；上周……
要求：
(1) 条理清楚，语意连贯；
(2) 紧扣主题，按要求补充完整，适当发挥、省略号处各用2-3句话补充完整；
(3) 80词左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入字数。
Dear Sir,
I’m writing to recommend Wang Lin for this year’s Sunshine Teenager. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Sir,
I’m writing to recommend Wang Lin for this year’s Sunshine Teenager.
He works hard on all the subjects. He is good at playing football. He hopes he can get into the school team. He likes animals. He keeps a pet dog.
He is polite. He often says hello to his teachers and classmates. Before he enters the teachers’ office, he always knocks at the door first. He is also very helpful. Last week, a five-year-old boy lost his way and was crying in the street. Wang Lin saw him and took him to the police station.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
1. 题干解读：本文属于书信作文写作，要求推荐Li Hua的同学王林去参选“阳光少年”，执照题干表格所提示的内容写一封推荐信。写作时按推荐信的格式来写。
2. 写作指导：本文主要采用第三人称单数来写，时态以一般现在时为主，中间可穿插一般过去时。写作时承接短文开头；第二段描写王林的学习情况以及他的兴趣爱好；第三段介绍王林的品行以及助人为乐的实例，进行助人为乐的实例叙述时，注意应用一般过去时态来表达。
书面表达之人物介绍
（一）
假如你是古进，在七年级的学习和生活中, 你跟来自伦敦的交流生 Andrew 成了朝夕相处的好朋友。他的善良和助人为乐等优秀品质给你留下了深刻的印象。请根据下面的图片提示，以 “My Good Friend Andrew”为题，写一篇英语短文向《英语沙龙》投稿。
要求：1. 文中须包含图中所提供的所有信息，并适当发挥；
2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3. 词数 80 左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数；
4. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。
My Good Friend Andrew
My good friend Andrew and I are in the same class. He’s the most popular student in our class. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
My Good Friend Andrew
My good friend Andrew and I are in the same class. He is the most popular student in our class. He is/comes from London. He is 13 years old. He has long hair and always wears glasses.
In his free time, he likes playing football/watching films. His favorite pet is a dog. After school, he often goes out and walks it.
He is clever. He (studies hard and) does well in all subjects. He is friendly to everyone around him. He is always glad to help us when we have problems in learning English. Last Saturday, a 6-year-old girl lost her
way in a shopping mall, he helped the girl find her parents.
His dream job is to be a doctor to save more patients. /He’s going to be a policeman when he grows up. (104words)
【解析】
1. 题干解读：本题要求以“My Good Friend Andrew”为题，写一篇英语短文向《英语沙龙》投稿。作文中须包含图中所提供的所有信息，可适当发挥。
2. 写作指导：本文时态主要采用一般现在时，用第三人称；写作时应承接开头，紧扣提示信息进行较详细地展开以丰富文章内容和满足字数要求；内容要包含Andrew的家乡，长相，业余爱好，最喜欢的宠物，能力，个性及梦想中的工作，写作完成后应确保文章要点齐全，行文流畅，语言符合规范和英文表达习惯。
（二）
亲爱的同学，学期就要结束，暑假即将来临。在这一年的中学生活中，你一定结交了许多好朋友。请以“My best friend”为题，用英语写一篇短文，介绍一下你最好的朋友Jim内容要点如下：
个人信息 Jim，13岁，七年级一班
个性品质 1.学习认真，做事有计划…… 2.兴趣广泛，最爱……（因为……） 3.为人善良，乐于助人；（举一例……）
暑假计划 1.多读书来了解世界； 2.帮父母做家务； 3.和父母去旅游，因为……
要求：1. 短文应包括所给所有信息，并适当发挥。
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，条理清楚，字迹工整。
3. 字数：100左右，开头已给，不计入总词数。
4. 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和校名。
My best friend
Jim is my best friend.
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This is my best friend Jim. I hope he will be better in the future.
【答案】
My best friend
Jim is my best friend. He is thirteen years old and he is in Class One, Grade Seven. He studies hard, and he always makes plans before doing things. He is interested in all kind of things. He likes playing basketball best because he thinks it is good for health. Besides, he is very kind and helpful. When he has free time, he often helps other classmates with their schoolwork. Summer holiday is coming soon, and he has his own summer holiday plan.
He will do more reading to learn more about the world. Also, he will help his parents do some housework. He plans to go travelling with his parents. In this way, he can visit interesting places and make new friends.
This is my best friend Jim. I hope he will be better in the future.
【解析】
1.题干解读：这是一篇材料作文，要求以“My best friend”为题，用英语写一篇短文，介绍一下最好的朋友Jim。要包含所有要点，并适当发挥。
2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时为主，主要采用第三人称来书写。写作时要注意符合题意，同时注意语言的准确性和连贯性，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
（三）
假如你是阳光中学七5班的学生李华，你想参加学校英语俱乐部新一届主席（chairperson），写一篇英文演讲稿。
What I am like 1. polite, kind, ... 2. speak English well 3. be good at organizing（组织） activities
4. ...
What I did in the past 1. organize English competitions （竞赛） 2. ...
What I will do 1. ask more people to join the club 2. ...
