Unit 6 Disaster and Hope
单元话题满分范文必背
一、其他应用文
1.假定你是校英语报记者李华,今天你校开展了地震应急疏散演练活动,请你就此次活动写一篇新闻报道,内容包括:
1.活动目的;
2.活动过程;
3.你的感受。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:地震应急疏散演练earthquake emergency evacuation drill
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【答案】To make us students know about how to protect ourselves during an earthquake, our school organized an earthquake emergency evacuation drill today.
Before the drill started, our teachers gave us some basic and useful instructions on what to do during an earthquake. When the alarm rang, students left the teaching building in order. Within a minute, all of the students gathered in the playground, for which we were praised by our headmaster.
This drill is really meaningful and helpful, from which we have learned some related skills in dealing with emergencies in an earthquake.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就“今天你校开展了地震应急疏散演练活动”一事写一篇新闻报道。
【详解】1.词汇积累
组织:organize→conduct
聚集:gather→get together
意味深长的:meaningful→significant
有序的:in order→in an orderly manner
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:To make us students know about how to protect ourselves during an earthquake, our school organized an earthquake emergency evacuation drill today.
拓展句:Our school organized an earthquake emergency evacuation drill today, which aimed to make us students know about how to protect ourselves during an earthquake.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Within a minute, all of the students gathered in the playground, for which we were praised by our headmaster. (运用了“介词+关系代词”引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】This drill is really meaningful and helpful, from which we have learned some related skills in dealing with emergencies in an earthquake. (运用了“介词+关系代词”引导的非限制性定语从句)
2.假定你是李华,得知你的笔友Mike的家乡最近发生了大地震,损失惨重。请你给他写一封慰问信,内容包括:
1. 你所了解的灾情;
2. 你的担忧;
3. 你的帮助。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】One possible version:
Dear Mike,
How are you doing I am sorry to hear that a terrible earthquake happened in your hometown. I can imagine how difficult this moment must be for you. I’m really worried about you, your family and all your friends there. I’m crossing my fingers for you now in the hope that you are all safe.
I’ve collected some donations from my classmates. To some extent, it may help you get over the difficulty.
Best wishes to you all!
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生给家乡最近发生大地震的笔友Mike写一封慰问信,需描述自己所了解的灾情,表达担忧,并说明自己的帮助。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
难过的:sorry→sad, sorrowful
糟糕的:terrible→dreadful, awful, horrible
发生:happen→occur, take place
困难的:difficult→hard, tough
为……担心:be worried about→be concerned about
一定程度上:to some extent→in some way, to a certain extent, to some degree
克服:get over→conquer, overcome
困难:difficulty→obstacle, barrier
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:I’ve collected some donations from my classmates. To some extent, it may help you get over the difficulty.
拓展句:I’ve collected some donations from my classmates, which, to some extent, may help you get over the difficulty.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I am sorry to hear that a terrible earthquake happened in your hometown. (运用了连接词that引导名词性从句作hear的宾语)
[高分句型2] I can imagine how difficult this moment must be for you. (运用了连接副词how引导名词性从句作imagine的宾语)
[高分句型3] I’m crossing my fingers for you now in the hope that you are all safe. (运用了连接词that引导名词性从句作hope的同位语)
3.假定你是李华,请根据下面要点,就面对自然灾害应该怎么做写一篇演讲稿,主题为“How to Deal with Natural Disasters”。
1. 自然灾害造成的损失惨重;
2. 应掌握有关自然灾害的知识并做好充分准备;
3. 自然灾害来临时,要坚定信念,团结一致,保持镇静,努力自救和帮助他人。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
How to Deal with Natural Disasters
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【答案】How to Deal with Natural Disasters
Natural disasters, such as floods, earthquakes and tsunamis, can happen at any time. They often cause a sad loss of life and damage. How should we deal with them
First of all, we should master rich knowledge about natural disasters and make adequate preparations for them. Secondly, when natural disasters really happen, we should have a firm belief and unite to fight against them. As the old saying goes, “Many hands make light work.” Moreover, we should keep calm and try to save ourselves and help others. Only in this way can we defeat natural disasters in the end.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份就主题为“How to Deal with Natural Disasters”的演讲写一篇演讲稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
例如:such as→ for instance
发生:happen → come into being
悲伤地:sad→ downhearted
镇静的:calm→ self-possessed
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Natural disasters, such as floods, earthquakes and tsunamis, can happen at any time. They often cause a sad loss of life and damage.
