How I have Changed
Write sentences according to the table:
Sentence 1: I used to be short and thin. Now, I am tall.
Sentence 2: I used to have short straight hair. Now, I have long curly hair.
Sentence 3: I used to be shy. Now, I am outgoing.
Sentence 4: I used to love dancing. Now, I still love dancing.
In the past years, we have changed a lot. Think about some of your changes and write them down:
appearance外貌: from _______________ to ________________.
personality性格: from _______________ to ________________.
hobbies兴趣: from _______________ to ________________.
habits习惯: from _______________ to ________________.
clothes衣着: from _______________ to ________________.
study学习: from _______________ to ________________.
文章有详有略,为了把这篇作文写好,我们可以从这些方面详写:程度、评价、原因过程等。
例1:程度
personality性格: from shy to outgoing and active.
首先,我们把以上信息整合成句子:
I used to be shy. Now, I am outgoing and active.
为了让文章生动、更有信服力,我们来说明shy和外向、活跃的程度。
以前shy到什么程度:一跟别人说话就脸红;几乎没有朋友;_____________________等等。然后,我们选择相应的内容来写作:
I used to be shy. When I talked with others, my face turned red.
I used to be shy. I had few friends and I was lonely.
现在我outgoing和active到了什么程度:是音乐俱乐部的一员,爱上在大家面前唱歌;参加了很多活动,交了很多朋友;________________________________等等。然后,我们选择相应的内容来写作:
Now, I am outgoing and active. I am a member of the school music club. I enjoy sing in front of others.
Now, I am outgoing and active. I take part in a lot of activities and make many friends.
例2:评价
clothes衣着: from whatever I like to wear to the school uniforms.
首先,我们把以上信息整合成句子:
I used to wear whatever I like. Now, I wear the school uniforms.
我们对这个变化进行评价:以前更好还是现在更好,理由是什么:
以前更好:I prefer to wear my own clothes because I want to dress up myself.
现在更好:I think wearing the school uniforms is better, because I don’t like to think about what to wear every day.
例3:原因过程
study: from hating English to loving English.
首先,我们把以上信息整合成句子:
I used to hate English. Now, I love English.
我们来解释这一变化发生的过程及原因:在老师的帮助下;自己努力学习了:背单词、读英语故事、写英语作文;______________________________。
I used to hate English. When I was in Grade 8, my English teacher, Miss. White, bought us interesting English books to read. I enjoyed the stories so much that I started to loving reading English book. Now, I am good at English and get good grades. I love English.
请写下其他原因相应的段落:
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
下面,我们来赏析几个段落:
The biggest change in my life was becoming much better in English. This is thanks to my English teacher, Mrs. White, who gave me an interesting book to read. I enjoyed it so much that I started to read other books. This is the most important change because I am no longer afraid of the English language and I am doing better in my exams. This has made my parents even prouder of me.
这个段落融合了变化的原因过程和程度,请用波浪线勾画原因过程的表述,用直线勾画程度的表述。
As for my personality, I was a quite shy girl before, but now, I am outgoing and have many friends who always comfort me and make me happy when I am sad. It is my honor to have such warm friends.
这个段落融合了变化的程度和评价,请用波浪线勾画程度的表述,用直线勾画评价的表述。
And I’ve also made some progress in learning. I used to be poor at English, especially in reading and writing. The biggest problem is that after reading a passage, I couldn’t fully understand it. To deal with the problem, I kept on remembering new words, listening to English songs, reading English articles and writing English diaries whenever I had a chance. Little by little, my English improved a lot.
这个段落融合了变化的原因和程度,请分别用波浪线和直线勾画相关的表述。
猪肚部分还有最后一件事情:加上相应的词让文章更加有条理:First、Next、Then …
完成了猪肚部分,加上开门见山的风头:
When I recall my life in junior high school, I always feel that I have changed a lot.
In these three years, I have changed in many aspects.
自己写一个:
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________
完成了风头和猪肚,来个豹尾:
Thanks to these changes, I am always praised by my parents and they say that I have grown up.
With these changes, I believe that I can have a more wonderful ang beautiful life in the future.