要求：
1.段落分明、语句通顺、意思连贯、书写规范；
2.演讲稿内容须包括上表提及的要点，应有适当发挥；
3.词数不少于80词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
4.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名或地名。
Good morning, my dear friends,
My name is Li Hua. And I’m from Class 5, Grade 7.
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Thank you.
【答案】
Good morning, my dear friends,
My name is Li Hua. And I’m from Class 5, Grade 7. I’m always polite and kind. I care about others and always help people in need. My spoken English is good and I’m good at organizing extracurricular activities. I succeeded in organizing singing competition last week. I used to collect money for children in poor areas.
More students want to join the English club. I want to help the club members learn English well. If you choose me, I will be active, creative and serve you well. Please give me a chance!
Thank you.
【解析】
① 题材：本文是一篇讲稿；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍个人情况；
第二步，具体介绍自己的经历；
第三步，最后介绍自己当选之后的打算，并恳请能够当选成功。
[亮点词汇]
① be from来自
② care about关心
③ be good at擅长
[高分句型]
① My spoken English is good and I’m good at organizing extracurricular activities.（and连接并列句）
② If you choose me, I will be active, creative and serve you well. （if引导的条件状语从句）
（四）
榜样的力量是无穷的。学校英语俱乐部将组织题为“My hero”的征文比赛，请根据下列提示，写一篇短文参赛。
1. Who is your hero 2. What does he/she do 3. Why do you think he/she is a hero
注意事项：
（1）词数：80词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
（2）文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
（3）文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。
My hero
Everyone has a hero. My hero is
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【答案】
My hero
Everyone has a hero. My hero is Yuan Longping, father of hybrid rice.
He was once a teacher in an agriculture school. When he saw a lot of people die of hunger, he made up his mind to devote himself to research on hybrid rice. Through years of hard work, he and his team succeeded in developing a new type of hybrid rice plant which could produce more rice than common kinds. What’s more, he shared his scientific discovery with people all over the world.
Yuan Longping has solved the problem of hunger for many people. That is why I admire him so much.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“My hero”为题，根据提示内容介绍自己的偶像。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第三人称来介绍，根据介绍的人，时态以一般过去时为主。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段详细介绍偶像做了什么；第三段说明钦佩他的原因。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
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书面表达之旅行经历
（一）
你一定去过一些有趣的地方，遇到过不同的人。请以"My amazing trip"为题，记录你的一次神奇之旅。内容包括：
（1）旅行时间、地点和主要活动；
（2）最令你印象深刻的事情；
（3）对这次旅行的感受和收获。
注意：
（1）词数 90左右；
（2）内容涵盖要点，全文连贯通顺，可适当发挥；
（3）请勿提及真实校名、姓名等信息。
My amazing trip
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【答案】
My amazing trip
I had an unforgettable trip to the Tianchi of Changbai Mountain.I have experienced many firsts，but the most unforgettable one is that I saw the Tianchi of Changbai Mountain for the first time.（点明主题）
Last July，my family and I took a tour to Changbai Mountain.（时间和地点）We climbed up from the west slope，where the scenery basically remains the most primitive state. After climbing 1440 steps，we finally reached the top of the mountain. Although we were very tired，the temperature on the top of the mountain was very suitable，making us feel extremely comfortable.【高分句型一】 What's more，we were lucky enough to see the Tianchi，which is like a huge mirror inlaid among the peaks. 【高分句型二】It's said that 70% of the people who came to Changbai Mountain for the first time can't see the Tianchi because the weather on the top of
the mountain is unpredictable，and the first time I came to Changbai Mountain，I saw Tianchi of Changbai Mountain ，which is really amazing.（最令你印象深刻的事情）
Although we were tired，we were happy.（感受）
书面表达之暑假计划
（一）
愉快的暑假马上就要开始了，学校英语角就"如何让暑假生活更有趣"展开讨论。请你根据下图提示，以"How To Make My Summer Holiday More interesting？"为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈看法。
Study *read books... *do homework...
Activities *take part in outdoor activities... *work as volunteers... *have a trip...
Plans *plans for the coming Grade 8...
注意事项：
1.短文须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯，...处展开合理想象，做适当发挥；
2.词数在80个左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总数；
3.短文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
How To Make My Summer Holiday More interesting？
The Summer Holiday is coming. I will become a Grade 8 student soon. How can I make my Summer Holiday more interesting？
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【答案】
How To Make My Summer Holiday More interesting？
The Summer Holiday is coming. I will become a Grade 8 student soon. How can I make my Summer Holiday more interesting？
First of all，I want to read more books，because it can not only my knowledge，but also open my vision.At the same time I have to do homework carefully.Second，I will take part in outdoor activities and work as volunteers.I like playing basketball very much，if there is time，I will go to the park with my friends to play basketball.Of course，I will have a trip to relax myself.Finally，I also have to make plans for the coming Grade 8.I hope I can have a good holiday.
The Summer Holiday is coming.I will become a Grade 8 student soon.How can I make my Summer Holiday more interesting？
【解析】
【高分句型一】
Second，I will take part in outdoor activities and work as volunteers.其次，我将参加户外活动和志愿者工作。and表并列。
【高分句型二】
I like playing basketball very much，if there is time，I will go to the park with my friends to play basketball.我非常喜欢打篮球，如果有时间，我会和我的朋友一起到公园打篮球。if引导的条件状语从句。