拓展句:Natural disasters, such as floods, earthquakes and tsunamis, can happen at any time, which often cause a sad loss of life and damage.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Secondly, when natural disasters really happen, we should have a firm belief and unite to fight against them.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句)
【高分句型2】Only in this way can we defeat natural disasters in the end.(运用了倒装结构)
4.近年来,人类对大自然的破坏引发了各种自然灾害。假如你叫李华,请你写一封倡议书。主要内容:自然灾害及其造成的影响以及拯救措施。
注意:
1.词数80左右,文章开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.短文中不得出现真实的人名、学校等相关信息。
In recent years there have been many natural disasters caused by human activities,such as
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【答案】In recent years there have been many natural disasters caused by human activities,such as floods,earthquakes and sand storms.
These natural disasters do great harm to humans.Many people don’t have enough food or water.They even lost their lives and became homeless.It is time for us to take action to protect our planet.We must stop cutting down trees and save water and paper,or we will have nowhere to live.
Most importantly,measures should also be taken by the government to prevent people from destroying the environment.Even a small action is meaningful to our planet,so come on and join us!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇倡议书,呼吁人们保护自然。
【详解】1.词汇积累
对…造成极大伤害:do great harm to→cause great harm to
足够地:enough→sufficient
否则:or→if not
阻止某人做某事:prevent sb. from doing sth.→keep sb. from doing sth.
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:It is time for us to take action to protect our planet.
拓展句:It is time that we should take action to protect our planet.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Most importantly,measures should also be taken by the government to prevent people from destroying the environment.(运用了被动一般现在时的被动语态)。
【高分句型2】Even a small action is meaningful to our planet,so come on and join us!(so连接并列句)。
5.假如你是李华,你校在全国防灾减灾日,开展了一系列活动。请你写一封邮件给你的国外笔友Jack,分享活动开展情况。要点如下:
1.活动内容;
2.个人收获。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Jack,
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Yours,
Lihua
【答案】Dear Jack,
Recently, my school held various activities on National Disaster Reduction Day, and I would like to share with you some of the highlights.
Firstly, we had a lecture on disaster prevention and reduction, which was delivered by a local expert. We also participated in a simulation exercise, where we learned how to evacuate and provide first aid.
Personally, I found these activities very informative. I realized that we should not take our safety for granted and need to be prepared for emergencies.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Jack,
I want to share with you the activities my school organized on National Disaster Reduction Day.
The first activity was an exhibition showing various disasters that can happen in our area. The exhibition included information on how to prepare and respond to these disasters.
After the exhibition, we had a practical training class, where we learned how to use fire extinguishers and basic rescue techniques. We also learned how to provide first aid and how to perform CPR.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封邮件给你的国外笔友Jack分享全国防灾减灾日中的一系列活动,内容包括:活动内容和个人收获。解析以范文一为例。
【详解】1.词汇积累
最近:recently → lately
许多的:various → a variety of
专家:expert → specialist
参加:participate in → take part in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Personally, I found these activities very informative.
拓展句:Personally, I found that these activities are very informative.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Firstly, we had a lecture on disaster prevention and reduction, which was delivered by a local expert. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】I realized that we should not take our safety for granted and need to be prepared for emergencies. (运用了that引导的宾语从句作realized的宾语)
6.假定你是李华,你校上周五邀请市搜救队的工作人员做了一场关于安全救援的讲座。请你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:
1. 讲座信息:时间、地点和主讲人;
2. 讲座内容;
3. 活动反响。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
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【答案】One possible version:
A Lecture on Rescue Work
In order to increase our safety awareness, our school held a lecture on rescue work in the school hall from 3:00 p.m. to 5:00 p.m. last Friday.
The lecture was given by Mr. Wang, a professional rescue worker from the City Search and Rescue Team. During the lecture, Mr. Wang first shared some of his rescue stories and then offered us many useful and important tips on how to survive natural disasters and other emergencies.
This activity was a great success and was highly thought of by both students and teachers present.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华,你校上周五邀请市搜救队的工作人员做了一场关于安全救援的讲座。请你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:讲座信息:时间、地点和主讲人;讲座内容;活动反响。
【详解】1.词汇积累
举行,主办:hold→host
提供某人某物:offer sb. sth.→provide sth. for sb.