自己写一个:
_______________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________How I have Changed
Write sentences according to the table:
Sentence 1: I used to be short and thin. Now, I am tall.
Sentence 2: I used to have ____________________. Now, I have _____________________.
Sentence 3: I used to ____________________. Now, I ___________________.
Sentence 4: ______________________________________. ___________________________________________.
In the past years, we have changed a lot. Think about some of your changes and write them down:
appearance外貌: from _______________ to ________________.
personality性格: from _______________ to ________________.
hobbies兴趣: from _______________ to ________________.
habits习惯: from _______________ to ________________.
clothes衣着: from _______________ to ________________.
study学习: from _______________ to ________________.
文章有详有略,为了把这篇作文写好,我们可以从这些方面详写:程度、评价、原因过程等。
例1:程度
personality性格: from shy to outgoing and active.
首先,我们把以上信息整合成句子:
I used to be shy. Now, I am outgoing and active.
为了让文章生动、更有信服力,我们来说明shy和_____________________的程度。
以前shy到什么程度:一跟别人说话就脸红;几乎没有朋友;_____________________等等。然后,我们选择相应的内容来写作:
I used to be shy. When I talk with others, my face turned red.
I used to be shy. _____________________________________.
现在我outgoing和active到了什么程度:是音乐俱乐部的一员,爱上在大家面前唱歌;参加了很多活动,交了很多朋友;________________________________等等。然后,我们选择相应的内容来写作:
Now, I am outgoing and active. I am a member of the school music club. I enjoy sing in front of others.
Now, I am outgoing and active. _____________________________
_______________________________________________________.
例2:评价
clothes衣着: from whatever I like to wear to the school uniforms.
首先,我们把以上信息整合成句子:
I used to wear whatever I like. Now, I wear the school uniforms.
我们对这个变化进行评价:以前更好还是现在更好,理由是什么:
以前更好:I prefer to wear my own clothes because I want to dress up myself.
现在更好:I think wearing the school uniforms is better, because I don’t like to think about what to wear every day.
例3:原因过程
study: from hating English to loving English.
首先,我们把以上信息整合成句子:
I used to ____________________. Now, I love English.
我们来解释这一变化发生的过程及原因:在老师的帮助下;自己努力学习了:背单词、读英语故事、写英语作文;______________________________。
I used to hate English. When I was in Grade 8, my English teacher, Miss. White, bought us interesting English books to read. I enjoyed the stories so much that I started to loving reading English book. Now, I am good at English and get good grades. I love English.
请写下其他原因相应的段落:
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
下面,我们来赏析几个段落:
The biggest change in my life was becoming much better in English. This is thanks to my English teacher, Mrs. White, who gave me an interesting book to read. I enjoyed it so much that I started to read other books. This is the most important change because I am no longer afraid of the English language and I am doing better in my exams. This has made my parents even prouder of me.
这个段落融合了变化的原因过程和程度,请用波浪线勾画原因过程的表述,用直线勾画程度的表述。
As for my personality, I was a quite shy girl before, but now, I am outgoing and have many friends who always comfort me and make me happy when I am sad. It is my honor to have such warm friends.
这个段落融合了变化的程度和评价,请用波浪线勾画程度的表述,用直线勾画评价的表述。
And I’ve also made some progress in learning. I used to be poor at English, especially in reading and writing. The biggest problem is that after reading a passage, I couldn’t fully understand it. To deal with the problem, I kept on remembering new words, listening to English songs, reading English articles and writing English diaries whenever I had a chance. Little by little, my English improved a lot.
这个段落融合了变化的_________和__________,请分别用波浪线和直线勾画相关的表述。
猪肚部分还有最后一件事情:加上相应的词让文章更加有条理:_____________、______________、______________ …
完成了猪肚部分,加上开门见山的风头:
When I recall my life in junior high school, I always feel that I have changed a lot.
In these three years, I have changed in many aspects.
自己写一个:
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________
完成了风头和猪肚,来个豹尾:
Thanks to these changes, I am always praised by my parents and they say that I have grown up.
With these changes, I believe that I can have a more wonderful ang beautiful life in the future.
自己写一个:
_______________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________