重要的:important→significant
高度评价:think highly of→speak highly of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:In order to increase our safety awareness, our school held a lecture on rescue work in the school hall from 3:00 p.m. to 5:00 p.m. last Friday.
拓展句:Our school held a lecture on rescue work in the school hall from 3:00 p.m. to 5:00 p.m. last Friday, whose purpose is to increase our safety awareness.
【点睛】【高分句型1】In order to increase our safety awareness, our school held a lecture on rescue work in the school hall from 3:00 p.m. to 5:00 p.m. last Friday. (运用了动词不定式作目的状语)
【高分句型2】The lecture was given by Mr. Wang, a professional rescue worker from the City Search and Rescue Team. (运用了一般过去时态的被动语态)
7.假定你是李华,你的外国笔友Johnson的家乡遭遇了特大洪涝灾害,他的家乡受损严重,他本人也受伤了。根据以下要点,请你用英语给Johnson写一封邮件:
1.安慰和鼓励;
2.为他提供帮助(如募捐等)。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Johnson,
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Johnson,
I’m so sad to know that a heavy flood struck your hometown the other day. I’m writing to offer my genuine concern and sincere backup.
I know that your hometown has been badly destroyed and you are physically hurt and mentally affected as well. I do feel bad about this and I hope you can get recovered soon. Meanwhile, never lose heart and don’t forget I am by your side though I can not fly there to fight against the disaster alongside you. I have been raising money and collecting useful items for you, which will be sent to you as soon as possible.
Wish you all the best. And feel free to contact me if you need any more help.
Yours sincerely,
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外国笔友Johnson写一封邮件,就他的家乡遭遇了特大洪涝灾害受损严重及对方受伤这一事故进行安慰和鼓励,并为他提供募捐一类的帮助。
【详解】1.词汇积累
袭击:strike→attack
后援/支持:backup→support
同时:Meanwhile→At the same time
帮助:help→assistance
2.句式拓展
句式变化
原句:I’m so sad to know that a heavy flood struck your hometown the other day.
拓展句:I’m so sad when knowing that a heavy flood struck your hometown the other day.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Meanwhile, never lose heart and don’t forget I am by your side though I can not fly there to fight against the disaster alongside you.(运用了宾语从句和状语从句)
【高分句型2】I have been raising money and collecting useful items for you, which will be sent to you as soon as possible.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
8.近年来,地球上的自然灾害越来越频发。假设你校英文报正在征集环保主题征文,请你写一封倡议书进行投稿,呼吁大家关注自然灾害并保护环境。
内容要点应包括:
1.列举自然灾害实例;
2.提出一些必要的防范措施;
3.号召大家采取行动保护地球。
注意: 词数100左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数
As we all know, over the past years, floods, earthquakes and sandstorms have happened frequently.
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【答案】 As we all know, over the past years, floods, earthquakes and sandstorms have happened frequently, such as the earthquake that shook Tangshan on 28 July 1976 and the tsunami that crashed into coastlines across Asia on 27 December 2004. Therefore, as an individual, what should we do when a natural disaster happens Take the earthquake for example. Relevant measures are as follows.
First of all, we should know the emergency exit of the building in case we can escape to the open air when we could. Furthermore, it is advised that we should stay under the solid objects with hands on heads if we cannot run out. Last but not least, it is necessary for us to learn related knowledge about all kinds of natural disasters.
Because some natural disasters are caused by human activities, it is high time that we human did some things to change. Let’s change words into action!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封倡议书呼吁大家关注自然灾害并保护环境。
【详解】1.词汇积累
导致:cause→lead to
因此:therefore→hence
此外:furthermore→what’s more
各种各样的:all kinds of→varieties of
2.句式拓展
状语从句变强调句
原句:First of all, we should know the emergency exit of the building in case we can escape when we could.
强调句:First of all, it is the emergency exit of the building that we should know in case we can escape when we could.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Furthermore, it is advised that we should stay under the solid objects with hands on heads if we cannot run out. (运用了虚拟语气,主语从句和条件状语从句)
【高分句型2】Because some of the natural disasters are caused by human activity and the earth is in bad condition, it is high time that we human did some things to change. (运用了原因状语从句和虚拟语气)